Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Fri May 17, 2013 8:23 pm

I changed the names to protect people's identities.

It seamed like a normal day when Bill woke up that Monday. Little did he know that his life was about to get very interesting.

He had just gotten completely ready except for putting on his socks, but he couldn't find any so he decided he would just take some from his dads drawer. He went to his parents room and opened his dads sock drawer and was very surprised to see what was in it. Could it be. The remote from the movie "click" , but they're was no way it would work. He tossed it into his bag just show his friends, he then grabbed socks and left for school.

In the middle of a lecture in his advanced biology class he decided to get it out. He pulled it out of his stuff and pressed pause just for fun. All of a sudden everything froze except for Bill. He looked around thought for a minute and decided this would be the best Monday ever.

He looked around just to make sure no one was moving. He got up and walked over to his friend Seth and stood him up. Surprisingly he kept his balance while he was still frozen. Bill's hands were shaking, " could I really do this", he thought. He decide he would work fast just in case the remote wore off. He unbuckled Seth's belt slid it out of his belt loops and set it on Seth's desk. He quickly unbuttoned Seth's jeans and slid them down and raised his shirt over his head. There stood Seth in his light blue fruit of the loom boxer briefs with his pants around his ankles. Bill took this opportunity to take some photos on his phone of Seth standing up and bent over his desk. Matt quickly put Seth's pants, shirt and belt back on and put Seth back where he was first frozen. he then went back to his seat, and pressed play. It was insane, everything went back to normal except for the photos on Matt's phone. "This is the best day ever" Bill thought and its only first hour.
Last edited by Tie up guy 58 on Sun May 19, 2013 6:03 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Fri May 17, 2013 10:05 pm

Now came second block and Bill had his sight on three potential targets Caleb, Liam, and Seth again because Bill couldn't help it. He paused the class and grabbed the three guys. He took them into one of the back practice rooms for more privacy. He had decided that the remote wouldn't wear off so he could take his time with them.

First he got Seth back down to those light blue fruit of the loom boxer briefs. Then Bill slid Caleb's pants down. Turns out Caleb was a fruit of the loom guy too except his underwear was black. Lastly Bill took off Liam's belt and slid down Liam's pants and found some nice bright orange American eagle boxer briefs.

For the pics Bill pressed them against the wall with their hands above their heads and their pants around their ankles. Next he got some nice shots of them bent over in their underwear. Bill decided to get a little riskier so he slowly inched his hand closer and closer to Seth's butt. When his hand touched Seth's underwear Bill slowly rubbed his hand around gently squeezing Seth's butt.

Out of the corner of his eye Bill thought he saw movement. He quickly removed his hand from Seth's butt. He then decided he would be done for today so he got them dressed and back where he paused them and went on with his day unaware of the surprise he was going to get at the end of the day.
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Fri May 17, 2013 10:08 pm

How should I continue?
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby mikeybound » Sat May 18, 2013 8:23 am

Have this done in a more private place, and unpause them when he's wearing a mask.
This'll probably go about as well as it did for Adam Sandler.

Re: Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Sun May 19, 2013 10:25 am

Anybody else have any advice for what should happen next?
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby mikeybound » Sun May 19, 2013 11:06 am

It's your story. It'd be nice if they were tied up and unfrozen, put in a full blown kidnapping.

Re: Best day ever

Postby Antonius97 » Sun May 19, 2013 1:40 pm

You really should start these things with a good idea of what you want, but my next course of action would be to pause, tie them up in their underwear, unpause for just a few seconds, pause, put everything back to normal, and then unpause.
I didn't choose the TUG life, the TUG life chose me.

Re: Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Sun May 19, 2013 4:00 pm

Anybody have suggestions for their underwear in the next addition?
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby mikeybound » Sun May 19, 2013 4:05 pm

Quit asking us so many questions. Like I said, it's your story. Make it what you want, and ask questions when you aren't sure.
Edit: sorry for sounding so rash. There are wonderful authors here who would probably help if you PM them. Although I am wondering where the M/m is supposed to come into play.

Re: Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Mon May 20, 2013 12:27 pm

Anybody besides him?
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby mikeybound » Mon May 20, 2013 1:09 pm

Just do it.

Re: Best day ever

Postby xtc » Mon May 20, 2013 1:25 pm

Tie up guy 58 wrote:How should I continue?


It's YOUR story, surely you know where you intend it to go.

The idea is intriguing. It could/should be fun.
My advice is that one should always know where a story is going before starting to post. The author needs to be able to commit to what (s)he is writing if it is to have any style and if it is to be consistent. If that is not the situation, there is a serious danger of the story either just petering out or degenerating into disorganised nonsense. With a fantasy story like this, consitency is especially important because the world being created is not realistic to start with and the reader (speaking for myself) needs to be able to believe in the story on its own terms.

End of lecture.

Go your own way. You have an interesting premise here. Let's enjoy you creativity.

Wassail!
Xtc
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Mon May 27, 2013 12:47 pm

Caleb: (17) grey athletic shorts and a shirt.
Liam: (15) grey sweatpants and a shirt.
Seth: (15) black athletic shorts and a shirt.


Caleb, Liam, Seth, and Bill had decided to meet at Bill's house Friday night. As soon as they were all in Bill's room he pressed pause on the remote and went to work.

First Bill went to Seth he pulled his shirt off, pushed him faced down on the bed, and slid his athletic shorts off. Seth lay there spread eagle in his grey fruit of the loom boxer briefs. Bill tied Seth's wrists and ankles to each corner of the bed.

Next he went to Liam. He took off his shirt, bent him over a desk and pulled down his sweatpants to reveal some pink American eagle boxer briefs. He tied Liam's arms to the desk. Then he spread Liam's legs and tied them to the desk legs.

Last but not least Bill went to Caleb took off his shirt and slid down his shorts and caleb was left in his black Hanes boxer briefs. He then tied Caleb's legs together then his arms together. He then connected his arms and legs into a hogtie.

Bill then went to his dresser and got out three ball gags and put them in each of the boys mouths and pressed play.

TBC
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby Antonius97 » Mon May 27, 2013 1:05 pm

NOW you're getting into this concept's potential! Keep going!
I didn't choose the TUG life, the TUG life chose me.

Re: Best day ever

Postby mikeybound » Wed May 29, 2013 2:25 pm

Nice! He should probably put on a mask.

Re: Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Sun Sep 15, 2013 7:19 am

Should I continue?
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby xtc » Sun Sep 15, 2013 9:55 am

You've had our opinions; now it's up to you.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: Best day ever

Postby Tie up guy 58 » Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:19 am

Would anyone be interested in illustrating this story
Underwear is my weakness

Re: Best day ever

Postby mikeybound » Sat Sep 28, 2013 7:07 am

Just write the damn story.

Re: Best day ever

Postby boyscoutjm » Sat Sep 28, 2013 7:48 am

agreed