## Bared All Punishment (created story)

Post by The prodigy » Wed Jun 27, 2012 11:09 pm

I was sentenced to be bound, gagged, and completely naked for 3 hours a day for the next 30 days. It was a new way Judges and Courts across the globe were getting their word out to boys and girls out there that they better straighten up or the worse will in fact, happen. It was reported that this punishment they call “Bared All Serving” has only happened 3 times so far in the U.S. It’s going to be the new form of punishment they issue; it will take the place of house arrest and probations because those don’t seem to be working anymore. How this Bared All Serving works is this: They feel embarrassment and helplessness at the same time are the 2 best ways that can and will rehabilitate offenders, rather its simple misdemeanors or felonies, this will work.
Once sentenced by the Judge you are to go home and live like normal, watch television, eat dinner, hang around. The next day is when it starts. At any time of the day, even when you least expect it your mother or father will find you and tell you it’s time to start day one of your punishment, they are told to run this because they feel it would be more humiliating for flesh and blood to run than some older officer who doesn’t know to. At first, you have no idea what’s going on and what it consists of so you oblige (at first). Now here is where my story starts…..
I was in my room watching television when my mother came in and said it was time to start with my punishment that I have to serve or I go to county jail for 3 months. “Ok, whatever, what do I have to do?” I had no idea what this was and what I would be doing…
”Are you sure Marco you know what you have to do?” My mom asked me hesitantly.
“Not really, but how hard can it be?” I bratly responded to her.
She pulled out the paper with the instructions on it how this works because she too forgot what all it consisted of. “Ok, well you know this is issued by the Court house of out county and issued by the state of Iowa so whatever is on here must be done or it will be like breaking your probation and you could get in very bad legal trouble. It says here you have to be tied up with your hands behind your back, and they gave us a pair of certified official handcuffs to use, you have to be bounded at your feet and legs, you….
”Hold on! Are you freaking serious? What kind of legal operation is this? I have never heard of this before?!” I lashed out and interrupted my mom.
“Yeah, this is what I’m trying to tell you Marco, this is some new kind of punishment they started doing now, it’s really new that’s why I’m trying to go over it with you right now.” My mom explained.
“Well this doesn’t sound right at all, this is bullshit already!” I said angrily.
“Are you going to stop and let me finish this are just keep talking? You have to know what this all is! Now like I was reading before, you have to be tied up at your hands, feet, and legs. I’m sorry honey but here’s what it gets really bad, then it says you are to be gagged at your mouth with this small rag and tape here they gave us. What do you think so far? “My mom asked.
“Uhh, I think this is not happening so mine as well stop reading mom! This is such bullshit! What the hell do they think?” I was getting royally pissed here at this point but she still wasn’t done reading….
”Ok, Marco, now sit down, I have to read you the last notes about it.” My mom had a worried, yet, somehow anticipated tone about her. “Says here that while you are securely bound and gagged you are to be……”
“Yes??” I waited impatiently.
“Well….naked.” she responded.
“I’m sorry? What did you say?!” I didn’t think I heard her right.
“Naked, it says you have to be fully nude while serving your sentenced while also bound and gagged. This way the offender won’t be able to object at his/her nudity, or use their hands as cover, or walk away from any shame he or she is going through. We believe this method will work and after the first day will rehabilitate them.
“Let me fuckin see that!” I snatched the paper from her to see for myself because I was in such disbelief and shocked on what she had just read! “Oh my god, it really does say that, no fuckin way am I doing this mom! Come on, you can’t be serious!” I said to her.
“It’s not me honey, it’s issued by the court, you can get in serious trouble if you don’t do it.” She simply responded.
“Well, how will they know if we do it or not? Can’t we, can’t we, just say we did?!?” I was stuttering to get my voice out now, I was getting nervous, there was no way I could do this.
“I know but we have to call an officer every day when you’re serving it for 3 hours a day so he can see and note it. If we don’t call or they don’t report anything you can get it worse sweetie” my mom was trying her best to reassure me but it wasn’t working. I was already embarrassed thinking of being it. How the hell was I going to get out of this? I would have to be fully bare assed in front of someone in my family or more, tied up and gagged!
“Come on, what am I supposed to do while tied up?” I just asked for the hell of it, I already heard the worst of it I’m sure.
“Well, it says you just act like it’s a normal day, do what you normally do. Not sure what that means…” her answer sounded very confusing….And I agreed, how the hell was I supposed to do anything while tied up naked? This was such bull and I couldn’t get out of it, I was screwed, fucked, done, defeated, however you want to put it. There was no way out of this! “I guess you stay up here in your room while you’re in it and when 3 hours is up, I will come up here and undo your handcuffs?” she asked nicely. “I guess….” At this point I was a very monotone embarrassed voice; I knew there nothing I could do to get out of it. “I won’t look or see anything I promise son, ok?” she said.
“You’re going to have to see my butt when you undo the handcuffs so yea you will.” embarrassingly I said.
“It’s just a butt, we all have them, I swear I won’t look at anything or say anything, I will uncuff you and leave, promise.”
“Whatever mom, sure..” again, I answered with a very deep defeated voice....
I need feed back for part2
Last edited by The prodigy on Thu Jun 28, 2012 4:23 pm, edited 2 times in total.
"being tied up can be very embarrassing, get it embarrASSing??"

### Re: Bared All Serving (created story)

Post by xtc » Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:43 am

This could be good but it needs paragraphs. I suggest adopting the convention where each new speaker in a dialogue is given a new paragraph.. It makes dialogue easier to follow.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!
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### Re: Bared All Serving (created story)

Post by NemesisPrime » Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:42 am

Very good but my complaints are the same as xtc, it needs a paragraph structure but you've got a good plot just do that and it will be great!
Everyone speaks in multiple languages...But gag talk is universal and a sock in your mouth is the perfect translator!

### Re: Bared All Serving (created story)

Post by The prodigy » Thu Jun 28, 2012 11:58 am

It is paragraphed and organized. This isn't grammar school.
"being tied up can be very embarrassing, get it embarrASSing??"

### Re: Bared All Punishment (created story)

Post by The prodigy » Thu Jun 28, 2012 5:52 pm

Here is part 2, hopefully I can get some positive feedback...Jeez.
“Ok, so let’s start then ok? My mom said with burst of anxiety.
“First thing is first mom, don’t be telling Marissa I’m like this for 3 hours a day ok? I don’t want her coming in here and seeing me like this cause I will never hear the end of it! Ok??” I told my mom. Marissa was my kid sister, 2 years younger than me. We always give each other hard times. If she saw me like how I was going to be I would be dead, she would take pictures and show them to off, that’s how evil she can be at times. But anyway, I was already nervous and embarrassed just thinking of having to strip in front of my own mother, this was already unbearable, how was it going to be when I actually was fully nude? This was bad.
“Can you leave the room and I will call in when I am done?” I asked her nicely.
“Just hurry up and do it Marco, the sooner you do this the sooner it will go by.” She responded basically no.
“Here, I will turn around when you do it.”
“Ugh…yeah sure that helps.” I was disgusted.
Once she turned around I stood still and took several deep breaths then started taking off my socks first, then I took off my shirt, I was just in my shorts now. I slowly pulled my shorts down and off my feet. Finally I was in my boxers alone, I couldn’t do this I kept thinking to myself, I just couldn’t. “Can I leave my underwear on at least?”
“I’m sorry honey, but I can’t allow that, it’s not what it says on the form, just do it and get it over with please.” My mother said.
I got both my hands on each side of my waist and slowly pulled them down. While in the process of pulling them down I was already bending forward slightly to best cover my front side, I was dying inside….They were to my feet now, I lifted my right foot then my left foot and stepped out of them- I was not fully bare. I was trembling; I immediately turned around and put my hands in front of to cover my front side. I then crouched on the floor. I didn’t tell my mom I was done, she guessed it.
“Are you done?” she asked.
“…..Yes.” That’s all I could say.
“Ok, I’m turning around now Ok? Just put your hands behind your back so I can hurry up and put them on.” Mom replied.
I pulled my hands away from my crotch and placed them up against my back together. I was bending over on the floor in a prayer stance, my butt was basically sticking up in the air, but I’d rather her see that then my crotch so that’s what I did. I knew she had turned around and saw me when I heard her slightly gasp and say “I’m sorry sweetie.”
“Ok, let’s make this quick, left hand first.” I heard the snap click the metal going around my hand. “Now you’re right.” Snap! My hands were both now secure and restrained. I can’t tell you how I felt when I realized my hands were handcuffed I was naked; it was humiliating to say the least. I didn’t say anything the whole time; I had my face in the carpet floor.
“I have to bind your legs now, I forgot.” Mom suddenly said.
“How are you going to do that mom? I muffled through the carpet floor.
“Well, why don’t you just turn around, I won’t look up past your knee I promise, but it’s the only way son.” Mom was doing this all the way, she wasn’t half assing anything.
“Ok…it’s not like I have a choice right? Do it and hurry up.” I sarcastically mumbled.
“You don’t, you’re right.” Answered mom quickly.
I was now cuffed so it was hard to turn around and not show a whole lot, I was moving slowly, my mom was just watching me from a few feet away, it sucked. Butt naked and handcuffed in the presence of my mother, but I knew things would be getting worst- I dreaded it thinking of it. I was sitting on my butt now, doing my best to lean as forward as I could to cover my crotch. I saw my mom looking down but not at me, I could tell she felt really bad for me but knew she had to do this.
“This is for your own good Marco, you do know that right? I don’t want this to happen to you but it’s the law.” My mom then got the straps that came with the whole package- black rubber straps, the kind they use in asylums to restrained crazies with strait jackets and such. They looked impossible to get out of once latched to you. My mom bend down to me and had her back towards me looking at my legs, not looking any higher- thank goodness I was thinking! She put the first strap around my ankles and tighten quite a bit, then went for my knee caps with the other one. It was an awkward situation for both us; we were both very embarrassed I could tell. I asked her if they had to be so tight and she simply said “Yes, they do.” It sounded like she was enjoying this bit, she was following every order.
“Ok, all done down there.” She said but had a slight humorous tone to her.
That made me a little nervous; she didn’t seem as concerned as earlier. I guess it can a funny sight to see anyone naked and tied up, I just wished and wondered why it was me! I now was tied at the hands and legs; I was naked, and very embarrassed. It was by the far the worst thing that has ever happened to me. (And still is)
“You know what the last thing is right Marco?” Mom asked.
“Whatever, you aren’t really going to do it are you??” I answered nervously.
“Oh yes, it has to be done, you’re almost all done then we can start the time and in 2 hours I will let you go. So come on, open up.” She seemed really anxious to this, it’s almost like she has been wanting to gag her rudely son for quite some time and here was her perfect chance to!
“Please mom, don’t put that in my mouth and gag me, please! I won’t say anything! You have no idea what I feel like now.” I was referring to the rag that was to be shoved in my mouth and tape that goes over it. I was doing my best to not get the final touches of the ultimate humiliation for anyone; I was already dying and already learned my lesson from my misdemeanor.
“Sorry, now come on, be a big strong boy, open up.” She was too excited here, I could tell, she was loving this.
I opened my mouth, “Ahh...” I waited, then, a not a second later a rag was shoved in my mouth. Not violently but enough to feel it and know there was something in there.
“Now close your mouth for me please.” She ordered.
“mmmWpppHhhhhY? (Why?) That’s how I responded, I know, what the hell is that.
“hehe, because I need to put this tape on now and it only works if you close your mouth, so please, close it.” My mother said, I could tell she was now really into this, she giggled a little on my first gag talk response. I closed my mouth but gave her a real nasty look with my eyes and that didn’t seem to faze her one bit. She then put 3 strips of white duct tape on my mouth. Each piece of tape I felt going on my mouth I could feel my mouth getting harder and harder to open, it really wasn’t a good feeling.
So, here I was, handcuffed my behind my back, my ankles and knees were strapped with rubber hose of some sort, and my mouth was stuffed with some rag and sealed with tape, and to make matters more worse, I was fully clothless, nothing, nada- completely in the buff.
"being tied up can be very embarrassing, get it embarrASSing??"

### Re: Bared All Punishment (created story)

Post by sae226 » Sun Jul 01, 2012 6:46 am

This story is really getting good! I love it. Is the mother starting to feel her domme side come out? Maybe she takes things a bit further?

### Re: Bared All Punishment (created story)

Post by cantescapenow » Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:55 am

Please continue like sae226 said is the mother finding her inner domme?!

### Re: Bared All Punishment (created story)

Post by GalaxyTrain » Sun Sep 23, 2012 7:52 am

This isn't a true story, right? If it isn't, it belongs in the fiction section. If it is, it belongs in the "more intimate" section. It doesn't belong here.