I Tied Up My Friend

Postby Raoull » Sat Jul 30, 2016 6:42 am

Hey Guys!
I'll have another story. (Im from The Netherlands. Sorry for my bad English)

The Character's
Me (Raoull): At the time this happened i was 14 years old. I was wearing a blue t-shirt and a grey sweatpants and red socces socks underneath.
Friend (Teun): Also 14 years old. He was wearing a black t-shirt and white soccer shorts and long black socks.

The Story:

Teun's parents weren't home for 2 days so we decided to have a sleepover at his house.
We played some soccer and played some video games till 10 o'clock.
Then we decided to go watch a movie, i dont remember which movie it was, but at some point someone was kidnapped.
At this point Teun said: "How would it feel to be kidnapped?
I repplied: "I dont know, you want to be kidnapped?
"Eehm.. I dont know, i think its scary to be kidnapped. So i dont think so." He repplied.
"But what if i kidnap you, while your sleeping." I said.
"That sounds cool, but I dont think that you can kidnap me. I would wake up when your tying me up." He repplied.
"We will see ;) " I said.

30 minutes later Teun fell asleep while the movie was not over yet.
I didn't forget our conversation about kidnapping him.
I did know he got some tape in the garage, so i went out of bed and walked to the garage and grabbed the tape.
I walked back to our room.
I slowly pulled his hands behind his back, and tied them together.
Then i slowly put his feet next to each other and tied them together.
I slowly walked to his closet and opened it. I picked some long black socks out of it.
When i got back to Teun I slowly tried to put the sock in his mouth. When the sock was in his mouth we woke up but I wrapped some tape around his head as fast as I could. And there it was. I 'kidnapped' Teun. He tried to scream trough his gag and escape from the tape. But he failed.
He was completely tied up. I said: "Now your tied up, i can go to sleep. Sleep Well ;) " He tried to talk trough his gag but it wouldn't work.

The next morning I untied him.
This was my story! Hope you like it!
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Last edited by Raoull on Mon Aug 22, 2016 12:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Tied Up by My Friend

Postby Onodera » Tue Aug 09, 2016 8:35 am

It was kind simple, but I did liked the story x3! You could be a little better when describing the scene and things like that, but in general is good!

I dont know if was just me, but the fact that you did put colors at each characters line made it kind hard to read, especially because I use a black template, so the dark blue over a black background REALLY makes it hard and kind unconfortable.
Imagine that this is you~
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That's right, now shut up and be a good boy~! <3

Re: Tied Up by My Friend

Postby Lake Lover » Tue Aug 09, 2016 9:38 am

Yeah, the green characters were really hard for me to read against a light blue background. I MAGNIFIED the display and that made it readable. No need to apologize for your language -- your writing style is very easy to understand, good flow, and I like the story.

I am happy that you got your friend helpless for the night. Have you untied him yet? Please tell us. Haha.

Re: Tied Up by My Friend

Postby El_Llama » Tue Aug 09, 2016 4:54 pm

Really nice story, I liked it!

And btw the green text was fine for me to read, but I am severely colourblind so maybe I'm not the best person to judge that :big:
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Re: Tied Up by My Friend

Postby tieddude » Fri Aug 12, 2016 4:46 am

I liked the story. The green did make it a bit difficult to read, but it was still manageable.

Re: Tied Up by My Friend

Postby bondagefreak » Fri Aug 12, 2016 7:42 pm

A fun read! Thanks for sharing with us!
I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
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Re: Tied Up by My Friend

Postby Raoull » Sun Aug 21, 2016 3:02 pm

Sorry for the colors!
I think i Will write A new story tomorrow!

Re: Tied Up by My Friend

Postby bondagefreak » Sun Aug 21, 2016 7:24 pm

Raoull wrote:Sorry for the colors!
I think i Will write A new story tomorrow!


No need to apologise.
Glad to hear you'll be sharing another story with us!
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