Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby jennybond » Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:01 am

Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Chapter 1

Seventeen year old Becky Harrison was sat the kitchen table watching videos on YouTube on her laptop, when suddenly one video clip grabbed her attention.

“Sandy come down here and look at this.” She called up to her college housemate Sandy Jennings who was also seventeen.

“What is it Becks I’m doing my hair.” Sandy called back.

“I’ve found a video on YouTube you’ve got to see it.”

“Can’t it wait I’m busy.”

“No, come down here now you’ll just love what I’ve got to show you”

“This had better be worth it Becky.” Sandy said as she walked down the stairs wrapping a towel over her wet hair.

“Sit down and look at this.” Becky told her.

Sandy took a seat next to Becky and she started the video.

“OH MY GOD! Is that …..”

“Yes it’s Miss Daniels.” Becky told her before she could finish her sentence.

“My God what’s she wearing and what’s she doing to that poor girl?”

The video there were watching featured their English teacher Miss Daniels an attractive black haired woman in her late twenties who wasn’t very popular with the girls because she was so strict. In the video she was wearing a black leather skirt and a figure hugging tight black leather low cut sleeveless top, long black leather gloves and black leather boots with stiletto heels. Also in the video was a blonde girl who didn’t look much older than Becky and Sandy who was naked apart from her panties she was secured spread eagle style face first to a wooden cross by leather cuffs which were fastened around her wrists and ankles, she was gagged with a big red ball gag which was fastened in her mouth. Miss Daniels was constantly whipping her with a leather cat of nine tails type whip.

“She looks like some kind of kinky Dominatrix. What are we going to do show Principal Mathers and then maybe she’ll fire the bitch?” Sandy asked.

“I have a better idea. She’s going to pay us if she doesn’t want a copy of this arriving on Principal Mathers desk first thing Monday morning.”Becky replied.

“What? That’s blackmail we can’t do that.”

“We can just watch.” Becky said picking up her mobile phone.

“She gave me her number in case I ever needed help with my assignments tonight I’m going to need her help. She said dialing the number.

“Miss Daniels hi, its Becky Harrison here I’m really sorry to trouble you I’m really stuck with the latest assignment, I wonder if you wouldn’t mind helping me. It’s difficult to explain over the phone, you couldn’t pop round could you we’re only a few minutes away. Thank You Miss Daniels you’re a star, see you in a few minutes then bye.”

“Yes! She’s coming right over.” Becky told her friend after ending the call.

“I hope you know what you’re getting us into Becky this kind of thing is against the law.”

“I don’t think what she’s doing on than video is exactly legal either.” Becky replied.

The two of them nervously waited until the doorbell rang. Sandy let the teacher in while Becky remained at her laptop.

“I don’t have long Rebecca what’s the problem?” Miss Daniels asked as she entered the room.

“Take a seat Miss and I’ll show you it right here on my laptop.”

Miss Daniels took a seat next to Becky and the girl started the video.

“WHAT THE? WHERE THE?” The stunned teacher was lost for words for a few seconds.

“Who put that on there? Delete it at once.” She screamed grabbing hold of the laptop.

“You can delete it Miss, but I have copies. Now listen very carefully if you don’t want a copy of this to arrive on Principal
Mathers desk first thing Monday morning then you are going to have to pay us five thousand dollars.” Becky told the shocked teacher.

“What? I don’t have that kind of money.”

“You have all weekend to find it or nine o’clock Monday morning a copy of this will arrive at the principal’s office.” Becky told her.

“OK OK I’ll get your money, but I want every single copy of this in return.”

“You will don’t worry, I don’t want ever want to see this again anyway its sick.”

The shaken teacher stood up and left the room escorted to the door by Sandy.

“Now we wait.” Becky said with a big smile on her face when Sandy returned to the room.

Two days past the girls hadn’t heard from Miss. Daniels it was now early Sunday evening and Becky was in the house alone as Sandy was out with her boyfriend, when her mobile rang.

“Rebecca I have your money, bring the copies of the video to my house tonight you know where it is and I’ll pay you.”

Before Becky could reply the phone went dead, she tried calling back the teacher had turned her mobile off. Becky was left with no option but to go around to the teacher’s house.



Miss Daniels opened the door when Becky arrived she was dressed in blue denim jeans and a white blouse.

“Come in, do you have the discs?” She asked.

“Yes.” Becky replied holding up two cds

“Is that all of them?”

“Yes I promise.” Becky answered

“Very good place them on the table while I get your money.” Miss Daniels said as she left the room.

But instead of returning with the money she dragged in a tightly hogtied girl and slid her across the shiny wooden polished floor in Becky’s direction.

“SANDY.” Becky screamed seeing her friend hogtied and ball gagged sobbing before her.

“What have you done to her?”

“The same as what I’m going to do to you bitch, you two are going to make lovely new pets” Miss Daniel laughed as she took a tight hold of Becky’s arm.
Last edited by jennybond on Sun Sep 26, 2010 10:17 pm, edited 4 times in total.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby kidnappedngagged » Sun Sep 26, 2010 1:00 pm

Wow another amazing story after bratcamp another nailbitten story carnt wait to read this one good opening

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby jennybond » Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:56 am

Chapter 2
Miss Daniels had left the two girls alone very tightly hogtied and ball gagged side by side on her lounge, both girls had worked up a sweat struggling to free themselves but it was useless, they had been tied by a real expert their wrists, elbows, knees and ankles had all been very tightly tied together and the more they struggled their bonds seemed to get even tighter causing them great discomfort. Becky had been watching the clock and nearly three hours had now passed since Miss. Daniels had left them. Finally the door opened and Miss. Daniels now dressed in the same leather outfit she had been wearing in the video walked into the room she was carrying a black leather bag in one hand and riding crop in the other.

“Sorry I had to leave you girls alone on your first night, but I had a client booked in for this evening, one must make a living you know. Any way how are my two little pets? Comfortable Rebecca?” She said kneeling down and raising Becky’s drool covered chin with her gloved hand.

“BIMMMITCPPHHH.” Becky screamed

“Yes dear I am a bitch thank you for the compliment.”

“How about you Sandra? Are you comfortable?” She asked switching her attention to Sandy and raising up her tear stained face by pulling on her blonde pony tail.

“NOMMMPPPHH!” Sandy screamed,which made Miss Daniels laugh out loud.

“Oh dear look at the time. I think its way past my pet’s bed time.”

Much to Sandra’s relief she felt the cruel tight hogtie being untied once that was untied, Miss. Daniels untied her knees and ankles too and pulled her too her feet.

“Go and stand over there against the wall.” Miss Daniels instructed her pointing to the far side of the room.

Sandra knew she was in no position to disobey so she did as she was told.
Miss. Daniels then released Becky from her hogtie and made her stand next to her friend. The girls watched as Miss. Daniels rummaged through her back and pulled out two leather collars which she fastened tightly around each of the girl’s necks, next from her bag she took leather dog leashes which she fastened to the girl’s collars.

“Come on my little pets up to bed we go.” She said pulling on the leashes as she began to walk towards the door stopping only to pick up her bag and crop on the way.

The frightened girls were led up the stairs and into a bedroom which contained a large double bed. Once inside the room the teacher removed the girl’s collars before reaching into her bag again and pulling out a gadget neither of the girls had ever seen before it looked a bit like a pistol but it clearly wasn’t.

“This my pretties is called a taser it’s used by the police to stun disruptive prisoners, very soon I’m going to untie your arms and you will both do as I tell you unless you want me to use this little baby on you. Can you believe some people actually like me using this on them, but I’m sure you won’t, so do as you’re told or else.”

She began by untying Sandy’s wrists and elbows; Sandy vigorously tried to rub some circulation back into her arms while Miss. Daniels untied Becky.

“Now both of you strip down to your bras and panties for me.”

The two girls stood and looked at each other.

“Do it.” Miss. Daniels snapped pointing the taser in their direction.

Becky slowly began to pull her t shirt up over head revealing a pink lace bra while Sandy began to unbutton her blouse to reveal a black satin bra.

“Skirts and hose too.” Miss. Daniels barked as the girls paused.

Sandy unfastened her skirt and let it fall to the floor revealing a matching pair of black satin panties; Becky too dropped her skirt to reveal a little pink lace thong. Both girls sat on the bed and removed their pantyhose before being told to stand up.

“Right I’m going to take your gags out and you will both remain silent.”

First Becky’s gag was removed and then Sandy’s both girls moved their aching jaws trying to work some movement back into them.

“Why are you doing this let us go please Miss.” Sandy sobbed

“Silence.” Miss Daniels snapped giving Sandy a hard slap on her bottom with her hand.

“From now on if you wish to address me you will call me Mistress or Madame.” Is that clear?”

Both girls nodded.

“I didn’t hear you. I asked is that clear?” Miss Daniels snapped slapping both girls on the bottom.

“Yes Mistress.” They both replied.

“That’s better, you’re learning already. Now lie down on bed the face to face and put your arms tightly around each other.”

The girls did as they were told and Miss. Daniels took some rope and very tightly tied Becky’s wrist together behind Sandy’s back and then very tightly tied Sandy’s arms behind Becky’s back, next she took another length of rope and wrapped it around both girl’s thighs pulling them together so they touched before tightly tying them, she repeated the process tying their knees and ankles together. Next from her bag she took two sponge balls and a roll of black shiny tape. Each girl had sponge ball stuffed her mouth which was then held in place by a number of layers of the black tape which covered all of her lower face.

“That should stop any kissing.” Miss Daniels said with a laugh in her voice.

“Now get some sleep ladies tomorrow you start your training.”
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby Jason Toddman » Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:02 am

Interesting story so far but I am a bit puzzled. What is the point of blackmailing someone whose video is already on YouTube where anyone could see it? It's already in public domain, so deleting DVD copies wouldn't make a difference... the darn video would *still* be on Youtube! All they'd have to do was write to the principal about the Youtube video and let him see it for himself.
Also, shouldn't the teacher be worried about whoever put that video on Youtube in the first place, or did I miss something here? Presumably *she* wasn't stupid enough to do it herself, so how did it get there?! It sure didn't put *itself* there!
As is, the moral is this story is; have a backup plan when you try to blackmail somebody; in this case only one of the girls should have seen the teacher to make the blackmail attempt - the other should have stayed in the background ready to call the cops if her friend wasnt' back by a pre-arranged time! Also should have left a note to their folks or something explaining where they would be.
Of course if these girls were that smart then you'd have no story. Oh well.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby jennybond » Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:26 am

Jason Toddman wrote:Interesting story so far but I am a bit puzzled. What is the point of blackmailing someone whose video is already on YouTube where anyone could see it? It's already in public domain, so deleting DVD copies wouldn't make a difference... the darn video would *still* be on Youtube! All they'd have to do was write to the principal about the Youtube video and let him see it for himself.
Also, shouldn't the teacher be worried about whoever put that video on Youtube in the first place, or did I miss something here? Presumably *she* wasn't stupid enough to do it herself, so how did it get there?! It sure didn't put *itself* there!
As is, the moral is this story is; have a backup plan when you try to blackmail somebody; in this case only one of the girls should have seen the teacher to make the blackmail attempt - the other should have stayed in the background ready to call the cops if her friend wasnt' back by a pre-arranged time! Also should have left a note to their folks or something explaining where they would be.
Of course if these girls were that smart then you'd have no story. Oh well.


Thanks for your comments constructive criticism never hurt anyone. I got the basic idea for the story from video on a bondage website,I guees I didn't give it as much thought as I should have, you're right saying the video was on Youtube was a bit dumb. Oh well it's done now I hope it doesn't stop people enjoying the story.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby Jason Toddman » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:05 pm

Not dumb... I've seen professional writers create larger plot holes than *that*! Look at the Harry Potter books; they're much fun to read and they're very popular - but let's face it; they all have plot holes large enough to ride broomsticks through!!!
Anyway, for all I knew the Youtube thing was a deliberate set up for a later development in the story.
If this is not the case you can easily edit the story details to eliminate this flaw if you think it's important enough to. Say that the girls found an incriminating DVD in the teacher's desk or out in the school parking lot or something - perhaps it was something the teacher made herself and misplaced/dropped. A bit dumb of the teacher perhaps but we ALL make mistakes. :wink: Then they'd have a real blackmail hold on her (they can threaten that they'll put it on Youtube themselves) - until they make the mistake of not protecting themselves (that is at least a realistic mistake for a person - especially a teenager inexperienced in intrigue - to make) from capture.
Even as is, what are the chances that someone else who happens to know the teacher will stumble on the Youtube video and try the same thing? Not all that great, really; you know how many videos like that (sans nudity) are in there? A video as descrivbed probably wouldn't last long anything before it got flagged/deleted, leaving no blackmail evidence on the teacher. of course, then she'd still wonder who the devil put that thing on Youtube in the first place (if you wanted to go with *that* idea instead).
In any case, I hope you continue with the story; it definitely shows promise.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby derpstick118 » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:08 pm

Good job, so far so good :)

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby dpgsm » Tue Sep 28, 2010 5:07 am

HI dpgsm here.
This story, is from the current Image Studios video 153.

dpgsm

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby jennybond » Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:13 am

dpgsm wrote:HI dpgsm here.
This story, is from the current Image Studios video 153.

dpgsm



Yep that's where I got the basic idea from I haven't seen the full video so I don't know what happens, almost everything in the story are my own ideas.

Jen.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:37 am

Hallo, I like story want read more. That jenny say that was on youtub was no problem,for me because I thought could possibly that find video like that there, but chance that is a person that I know and I could blackmail with it, is near zero. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby chloroformmeplease » Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:08 am

I like your story thus far and I hope you will continue to write more of it.
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby chloroformmeplease » Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:12 am

dpgsm wrote:HI dpgsm here.
This story, is from the current Image Studios video 153.


Do you have the URL? I would love to see what you are talking about.
dpgsm
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby jennybond » Tue Sep 28, 2010 8:55 am

chloroformmeplease wrote:
dpgsm wrote:HI dpgsm here.
This story, is from the current Image Studios video 153.


Do you have the URL? I would love to see what you are talking about.
dpgsm



http://www.imagostudios.com/is153.html
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:40 am


Hallo, the picture of the girls look very much how I like it. :D
Now I´m even more Interested in next part.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby dex » Mon Oct 04, 2010 2:50 pm

you never fail to disappoint
Being bisexual is the worst of any world because you don't really belong anywhere, because you are never sure of yourself or those around you. You can't trust in anyone, their motives or their intentions. And because of that, you have no true identity.

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby Suestruggles » Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:53 am

excellent . I wonder why she didn't make them strip naked. much more to come I guess.
Sue

Fit to be tied, wants to struggle.

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby jennybond » Wed Oct 06, 2010 1:52 pm

Suestruggles wrote:excellent . I wonder why she didn't make them strip naked. much more to come I guess.


Thanks for your kind comments Sue and everyone else that commented. The reason she didn't make them strip naked is that I try avoid full nudity in my stories whenever possible that's just my own personal perefence. Yes there will be more to come I've been a little busy of late but hopefully I'll have another chapter ready this coming weekend.

Thanks
Jen
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Don't Mess with a Dominatrix

Postby kidnappedngagged » Sat Oct 09, 2010 9:34 am

Big fan of jenny work carnt wait see wat happens