## First Story (F/M)

Post by copper0155 » Tue May 27, 2014 3:52 pm

Hello! I'm new here to the TUGS site (as a writer. I've been reading for a good half a year) and I wanted to write a somewhat true but fictional story. The fictional part being more intense tie ups. Anyway, the story I'm about to write is about my cousins (both female) tying me up. I'll give my cousins fake names for protection. The younger cousin, is 13 years old..same as the older one. I'm older than both of them by a couple months. Anyways,
I'm going to start the story now (NOTE; I'm typing this on an iPhone so if there are any spelling mistakes...my apologies..
Chapter 1: The Party
The whole party was boring as any other cookout would be in my family...my two female cousins were on their phones and the older male cousins were playing corn-hole. Before I came to the party, I thought I could get my cousins to tie me up somehow, but didn't want to [i]ask[i] them. The whole "Tie-Up" thing seemed strange to ask of them...so I just sat and ate my hamburger. Pieces of the burger getting caught in my braces as I chewed. Eventually, I was bored enough to go inside (forgot to mention this was my younger cousins "Abi" house)
So I sat inside and layer on the couch....and dozed off. I awoke to a cold hand clamped over my mouth and a lid of pressure on my chest. I saw it was my older cousin Maria sitting on my chest with both her hands over my mouth!
"Mmpft?" I said threw her hand. Still confused by the situation. I looked to my right for some reason and saw Abi in my phone looking threw my search history!
"Shit!" I thought. "I forgot to clear my search history! I was on the TUGS website right before I came to the party! Now she was looking through it! Oh man!
"I know what your thinking" Abi said. "We knew you were hiding something from us, so we decided to find out for ourselves!"
"Whmpf?!" I asked threw my handgag.
"We know you like it when people tie you up!"said Maria. "Now we are going to the you up and tickle you the rest of the one you'll be here!"
With that, Abi and Maria picked me up and carried me up to Abi's room.

### Re: First Story (F/M)

Post by Jason Toddman » Tue May 27, 2014 8:32 pm

Except for your cousins being girls, I am getting a strong feeling of deja vu reading this chapter.
Other than a few spelling errors, so far so good.
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### Re: First Story (F/M)

Post by xtc » Wed May 28, 2014 1:59 am

Yes, a good, lively style but may I recommend typing the story in, say, "word" so that you can correct it when you find the little glitches?
I must, however sympathise; it's a real bugger of a job finding one's own typos!
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### Re: First Story (F/M)

Post by Wyatt9999 » Wed May 28, 2014 5:06 am

hehe good there's a lot of detail here.