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Post by OGgrl93 » Wed Sep 17, 2008 1:49 pm

moved it.
Last edited by OGgrl93 on Mon Sep 28, 2009 9:20 pm, edited 10 times in total.

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Post by Boundgal08 » Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:33 pm

For a first time writer, your story was pretty good, but try to use paragraphs in future stories you write, makes it a lot easier to read, and not just a chunk of writing, many people wont read it if it is like that, jus thought id let you know.
BOUNDGIRL!
Probably the kinkiest woman you will ever meet!
I am a switch, I like to put a man in ropes and also have a man put me in ropes!
I am the 'Queen of bondage'

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Post by Fesselfan » Mon Sep 22, 2008 6:28 am

I have to agree with boundgal...
a little formating isn't that much work, and it makes a story much more appealing and readable to me.
Cheers
FF
There are 10 kind of people in the world.
Those who understand binary numeral system, and those who don't.

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Post by Daniel » Tue Sep 23, 2008 7:12 am

Pretty good for a first timer!
Your first-person writing style is different in a good way. Keep it up.

### Re: Taken Into Their Own Hands

Post by ilikebeingtiedup » Sat Sep 27, 2008 10:08 pm

MORE MORE MORE! XD