A Naruto Inspired story

Postby Zandor » Fri Jul 26, 2013 8:10 pm

This story is written for Mirae.

Disclaimer: I don't own naruto, this is in naruto world, just not about naruto.
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My name is Mirae Namikuza, and im a genin level ninja... I have what people can all feminine build.
I am part of team 14, which includes the team leader Zia, and my teamates Rioji and Zanji.
We make a half decent team, with help of Zia... alone however, our Pesonalities clash, and it just never ends well...
Anyhow, We should get along with the story.
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We were on a mission, just an escort mission, when we were meet with an Obstical, a big one.
An enemy ninja, a stone one to be exact, stood in our way, and we knew we stood no chance, exept for Zia, our team leader.
"Stop where you are, Leaf ninja." The Man said
"Why? You want to see our papers?" Zia asked
"No, I don't, im here to take the one named Mirae Namikuza." The man said.
"You won't get her!" Zia yelled
She leaped towards the man, throwing a kick, which the man seemed to easily dodge. She kept attacking the man, but the man seemed to be so much faster, he grabbed Zias leg and threw her to the ground, then bound her wrists with some rope he had in a bag, we hadn't seen. He then binded her wrists with a bit more rope, and knoted it.
"Now, onto the one i came for..." he said, turning towards me.

What happened next, even i couldn't predict, the other two in my team ran infront of me and said, "Don't touch her... or you will fell our wrath." The man easily dispatched each with a single hit, and grabbed my wrist.
You are q immortal

Re: A Naruto Inspired story

Postby Zandor » Thu Sep 26, 2013 10:39 am

This part of the story will be from Zanjis view.
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As the man grabbed Miraes wrists, something inside me awakened. I got up, staggering and said, "You think... you could finish me off?" The man looked at me, and tried to kick me in the face, which I somehow dodged. I tried to hit the man, but I was still to slow.

While this was happening, Zia was trying to get up, not having much luck. Mirae was behind me, she knew I was defending her. The man rushed me, but I managed to nail him with a kick in the chest. "My name.... is Zanji Burstinax, I am the keeper of the 9 tailed beast!" I started to form a smaller wind ball in my hand.

Zia had gotten up, and ran at the man, knocking him out with a clubing blow. She asked to be unbound and I did so.

"Who are we actually guideing?" I asked, wondering.
"Both you and Mirae, As you two are the keys, they keys to the Akatsukis plan!"
I knew I was, but Mirae? She never shown any idea or power that even suggested that she was. I looked at Mirae, and she was just as confused as I. What was the idea?

"Zanji, I need you to bind Mirae!" Zia said, looking straight at me.
"B-B-ut why?" I asked, even though it has been my dream.
"JUST DO IT!" Zia yelled.

I walked over, and Mirae put her hands behind her. I grabbed some rope that Zia held out. I wrapped it around her wrists 5 times and then knotted it tightly. I sat her down, and did the same to her ankles. I got up, and lifted her over my shoulders as Rioji got up.
"What happened, and why is Mirae tied up?" He asked.
"Well, Zia said to tie her up, so i did." I said.

TBC
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Re: A Naruto Inspired story

Postby Zandor » Thu Sep 26, 2013 11:59 am

I just realised, I posted it exactly 2 mounths later -_0 It's difficult to write as Im not sure which way to go with it.
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