Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby Rocero648 » Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:41 am

Hi all.

I thought it would be neat to put our creative talents to the test and see who could write the most compelling story.

If this goes well, I'm thinking we can do this every week with a new topic and theme.

I thought I'd start us off with a simple yet seldom-explored theme:

Young male (teenager to young adult)/older male (any age)

Captor = Older male
Captive = Younger male

Rules

1. Captive is being held against his will - either through force, coercion, or blackmail
2. Captive cannot be physically harmed - no heavy beating, cutting, or anything like that. Spanking and slapping is okay.
3. Captive cannot be penetrated or raped. Teasing, light touching, and tickling is fine. Anything is fine as long as captive is not anally raped or forced into oral sex.
4. Captive cannot be killed. No hardcore violence of any kind. Seriously, a slap across the face or a crop-whip to the balls is about as bad as it should get here.
5. Captive can't suffer in any serious way. He can be humiliated, teased, and used, but he can't be subjected to anything truly horrifying or traumatic. For example: captive can't be starved for days

- Post your story in the topic titled "STORY CONTEST" under fictional TuGs (which I'm about to make)
- The winner shall be decided one week from now by a poll
- Stories should be rated by quality of writing as well as originality
- Post COMPLETE stories. Don't post your story in separate chapters or episodes, post the whole thing at once or don't post it at all

Other than that, sky's the limit. Get to writing!

Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby Nuclearo » Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:13 pm

What's the prize for the winner?
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Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby Rocero648 » Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:17 pm

I haven't thought that through yet.

Aside from board-wide recognition and awe.... maybe they get to pick the next theme and ruleset?

Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby Nuclearo » Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:42 pm

Ooh, an iterative contest! Nice! I hope it catches on. Might bring a nice bit of stories. I might join the next round, I'm a bit swamped atm.

I do think that 1 week is a bit short for a deadline. 2 would be best, depending on how long you want the stories to be, but it's your ruleset so :P
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Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby Viper7 » Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:12 pm

I'll just cross post one of my stories over here since it fits each of those requirements perfectly! :D

The College Captive




My name is Derek. I’m a 20 year old college student at Arizona State University. I am part of a fraternity there called Alpha Sigma Pi. Recently Alpha Sigma Pi had become very competitive with the other fraternities at ASU, and had begun to regularly engage in “acts of war” with the other frat houses in the area, all in good fun of course. Recently, we’ve been in a friendly rivalry with a neighboring frat called Beta Gamma Nu. Our members would often loudly heckle their members if we happened to cross paths with each other.

Our frats now had created a fierce desire to show our dominance over the other. One night we planned our first act of war. We had snuck into their territory while they were away and prepared to leave our mark. My friend Michael had led the group and gave the instructions. “Lets show those bastards who we are. All that booze they’ve been holding is going right into their pool” he said. We did just that and even left our mark by painting the giant greek letters “Alpha Sigma Pi” on their living room wall. We went home that night, convinced that we had made our point and established ourselves as the dominant men. However, after the events I’m telling about took place, we became the ones with a humble attitude…

The following weekend, we were hanging out at the Alpha Sigma Pi house with loud music blaring. We had a keg ready and were preparing to invite some cute sorority members over. Me and my friends Dave and Michael were standing around with our cans shooting the breeze. They were both fairly skinny but well built. I told them I had to excuse myself for a while to go use the restroom. When I came back, I found only Michael standing there. “Hey where’s Dave?” I asked him, to which he just shrugged and said “Dunno, he went to go check something in his room I guess”. Time passed, I stood around chatting with others there when soon, Michael was gone as well and I noticed the amount of people there was shrinking pretty quickly. Curious, I went upstairs to go see what everyone was up to. I had figured they had gone up to set up the bedrooms as well or something. After all, anything could happen at one of these things.

Suspiciously though, when I got to the upstairs bedroom door, I heard rustling coming from inside the room. I opened the door but couldn’t see anything with the lights off. I could hear slight grunting from the other side. I entered in, flipped the lights on and let out a laugh at what I saw. Along the back wall were the people who went missing, Dave and Michael included, all flat on their stomachs side by side stripped down to their undershirts and boxers. They were all tightly hogtied and gagged with heavy duty adhesive tape. I laughed hysterically as they tried to speak but were limited to just a few “mmmph”s. They were struggling but they were tied so tightly it didn’t look like they were moving at all.

I then heard the door open behind me as I quickly stood up and turned around. There in the doorway I saw Dylan, James, and Chad. Each of them were rather tall and had the bodies of athletes. They were also from Beta Gamma Nu, the fraternity we had pranked the week before. A cold rush flowed through me as I knew that I was in trouble. “Well, looks like more prey just walked in” James said with an evil smirk. I backed away from them slowly, not really able to move. Suddenly without thinking, I bolted toward the door, hoping to get past them. I failed miserably though, as before I new what was going on, I felt a bunch of hands pushing and pulling me back, preventing me from leaving. Dylan, who was now behind me wrapped his arm around my waist and thrust his weight on me, tackling me to the ground on my stomach. I quickly cried out, trying to get somebody downstairs’ attention. “Somebody, hel-“. I had not even gotten my mouth halfway open and I was silenced, as I felt Dylan’s hand quickly clasp over my mouth. I tried as hard as I could to yell but nothing came out, only a very faint “mmmph” that no one had a chance of hearing. I struggled but I could not move, as Dylan was much stronger than I was. I wriggled around, trapped in his firm handgag. “Shh-shh-shh-shhh” he whispered. “You’re not going anywhere. You’re all ours now.” I struggled more fiercely than ever but got nowhere, eventually using up all my energy. The entire time he just held me in place and occasionally went “sshhhh” to try and get me to calm down. Eventually I did and stopped fighting.

Keeping me quiet, he said into my ear “It’s revenge time. We’re gonna show you that whether you like it or not, you guys are at our mercy.” He then quickly got off of me and flipped me over on my back and pinned my arms to the sides by armlocking me under each of my armpits. I was pretty much subdued and not about to yell, but even so Chad kneeled down, whirled one hand around the back of my neck and held my jaw closed with his hand under my chin, while handgagging me with the other. “Sorry Derek, you’re a good kid but we gotta treat you like the others here. When we’re done, you’re gonna look just like your silent buddies over there.” With that, James undid my jeans and slid them down. Unfortunatly for me, I’m probably the only guy in our frat who wears briefs which gathered some chuckles from them. “Well well, a tighty whities man…” he said. Playfully, he reached down, tugged on the side of my waistband and let it snap back in place, causing me in anger to make a muffled grunt. He then grabbed some rope from the corner of the room tied my legs together in several constraining knots.

Dylan then released his armlock and quickly whipped my shirt off and over my head, leaving my under shirt on. He then grabbed my wrists, and forced them behind my back as James came over and tied them as well. James came over with a large pad of cloth that looked like a gauss of some kind, and a roll of duct tape. I felt an adrenaline rush at the sight of it. “Now, to keep you nice and quiet, we’re gonna gag you. If you be good and don’t struggle, we wont have to give you titty twisters like we did with the others. Understood?” I nodded, prompting Chad to unhandgag me. I obediently let James put the gauss in my mouth without a fight and he began to rip off a strip of tape. Interestingly enough, Chad put his hand back over my mouth while James did this even though I agreed to stay hushed. I guess he just liked handgagging me or something. Two strips of duct tape were placed firmly over my lips, effectively shutting me up. At this point, all three of them then picked me up and set me on my stomach next to the others who were tied. They forced my hands and feet to touch above my back and tied them together very tightly in a hogtie. I struggled, but could not budge an inch. I was their captive, helpless.

They stood there, looking at all 7 of us lined up and captured. They just smiled and observed their handy work for a while. I saw one of them then pull out a Sharpie and walk torward me. He began to write something on my gagged mouth (which I later found out were the greek letters for “Beta Gamma Nu”) and proceeded to do the same for the others. Everything went dark as we were each blindfolded and the clicking of their camera phones could be heard…

Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby Boundgal08 » Thu Apr 08, 2010 2:44 am

Hmmm... interesting to come up with this! :) I may try it out, but then again I have so many stories on the go, and so much to do, I may join another one in the near future :)

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Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby OverLooker » Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:12 pm

School Day Gone Wrong

It was a normal school day for Peter(15) who was walking home from a long day of work. The bright sun beat down on him and his sweat was being soaked up by his bright red shirt and gray cargo pants. He was about half way home when He spoted a sketchy looking black van parked on the side of the street with the doors wide open. Peter walked over and looked inside the van to see pictures of other boys he didnt know bound and gagged in all different ways and forms.
"Like my work?" a voice said from behind Peter.
Pete turned around just in time for the older man to stuff a cloth into the teen's mouth and push him into the van. The van doors shut behind them and it got very dark. Peter tried to spit out the rag but before he could do anything tape was being put over his lips and his hands were being cuffed to a pole above his head.
"Now now my boy no need to be frisky" the man said as he cuffed Pete's feet.
Peter struggled but there was no way he was going to break out of chains. The man got into the drivers seat and took of as Peter screamed for help through the rag stuffed in his mouth and the tape sealing it in.
"Mphhhhhhh!" he shouted but no help was coming even if people did hear him they wouldnt know where it was coming from.
They drove for what felt like hours untill they arived at a house. The van was parked in the garage and Peter was carried from the van to the house. Pete was finally able to see his kidnapper who was a 20 year old man with brown hair, green eyes, and attractive for a man.
"Kid you do what I say and nothing bad will happen got it kid?" the man said with a grin.
THE END?
"Mmmmppphhhhhhh"

Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby fratboydanny » Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:58 am

Viper, i really enjoyed your story...brought back some memories...but, ones not appropriate for this board.

Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby xtc » Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:21 am

Like the idea but can't join in at the minute unless it could be a two week deadline.

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Re: Let's do a story contest! - Best "unwilling" m/m

Postby Jason Toddman » Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:24 pm

xtc wrote:Like the idea but can't join in at the minute unless it could be a two week deadline.

Wassail!
xtc

I kind of think that ship has sailed, xtc; note the date of the original post. There's never been any follow up so I guess this whole topic simply up and died. The poster himself hasn't even visited this site in months according to his profile.
I might've liked to have posted a story here myself except that I much prefer the reverse situation myself - older captive younger captor as I always root for the underdog.
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