The Adventures of Annabelle

Postby Laurenrox » Fri Apr 29, 2011 8:55 pm

Before I start this, I'm not too perfect at writing, so sorry if no one likes my story. Here are the characters:
Princess Annabelle- 16 years old, blonde hair to the middle of her back, about 5'4, very nice and sweet.
Jack- Annabelle's advisor/admirer, same age as Annabelle, short brown hair, about 5'7.
More characters to come, but these are the major characters.

It was an average sunny spring day in the island of Chrastia.Annabelle was walking into town for a nice little stroll. She had bodyguards, but they were hiding since she hated to be surrounded.Annabelle was wearing a light purple maxi dress with purple heels, and her hair was combed and freely flowing with her special tiara on her head.She eventually lost all of her guards in a shop.She was walking back to the castle with her advisor Jack, when a big black van pulled up next to Annabelle and 4 large men dressed in black grabbed Annabelle and shoved her inside of the van. Her hands were yanked behind her back and tied very tightly. Her ankles were tied very tightly together, and while this was happening, she had a very strongly-smelling cloth held over her nose.

To Be continued, if anyone wants it to be. Just reply on wether-or-not you like my story. Also, if anyone wants an event to happen in the story, go ahead and tell it to me.
Last edited by Laurenrox on Sat Apr 30, 2011 10:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Always the damsel in distress, waiting to be rescued.

Re: A Royal Kidnapping

Postby GentleDom » Fri Apr 29, 2011 9:02 pm

i would love to here more of your story Lauren :)
I am one with the rope! I am the politest Dom, I always ask whats your limit, and if your willing,
If you would like to break them ^.^ *bows* A Gentle Dom, one who still can do it quite well ;D
at your service, and you will be at mine ^.^

Re: A Royal Kidnapping

Postby lasse672000 » Sat Apr 30, 2011 1:13 am

Short, but sweet!
Whazzzz up!.

Re: A Royal Kidnapping

Postby Laurenrox » Sat Apr 30, 2011 10:30 pm

I'm gonna post the next part tomorrow, hopefully I will be able to make this a continuos series.
Always the damsel in distress, waiting to be rescued.

Re: The Adventures of Annabelle

Postby Laurenrox » Tue May 03, 2011 5:46 pm

OK, here's the continuation (stupid evil teachers)

Annabelle awoke hours later. She tried to move her hands to rub her eyes open, but she found that she couldnt move her hands, as they were tied tightly behind her back. She tried to move her body and legs, but she found that she couldn't move at all. She tried to scream for help, but she had a big pink ball gag in her mouth, covered by duct tape. Someone came into her dungeon-like cell and said to her in a malicious tone, "Ah, so you're awake now, I was wondering when you were gonna be up." As she was talking, she started un-tieing Annabelle from the chair, but she left the blindfold and gag on and her wrists stayed tied behind her back and her ankles were tied together. Annabelle was roughly carried up some steps and set in a bar stool. Her gag was removed and she was being fed some macaroni and cheese and water. She greedily gulped down her food as her gag made her thirsty, and she had not eaten in hours. Annabelle was then carried again into the van and fastened to the seat by many seat belts.By the partially open front window, Annabelle could tell that they were going out into the mountains. The van came to a halt and Annabelle was carried into a small little secluded cabin. The cabin was made of wood, had 3 bedrooms, 2.5 bathrooms, an attic, and a basement. Annabelle was un-blindfolded, and a collar with a rope leash was attached to her. She was led into the basement, which looked like a dungeon with many, many different items. Annabelle was shoved into a small bathroom with a shower, a toilet, a sink, and an everyday outfit consisting of a lime green tank top with little jewels on the top and some denim booty shorts. Annabelle took a shower, washed up, got dressed, and changed into her clothes.When she came out, she saw that all of the kidnappers were handcuffed by the authorities. Annabelle was taken back to her home, and she was safe, at least she thought.
Meanwhile, Jack was having a secret phone conversation."So we're gonna take Annabelle to our desserted island next time?" "Yeah, no one is ever going to find her until we get the ransom."
To Be Continued......Much later
Always the damsel in distress, waiting to be rescued.

Re: The Adventures of Annabelle

Postby Laurenrox » Wed May 11, 2011 5:20 pm

OK, I'm gonna continue over the weekend, I hope I just need to see how much crap I have to do. I haven't been able to get back to my story because of writers block, GLE end of course testing, vacation, and exams that I need to pass so that I can stay in my awesome yet crappy school.
Always the damsel in distress, waiting to be rescued.

Re: The Adventures of Annabelle

Postby hafnermg » Wed May 11, 2011 8:41 pm

I wish you luck with all that stuff!! I definitely want to hear more!

Re: The Adventures of Annabelle

Postby Laurenrox » Fri May 13, 2011 7:55 pm

1. thanks for the support
2. After weeks of writing my story , I finally have the next part for the story so........here it is!!

It has been 2 weeks since Annabelle was kidnapped, and all of the excitement had died down since them. Annabelle was on her way to the local private school that she attended in her uniform consisting of a white button-up shirt with the school's crest on it with, a blue-and-black plaid skirt, and brand-new black dress shoes from the best designer. Annabelle was walking alone on the corner of Sojourner and Dante road when a woman dressed in a track suit came up to her and asked if she had seen her lost puppy. Annabelle said that she hadn't and offered to help the woman look for her puppy, as she had almost an hour left until school started. The woman asked Annabelle her name and said, "Ok, Annabelle, I'll go look by those shrubs and maybe you can look near the outskirts of the forest." Annabelle asked the woman what the dog looked like, and she said that it was a teacup poodle whose name was Snowball. While Annabelle bent over to look in a little hole in the ground, she was kicked to the floor and knocked out immediately. When Annabelle awoke hours later, she was tied with her hands and elbows tightly behind herr back, her ankles and knees tightly tied, which was brought into a strict hogtie, a red ballgag, and a dark blindfold on. Annabelle was inside of the back of a van, on her way to somewhere near the ocean, judging by the sweet sound of the ocean calmly lapping on the sand. Annabelle was taken out of the back of the van, and when she was in the air, she struggled furiously. Annabelle fell on the ground and tried to crawl away, but her captors grabbed her and held her with an iron grip. Annabelle was then loaded into a boat and brought into the lower cabin, where she was untied so that she could go do her business. Annabelle went to the restroom, took a quick shower, and changed into the light purple tank top with denim shorts. When Annabelle came out of the bathroom, she was blindfolded, gagged, and tied spread-eagle to a metal bed in the room. Annabelle was trying to get comfortable when she heard the familiar voice of her admirer/advisor Jack talking to her.
"Hey, Anne. How you been?" He said while he was taking off her gag so she could speak.
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU FUDGIN DOING HERE?!?!"
"Now, now, that's not how you speak to someone who chooses what happens to you."
"YOU LITTLE BASTARD YOU ORGANIZED THIS, DIDN'T YOU!?!? YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!!!!!"
"You are being very rude to me, and you tried to escape. It seems that you need to be punished, young lady."
Annabelle's eyes grew wide as Jack produced toothbrushes, a hairbrush, feathers, a riding crop, and an old-school wooden ruler. Jack replaced Annabelle's ball gag in her mouth. He then began to whip her repeatedly. What he did next, however, was the worst of all inhuman tortures possible.

Feedback appreciated and if anyone wants a certain event to happen in the story, PM me or just put it in a reply.
Always the damsel in distress, waiting to be rescued.

Re: The Adventures of Annabelle

Postby Laurenrox » Sun Jun 05, 2011 11:58 am

I will continue this story in the next few days, sorry for not posting in such a long time, with the start of summer, disney world, and me leaving soon for 3 weeks, I wasn't able to write.
Always the damsel in distress, waiting to be rescued.