The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Mon Mar 04, 2013 9:52 pm

A Long time ago in Galaxy Far Far away



It is a period of turmoil through out the galaxy as the Army of the Republic continues to mop up the last of the dreaded droid army freeing planet after planet. Clone Troopers and their Jedi leaders continue to chase hold outs from their hiding places confident in their duty unaware that a more sinister order lies just a short time away...an order that will transform the galaxy in such a way that nothing would ever be the same again

As the Morning sun climbed high into the bright blue sky of Ancca Prime The Jedi knight Chia Mar-Vum and Her Padawan Micheala Gwon along with the Clone Troopers of Beta Company 219th Heavy Assault Battalion Just settling down after another long drawn out battle with the remnants Of General Greives's Army. Chia Stood a short distance away calmly watching her young padawan out of the corner of her eye while scanning the horizon smiling to her self "She's at it again " she thought as the young girl joked with the soldiers
To most they were Just Clone troopers But to the two young Jedi they were so much more these guys had saved their lives on countless occasions.
When Chia's Master Died at the hand of Count Dooku it had struck her harder than anything she could have imagined A young Padawan herself at the age of 14 she showed remarkable skill at both piloting and wielding a light saber .
It was by a strange quirk of fate that led her to come across another young girl orphaned by the dreaded war.
Taking this youngling as master yoda called her under her wing knowing the chance meeting wasnt by chance at all but fate.
AS time went on Chia could see that Strange things began to happen with the young girl... strange to any outsider of the Jedi order.
When Chia passed the trials and became a fully fledged Jedi knight Instead of meditating on her new accomplishment she went straight to master Yoda himself and literally Begged the Wise old Jedi master to allow her to Take Micheala on as her padawan learner

At first Yoda balked at the notion of a Newly Minted Jedi knight taking on such a tremendous task, But relented when Chia reminded him of the Success that Master Obi Wan Kenobi had with HIS Padawan
Now 4 years later as they rested, Micheala Mac as she began to be called by the troopers of the 219th playfully struggled on the floor of their prefab shelter in an effective Hogtie trying to use the force alone to free herself from the taught cords that kept her stationary.
"C'mon Mac lets see how fast you are THIS time." Grav shouted Lt Cmdr Tarynn Stood nearby watching the young Jedi squirm he walked up beside Chia. " I see shes at it again" he stated with a Grin . " Happens EVERY time we Run into Skywalker and HIS Screwy Padawan. I swear those two get intro MORE trouble. she added shaking her head .
"Who Anikan and Asoka Or Mac and Asoka " Tarynn asked with a smile.
"All of the above" she replied flashing the commander a smile "And THEN there's the 501st." "OH DONT get me started on THOSE guys He said putting up his hand Skywalker is Bad enough but his troops seem to follow orders just as well as HE does." he said shaking his head.
"Have you had enough yet Kiddo? " Treve asked as he watched the young Jedi squirm about. "Its kinda hard for her to say anything with that gag tied on so tightly." One of the other troopers quipped.

It was true every time that Mac and Asoka Tano got together between missions one or both usually of them ended up being bound and gagged. As Asoka pointed out a Jedi needed to be ready for any thing but Chia though that Mac was enjoying the training a little TOO much

After playfully struggling for several moments Mac took a deep breath closed her eyes lay motionless. Slowly exhaling , the ropes tightly encircling her slender wrists and ankles suddenly took on a life of their own as they began to unwind. The knots undoing themselves as if invisible hands were undoing the knots. as the bonds slipped off her slender wrists she reached up and yanked the cloth from her mouth. "Do or do not there is NO try."


end of part one

Re: The Quest

Postby Chase Ricks » Tue Mar 05, 2013 4:51 am

I'm glad to see you are writing stories again here. I look forward to reading more of this story since it has been a long time since there were any Star Wars bondage stories here.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Tue Mar 05, 2013 8:51 am

Thanks for the complement Chase. This just came to me I put on one of the sound tracks listened to the music and typed what ever came to mind. Though I'm guessing that quite a few will know which piece I was listening to when I wrote the final paragraph.

thanks for reading

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Sun Mar 10, 2013 11:34 pm

Part 2

The Centari Moon Rose above Keslis 3 as the cool night air made Chi Shiver. Unable to sleep she strode about the encampment of sleeping soldiers. The Nightmares that had been tormenting her for the last several days made her job so much harder if you consider trying to reign in a young padawan now and again when she thought she could handle things on her own.
As she passed Micheala's tent she peered in "How could something that dangerous look so peaceful and where in HOTH did she get that stuffed bantha.

Shaking her head she stood up to see Gaveric come walking up to her " Still cant sleep eh general? Chia exhaled heavily but said no simply shaking her head. I know what you mean I was like that after Geonosis for a while. Its one thing when its yourself but when you got a bunch of shiny's to look out for and still do your job it can take a toll on you.
I wouldn't exactly call Mac a shiny .. not after what we've been through at least.
"She's.. more like a little sister to you isn't she ? The trooper said taking off his helmet. Chia smiled faintly and nodded "Yeah you could say that ."

"Hey with all due respect mam, why don't you try and get some more sleep.. We will be extracted in a few hours I highly doubt there's an active klanker left on this rock. Someones gotta stay awake and its my turn anyways. he said putting his helmet back on.
Chia patted him on the shoulder and slipped back into her tent .
As she closed her eyes the darkness engulfed her still form. As the images began again over and over again. she saw friends former masters dying the Jedi temple in Flames people crying out in in terror in the midst of all this stood Skywalker and HIS troops.
All over the galaxy the images repeated themselves she saw Jedi fall at the hands of their clone troopers
Chia squirmed about trying to get out of this nightmare when she heard another voice say " Commander the time has come .. Execute Order 66."

The cool night air was pierced by a blood curdling scream as Chia bolted upright as pale as a Shiny's Armor. Followed by the unmistakable sound of a Lightsaber being activated
Every ones first thought was to grab their weapons and look for intruders. Cmdr Treve came dashing over over to Chia's tent which had now been cut to ribbons when she activated her lightsaber Followed closely by Mac and several other troopers.

"GET ME A MEDIC OVER HERE ON THE DOUBLE!" The Commander barked as he knelt beside the shaking Jedi.
"Hey take it easy " he said in a cool soothing voice. trying his best to calm her Why dont you shut your saber down your safe here.'

Mac knelt beside her placing her hand on Chia's shoulder. You had that dream again didnt you? She said looking Chia in the eyes.
With tears streaming down her face Chia first shut down her lightsaber then yanked the cloth that hung loosely about her padawans neck. "YOU are NOT to do this anymore do you understand me Michaela!" tightly grasping the cloth still moist
"Shes got a point Mac you really shouldnt sleep bound and gagged anyways" Devo stated standing over the two.
"I wasn't bound Just gagged "Mac replied smiling a bit " Yeah it helps her sleep" Kreig added kneeling beside them " With the way SHE snores you'd think there was a Rancor nearby choking to death.

"Can you stand?" Mac asked her friend Trying to pull the young woman to her feet. Chia stood up but kept a tight grasp on her lightsaber.
"What is it Chia what did you see?" Michaela said
"We need to go for a walk "Chia stammered "You want some company"? Devo asked placing a hand on Chia's shoulder.
" I got this." Michaela replied as they began to walk off. she said clipping her lightsaber back to her belt.
As they began to walk away Commander Treves Holo com came to life a hooded image suddenly appeared Commander .....the time has come ..execute order 66.

RUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Sat Apr 06, 2013 7:44 am

RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN Every time Micheala closed her eyes those words came alive again tormenting her torturing her. The Last time she saw her master. Those events forever ingrained in her How her friends who she fought side by side with them ate with them trusted them with her life would suddenly turn on them. Seeing Chia shoving her down a hill as the troopers blaster bolts tore through her master body How she survived WHY did she survive. all these years later this still haunted her.
The last thing she remembered was Chia Screaming RUN then being forcibly shoved down over an embankment.
Seeing a large shape come out of the darkness as if the surrounding trees suddenly came alive All she could see were two large glowing eyes for an instant then everything went black.
When she awoke she found herself lying on her side on the cold floor of a dimly lit store room hands locked behind her also that trying to move was impossible. The electrostatic binders on both her slim wrists and ankles tightening with every move she made.
As she tried to calm her self she looked around the tiny room feeling the rumbling of the floor convinced her she was on some sort of ship.
Looking about the room there were Skulls of all sorts of creatures an amazing array of different weapons also adorned the walls as well Everything from blasters to edge weapons to Lightsabers.

It was at this point she began to shudder as her mind raced through all sorts of things . With out warning she was lifted into the air by some invisible force and stood upright she fought to maintain balance as she wavered a bit Trying to maintain her calm she tried to speak but nothing came out.

"You are safe young one" a raspy reptilian voice said out of now where. Michaela looked about the room but saw no one. as the light slowly increased a shimmering figure suddenly appeared before an imposing figure easily standing over 2 meters tall.
As the shimmering faded she saw a huge muscular body bristling with weapons and a large helmet .
The being reached up to its helmeted head pulled loose a hose a loud HISS filled the room as the being ever so slowly removed its helmet to reveal a sinister looking reptilian face with 4 outstretched mandibles.
A CORVAATHIAN she thought suddenly feeling a bit more at ease. This race was legendary though out the galaxy, well known hunters with a strong sense of honor and more importantly dear friends of the Jedi.

"Wha..why am I bound"? she stammered. Doing everything she could to remain calm. as she looked about with out a word the binders loosened then fell away. Rubbing her wrists.
It was...... was a precaution giving what transpired Your master thought it was best that should anything happen that would be the best way to calm you down.
"I am Bor Shoval your master once did a great deed for me once many years ago. As a matter of honor I was indebted to her she told me that should anything happen to her my debt would be paid if I was to look after her padawan
Micheala slumped to the deck as she suddenly realized what happen. suddenly it all made sense.
Chia knew what was about to happen and being so far away from the Jedi temple she couldn't warn any one PLUS the Fact every time she closed her eyes she Clearly Saw time and time again Skywalker Followed closely by the 501st march into the temple. and started shooting up the place.
"You see young one when she first told me of the dreams she began to have I first told her she needed to contact Master Yoda or Master Plo Koon whether she did that I know not
"She didn't know who she could trust so she contacted me Young one Ive been shadowing you as since you put down on that planet.

Micheala listened intently as Bor Shoval laid it all out for her telling her what had transpired How the Republic was now an EMPIRE that the Jedi were to blame for everything that had transpired and that they were now enemies of the Empire to be hunted down and exterminated. with tears streaming down her face and sudden realization of knowing she was truly on her own now Bor Shoval sensing this knelt down cupping her chin in his large scaly hand. "Know this young one, My people have always stood by the Jedi this is No different .

Those words have served her well for many years getting her through many scrapes enabling her to endure a great many things Now 10 standard years after that fateful day she had come into her own Chia she often thought would be proud of her.
Though still a bit quirky about some things it had gotten her into places other would not have thought.
Done things that were un do able to most the best thing was it didnt attract Imperial attention.
AS her ship the "Scoundrels Dream" touched down Mac could see the Large shape of Bor Shoval standing next to another a black shroud covering the being from head to toe

Re: The Quest

Postby Chase Ricks » Sun Apr 14, 2013 2:58 am

This has been a great story so far and I hope it has more exciting chapters, preferably in the pre Rebellion days. :)
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Wed Jun 19, 2013 9:01 pm

The screeching howl of a pair of Imperial Tie Fighters on routine patrol filled the air as they raced across the sky high above the landing platform as Mickeala exited her ship. As she walked closer to her dear friend of many years, a sudden wash of fear came over as she studied the being clad in black its head hidden by a large hood. Out of instinct her right hand dropped to her thigh resting on the butt of her DL 44.
"Who's your Friend?" she said with a smile carefully surveying the being. Bor Shoval chuckled shaking his head "Hello to you as well "A possible business partner that is who." Oh, what sort of business are we talking about?" One that could be VERY profitable if handled correctly." The Being hissed.
"OK.. you have my attention whats the job." Mac stated looking the being over."Before you hear of this young one, we should move indoors and away from prying ears."
Mac looked skyward but saw nothing smirked and nodded As they walked inside the unmistakable sound of armored clad boots filled the air as a squad of sand troopers passed by the hanger.
"You need to be seated young one, what your about to see will no doubt shock you." Bor Shoval said placing a calming hand on the young woman's shoulder.
"I have come to you at great risk to my self." The being hissed " I am quite certain is no doubt the Empire is looking for me as well. but there is someone who of greater importance who desperately needs your special kind of help."
Mac leaned back in her chair folding her arms across her chest. " Go on." she said listening intently.
"This was taken 2 days ago on Riileb. The being said as it went to extract a Holo from beneath its cloak.
As the being laid the Holo on the table, all the color suddenly vanished from her face Mickaela stared at the holo for several minutes in stunned silence before she spoke.
Wiping away the tears that began to trickle down her cheeks "What sort of cruel joke is this." she said looking up at her friend.
" I assure you that this is no hoax young one, Bor Shaval said placing a hand on her shoulder. " My people have confirmed this but were also unable to act on this themselves."
"This has got to be a hoax Vader had used this trick before putting stuff like this out only to lie in wait to see who shows up
"It IS her young one." he said looking into her eyes
Mac said nothing simply looking at the at the Holo then to the being.several minutes passed as she silently studied it "could it be after what had happen" she thought as a flood of images and memories flooded her mind swallowing hard finding her voice once more she looked at the two " How do you know shes Still a live, Riileb is in the center of Hutt space.

" There is the advantage, since it IS in the middle of Hutt space there is VERY little if ANY Imperial activity in the area.
"That Doesn't mean a thing , Vader is notorious for showing up unexpected in the LEAST likely of places."
"That is why time is of the essence, the longer we wait, That's all the more time Vader has.
" I highly doubt they would kill her and risk HIS wrath when they could turn a profit so that's a plus for us."
"Im in lets go she said looking at the holo once more. "Hang on We're coming
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Re: The Quest

Postby Chase Ricks » Sat Jun 22, 2013 10:37 am

If stories like this are what compel me to return from my current online duties on Facebook and a few related websites and forums, well at least I someday hope to see more comments from members besides me and mistofoleese. The picture itself I can only hope was taken at a Syfy or comic convention. :)
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Tue Sep 03, 2013 9:58 pm

The Newly Minted IMPERIAL Class Star Destryoer Avenger Made is its way through the silent blackness of the Shibari sector completing the first leg of its shakedown criuse. On its bridge, stood a lonely figure starring out at the vastness of space, his mind a thousand light years away. The rasping heavy breathing Of his life sustaining suit permiated the functinal silence, as the brdige crew efforlessly went about the daily routine of shipboard operations.
So far it had been an un-eventful simple first Cruise. The word quickly spread through out the surrounding sectors the one of the New class of Star Destroyers would soon be out on the prowl searching from any possible insurgents trying to hamper the Imperial way of life.

At first when his MAster informed him of the newly minted warship he was simply going to tour the massive vessel but something made him decided to stay for a while.
JAWA SPIT, SHES STILL ALIVE ????? he heard a young voice exlaim from the crew pit behind him as an overly eager and excited newly minted Ensign fought to control his emotions. What is it Piett ? Commander Greim the crew pit officer in charge growled as he moved to the young officers side .
"Sir i just intercepted a coded message about some bounty hunters who say the've captured a Jedi.

Seriously Ensign ? your getting excited over something as trivial as that?!", The Jedi are dead you stupid Dolt,, Lord Vader saw to that himself!"
"But Sir I checked her out with Imperial intelligence THIS Particular Jedi went missing BEFORE the purge." Piett Stated I could care Less about what some Bounty Hunter trash said "WHAT HAVE YOU FOUND ENSIGN? Vader said as he walked to the edge of the crew pit cutting off the Commander."
A message from some Bounty Hunters to A Hutt in the Rlileb system saying that they have captured a Jedi . " Lord Vader please forgive the naive boy as he's fresh out of the accademy and as you can see highly exciteable.
"What makes you so certain this person IS a Jedi Ensign?" Vader inquired ignoring the commander.
" Because I met this paticular Jedi on Naboo when my parents took my family there on holiday. My uncle worked in Theed as part of the security detachment .
I not only met her, but her Master as well he took the time to talk to me even though there was a lot going on.
Heh, I KNEW Skywaker,The Commander balked Trust me when I say that Lord Vader did the Galaxy a favor when he removed that fool from existance! He was nothing but a hot head and a show off!"The ONLY thing he had going for him was that he was in good with that floosie Senator Amidala who was always sticking her nose into where it didnt belong then WE had to go rescue her dumb ass when she got in over her head. Trust me when I say they are dead and good riddens to them.
GOOD WORK ....LEIUTENANT ..PIETT .. REPORT ANYTHING ELSE YOU FIND ...CARRY ON !"
""YES SIR " Piett said jumping out of his work stations seat suddenly at attention THANK YOU SIR!! .. YES SIR!!
"CAPTIAN JAYGOR....SET YOUR COURSE FOR THE RILEB SYSTEM "! Vader said turning to the ships capitain who had learned by example to stay out of Vaders way when ever possible
"YES SIR
An errie slilence over took the bridge as the crew still in shock of what they just witnessed As the Dark Lord turned away his long black cape swirling behind him
The stunned Commander his face as white as Stormtrooper armor said nothing as he walked away. Captain Jaygor shook his head as he watched Vader leave the bridge shook his head and smiled as he looked down at the new Leiutenant " That Kid's Gonna be an Admiral some day !

Deep within the Rileb system the unmistakeable shape of a Firespray came into view on of the landing pad on the Sancuary moon of Morbist
As the ship now known to many as Slave one touched down Dorvis Mysew Major Domo for Zurga the Hutt approached the ship as the entry hatch opened up
Bagged another one Eh Bobba the Devonian grinned as he watched the Bounty Hunter yank on a chain attched to a scantil;y clad blindfolded and tightly gagged female figure straining to move as best as she could with her arms secured tightly behind her knees tied ankles prohibited from moving only a minute distance dut to the short chain between her ankles.

The Master will pay handsomely for THIS ONE for sure he said with a Toothy grin whats even Better he said lifiting up her blindfold briefly... is that SKYWALKER wont be coming to her rescue THIS TIME

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:28 pm

Tensions were running higher than normal when the Scoundrels Dream exited hyperspace. With Good reason too, with all of the pirate activity in this part of space running into imeprials were the LEAST of their worries. Ducking other ships who either had no regard for others in the flight lanes or werent paying any attention at all "OK We're here, so NOW what?" Mac snapped as she looked over at her large friend who was sitting to her left in the co- pilots chair.

Do you think she would be on Riileb itself or some where else in the area?" She asked " Hard to say Bor Shoval replied scratching his scaly chin. They would no doubt hide her some where OTHER than Riileb to a More secure location perhaps as I am quite certain words gotten out already of her where abouts.
That Makes sence MAc nodded but where. Well if I know Boba Fett like I know Boba He'd go for the most credits he could Get. WHOA WHOA WHOA the black cloaked figure stammered WHO said ANYTHING about dealing with him.
How do we know HE"S the one who HAS her anyways.
Well Baine is currently some where on Tatooine chasing down a false lead I put out before We left Bor Shoval said with a toothy Grin
"OOOOOHH JABBA's Not Gonna be Happy when he finds out what happend."Mac chuckled
" Knowing that Fett most likely is on his way to Zurga just to spite Jabba and Torment Bain.
So in other words he's mostly likey headed to his little hideaway which isnt too far from here.
BEEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP Whats that The black cloaked figure asked pointing at the flashing light onthe control panel
Proximity alert we have a ship exiting hyperspace not from from here .

Suddenly to their horror several thousand meters to their starbord an Imperial Star Destroyer sudde3nly appeared.
"WHAT DID I TELL YOU!" Mac yelled as she banged her fist on the console " GET US OUT OF HERE !" The black clad figure wailed as several other ships directly in the Star Destroyers path did the unthinkable by opening Fire on the Massive War ship .
WOW is all Mac could say as they watched amazed at the small armada of ships suddenly being turned into slag under the Avengers Batteries
NOWS OUR CHANCE,... GO " calm down Mac stated we go this under control as she laid in a course for Zurga's palace.

MEANWHILE..
AS Boba Fett roughly led his captive through the halls of Zurga the Hutt's palce to the main audience chamber the proximity alert from his ships computer chirped in his helmet informing him that the sensot buoy he set out before he landed had just detected the presence of a LARGE Vessel exiting hyperspace
"Well that didnt take very long." He thought as he tugged a bit harder on his captive to quicken the pace MMMMMMMMMMPPPPPPPHHHHHHHHHH Ahsoka screamed into her gag as she did her best to keep up with the bounty hunter.
Upon entering the chamber He was met with a loud cheers from all around
OOOOOORRRR BOSHOOODA COMTSTEE TA DROID a Silver protocal droid stepped forward and bowed
GOOTA SOOKAATI KAH BEWONGI The Mighty Zurga welcomes you to his humble home and will gladly pay the sum of 50,000.00 credits
another chirp inside hie helmet informing of the money deposited into his private account had just taken place he bowed to Zurga who nodded in responce
CHOOO TRUUUNKIII WOOOOOOMMMAAAA HO HO HO HO HO HO "The Mighty Zurga says he will enjoy playing with his new toy "
MMMMMMMMMPPPPPPPPPPH MMMMMMMMPPPPPHHH MMMMHHPPP Ahskoa shook her head wildly trying to remove her gag as laughter errupted through out the chamber.
"JAAAKKK GOOMAAK ROOOODEEE GOOO CHHAA DOO !"The Mighty Zurga says to allow her to speak as we could use another laugh." Fett reached over and forcibly yanked the sodden cloth from Ashoka s mouth
AAACKK EEEWWW PHEW YOU REALLY THINK YOU HAVE ME SLIMELY JUST YOU WAIT she said defiantly MORE Laughter HOH HO HO HO HOH KOOOONNNAAAKKKKKKKAAA GEE KOOO FFFAAA SKY..WALKER MOOOOCHAA DOO TAHH DAAH KOA WROMIE WO HOOHOOHOOOHOOOHOOOHOOO
BOOONG SHEEEE ROH MA
No one is cometing to save you this time skywalker has been dead for years ! the droid translated TAKE HER AWAY
Two Gammorian guards apeared on either side of her roughly dragging her way
Suddenly a small twilek ran to Zurga side whispering something in his ear CHOOONKAA DOOO MAKKA BOOO KEEE DOOOOKKAAA ! Zurga bellowed shoving the twilek off the dias sending the room into a panic as people started to run everywhere
"Whats goin on?" Fett asked the droid already knowing the answer to his question.
it appears the Empire has arrived to claim the masters toy, A Star Destoyer has just taken orbit above the planet.

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Sun Sep 08, 2013 6:00 pm

As the Gammorian guards roughly dragged Ahsoka eown to the dungeon level far below Zurga's Palace,a stragne feeling came over her. This was by- far the most dire of straights she'd endured in many years.Butin all this dark chaos that had enveloped the galaxy she felt a level of comfort she had not known for many years.
At that very moment Far above her The Imperial Star Destroyer Avenger took position directly over Zurga's pa;ace like a predator about to pounce on its next meal.
On its Bridge Stood Vader Staring out at the lush green and blue planet that lay before him When suddenly he was awash in feeling SEVERAL feelings "So you have friends who have come to aid you all the better ." He thought as he turned to leave the bridge his black cape swirling behind him.
Having dealt with the Dark Lord on several occasions Captain JayGor was well versed in what to do next simply informing to stormtrooper commander that Lord Vader was on his way to the landing bay.
As Vader entered the landing bay the last of the troopers from the 501st were loading onthe transport Commander Drixx saw the Vader approaching Standning by Sir.

GOOOD BE READY FOR ANYTHING Vader replied as he entered the shuttle as he found a seat he noticed somethign odd,, in addition to his complement of Standard Stormtroopers he noticed a group Biker scouts looking over their Sniper rifles gving them a final check.

MEANWHILE.......
Far below on the floor of the forrest the Scounrels dream lay hidden from above thanks much in part to a a clacking device much like Bor Shavol him self used. This devoice had come in handy numerous times over the years and so far has served mac quite well.
"HE COME'S " the Black Clad being hissed up until now the beings identity was unknown to Mickalya as the three looked sky wards at the contrails of the decending imperial ships. Its time go ahead and SHOW her. Bor shavol stated placing a hand on Macs shoulder
The Being turned away from Mac removed the mask and lowered the cowl to reavel the bald head of Asage Ventress

VENTRESS ........ YOU HAD ME BRING VENTRESS HERE WITH US ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND ..... Easy Young one Bor Shaval said trying to Calm her down Ventress has been hunted just as much as YOU have been over these last 10 years it was HER connection with Asoka that had me contact you and bring you in as well.
I give you my word on my life I am here to aid you in freeing Asohka she helped me when NO ONE else would shes means as much to me as she does to you

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:03 pm

Glad to see that a great many people have enjoyed this. The ending to this story will be coming. Like the other parts of the stories I think over a great deal on exactly what will happen then go fromthere basicly free writing as I go.

Ive some what written myself into a corner, trying to be as true to form as possible on just how to proceede. A few friends have even commented on how this could be turned into a really cool fan film as well. I dont know about that, but it s nice to know that a few people are thinking this could be greater than just a bit of fan fiction.

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:41 am

UPDATE after talking with several friends who all loved my story , they have convinced me that this should be made into a fan film. We already have several people with both Clone Armor and Standard T K not to mention a few people who own screen accurate Lord Vader, Boba Fett and Predator outfits.
This is really starting to come together better than I could have ever imagined NOW all I have to do is finish the dang story !

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Thu Jul 24, 2014 5:50 am

Still working on the details, this has as I've said before has gotten a lot bigger than a simple tugs story/ Fan fiction a good friend of mine suggested i put this up as well its another fan film made by some VERY talented people some of which ALSO frequent this board on regular basis. You may have already seen this , as its been around for quite some time.They were the ones who suggested a name for one of the characters in my story.
The first it gave me goosebumps it STILL does when the second part came out it was even better Now that another talented person combined them its even more awesome.

its my hope that when "The Quest" is actually made it will be as good for now sit back and enjoy this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHJkxEVENPI

Clear skies have a great weekend
Mist

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Tue Aug 12, 2014 9:48 pm

Kneeling in the center of the cell Ahsoka closed her her eyes breathing easy for the first time in days . The restraints encircling her body began to come alive as they slithered around her body until they were nothing but a heap lying on the floor.For many moments she did not move allowing the circulation to return to her sore and battered limbs.
Ever so slowly her breathing increased as she played out the events of the past several days in her mind. "OK girl how in HOTH are you going to get yourself out of this one?" she said softly.
As if on cue her body started to tingle a feeling of warmth came over her, a felling she had not felt in over a Decade. Her eyes sprang open as in her mind she heard a voice long forgotten "AHSOKA" Jumping to her feet she looked about pressing herself flat along the wall. The Rest of the Galaxy had learned that Anikan Skywalker Perished along with Many other Jedi defending the Jedi Temple that fateful day ..or so the story went.
Ahsoka knew differently. Even before that day she knew.how he wanted to turn his back on the order. how they were holding him back not letting him use his full potential she knew this as she had seen it first hand during the many combat operations they went on the rest of the council AND the republic military simply passed it off as him being overly eager.
The 501st that was another story altogether. They simply frightened everyone. ally and foe alike as they did their utmost to carry out every order Anikan gave them no matter how wild, bizarre or crazy that order may be they ran headlong into battle. knowing full well he would be at their front leading them straight into the fight.

In the days after Palpatine had announced the republic had become and Empire and a new Imperial Enforcer came on the scene to carry out the Emperors orders Lord Darth Vader formally took command of the 501st as his personal army to root out any and all subversive or Jedi Activity.
Fear spread like wildfire as Vader quickly gained a reputation of one to be avoided at all costs.
She had seen it all she had FELT it all. She felt the pain he felt the day him and Obi-Wan fought. The anguish he felt when he learned Padme was dead .
Many times over the years she often thought would he fight her too? Trying to lure her to the dark side as well or simply kill her as he had done to so many other Jedi.
That was her back up. She had left the Order days before it all came crumbling down knowing full well she could no longer trust the council. Even when they asked her back into the order stating that they had made a terrible mistake in accusing her and questioning her loyalty NO one came to her aide except Anikan. Everyone else melted away from her faster than a Snowball on Tatooine
When the truth was finally revealed the council tried to cover themselves even going so far as to say that it was part of her trial She knew right then and there she couldn't trust them .
She did what she felt was the only thing she could do was simply turn around and walk away.

Over the years she remembered how Anikan came chasing after her only to let her go once they talked one final time. In the years since that day, she had done her best to keep a low profile avoiding contact with anyone who might recognize her until by chance she ran into another from her past whom she'd known as a smart alec kid with a mean streak a sector long and a taste for vengeance that knew no bounds.
That kid grew to become the galaxy's most fearsome Bounty Hunter and close ally of Vader BOBA FETT

Cupping her hands over her face she exhaled sharply Vader and the 501st were coming FOR HER she knew this Commander Cody once told her he'd never play Sabbac with her OR Anikan because no matter WHAT the odds he'd always make a gamble and come out on the winning side a feeling of calm came over her allowing herself a faint smile closing her eyes she took a deep breath and slowly exhaled .... I'm here....... Master

High above Zurga's Palace as ships tried to flee the on coming onslaught, Scores of Tie Fighters swarmed liked angry bees attacking anything that moved the few ships that had managed to elude the Tie Fighters came face to face with the Imperial Navy's Newest Warship .
The Avengers Tractor beam wasted no time hauling the tiny ships on board as hordes of Storm troopers eagerly waited to give them a "Proper Imperial Greeting."

"Time to target ?" Vader barked one of the pilots looked back "We are beginning landing sequence now Sir "
As Vader's Assault shuttle touched down, Blaster fire erupted from all sides. True to form He was the first one down the Ramp Lightsaber in hand he effortlessly defected several shots as he calmly strode up to the entrance of the Palace followed closely by several Storm troopers casually stepping over the fallen bodies of those who were foolish enough to raise a weapon against them.
Moving through the densely wooded area on the western side of the palace Mac followed closely by Bor Shoval and Ventress made their way silently past the troopers already planet side rushing to secure the palace from all sides
Pausing a moment to look skyward at the armada of rapidly approaching Imperial craft Mac allowed her self a broad grin "Awfully nice of the Empire to give us a great distraction huh?" she said looking back at Bor Shoval . Keep focus on the task at hand young one .

Re: The Quest

Postby tony2 » Wed Aug 13, 2014 1:11 am

Story good it is. Effort spent much. Appreciated it is...
If you believe in yourself enough -
nobody else will figure out you're faking it.


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Re: The Quest

Postby hafnermg » Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:41 pm

Wow this is a really fun story!

Can't wait for more!

Starwars Episode 7 is supposed to come out next year!

Re: The Quest

Postby mistofoleese » Thu Nov 13, 2014 12:05 pm

As Mac moved ever farther into the catacombs beneath the castle,Her chest began to tighten up as a feeling came over her that she hadn't felt in many years. To say I have a bad feeling about this was an understatement as they moved ever father. as they reached a fork in the tunnel Mac took a quick look at where they had just came to find Ventress was no longer there.

"WHERE"D SHE GO?" Mac snapped looking up at BorShoval who merely shrugged. The fierce fighting that was going on above them made it clear to Mac that she needed to Find Ahsoka Before Vader did.

As Vader Stormed into the main audience chamber,Boba Fett stood by a nearby window shaking his head as He watched the sea of white outside envelope the castle grounds. "WHERE IS SHE?" Vader growled as he walked up to the Bounty Hunter.
Bobba Fett Said nothing merely using the muzzle of his blaster rifle to point to the Hutt that was trying as fast as he might to depart.
Calling on the force Vader, lifted the massive Hutt high into the air bringing him to the center of the audience chamber as several Stormtroopers quickly surrounded the Hutt.
GOOOOMBBAAA TAAWT MEEECHOOOOEEESAAAAWWW!" The Hutt wailed as Vader Stormed up to him. WHERE IS THE JEDI THIS BOUNTY HUNTER BROUGHT YOU.
JIIBOBBY NEEE KOOOOSI CHA JIIBOBBY NEEE KOOOSI CHA . If I may speak sirs I am URRRKKK a Protocal droid attempted to interrupt.With out warning the droid was lifted into the air and slammed into the far wall where it smashed into several pieces.