## The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Fri Mar 18, 2016 4:12 am

Hey folks, got another request to redo an old favourite of mine with some twists and tweaks, do enjoy it! This took me a VERY long time to write so please show me some feedback, I'd really appreciate it
Taylor waited patiently after knocking on the large white mahogany door, the tall, brown-haired, blue-eyed young man was trembling in the Melbourne winter cold. He still couldn't believe he was standing on this particular doorstep, nor who was waiting for him on the other side: Madeleine, arguably the most beautiful girl he'd ever laid eyes on, had agreed to go on a date with him! Fidgeting and pacing around in the cold breeze, Taylor did anything he could to keep himself occupied and not overthink anything he was about to do, it wasn't the first time he'd been on a date, but now that he had a chance with a girl as good-looking as her there was no way he wanted to screw it up. In his distractions he stroked his freshly-shaved jawline looked in the glass at the top of the door to make sure his short brown hair was nicely styled, adjusted his grey suit jacket and blue dress shirt for the millionth time since he'd put it on... God, he thought, what's taking so long?
He knocked again, this time a bit harder. He waited and still nobody came to the door, it was hard to hear anything inside the house itself, what with the breeze blowing so strongly, his jacket billowing in the wind, he knocked a third time...
And finally he heard noise coming from inside the house, it sounded like Madeleine the more he heard it. Yes, she was most likely going into panic mode since she wasn't ready yet....
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"Look, darling, you don't have to go into panic mode just 'cause you're not ready yet!" Maddy's mum assured her daughter.
"Mum, please, you're not helping! Jesus, why's he here so early?" Maddy cursed, frantically trying to find the pair of white strapless heels she'd planned to wear out for the night.
The young, petite brunette's pale pink mini dress bulged in certain places as she bent down into her wardrobe desperately searching for her shoes, she still had to brush her hair after she put her shoes on, and she'd been looking forward to this date all week since Taylor had asked her out. "Mum, will you answer the door for me? He'll be freezing out there!"
With that, her mother walked up to her, took her gently by the shoulders, and looked her in the eye...
"Madeleine...." The young pretty student always knew her mother was being serious when she called her 'Madeleine'.
"Yes mum" She groaned.
"I understand you like this boy, but you need to calm down, just remember to be yourself alright?"
The older woman smiled warmly at her lovely daughter, to which Maddy couldn't help but smile back at, before giving her a great big hug, the tightest hug she'd dished out in weeks it seemed, before finally they parted. She could see small tears forming in the edge of her mum's eyes...
"Oh darling, you look so beautiful" She choked, furiously waving her hands to try and blow the tears away.
"Aww mum!" Maddy giggled unashamedly, touched by her mother's concern she took her by the hand "You ok?"
"Yes, yes, it's just- God you've grown up so fast!"
"Hahahaha!" Madeleine visibly burst out laughing "Mum come on! I'm 21 years old, and this isn't the first guy I've gone out with!"
"Yes I know darling, but this fellow really seems to care about you and.... oh, I'm sorry I'll let you get on with it!"
Blinking back the tears of joy filling her eyes, Maddy's brunette mother started for the doorway, pointing to a space on the floor as she went:
"Your shoes are right there by the way!"
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Taylor nearly gasped in utter relief as the door clicked and squeaked open in front of him, yellow light filled the doorstep where he stood and his eyes soon adjusted to the not unattractive figure of Maddy's forty-something year old mother standing ever so welcoming in the doorway.
"Hello! Taylor is it? Come on in out the cold dear" A high-pitched, typically English housewife style voice greeted the young man as he heartily strode inside to escape the cold embrace of the winter wind.
"Yes, thank you Mrs Jones, I'm Taylor, it's a pleasure to meet you" He greeted his date's mother just as gratefully as he did her warm house, shaking her hand delicately as he'd learned to do with women, especially women older than him.
"So sorry for taking so long, Maddy's just finishing up she'll be down in a moment" She smiled warmly, Taylor had to admit, Maddy's mother was definitely just as attractive as her daughter, not that he was into older women, but as she smiled that very kind and welcoming smile at him he certainly saw beauty in her dark brown eyes, raised cheekbones and puckered lips.
"That's ok Mrs Jones, I can wait" Taylor laughed.
"Can I get you anything while you wait?" She smiled even brighter and kinder.
"Um...No but thanks very much" He smiled back, his own white teeth seeming to light up the cream-coloured walls of the living room along with hers.
The next couple of minutes were spent in awkward silence, as Taylor's nervousness and anxiety over wanting to win the heart of this woman's daughter increased dramatically. He didn't mean to but he found himself pacing back and forth in the middle of the room, something he always did when he was waiting impatiently, he tried desperately to find a way to break the tension....
"Taylor, dear..."
Oh God, now what?
"Uh yes, Mrs Jones?" Taylor turned nervously, his jacket rapidly getting warmer.
"How long have you known my daughter?"
Great, now he was getting the parent's interrogation act!
"Since high school, we were in a few classes together, Mrs Jones"
"I see, and please dear call me Judy"
"Ok, Judy"
"And what do you think of her?"
Judy stood calmly in the centre of the room, her smile had gone, but although she looked serious, she wasn't being cruel or suspicious, in fact she looked rather content judging by the look on her slightly aged pretty face.
"Well, she's a wonderful girl... and I think you're very lucky to have such a..."
"Please, dear"
She stopped him dead in his tracks, her eyebrows raised almost as if in desperation.
"Don't tell me what I want to hear, tell me how you really feel"
Taylor was dumbstruck, he'd only expected to come in, see Maddy and they'd be off, instead he was getting an emotional questioning from her mother! But all the same, she'd asked, so he was going to tell, it was about time anyway, he'd wanted to tell at least somebody this for a while now...
"I think, that Maddy is one of the most amazing people I've met in my life, everywhere she goes she just seems to take happiness with her, she's funny but not a show-off, she's always got her friends' backs, she's beautiful, and she knows it, but she'll never flaunt it in anyone's face, and she's always worrying about other people... I think your daughter is perfect Judy, that's why I asked her out"
If Judy could've seen the look on her daughter's face as she listened from the top of the staircase, her heart would've melted. Madeleine was beaming with joy!
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Straightening her dress, and flicking her straight golden brown locks a few times to ensure her hair looked perfect, Madeleine took a deep breath, her heart pounding after hearing what kind words had come from that boys mouth, and then approached the stairs, acting as though she was still in a rush.
"Hi Taylor, I'm so sorry I took so long to get ready!"
Taylor meanwhile felt a wave of relief pass over him, not just from his revelation of how he felt about Maddy, but finally he could escape the awkward situation he appeared to be stuck in with Judy...
"Hey Maddy that's....." the young man's words drifted off into nowhere and his jaw dropped like a hundred pound weight. His blue eyes went so wide he thought they'd pop out of their sockets as they gazed upon the vision of sheer beauty that descended the stairs before him "... fine"
She was magnificent! Taylor couldn't believe his eyes, it was as though an angel was descending from heaven right in front of him, just her face was enough to put him in an early grave as he felt his heart would stop if he gazed at it too long! She had the high, bony cheekbones of her mother, a feature that only served to enhance the dazzling beauty of her thick and full ruby red lips and bright, caring white smile. Her wide nose was situated so perfectly on her face he wouldn't dare move it an inch, and her eyes.... he felt himself becoming hypnotised by her amazing emerald green eyes, tucked in neatly underneath a nice, clear and tall forehead and thin, tapered dark eyebrows. Her hair was like a field of perfectly-coloured golden brown wheat, so rare and so appealing to the eye that one couldn't help admiring every strand and wondering at how soft it must feel to the touch. Her pale pink dress clung tightly to her superbly-shaped young body, complimenting and accentuating her figure with every line, curve and seam as it came down to just below her hips, leaving little to the awe-struck young man's imagination....
"Wow.... um, you look...... wow!" Taylor laughed, literally at a loss for words.
"Hahaha! You're looking pretty 'wow' yourself!" She laughed with him, already blushing slightly under all her makeup.
Maddy could feel herself about to swoon as she took in the sight of the handsome young man before her, all the years they'd known each other and yet it was only in this magical moment that she realised just how good her date looked! Clad in his dark grey suit, Maddy thought to herself that he could pass for a Hollywood film star, his tall, broad chest and slightly hunched shoulders irradiating power and authority, his furrowed brow a great sign of concentration and determination to her. Even underneath she could tell his body was well-toned and conditioned from long days of exercise, and even his tall and proud posture cried authority. However, as Madeleine looked upon Taylor's face, she noticed how different it looked and felt from the rest of his body, he looked... very kind, understanding and gentle. His lips, currently parted slightly from the surprise of watching her descend the staircase, were hemmed in by his adorable dimples. His crystal blue eyes were soft and calm, and as she gazed into them the young lady felt like the man behind those eyes understood her and cared for her. His thick brown eyebrows were raised slightly in an almost surprised manner, but Maddy interpreted this as him being polite and showing her attention, and their texture blended perfectly with his thick, yet short brown hair, which he'd styled by sweeping it off to his right side at the front.
Little did she know the young man was close to swooning himself... for as she smiled at him, his heart melted.
"So... um, you ready to go?" Taylor smiled back, trying not to show the imperfectness of his own teeth compared to hers.
"Yeah, I just need to grab my handbag and I'll be set!" The lovely brunette replied, still blushing and racing from the room with a spring in her step.
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(Thirty Minutes Later)
"So wait, wait, wait... YOU'RE the one who convinced Jared to jump in the pool naked at the reunion party?!" Taylor laughed in disbelief.
"Oh it wasn't hard, I just told him I'd pay him 50 bucks if he did it!" Maddy laughed along proudly as she relaxed in the passenger seat of Taylor's Toyota Camry.
"Hahahaha! You know I got his whole stunt on video!" He turned and smiled deviously.
"Oh my God so YOU posted it on YouTube!" Maddy laughed hysterically.
"Such a glorious moment couldn't be wasted" Taylor sat up high and proud, putting on a deep fake voice in an effort to make his date laugh, and boy it was working!
Madeleine was certainly impressed, they hadn't even arrived at the restaurant yet and already she was having a great time. The two young happy students exchanged wit and humour like a class comedy act, their energy just bounced off each other and fueled the level of enjoyment all the more! Hoping to confront him early on and bring her own feelings out in the open, Maddy decided now was a good time as the pair's laughter died down into a brief silence, "Ocean Drive" by Duke Dumont slightly audible on the young man's radio, the hum of the engine just below that...
"Um, Taylor?" Maddy began, her voice noticeably higher-pitched than normal, indicating to Taylor that something potentially awkward was afoot.
"Yeah?" He answered, keeping his eyes on the road.
"I, um... I heard what you said to my mum about me" She smiled, a little embarrassed to be bringing it up yet hopeful of his reaction "That was really nice of you to say"
Taylor momentarily took his eyes off the road, staring at her with his baby blues.
"Yeah, well, heh... I did mean every word" As he said these words to her, Madeleine was positive her cheeks were going as red as her lipstick.
"Oh my Godhh...." She gasped under her breath "R-really?" She brought her soft skinny hands up to her face, cupping them over her dazzling smile.
Taylor pulled over, now was as good a time as any...
"Really really!" He smiled widely, quoting Shrek of all things, which thankfully for him, she laughed at very sweetly.
Without warning Maddy unbuckled her seatbelt, much to Taylor's shock, his smile instantly vanished, where the hell was she going?!
"Wait, I-"
Nowhere as it turned out, for as soon as she was free of the belt, the beautiful young lady shot forward, wrapped her arms (very awkwardly) around him, and pressed her magnificent ruby lips firmly against his! And just like that all thoughts of the world disappeared from Taylor's mind, he wasn't in Melbourne, it wasn't cold, they weren't even in a car for all he knew, all that existed in that magical moment was himself and Maddy, locked in a passionate embrace that quickly escalated as he felt his right hand instinctively drawn to her cheek, holding her delicately as her wet, slippery tongue slipped between his lips, only to become entwined with his in a raunchy dance of passion. The young couple's lips were glued together, inseparable even as Maddy edged forward to lay her left hand on Taylor's toned bicep, his thumb stroking her cheek softly as their wild dance calmed to a more tender, gentle pace. Finally their lips parted, only for Taylor to lean forward, moving his hand around to the back of Maddy's head, drawing her in to his broad chest while being careful not to upset the piece of art that was her beautiful hair, and she turned her head so her right ear was pressed to his chest, she could hear his heart racing like a thoroughbred horse...
"Thank you" She said softly, a content and happy smile on her face.
"No, thank you" He replied, stroking her hair gently.
Neither of them could believe how well this date was already going.
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(Thirty Minutes Later)
"Of course, right this way sir, miss." the short, well-postured young waiter signaled with his hand as he located the young pairs reservation. Scanning the restaurant, Maddy was pleasantly surprised by how classy the place looked, white tablecloths dotted the large red-schemed room, with two tall red candles lit on each table. The dark brown wood of the bar and the overhanging light shades protruding from the ceiling blending rather well with the red paint adorning the walls, which were broken up with random pictures and paintings, decorations and shelves supporting pot plants The right wall of the room, she'd quickly noticed, was in fact not a wall but one massive glass window which allowed all in the room a spectacular view of the lights of the city, very romantic indeed for the couples present. The black chairs, surprisingly, were covered in cushions, ensuring that the two young students wouldn't have to worry about getting uncomfortable during their dinner. As the waiter placed their menus down on their table, which to her delight was situated right next to the huge window wall with the stunning view, Maddy giggled like a little girl when Taylor took the back of her seat and politely pulled it out for her.
"Your seat Madame..." He smiled stupidly, putting on a hilariously bad French accent.
"Hahahaha you big twit!" Maddy laughed profusely, but still gave him a small peck on his freshly shaven cheek before graciously perching herself on the seat he pushed in for her.
Opening their menus,the two excited young lovers had made their choices in minutes, despite being in a somewhat fancy venue they elected to skip entrees and go straight for their main course, for which Madeleine decided on a nice pasta, and Taylor chose to go with a nice steak, chips and salad. The chipper young waiter, nodded his head with the goofiest fake smile on his little face as he took off with their menus, leaving the sexy young brunette, whose confidence increased every passing minute, alone with her date, who by this point was already bursting with positive energy from the kiss he'd received earlier:
"Wanna grab some drinks while we wait?" she asked
"Good idea, wine?" He smiled back at her, she nodded and he raised his arm to get a different waiter's attention, and within moments the wine list was presented before him, Maddy didn't hear what he ordered as he whispered it in the waiter's ear...
"My, my..." Taylor pulled an exagerrated snobby face and spoke with an outrageously posh English accent "I must say the service here is impeccable my dear" He joked after the waiter left.
"Hahahahaha!" Maddy laughed, trying not to snort "You're gonna get us thrown out tonight I swear!"
"Not if I keep complimenting them" He winked, she laughed again
"Or you could just give them a big tip?"
"Oh of course how did I not think of that?"
The energetic humorous banter continued even as their drinks arrived, Taylor had ordered them a bottle of Shiraz, recalling that it was Maddy's favourite wine much to her pleasant surprise, her hypnotic emerald eyes glanced knowingly at his as she filled her glass.
"How did you know?" She grinned
"Well you look like a girl with good taste" He winked
"That would explain why I kissed you before" She giggled, winking back at him.
"Hahaha! So do I taste good?"
He gave her a seductive, knowing look which she returned, only one of her mystical eyes was visible since her golden brown locks covered the other. She took a sip of wine before answering him.
"Delicious" She grinned cheekily.
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Their exquisitely cooked meal complete, Taylor and Maddy were free to converse for the rest of the date, the restaurant had gotten slightly quieter since they finished eating. Soon the conversation delved into interesting territory as the couple reminisced on their high school years...
"You remember that girl... God, what was her name...?" Maddy clicked her fingers "Kristina!"
"Ohhh yeah! Didn't she and some of her friends used to go around tying up random Year 7 girls?"
"Yeah and she'd post the videos on YouTube!"
"God yeah! Man, that's kinda mean when you look back at it"
"She did that to me once!"
"Wait, what?! Seriously?"
"Yeah, it was sooooo good!"
At this point of the story it only seems fair to say, Maddy had accepted Taylor's invitation to a date for many reasons, but the primary reason being that both of them had openly admitted, some years earlier, to being into bondage. In their years of knowing each other, the two of them had discovered the others' fetish, and this was the spark that kicked off the fire that was this date.
"So what happened?"
"She and some of her girlfriends grabbed me while I was in the showers after a netball match, they used skipping ropes to tie me up on the floor of the shower block, then Kristina put some tape over my mouth..."
Taylor listened with genuine interest and intrigue, the thought of the lovely young lady in front of him bound and gagged starting to send some blood rushing to a very particular area.
"So yeah, it was humiliating at the time but I was also kinda turned on by the experience, I guess that's when I realised I was into this stuff"
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"So you were naked?"
Maddy burst into laughter and rolled her eyes adorably as Taylor sat with a stupid grin on his handsome face.
"God, trust THAT to be the detail you focus on!" she laughed.
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Opening the door for his stunning companion, Taylor gracefully showed Maddy out of the restaurant after paying the bill, only for both of them to be struck by an icy blast of winter wind. Seeing an opportunity to further win his date over, Taylor quickly took off his coat and draped it over her bare shoulders, feeling the warm jacket soothe her cold smooth skin, Maddy showed her appreciation just as quickly by reaching up to her tall hero and kissing his cheek.
"You're such a gentleman babe, but won't you get cold without your jacket?" she asked, genuinely concerned for her companion.
Taylor noticed something in that sentence, she'd called him babe...
"I'll be fine sweetheart, I've been through worse" He smiled.
"You sure?" She worried
"Yeah, don't worry about me babe" He did it, calling her babe back, guess it was official... the date had definitely been a success.
"Oh my God, Taylor do you know where we are?"
"Yeah, David Street"
"I know silly, but look!"
A bright, beautiful smile on her young face, Madeleine pointed to the lush green trees across the road, footpaths and lamp posts lining the tiny hills with a playground lit up in the distance. Taylor didn't know what she was on about, he'd seen a lot of parks in his young life, though, he did admit this one seemed rather familiar...
"You don't recognise this place?"
"Err.... should I?"
"This is the park we used to play in when we were little! Before your family moved suburbs!"
Of course, he thought, now he remembered! Taking a second look at the playground and its surroundings, he realised although the play equipment had changed, this was indeed the same park he'd grown up in. A wave of realisation hit the young man as he saw just how long he'd known Maddy, they'd been separated for a few years as children, not that they were great friends at that point, but luck, it seemed, had brought them back here.
"You wanna take a walk? It's a beautiful night out!" Maddy's eyes sparkled eagerly as she indicated the bright star-lit sky above, unusually so, considering their proximity to the city.
"Of course, little trip down memory lane wouldn't hurt!" He smiled, accompanying his date across the deserted road and into the quiet, dimly-lit park.
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After walking and talking for a while, with Maddy snuggled up to Taylor's broad chest, his jacket still warmly draped over her back and shoulders, her arms around his waist and his arm around her shoulder, the young lovers took a seat on a park bench facing the playground, giving them a tremendous view of the stars as they scanned the night sky.
"Wow, this is so beautiful!" Maddy marveled.
"Yeah, and you know something?" Taylor looked back down to her.
"What?"
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"So are you"
The lovely brunette blushed, smiling as she took his face to deliver him another passionate kiss. His lips interlocked perfectly with hers, like two matching pieces of a puzzle, before their mouths parted further to allow room for their tongues to mingle and dance around each other.
"That pasta...mmmm... sure.. tasted good" Taylor observed between kisses.
"Mmm... how do you know?.... You didn't.... mmmm... have any" Maddy replied, also jumping in and out of kissing.
"'Cause I can still taste it on your tongue" He momentarily paused, chuckling, causing Maddy to keel over and laugh, before composing herself and grabbing his cheeks in her hands.
"Come here pasta boy" She kissed him all the more ravenously, she felt a cold hand touch her thigh, and another caress her cheek, stroking her hair from her face, so she responded by wrapping her hands around the back of his neck and pulling him in even closer...
"Well isn't this romantic?"
Jumping out of his skin, Taylor was easily startled when he heard an all-too-familiar female voice, one he was hoping he would never hear again...
"Kim?!"
So caught up in their intimate moment were the two young lovers that they hadn't even seen or heard the four girls approach, all of them appeared to be the same age as Taylor and Maddy, and once their eyes adjusted, the couple realised they did in fact know all of these girls well, for they went to the same university. On the far left was a slim, incredibly attractive but very entitled and snobby girl of Arab descent, Atlanta, whose wavy black hair was styled down to a tee and flowed down past her shoulders, her olive skin glowing in the lamplight. On the far right was a tall, dark-haired young lady with big black-rimmed spectacles, massively full lips, and a killer figure that added to her girl-next-door appearance, this was Kristina, whose parents were loaded, and she loved reminding everyone. Next to Kristina stood a stylishly-clad pretty young thing named Amelia, the youngest of the group at 19, but no less attractive, or annoyingly snobby, she wore bright red lipstick and loads of makeup everywhere she went, though Maddy often wondered why because she was ridiculously pretty without it...
Finally, next to her was Kim, a petite young blonde who looked like nothing short of a supermodel, she had a body most girls her age would kill to have themselves, stunning blonde locks that came down just past her shoulders, majestic blue eyes, and a face so beautiful that there was barely a guy from any level of the university who hadn't at least thought about asking her out. This was all good and well, except for one problem for Taylor and Maddy:
Kim was Taylor's ex-girlfriend.
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"Hey sweetie, still charming girls with your greeeeat sense of humour I see" Kim mocked him sarcastically, waving her arms in the air.
"Kim, for Christ's sake, I told you we're through!" Taylor tried to brush this very unwelcome guest off, but she wasn't having anything of it. "It's not my fault that you couldn't make up your own mind!"
About six months earlier, Kim had gone through what she called a Lesbian "phase", in other words, Taylor came home one night and found her in bed with a girl, she called off their relationship, but when she suddenly lost interest in girls, she tried to get back with him. So Taylor just walked away, which she wasn't very happy about.
"No, you're right, but you should've been there when I needed you Taylor, and you weren't" Kim suddenly got a very hurt look on her face "I was so alone without you, you know"
Taylor didn't even acknowledge her dramatics, he'd grown used to the hurt act she put on, so he just put his arm around Maddy, who at this point was very confused and nervous, and whispered in her ear:
"I'm REALLY sorry about this babe, let's just go back to my car and I'll take you home"
"That's ok hun, but, what's all this about?"
"Nothing, really, just head back to the car, I'll take care of this"
Gently patting her lower back, Taylor directed her back in the direction of his car, then turned to face the four leering girls that he'd noticed now surrounded him on all sides...
"Kim, I don't wanna go out with you anymore ok? I'm sure somewhere out there is some guy... or girl, whatever, who's right for you, but I'm not it. Just leave me and Maddy alone"
Taylor turned to leave.... and was immediately pounced upon by the group of vengeful young ladies like a pack of wolves on a helpless deer, Kim's cold hand clamped over his clean-shaven mouth and cheeks, and the four of them wrestled him to the ground, shocking him immensely, he was a big guy, no stranger to tangling with some hot shot guys with attitudes, but these four slim young girls were completely overpowering him!
"Hey! Oh my God, Taylor!" Maddy screamed "Get off him you crazy bitches!"
Taylor looked in her direction, eyes wide, shocked at his immobilised state as he lay with his face in the wet cold grass.
"Mmmmmph! Rmmmmph Mmmdmmph! RMMMPH!"
But Maddy didn't listening charging over with alarming speed considering she was in high heels, she threw herself at Kristina, who stood out as a target due to her height and the fact she just happened to be the closest to Maddy. The pretty young brunette then tore the bespectacled girl off her helpless date, pulling at her long dark hair and causing her to squeal like a siren.
"Get off my boyfriend you bitch!" Maddy yelled, pushing her onto the grass, but her advantage wouldn't last very long...
"Atlanta deal with this slut!" Kim barked orders at the sexy Arab girl, who stood up after sitting on Taylor's back only for Amelia to immediately take her place. Taylor thought he ought to be strong enough to lift two slim young adult girls off his back, and surprisingly he was wrong, these girls were definitely stronger than they looked.
Maddy grabbed a hold of Atlanta, who sidestepped her little rush of fury and tripped her up with a kick of her heels. Before Maddy knew it she had cold wet grass smothering against her beautiful cheeks, and Atlanta and Kristina perched on top of her, leaving her unable to resist...
"Whew! This girl's got guts Kimmy! I like her!" Atlanta remarked to her best friend, smiling wickedly.
"Oh so do I dearie, how about once we get these two lovebirds bound and gagged, we see what they're hiding under their fancy little outfits?" Kim taunted her ex-lover, slapping his cheek playfully, her hand still clamped over his lips.
"Mmmmmph! Mmmmmph!" Taylor kicked and bucked trying to roll Kim and Amelia off his back.
"Get off him you fucking bimbo!" Maddy yelled like a madwoman "Or I swear I- Mmmmmmph?! MMMMPH!"
Maddy never got to deliver her full threat, not when a pair of worn pink frilly panties were stuffed into her open mouth. She immediately gagged at the taste, it wasn't the first time she'd been gagged, she had tried bondage with a couple guys in the past... but come on, she thought to herself, used panties?!?! The soft rolled up underwear soon filled up every corner of her mouth, her teeth pushed apart, her cheeks bulging slightly and her tongue compressed to the floor of her mouth, there was no way she could be able to talk, in fact just making any kind of comprehensible noise was proving a challenge!
"Mmmmah! God fucking dammit Kim! If you don't leave Maddy alommm! MMMMMPH!"
Maddy managed to turn her head and see that Taylor's mouth was also being packed with panties, and Amelia appeared to have duct tape in her hand...
"Nmmmmph! Plmmph Lmmphumth Uhlmmmph!" Maddy pleaded, just as she heard a second roll of tape being pulled on above her head "Tahlummmph!!!" She cried to her equally helpless date.
"Mmmdmmph! Mph Mmmkmmph!" He tried to assure her still struggling like mad as he looked into her eyes, and his heart broke as he saw tears forming next to her lovely emerald irises.
The young lovers moaned and yelped as duct tape was wrapped viciously tight around their lower heads and mouths, Kristina making doubly sure that Maddy's gag was too tight for her:
"OWMMMMMPH!" Maddy started crying
"That's for pulling my hair, slut!" Kristina pulled the poor girl's head back by her hair, before letting it drop back onto the grass. As the gags were being applied by Amelia and Kristina, Kim and Atlanta were already busy with coils of rope they'd bought along in a gym bag, tying the wrists of the poor couple like true professionals, only they also did so twice as tightly as was necessary.
Taylor was fuming, seething with anger at how Kim and her friends were treating Maddy, not even particularly worried for his own wellbeing, it was absolutely tearing him apart seeing the girl that he'd fallen in love with that night being taunted, roughed up and tormented. She looked back at him with squinted eyes and bright red cheeks, not only was she freezing after his coat fell off her, but she was humiliated and scared as hell...
And to his absolute shame, there was nothing he could do to comfort her.
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"Atlanta, Kristina, get that bitch up on her knees!" Kim ordered her nasty companions, helping Amelia lift the big heavy mass that was Taylor.
In seconds the frightened young couple were kneeling in the cold wet grass, facing each other with worried expressions, already-sore wrists and muffled mouths. Maddy and Taylor's eyes spoke to each other above their taped mouths:
Maddy may as well have been crying... "Help me Taylor, I'm scared"
Taylor meanwhile could only seethe with anger at his new love's treatment "I'm sorry babe, you'll be alright I promise"
With their two helpless victims restrained and silenced an arm's reach away from each other, the vicious young ladies stood in a circle around their captives. Kim's lackeys all looked to her for the next move, all with great anticipation, which the nasty blonde was all too ready to deliver. She leaned down next to her ex's tape-covered face and gave his cheek a gentle stroke with her hand which he recoiled from...
"Aww sweetie, you really don't like me anymore?" She moped, feigning disappointment.
"Cmmmph Nmmph Ymmfmmkmmph Bmmmth!" Taylor would've spat in her face but for the panties forced in his mouth.
This really got Kim mad. Grabbing him by his short hair, she forced his head forward so he was looking directly at Maddy's chest, her dress now soaked from the moisture on the grass, in fact he thought he could see her nipples...
"Is it because off those?! Huh?! You'd rather have those compared to these?!"
Without warning, Taylor suddenly felt Kim's right breast being squashed against his face, she'd yanked it out of her dress and was now taunting him with it as he tried desperately to move his head away, so much so he nearly keeled over, but Amelia pulled him back upright to ensure he couldn't resist his ex-girlfriend's soft, smooth and cushioned weapon of seduction. But Taylor kept his eyes on Maddy, he wasn't gonna forget the wonderful time he'd had with this girl just because his slutty ex was shoving her fake tits in his face, Maddy meanwhile was burning with hate... as well as a touch of jealousy. She knew Kim was doing this to make her angry, but no matter how much she tried she wished that it was her being intimate with Taylor, she'd been hoping this night would end with the two of them engaging in bondage, but this was definitely not what she had in mind...
When she realised that her techniques were having no effect on her now strangely devoted ex, Kim slipped her breast back into her dress, and gave him a vicious slap on the side of his head, he barely felt it but it was enough to make Maddy scream and struggle angrily. As she propelled herself forward, she revealed the top of her gorgeous breasts to Kim, who got an even better idea on how to torment her ex and his new flame...
"Girls, I think these star crossed lovers are a little overdressed, don't you?" A cruel smile formed on her face, followed by equally nasty smiles on her fellow captors' faces, while Taylor and Maddy's eyes lit up with fear.
"Nmmmmph! Mmmmphsmmmcmmd!"
"Pllmmmmph Nmmmph!"
Kristina shamelessly reached inside Maddy's lovely pale dress and yanked out her breasts so they were on full display for her friends, and Taylor, to see. For a mere few seconds before his pants were forcefully unzipped, his eyes went wide with amazement.... by God, they were perfect! Nice and round, there was very little sag in these breasts, they must have been about 34C size, not too big, not too small, her nipples, covered in goosebumps from the cold, were pointing out like tiny hills to break the landscape of her glowing skin. Taylor couldn't hide his excitement, especially when Amelia grabbed a hold of it while reaching down his briefs.
"Oh my, seems your man likes what he sees" the blonde bully teased Madeleine, whose cheeks turned bright red when she saw her take out Taylor's manhood from its hiding place, and saw it standing upright like a soldier at attention. She looked up at his face, and couldn't help but feel flattered that he was so embarrassed and excited at getting hard over her. Meanwhile Atlanta had snuck up behind the bound brunette beauty, making sure Taylor was watching, and pulled her breasts out just as Kim had done not a minute earlier, before wrapping her skinny olive arms around Madeleine's torso and waist, needless to say, Maddy didn't take kindly to that...
"MMMPH! Gmmphmmmphmmm Ym Fmmkmm Bmmph!" the sexy captive screamed unintelligibly through her gag, feeling Atlanta's erect nipples rub against her bare back, the Arab beauty's cold soft hands starting to caress Maddy's chest much to her embarrassment and utter humiliation. Atlanta then began thrusting her hips upwards, the rest of her body following, up and down she started to rub herself against the reluctant young lady caught in her clutches.
"Ohhhh! Ahhhhh! Mmmm your girlfriend's real hot big boy!" Atlanta teased Taylor, whose struggling had died down considerably as the display in front of him kept getting wilder and sexier. His eyes wide and alert, he felt his manhood harden even further as Madeleine began to rise and lower herself on her knees along with Atlanta's own bouncing, in fact, her beautiful green eyes were now shut, and instead of screams and protests, her taped mouth now emitted low moaning and... was that a giggle he heard?! Jesus, he thought, Maddy's actually enjoying this!
Maddy hadn't meant to give in to Atlanta's advances, in fact, not being attracted to other girls she was wondering why she was even turned on in the first place. But it appeared she'd gotten lost in the moment, a half-naked body rubbing up against her own half-naked body, anyone in that position would get aroused right? She told herself this anyway, as she opened her eyes and saw Taylor staring right back at her, his face being held in place by Amelia and Kim, she saw that both of the blonde abductors now had firm grips on the young man's ever-hardening cock. Maddy started to feel incredibly jealous, she'd wanted to be the one to be playing with that cock by the end of the night...
"Mmmmmph! Mmmmph!" Trying to struggle as hard as she could, Madeleine tried lunging forward out of Atlanta's clutches, no matter how arousing she was, it wasn't Atlanta that she'd wanted to date, it was Taylor, she wanted to be near him, wanted him to hold her and keep her warm just like he'd been doing not twenty minutes before, and for him to tell her how beautiful she was...
Seeing his new lover's emphatic struggling, Taylor wrenched himself free of the vice-like grip of his ex and launched himself forward, colliding with his lovely helpless date.
"Mmph Mmkmmph! Trmmph Mmm!" He tried to assure her as best he could.
"Bmmb Dmmmlmmthmmph Hrmmph Mmmph!" She cried, almost in tears again now she could feel his body against hers.
"Thmm Wmmph" He assured her again, trying to kiss her tape covered cheek but unable to with his own taped lips.
Kim stood over the desperate couple with her hands fixed to her voluptuous hips, it was getting hard to hide her frustration...
"Alright! Knock it off lovebirds!" She fumed as her lackeys pulled the two bound daters apart.
"Fmmmk Ymm Bmmmph!" Taylor growled through his gag, earning him a nice stinging slap in the face from Amelia, this got Maddy crying even harder as she tried to wrench free of Kristina and Atlanta's clutches once more.
"Okay just take them to the damn car, I've seen enough... and you, you ungrateful bastard!" She glared at Taylor, grabbing him by the chin "I'm gonna humiliate the shit out of you tonight!"
Taylor would've spat in Kim's face but for the panties soaking up all the saliva in his mouth. Kim and Amelia hoisted him to his feet by his arms as Kristina and Atlanta did the same to Maddy, he felt so useless and powerless being unable to help the poor beautiful girl whose cheeks were red between the cold and the tears streaming down them. She wriggled and writhed like an absolute animal however, making it difficult for her two captors to quickly drag her over to a nearby dark green Audi A4, Taylor amazingly found himself burning with fury upon seeing Kim's car, while they'd been dating she'd always expected him to pay for everything even though her parents were loaded!
He would soon be mad at his ex for a whole different reason however, as she took out her car keys, pressed a button, and up popped the trunk lid...
"Nmmmmph! Nmmmmph!" Maddy screamed and sobbed, she would never admit it openly, but she had a massive fear of small, dark spaces, they made her feel confined, and not in the way she enjoyed being confined in bondage.
"Bmmmb! Bmmb Mph Mmmkmmph! Mph Mmmkmmmph!" Taylor wasn't any keener to be in the trunk than Maddy was but he knew Kim and her friends wouldn't actually hurt them, thus he was puzzled by his date's incredibly spastic reaction.
Madeleine kicked, bucked, and just about hurled herself skyward in her attempts to get free, she was NOT getting in that trunk, she couldn't! She'd have a panic attack if she did!! A shocked Kristina and Atlanta could hardly believe just how erratically their captive was resisting them as they were pulled to the ground again trying to hold her.
"Give us a hand will ya? This bitch is crazy!!!" Atlanta pleaded as she wrestled with the emphatic young brunette.
"Ok, you, don't fucking move!" Kim got Amelia to force Taylor onto his knees, then she pushed him onto his stomach, and the poor guy felt the wind escape his lungs as his nasty ex sat on his back....
"Help them already!" She screamed to Amelia, who rushed over to the writhing mass of female body parts that was laif out before her, between the three of them, the resident mean girls soon had Madeleine properly restrained, Kristina took it upon herself to sit on Maddy's back while Atlanta had to pin Maddy's long shapely legs using her whole upper body. Amelia quickly used more tape to restrain the poor brunette damsel.
"Now will you get her in the trunk already?!" Kim roared, frustrated beyond all measure now...
Maddy's struggles never ceased, they weakened as her strength gave out, but they never ceased, and by God she screamed, she screamed when she was lifted up by her shoulders and legs, she screamed at Taylor begging him to help her, she screamed when she was laid out on the grass beside him, only for all the four girls to heave him up inside the trunk....
And she screamed loudest when she was stuffed inside the trunk of Kim's car beside her handsome helpless lover.
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THUD!
Just like that, everything went pitch black, Maddy screamed in terror once again, she was simply terrified. Her claustrophobia already running wild, the poor girl felt like she was being crushed by the darkness and tightness of the trunk.
"HMMMMPH! PLMMMLMMMPHMMMPH!" She screamed like mad, if she screamed loud enough surely they would take pity on her and let them go? Unfortunately all she accomplished was to half-deafen Taylor who was desperately trying to calm her down, if only to relieve his poor ears!
"Bammmb! Baaaamb! Cmmmm Dmmmmm!"
"HHMMMMMMMPH!!!"
"BMMB!"
Whack! Without thinking Taylor lifted his head up trying to yell at his date to calm down, and in doing so bumped his head against the roof of the trunk....
"Hmmmph!" Maddy gasped upon hearing the thud "Ymm Mmmkmmph?"
"Mmm-hmmmph..." Taylor shook his head rapidly, trying anything to ease the soreness, Maddy felt guilty now, and searched around trying to grab his hand.
"Mmph Smrmm Bmmb" She moaned, she was at least very glad to be this close to him, he was so warm and comforting after what they'd just been through.
Feeling the lovely brunette's hand patting his trousers and waist, Taylor reached around as far as his bonds would allow and linked his hand with hers, leaning his head forward slightly, he felt her hair against his face, it was so soft, silky and smooth, unlike any hair he'd ever felt...
Given the night's turn of events, this actually wasn't so bad.
A unique sense of calm washed over Maddy as her hand linked with Taylors, unique in that she was still panicking like crazy on the inside but outwardly she expressed total relaxation, which she was sure would soon overtake her distress the longer she held his hand. It was a truly strange sensation which she felt only Taylor could cause her to feel, there was indeed something special about this boy that made her feel connected to him...
Or maybe that was just his erection that she could feel pressing against her bottom.
"Mmmph?" Maddy lifted her head slightly, surprised by her lover and fellow captive's reaction.
Taylor was dead silent, if his lovely companion could've seen his tape-covered cheeks in the darkness, she would've seen how bright red they were with embarrassment, he didn't really feel right getting hard in a situation such as this.
"Mmmmph!!!"
However Maddy didn't seem to mind, which was made clear to him when she started grabbing at his manhood, fondling around trying to find his zipper...
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Just as things were getting interesting for the two hot young captives, they felt the car grind to a halt, heard doors clicking open and thudding shut, followed by muffled voices and footsteps on gravel. Maddy's hand drew away from Taylor's crotch, much to his frustration, he was so hot for the brunette beauty he'd been tied with at that moment.
This didn't stop him showing affection however, the new couple's other hands were still clenched together, and Taylor leaned forward to give the shaking beauty a kiss on the cheek through his tape gag, and as he did so her hand squeezed his just that little bit tighter. As the trunk clicked and the roof soared open, the two bound and gagged students were greeted by a bright light emitting from a torch, being held by none other than Kim herself.
"Comfortable sweetie?" She mockingly asked Taylor, he didn't even give her the satisfaction of uttering a noise, she gave a little scoff then turned to her posse. "They're all yours girls"
(Two Minutes Later)
Maddy dropped to her knees, yelping slightly through her gag as she impacted on the cold rough ground, Amelia had walked her through an area filled with trees to what seemed to be a clearing, Taylor was close behind and soon Kristina and Atlanta forced the helpless young man onto his knees in front of Maddy. The first thing they both noticed was the mud, how it was soaking their clothes and skin, Maddy didn't have the luxury of pants either, and her beautiful dress was getting ruined in the rain that was starting to fall.
Acting quickly, Kristina and Atlanta knelt on either side of the bound lovers, Amelia handed a fresh roll of silver tape and handed it to Kristina, who then pressed it against Taylor's stomach, and began wrapping the sticky bindings around his back, where Atlanta took it, wrapped it around Taylor's waist, then around Maddy's back, and Kristina took it again. This process repeated so many times that Maddy lost count, though by this point she wasn't even concerned about her captors anymore... it was Taylor she wanted, and now she was in a perfect position to have him.
Taylor and Maddy stared at each other with wild eyes, it appeared their love for bondage, and for each other, wasn't going to be dampened by a few crazy chicks and a bucketload of rain. One only had to look at them and see, they wanted each other so bad, that little incident in the car was the spark that started this fire, his cock was standing to attention like a soldier, stiff as a board, and her nipples were protruding through her soaked dress, begging to be ravaged.
Yet for all that, Kim was still none the wiser.
"Okay lovey-doveys.." She taunted, approaching the madly lustful pair "You're gonna do a few little things for us, whether you like it or not, and when you're done, this shit's hitting Youtube!" She held aloft her camera phone, taunting the bound lovers with it, not that they even noticed. She stroked the massive bulge in Taylor's pants, and then slowly unzipped him, soon enough his erection shot up into the sky like a rocket.
"Oh my sweetie, you really do like this bondage stuff don't you?"
Kim stepped back, and pressed record. Amelia was quick to initiate the action.
"You two like each other so much? How 'bout a little smooching eh?" Smiling wickedly, the sexy blonde leaned forward to grab their heads and push them together...
Except that they were already connected before she could touch them.
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"Mmmmmph! Mmph! Ymmmph!" Maddy groaned and moaned as she and Taylor interloped, their gagged mouths pressed together like glue, Taylor growled in reply like a hungry beast, these two young lovers were gonna have a good night whatever Kim thought. Reaching around as far as he could, Taylor fumbled with Maddy's dress, determined to lift it up so his access to her would be unimpeded.
Amelia just stood there, not knowing what to do, her mouth hanging open in shock, she looked to Kim, who was just as much at a loss of what to do, what the hell happened to all the struggling and resistance and denial that Maddy and Taylor had offered them before?!
"Wha..... No! What the hell are you doing?!" Kim screamed in her whiny high-pitched voice.
This wasn't how she'd planned the night! These two couldn't have seriously grown THAT fond of each other THAT fast!!! She'd wanted them to be fighting, to be reluctant, to be humiliated, but instead they were at each other like a couple of sex-crazed animals! Pressing stop on her phone, she and her fellow kidnappers could only stand and watch, completely bemused and bewildered as the newly formed couple got seriously intimate...
Taylor had managed to slowly get Maddy's dress up far enough that he had a good view between her legs, in the dark of night all he could really see was a black gap in between her shapely thighs, but that didn't matter, he knew where to put himself. The sexy brunette was literally begging him through her gag to kiss her and love her, the gorgeous girl's sensual moans were echoed by his own deep groans which filled the silence of the forest around them, their kidnappers stood there, not knowing what to do, each of Kim's companions looked to her again, and glanced at each other, none of them had a clue where this had come from.
But as Atlanta continued to watch, and Taylor reached his big strong bound hands around and groped the edge of Madeleine's soft, perfectly curved bottom, she suddenly felt a little warm sensation starting in her loins...
This was HOT!!
Without thinking, nor even caring, Atlanta stepped forward and knelt next to the bound and gagged lovers as they continued to flirt, embrace and engage in their kinky foreplay, and grabbed a hold of Taylor's manhood. This earned her a big groan from the tied young man, more a groan of lust and anticipation than of pain.
"Atlanta?! What do you think you're doing?!?!" Kim whined, the blonde bombshell was in complete shock.
Especially when Atlanta carefully slid Taylor's cock inside Madeleine's moist, wanting womanhood. However it would seem Atlanta wasn't going to stop there, for she then gave the young man a slap on his tight, firm butt, reached into her dress, and one by one, pulled out her gorgeous olive-skinned breasts and let her black hair down over her shoulders... it appeared Maddy and Taylor's lust was contagious now.
Atlanta shuffled over behind Maddy, moaning sensually along with the gorgeous brunette she'd been tormenting not minutes earlier, and took both of Maddy's exposed breasts in her hands, squeezing them like great big stress balls and jiggling them in her hands.
Taylor's hips meanwhile, were already working, already starting to move back and forth, his cock was now deep within Maddy's pussy, and with every thrust he made, she gasped and moaned like she was in the lap of luxury, she was in pure heaven, and nothing could pull her from it, not even Kim...
"ATLANTA!!! STOP!! What the fuck are.... Kristina?!?!?!?!" Kim looked over, her eyes wide and mouth dropped to the floor, to Kristina, who had just now also decided to remove her breasts from within her dress, she even took her glasses off and placed them by her handbag which she'd set down by a tree, no way she was going to miss out on this! Atlanta now had one hand latched onto Madeleine's breasts while with her other hand she was pleasuring her own womanhood, her hips thrusting into Maddy's rear as the delighted brunette continued to feel the most immense pleasure in her own pussy. She couldn't believe that any man would make her feel so good down there, but Taylor clearly knew how to please her, he withdrew quickly with each thrust back, and with slightly less speed but twice as much power he'd thrust forward again, penetrating so deep inside her that he felt he'd end up disappearing within her.
Kristina knelt beside Taylor and lifted up her dress over her voluptuous hips, and began touching herself just as Atlanta was, only with both hands, though she momentarily took hold of Taylor's haw and pulled him over to face her, and began passionately making out with him through his tape gag, her tongue and lips wetting the sticky duct tape like crazy. Atlanta, smiling naughtily, took Maddy's face gently and made her face her, and began to do the same with the gorgeous brunette babe.
Kim, meanwhile, was seething!
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"GIRLS!! STOP! STOP IT! NOOO!" Kim squealed like a spoiled child, she strode forward and tried to break up the madness in front of her, but Atlanta and Kristina simply pushed her away, a little harder than they probably intended...
And before she knew it Kim was landing arse-first into what was (unfortunately for her) the one decent-sized puddle of mud in the whole clearing. Screaming when she realised her dress was ruined, Kim was about to burst into tears when Amelia approached...
"You ok babe?" Her blonde friend asked, extending a hand.
"DO I LOOK ALRIGHT?!" Kim shrieked, once again like a spoiled child "YOU STUPID LITTLE COW!!"
Amelia's concern simply dropped from her face after that, and she withdrew her hand "Fine, get yourself out then..." Yes, she withdrew her hand, and placed it against her dress, pulling it apart to bear her magnificent breasts, right there in full view of the muddy snob wallowing before her.
"I'm gonna have some real fun"
And like that, Kim's whole posse abandoned her, as she stood up she saw Amelia kneel down behind Taylor and start to unbutton his shirt as she and Kristina started sharing his kisses, which he was gladly giving them just as Maddy felt the strangest happiness being kissed by Atlanta...
Kim had no idea what to do, so she just quietly made her way back to the car, she wouldn't be able to leave though... she'd given Amelia the keys.
Even with all the ecstasy she was experiencing, Maddy was able to open her eyes long enough to see Kim leaving, and she had to admit, crying, muddy and lonely, she felt sorry seeing Kim like that, she glanced at Atlanta, who simply shrugged her shoulders... so Maddy decided to be the bigger woman.
"Kmmph?"
Kim stopped, still in tears, and turned back towards the small orgy that had just developed in the middle of the clearing. Maddy indicated she wanted to be ungagged, and Atlanta obliged.
"Are you ok?" Maddy asked.
"Wh-why do you care?" Kim sobbed "You got what you wanted, he's all yours..." Taylor felt a hint of guilt now, perhaps Kim did care for him in her own unusual way?
"Well... we got off to a rough start but, I think you just need someone to remind you how to be a more loving person, and as for Taylor well..." Maddy glanced at Taylor, who winked at her even with his mouth still taped, two girls worshiping his body and his cock halfway down her pussy.
"We could share you know" Maddy gave the sexy blonde a wink of her own.
Kim stood there for a while, bewildered, amazed even. How could Madeleine say that after all she'd done this evening? The more she thought about it though, this girl was right, Kim had forgotten how to show any genuine compassion to anyone, that was why she'd lost Taylor.
She laughed, almost tragically, wiping tears from her beautiful cheeks....
"Ok"
And then took the straps of her dress, unhooked them, and stood before the group in all her wonderful naked glory and smiled naughtily.
"Let's share then"
THE END
I'd like to dedicate this to the gorgeous and beautiful young ladies who made up the characters in this story, especially you Maddy, love ya babe! <3 Thank you all for reading!
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by madeleinenabed » Sun Mar 27, 2016 10:39 am

I feel really bad that no one commented on this story so here's your first comment. I lovee it dear! <3 Thanks very very much for your effort for this story. I appreciate it! <3 <3

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by meinaru » Sun Mar 27, 2016 1:36 pm

I admit that the stories of couples in distress are much to my liking, and this one is indeed excellent

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Sun Mar 27, 2016 2:21 pm

> madeleinenabed wrote:I feel really bad that no one commented on this story so here's your first comment. I lovee it dear! <3 Thanks very very much for your effort for this story. I appreciate it! <3 <3

No worries sweetheart glad you like it! <3 you're the best babe <3
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Sun Mar 27, 2016 2:22 pm

> meinaru wrote:I admit that the stories of couples in distress are much to my liking, and this one is indeed excellent

Thanks very much mate, that's a real pleasure to hear!
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by Maxkaboom » Mon Mar 28, 2016 3:18 am

What a turn around! Great story!

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Mon Mar 28, 2016 3:30 am

> Maxkaboom wrote:What a turn around! Great story!

Lol thanks a lot mate!
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by Maxkaboom » Mon Mar 28, 2016 3:43 am

> 31acujoker wrote:

> > Maxkaboom wrote:What a turn around! Great story!

> Lol thanks a lot mate!

I expect more great stories from you dude.

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Mon Mar 28, 2016 4:17 am

> Maxkaboom wrote:

> > 31acujoker wrote:

> > > Maxkaboom wrote:What a turn around! Great story!

> > Lol thanks a lot mate!

> I expect more great stories from you dude.

Haha you're too kind bro, I've just started a new one tonight, it will take a long time to write but hopefully it's worth it As a bit of a tease it involves four young girls and a single male home invader
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by Maxkaboom » Mon Mar 28, 2016 4:26 am

> 31acujoker wrote:

> > Maxkaboom wrote:

> > > 31acujoker wrote:

> > > > Maxkaboom wrote:What a turn around! Great story!

> > > Lol thanks a lot mate!

> > I expect more great stories from you dude.

> Haha you're too kind bro, I've just started a new one tonight, it will take a long time to write but hopefully it's worth it As a bit of a tease it involves four young girls and a single male home invader

Good luck to you mate. I just finished reading another story of yours and it was awesome.

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by bandit666 » Mon Mar 28, 2016 1:46 pm

I agree mate great set up and story, fun to read and well put together, my only comment would be it may have been better left as it is but split into two parts just to make it a little easier for dyslexics like me to read

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Mon Mar 28, 2016 1:54 pm

> bandit666 wrote:I agree mate great set up and story, fun to read and well put together, my only comment would be it may have been better left as it is but split into two parts just to make it a little easier for dyslexics like me to read

No worries Paul appreciate the comment, I tried to break it up a bit with those dotted lines
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

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Post by gaggednbarefoot » Tue Aug 23, 2016 1:56 pm

Exceloent
Tie me up, take my shoes and socks and tickle my feet.
Avatar thanks to Jason Todman

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by Mr Underheel » Wed Aug 24, 2016 12:06 pm

You did a great job! The detail is incredible! It was a fun read!

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Mon Aug 29, 2016 4:02 am

Thanks guys!
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by randomboy18 » Mon Aug 29, 2016 1:22 pm

That was the best Story ever

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Sun Sep 04, 2016 11:05 pm

> randomboy18 wrote:That was the best Story ever

Thanks a lot mate haha!
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by Vector5227 » Sat Nov 05, 2016 7:02 am

Oh man... I know I'm late to the party but damn!! This is the best "couple in distress" story I've ever read! The story was great and interesting, and it also had a knack for being romantic and kinky at the same time, which is awesome! I would love to see more stories like this. Keep up the awesome work!

### Re: The Perfect Date (FFFF/MF)

Post by 31acujoker » Sat Nov 05, 2016 2:03 pm

> Vector5227 wrote:Oh man... I know I'm late to the party but damn!! This is the best "couple in distress" story I've ever read! The story was great and interesting, and it also had a knack for being romantic and kinky at the same time, which is awesome! I would love to see more stories like this. Keep up the awesome work!

Dude that's so great to hear thanks so much! stoked to hear that you liked it!
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision