## Request or Coop work: "Mother and daughter tied up games competition" (f/self, f/f)

Post by zenetx » Tue Jun 07, 2016 12:38 am

I would like to do a request or collaboration work about a tie up game story between a mother and her daughter. In short it is about a friendly and experienced mother helping her daughter to discover her sexuality.
This story is heavily inspired by this other: http://www.selfbound.net/storieslr/mother_daughter.html
but it isn't (necessarily) a continuation. It assumes the daughter got caught in selfbondage and had a mind blowing experience. From then on, mother and daughter alternate ever increasing tied up games/bondage games.
About the daughter: she starts everthing out of curisiosity and after have her mind blowing first experience, she arouses interest about the subject and does it for fun and pleasure. Although she acts very dominant, and is always introducing new techniques to tease and torture her partner, actually she is very submissive. She loves lost of control and humiliation plays, and secretly hopes her mother to be more and more dominant, "punishing" her unmercifully.
About the mother: is experienced in bondage, knows very well how to tie up people and enjoys to be tied up too. Although she is more cautious and reserved than her daughter, she is comparatively more dominant (and responsible). At first, she is a little apprehensive/uneasy about being so sexually intimate with her daughter, but after notice a great improvement in her daughter's overall behavior and happiness, she agrees to keep this little secret between them. After a while, she begins to really enjoy to bully her daughter in a teasing way while watchs her struggle helpless.
The story focus is the various bondage sessions, describing in detail each "tying up" scene and "struggling" scene. I suggest story being told from the daugther point of view perspective, but a little third person and mother perspective are fine too.
About the story details: The daughter deliberately (and irresponsibly) break the rules, like leaving her mother tied longer than the agreed ("Sorry mom, I lost the track of time.") and/or "steping up" the game abruptly adding new elements like clamps, shocking pads, buttplugs; and even verbally ("If you want me to untie you just ask." "Mhmmm.(gagged mom)" "Ok then, I guess you want more time.(giggle)" "MHMM MHMM!!!"). Everything with the purpose of "suffer" even more harsh "punishments". No real torture/injure of any kind. No actual sex.
Little details: this story should include lots of ropes, very tight hogties, vibrators, collars, gags, blindfolds, a few heavy restraints, tickling, spanking, teasing and denial, orgasms. May include latex/rubber catsuits, ballet boots, corsets, inflated "toys", posture collars, armbinders, deprivation hoods, chains, bondage stocks, cages, electric stimulation, chastity belts, long term bondage (couple of days), soft whipping.
Mother should progressively endure shorter and more intense sessions, like brutal hogties with multiple stimulations, sensory deprivation, over teasing, multiples orgasms, abandonment play ("Goodbye mom. Have fun!"). On the other hand, daughter should progressively endure longer sessions, more denial, "slave training"; like sleep in bondage, ballgag training, ballet boots training and humiliation scenes; like forced to be naked all day , forced to eat/drink from a bowl kneeling on the floor with hands tied behind her back. She will act reluctant and complain the whole time but will love each second and barely hide her excitement.
I have ideias to many scenarios and interesting interactions like: daugther hides key to unlock mom slave collar. Mom: "Where is the key? I need to go to the market. Stop jocking around now, otherwise we won't play these games anymore." Daughter: "AHhhhh! Come on mom!! You are supposed to tie me up and torture until I confess, besides it's a little cold outside you can hide it with a scarf. Pleaaaaase?" Mom: "Ok, I accept your challenge, but don't complain later if I leave you permanent locked in restraints and chains next time." Daughter: "Pfffff..You wouldn't do that. (giggling and holding the excitement)".
I can describe other ideas in private if someone is interested answer this request/colab. I even have the idea of a good ending.
About me: my native language isn't English but I already wrote (successful) stories in collaboration before. I don't have talent to write (hence the request), but I used to have inspiration for very good stories (if I can say so myself). So I thought would be a shame to forget this one.
I thank in advance for everyone attention.

### Re: Request or Coop work: "Mother and daughter tied up games competition" (f/self, f/f)

Post by xtc » Tue Jun 07, 2016 5:51 am

May I suggest that you write the story yourself?
I am sure that there will be members who will help with proof-reading and/or sub-editing if you would appreciate the service.
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### Re: Request or Coop work: "Mother and daughter tied up games competition" (f/self, f/f)

Post by zenetx » Tue Jun 07, 2016 8:50 am

> xtc wrote:May I suggest that you write the story yourself?
> I am sure that there will be members who will help with proof-reading and/or sub-editing if you would appreciate the service.

I guess it could work this way.
Actually, I'm a very slow writer. My stories sound awesome inside my head but I lack the talent to write (in a way to feel proud about it), so usually I get bored before finishing and end up giving up. Nevertheless, I believe I can bring myself to write like 90% of it (I usually get stuck to fill small story gaps), if someone cadidates to sub-editing.
According to the my past works experience, my stories benefit a lot with small suggestions aiming to maintain its verisimilitude, for example: in a place in the text I described a form of punishment in which the protagonist has her corset and posture collar increasingly tight (at first it made perfect sense in my head). After my partner suggestion, I changed it to corset and boots, which made a lot more sense, otherwise the protagonist would have suffocated.
I hope I can call myself a nice guy, I'm very open to suggestions and criticisms, I will do my best to be a pleasure to work with and I won't get mad if people give up or take a long time to answer (actually my last coop work took over a year to finish). My only "requirement" is that my partner has knowledge and enjoyment about the subject matter (what I believe to be essential for unpaid works of this nature).
In fact, I choose this forum believing be what best fits my proposal: a fun, consensual and sexy story (or tied up game if you prefer ). So anyone willing to give it a try?

### Re: Request or Coop work: "Mother and daughter tied up games competition" (f/self, f/f)

Post by fluffymammal » Wed Jun 08, 2016 9:41 am

I'm willing to help edit/proofread your work. I don't mind if you take a long time to finish this work, although checking in every week or so would be best (you don't have to write a new chapter/installment every week, but just saying "hi, I'm still here" or the like would be appreciated). Nowadays, I generally write mature M/m stories (that I generally keep to myself), but I have written mature F/f stories before, involving various fetishes, bondage equipment, etc.
You also seem to put in the effort into proper grammar, sentence structure, and varying word choice, which is always a treat for readers. I'm willing to help, so PM me if you're up for it.

### Re: Request or Coop work: "Mother and daughter tied up games competition" (f/self, f/f)

Post by zenetx » Wed Jun 08, 2016 1:26 pm

> fluffymammal wrote:I'm willing to help edit/proofread your work. I don't mind if you take a long time to finish this work, although checking in every week or so would be best (you don't have to write a new chapter/installment every week, but just saying "hi, I'm still here" or the like would be appreciated). Nowadays, I generally write mature M/m stories (that I generally keep to myself), but I have written mature F/f stories before, involving various fetishes, bondage equipment, etc.
> You also seem to put in the effort into proper grammar, sentence structure, and varying word choice, which is always a treat for readers. I'm willing to help, so PM me if you're up for it.

Nice! PM sent.