Breaking Ryan Part 2

Postby Jay Feely » Wed Aug 04, 2010 12:45 pm

When the tickling stopped, Ryan tried to act like a nice guy in an effort to get the boys to untie him, but as he would soon learn, when you bully kids expect to pay a price for it. Steven started to feel sorry for his poor brother, but even he agreed that Ryan hasn’t learned his lesson yet. He asked Michael to open his bag of supplies that he had brought. Ryan became a wimpy kid from his teenager state when he saw the objects in the bag. In the past day, Michael had purchased a bag of ice. He put it specifically in his cooler so it wouldn’t melt on the hot summer day. He then put it in a cold storage bag for times like this. Ryan felt a strong urge to talk him out of it, saying that he was not only sorry, but that he would treat his brother a lot better but before he finished his apology, ice was already being rubbed on Ryan bare chest. Ryan was already succumbing to the cold temperature as he was feeling very comfortable. As this was going on, Dustin opened up Ryan’s underwear and dumped ice down there. Ryan, if he was free, would be frozen cold by this new sensation. At the time, Steven had already left, leaving the two boys to torment Ryan. After several minutes of ice torture, Michael and Dustin got bored, and left the room, leaving Steven alone and still feeling the effects of the ice as it melted. Steven had lost his sense of time, even though it was only ½ an hour since the torture had started with the tickling. However, to him, it felt longer and tiring. Still unable to see his tormentors, he did not notice Steven come into the room, and with a sharpie. He wrote The Bully, one word on each of Ryan’s foot. Ryan might have giggled during it, but it didn’t tickle him. Steven removed the gag because he wanted to hear Ryan’s screams during the next torture.

Steven for the first time felt sympathy for his brother, and let Ryan know that nothing bad would be done to him and that this was only a way to rehabilitee him. Ryan felt a little better, but his brother was going to step it up a notch. Steven threw a bucket of cold water over Ryan’s torso, and it covered him from head to toe. Ryan was confused by his brother’s action because it just made him wet and nothing else. This is less irritating as the tickling and ice. He then realized what his brother’s intentions were when Steven took out water colors. Ryan thought in his mind, you got to be kidding Steven. Ryan was now a human canvas, as Steven made light strokes up and down Ryan’s sides. The effect was like little ants crawling on his bare skin, and that made Ryan laugh louder then he ever laughed before. The water had somehow made his skin super sensitive to light touches. For five minutes, Ryan was being painted on his sides. He was about to lose self control, when Steven stopped temporary. Steven then used the same brush to lightly paint circles on his ribs. This time, Ryan giggled soft, but it resembled a girlish laugh. Steven chose many colors from red, blue, green, and yellow and mixing it in to further add in laughter. Steven kept this up for several minutes, alternating between the colors and mixing it in. When he stopped, he let Ryan catch his breath for a brief moment. Steven stored away the water colors and brush, but he wasn’t quite done yet.

He called in Michael and Dustin and requested the special treatment for Ryan. The boys laughed deviously as they knew exactly what to do. Steven moaned as he knew it couldn’t be good and he was about to find out what the boys were going to do to him. Michael took position at Ryan’s left armpit and Dustin headed to Ryan’s right armpit. They both took out shaving cream, and applied it to Ryan’s armpits, which caused Ryan to protest and threaten the boys. He could not prevent the inevitable, when Michael and Dustin shaved Ryan’s armpits, missing nothing in the pubic hairs. They then did the same procedure to Ryan’s legs. This was agonizing for Ryan because it would make him lose influence at school and in the community. After he was clean shaven, Ryan was given a short rest. During the rest, Michael massaged Ryan’s hands and feet to calm him down for what was coming next because it would not be pleasant. Ryan was nervously awaiting his fate as the boys had taken in a box when they had entered the room. They opened the box, and revealed a container of pasta sauce, mozzarella cheese, and pepperoni. Ryan was bewildered, but he soon realized what the boys had in mind. Michael poured the pizza sauce on Ryan’s chest, as Dustin added in the cheese. When Steven walked in the bedroom, he added the finished touch of pepperoni. Ryan chest felt the effects of the food products as it got cold and sticky. When the boys left his room, he felt a new low. He swore that he would seek revenge when this was over.

However, he did not have to wait long because thirty minutes later, the sound of the garage opening ended the tied up game. Steven quickly told his friends to hide in the closet, and stay out of sight. His mother had no idea of the tied up revenge Steven had planned so Steven was getting butterflies in his stomach and it started to hurt for real. He distracted his mom into making dinner, when he quickly rushed to untie his brother, and get him cleaned up. Ryan went to his bathroom nearby to take a shower, and came out in ten minutes. Steven and his brother went to the kitchen, when they were asked one question by their mom, where is the pizza ingredients?

The boys gasped, as just moments ago, the pizza ingredients was used to torture Ryan, so now they could either tell their mother the truth and get into trouble or walk away as if nothing had happened. What do you think the boys should do?

To be continued
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Breaking Ryan Part 2

Postby Jason Toddman » Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:59 pm

Good second part, though I think Ryan is getting off rather easy so far. Keep it up. :big:
Just a tip: you should keep all parts of the same story together rather than make them separate posts/threads, as eventually they will get separated and hard to find if you make enough of them. By keeping them together you make it easier for all the rest of us to find your complete story all at once and read it in the correct order. To post such continuations just hit post reply (instead of new topic) as if you were commenting on someone's story and then just add to your story from there. That way you'll find all your feedback more easily, and your reader numbers for each complete story will grow higher as well (as people re-read the same post to catch the continuation). :big:
If you want, you can easily still do this by copying your post here and replying / pasting to the end of the other one.
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Re: Breaking Ryan Part 2

Postby sarumansauron » Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:04 am

Yes, good second leave. And I agree with Jason Toddman. All put the parts of a same story committees. Thanks!

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I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Breaking Ryan Part 2

Postby Jay Feely » Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:57 am

Possible Ending 1: Boys tell mother about their bondage games.
Steven and Ryan confessed about their tied up game. Their mother was angry that none of this was revealed to her about their dangerous interest. The boys were ordered to go to their room, and they would not be able to eat dinner. Their mom also said that when their dad comes home, they will be in big trouble. The boys were scared as they limply swayed their hands on the path to the room. They had never done anything so serious before, and they were instilled confidence and never thought that their mom would react to this simple game of being tied up and tortured. Five hours had passed until their mom and kids had this discussion. When their dad came home, all tired from his construction firm, his hands was dirty and feet smelled worse than a skunk. Their mom told their father what had happened. The reaction of the dad surprised everyone. He admitted that it was wrong to tie up people and take advantage of them, but that boys would be boys, and there was no reason to be alarmed. The boys sighed with relief as they went to sleep on the hot, and summer day thinking for more ideas for each other. At the end of the day, Ryan loved his brother for showing him how to be a better sibling. As for Steven, he knew at the back of his mind that if Ryan caused any more trouble, he could have the leverage to tie up his brother and torture him some more. Dustin and Michael went home and came up with more devious ideas that other bad siblings could face, but it was all in good fun and nothing harmless was done.
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You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Breaking Ryan Part 2

Postby Jason Toddman » Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:27 am

That's one good ending. Ummmm... are you sure though you typed that last line correctly? Nothing harmless was etched out?
I assume from the name possible ending 1 that there's a possible ending 2 that may be more fun sounding? :twisted:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Breaking Ryan Part 2

Postby Jay Feely » Thu Aug 05, 2010 1:20 pm

I'll get optional ending 2 uploaded tomorrow.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Breaking Ryan Part 2

Postby Jay Feely » Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:01 am

Possible Ending 2: Boys hide truth from Mom

The boys said they knew nothing about it, shrug their shoulders, and walked away. Their mom opt to make fish sticks with antichokes instead of pizza. As Steven and Ryan went to their rooms to relax, something unexpected happened. Dustin and Michael inadvertantly jumped out of their hiding places creating an uproar upstairs. Steven and Ryan's Mom went upstairs to see what caused the commotion, and noticed Dustin and Michael with duct tape in their hands and rope. She confronted them, and they pointed fingers at Steven and said he had stolen them from the garage. His mom was furious at Steven for not telling her the truth, but instead hiding it from her. She grounded Steven for 2 weeks, and disallowed him to play with Ryan until the time is up. Ryan was happy inside because he knew he would not get tormented by Steven for a while, but in his mind, he wanted to be tied up again. Michael and Dustin was given no punishment because they rattled out their friend, but in the following week, they will know the cost of betrayal.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Breaking Ryan Part 2

Postby Jason Toddman » Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:29 am

That second one sounds like a good hook for a sequel. :big:
Of course, the first one could have one too.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...