Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby ginny890 » Sun Dec 04, 2011 12:51 pm

About me: I am a fifteen year old girl, with black hair that goes ¾ the way down my back and dark chocolate eyes (w/out contacts). I am 5 foot 5-6 inches. This is my first story about the time I properly tied myself up, and I am not a good writer, so tips and comments would be much appreciated.

It was a Friday night and my brother and mom were sleeping, while my dad watched TV downstairs. My dad never checks on me, and he probably thought I was sleeping too. I got out the bag of rope and scarves from my closet, and pulled all the rope out. Then I got out the thickest pair of winter socks i own and a pair of tights. I had a piece of rope *7 feet long* that I used to do the Japanese Karada (sp?) technique, which is essentially tying a crotch rope and tying the breasts with one long piece of rope. I took off all my clothes, and used the rope to do the Karada technique. By this time I was getting very excited, and couldn’t wait to go on.

I made sure I had the scissors out, on my side table, and that my door was locked. My room was dim, and I sat on the floor to proceed to tying my ankles together with scarves. I put the socks in my mouth, filling it nicely, and used the tights to tie it off. I also put on a “collar” which was really just a rope with the long end pulled through my crotch rope knot, and attached to the leg of my bed. I took out another rope, and tied one end to my ankles, and brought the other end through my ‘collar’ at the back of my neck. I sat on my knees and used scarves to ties above and below my knees. I was nearing the end now. I tied a cinch noose at the end of the rope that I had tied to my ankles (the one that I brought up through the back of my collar) and made sure that the rope was as high up my back as possible for both my hands to reach it. I put the wrist coil that I had made a couple days before, ( it was big enough for both my hands to go in it, but small enough that when it was cinched I couldn’t pull either hand out.) in the middle of the cinch noose, and put both hands in either end of it.

Then, I fell to my side, causing me to straighten my legs and pull on the cinch noose. I was in hogtie, with about 5 inches between my feet and hands. This whole time, I felt my crotch rope being tugged at because of the tension. After about 40 minutes of enjoying myself, I decided to use the scissors and cut myself free, but I realized that I had left on my side table, and forgotten to put them on the ground. I started to worry about what would happen. I mean I was tied in my bedroom naked with a crotch rope, so I did NOT what to be seen.

I then realized that my dad was watching some sort of action movie since I could hear bullets and screaming and car crashes, so he wouldn’t hear anything if I tried to roll over to my side table and shake it for the scissors to fall. I made my way over to the side table, and I just got close enough to shake it when my leash thingy stopped me. Thank God, I thought to myself. After sometime the scissors fell off ( I forgot to mention that they were very close to edge, with the handle kind of sticking off the table). I got the scissors and freed myself. I was still feeling kind of weird, so I decided to keep the karada thing on, and put my pajamas on over it, and went to sleep.

The next morning, I woke up early to do any last minute cleaning (in case I missed some rope or something) and took of the karada, and went down to have breakfast.

The End

I know this was very short, but i hope you liked it. Please comment.
Last edited by ginny890 on Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby ginny890 » Sun Dec 04, 2011 2:53 pm

Um, anything? Should I post other things?

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby swamidfs » Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:29 pm

I would love to hear about any others

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Postby linkedin » Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:34 pm

Yeah very interesting story, intriguing to hear how other people tie themselves up as a lot of people here seem to do it. I know of the karada technique you mention and I have used it on myself a couple of times it does feel very exciting. Your very brave to tie yourself up with a parent in the house i personally never do self bondage unless I have the house to myself and I know that everybody will be gone for a while :P

As for the writing style I think you are very good for a beginner, a positive point is that you explain how tying yourself up made you feel which is very important for communicating a good story :) For the future I would try splitting the story up into smaller paragraphs so its easier to read however the spelling and punctuation is very good :)

As for posting other things stories involving other people always seem to be the best. However if you dont have any stories of tie ups with others or dont feel comfortable posting them then you can always make up a story and write it in the fictional or fictional intimate sections dependent on the content.

Very nice story well done, keep up the good work :)

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby ginny890 » Sun Dec 04, 2011 7:16 pm

Thanks. I will try to break my story into paragraphs, and I will think about posting other stories(true), but I will definitely post fiction ones :). As for how I am able to tie myself with someone in the house, because I am rarely alone, so I have to make best with what I have.

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby bondagegirl1995 » Mon Dec 05, 2011 11:47 am

Cool story. I am not a fan of self bondage just for the fact that I could get stuck and caught. How come you went naked though? Getting caught in bondage is one thing. Getting caught naked would be aweful!

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Postby LauraHogtieTickled » Mon Dec 05, 2011 11:49 am

Nice Story Hope There's More To Come. :)

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby ginny890 » Mon Dec 05, 2011 1:35 pm

Thanks. I know self-bondage can b dangerous and that I could get caught, but I chose a day when there was a high percentage of me NOT getting caught. I made sure both my mom and brother were deep asleep, and I know for a fact that my dad rarely checks on me, and usually just falls asleep downstairs if he is watching TV on a friday night. i tied myself naked because the karada doesnt really work as well over clothes, and I wanted to get the "full experience". And my door was locked so there is a little more protection i guess.

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Postby bondagegirl1995 » Mon Dec 05, 2011 1:37 pm

As long as you were comfortable with it that's all that counts! Glad you had fun. Would love to hear more!

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby Billy Shears » Wed Dec 07, 2011 8:21 pm

Hi Ginny. I agree this IS a great story I am only having a little time reading every consecutive line. May I please ask you to edit it into two or three paragraphs ? Thank you very much :)
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Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby ginny890 » Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:42 pm

No problem. I didnt want to change the story but I will be sure to add proper paragraphs in my next story. Thanks for the feedback! (p.s. not as an excuse, but i am a beginner in writing so please bear with me on my next couple stories. Thanks!)

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby Qarl » Thu Dec 08, 2011 4:29 pm

Hi ginny,

Thanks for sharing the experience.. I like your first story. I could relate to the excitement of feeling naked and self-tied. I'm assuming that you're like many of us that would prefer to be tied by a trusted partner, but it's not exactly easy to find someone. So you do the next best thing, you simulate the helpless feeling by tying yourself up. And the adrenaline of the feeling of nakedness, semi-helplessness, the risk of getting caught, the stimulation of the ropes, especially in your personal areas, it all combines to make it fun and sexy and exciting. Again, maybe not quite as good as being tied by another, but pretty good all the same. Those are my experience and my impressions from what you wrote, but maybe I'm only writing about myself, and it's not quite the same for you. Either way, I enjoyed hearing about how you did it, and glad it turned out safe and fun. I look forward to reading more from you.

-Carl

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby Billy Shears » Fri Dec 09, 2011 11:03 am

ginny890 wrote:No problem. I didnt want to change the story but I will be sure to add proper paragraphs in my next story. Thanks for the feedback! (p.s. not as an excuse, but i am a beginner in writing so please bear with me on my next couple stories. Thanks!)


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Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby ginny890 » Fri Dec 09, 2011 1:02 pm

Quarl: Your exactly right. I do wish i had a partner, but i have to deal with what I get.
Billy Shears: thank you. I doubt that you need to be afraid though. Your stories will turn out just fine :)

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby randomentity » Sat Dec 17, 2011 7:35 pm

Enjoyed reading this! Your writing holds a lot of potential! :)

I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby cellofello » Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:38 pm

I enjoyed the story. It's not badly written, really, but I do have some suggestions.

My main observation is that you are writing the way you would talk. When talking, you can't go back and modify what you said earlier. Happily, when writing you can do just that. As an example, you wrote, "(I forgot to mention that they were very close to edge, with the handle kind of sticking off the table)." You could have gone back and inserted that detail where it belonged - nobody would have known that you forgot it. If you think of a better way to say something, go back and change it - and don't feel obliged to tell us that you changed it. Few if any writers, even professionals, can nail what they want to say without feeling the need for a single correction.

You can also stop to check on things you're not sure about. For example, if you weren't certain about the spelling of "karada" (you had it right), you can stop and look it up rather than putting "(sp?)" after it. Google is your friend. :)

On a more technical matter, I would recommend cutting some of the "ands" and "thens." For example, I would have opened the story with, "It was a Friday night. My brother and mom were sleeping, while my dad watched TV downstairs." Towards the end, "... I decided to keep the karada thing on. I put my pajamas on over it and went to sleep."

Finally: proofread! Spell checkers don't catch all mistakes. "I did NOT what to be seen" is not want - oops, what you meant to write, despite the fact that every word was perfectly spelled.

I look forward to reading your further adventures.

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby lonewolfandfriends » Sun Dec 18, 2011 7:47 am

A very interesting story, actually turned me on. I would certainly love to hear any other of your adventures. But safety first.

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby ginny890 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:09 am

cellofello: Thank you for the tips and suggestions. I appreciate anything anyone has to say (as long as they are nice about it, which you were :big: ) I admit that I never proof read much of anything. It is a horrible habit and I am afraid my teachers hate me for it, but I will honestly try to proof read. I will try to keep your tips in mind as I write about my other experiences.

Thanks for the feedback everyone :) . I hope to post another story soon, so keep a look out for it :wink:

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Postby bzzart » Mon Dec 19, 2011 5:09 pm

This is a good story, and I look forward to seeing your next one. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby ginny890 » Tue Dec 20, 2011 4:14 pm

Thanks :).
I honestly didn't think ANYONE was going to comment. Can't wait to post my next story!

Re: Self Bondage. First Time.

Postby Qarl » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:08 pm

ginny890 wrote: Can't wait to post my next story!
Can't wait to read it! :)

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Postby Kkonii1 » Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:48 pm

Great story, hope there are more to come.
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Postby RopeBurn » Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:32 pm

Very cool story. Definitely looking forward to hearing about more of your adventures if you choose to share them.

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Postby questionguy » Fri Jan 27, 2012 2:36 pm

Awesome, looking forward to your other stories.
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Postby feetlover » Wed Mar 07, 2012 3:31 am

Great story :-)