Sensory Deprivation

Postby Polperro » Fri Mar 14, 2014 9:13 am

Tom was your normal average 14 year old boy but he was different in many ways. Tom had always loved the idea of being tied up in gymnastics leotards but it had never happened. He lived at home with his auntie Jo & she had always known about his fantasies & always let him wear girls clothes of his choice around the house. One day Tom got into trouble at school & was promptly kicked out by the headteacher & told never to come back.

When auntie Jo found out about it she was furious with Tom & told him that he would have to be punished for getting kicked out of school. she then told him to go his room & dress in one of his leotards that she had left out for him on the bed & let her know when he was ready.

When he was ready Tom shouted to Jo & she cam up the stairs with a rucksack full of stuff

She then told Tom to put his hands behind his back & promptly tied them together, she then tied his elbows together. She then put a cushion on the floor in front of the bed & told Tom to sit on it. She then gagged Tom with a blue ball-gag

Jo then grabbed hold of toms arms &tied to the foot of the bed in a strappado position, she then tied his right ankle to the right side of the bed & then done the same with the left ankle so that Toms was tied to bed in a splits position.

Jo then told Tom that he was to be left tied up in his current predicament until the next morning. She then preceded to put a hood ver Toms head & secure it in place with a collar & then secured the collar to the bed with a bit of rope.

She then left the room & locked the door behind her, leaving Tom bound, gagged & helpless until the next morning

Re: Sensory Deprivation

Postby Plueschbabycd » Sat Mar 15, 2014 3:58 am

Hallo, this story had interning idea and is nice start. But it should more elaborate told.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Sensory Deprivation

Postby Jason Toddman » Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:57 pm

I agree. It shows some promise if properly detailed and fleshed out to read like a story rather than like a plot synopsis.
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Re: Sensory Deprivation

Postby Plueschbabycd » Sun Mar 16, 2014 1:00 am

the second point is he like it how this than a punishment. What come next? Put his aunt him in girl clothes and let him as girl go to an other school or is she so rich that he can now her bondage toy ?
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show