kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Sat May 08, 2010 9:37 am

At my College there had always been a tutor named allison, she was always an odd woman, she drove to the college in a van all the time and always wore footless tights without caring about the weather.

i was 16 when my encounter with her occured, it was in the afternoon, my parents had left me to look after the house and go to college on my own, a fact i'd made no secret of, which made me an easy target for her.

i was alone with her at the end of a lesson, i was always the last one to pack up, this was at the end of the day
"why don't i give you a lift home" allison asked me
i said no, i'd prefer to walk home, i should have looked behind me at that point as she had pulled a cloth out of her jacket pocket and was pouring something into it.
"i didnt say you had a choice dear" allison said, clamping the cloth over my mouth and nose firmly
the smell hit me, it was very pungent, i instinctivley gasped and breathed a huge lungfull in, i started to feel drowsy, i was also shocked, allison was much stronger than she appeared, she forced me down on the ground as she chloroformed me.
"shhh shh, thats right baby, breathe it all up and go to sleep"
these were the last words i heard before everything went dark as i passed out.

when i awoke, the first thing i noticed was the ballgag tied around the back of my head with the ball firmly in my mouth preventing me from speaking, a nylon rope was tied around my body completely with me tied to a cellar beam, my legs were stretched out in front of my, i was barefoot with my feet and toes tied together,
allison was watching me, a feather in her hands
"now dear, now i get to have some fun"
i gulped, i had always been ticklish, one thing was for sure
this wouldnt be fun for me!

to be continued......?
(this is only my first attempt at a bondage story, so any helpful comments would be appreciated, i do intend to write more in this if you all wish for me too and i am open to suggestions as to how this story will turn out)
:tickle:

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby Jason Toddman » Sat May 08, 2010 2:23 pm

The story is about someone who went to College at 16? Yet he needs a tutor? And he's not bright enough to avoid being kidnapped by one woman? :twisted:
Other than that nit picky little detail (don't mind me, I'm an asshole :spank; ), you're off to a fine start. Let's see more.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Sat May 08, 2010 2:40 pm

nitpickings good, it helps make you better
and thanks for the compliment

but in england you can go to college at 16, but its not the american equivalent i dont think
and teachers at college are called tutors.

dont worry, there will me more

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chloroformmeplease » Sat May 08, 2010 8:57 pm

I love stories like this. This kind of story is why I became a member here. Just one simple note but it is not directed at your story rather directed at facts even though it is a fictional story. When writing fictional stories it is good to inculde real facts so having said that chloroform has no smell to it. You are not the first to include "the smell of chloroform" in your story.

I say this to encourage you not to discourage you. I do see a future for you in writing fictional stories such as this. You have my thumbs up for sure. Excellent start,please keep going.

BTW I knew from reading your story that it took place in England because of being 16 and going to college and the tutor.

I hope when I get home tomorrow there will be another chapter here. I am looking forward to reading more of your story.
Last edited by chloroformmeplease on Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:28 am, edited 1 time in total.
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Sun May 09, 2010 2:09 am

allison strode over to me and gently brushed the feather against the bottoms of my exposed soles
i giggled lightly but through the gag it came out muffled
"mmmphh mmphh"
she grinned an evil smile at me as she increased the speed at which she tickled me,
i writhed and struggled against the ropes that held me, laughing into the gag uncontrollably, i flexed my toes and curled them in to distract myself from the relentless tickling i was facing, unfortunately this had the bad effect of making allison take more notice of my toes
"so, your more ticklish here are you boy?" she asked moving the feather to my toes tickling underneath them all and in between each one
this was driving me mad, i'd barely breathed at all since she started tickling me and i was on the verge of passing out again when she stopped, she unfastened the ball gag and removed it from my mouth to allow me to breathe more easily.
"that was just a taster dear, when i'm done with you, you wont even remember what it felt like to be comfortable"
this drew to mind all sorts of things in my head, that she could do to me, none of them were very pleasant
"you crazy freak! you think you're going to get away with this!" i screamed at her angrily
she responded by backhanding me across the face, it stang and made a loud smacking noise in the otherwhise quiet cellar
"you will speak only when i say that you can!" allison said, the expression on her face dangerous
"I'll speak when i want to you nutjob!" i screamed, my face stinging, but i was unwilling to let the woman tell me what to do
in response allison raised the feather
"you want some more of this? or maybe i should bring in the big guns"
at this, two more women came down from the steps of the cellar, they were both brandishing paddles and smiling in a sinister way
i could only wonder what they were to be used for
Last edited by chlorodguy on Mon May 10, 2010 6:34 am, edited 1 time in total.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby Jason Toddman » Sun May 09, 2010 6:54 am

Once again I expose my ignorance by talking too much too soon. Sorry about that. As I quoted in a different post recently(British Governement in Jump In The Fire), Americans and British are one people separated by a common language. :lol: Yes, college and tutors mean different things here than there - which I should have checked before I asked even though I already knew this was taking place in Europe somewhere rather than the US. It's not the first nor likely the last time I stick my foot in my mouth. :gag:
Anyway, good story so far. Maybe a bit rushed, but that's more style preference than anything to do with skill. Let' see more.
And he REALLY can't figure out what those paddles are for? :spank; Or is he just in denial? :tied: :big: :mouthopen: :twisted:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chloroformmeplease » Mon May 10, 2010 4:09 am

I think perhaps it might have been rushed a little because you seem to have left some details out. You're character was bound and gagged and being tickled and mmpphh'ing into his gag. Then he was speaking clearly to his female captor. There was no mention of her ungagging him this is why I say it may have been rushed. Slow down and pay close attention to your details they are important in writing a good story.

Just a suggestion but perhaps you could go back to your second chapter and edit it not delete or rewrite it just click on edit and fix the left out details. I hope you continue to write and use what I have said to your advantage.
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Mon May 10, 2010 12:44 pm

Allison began to untie me from the wood beam, as soon as i felt the ropes go slack i rose to my feet and tried to run to the stairs
but i'd forgotten about the rope around my ankles and i fell almost as soon as i'd stood up
i pushed myself up onto my hands and knees and shouted
"help! these crazy women are torturing me, helmphhh" before i could finish allison had clamped her hand over my mouth
"torture? you dont even know what that word means yet boy! but you soon will! my associates and i will see too it" she hissed smiling madly at me
"mphhh mphhhh" i said into allisons had (what i'd actually tried to say was "screw you" but all they heard was gag-talk)
at this allison gently pinched my nose closed with her other hand, i was lying on the floor with her kneeling over me and i was unable to stand up or properly reach her hands so i squirmed underneath her in a futile attempt to escape, my chest was heaving as i tried to breathe.
i began to go faint and just when i was on the verge of passing out, allison let go, i gasped and wheezed as i finallly was able to breathe
"did you enjoy that boy? i hope so, because you'll be getting plenty of it, you will obey me and my associates, tanya and Jo, but you will not call us by our names, you will only call us mistress, any command you give will be obeyed or you will be smothered, spanked or tickled, depending on what we feel"
"because we like torturing you so much, we'll be doing these things to you anyway, but the more you resist us, the more torture you get, do you understand?" asked Tanya, the slightly shorter of the three.
"yes" i said sullenly
"yes what?" asked allison grabbing me by the back of the neck
"yes mistress" i said lowering my eyes in shame
"good boy, now on your feet" said allison, smiling now
i stood up and tanya moved me towards a table in the cellar
"get on the table, face down" she commanded
i delayed a little which earned me a smack to the face
"quickly boy!" she said now angry again
i lay down on the table and allison pulled my pants down to reveal my bare backside, she and tanya then began to tie me to the table using the ropes from earlier, they wrapped the ropes around my upper body and legs and round the bottom of the table securley fastening me in place.
tanya pinched my nose closed and i opened my mouth to breathe, at this she shoved something foul tasting and smelling into my mouth, it was my own sweaty sock, jo quickly placed a layer of tape over my mouth to keep the sock in, she crossed it over my mouth four times and then another one over the cross to hold the sock in.
i gagged on the awful taste but i was unable to spit it out.
"tast nice baby?" asked jo winking at me
"mphh mphhmphh" (yes mistress) i mphhd into my gag
tanya picked one of the paddles from the floor andmy backside once, she then rose the paddle high into the air and brought it down hard on me, the sound echoing
i screamed painfully into my gag
"aww, poor little boy, he doesn't like it!" said allison laughing at my pain and discomfort
"he'l learn to like it" said jo, picking up the other paddle and proceeding to rap my bum very hard as quickly as she could manage
*SMACK* *SMACK* *SMACK*
"MMMPPPPHHHH!" I yelled into the gag, my bum felt like it was on fire, it could already feel it going bright red
"he'd better learn to like it, if he's to last long as a slave" said allison looking at my contorted face as she said so
"thats right dear, your our slave now, we're never letting you go, don't worry about your parents finding you, they dont plan on coming home from holiday for another week didnt you say at college? well you'll be far away from here by then, we're going to train you as our slave, but we might auction you off to someone else if we feel that you'll make a good profit, you might end up with us as your mistresses, or someone else, you could even get a master!" allison said laughing
as tanya and jo continued their onslaught on my bum which by now was bright red and swelling. :spank;
i couldnt help it, with what they were saying and the pain radiating from my bum i started crying semi-silentlu into my gag.
"stop!" allison said, tanya and jo stopped and put the paddles down.
"poor little boy" said allison wiping my tears away
"perhaps you need a nice rest" she reached into her pocket and pulled out a cloth and bottle, she emptied a fair amount onto the cloth and pressed it over my mouth and nose
"breathe up the chloroform little boy, itl all be over much quicker if you breathe nice and deep, shhh shhh, there we go"
i writhed in the ropes and tried my hardest not to breathe but eventually my eyelids started to droop and i passed out wondering what my captors had in store for me next.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby mikeybound » Mon May 10, 2010 12:58 pm

give that boy a good master! it would make this a 'please all' tug.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Mon May 10, 2010 9:14 pm

i said the bit about a master as the women were trying to scare and intimidate him
this stories only going to me fff/m
i probably will do a m/m in the future though
thanks for reading, please keep a lookout, there will be more.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chloroformmeplease » Mon May 10, 2010 11:49 pm

Awesome and I love the breath control it is one of my favorite fetishes. I also love the fact about this staying fff/m.
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Tue May 11, 2010 12:17 am

mine too
i aim to please :gag:
more will be added this afternoon (GMT)

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue May 11, 2010 1:54 am

Hallo very good story. I like that tell that next part in afternoon (GMT). :) I live in (MET) zone. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Tue May 11, 2010 11:43 am

i awoke from my chloroform induced sleep feeling groggy and faint still, i looked around at my surroundings, there were some chains hanging from the roof and a whip next to them, i groaned to myself, as i knew i'd probably feel that whips lash before the day was out.
i was tied securely to a chair, but this time i wasnt gagged, i tried to move but the ropes surrounding me were tied very tightly, my hands were also tied together seperately, my ankles were also bound and my feet were bare.
"morning boy" said allison who had probably been waiting for me to wake up
i didn't reply, this earned me a hard slap across the face, a red hand print on my cheek and loud echo followed
i yelped in pain and allison laughed
"where are your manners?, i shall repeat, good morning boy"
"good morning mistress" i said, my cheek smarting
"you probably wont be happy to know that we've moved you from your previous location, we're in a secluded country home now that belongs to Jo, so you can forget about anyone ever finding you, we took you here in my van" allsion paused to laugh at this point
"you see, thats why i always have a van, im always looking to kidnap stupid boys like you to become slaves, after i chloroformed you at the college i hid you in the storeroom in my classroom, when all the other tutors had left and before the cleaners started i was able, with Jo and Tanyas help to put you in my van and drive you back to my house, no one saw you and no one ever will, you belong to us now, the sooner you accept it, the easier things will be"
she smiled at me evilly.
"now you know why i always drive a van, and now im going to show you why i always wear footless tights" as she said this i glanced down, she was wearing footless tights as always and she was also barefoot
"i like my slaves to keep my feet nice and clean, and at the moment, they are very VERY dirty and smelly, its up to you to clean them" she said knocking the chair i was tied too onto the floor suddenly
i lay on the floor and looked up to see allsion placing one of her bare feet onto my face, it was sweaty and there was a small amount of dirt on it
"well boy, get cleaning" allison said
i opened my mouth and began licking, allison moved her foot up and down as i did so, my tongue went from the bottom of her heel to the end of her big toe, i gagged and retched, her foot tasted disgusting, but i had no choice and i carried on licking it
allison laughed at me and spoke to me as i did so
"thats right slaveboy, clean my feet, this is where you belong, underneath me"
the dust and grit from the bottom of her feet was on my tongue and in my mouth, as allison forced her toes into my mouth, i began to suck each one individually
"ahhh, good boy, thats right, keep going"
i kept this up for a few minutes until allsion tired of it and told me to stop, she wiped her foot across my face wiping my spit on my own face.
she pulled the chair up and pulled another one over, she sat on it facing me and covered my mouth with her hand
"now i get to test you little boy" she said
"i am going to pinch your nose shut, and i'm going to see how long you can last without fainting, as soon as you faint i will stop, the moment you wake up, i will begin again, if you get to last past two mintues, i will let you have one breath, and so on if you make it past three minutes, which i doubt" she said laughing
as she did this her other hand pinched my nose shut gently again with her index finger and thumb
i closed my eyes to control myself
"no no no, look at me, i want to see the panic in those eyes, i want to see them rolling when your about to faint" said allison
i opened my eyes and looked at her and tried to stay calm but with no air coming in with her warm but soft hands clamped firmly over my mouth and nose i started to panic soon enough, my eyes widened and i stared all round the room, allison stared at me smiling sweetly
"aww, cant the little slave breath? is little slave getting out of breath, will little slave pass out soon?" she asked in a strangley seductive way
i managed to make it to the two minute point, allison released me, i gasped out a single breath and drew another one when she quickly smothered me again
"only one breath for you little boy, i control your breathing now" she said winking at me
my heart was beating frantically and my eyes began rolling as i passed out and everything went dark.
i cant have been out for long because when i came too, allison was till sat there
"breathers over baby, time to be smothered agian" she said as she placed her hand back over my mouth
"mphh mphhmphh mphh" i said into her hand (please stop mistress)
"shhh, dont try to talk, id concentrate on staying conscious if i were you baby" she said in a very patronising way.
she continued this for some time until she got bored again.
she released me and whistled, jo and tanya entered
"lets get our little slave ready for his whipping session" allison said grabbing the whip and uncoiling it slowly
tanya and jo began to untie me whilt allison opened the chains....
to be continued :bondage:

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue May 11, 2010 12:20 pm

Hallo very interesting part I will what cam next.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Thu May 13, 2010 6:48 am

im sorry i have not updated this but i am unfortunately running out of ideas for this story :(
minus continuing the the whipping to come im not sure what to do
anyone have any suggestions?

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby barefootboy » Fri May 14, 2010 8:35 am

Excellent story, i fantasise about teacher tieups too
Tied :tied: gagged :gag: and tickled :tickle:

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chloroformmeplease » Sat May 15, 2010 7:36 pm

More breath play please. You could have him almost escape and them capture him again and all three of them play breath games with him. So many possibilities here.
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby ducttapeboy001 » Sun May 16, 2010 5:01 am

chloroformmeplease wrote:More breath play please. You could have him almost escape and them capture him again and all three of them play breath games with him. So many possibilities here.



I see you are very obsessed with breath control. Even Im getting the feel of it.

Btwnice story, keep going
it makes me GLaD, Im not you
And believe me Im still alive
Im doing TUGs and Im still alive.
I feel fantastic and Im stilll alive

You'd be EVIL if you're GLaD

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Sun May 16, 2010 2:13 pm

sorry for no continuation yet
monday afternoon (GMT) i'll continue
and dont worry, plenty of breath control chloroform ;)

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Thu Jun 24, 2010 8:39 am

i was placed into the chains forcefully and as i stood there with my arms chained above my head i craned my neck trying to look back at allison when i screamed in pain as she whipped me once
*SMACK*
"AHHHH!" as i screamed tears of shame and anger flowed down my face
"that feels good doesn't it, beg your mistress for more!" said allison, readying for another strike
"yes mistress, hit me again, please" i said, id decided to go along with what she told me to lessen whatever she decided to do to me.
she began whipping me in earnest, each slash of the whip leaving a thick red mark on my back, i screamed with each hit until i had no breath left, allison kept whipping me for 10 minutes, when she had finished i hung from the chains barely conscious and my back was burning like liquid fire had been thrown on it.
"put out little slave to sleep now ladies" said allison
i knew what was coming next and offered no resistance as the rag was placed over my mouth, i breathed up the chloroform quickly hoping sleep would lessen the pain in my back.
when i awoke i was tied to the chair again in the cellar, my hands were tied to my side by rope around my upper body but the rope was not very secure, i found that i was easily able to move about within the scope the rope allowed
allison had removed my clothes that i had been wearing whilst i was being whipped, i was now wearing only my underwear.
i listened intently and i heard no sounds from the floors above me, andthe cellar door was even ajar, i wondered what this meant.
after wondering for a short time, i decided i didnt care, my ropes were loose and the door was open, this was a perfect chance to escape these sadistic women
it almost seemed too good to be true but i didnt realise that then, i was too focused on getting free
i wriggled for sometime and i was able to lift my arms out of the ropes, after a small amount of struggle i had managed to push the ropes to the bottom of the chair and free myself, standing up i ran to the stairs up to the cellar door, there was sharp grit on the floor which hurt the soles of my bare feet but i didnt care, i raced up the stairs and opened the door finding myself in a dark hallway, i walked down it and found myself in the front room of the house i was being held in, it was sparesley furnished, just 2 sofas and a television, i moved to the door and pulled on the handle, it was locked of course, but before i could turn around and look for a key i was grabbed from behind, and a hand clamped over my mouth.
"tut tut little boy, you failed our test of obediance"said allisons voice from behind me
"mmmphhh mphh mphhmphph" i asked (test of obedience?:P)
" we wanted to see how far you'd progressed, it turns out not at all, your not ready to be a good little slave yet" she said
i sighed inwardly, it had been too good to be true, the loose ropes and open door.
"now im going to make you pass out and when you wake up, we're going to have some fun with your breathing little slave" said allison laughing in a threatening way
with that she pinched my nose again, i mmmphhd fantically but her palm covered my mouth completely silencing me
i writed and jerked in her grip but she was just too strong, i began to grow dizzy from lack of oxygen and my knees began to buckle
allison came down with me gently as i fell to the floor
"shhhh, just give up little boy, its alright, you belong to us now, dont fight, just let go" she said
my eyes rolled into my head and i jerked once more before passing out
when i awoke i knew allison would have some more breathplay planned for me

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chloroformmeplease » Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:36 am

Excellent story for us breathplay fetishists. I hope you write more of this story.
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby ducttapeboy001 » Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:19 pm

cool story,
Test of Obedience ehh ??


Plz continue
it makes me GLaD, Im not you
And believe me Im still alive
Im doing TUGs and Im still alive.
I feel fantastic and Im stilll alive

You'd be EVIL if you're GLaD

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chlorodguy » Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:01 am

as i awoke i realised that something was different, i was lying on my back and i could no longer see anything i was blindfolded and a ballgag was placed firmly in my mouth, my hands were tied together as were my ankles.
"hello sleepyhead" said Jo from somewhere above me.
"now we're going to try something new" said Allison from roughly the same position.
"we're going to plug your ears in a minute and place you in a very special contraption of our own design, its like a coffin and i can control how much air flows into it, i hope you'll enjoy your new bed for a while" said allison laughing.
"if and when we decide to let you out you'd better be much more obedient slave or else you might find yourself in this thing more often. said Jo
i mpphd and squirmed frantically and felt myself being lifted up and placed in a wooden box, as i was set down someone placed earplugs into my ears and everything suddenly became silent, the only thing i could hear was my own hammering heart.
i lay there sweating for some time, the air around be gradually became heavier and breathing became much more difficult, the sensory deprivation and lack of oxygen made me very sleepy and weak, i lay there in the stifling box and cursed myself for the situation i found myself in, if obedience was what it took to get myself free, then i knew what i would do next...

Re: kidnapped by the tutor

Postby chloroformmeplease » Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:30 am

I hope you come back and continue this story.