Eloise and Rachel

Postby gamer4 » Wed Jul 20, 2011 1:38 am

This is my first story! so be nice haha. and i am writing one using Eloise and her roommate Rachel being my captives.
here it goes...

Eloise and Rachel have had a long history of tying each other up and getting their revenge. This time, Eloise feels that she is going to need some help restraining her pesky roommate. She calls on me to come over and assist her in getting revenge. She tells me to come over around 11 o'clock or so and when i do, the house will be empty so i can take my time and set up. She informs me that she will distract Rachel by taking her to the pool and jacuzzi. She tells me they plan on returning at 1130 and thats when Eloise and I will get Rachel. For Eloise, things are moving perfectly, or so she thinks. Little does she know, Rachel too has plans in tying up her roommate. She offers me $200 to make sure Eloise winds up bound and gagged by the end of the night. So with my situation i just know that this is going to allllll go my way tonight ;)

So i arrive at the flat where Eloise and Rachel reside. i do as instructed by Eloise and find my way into their flat at exactly 11 o'clock. i walk into Eloise's room and find a bag marked "TUG'S". I open it like its a treasure chest containing gold, because the contents of the bag are a beautiful sight to me. I ruffle through lengths of rope, rolls of tape, scarves, socks, ball gags, and clamps and more! In my excitement i ready the scene for bondage. i attach restraints to each corner of Eloise's bed preparing it for a spread eagle tie. Then i hear the door crack open and sounds of two girls chatting and giggling. Both girls expect me to jump out at any second and grab the other roommate. because i have known Eloise longer and have a better trust with her, i decide to grab Rachel first.

I peak into the room and see these two sexy girls standing in their bathing suit. Luckily Rachel has her back to me.. as i sneak into the room i spot Eloise and she sees me too. She knows whats about to happen and gives me a wink. Rachel sits on the couch and Eloise says, "Hold on Rach! ill be right back!" as Eloise slips out into her room i hear rachel mumble "man, he should be here any second!" as she glares at the clock. Right as i say that i clamp my hand over Rachel's lips.

"ERRRMPHHHH!" she screams into my hand.
"Hmm thats the sound i wanted to hear all day!" exclaims Eloise exiting her room, still dressed in just her bikini.

At this point, Rachel is very confused as to who is handgagging her. She fights to get a look as I use all my strength getting her into Eloise's room. I push her face down into the bed and as soon i do that Eloise jumps on her. I restrain her feet to each bed pole as Eloise secures her hands... all the while Rachel is yelling and fighting.

"Eloise! what are you doing to me? Who's here? Who's the guy? What's happening?!?" Rachel tries to spin her head to get a look at me but i cant have that happen. Immediately i take a blindfold and put it over Rachel's eyes. She screams "Eloise! I'm going to get you back soooo good! you just wait! I am even going to have someone----" i shove in a dirty old sock i found on the ground before she can tell Eloise that she too is planning on having someone tie her up. "HMMMFFF! ERMMRRMRMRPHHH!" is the only thing rachel can get out of her mouth as i place strip after strip on her mouth securley gagging her. Eloise looks at me and says
"We got her good!... what should we do now? OH! i have an idea... she hates to be cold... let me go grab some ice cubes!" Rachel squeels after hearing how we will torture her.

"Here!" she says tossing me 4 ice cubes "Put some under her bikini top!

i slip 2 in each breast as she puts a few into her bikini bottom. rachel squeels into her gag. She twists and turns and i watch as her hips turn sensually pulling hard at her restaints.

"WOW, look at our masterpiece here" says Eloise as she walks right at me. Her strut is like a model on the catwalk. she walks over and says "you did pretty good their!" She rubs her finger down my chest "NOW, lets see you do worse to me ;)" she said throwing in a wink at the end.

"is this a challenge?" i asked confidently. She just glares back at me with a smirk and shrugs. "ill take that as a yes! Get on your knees, cross your feet and lock your hands behind your head!"

She does as i say and then looks back with her best impression of a puppy dog and then asks "what are you going to do to me? be nice i promise ill be good!"

to be continued...?

Re: Eloise and Rachel

Postby cellofello » Sun Jul 24, 2011 2:18 pm

gamer4 wrote:This is my first story! so be nice haha. and i am writing one using Eloise and her roommate Rachel being my captives.
here it goes...


If I am interpreting you correctly, this is a fictional story. There is a sub-forum for fictional intimate TUG stories. I know a number of people prefer to keep this one for true stories. If it is indeed fictional, perhaps you could move it?

I do realize that it's easy to miss. I think I am going to hit the suggestion forum and suggest that it be moved up to a top-level forum. I think it will be easier for people to notice.

Re: Eloise and Rachel

Postby barefoot99 » Sun Aug 07, 2011 12:55 pm

please continue
BAREFOOT AND CUFFED, THAT'S THE ONLY WAY TO GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Eloise and Rachel

Postby bound boy 15 » Sun Aug 07, 2011 1:56 pm

very good cant wait to hear the rest ;)

Re: Eloise and Rachel

Postby whereisderek23 » Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:02 pm

great story

Re: Eloise and Rachel

Postby randomentity » Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:02 am

Great story! Continue please? :D