The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Mon Sep 20, 2010 1:30 pm

This is a new role play and you play a character that rescues people from tugs situations.
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You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:52 pm

I choose to be a rescuer only because too many times I have been a captor on here Jay.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:32 pm

Okay. Welcome to the Relam. Select one item that you find it easy to complete a rescue later on:

1. Chain Saw
2. Scissors
3. Pliers
4. Drill
5. Tear Gas
6. Make your own up
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Tue Sep 21, 2010 10:05 am

That dragon has nothing to do with the role play other then the fact that I thought it would be fun to put it there as my icon of this role play.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Tue Sep 21, 2010 1:48 pm

I choose to make up my own.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:56 am

Okay
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:57 am

Shane Bikman wrote:I choose to be a rescuer only because too many times I have been a captor on here Jay.


Just for you to know, if no one else is interested, I would create situations for you to rescue me by.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:53 pm

Rpers beware. For Jay only at this time will I show mercy.
But from now on if one creates a similar rp and I am the only one
but the creator to post, things will become unpleasant on this site!
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:03 pm

This will be told in 3rd person, but the mission is the same. Defeat the enemies and rescue me:

Jay Feely, aged 20, is just an ordinary student. He is walking down a forest wearing shorts, a t-shirt, wrist band of his school, and red striped socks with strapped shoes. He is accompained by his friend Ed, but they are side tracked, and Ed is separated from his friend. Beyond the path is the restriction zone where college kids are captured and never seen again by the Tribal Council. Jay has heard stories of this place, but has denied its urban legend and has decided to head into the zone.

He takes off his shirt before entering the zone due to the hot temperatures of the area. He takes a couple of breaths before entering the zone. At first, nothing seems out of the ordinary because he is able to cross half way into the forest restrictive zone, but when he reaches a fork, he is jumped by the tribal councils. Jay tries to fend them off, but with the power of 4 boys, he is unable to prevent the inevitable as they tribal council uses body scissors and sleeping hold to knock him out unconciouness.

When Jay awakes from his slumber, he finds his hands handcuffed to a pole behind his back, and his feet chained together. The boys are tickling him real hard, and he is laughing like crazy. Your mission is to influrtruiate the base, and tie up the perps and saving Jay. Be Warned however because they know wrestling and will use that to their advantage. Good luck friend.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:14 pm

Hearing sounds of distress, I decide to help out Jay. Dressed completely in camoflague fatigues with a mask too, I sneak past the sentries one at a time, putting them all in sleeper holds and then tying them face first to trees with gags and blindfolds on before taping them spreadeagled so their limbs are tied around the front of the trees. Getting into the main base, I see Jay restrained and being tickletortured. Throwing a grenade full of laughing gas, soon I see the clearing full of Jay and his captors laughing. Taking advantage of them being inconvenienced, I take out about 20 feet of onesided rubber cement glued to a rope and use it to tie them up while tickling them so they cannot escape. After finishing that, I remove their shoes and socks and gag them with their shoes by tying the laces behind their necks and blindfolding them with their socks. Then I pick the locks restraining Jay by hand only and allow him to get revenge on his former captors however he wishes.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:27 pm

Thanks Shane Bikman. For that, you get 10 pieces of gold.

Your next task will be posted tomorrow night.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:34 pm

Bring it on. My mind is greater then any weapon!
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Thu Sep 30, 2010 9:36 am

Shane Bikman wrote:Bring it on. My mind is greater then any weapon!


Jay is walking down a castle road leading to the Knive Army. Now, these guys are more vicious than his previous encounter with the Tribal Council. They like to capture any boy or girl that dares to trespass into their area. However, Jay is in so much trouble because he had not done his research, and has ventured into the castle by mistake, and as he is walking down the path, he is surrounded by the army. Jay is not very strong, but he tries to fight them off using a series of taticial moves, but the army punches him in the guts, and Jay falls down in pain holding his tummy. He is powerless to prevent the army from tying his hands and feet together. He is then carried into a room and left there. Now, this room is trickier than most areas. You would need to obtain a key card from on of the guards, and then enter a 5 digit combination lock to access the other side of the room. Inside the castle, you need to be careful not to get burned by motion lasers, be caught in the spotlights, or step on the lava floors, hidden but only seen with a orange glare. Also, Jay is losing 5% of his memory per every hour he is in the room hogtied. That is the torture induced by the Knive Army, so once you save him, you would need to help him regain his memory.

Mission: Obtain the key card and combination code to save Jay Feely

Enemies:

Matthew, the stink: Watch out when fighting him because as his name implies, he is really stinky. His armpit farts is powerful enough to be used as a sleeping powder that will cause you to be knocked out unconscioness. He is 18 years old, and has gotten a reputation for attacking people from behind, so be on your lookout.

Devon, the key card holder: This guy seems to be short and weak, but do not underestimate his power. He carries handcuffs and leg irons to subdue an intruder and take them to the locked room. He has on a green cap, and being 21, he is the strongest of all the people. The only way for you to defeat him is to fight him using nothing more than physical attacks, like wrestling, karate, or takwando.

Nathan, the boss: This guy is 22 years old, but he is the only one with the combination lock to rescue Jay. In order to disable him, you would need to find a sword, and prepare yourself for the toughest sword fight of your life inside his chamber in the other end of the castle. You have to strike him twice to win, but should he beat you, you would be hogtied and suffer the same fate as Jay.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Thu Sep 30, 2010 12:31 pm

I dress myself as a ninja and turn on the "Stealth" mode of my clothing and weaponry to avoid the spotlights. Wearing infrared goggles to escape the motion lasers and also to avoid stepping on the lava floors by accident. Sneaking in, I first come across Matthew the stink. Thinking ahead, I already have a gas mask on just in case my own sense of smell is unable to block off his stinky attacks. I sneak up behind him and send him to sleep with knock out gas inserted into tiny vials that I fire through a blowgun. Finally I tape his limbs, mouth, and eyes closed and bring his radio with me so if the others attempt to contact him I can mimic his voice to fool them. Two enemies left to go now.

Carefully making my way through the castle, I next come upon Devon. Before he spots me, I remove all the weapons type equipment from my arsenal and then give him a spear and jackhammer, wrestling moves guaranteed to leave him in a world of pain. To be safe though, I also tombstone piledrive him three times in a row. As soon as I feel him lying unconcious, I restrain him the exact same way as I did Matthew earlier. That done I relieve of the key card. One enemy to go now.

Remembering that Nathan can only be defeated in a sword fight, I unsheathe my Muramasa katana and prepare to hunt him down. I mock him out of hiding by saying, "So you are the big tough boss? Your minions Matthew and Devon were no match for me and I challenge you to an honorable duel by the ancient art of swordfighting. But know this: The more memory Jay loses as a result of me waiting you out, the worse you will be hurt but I will not kill you at all or even cut any arteries." After several minutes of waiting, I hear stealthy soft footprints heading my way. "I see you were not boasting about having defeated my minions Matthew and Devon." Nathan says to me. "Very well I accept your challenge and I am pleased to see you have a legendary sword with you too no less. Taking that from your unconcious body will just add more to how ashamed you will feel when I defeat you." "Enough talking! Let our swords do the talking from now on!" I tell Nathan and then await his first attack."
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Thu Sep 30, 2010 7:50 pm

OOC: Jay I apologize. I really wanted to see how well you could fight me as your own captor. Now though you will have to forgive me for defeating Nathan.

IC: Nathan attacked from the left but I was prepared and quickly jumped back and then flipped over him as I tossed my sword from one hand to the other so that when I landed I drew first blood by slashing his left cheek. "You are not the only one who can fight with both hands." Nathan says as he too switches swordhands and attacks me again. Then suddenly he throws some sand in my mask goggles, temporarily blinding me. Acting quickly, I do a whirlwind sword slash in a full circle then do it again in the air. As my goggles clear up, I see that I have won because Nathan is holding one hand over the stump of his severed shoulder. "What is the combination to the lock?" I ask him. "Tell me fast or I will slice off your remaining limbs one joint at a time. Speaking fast, Nathan gives me the combination. I then bring him with me after chaining him up in the irons I confiscated from Devon to the door seperating Jay from freedom. As promised the combination works and I quickly free Jay and then put Nathan, Matthew and Devon inside there with only one radio and enough food to last for a week only before locking them inside and leaving the key card outside. Then I help Jay to get free of his restraints and together we leave the castle.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Thu Sep 30, 2010 8:50 pm

Jay Feely is heading into his vehicle from the Parking Lot of a Mall in a quiet desolated town. He should have read the label of the town of Green Valley, that "People goes missing". There is a group of people called the Town Demons who pry on people on all ages. Jay was having trouble finding his keys since it is in a chain. Suddenly, he is muffled from behind by a hand gag covering his mouth. He realizes that danger is near, and he thrusts his free right hand to the person's chest. This proves to be a mistake because his attempted kidnapper grabs his hand, and painfully twists in an angle. Jay Feely wimpers in pain, but sleeping gas is used on him from a second attacker. In the process of Jay Feely being sleeping by the gas, the kidnapper ties Jay's hands behind his back, ties his legs, and ties hands to feet. They also gag him with a piece of cloth tied around his mouth. He is blindfolded by a sleeper mask. Ropes is tied around his thighs, biceps, fore arms, triceps, knees, and torso, securing him tight.

The captors are:

1. 20 year old Brian: He is a skilled fighter in the use of martial arts. He is also able to tap into computers from the police force and intercept transmissions so he could hear everything people are saying.

2. 21 year old Madeline: She has everything possible to confuse a rescuer from sleeping gas capsules being dropped from the ceiling of the confinement dungeon, and using spikes in the floors. She is not much of a fighter, but her charm has coaxed men to fall in love with her, and once they do, they are tied up and forced to be her slave when she spikes their drinks.

Jay is forced into the back of a van, and driven away to a unknown location.

Objectives:

1. Tap into the police station and listen in to the conversations of Brain who is likely to reveal the location of his kidnapped victim. Be careful because if Brian knows that you are listening in, he would move Jay to another location
2. Navigate the Dungeon and disable the traps in the control room. Be careful because spikes on the floors, swinging pendulems of axes, laser grids, and sleeping gas could find you in a deadly bind.
3. Defeat Brian in the boiler's room without using any weapons
4. Interrogate Brian to get the real location of Jay somewhere in the dungeon.
5. Defeat Madeline guarding the entrance of Jay
6. Escape the dungeon with Jay

Good Luck.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Thu Sep 30, 2010 9:23 pm

Ahhhh this will be fun indeed. So Brian can tap into computers huh? I think he is about to meet his match then. For starters I use my implanted supercomputer HARV to hack into the police station computers using untraceable routers. From there I can see everything Brian is saying from a very safe distance. "So Jay is being held in the abandoned run down mine on the outskirts of town?" I deduct with with the help of HARV.

From my home where I did the hack, I take a hoverboard to the mine and then have HARV switch to Nightvision mode. This allows me to see in the dark safely. Ah and yes I communicate with HARV mentally only so no one can actually hear me talking to him. I navigate the mine carefully, avoiding all the traps headed my way as HARV senses them. He sees and hears what I see and hear so I will not be taken by surprise. Getting to the Control Room, I have HARV use a backdoor hack to show me a map of the full interior of the mine after all the traps are successfully disarmed.

Next I make my way to the boiler room to battle Brian. Weapons are not to be used so HARV activates my Bruce Lee martial arts routine and soon enough Brian is pleading for mercy. "Where is Jay Feely at?" I ask him in my most ominous tone of voice. "He is being guarded by Madeline in the deepest shaft." "How do I defeat Madeline's feminine charms?" I ask him in the same tone of voice. "She can't stand the site of other ladies," he tells me. That being said, I use my gun to fire a glue bullet at Brian which leaves him totally stuck to the ground and then I blindfold and gag him so he can't alarm Madeline to move Jay.

Finally I have HARV use his built-in holographic technology to make me look like Michelle Obama before I descend the shaft via way of ladder after disabling the elevator electronically. Once down there, I defeat Madeline with female wrestling moves until she is laiud out on the ground unconscious. I immobilize her the very same way I did Brian and then use some lose shale to release Jay from his rerstraints. Holding him on my back, I retrace my way out of the mine and we escape without being caught in any traps at all.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:11 am

Jay Feely has gotten himself into trouble again, but this time it is during school. He was learning well by raising his hand often and answering questions, but his fellow classmates has gotten annoyed of him boasting about his abilities, and had decided to take a stand. The kids gathered around outside the door waiting for the unsuspectable Jay to walk out, so they can grab him and take him to a location to be tied up. Now Jay had just finished packing his bags and is ready to head out. He barely takes a step out, when one of the kids grabs his ankle and slam him onto the ground. Jay, crying out in pain, is carried by his arms and legs to the jungle gym. They tie his arms to the jungle gym interior, and his feet is ensared by other conencting ropes. Now, the jungle gym resembles a prison because of the bars and circular structure.

Captors:

1. Ken (15): He is the leader of the entire student body. He boasts about his ability to win at games, so this is the only way for you to get to Jay. You must beat him in a game of dodgeball with his three other companions. Steve (14) is known for his agility and quick thinking, so he can dodge balls quickly and effectively. Rubin (13) is known for his ability of offense and attacking enemy lines, so if you are not careful, he can strike you down. Jason (15) is known for his ability to catch balls, so if he catches one of your balls thrown at him, the game is up. Finally, Ken described first is not easy to hit since he is able to bend his body in various ways because he is so flexible.

Mission: Defeat the boys in dodgeball to rescue Jay.

This is a little different than the last quests to save Jay, but you can tie them up if you want, but it is not required. Also, it is 1 vs 4, and you cannot bring in outside help at all.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Thu Oct 07, 2010 9:51 am

Research completed on updated dodgeball rules and tactics since I have not played it in a decade.

"Don't worry Jay. I am here to rescue you." Shane calls out as he enters the designated playing area for dodgeball. Looking around quickly I see that my opponents are all on different sides making this more of an ambush style game then with me on one side and them on the opposite side of the area. So I take aim carefully and do volleyball serve type throws at huge speeds guaranteeing that any who might catch one get hit within seconds by the ball right behind. I get lucky and catch the ball thrown at me by Jason before he catches mine so he is the first one out. Next I do more high speed throws at Rubin while avoiding the balls all heading at me from every direction. And yes in gym I was known for devastating high speed throws so I use that to my advantage as well as using my good hearing to avoid being hit. Rubin is hit in the upper left kneecap leaving me only two opponents. I go after Steve next with a constant bombardment at him with my throws richocheting everywhere to hit him from behind in the back. Finally I go after Ken. Knowing that just one error will cost Jay and me our freedom, I move fast and forward in an attempt to see how fast and flexible he honestly is. From my studying he is as athletic as was said so I take no chances and throw two balls at a time per hand, one tucked under each of my elbows as I shotput them all at him. He eventually goes down hard after two balls catch him in both of his ankles. I then free Jay and ask him next time to be more careful please.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Thu Oct 07, 2010 10:09 am

Jay is walking inside a tunnel, when two motorcycles approach him and snag him in their grasp. Now, the problem is, Jay was so drunk from a night of partying at a frat party that he never realized it. This is your final challenge for the first stage. Do not worry, there will be more after this, but you deserve a break if you can accomplish this task.

Characters are:

1. Damon: He is 21 years old, and knows everything about fantasy life. He dresses up like a knight and uses a real medival sword to slash his enemies to pieces. People has been known to be seriously injured or killed by his ferocity.

2. Hunter: He is the mastermind behind this plot. He lives in a castle suspended high in the air, and has chained Jay's ankles upside down and just mere inches from the hot lava. His weakness is his upper body, but in order to get him down from the platform, you must shoot a bow and arrow at the red target, which is an apple. This is much harder than it looks because it is a moving target, so your aim has to come earlier than expected. Once the apple is hit, the platform will fall, and the real battle will begin, he will attempt to sever the chains keeping Jay up, and six strikes to the chain, and Jay will suffer a painful death. You have to kill him to save Jay.

Mission:

1. Naviagate the maze at the castle entrance

2. Defeat Damon to get the location of Jay

3. Defeat Hunter and prevent him from severing the chains that held Jay

4. Escape alive

Other information:

1. Jay is not wearing any clothing except for speedos
2. The last mission is a life/death mission and is required to advance to stage 2 of this game
3. Saving Jay does not guarantee his safety since you will have exactly 2 minutes to escape through a secret exit
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Oct 13, 2010 10:11 pm

OOC: I apologize for this reply taking awhile, but it is definately worth it.

"So my two opponents say they are masters at roleplaying?" Shane thinks to himself with a smirk as he embarks on this new quest. "The art of rp mastery belongs to no one but I so far. If needed, I could call upon my imagination for help but I do not intend to break the set rules here." Reaching the beginning of the maze, Shane takes out a coin and flips it to determine which way to go. "Left it is then." he says quietly and leaves the coin there. Two turns later he reaches another split. Seeing something shiny on the ground, he picks it up to see it is the same coin he used beforehand. "Now I know how this maze works." Upon saying that, he exhales cold air on one of the walls of the maze and uses his finger to draw a spiral pattern. Every second turn he indicates with a circle through part of the spiral. "Following this will get me out of here easy enough," he thinks quietly.

Within a few minutes he has escaped the maze and now confronts Damon. Equipping a Heraldic Shield and a one handed broadsword, Shane engages Damon in brutal swordplay. Knowing the weaknesses of a knight's armor, he avoids the attacks of Damon and works to slice away his ankle tendons so he ends up hamstrung on the ground unable to get up. Then he kicks away his sword and removes his fallen foes helmet. "Do thee yield according to the rules of chivalry and knighthood or must I be forswearn to bereft thee of thy life fiend lest you deliver to me the location of your captive prisoner Jay?" Shane calmly asks Damon as he holds his swordtip to his Adam's apple. Gulping, Damon decides it is better to live in agony and honor with dignity then to die as a coward without virtue and honesty. He tells Shane the location that Jay is held at by Hunter as well as the secret exit from the castle too. In return, Shane restrains Damon and then heals him of his wounds.

Upon arriving at the site, Shane uses a Seventh Heaven bow and the Take Aim archer ability to fell the platforn. Then he quickly begins Doubleshooting at Hunter's head and chest area before Hunter can strike the chains and kill Jay. As a last resort, Shane fires Ultima Shot to kil off Hunter. Quickly he grabs Jay and they run out the secret exit before the two minutes are up.

See you around next time Jay.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:45 pm

When Jay is studying, he is roped up and tied naked to a bunk bed in Camp Tied Them Up, and it is hard to navigate through the dense forest populated by animals such as piranhas, but the main threat is here:

1. Dicken: He is 21 years old, and the only way to beat him is to outsmart him in a math competition.

2. Sammy: 20 years old and you must beat him in a spelling bee

3. AJ: 18 years old and you must beat him in a geography bee

4. Thompson: 18 years old, and you must beat him in a science bee

After beating all 4, the true test will begin. Jay would be roatated on the bunk bed, and tortured until you figure out how to stop the machine. Hint: The solution lies in the bed itself, but only you would find it.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:53 pm

Jay I'll go with the math competition first. Which math subject(s) and how many questions is the first competition?
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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:01 am

Shane Bikman wrote:Jay I'll go with the math competition first. Which math subject(s) and how many questions is the first competition?


These are the questions in the next reply
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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:11 am

1. Find the distance between the points ( 7,13) and (4,9)

2. Figure out the surface area of a rectangular prism with the following dimensions:
- height: 80 ft
- length: 66 ft
- width: 58 ft

3. What is log(7)49
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:47 pm

1) 3.14 spaces on a graph.

2) 2(lw) + 2(lh) + 2(wh)
2(66*58) +2(66*80) +2(58*80)
2(3828) +2(5280) +2(4640)
7656 + 10560 + 9280
7656 + 19840
27496
195.82 feet sqaured

3) log = 343.

Hopefully these are the correct answers Jay. I had to look up online the correct methods of calculation due to being out of Math in school since spring 2001.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:02 pm

Good job, but that is just 1/3 of the battle. Next, all of these words have something wrong with them, and you must point it out and the rule.

1. chaep

2. Definition: The one who makes the rules at the school
Word: Principle

3. Definition: An animal who hibernates in the winter and can be avoided by playing dead
Word: Bare

Should be pretty easy with a skill level like yours.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:26 pm

Each is misspelled by only one letter.

1) cheap not chaep

2) Principal not Principle

3) Bear not bare.

Spelling was my best subject ever in school. No one ever could beat me in spelling bees because I was just too fast.
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Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Jay Feely » Wed Oct 20, 2010 8:45 pm

You have not completed the spelling part. You still have to tell me the three individual rules of each word.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Relam of Jay Feely

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:35 pm

cheap : When two vowels go awalking, the first one does the talking.

Principle: a basic guiding force in laws as taught by the ancients.

bare: wrong use of a similarly spelled word in place of the correct word. bare instead of bear. Bare means entirely exposed or nude. The correct version is the animal spelled bear..
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