## Kidnapping Jill (a different one)! Pt.1

Post by bondagefan » Tue Jan 20, 2009 1:45 am

dudue don't leave us hanging like that :

### Re: Kidnapping Jill (a different one)! Pt.1

Post by ReaderG » Tue Jan 20, 2009 4:53 am

Please>
1. Al least finish the last sentence.
2. Add some blank space so your thoughts don't run together.
Use the edit button to fix this.
The story is good so far, don't lose us.
Gerry

### Re: Kidnapping Jill (a different one)! Pt.1

Post by kidnapper » Wed Jan 21, 2009 3:14 pm

maybe you must have written :"to be continued " or at least if there is no more ,write:"guess the end of story yourself!!!"