home alone together

Postby boundboy » Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:13 am

hi, this is my first story so it might not be that good...... but to tell you, the 1st part won't have any tugs... sorry :(

Characters: Joshua (me) :big:
Matt (friend) :D


Part 1: The Arrival

It was Friday July 18th. Today, (Joshua) i was going over to my friend Matt's house for a sleepover. his parents went on vacation to Florida for the whole weekend. he asked me to sleepover to keep him company. :big:

it is 10am right now and i am getting ready to go. "Toothbrush, clothes, books, video games, i pod, snacks, and board games," I checked. "I'm ready!" i took my bags and went downstairs. "Bye mom!" i yelled. "bye sweetie. have fun!" my mother replied and off i went. i walked to his house because my parent were really busy today.

finally, i'm at his house! it took about 45minutes. i rang the doorbell. *ring ring* "who is it?" Matt asked. "it's me Joshua!" i replied. he then opened the door for me and we went in. i dropped all my stuff in his room and went downstairs. i've never been to his house. it was very big and there was a lot of space. "what do you wanna do?" Matt asked. "let's play video games!" i replied. so we played video games for about an hour and a half. it was 5:30pm. "i'm bored," i say. "i know what we can do!" Matt replies. "what?" i ask. "wait here, i'll get everything ready. just take off all your clothes to your underwear ok?" he asks. "ok......." i mutter. so Matt leaves the living room and i start to take off my clothes. "i wonder what were playing?" i thought. whatever it was, it feels like a weird game........ :worried: :odd: :mouthopen: :o


to be continued......


is the story ok? and can any1 guess what the game is?
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:20 am

darn i put it in the wrong forum!!!!!! it needs to be in the fictional tugs forum, can some1 plz move it?
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Sat Aug 14, 2010 9:11 am

thanks for moving it. anyway, what do you guys think the game is?
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby OverLooker » Sat Aug 14, 2010 9:48 am

continue
"Mmmmppphhhhhhh"

Re: home alone together

Postby xtc » Sat Aug 14, 2010 10:00 am

It could be the traditional "catch the greasy mush" game, but I doubt it!

xtc
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Re: home alone together

Postby tiedup101 » Sat Aug 14, 2010 4:54 pm

No idea about the game, but I do want this story continued!!!!! Please!!!! Please!!!!9
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Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Sat Aug 14, 2010 6:52 pm

sure is it rlly ok? its my first story... :worried:
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby Jason Toddman » Sat Aug 14, 2010 9:03 pm

We'll have a better idea once you get to the TuGs part. Right now there's really too little to go by. Maybe a tad rushed but it sounds like a promising start - but so far only a start.
Please continue. We are interested, or you wouldn't have so many different people feedbacking so quickly asking for more. Please take this as encouragement and tell us your story. :big:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
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Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:25 pm

thanks sorry i'm not really a good story writer :annoy: :( .
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby Jason Toddman » Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:30 pm

boundboy wrote:thanks sorry i'm not really a good story writer :annoy: :( .


Howe can you say that!? You wrote the start of a good one so far, so please continue it.
We're not asking for perfection! We just want you to tell your own story in your own words! Come on, please give it a try!
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: home alone together

Postby Jason Toddman » Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:35 pm

cricks5 wrote:Even I started out not well as a story writer. As late as junior high, my teachers had a rough time reading my cursive.

Yeah,mine even cursed at mycursive. I can't write worth a damn - have to print everything.
See? You're not alone. I hpe you continue your story soon; we support you!
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:54 pm

i know, i'll do my best! ill continue soon
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby tiedup101 » Mon Aug 23, 2010 6:39 am

Please continue!!!
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Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:36 pm

sorry guys.... :( :( :( :( :(

i've been really busy with school... i'll do my best to continue soon
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:55 pm

OK guys, i am going to continue now. sorry i couldn't continue before. I've been having lots of work to do and sports to play lol.

Part 2: the unexpected

20 minutes have passed and i was still waiting. i was thinking of going to see if Matt was ready yet, but then he called me and said he was done.

"Joshua, I'm done now. come to the basement and we will start," Matt said.

"coming!" i replied. I've never seen Matt's basement before, so this will be new to me i thought. i got to the basement door and looked down. the lights were off and it didn't look like anyone was down there. anyway, i still went down to check.

once i got down, passing the wall, someone tackled me to the ground and cuffed my hands behind my back and my legs together.

"what the? helllpppp--mppphhhhhhhhhh" i tried to yell, but his hands covered my mouth. i looked back and saw it was Matt!

"mppppphhhh" i tried to say.

"shhhhhhhh josh, don't yell and it won't be that painful. he took his hand off my mouth. before i could protest, i felt a scarf getting wrapped over my mouth and around my head.

"mpppphhhhh"

"this should keep you quiet for a little while," matt said. i then saw another scarf going over my eyes so now i couldn't see anything. i tried to struggle, but nothing worked so i gave up.

Then i felt Matt carry me and drop me on a bed. he tied my arms and legs with rope so i couldn't get out. he then took out my gag.

"why are you doing this Matt?" i asked.

"you don't need to know, so open your mouth," he said. i opened my mouth and he stuffed a cloth into my mouth and tied a scarf over my mouth and around the head.

"mppphhhhhh" i tried to yell but didn't work

"this is a really good gag," he said to himself.

"now to finish it off, i am going to put you into a hogtie." he then got another piece of rope and conected my arms and ankles together.

"mppppphhhhhhh" i said through my gag. i didn't know anything that was happening since i was blindfolded.

Then he said "i am going out shopping for a while Joshua, so stay put." he then left very quickly. all i could do was struggle with no prevail.

i wondered to myself, "what is he going to buy and when is he going to untie me?"


TO BE CONTINUED


ok guys, my second part of my first story. is it ok? what should i improve on or fix? feedback is greatly accepted
Last edited by boundboy on Tue Oct 12, 2010 4:30 pm, edited 1 time in total.
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby snobound » Tue Oct 12, 2010 4:18 pm

Interesting start... keep it going. Writing is like anything else worth working at- you only get better with TONS of practice. Don't worry too much about what others think. Once you wrestle out a few stories, you'll have the bug. One note on dialogue- you should consider beginning a new paragraph each time there is a change in speaker. It makes the conversation easier to follow, and helps to smooth transitions.

Now get going! I want to see what Matt buys at the store. :wink:
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Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Tue Oct 12, 2010 4:31 pm

there i spaced it out a bit, is it better like this?

also, i'll be continuing this story when i have more time
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: home alone together

Postby Jason Toddman » Tue Oct 12, 2010 9:06 pm

Spacing looks fine enough to me so that I couldn't tell what Snobound was talking about until I read your follow up post.
Your story is so far so good.
Kindly please though don't keep us waiting as long for the next one. You don't have to write what you plan to send all in one go, you know! If you can't write a lot at once, just write a paragraph one day, another the next and so on (in a word document on your computer of course, not HERE) whenever you have a few moments to kill and then when you have enough collected together for it to be interesting send it as a single post installment. Spending even a minute or two per day would have given you a higher word average than you have built up between these two story installments. Two months?!? Come ON!!!! :P Typing just one line a day you could have sent us much more than this by now! :D And doing so would help you sustain your interest in wrting these stories too. And as Snobound said (and I paraphrase somewhat) - practice is good!!!
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: home alone together

Postby sarumansauron » Wed Oct 13, 2010 8:24 am

Good continuation! Thanks! Try not to be long so much to write the next part.
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: home alone together

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Oct 13, 2010 8:14 pm

I unfortunately must agree with Jason. Ever since my pc crashed a few months ago, everything I have not retyped from the cricks5 stories that was not saved beforehand off my pc on a cdrom or on a different website I have painstakingly typed up by hand on here. That much typing causes me at times to both have slight tremors in my fingers and also to copy and save often because I never know anymore when my Internet connection will freeze up without any warning at all.

However I do say that your story shows exceedingly great promise, even as your first one no less so please continue it at a suitable rate so those waiting for more parts do not go crazy from impatience.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: home alone together

Postby Jason Toddman » Wed Oct 13, 2010 8:34 pm

And *I* unfortunately must say that Shane brings up a very good point - not just for you Boundboy but for *everyone!*
Back up EVERYTHING you write!!! When you write stories, don't write them in the textbox here like you would an ordinary quickie post! One small mistake and *Poof!* it's gone forever. Write it in your own computer - and set your computer to do autosaves every few minutes in the bargain! For simple projects it causes no slowdowns at all.
I myself save everything I do on no less than three separate external drives... at least one of which I keep at work rather than at home at all times! I have also just bought some thumbdrives I intend to use for the same purpose. Overkill perhaps, but I'll never lose anything ever again! I lost lots of stuff about eight years ago because of a computer crash; but by God it won't happen again!!!
CDs and DVDs are okay too if you have nothing better, but they take much more time to copy stuff onto and are damaged too damn easily. External drives and thumbdrives rule!
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: home alone together

Postby boundboy » Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:14 am

sorry guys for the wait, been extremely busy..... I've tried to comeback to it, but never found the right opportunity. anyway sorry again guys. here is part 3.


part 3: new toys


Two hours later, Matt returned. i heard a bag drop on the floor. "Joshua, i can't have you conscious right now so i';m going to put you to sleep," said Matt. he then covered my face with something i didn't recognize, but for some reason, i went unconscious.

some time later, i woke up. i wasn't in a hog tie anymore. i was now dangling 2 feet from the ground with my hands tied above me to the roof and my legs tied. i was still naked with my boxers on but my blindfold was still on. instead of the sock in my mouth and scarf tied around my mouth, there was instead what felt like a handkerchief with tape wrapped around my head. "mphhhhhhh," i cried, but i could barely make a sound.

"i see you're awake josh," i heard Matt say. "now it is time to have some fun." he tickled me a lot under the armpits and my feet.

"mphhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" i screamed! he continued this for at least 30minutes. after he stopped i was out of breath and felt like i was dying. i had tears fall out of my eyes from all the muffled laughing.

"OK I'm done with tickling for now," Matt said. " let me show you this thing i bought at the store." just then, i felt massive pain on my nipple as he clamps something on them.

"mphhhh!!" i screamed once again.

"hahaha!" he laughed then yawned. "wow it sure is late, 12am already." i'm going to go to bed for now, see ya in the morning josh."

"mppphhhhh," i tried to say, 'aren't you going to untie me?" but instead he said, "oh I'm going to put you back to sleep so you don't disturb me." he once again put the cloth on my face and i soon fell into a deep slumber. never knowing what would come next.

THE END
Last edited by boundboy on Sat Dec 25, 2010 8:48 am, edited 1 time in total.

Re: home alone together

Postby Jay Feely » Sun Nov 14, 2010 11:20 am

Incredible story. The introduction, and chapters following that expressed a sense of being trapped at the hands of your friend. Good parts indeed :big:
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: home alone together

Postby fratboydanny » Sun Nov 14, 2010 1:50 pm

very nice continuation. Thanks!

Re: home alone together

Postby Chase Ricks » Sun Nov 14, 2010 4:32 pm

Well worth the wait indeed.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: home alone together

Postby sarumansauron » Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:45 am

Shane Bikman wrote:Well worth the wait indeed.


I agree. Very good continuation! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

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