Enemies M/M

Postby RJK000 » Wed Jun 06, 2012 11:53 am

There had always been a rivalry between two people at school. Harry who is 14 and he black hair and he is fairly athletic. There is his rival Josh who is tall and a soccer freak. There rivalry has always been over there looks in my opinion there both fairly attractive.

It was a the end of a normal school day but weirdly Josh and Harry were talking , like they were friends. Josh said " Hey Harry why don't you come round mine at the weekend my parents wont be back till late and that means we can try to become friends". "Okay that sounds great" Harry Replied.
Later that evening Harry turned up at Joshes , they were getting on fine. Josh and Harry went upstairs and went into his room. They was a scream Joshes brother Lou had scared Harry. Lou and Josh tied harry up and Lou said " We have finally got revenge on that little bastard Harry". They both laughed and Harry screamed "Why the fuck are you doing this to me". "It's payback , everyone has always liked you more than me" said Josh. "Oh shit our parents are gonna be back soon". Lou and Josh quickly grabbed Harry and chucked him the boot of Lou's car. "We can keep him at my apartment" Lou said. They arrived and Harry was bound , gagged and blindfolded. Josh called his parents to say he was staying at Lou's for a couple of Days. ( It was school vacation so he could stay longer ). Josh ripped off Harry's gag and made him call his parents as well to say he was staying. Lou said " Now we have all that cleared up now its time for torture.

To be continued.
Last edited by RJK000 on Thu Jun 07, 2012 3:55 am, edited 2 times in total.

Re: Rivalry

Postby random » Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:57 pm

I like it! Do continue!
Life is too short to have regrets.
I may have a strong opinion at times but I respect yours and hope you do the same.
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Re: Rivalry M/M

Postby RJK000 » Thu Jun 07, 2012 3:17 am

Enemies
Chapter Two


Harry : I need to use the toilet
Josh : No way , I would rather see you wet yourself
Harry : Your such a bastard Josh , I hate you

Josh and Lou laughing at Harry's misery.
Josh and Lou untied Harry and then stripped him down.

Harry : what the hell are you doing to me
Lou : I'm not telling you Slave

Lou and Josh got a 2litre empty bottle and said to Harry

Josh : C'mon then go to the toilet.
At this time Harry had no choice but to have to go in the bottle

Harry : Okay Josh

It was about an hour later and Harry needed a drink.

Harry : I need a drink
Josh : You have to drink your own piss , slave

Lou forced Harry to open his mouth and Josh made him drink it.
It approached night time and Lou decided to over to his girlfriends.
So that meant that Josh and Harry were left alone. At this time Harry was naked , bound & gagged.
Josh decided it was time for him to go to bed. Josh lifted Harry and put him on Lou's double bed and Josh stripped down naked and got in next to him.

To be continued. :gag:

Re: Enemies M/M

Postby random » Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:06 pm

Great work, do continue!
Life is too short to have regrets.
I may have a strong opinion at times but I respect yours and hope you do the same.
Check out my first story ./viewtopic.php?f=56&t=15159 Comments and suggestions welcome!

Re: Enemies M/M

Postby Chris12 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:44 am

I like it although it could be a little longer. Still a good job though :big:

Re: Enemies M/M

Postby xtc » Fri Jun 08, 2012 9:16 am

How about some detail?
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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