Postby Boundgal08 » Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:33 pm
For a first time writer, your story was pretty good, but try to use paragraphs in future stories you write, makes it a lot easier to read, and not just a chunk of writing, many people wont read it if it is like that, jus thought id let you know.
BOUNDGIRL!
Probably the kinkiest woman you will ever meet!
I am a switch, I like to put a man in ropes and also have a man put me in ropes!
I am the 'Queen of bondage'