## Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration)

Post by Estelle » Wed Jun 09, 2010 4:21 pm

Author's Note: This story is purely fictional (but the fictional TUG forum said nothing sexual in nature was allowed there, and the story will most likely go that route), but I hope it's still a lot of fun. Basically, I've had the idea ever since reading the stories of Eloise, as she reminded me of myself, and MY experiences. I mentioned in passing that we should write one together, and it seemed like many people agreed that it could be a great idea, so here we are! I know that we both are working on stories currently, but they can wait, as I feel like I'll have a lot more fun with this. The way it will work is I will type a segment of the story from my point of view, and then dear Ellie will write the next portion from hers, and hopefully the contrast in our writing styles isn't too much to handle. While I normally like to use a LOT of detail when writing fiction, I'll try and not go overboard with it, as the readers will be more interested in more action happening than really visualizing each and every detail about very little action. So, without further ado...
I stepped out of the store and immediately noticed that a few of the lights in the parking lot were out. I looked around for my car, having forgotten where I parked, but quickly located it, a good distance from the door.
"Oh, great," I said to myself, "I have to walk through a completely pitch black dark area in order to get to my car. Oh well, it's a short walk, and I doubt anything will happen especially if I hurry."
So, I, a young 18-year-old girl who was slightly bicurious with very long blonde hair, long legs, and very curvy breasts, started to walk to my car, carefully eying around as a very eerie feeling came over me. I stopped and looked around, seeing if anyone could be looking at me for following me, but when I saw nothing, I continued on ahead, walking and swinging my hips, trying to look as sexy as possible for any cute guy that may notice me.
I got really nervous as I walked into the dark area.

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Eloise » Thu Jun 10, 2010 7:27 am

Hey guys! My part, hope I don't dissapoint!
As I stood out of sight looking at this blonde girl in a desserted parking lot, trying to look sexy, I couldn't help but wonder... Why was I doing this?
She reached her car and got her keys out, I took this as my cue, I shoved a balled up sock into her mouth and kept it in with a scarf. I through her on the floor and sat on her legs as I tied her hands together behind her back, crossed-over, then her ankles together.
I opened the boot (trunk for you yanks) as she struggled on the floor then shoved her into the boot, closed the door and sat in the drivers seat.
I went through her bag, took any money or valuables I could find, checked my bag to see if I had everything, put the car in gear, and drove to my destination...
Over to Esty
The mistress of TBC...

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by bondagefan » Thu Jun 10, 2010 2:08 pm

Very good so far girls,Estelle give us an idea of clothes you could be wearing.

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Estelle » Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:37 pm

As the sock was shoved into my mouth, I screamed, hearing only muffled sounds as a sudden panic came over me. Fact was, nobody could hear me, and my the time I came to this realization, my hands were firmly pulled behind me and in the process of being tied, held together well enough that I couldn't struggle. As my ankles were tied together, I suddenly came to an even bigger realization that I was now helpless, and I tried screaming and writhing every way possible, by my gag kept anyone from hearing me, and my bonds kept me from struggling at all.
As she picked me up and threw me into the trunk, I caught a glimpse of her and noticed she was stunningly good looking, although my captor, and there would be no way I could like her, pretty or not. She dumped me into the trunk, and I caught another glimpse of her, seeing that she was even more good looking than I originally thought. She closed the trunk on top of me, and I knew then that there would be no way I could get out, hands free or not, as I was locked in my own trunk. I felt her take off and tried to keep as stable as I could in the trunk, not wanting to roll around and possibly get hurt, but with my hands tied and feet tied, there was nothing I could do, and occasionally rolled and bumped into the sides, although I was more worried about what was in store for me and what she was going to do to me or try on me than I was about bumping into the sides. Eventually, the car stopped, and the trunk opened, as my eyes tried to focus on her again.
"Well, look what we have here!" the beautiful girl smirked at me and reached down to grab me. As she did around my hips, I quickly jerked, as my sides were extremely ticklish, although I did not want her to know. "Ooohh, I'm going to have so much fun with you!" she said before gently tickling my sides which sent me into a frenzy as I tugged against my bonds and screamed into my gag which only let out a muffled sound. She threw me over her shoulder and started carrying my into her destination as I lowered my head, accepting my fate as her prisoner, although I didn't want to be, and I hoped nothing would happen to hurt me.
Over to Ellie

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by dex » Thu Jun 10, 2010 10:29 pm

this is a really good story, but just out of interest, what happens if one of you doesn't like what the other wrote??? do you just move on or consult beforehand???
Being bisexual is the worst of any world because you don't really belong anywhere, because you are never sure of yourself or those around you. You can't trust in anyone, their motives or their intentions. And because of that, you have no true identity.

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Estelle » Fri Jun 11, 2010 12:17 am

Well, when we agreed to do a collaboration, I believe we both knew beforehand that we wouldn't be on the same page in EVERYTHING we write. I doubt there will be much I don't like that she writes (as I've read her stories and love them), but if there is, I'll just write around it! And we've talked a little over PMs, but nothing about the content of the story. If we run into a problem, we can figure it out via PM!

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by shadow20 » Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:32 am

there both great writers/storytellers. I'm sure this will be really good. It's been great so far, keep it up girls! Can't wait to hear more.
By the way people, I am back! Due to an unfortunate accident i have been unable to get on this site in awhile, but i will be finishing my story, "Forced to stay home" right now!
Anybody want to talk about bondage or my experiences i would love to talk, PM me.
You talk too much, but I know how to fix that!

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Eloise » Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:39 am

> Estelle wrote:Well, when we agreed to do a collaboration, I believe we both knew beforehand that we wouldn't be on the same page in EVERYTHING we write. I doubt there will be much I don't like that she writes (as I've read her stories and love them), but if there is, I'll just write around it! And we've talked a little over PMs, but nothing about the content of the story. If we run into a problem, we can figure it out via PM!

Thanks, love yours too! Yeah, that's what's going on basically...
My part -
I sat her down on a wooden dining chair and tied her hands to it behind the chair before tickling her ribs again, she screamed through the gag and I removed her shoes, I started tickling her feet, she tried to fight me off and kicked me, "You'll pay for that!" I warned.
I tied her bound legs to the chair as she fought her bonds as I tickled her again. She screamed with laughter few the gag and I saw driplets of sweat on her head and put a pillowcase over her head, blindfolding her.
"If you're lucky, you might get a shower later..." I laughed. I then went to the kitchen and came back with a bucket of ice, "Let's cool you off." I teased picking up a few cubes of ice...
Have fun Esty!
The mistress of TBC...

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Estelle » Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:22 pm

As the pillow was tied over my head, I lowered it, and felt myself start to cry. Not only was I helpless to talk, but now helpless to see what was going to happen to me. And yet, at the same time, I could feel myself getting hot. I had always wondered what it was like to be tied up, and it was quite a rush to be completely helpless to stop my captor from exploring my body. And the fact taht she had mentioned giving me a shower later, really started to turn me on. I struggled against my bonds, but could hear her coming back.
"Let's cool you off," she said, grabbing a piece of ice and rubbing it along the back of my neck. It made me jump and squeal, as the super cold, sharp sensation shot through my whole body. "Aww, how cute," she said, using her other hand to tickle my sides which made me squeal and laugh into my gag, not wanting to, but unable to keep from doing. "It would be easier if you didn't have that shirt on," she said, making my eyes grow wide, although she couldn't see them. She returned only seconds later and said, "Your shirt is coming off whether you like it or not. So you can be still and let me safely cut it off, or you can struggle and risk getting cut. Either way, it's coming off." I nodded my head and felt her slowly but surely cut my shirt off, revealing a full 36DD bra. "Oh, wow! Jackpot!" she said as she slid a piece of ice into each cup. I squealed and began squirming as much as possible to try and shake the ice free, but to no avail. "I like the look of that! Please, continue!" she said, so I stopped and squeezed my eyes together, wincing at the intense coldness of the ice cubes pressed against my nipples which were hardening. "Oh, okay, then I'll make you!" she said, lightly tickling my legs which made me squirm violently in vain.
"I think you can afford to lose the pants as well!" she beamed at me, cutting them off in the same fashion, leaving me in a black thong. "Wow, how sexy," she admired my body. I lowered my head and she giggled. "Oh, come on! I saw you trying to look sexy earlier! Well, it worked!" She dropped a piece of ice down the front side my thong and then reached down and lodge the ice into me which made me scream to the top of my lungs into my gag and beg her to let me go and stop torturing me. She must have heard me. "But you're so sexy and fun to torture! My own little plaything." It sent a shiver down my spine when she called me sexy, and her little plaything. I continued to writhe in my bonds, but my struggles became weaker and weaker, and I made no progress in freeing my clit or tits from the ice.
"Well, looks like I've had all the fun I can have with you in this position. What do you say we put you in another position, but without the bra?" she asked.

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Shirobound1 » Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:59 pm

I like it so far nothing short of what i'd expect from you two, Can't wait for the rest of the story!

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Eloise » Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:22 am

I retied her in a standing up "I" position and removed the pillowcase from her head. I looked into her eyes and said "It's a very nice bra, and if I let you go, then you'll need something to walk home in as you can't to that naked can you?" as I had just cut her clothes in half... "So would you rather I took it off carefully instead of cutting?" she nodded her head and started to cry, I took her bra off, laughing, put an ice cube in her thong and resumed tickling her.
As she struggled, I enjoyed the sight of her breasts jiggling, I tickled her untill the ice cube melted and replaced it with two more and went to my bag of suppleis and got a paddle out.
As I showed her the paddle I said "Guess what this is for!" she started screaming like mad as I moved behind her...
The mistress of TBC...

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by dex » Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:52 am

wow, i love tihs it's getting better every second, i will go back look at it, and it'll be better
Being bisexual is the worst of any world because you don't really belong anywhere, because you are never sure of yourself or those around you. You can't trust in anyone, their motives or their intentions. And because of that, you have no true identity.

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Estelle » Sat Jun 12, 2010 10:05 pm

I sent her a hateful look with my eyes, to which she replied with a chuckle before reaching back and slapping my ass hard with the paddle. I screamed into my gag to which she smiled. She stood behind my and cupped my left breast in her hand as best she could, as it was bigger than her hand. She then hit me again, and I screamed into the gag and tried to jerk away from her which caused her to increase the grip on my breast.
She then walked to her bag and grabbed a crop. "We'll save Mr. Paddle for later. For now, I'm going to untie your feet. You'll see why." She then untied all of the ropes holding my legs together. "Spread em!" she said. I shook my head no, and she grabbed my hair with her free hand and forced me to look into her eyes. "Listen to me. You're my little bitch, so it would be wise of you to behave. Over time, I'll definitely break you, so you can make it easier on yourself. You're here forever if I want you to be." I shed a tear before nodding and trying to spread my legs. She responded by whipping my pussy with it, and it was intensified by the cold of the ice that had melted. This hurt so much that I kicked her with my now free feet.
"Oh, NOW you will pay!" she said at me with rage in her eyes. She grabbed my thong and jerked it off of me, revealing my pussy which caused me to scream into the gag and jerk my thighs together. "Oh, no you don't!" she said and tied a rope around my left ankle before pulling it to the side slightly and tying it to a hook in the wall. She did the same with my right foot, forcing my legs apart. "Ohhhh! I see you're pretty turned on! You're a dirty little thing, aren't you?" She hit me with the crop again, and I yelped, but could do nothing to stop her as she smacked me repeatedly.
"Now, you think you can behave?" she asked me. I nodded. "Are you my little bitch?" she asked me. I didn't respond and she repeatedly smacked me again, a pain I could no longer take as I writhed uncontrollably in my bonds. "Are you?" I lowered my eyes and nodded my head. "Good girl!" she said before massaging each of my breasts for a moment before pinching each nipple. "I may even reward you!" she said and walked over to grab a vibrator. "Now THIS should be fun!"

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Eloise » Sun Jun 13, 2010 11:47 pm

I gave her a massive tickle untill she started sweating again "You could really do with that shower now couldn't you?" I chuckled then put the vibrator in place and played little a game on orgasm denial then goto some pegs and put them on her nipples, got an ice cube and moved it all over her body before going back to my game of orgasm denial, the game I can't lose.
I left it on and took off her gag before going to the other room to get a...
The mistress of TBC...

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Qarl » Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:14 am

Poor lucky Estelle! Pegs on her nipples... ice and tickling to torment, and a vibrator for naughty naughty sexy orgasm denial. She must be positively WRITHING in pleasure and agony!

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Post by GentleDom » Thu Jul 08, 2010 10:02 am

Wow....simply...wow....i love things like this! keep it going! this is amazing!

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Post by tommyziod » Tue Nov 16, 2010 5:46 pm

sorry to say but i don't think they are finishing.......
It always happens to me, for real

### Re: Kidnapping of Estelle (An Eloise & Estelle Collaboration

Post by Opinionated » Thu Nov 18, 2010 6:44 pm

This is .... great !
"Sometimes in quiet desperation you realize it's never gonna be the way it was." - Carole King
"You've just been lonely too long." - Carly Simon