Kidnapped

Postby Roger » Thu Dec 25, 2008 7:15 pm

Part 1

-Again I beat you- said Chris putting his arm over Jake’s shoulders while they were walking through the sideway
-You now I suck at basket, next time let’s play baseball and you’ll see- said Jake smiling.
-Yeah, I would see… how I beat you again! -said Chris, both 13 year old boys wrestle playfully before continue walking.

Although Chris and Jake had been best friends since kindergarten, they were opposite poles; Chris was tall, average weight and had short blonde hair, he was good in almost every sport, especially basketball, he didn’t have any difficulty to make new friends, in fact he was quite popular with the girls, Jake on the other side, short, a little bit thin and had long black hair, in contrast with Chris, he didn’t was very fond to sports, actually the only sport he liked was baseball, where he was exceptionally good, he was quite shy (actually, Chris was the one who introduced him to all the friends he had), nevertheless, both guys were always together, they seemed like brothers.

That they had gone to a park to play basketball, after Chris defeated Jake, both guys walked back to their respective homes (on the same street) to eat lunch, Chris was wearing a red t-shirt, white shorts, grey socks and black adidas, Jake on the other hand was wearing a white t-shirt with a light blue shirt, black shorts, white socks with black and white adidas and a blue and white baseball cap.

Both guys walked until they arrived at Chris house, the street was empty, there was only a black van parked in the middle of the block, both friends said goodbye to each other and Jake continue walking towards his house while Chris walked through his front yard until he reached the door, Chris put his hand into his pocket and took out his key, he was going to open his door when he turned around, a few yards way, there were two guys next to the van, Chris first thought that they were fighting, but then his heart stopped as he saw Jake being held by one of them who was trying to pull him into the van, without thinking it two times, Chris started running towards his friend, when he reached them, he jumped on top of on of the guys and hit the guy’s face

-What the… ahhgg!- said the guy taken by surprise and fall to the floor holding his face, Chris tried to attack the next guy but suddenly a third guy approach to him and grabbed him, Chris started struggling while trying to kick the guy but he was stronger than him, suddenly, Chris felt a pain on his head and all went black.

-Dam!- he thought as he woke up- my head is killing me!- he rub his face against the carpet floor, then he realized that his hands were tied behind his back, “what’s going on?” he tried to said but there came only a soft “mhhggg”, he had some sort of cloth stuffed in his mouth and secured with duct tape, he looked at his body, his there was rope holding his ankles, knees and thighs together, more rope was wrapped around his torso and arms preventing him from moving, soon he began to hear the sound of cars passing at the other side of the wall, then a soft “mhhgg” coming from behind him, slowly he turned around and saw Jake, violently struggling, his friend was also tied and gagged like him, Jake noticed Chris movements and stopped to see him, the sight of Jake, all covered with sweat, gasping through his gag, with that expression of fear on his face managed to convince Chris that magnitude of the situation and began yelling through his gag with the hope that someone would listen to him .

-Shut up!- yelled one of the kidnappers looking at his captives, both boys looked at him helpless- oh look who is now awaken!
Another guy turned around, he had a huge bruise over his cheek
-So you are awake- he said- well I hope you have had enough fan trying to play the hero because when we arrive I’ll teach you a lesson
-Leave him alone- said the third guy (the driver of the van)- he is just a kid
-Well, that “kid” did this to me!- said the guy pointing his bruise
-Leave him alone!- said the driver, now angry- we will talk about it when we arrive!

Jake looked at Chris as he struggle desperately, he understand him, if he had been the one who hit that guy he would be even more frightened than his friend, suddenly he got an idea.

-Mhggg!- said Jake trying to call Chris attention, Chris stopped struggling and looked at him, Jake turned around and show him his hands, Chris got the message and also turned around, both kids felt each other’s hands and started working on each other knots.

For the next minutes, both kids worked on each other knots trying to loose them, Chris was succeeding when the van stopped.

-We arrived!- announced the driver, both kids looked at each other, they knew that their time was over.

To be continued

Re: Kidnapped

Postby ilikebeingtiedup » Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:42 am

great start :D

Re: Kidnapped

Postby Roger » Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:40 am

Part 2

-So… what do you wanted to tell us Collin? -asked Fred,
-Collin, are you okay?- asked Tom, Collin looked really nervous, like if he was afraid that someone else would listen what he was going to say.

Fred and Collin had been best friends since they were 3 years old (they were neighbors), three years ago Tom moved to the neighborhood and became friend with Collin and Fred, the three guys were like the three musketeers (specially when playing pranks to someone). Tom was the most athletic of the three; he was on the school baseball and soccer team, he was, like his friends, average weight, his white face was covered with freckles, he had short red hair; that afternoon he was wearing a black tank top with jeans shorts white socks and red and white adidas.
Fred was the tallest of the three, he had short brown hair, he was one of the best students of their class (he wasn’t nerd, he was just intelligent) and usually the voice of the reason between his tow friends, that day he was wearing a green t-shirt with grey shorts, black socks and black adidas.
Collin was the shortest of the three; although he was, like his friends, 13 years old, the people thought that he was 10 or 11 (something he hated), he had long blond hair, he was a fanatic of detective stories, when they were younger, he used to solve “crimes” with Fred as a sidekick, but now that they have grown up, cases like “who ate the last slice of pie?” or “who broke Ms. Penyworth’s garden gnome?” sound really childish, nevertheless, he was still interesting on a detective work. That they he was wearing a brown t-shirt, jean shorts, white socks and white adidas.

-Collin?- asked Tom, Collin gave a long breath and started talking.
-I was riding my back near the old farm house (the old farm house was and abandoned place where they used to play when they were kids), when black van stopped in front of it and three guys went out
-Probably they wanted to buy that old place- interrupted Fred
-Let me finish!- said Collin and continue- they opened the trunk of the van and started picking something, I fell that something was wrong so I hide behind some bushes, then I saw the guys pulling out to big bags and took them inside.
-So….?- asked Tom
-So… I came back and called you
-You called us because three mysterious guys threw garbage in and old place?- asked Fred a little exasperated
-It wasn’t garbage! -said Collin- my instinct tells me it was something serious, like stolen objects or a corpse! –he said, his two friends laughed
-So what are you planning to do?- finally asked Fred to an irritated Collin
-Call the police? - Collin asked
-You can’t call them, not especially after the last week incident!- said Tom, Collin turned red, he remember the last week when he heard a scream at the neighbor’s house, when he looked at the window, he saw a guys holding a knife with red spots, he called the police believing someone had murdered the neighbor, when the police arrived, they discover that the scream Collin heard was the old lady who almost slip with a wet spot on the floor, and that the guy Collin saw was her son who was cutting some meat for a barbecue they were going to hold that evening (the red spots were the meat’s blood).
-Well… maybe I won’t call the police, but we have to do something!- said Collin
-I’ll tell you what we are going to do!- said Fred- we are going back to our homes and forget everything!
-But there is something wrong happening there!- protested Collin
-Okay Collin- said Tom- let’s do this, we will go to that place to check it out, if there is something suspicious, we will call the police
They agreed and went to that place.

An hour later they arrived at the old farm house
-Look!- said Collin pointing to the van- they are still here
-Shut up- said Fred- let’s go to investigate
The three kids moved around the house but there was nothing suspicious
You see?- said Fred to Collin
-There’s something wrong, I know it!- said Collin with conviction
-Guys…- said Tom looking at the basement window- you have to see this…
The two friend approached and their hearts stopped, there were two kids tied, gagged and blindfolded lying on a mattress on the floor, a guys was checking the knots
-I told you!- Collin whispered
-Alright- said Fred- you were right, now go and called the police, we will stay here in case something happens
-Okay- said Collin and ran towards his house, Fred and Tom stayed there watching as the two kids struggle against their bonds
-Wait a minute!- said Tom- I know that guy- he pointed to the kid with the baseball cap- he is in the baseball team, I think his name is Jack or Jake
-And the other guys is Chris Halloway, I think- added Fred, both guys saw as the kids form their school struggle against the ropes.
-Wait- said Fred- Collin didn’t tell us that there were 3 guys?
-Yes... so what?- asked Tom
-Where are the other two guys?
-Right here- said a third voice form behind them, both kids turned around and saw to big guys starring at them
-Oh shit!- said Tom before he was grabbed by one of the guys, the guy hold his hands to his back and hand gagged him, then he forced him to walk around the house, to the front door and into the house, they walked through the old halls until they reached the basement
-We found these two kids messing around!- said the guy who was holding Fred, Chris and Jake stopped struggling and tried to identify the two new captives
-Put them with the others!- said the third guy, the guy tried to put a sock on Tom’s mouth, he hold his mouth shut
-Open your mouth!- shouted the guy and give him a lap on his cheek, with tears on his eyes Tom opened his mouth and the sock was stuffed there, then his captor grabbed a roll of duct tape and wrapped it around his head several times, then he grabbed a bunch of ropes and started tying his wrists to his back, then he wrapped the rope around his chest and arms, finally, he tied his ankles and knees together, then he threw him next to Chris and Jake, Fred, also bound and gagged fell next to him.

Both guys struggle but it was useless, they looked at their fellow captives, all covered with sweat, helpless, Fred hanged his head, he knew that their only hope was that Collin manage to call the police before it is to late.
-We should get rid of them- said a captor with a bruise over his cheek
-We won’t kill anyone!- said the leader-it wasn’t the plan
-The plan was that we will kidnap one kid- said the captor with the bruise- now we have four! When are we going to get rid of them, when we have a complete school?
The guys kept arguing as they left the basement, now alone, Tom moved his bound hands towards Jake and removed his blindfold; Fred did the same with Chris, the four guys looked at each other, Fred could see the desperation on Jake and Chris’ eyes, he understood that they were really screw.

A few yards away, Collin sat against a tree shaking; he was running to his house when he heard a noise coming from the old house, when he came back, he saw Fred and Tom being pushed into the house buy the kidnapers; Collin hold his legs trying not to cry, he new that they were captured because of him, he was the one who put them in that situation, then he heard the guys talking about getting rid of them, he knew that it was an hour before he reached his house, 30 minutes before the police arrived, it will be to late by that time, Collin tried to think what would Fred do in that situation, finally he arrived to the only possible solution:
-I will have to rescue them

To be continued
Last edited by Roger on Fri Jan 02, 2009 9:28 am, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Kidnapped

Postby ducttapegirl » Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:11 pm

Awesome can't wait to hear more =D

Re: Kidnapped

Postby Ducttapestar » Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:57 pm

This is Awesome!!! Keep writing. When you're done, PUBLISH THIS!!! You'd make some money.

Re: Kidnapped

Postby Roger » Tue Jan 06, 2009 2:27 pm

Thanks for all the comments... and now...

Part 3

-Well, well, well…- said the guy-what am I going to do with you?
He slapped the young boy’s face, Chris fell to the floor; the guy grabbed him by his arm and forced him to kneel again
-Maybe I should cut off your ear- he said as he approached a knife to Chris’ ear; Chris closed his eyes as he felt the cold metal touching his ear but didn’t do anything
-Aren’t you afraid?- asked the guy, Chris didn’t do anything, of course he was afraid, but he had the determination to not give the guy the joy of watching him afraid
-Then- continued the guy- I will cut your fingers- Chris felt the sharp metal touching his fingers
-And finally…- the guy grabbed the boy’s hair and pulled his head to his back, Chris emitted a soft moaned- this….- said the guy as he put the knife against Chris’ throat, the boy closed his eyes as he fell the metal passing trough his skin, finally, the guy released him, Chris gave a long breath when suddenly, his captor hold him and press his nose, with the tape holding his mouth Chris couldn’t breath, soon he started shocking, his face turned red and then purple, the only thing he could see was the guys face, with that big braise over his cheek.
-Let him alone!- shouted another of the captors as he enter the room, the guy release Chris and he fell to the floor, the other guy approached to him, after checking that he as okay, he talk to the other guy
-Take him to with the others… and don’t hurt him!
Groaning, the guy grabbed Chris’ arm and pulled him through the floor, down the stairs to the basement, he opened the door and threw him to the floor.
-I haven’t finish with you yet!- he shouted before closing the door.

Slowly, Chris raised his eyes, Jake and the other two kids were lying against the wall looking at him with a worried face, without paying attention to them, Chris drag himself to the opposite wall and sat against it, he looked at his knees, finally, he couldn’t stand it anymore and started crying, all the time he had repeated himself that everything was going to end well, but now he wasn’t sure about that, suddenly, he felt someone next to him, he raised his head and saw Jake, sitting next to him, resting his body against him (Jake’s original intention was to hug Chris but since his hands were tied to his back…), Chris smiled at his friend although the tape prevented it to show off, Jake, nevertheless understood the message.

-What can I do?- asked Collin to himself as he walked between the bushes –think Collin, think!- then he had an idea.

After watching what had happened to Chris, Tom knew that they have to escape or wait for the worst, suddenly, the idea popped into his mind, he called Fred’s attention and showed him his bound hands, at first Fred didn’t understand, but finally, he got it, both guys turned so they were back to back and started working on each other’s bonds.

Soon Tom understood that it was going to be more difficult that what he thought, the knots were really tight, even if the managed to get free, they would never untie the other two boys before the kidnappers came back, as those thoughts cross his mind, Tom notice that Jake and Chris were starring at the small window, Tom raised his eyes.
-Collin!- he exclaimed although it only came a soft “mhhggg”, Collin was there, trying to open the window, finally he succeed and slip himself into it, luckily, there was a table under the window were he could stand before jumping to the ground.
-Hi guys!- said Collin as he starred at his bound and gagged friends- wait a second- he said, then he grabbed a chair and put it against the door locking it, finally, he approached to Tom
-Hold there- he told him as he took out his old navy knife, a gift form his uncle that luckily he had decided to take with him that day, soon he cut the ropes from Tom’s hands and arms, Tom pealed the tape form his face and split the sock
-I thought you’ll never come!- he said as Collin cut the rope from his legs
-I’ll never leave you guys!- said Collin, then he moved on with the kid with the baseball cap.
After he cut the rope form the kid’s hands and arms, the kid pealed the tape form his mouth and split an old rag.
-Collin- said Collin introducing himself to the kid
-Jake- he said shyly and both guys shook hands before moving on with the next guy.

-Dude, I can’t believe I had that stuff in my mouth! -said Chris starring at the sock he had just split, Jake smiled to his friend; apparently he had recover his confidence.

-Well- said Collin now that he finished untying Fred- let’s go out of here
Jake was the first one to climb the table and slip through the window; then went Tom and Chris
-After you- Collin told to Fred, he smiled and started climbing the table when they heard voices coming form the other side of the door
-Crap!- said Collin and immediately ran to hold the door- hurry up!- he shouted at Fred
-What’s going on there!- said one of the kidnappers
-The door it’s locked!- said the other one, both guys started pushing it while on the other side Collin and the chair tried to hold it, once Fred had jumped out, Collin run to the table and climbed to the window, his head was now out when he heard the door opening and the chair crashing with the floor
-They are escaping!-shouted one of the captors
-Not this one!- shouted the other, Collin was coming out when suddenly he felt how someone had grabbed his ankle
-Fred!- he shouted as he was being pulled in, Fred ran to his friend, hold his hand and pull it
-Guys, help me right here!- he shouted, soon the rest of the kids joined him and held Collin’s arm, but the kidnappers were to strong
-Pull!- Fred shouted as he put his feet on the sides of the window
-Its useless- said Collin- you have to let me go and call the police!
-I won’t leave you!
-You have to do it!- shouted Collin, then he slipped his hand and was immediately pulled into the house
-Collin!- Fred shouted and ran to the window but was intercepted by Tom
-It’s to late!- he said- we have to go!
-No without Collin!- Fred shouted, Tom grabbed him, he tired to push him away but Tom was stronger, with a little help form Chris and Jake they managed to pull Fred into the forest.

-Why did you do that!- shouted Fred as he pushed Tom against a tree- I could have save Collin – he attempted to hit Tom but he evade his fist
-No you couldn’t!- Tom said –they would have also capture you!
Fred tried to kick Tom but he moved to one side, defeated, Fred fell on his knees and vented his anger hitting the ground, finally he calmed down

-It was my fault!- Fred said- I should have believe him when he said that there was something strange in that house!
-It wasn’t your fault- said Chris trying to calm him
-Shut up!- said Fred- you were busy getting kidnapped!
-He is just trying to help you!- said Tom, soon the three guys were arguing.

On one side, Jake was observing everything, he had remained quiet during all the argument, finally he spoke.
-Guys…- he said but they didn’t listen him- Guys!...GUYS!- he finally shouted, the three guys turned around, Jake gave a deep breath and talk
-If we want to free Collin we need help!- he said
-What do you propose?- asked Fred
-Who’s the fastest here?- asked Jake
-I think it’s me- said Tom shyly
-Well, then ran and call the police!
-It would take me an hour
-That’s why you are the fastest, you’ll have to run!
-Alright, I’ll do it- then Tom turned around and ran through the bushes
-And what are we going to do?- asked Chris once Tom had disappeared
Jake looked at both guys
-We’ll have to make time ‘till the police arrive…

To be continue…
The last part soon

Re: Kidnapped

Postby Ducttapestar » Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:08 am

KEEP GOING!!! KEEP GOING!!! this is AWESOME!!! I feel like I'm watching 24 here! not even kidding.

Re: Kidnapped

Postby Roger » Fri Jan 09, 2009 3:34 pm

Thanks everyone for their coments through this "short" story, and now....

Part 4 (last part)

-I told you we have to get rid of them!- shouted the guy to his partner- now the only thing we have is this kid!- he said pointing to the boy on the corner; he was sitting on a chair, his hands were tightly tied to his back, his ankles were tied to the legs of the chair, his chest was securely tied to the back of the chair, he was also cleave gagged and blindfolded.
-We will discuss that later!- said the other guy- now we have to go before the police arrives! Maybe we could use him as a hostage!

Collin moved his torso trying to get more comfortable, he had lost any hopes of getting free long ago.
-Ouch!- he said (although only came a “mgghhh”) as the ropes pressed against his ribs, they still hurt him after the guys kicked him there when they capture him, he thought that they were broken but now he was pretty sure the it was just a bruise, nevertheless they were still hurting him
-Well, at least they haven’t killed me…yet- thought Collin with nervousness as he heard his captors arguing about his fate.

-So… do you now why you were kidnapped?- asked Fred, Chris and Jake gave him serious looks- I just wanted to now- said Fred apologizing, Chris and Jake looked at each other and started making a recompilation of the events
-…and then we heard the guys entering with you and Tom- finished Chris, Fred looked at him amazed
-Oh… sorry for yelling you earlier… I just didn’t know you tried to save Jake- said Fred
-Don’t worry; I will feel the same if Jake was the one captured buy the guys- said Chris as he put his arm over Jake’s shoulder, the three of them smiled.

-Well guys- finally said Jake looking at his watch- it have been 20 minutes since Tom left, it’s time to act!

Collin looked at the guys who ere putting the stuffs frenetically on the van, after some struggle he had managed to take off his blindfold, the guys were to busy to take care of it.
-Hurry up!- shouted one of them- and prepare the kid to travel!
Collin looked around trying to make time, he new that once he was in the van all, he would never be able to escape, suddenly he looked at the window, Jake was there making funny faces.
-What is he doing?- thought Collin, suddenly, one of the guys saw him
-Hey, there is the kid!- he shouted, the boss send the other two guys to grab him while he looked at Collin, the two guys left the house leaving Collin and the guy alone
-What is your friend planning to do?-asked the guy to Collin
-That’s exactly what I want to now- thought Collin, suddenly, they heard someone knocking the door
-I have the kid boss!- shouted Fred with an obviously fake voice, Collin hanged his head in frustration
-I’m doom!- he thought, the boss laughed, hold a knife, and approached to the door, but as soon as he rolled the door handle, Chris and Fred kick the door with all their weight, taken off his guard the guy fell to the floor, the kids didn’t lost time while Fred grabbed the knife, Chris kicked the guy on one side
-Quick, take him to the…- shouted Fred but the guy recover himself and jump towards him, suddenly he stooped and moved backwards, his eyes wide opened, although it took just a split of second, it seemed an eternity for the four of them, finally the guy gave a long cry as he fell to the floor with his hand covered with blood holding his side, in front of him, Fred stood with his eyes wide opened holding the bloody knife, Chris ran towards the guy and notice hit him in the face knocking him unconscious.
-I killed a guy- said Fred in shock
-He’s not dead!- said Chris after checking the wound- it’s just a cut!
But Fred didn’t listen to him, he release the knife
-I killed a guy
-Fred we have to move on!- shouted Chris but Fred didn’t listen to him, finally Chris slapped Fred face, that brought him back to reality
-Thank you- he muttered; then both guys locked the unconscious guy on a closet and rushed to free Collin.

Meanwhile, Jake had taken a considerable advantage over the guys; finally he reached a small river
-This must be the place Fred told me- he said, it was a small river were the water reached him to his waist; still gasping, he took of his cap and threw it to the other side of the river, then he took off his shirt, put it on a stick and put the stick between a pair of river stones
-This way!- one of the guys shouted, Jake turned around and hid between some bushes; if every went according to the plan, the guys will believe that he lost his shirt trying to cross the river, then, in the rush his lost also his cap, so they would cross the river and continue running after him, meanwhile he would returned to the house were Fred and Chris should have already overpower the third guy and free Collin, then the four of them will hide until he police arrives

-Look!- said one of the guys when they reached the river- he cross the river!
-Let him go… let’s returned to the house!-said the other
-What?- whispered Jake between the bushes- you have to come after me idiots!- then he saw a small stone near his foot
-I will regret this- he thought and threw the stone to one of the guys
-Look! There he is!- the guys started running after Jake, he turned around and started running when suddenly, he tripped over a root and fell to the floor
-Fuck!- he shouted, he stood up and tried to run but one of the guys held him by his t-shirt’s neck
-You’re not going anywhere!- he said, Jake looked around trying to find something to escape, finally he raised his arms and jumped to the floor, his t-shirt went off and he was free, in the confusion he started running again pursued by the guys.

-Finally!-said Tom as he reached Collin’s house (the closest to the old house), it’s was getting dark by now, he knocked the back door but on one answered, he move to the front door and found Collin’s parents car missing
-They have to choose this day to go out?- he shouted frustrated, he looked around searching for a neighbor but all the house have their cars gone and their lights off.
-Why everyone on this town have to go out on a Saturday night?- he shouted frustrated, he knew there were another 15 minutes from there to his house, he looked around searching for a neighbor, or police patrol but the street was empty, suddenly, he saw the front window of Collin’s house opened, he looked around, this would led him to trouble but he knew that it was his only chance, Collin’s parents would understand, he approached to the house and put his body inside the window, he raised his leg and passed through the hole, he was going to pass the other leg when he was blinded by a flash.
-Stay were you are and raise your hands!- shouted a voice
- Great!- thought Tom as he raised his hands, the police officers went off the car and approached to him
-Do you live here son?- asked the older one
-No butt…
-Do you now that it’s illegal to break into someone’s house?
-Yes but….
-We will have to call your parents!- said the officer as he cuffed Tom’s hands to his back
-Alright, but my friends have been kidnapped! I was going to call 911!
-Yeah…- said the other officer, then turned to his partner- its amazing what this kids invent of get rid of the punishment
-I’m not lying!- shouted Tom as they forced him into the car
-Yeah... tell it to the judge!- said the driver
Tom lay on the sit exasperated and rolled his eyes; then he looked at the officers
-Alright, let’s go to the place were my friends are being held, if I’m lying you can lock me forever!
-What do you thin Bob?- asked one officer to his partner
-What? Do you think I will have a gang waiting for you there?- shouted Tom

After some struggling, Chris and Fred managed to free Collin, he stretched his arms and raised his t-shirt revealing a purple mark on his side.
-Are you okay?- asked Chris, Collin make a painful face and pull his t-shirt down
-Yeah…it’s not that bad as it seems- then he looked at Fred, he was still shocked, Collin approached to him and put his arm around his friend’s shoulders- what about you?- asked Collin
-For a moment I thought I have killed him- said Fred, by now the guy had already woke up and was angrily hitting the closet’s door
-It’s okay… it was self defense- said Collin trying to clam down his friend
-That’s not the problem- said Fred- It’s just that…
-Listen- interrupted him Collin- I saw you, I don’t think if I would have been able to do that myself, but I now you since we were children, and I can tell that you felt sorry for that man, you’re not the kind of guy who would coldly kill someone.
-Thank you- said Fred smiling at Collin
-Guys… I don’t want to spoil this precious moment but it’s getting dark and we have to get out off here and meet Jake- said Chris, the three guys ran outside
-Where is Jake?- asked Collin
-I don’t know- said Chris- he was supposed to meet us here
-Do you think they got him?- asked Fred, suddenly they heard some noises from behind, they turned around and found the two guys coming out form the forest, one of them was holding Jake, his hands were bound to his back and he was gagged with his own t-shirt
-Well, well, well- said one of the guys- what we have here?
-To the floor now!- yelled the one who was holding Jake- or your friend dies!- he said while pressing his knife over Jake’s neck
-“Ghun”!- shouted Jake through his gag, but the kids weren’t going to leave him alone, slowly, the three of them lay on the floor with their hands on their head
-Tie them up!- said the guy to his partner, the other guy approached to them with a bunch of ropes when suddenly they were interrupted by the sound of sirens, soon a police patrol was in front of them
-Don’t move!- shouted one officer pointing his gun to them while his partner called for reinforcements, Chris and the others stood up and ran towards the officers
-Tom!- shouted Collin as they saw their friend coming out of the patrol
Meanwhile, the kidnappers were nervously looking around
-Release the boy!- shouted the cop
-No!- finally said the guy holding Jake- make a movement I the kid will die, now move backward!
The cops did as he said, seeing their chance to escape, they started moving towards the van
-If you try to follow us… the kid will pay!- said the guy as his partner jumped on the van, slowly, the guy jump on the back of the van and then proceed to pull Jake into the van, Jake new that once the doors were shouted he will everything would be lost

-Jake!- shouted Chris and attempted to run towards him but Tom and Collin held him, Jake new he had only one chance, if he failed, they would took him away or worst…, he closed his eyes to prepare mentally for the moment, finally he gave a long breath…

-Ahggg!- shouted the guy as Jake kick him on his crotch, he attempted to stab the kid with the knife but Jake jump out of off the van just in time to evade the blade for a few inches, without thinking it two times, the cops shoot at the van’s wheels as Jake ran towards them
-Are you alright?- asked Chris to Jake after taking off the gag while Fred untied his hands
-Yeah- said Jake gasping, the kidnappers attempted to run but were intercepted by a bunch of patrols
-By the way- Collin said to one of the officers- there’s a third guy locked inside the house!

The officers stared impressed at the boys as his partner ran into the house.

-I beat you again!- said Chris to Jake as they walked down the street
-I really hate basket!- said Jake
-Come on! We nearly defeat them this time!- said Tom comforting Jake
-In your dreams!- said Collin smiling, the five kids laughed.

I had been a month after the kidnapping, after they were “rescued” by the police (Tom never stopped saying that they were planning to lock him in jail), they were sent to a hospital, after some tests, their worried parents were told that, except for a few bruises, they were okay; the next weeks they were the great celebrities at school, the five of them enjoyed telling their audience about how Chris attacked the guys when he saw Jake was being kidnapped, how Fred stabbed one of the kidnappers, how Collin alone rescued his friends, how Tom broke into a house and was nearly arrested and how Jake managed to escape form his kidnapper after kicking him in the balls.

The 5 of them had remained close friend after the events (“there’s nothing like a kidnapping to create a friendship!” said Tom joking one time).

-The only thing that I hate about this is having to go to that dam psychologist once a week!- said Fred, everyone agree.

Finally they reached Chris house, he said goodbye to his friends and walked through his front yard until he reached the door, he introduced his hand in his pocket and took out the key, then he turned around and saw their friends walking away, there was no van at the sight, Chris smiled and opened the door.

The End

Re: Kidnapped

Postby Ducttapestar » Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:44 am

That's one of the best stories I've read. Well written and easy to follow. But intense and a little funny. You, Roger, are a genius. VERY good!

Re: Kidnapped

Postby Roger » Wed Jan 14, 2009 12:15 pm

Thanks everyone for their comments...
Now, I was thinking on making some kind of sequel to this story (I mean, this characters have potential!), well, I'm not sure (there have been autors who have made great works but ruined it when they tried to make a sequel), so I will asked you, should I write a sequel, or it will be too much? Leave a comment...

Re: Kidnapped

Postby Aaron » Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:26 am

Wow! I love that sotry!

I think you should post a sequel!