The crush.Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Sat Dec 26, 2015 2:09 pm

This is my first story and I just joined this site. My name is Adam not really much else to say. I am currently writing three short stories and this is one I'm doing I started it today and I am posting all that I have written but I figure that I'll be posting a couple of chapters at a time. After I post this I plan to keep writing and will post again tonight. I'm sorry that nothing cool happens yet. But if you would like to know that basic plot then just PM me and I'll tell you and you can tell me what you think. Thanks a lot for all comments. And here we go.


Adam
December 21, 2015


The crush.
A story of a stupid mistake.
Chapter 1. Truth
I stepped off the curb and started walking over to my bus. I waited for one of my friends to climb up the stairs while I nudged my book back into a more comfortable position. I walked up the steps and said hello to the bus driver, Maria, before I walked to the back of the bus, dropped my backpack into my seat and started talking to some friend of mine on the back of the bus. They happened to be playing truth or dare. I joined in the next round after Eric won because Carson wouldn't walk up to a random girl and ask her out. I went second and a friend of mine named Trey would be giving me to truth or dare. I choose truth and he said,
"Who do you have a crush on?"
I had figured this question would come up, it always did, so I answered with a random name and said, "She is hot." Unfortunately for me I happened to say the name of the most popular girl in school. Her name was Clara. Clara was super popular and super hot and at least half the guys in the grade had a crush on her. She wasn't out of my league, we weren't even playing the same game. Within seconds of my turn being over I'm sure that something like, "Adam in love with Clara", was probably what was being posted all over social media. Everyone on the bus kept telling me that she was going to find out but I was too tired to care, so I told the them to be quiet.
Eventually the bus came to a halt at my bus stop and I got off. I breathed a sigh of relief at being away front those maniacs. I smiled as I looked and saw that for the first time my mom was here at the right time. I shifted my backpack and walked over to my moms car. I got in and we did the customary after school rituals,
"How was your day?", my mom asked.
"Fine." I answered.
I sat down and started playing smashy road. The silence was broken when my phone starting humming. I looked at my phone and practically dropped the thing, on the screen were only 4 words, "So, you like Clara?"
CHAPTER 2 I'm dead.
I didn't know the number but I recognized the area code. I felt my breathing getting faster. I stared at the text until my mom asked if I was fine. I nodded and texted back,
"No, and who are you? ". I got a text back almost immediately.
"So you don't like her at all?"
I replied, "Not in the way you are thinking, who is this?" I already had a feeling who it was but I held some spark of hope which was immediately squashed with the next text.
"Sophia".
I felt a shiver go up my spine. The last time this had happened I was trapped on the 16th floor of a hotel. I thought about what to say next and finally texted back, "Is that all you wanted or is there more?" I decided to try to end the conversation by acting as sarcastic as possible. The act was cut short by what came next.

Chapter 3. Directions.

I waited for the next text to come through, hoping that maybe this would not end my social life completely. The next text came, I couldn't believe what it said.
" Tomorrow at 3:25 pm you need to be behind the school inside the gaga pit. I will collect you from there. Clara would like to talk to you. If you are not there or are late then you will have missed your chance. " I read it twice to make sure I wasn't going blind and then texted back,
"Why?", but I got no response. I thought about all of this for a second and then decided that it was possibly the only way for me to get out of this mess so I would do it. Big mistake.




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Re: The crush. Teen FF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Sat Dec 26, 2015 7:20 pm

PART 2. For the record I am not a video game company, meaning I have no intentions to wait. I will realize everything as soon as it is ready. I plan on releasing a part every two chapters. Please comment. An I promise that the sexy action is coming in the next 2 chapters.

CHAPTER 4. School blows.
The second I stepped off the bus I knew what it felt like to be famous. I didn't take three steps before I was surrounded with people who all felt that it was their job to let me know just how out of my league Clara was. I kept denying any attraction to her but I would have been better off talking to a wall. Even the teachers gave me weird looks all morning. The only thing that me going was that maybe I could strike some sort of deal to save my social life. It was like me and Clara were magnets, we happen to have all the same classes so naturally all the other kids in my class blocked me from sitting down and forced me to sit next to Clara. At one point I thought I saw my social studies teacher smile as she told us to work with the person to our right. Luckily for me, not a word was shared between me and Clara the entire day. Finally the bell rang and I bolted out the door. I flew down the step 3 at a time and was out of the school before the bell stopped. My "paparazzi" we're right behind me but I hid behind a tree. I stayed there for a while and was starting to feel sore. Just then I heard a twig snap behind me, in the corner of my glasses I saw Sophia sneaking up behind me and I started to panic.
Chapter 5. Sneak attack.
I froze and started to think. I understood that Sophia was much stronger than me so resisting would be pointless. I though about calling out to her but that wouldn't help me. I sensed her right behind me. I could smell the makeup she was wearing and could feel her breath on my cheek. She said one word,
"Boo"
Even though I knew she was there I still was surprised and lost my balance. My head hit the tree hard and my hand reached up to rub my head. Sophia sprung to her feet athletically and started giggling like she was ten.
"What was that for?" I shouted.
This made her laugh even louder as she stuck a finger over her mouth. Eventually she calmed down and told me to come with her. Obediently I followed her. I kept asking her questions while we were walking but she told me to shut up. Several times I told her I wasn't moving until she told me but she just shrugged and kept walking. I realized that asking questions and making empty threats was pointless so I caught up with her and was silent. We walked up the driveway and she knocked on the door. Clara opened it and beamed a seducing smile.
"Yay, your here , I was worried you weren't going to come." I smiled meekly and stepped inside. Clara looked at Sophia and nodded. Sophia left and went upstairs.
"Alright Adam, let's talk." I again nodded because I didn't trust myself to speak. She again flashed that smile and lead me into the kitchen.

Re: The crush. Teen FF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Sat Dec 26, 2015 8:10 pm

Part 3.

Chapter 6. Q&A
Clara got herself a Coke told me to sit down. She walked over and sat down but didn't say anything, just looked me over. After a full minute of silence she said,
"So you like me,"
It wasn't a question it was a statement. I looked at her amazing curves, perfectly white teeth, and flowing blond hair and decided I did kind of have a crush on her., but I still said,
"Not really, I.." She cut me off and said,
"So you hate me." I was amazed that this popular girl would actually be concerned whether or not a nerd like me like her. I stumbled to find a good answer,
"Well I mean...you know.....I just don't love you but I would still like to be you friend and..."
"And maybe a little more" she said, completing my sentence. I blushed and stared at her feet. She took a drink of soda and then said,
"Do you mind if I use you as a leg rest."
"Not at all" I stammered. She then picked up each foot and dropped them in between my thighs. She started talking about how it would be great if we could be friends but I couldn't pay attention because her feet would rub my crotch every time I moved. I finally got fed up and picked up her feet and rested them on my thigh. She stopped and asked for me to move closer. I shifted until her feet were at my stomach. We continued to talk but I noticed that she kept checking her watch. We were talking about our favorite teachers when her phone buzzed. I asked her if she needed to take it but she said she knew what it was. A minute or so later her feet dropped onto my crotch and I felt a boner come on. Hear started rushing into my face and I stood up hurriedly. I asked where the bathroom was but Clara wasn't done with me yet. She took a drink and stared at the small bulge that was being contained by my uniform. I stood there blushing until she she pointed at a door and I ran toward the safety of a locked door. She yelled after me,
"Sophia set up monopoly, when you finish in the bathroom come on up."
I yelled back, "Alright" and locked the door behind me. I started to relax and slow my racing mind. Did she like me? Was that on purpose? What is going on? I told myself that it was just a fluke an no more. I finally calmed down and unlocked the bathroom door.
Chapter 7. What just happened.
I stepped out of the bathroom and took a deep breath. I slowly climbed up the stairs to Clara's room. I found it at the end of the hall. Clara must have been in the bathroom because I heard the water running. I looked around her room. I had never actually been in a room that belonged to a girl my age. Her room was swathed in pink, pink carpet, pink wallpaper, pink bed, even the lamp was pink. I stepped inside and knew something was wrong. I jumped in fright as a hand slid over my mouth even though I knew this was not going to end well I couldn't help thinking that Sophia's hand looked really soft. She pushed my legs out from under me making me fall back into Sofia's arms. She shouted to Clara for help. I started fighting against her and managed to get in a few weak kicks before Clara rushed out of the bathroom and grabbed my legs. I shouted through Sophia's hands. "Helmmmpppphhh" I kept shouting but it was useless. Clara grabbed some core that she had in her pocket and tied up my legs. Sophia grabbed a shirt and balled it up and shoved it in my mouth. She then used the sleeves to secure it. She flipped me over and Clara came over to tie up my arms. The girls got off me and stood back, admiring their work. I was lying on the ground, groaning

Re: The crush. Teen 14 Y.O. Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Sun Dec 27, 2015 10:38 pm

I'm sorry I haven't finished it yet but I have been out with family. Next two chapters.

Chapter 8. Captured.
The girls towered over me and laughed as I tried to roll away from them.
"There is no escape buddy" said Clara. They picked me up and carried me down the hall to a different room. This one had a yoga mat on the floor, a couple of bean bags, and a chair. The girls laid me down on the yoga mat and went through a side door that I didn't notice. They walked back out with nothing as far as I could tell. They walked over and Clara said,
"We are going to untie you but if you shout or try to attack us then we will keep the gag in and keep you tied up. Nod if you understand. " I slowly nodded and the girls untied me. I stood up and said,
"What are you guys going to do with me."I asked fearfully. The girls laughed. I felt a ray of beautiful hope come over me and I triumphantly said,
"Laugh all you want but I am only here for less than 2 hours so my mom will find me."
Clara wiped a tear from here eye and told me that my mom knew this was a sleepover and that she would be here any minute to drop off my stuff. I though she was bluffing.
Chapter 9. Thanks Mom
My mom came and dropped a sleeping bag and some toiletries. She kept asking,
"Where is Adam"
but the girls kept telling her that I was in the bathroom. She eventually left and the girls came up holding the rolled up bag. They went through and teased me about each item in the bag. When they got bored of that they started teasing about how my mom was old and fat. I sensed that they were trying to provoke me into doing something so that they could prove to me that they can destroy me easily. I just counted down from 24 hours.

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Postby Theawsumistspeler » Tue Dec 29, 2015 5:53 pm

Chapter 10. Rock and a hard place.
Eventually the girls decided that this wasn't working so they tried to do something else. The two girls sank into the beanbags and said nothing. Clara finally broke the silence,
"We are about to start so if you need to go to the bathroom go tell us now."
Finally my fear of peeing myself overcame my pride and I nodded. Sophia came over and pushed me up. Clara came over and cut off the cuffs. I started flexing my hand to get he blood flow going again. Sophia took my elbow and lead me to the bathroom. I considered escaping but that was crushed when I realized Sofia was coming in with me,
"What are you doing in here". I was already starting to blush and panic.
"Oh relax you big baby. I'm going to turn around and won't look at you, unless your try to escape. Then I will make you feel me." She said easily.
I turned and started peeing. When I was done we went back to the room where she retired me to the chair. I noticed that my right arm was not tied up as well as the rest but I held my arm in place so as not to give away my small opportunity. Clara said something about more cuffs and she and Sofia left the room. I starting trying to free my right arm and after a couple of tries I had an arm free. I quickly untied my left hand and my legs and ran to the door. I slowly opened the door and crept down the hall.

Chapter 11. I tried.
I heard Clara coming up the stairs and I ducked into the bathroom near the stairwell. I tried to make myself as small as possible. She slowed as she walked by me. Maybe she knows and is playing with me. I was amazed that she couldn't hear my gasp of relief as I let out the breath I didn't know I had been holding. I knew I had seconds before she realized I was missing. I sprung up and ran down stairs. I forgot about stealth and I felt amazing as I knocked down a surprised Sophia. I bolted out the door and was already at home playing video games when the police officer saw me.
Chapter 12. All the bases covered.
I didn't see the car until the officer shouted,
"Hey kid, where are you going?"
"Ohthankgodyourherethesetwocrazygirlsfrommyschool..." I told him.
"Kid, I can't help you if I can't understand you." Said the officer.
Just then Clara found us. She ran over and started hugging me and saying things like,
"I'm never letting go of you again."
I was completely confused by this sudden turn of events and tried to pull away from her, but true to her word, she didn't let go of me. The officer seemed just as confused as I was and the two of us looked to Clara for an explanation. She was a very good actor by the way.
"My brother Adam has schizophrenia. Our mom is on a business trip and our dad is out with some friends and we have no way to contact him. We were eating dinner when he got up and ran out the door. Please don't tell our parents, then they will not trust us anymore." She let out another sob and I decided that this had gone on enough.
"Officer, my name is Adam Stewart and this girl tricked me into coming over to her house where she tied me up. So can you please arrest this raving...." I started.
"Now you listen here young man, you should be thankful that you have such a caring sister who you don't seem to deserve at all. I know you have some trouble with understanding what's going on but maybe it would help if you didn't make up grandiose lies. Now I'm not going to report this but if I get any more out of you I'm putting you in a cell." Finished the officer.
"Please sir I'm telling the truth." I begged.
The officers seemed to finally understand and he told me I was safe now. He put me in the front seat. I want the least bit phased by the fact that he was still treating me like I was crazy. He finally stopped the car and I looked up. I didn't think that we had gone all the way to the station and my suspicions were proved correct. We were parked in Clara's driveway.


Chapter

Re: The crush. Teen 14 Y.O. Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby xtc » Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:03 am

You have a lively stile of writing that could be even more entertaining than it is at present.
Beware continuity errors and the seduction of predictive text!
Seriously, it is difficult to proof-read your own writing because you will read what you think you have written and not what you have actually written.

Come on, the rest of those who have read this story. How about some appreciation/encouragement/support?
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: The crush. Teen 14 Y.O. Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:46 am

Thanks. More on the way I am currently sending my story to three different people of help. (Between you and me I'm not entirely sure they read everything I send them.

Re: The crush. Teen 14 Y.O. Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:48 am

Chapter 13. Home sweet home?

"Ok your safe now." Said the officer.
I couldn't believe it. Was this idiot actually going to return me to my captors. I kept thinking,
"The movies don't go like this. "
Apparently I must have said it out loud because the police officer looked at me strangely. I tried pleading with him once more.
"I swear on my life I am not lying. Just call my parents and they'll tell you my name is Adam Stewart and that I don't have any sisters." I begged him. He looked at me uncertainly and looked on the verge of calling my parents.
"Please" I said once more.
"Alright, I'll call your parents and we'll..........", he trailed off as Sophia and Clara ran over and enveloped me in a hug.
"Your home I though he was going to take you away from us." She cried.
Sophia had a bruise on shoulder from where I knocked her down. When the officer saw that his face hardened and he asked me,
"Did you do that?"
"Yes, when I escaped from......" I started.
"You hurt your own sister?" He said incredulously.
"Only because I had to..." I began.
The officer shook his head slowly and said,
"Girls, he doesn't deserve you but here you go. " the officer said wearily.
"Oh thank you sir" said Clara.
I thought she was laying it on a little thick there but it worked because the officer made no move to stop Sophia from dragging me screaming back into the house. The whole damn escape lasted less than half an hour.

Chapter 14. Welcome back
The two girls led me back to the house without saying a word. I was roughly dragged up the stairs and back into the bedroom where it was zip cuff time again. They put me back in the chair, I was scared of what was going to happen and it turned out my fears were well founded. Clara and Sophia backed up and Clara screamed,
"Alright you bitch your little escape attempt is over and your mine again"

This statement was followed by Clara stamping on my foot. I didn't react and this seemed to infuriate her. She sent kick after kick into my legs. When this still didn't get any reaction she rained blow after blow down onto my face. When she was done I was crying from the pain and all the fear that had been building up. She was breathing heavily and said to me,
"Think this is painful, you just wait until you see what we have in store for you."
With that she and Sophia left the room. I cried until I couldn't cry any longer. When I was done crying I prayed that I would get out of this. God answered my prayers, but not until the deeds had been done.

Re: The crush. Teen 14 Y.O. Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby xtc » Wed Dec 30, 2015 7:52 am

Theawsumistspeler wrote:Thanks. More on the way I am currently sending my story to three different people of help. (Between you and me I'm not entirely sure they read everything I send them.


I know the problem!
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: The crush. Teen 14 Y.O. Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Wed Dec 30, 2015 8:04 am

Working on chapter 15. The beginning of the end of my life.

Re: The crush. Teen 14 Y.O. Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby MaddieTieUp » Wed Dec 30, 2015 4:05 pm

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Re: The crush.Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby PizzaPieCafeLover1 » Fri Mar 11, 2016 9:16 am

This story is brilliantly written. The characters feel natural and your story has a very interesting flow. I laughed when I read the "customary after school rituals" part. That was funny. The social commentary with the policeman was also really neat. I think your writing is brilliant.

Re: The crush.Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Mon Mar 14, 2016 2:40 pm

Thanks. It really means a lot. I have been distracted with school work but I'm going to try to finish up two stories

Re: The crush.Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Sat Mar 19, 2016 3:19 pm

Chapter 15. The beginning of the end of my life.
The door to the room banged open and the two girls strolled in smiling happily. This made me very suspicious and I craned my neck to watch them as they walked behind me.
"Tell me, do you think our boy Adam is ticklish?", said Clara cheerily.
"I don't know, should we find out?", replied Sophia in the same tone.
"Look, girls.", I drew in a breath to begin the speech I had been mentally preparing, telling my two captors that they would get in a lot of trouble and that if they just let me go then I wouldn't tell anyone and we could just forget about the whole thing. I started my speech and rambled on for nearly ten minutes while in essence saying the same thing in different ways. The two girls listened intently to my speech and at the end continued to look at me, leaving an awkward silence that none of us seemed to enjoy. Finally Clara spoke slowly and hesitantly,
"I think....that our friend Adam here has taught us a valuable lesson." , she said haltingly.
"I most definitely agree.", declared Sophia, who wasn't entirely sure what Clara was doing but sensed that she should play along.
"I think....that our friend Adam here has taught us a valuable lesson.", repeated Clara, she allowed a small smile to break through her mock somber expression as she continued her previous thought.
"I think that Adam has taught us that blackmail is soooooo much fun!", said Clara as she allowed an all to familiar evil grin to emerge.

Re: The crush.Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby BondedOne » Mon Apr 04, 2016 10:51 am

Excited for the next part!
Tying or tied, I don't care, just give me some bondage!

Re: The crush.Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby Theawsumistspeler » Mon Apr 18, 2016 3:33 pm

Chapter 16 The title for this chapter is every curse word under the sun.

Shit, was the word being silently screamed through every ounce of my being as Clara left the room. Sophia remained for, as Clara had put it, "make sure our little prisoner didn't do anything naughty while she was gone" , which meant that Sophia was now leaned up against the wall with her arms crossed. In case you didn't understand my feelings I'll say it once more, absolutely shit.

We waited in a tense silence while Clara ran around up stair doing god knows what. Finally, after an eternity, she bounced down the stairs, happy as can be, and advanced on me with a pair of scissors.


Chapter 17 Safety scissors, my ass!

"What do you think your doing?" , I asked, my nervousness causing my voice to slip into a much higher register.

"Oh, these?" , asked Clara airily as she waved the scissors like a wand.

"No, the invisible scissors.", I replied as sarcastically as the situation allowed me to be.

"Ohhhhh, I am pretending I am a tailor today and I am helping you alter your clothes so they fit.", she proclaimed with a smile that was synonymous with that of a shark. I now noticed that Sofia had taken interest and now winked at me as I looked to her desperately, as if she was going to help. "So we should start with the shirt.", and without hesitation she deftly snipped away my shirt and left is hanging from the arms. In spite of myself I blushed at the thought of having two really cute, evil but cute, girls looking at my stomach because, unlike the majority of boys at my school, I was not blessed with a six pack. Instead I was cursed with a stomach that bulged no matter how many hours I spent on the treadmill.

My blushing stopped almost as soon as it started as Clara gasped, "Oh my gosh, I am soooo sorry! I ruined your shirt didn't I? Oh well, maybe we should just move on to the pants shouldn't we?", she said with guilt oozing from every over exaggerated word. Without me even saying a word of protest, and in a move that had clearly been rehearsed, Sophia, who had been edging around the room until she was behind me, rushed forward and kicked the chair to the side while at the same time jerking me upright and into a bear hug that kept me pinned against her.


Chapter 18 Photo, shoot!

"Now hold still or we might cut you by accident!" , Clara said as she came close to me. When she was about three feet away two thoughts made it through my white terror, squirm like hell, and at least Sophia smells like strawberries. Clara started to bend down but had second thoughts after I managed to get a leg free and kick the spot where her face had been occupying only seconds earlier.

"Hold him tight Sophie, he almost kicked me.", she didn't sound like she was scared of me escaping, more like she was annoyed that her prey had managed to hold her off. I remember that I tried to say something defiant like screw you, but thanks to a certain strawberry smelling girl that had me in a chokehold it sounded more like,
"Shoe yommmph!", Sophia tightened her hold to cut of the last word but I'm sure Clara got the message.

Clara raised one disinterested eyebrow and said, "Keep it up mister and we might just need to sow some holes shut.", the thinly veiled threat was enough to shake my last Remaining ounce of defiance and within seconds Sophia had regained control of me. A couple of ackward seconds passed during which I noticed that Sophia was sweating heavily, most people would have been disgusted to find another persons sweat sliding down their chest but for me it was a small victory. Sophia was tires which meant if I could suprise her then I might be able to escape. I also noticed that Clara was still completely uninterested in what was happening because she leaned up against the wall and picked her nails. Finally she seemed to notice that she had her best friend holding a half naked boy.

Re: The crush.Read and comment pleaseFF/M

Postby xtc » Tue Apr 19, 2016 6:06 am

Keep going.
Would you be upset if I spaced this a bit?
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Postby Theawsumistspeler » Tue Apr 19, 2016 4:22 pm

Not sure entirely what you mean by space it. But I'm assuming you mean space out the lines between chapters. Yeah. Go ahead.