Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby timeisafactor » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:05 pm

"Why? Why do you make me do these things? Sed molly willingston as she tightened the red ball gag in her daughter lilly's mouth. "You know i only do this cos i love you
"Mmph mmph mmph" grunted lilly as she tried unsuccessfuly to loosen the rope binding her wrists tto the armrests on the wooden chair she was tied to.
She could not for the life of her understand why her mum had done this to her, she had done nothing wrong.
She had washed her long brown hair every night.
She had laid her school uniform out each night which consisted of a plaid skirt, navy blue tights, school shoes and a white shirt and a black cardigan.
She walked home that day with jason which was the only thing different and he had held her hand until they got to her door.
"Would you like to know why you are tied up like this?"
"Mmmhhhm" lily sed loudly and shaking her head up and down very fast.
"I saw you holding that boys hand! What else did you do with him?"
She took out her daughters ballgag so she could answer
"Nothing mummy were just fri-mmmmppphs" she was cut off when her mother forced the gag back into her mouth
"Dont you dare lie to me child you are only 14 years old and you are allready being inapropriate with boys!...now its time for your punishments"
Ill continue based on the feedback i get :)
Lewis :P

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby SelenaGfan » Sat Jun 09, 2012 2:21 am

So far I like this story.I think you mean "Said"instead of sed but that was the only error I saw.
Strict mom if she ties her daughter for holding hands,must be Catholic & maybe Irish.

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby timeisafactor » Sat Jun 09, 2012 2:36 am

Its just cos i was typing in a hurry but ill have more time later and shall write more then k?
Lewis :P

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby three time's a duct taping » Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:26 pm

Vivianfan, that's such a horrible generalisation! How DARE you!

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby SelenaGfan » Sat Jun 09, 2012 1:31 pm

Easy I had an Irsih Catholic mother and grandmother.I also had an uncle a priest and anytime
my mother found my magazines she thraetened to tel him,so I speak from experience.
Who are you to question me?

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby Jay Candice » Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:37 am

No offense, but this isn't really the place for an argument.

By the way, timeisafactor, I think it's a pretty good story. But please don't write only because of feedback. We write for fun here, for ourselves and for others. You know that everyone wants you to continue :big:
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Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby timeisafactor » Sun Jun 10, 2012 2:04 am

Ok sorry first story kinda excited and u can call me Lewis Ross
"Ok as punishment for cohoarting with that ruffian ill have your favourite shoes in the oven please"
And with that she took the shoes her daughter was wearing even at the many mmphs of protest she then took them and put them in the oven. She then went to a drawer and yook out a glove which bore resemblance to the glove freddy kruger wore but with short plastic nails as opposed to long metallic ones.
"Are you going to co-operate or do i have to use the screaming glove on you?
"Mmmmphhing mmmmpphove?" She said through the gag tilting her head in confusion
More later lol i have to go to choir lol

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby Suestruggles » Sun Jun 10, 2012 2:52 am

mmm screaming glove sounds good. Erm is she wearign socks now?
Sue

Fit to be tied, wants to struggle.

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby timeisafactor » Sun Jun 10, 2012 6:23 am

No but i have plans for her to be doing so im going to write part 3/4 in bout 3 hours

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby bookl0ver » Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:38 am

shoes in the oven? what mum is that stupid? then she has to shell oiut for new ones. this is a good story tho
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Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby timeisafactor » Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:15 am

Ok....
"Thats right you heard correctly" she said putting on the glove snd tightening the straps.
"But," she said walking behind her daughter to open her sock drawer..."because i am kind i shall let you wear socks over your tights so you wont feel the full wrath of the glove.
"Mmm..mmm..mm! Mother" she tounged the ball out of her mouth. "Why are you doing this? I did nothing wrong he is just my...friend"
"BLASPHEMY YOU HESITATED!" She screamed grabbing a tube sock
"No Mother please i didnt mean to hesitate what i meant to say was-MMMMPPPHHH"
She stuffed the tube sock in her poor daughters mouth then taking duct tape which she tightly wound around her head 6 times
She then took a pair of socks and put them on her daughters allready tight clad feet. She got the glove
"This stops when the lies do"
With that she dragged the claws along the bottom of her poor daughters feet "MMMMMMMPPPPPPPPPHHHHHH! MMMMMMPPPPPHHHH!"
This went on for about 20 minutes or so
"Nod if you are lying"
.........mmmppphh she shook her head
"Harlet!" She then went back to the drawer and took some black tights which she wound around Lillys head
"Your second punishment begins" she said grabbing the duct tape

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby bound-black-girl lover » Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:23 am

timeisafactor wrote:"Why? Why do you make me do these things? Sed molly willingston as she tightened the red ball gag in her daughter lilly's mouth. "You know i only do this cos i love you
"Mmph mmph mmph" grunted lilly as she tried unsuccessfuly to loosen the rope binding her wrists tto the armrests on the wooden chair she was tied to.
She could not for the life of her understand why her mum had done this to her, she had done nothing wrong.
She had washed her long brown hair every night.
She had laid her school uniform out each night which consisted of a plaid skirt, navy blue tights, school shoes and a white shirt and a black cardigan.
She walked home that day with jason which was the only thing different and he had held her hand until they got to her door.
"Would you like to know why you are tied up like this?"
"Mmmhhhm" lily sed loudly and shaking her head up and down very fast.
"I saw you holding that boys hand! What else did you do with him?"
She took out her daughters ballgag so she could answer
"Nothing mummy were just fri-mmmmppphs" she was cut off when her mother forced the gag back into her mouth
"Dont you dare lie to me child you are only 14 years old and you are allready being inapropriate with boys!...now its time for your punishments"
Ill continue based on the feedback i get :)
Lewis :P



Too bad she WASN'T restrained in her Catholic school uniform!

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby timeisafactor » Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:27 am

She is her catholic school uniform this story is an exagerated version of what my mum once did to my sister

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby Plueschbabycd » Mon Jun 11, 2012 2:33 am

Hallo, like the story very much. But normal shoe in oven ? I would understand it bed shoe with cherry pit feel were. The are no steal shoes like the one out of Snow White for witch. :) I can`t wait to read more
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby bookl0ver » Wed Jun 13, 2012 9:00 am

this is one unreasonable mum
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Re: Dont hold a boy's hand (F/F)

Postby Plueschbabycd » Wed Jun 13, 2012 9:32 am

I would not call "unreasonable" more conservative and strict in her view. But this not mean that I agree with her view. One the hand I can accept on certain level her view. I like the pope he have his credo, can say that not you. But he have right to have this credo. I would never bashing him for his credo.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show