## Girls in the Gym? f/m, fffff/mmmmm

Post by Jon Snow » Sat Sep 05, 2015 10:12 am

Intro -
This is a fictional story in which a young girl goes to a gym for teens.
One of the boys there rudely rebuffs her, and she beats him up.
The other girls in the gym see this and immediately a battle breaks out.

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Post by Jon Snow » Wed Sep 09, 2015 6:12 am

Part 1 - Characters
In the gym at the time of this story, there are five girls and five boys.
Eve, 12, is the heroine of the story. With long brown hair and hazel eyes, she is very pretty but also quite shy. Her shyness doesn't affect her sportiness however. Reason for attending the gym: Just heard about it and is a fitness freak.
Ella, 14, and her best friend Tia, also 14, are gymnasts. Both girls have long blonde hair and blue eyes, and a very similar in both appearance and behaviour. Both girls are fairly girly, but love gymnastics. Reason for attending the gym: Working on their leg muscles for gymnastics.
Finally, Rachel, 12, and Addie, 13, are also best friends, and girl scouts. They look different to each other - Addie has red hair and Rachel has black, though both of them have green eyes. Reason for attending the gym: Rachel is supporting Addie and also coming to the gym to get a badge for girl scouts. Addie is coming to train for netball, but also is working towards a badge for girl scouts.
Brad, 15, is the antagonist of this story. With blonde hair and blue eyes and a handsome face, Brad might be called a "dream boy". But a dream he is not. He is vehemently opposed to girls in "his" gym, but he realises that he cannot stem the tide. However, when a girl as young and naive-looking as Eve walks in, this is too much for his ego. Together with his little brother Adrian, 12, and his best friend and right hand man Elliot, 14, he decides to try and remove the girls from the gym. Reason for attending the gym: All three like and play sports, but Brad also sees this as "his" gym and likes to patrol his territory.
Evan, 12, is a nerd and has often been bullied at school by tougher boys. He's generally a nice guy and has come to try and get a little fitter. He's sort of cute, with glasses, black hair and blue eyes. Reason for attending the gym: Wants to get tough enough to resist the bullies at his school.
Finally, John, 14, is a good friend of the gymnast friends Ella and Tia. He has come to support them and help them train, unaware that both the girls have a crush on him. This isn't surprising - he's sweet, kind and with his blue eyes and brown hair possesses a kind of handsomeness that isn't hugely noticeable, but once you notice it, you are sucked in by it. Reason for attending the gym: To help his friends train for gymnastics.

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Post by Jon Snow » Fri Sep 18, 2015 11:55 pm

Part 2 - Eve's POV
Eve was excited.
She had just heard about the new gym specially designed for teens and preteens.
She was totally looking forward to going.
As she pulled on her leggings, the ones she used for various sporty activities, she thought to herself about how long she'd been a sports freak.
She had started very young, and by the end of Primary School was already better than all of the girls and most of the boys in her class at any sport she chose. There were one or two boys who were better than her, but that was it.
In secondary school so far, she had started to play netball, football, rugby, volleyball and tennis, and also performed acrobatics and athletics.
She was also a martial arts buff, and was the best of her class, which was all boys except for her.
She enjoyed beating the boys at martial arts. It was satisfying to crush their huge egos into the ground.
And so, bidding goodbye to her self-absorbed family, Eve walked out of the door and down the road to the new gym.
A few minutes later, when she entered the gym, she was in awe.
There were so many machines, of perfect size for younger people such as herself.
She looked around.
She saw a pair of girls in leotards stretching, and a cute boy was standing by them, urging them on.
Her eyes lingered on a cute, nerdy-looking boy she thought seemed vaguely familiar.
Then she spotted the two girls in Girl Scout uniform.
It was her friends, Addie and Rachel!

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Post by Jon Snow » Fri Sep 25, 2015 3:23 pm

Part 3 - John's POV
John barely looked up as the small but pretty girl walked into the gym and headed over to the other two girls her age.
He briefly glanced at them as they hugged each other and began to chat away.
Then a bare foot gently kicking him in the face reminded him of why he was there.
He looked down at Ella, who was in the situp position. She smiled at him.
"Now, now, John. Don't get distracted. You're helping us remember?"
Their friend Tia looked at him with mock sternness, her hands on her hips.
"You would think that you only came to help us to look for some eye-candy...."
John blushed. "Come on, Tia. You know that's not what I'm like."
Tia relaxed her face into a smile. "Don't worry, John. We're just teasing you. And having immense fun at the same time. It's cute when you blush."
This made John blush again, resulting in giggles from the two girls.
John rolled his eyes. "You want me to help you stretch or not?"
Ella smirked. "Ok, ok. Fine. We were on 15."
Tia waggled her finger. "You had a brief break. You should start again. Besides, you were on, like, ten."
Ella sighed. "Fine. Start counting again, John."
John pressed his hands down on Ella's bare feet, holding them while she curved her hips and pulled her torso up, then down, then up again.
John had been eager to help with his friends' hobby. He enjoyed their company.
And, secretly, he liked Tia a lot.
Her flirty, teasing talk was enough to lure him in, and then he was smitten.
And she had him right where she wanted him.
But he didn't mind.

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Post by Jon Snow » Sat Oct 17, 2015 9:22 am

Part 4 - Evan's POV
Evan glanced at Eve as she entered the room.
He swallowed nervously as he stopped in the middle of a press-up.
Eve was his crush. She was pretty, friendly and kind. What was there not to like?
Evan fell in love with her pretty easily.
And now she was here to witness his humiliating display of strength, or lack thereof.
He prayed that she wouldn't recognise him.
His hopes were dashed as Eve noticed him and exclaimed, "Evan? Is that you?"
Evan groaned and stood up, making his way over to the three girls.
It was slightly awkward for him as he didn't know Rachel or Addie that well.
He smiled nervously. "Hi, Eve."
"What are you doing here?" she asked.
"Well...I don't like being picked on for being weak, so I thought I'd try to get stronger."
The three girls cooed with sympathy, which made Evan feel nice.
Eve put her hand on his arm. He felt a tingling sensation where her fingers touched his skin.
"If you're ever having trouble, just come to us, alright?"
Evan was about to reply when the door slammed open with a bang.
Three boys entered.

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Post by Jon Snow » Sun Nov 22, 2015 3:45 am

Part 5 - Brad's POV
Brad opened the door and was pleased to see that everyone looked sharply in his direction.
He scanned the room and took in the surrounding area.
There was boy sitting next to two girls in leotards doing stretches.
Brad licked his lips, which caused the girls to glare at him with disgust.
Maybe he'd go back for them later.
Then his eyes focused on a group of three small girls and a boy.
his lip curled with distaste. He didn't like girls in his gym.
But then he recognised the boy and smiled.
"Hey, Adrian, is that that weakling Evan?" he snarled.
His brother nodded, smiling. "Yeah. What, you gonna rip him?"
Brad smiled. "You bet. Come on you two, let's pay Evan and his girlfriends a visit."
As he approached the small group, Elliot and Adrian flanking him, he noticed the boy with the two gymnast girls watching him warily.

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Post by Jon Snow » Sat Jan 16, 2016 12:49 pm

Part 6 - Eve's POV
Eve stared at the large boy as he stalked towards their little group.
He had a mean smile on his face and he was staring at Evan.
He pushed past Eve and her friends and smiled at Evan.
"Hey there, squirt. My bro here says you're a wimpy little thing. Come here to man up?"
Evan blushed - he never liked being the centre of attention.
"Uh...yeah...I guess..."
Adrian came level with his brother.
"Tired of being beat up, Evan? Think you're a hard man now?"
"Uh...no...I...."
Brad stepped up to him and pushed him.
"Come on, tough guy, hit me back!"
"Stop it!" Eve yelled. "Leave him alone!"
Brad smirked again. "Need a girl to fight your battles for you, Evan? Pathetic." He turned and scowled at Eve.
He began walking towards her but, to her relief, the cute boy who was helping the two girls stepped in between them.
"Whoa, big fella, calm down there. This isn't cool, Brad." The boy held up his hands, placating.
Brad smirked. "Playing the hero, John?" He glanced over at the two gymnast girls, both watching in mixed horror and fear. "Trying to impress your lady friends, maybe?"
John's face flushed. "Does intimidating two 12 year old kids make you feel tough, Brad? Leave them alone."
Brad nodded, seemingly accepting John's order. Then he brought his fist back.
Eve's smile of relief turned to a scream of horror as Brad smashed his fist into the centre of John's face.
John staggered backwards and collapsed to the floor.
Everyone was on their feet. The gymnast girls let out screams and ran to their friend. One of them cradled John's head in her lap, tears falling from her eyes. The other one glared at Brad with anger in her eyes.
Even Brad's two friends were spooked. "Jesus," Eve heard Adrian mutter.
Brad smirked, staring around the room. "Who dares challenge me in my gym?"
Eve stood up. "I do."

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Post by Jon Snow » Sat Jun 25, 2016 1:38 am

Part 7 - John's POV
His nose hurt.
His face hurt.
His mouth hurt.
Everything hurt.
He was dimly aware of a commotion going on nearby.
He was dimly aware of Tia cradling his head in her lap, stroking his face gently.
He was dimly aware of Ella saying his name.
But nothing was more real to him than the pain.
He groaned in pain, as his eyes began to refocus.
Tia's pretty face came into view over him.
"John?" she asked tentatively. "Can you hear me? It's Tia."
John managed a weak smile. "Really? I thought it was the Loch Ness Monster."
The two girls laughed. The joke was a bad one, but he could see that they were relieved he was able to laugh.
"Are you ok?" Ella asked seriously.
"I don't know. I feel a lot of pain. But other than that I'm fine."
He tried to move, and his face went slack.
"My legs. I can't move my legs."
The girls' eyes widened in terror.
"brad might have bruised your spine...even broken it," Tia squeaked.
"Oh God," Ella added.
Then he grinned at them.
"I had you going there," he murmured.
The girls exchanged glances, then glared at him.
Tia punched him in the arm.
"Don't do that! Don't scare us!"
John smirked. "Your faces...so funny!"
The girls grinned wickedly.
"If you do that again," Ella said with a threatening tone to her voice. "We'll make what Brad did to you look like a little tiny bruise."
John laughed. "Point taken. Can you help me up?"
The two girls, one on either side, pulled John up into a sitting position.
He watched the spunky little girl with interest and concern.
"Is she going up against Brad?"
Tia nodded, looking worried. "We have to stop this. He'll pulverise her."
"I wouldn't be so sure about that," said the boy with glasses, who John had leapt to protect.
"Why's that?" Ella asked.
The boy grinned. "Eve can fight well. She's a black belt martial artist. I reckon Brad'll go down easy."
"Even so," John said with a grim smile. "If he looks like he's going to hurt her, we'll have to stop him."
"What do you mean, "we"?" Tia asked with a gentle smile. "You're still hurt. Me and Ella will deal with him."
John looked at the anger on the girls faces and smiled again.
"Remind me never to piss you off..."

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Post by Jon Snow » Thu Sep 29, 2016 2:06 am

Part 8 - Eve's POV
Eve stood facing Brad.
"I won't let you hurt anyone else," she said squeakily.
She was aware of how ridiculous that sounded, but her friends were looking at her like she was a hero, so it was worth it.
Brad and his friends laughed uproariously.
"You little pipsqueak...you want to fight me?" Brad wiped his eyes. "Very well."
He took a step forward...and suddenly fell face-first at Eve's feet.
Eve stared at Addie, who had stuck her leg out.
"Ooops," she giggled.
Then she launched herself at Elliot, dragging him down to the ground.
Even shy little Rachel crept up behind Adrian and kicked him between the legs.
She straddled him as he fell to the ground.
Eve smiled down at the fallen Brad.
"Time to finish this," she murmured.

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Post by Jon Snow » Sun Jan 29, 2017 8:06 am

Part 9 - Evan's POV
Evan watched with disbelief as the three girls laid into the three bigger, stronger boys.
Addie was straddling Elliot, slapping his face from side to side.
Little Rachel was holding Adrian in a seemingly unbreakable headscissor from behind, one that the tough boy was struggling to break.
But Evan wasn't watching them.
He was watching Eve.
She clearly had some martial arts experience, as she didn't let Brad recover from falling over.
He tried to get up, and he got a kick in the jaw.
He tried to roll, but Eve kicked him in the stomach.
Eventually, he managed to get to his feet, but a simple uppercut from the lithe young girl sent him down again.
Eve walked over to him and planted her foot on his chest.
"Don't get up," she snarled.
Brad, for once, looked terrified.
He stayed down.

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Post by Jon Snow » Wed Aug 02, 2017 10:33 am

Part 10 - John's POV
For a moment, the gym was silent as a grave.
John stared at the scene in front of him.
Next to him, Ella and Tia looked equally awe-struck.
Three little girls stood victorious over three boys, two of which were much older than them.
Addie had Elliot pinned still, and was grinning as she mashed his face under her feet.
Rachel was continuing to scissor the much bigger Adrian as his face grew redder and redder.
And little Eve was glaring at Brad, who was cowering on the ground.
John was the first to speak.
"Wow."
Evan glanced at him.
"Told you," he said with a nervous smile. "Never bet against Eve."
Tia ran over to the younger girl.
"That was bloody amazing!" she gushed.
Eve smiled.
"Thanks. But these boys won't stay subservient for long. We need a more...permanent solution."
"What do you have in mind?" Tia asked.
Eve grinned and began whispering.
Addie, Rachel and Ella joined them.
John looked at Evan.
"Why do I get the feeling I wouldn't like what they're saying?"
But Evan was unable to reply.
He was looking at the girls, who had now turned to them with grins on their faces.
Eve stood in the middle.
"It's time for the boys to learn to respect girls around here," she said. "Get them!"

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Post by Tiemeandkissmeplease » Wed Aug 02, 2017 1:08 pm

I like where this is going. I can't wait to see how the boys respond, will they take flight or fight? Maybe something in between? Maybe nothing at all; maybe they'll just stand there and wait for the inevitable.
I want her to tackle me, holding me down while she ties my wrists together behind my back. She tells me she loves it when boys struggle, but now I'm at her mercy. Finally she silences my protests by pressing her lips to mine.

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Post by Tiemeandkissmeplease » Wed Aug 02, 2017 1:10 pm

Hope you update soon, keep up the great work.
I want her to tackle me, holding me down while she ties my wrists together behind my back. She tells me she loves it when boys struggle, but now I'm at her mercy. Finally she silences my protests by pressing her lips to mine.

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Post by Jon Snow » Thu Aug 03, 2017 7:48 am

Part 11 - Eve's POV
Eve grinned as chaos ensued following her command.
The two older girls, Tia and Ella, ran at their friend and pinned him to the ground, not giving him a chance to run.
Addie, meanwhile, pounced upon the struggling Elliott, dragging him down to the ground once again as he tried to flee.
Eve knew who she wanted to go for, but she couldn't.
Brad would escape if she left him alone.
Her thoughts were interrupted by a tap on her shoulder.
She turned to see a smiling Rachel dragging an unconscious Adrian.
"I'll look after the big boys," she said, smiling. "You go get your man."
Eve smiled.
"Will you be ok?" she asked her friend.
Rachel dumped Adrian at her feet and planted a foot on Brad's neck as he tried to crawl away.
"I'll be fine," she said with an evil grin.
And so, Eve began to smile as she walked towards the one boy who hadn't tried to flee.
Evan.

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Post by Tiemeandkissmeplease » Thu Aug 03, 2017 7:51 am

Nice
I want her to tackle me, holding me down while she ties my wrists together behind my back. She tells me she loves it when boys struggle, but now I'm at her mercy. Finally she silences my protests by pressing her lips to mine.

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Post by Jon Snow » Fri Aug 04, 2017 11:46 am

Part 12 - John's POV
John hadn't had time to flee.
He had stared, dumbfounded, as his two friends leapt at him.
Grinning, the two girls pinned him to the ground.
Tia sat atop his chest, and Ella sat astride his stomach.
"Not even a fight," Tia said triumphantly. "He's all ours, Ella."
"Good to hear," Ella said with a little giggle. "I can think of so many things to do with our new toy!"
"What are you doing?" John asked, finally finding his voice.
"Eve inspired us, sweetie," Tia explained.
"We've liked you for a while, but we're tired of you not getting the message," Ella added. "Now we're not giving you a choice."
John swallowed nervously as he looked at the hungry grins on the girls' faces as Ella stood up and headed for their bags, leaving Tia sitting astride his chest and pinning him to the ground.