The Nixon Family - Return of the Molly Maids: New Twists

Postby AlexUSA » Fri Dec 13, 2013 9:50 pm

Saturdays were usually "clean the house day" throughout the year just for consistency, since it couldn't be done on weekdays during the school year. The day somebody made the unfortunate mistake of making a "Molly Maid" joke set off a fire in my four daughters that brought about one of the events we knew as involving the "Molly Maid Gang," otherwise known as "Girls-gang-up-on-boys." This Saturday started normal like any other.

For instance, I put orange juice in my coffee instead of creamer, Paul made one of his infamous disgusting health shakes, and Anna cooked up some eggs while James made their toast.

"Anna, you're frying those eggs?!" I asked.
"Is there a problem?"
"Yes, there's a problem. They're malodorous."
"He means they stink," her mother added, "Please, don't fry eggs in the future; it's too hot for us to air out the house this time of year."
"But fried eggs are great!"
"Eggs are yucky!" was heard somewhere in the peanut gallery... probably Eric or Sara, the egg haters... too bad Mom never mentioned there are eggs in cake.

"Mmmmm... Count Chocula!" John said, obviously suffering from a chocolate addiction.
"Cough it up, John," Kate said, suffering from the same addiction.

Paul walked over to the fridge for another ingredient. In so doing he bumped into Rachel, "Oh, sorry, Molly," he said. Not many heard it... maybe just me, Anna, James, and the recipient, but it was there. I had to notice the conversation. I was coming over too, and Paul opened the freezer into my head.

"Ow! Gosh blast you Paul!! Get me an ice pack!"
"Sorry! Here you go."

We didn't know it at the time, but Paul had fired the shot that would be heard round the house. We who heard it laughed at the time, but Rachel decided to use it as an excuse to play a little game with her older siblings.

Paul and James weren't laughing later.

Here's the wardrobe:
Anna: jeans, purple polo, purple bandana headscarf
Kate: black skirt, white blouse, camouflage bandana headband
Rachel: pink skirt, purple blouse, pink bandana kerchief
Sara: jeans, pink polo, black bandana headscarf
Paul: black shorts, Detroit Red Wings shirt (he likes all teams I hate!)
John: jeans, black nerd polo
James: jean shorts, blue t-shirt
Eric: jean shorts, red t-shirt

The only departure in the wardrobe is that all four girls wear bandanas when cleaning the house.

And thus with trials and twists and turns, we shall proceed into a new story!
Last edited by AlexUSA on Wed Dec 18, 2013 11:30 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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The Nixon Family - Return of the Molly Maids- Part 1!

Postby AlexUSA » Fri Dec 13, 2013 10:26 pm

After breakfast, Saturday started as normal. Since a new semester was approaching, I retreated to my den to start organizing notes for my classes. I made a request first.

"Sara, please clean your bathroom."
"Why?"
"Because when you clean it, it's clean enough to eat off the back of the toilet seat (where boys miss)."
"OK."

With 10 people, it's easy to clean the house. We have 5 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms, my den, the living room, the kitchen, a basement storage room (where the kids had arranged a maze), and another, large, empty basement room where the kids roughhoused. We never cleaned the basement, so everyone got a room in essence, with me and the Mrs. sharing the master bath, with me, of course, cleaning the toilet.

That's when things started to decline. Since the twins' bedroom was on the first floor as well, Rachel easily slipped away with no one noticing. She was standing in the doorway saluting like a soldier, which is really odd to imagine when a girl is wearing a skirt.

"Permission to speak sir!" she saluted.
"Permission denied!"

She just dropped her jaw open in dismay.

"Nah, permission granted."
"May I declare war on the boys?"
"Anytime. You are a girl. Are you going to warn them?"
"You say the strangest things."
"Continue."
"Do I have to warn them?"
"Only if you plan on tying them up."
"Then I do plan to warn them."
"Fine. What you do, do without being mean."
"Yes, Dad..."
"Your attitude miss!"
"Sorry," she saluted again.
"Dismissed!" I returned the salute.

What was she saying? Anyway, I turned to my calculus notes and... sorry, I don't mean to bore you.

When the cleaning duties had been fulfilled, I saw four girls converge on the twins' room. Someone had called a caucus. I stuck my head in. Rachel had a toy hammer from some toy that probably got thrown out years ago.

"I call this meeting to order! No eavesdroppers, Daddy!"
"Why not?"
"Because you're a boy," Sara retorted.
"Buh! But this is my house!" I said with a grin.

Kate and Anna just point outward with a single finger each, so I stood outside the doorway with my ear near the entrance. No one saw me, but I still heard Anna say, "Sorry, Dad," and shut the door. But I could still hear them! :mouthopen:

"You heard Paul call me a 'Molly Maid' this morning?" Rachel started with.
"I did!" Anna replied.
"Then you know what we must do?"
"Call them silly neener-heads?" Sara asked.
"Tie them up?" Anna asked.
"Exactly!" Rachel responded to some quiet applause.
"Then why the meeting?" Kate asked.
"To revive the Molly Maid gang!" Rachel replied with gusto.
"All in favor of Anna's motion! Motion carried!"
"Meeting adjourned. Meet back here in 10 minutes."

I quickly hid in the den and was able to watch Kate and Anna leave as they were heading the opposite direction from me. Rachel and Sara must have stayed behind to begin the transform, because they came out with their hair uncovered and walked into the bathroom with camouflage bandanas in their hands.

It was going to be an interesting afternoon.
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Re: The Nixon Family - Return of the Molly Maids: New Twists

Postby AlexUSA » Wed Dec 18, 2013 11:30 pm

After 20 minutes had passed, I heard the sound of the girls reassembling before their operation. They had a good plan, too.

Anna: "So we are after James and Paul, correct?"
Rachel: "Yes; we need ideas."
Anna: "How about we capture Eric and John as our hostages to use in tying up them?"
Kate: "Paul doesn't have enough feelings; James might though..."
Rachel: "Kate is correct on that one."
Anna: "We just tie all of them then; if they accept the hostage thing, then good; if not, then Eric and John are stuck."
Sara: "Sounds like fun!"

And they were armed with bandanas, ropes, socks, and tape as they progressed into the great unknown. As the Molly Maid Gang, they all wore camouflage bandana kerchiefs on their heads for identity.

To get to any of the boys' bedrooms, one must go up to the second floor. As they came through, they made their first visit in James and Eric's room, where both were in there. Kate stuck her head out, being a manipulator.

Kate: "Eric, I need you."
Eric: "Sorry, I'm busy!"
Kate: "Please?"
Eric: "No!"

*Hatchet in the gears*

Anna: "Plan B... charge!"

And four girls stormed the bedroom in a hurry and quickly tied up James.

James: "What's going on?"
Anna: "You are charged with supporting your brother's taunts toward your sisters. How do you plead?"
James: "Is this for calling Sara 'cat-breath' yesterday?"
Anna: "Amongst other things; How do you plead?"
James: "Guilty with pleasure!"

James found himself bound, gagged, and hogtied. Eric was happy he had said no as he went downstairs to play with the dog. The girls were still giggling at what they had done when they saw a figure flash by. They couldn't leave James alone, so Sara would stay behind. As they traveled down the hallway, they failed to observe the dark figure trailing them and entering James and Eric's room with a bag in its hand.

Sara: "Well, James, looks like we're here together for now. Maybe you shouldn't have-- hey-- no!-- you can't--- mmmmmph!"

The large figure had clamped a hand over her mouth and another arm over her torso. James gave a smile of satisfaction as best as he could. The figure took out a sock and shoved it in Sara's mouth before gagging her with a black bandana. It then taped her mouth. Her arms, elbows, knees, thighs, and ankles were also tied. A belt fasted her arms to her torso, and rope was used to hogtie her. A final white bandana blindfolded her. She thrashed around as her captor left her and James to pursue others.

Meanwhile, Rachel, Anna, and Kate had gone down the other stairs having not found John and Paul. Being thorough, they went back upstairs, where they found John lying around.

Anna: "John, have you seen Paul?"
John: "Not in a while."
Anna: "That's unusual."

Their path brought them back by Eric and James' room, where the shocker awaited.

Anna: "Sara, who did this to you?"
Sara: "Mmmmpph ggggg!"
Rachel: "Should we untie her or shouldn't we?"
Kate: "Ask her in a way she can respond."
Anna: "Sara, are you having fun at the moment?"
Sara: *shaking*
Anna: "No riddles!"

The dark figure came up behind Kate, who was standing somewhat in the hallway, and grabbed her like Sara. One hand clamped over her mouth while another held her body down. Kate, who at this point in time had gotten a reputation of being the official "damsel-in-distress" of the family, was able to kick the door frame, but it was too late.

Anna: "Kate! No!"
Dark figure: "No! This is my hostage! Don't touch the other, or you will meet the same fate!"

Anna and Rachel pursued, but the door to John and Paul's room locked shut .

In the bedroom, Kate had a sock shoved in her mouth and a red bandana tied over it. Her mouth was then covered in several layers of tape. She was forced to lie on the floor. Her captor tied her arms, elbows, thighs, knees, and ankles with rope.

Kate was sat up and put against a pole on John and Paul's bunk-bed. Rope fastened her torso above and below the breasts and at the waist with rope. A final strip of rope attached her thigh rope and ankle ropes so that her knees were propped up a little. Kate tried to grunt a little, but it was worthless. She was in her new home for possibly two more hours.


Anna: "So now what?"
Rachel: "We regroup."
Anna: "But first, let's grab Sara!"
Rachel: "Right!"

After they had removed the copious bondage, they pried Sara with questions. Who did it? Why? Was it hard to escape? Was it fun?

Sara: "I didn't see who it was. It happened quickly, and he quickly blindfolded me."
Anna: "Let's get out of here!"

The girls quickly retreated to base for a regroup, and dropped James off in my den, where I promised to watch him carefully. They went back to the twin's room, Rachel and Anna continued plans while Sara readjusted her bandana.

Rachel: "So?"
Anna: "We must infiltrate quickly. We go up together, scope the situation, and return separate ways carefully. We grab John if we can."
Rachel: "OK."

As soon as the girls were upstairs, they saw the locked door. Anna knocked.

Anna: "You know the rules! If there's a tied and gagged victim, no locking the door!"

The door opened to no one inside. Anna could see Kate tied up on the floor as she was. Kate started thrashing and shaking her head, so Anna squeezed the door into the wall.

"Hey! Owwww!"

Anna and the twins quickly turned around, grabbed their captor, and started to tie him up. He had on a ski mask. After his arms and legs were secured, the mask came off to reveal John! John took advantage of the moment.

John: "I would have gotten away with it too, if it wasn't for those pesky girls and their meddling dog!"
Anna: "Why, John?"
John: "Because it was unexpected; the thrill of surprise. However, I will not sanction this tie unless you let Kate stay tied. Either let me go and inevitable get captured, or take both of us together."
Anna, looking at Kate: "Oh well."
John: "Good, now while I have you here allow me to talk to you about something fascinating I read on the computer how they---- mmmmph!"
Sara: "He asked for it."

Sara and Anna put John on the bed. They worked together to hogtie him. After John was tied, they looked at Kate.

Anna: "You always get in trouble! Haven't you learned?"
Kate: "Mmmph! ooo ou iiiiii ooo!"
Anna: "This communication is useless! Now we can move on to find Paul!"

They proceeded out with Rachel leading Sara and Anna. As they moved out, Paul appeared from Anna and Kate's bedroom, and grabbed Anna.

Anna: "Rachel-mmph!"
Paul: "This one is mine!"
Rachel: "Quick Sara, reroute! Plan B... plan B!"

Sara quickly retreated down the stairs.

Paul: "You aren't stopping me!"
Rachel: "Yes, we are!"

Rachel and Paul kept repositioning with her trying to make it difficult for him to retreat into his bedroom. As they grappled, Paul was slowly binding and gagging Anna. He had her arms tied, and she was gagged with a sock and tape at this point. Rachel was in the past labeled as admiring Kate enough to dress like her, and she was displaying the same feistiness Kate did! Sara came up behind Paul and ended the adventure with a touch.

Paul: "Darn it! I still keep Anna though!"

He pushed through Rachel and made Anna sit down in a desk-chair. He tied her ankles and knees to the legs of the chair and fastened her upper body to the chair. Paul and Sara then looked at Rachel!

Sara and Paul: "Come here!"
Rachel: "What's this for?!"
Sara: "For getting me tied up!"

Sara pushed Rachel into Paul, and soon her legs, knees, and thighs were tied to the other desk chair. Her arms and elbows were fastened behind her back and into the chair frame work. More rope bound her chest and torso to the chair. Sara took the camouflage bandana out of her hair, and used it to cleave gag Rachel after shoving a sock in her mouth. Sara took out another camouflage bandana and used it to blindfold Rachel.

Sara: "For my troubles and starting this mess, Molly! No leaving, Paul! You're helping me!"

With Sara and Paul working together, both chairs were moved down to the living room. John and Kate had minimal bonds removed and were carried downstairs into the living room where both were left in strict hogties. Lastly, James was brought into the living room, and at this point Eric was helping. Except for James, the rest had all been tied within a half-hour span, so they all had much time left to be tied.

Sara, holding her bag: "Come here, Paul!"

Sara tied Paul identically to John. Sara and Eric stared at their bound siblings in amusement, wondering how the young ones came out in the end, although Eric took a mulligan out of this one. I walked into the room with a grin on my face.

"Mario Kart Wii, anyone? Sorry, but you guys are tied up and unable to play at the moment."

It was shame for Anna, Paul, John, Kate, James, and Rachel. Sara was right, though. For causing all this carnage, and even getting Sara tied, she did deserve to be tied too. It wouldn't be fair to spare her the fun. :quirk: For an extra kick, Sara left Rachel blindfolded while letting the others watch. I am glad Rachel couldn't see. Eric was thrashing me, and she would be the last person to let me live it down.
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Re: The Nixon Family - Return of the Molly Maids Part 1!

Postby AlexUSA » Wed Dec 18, 2013 11:32 pm

I am asking for feedback on this. I am trying to slowly refine these so that there is a decided... adventure... component to them. If anyone has ideas or suggestions on how to generate more interest in the plot lines, please let me know so I can improve future stories with your advice. No feedback doesn't help the authors.

Also, apologies for the delay in finishing this. My computer broke and was out for 4 days!
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Re: The Nixon Family - Return of the Molly Maids: New Twists

Postby xtc » Thu Dec 19, 2013 4:06 am

Welcme to the League of Dead-Horse Floggers!
Good luck.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: The Nixon Family - Return of the Molly Maids: New Twists

Postby hafnermg » Thu Dec 19, 2013 12:45 pm

I'm really loving your stories AlexUSA! As for the feedback you asked for I honestly don't have any idea off the top of my head, but I will think on it and let it bounce around in my head to day and get back to you later on it.

Re: The Nixon Family - Return of the Molly Maids: New Twists

Postby AlexUSA » Thu Dec 19, 2013 6:25 pm

xtc wrote:Welcme to the League of Dead-Horse Floggers!
Good luck.


Wha?!
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Re: The Nixon Family - Return of the Molly Maids: New Twists

Postby Jason Toddman » Thu Dec 19, 2013 10:39 pm

AlexUSA wrote:
xtc wrote:Welcme to the League of Dead-Horse Floggers!
Good luck.


Wha?!

He means asking for feedback is probably an exercise in futility; iow pointless. But good luck with it anyway.
Concerning feedback, well... I can relate. I haven't gotten much for my stories either, and it's really discouraging.
As for my thoughts about this story, I'll PM you.
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