Vacation- camping

Postby Mr.B » Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:36 am

You've already starting to write your story..? :D

Anyways, this is a great start! But you could be more specific about the characters, their appearance, and most importantly of all, the manners in which "Darren" tied up.

Re: Vacation- camping

Postby OverLooker » Fri Jan 22, 2010 1:28 pm

Sounds like the start of a great campping trip... is there more?
"Mmmmppphhhhhhh"