Bad brothers part 2

Postby TeenGirl1239 » Tue Nov 23, 2010 9:46 pm

Hey guys, I'm back, I noticed i did not tell what i was wearing in the first part, I was wearing long jeans and a sleeveless T-shirt,Now lets continue the story.Right after jake called up my friends. I was absolutely scared and so i struggled but in vain.The ropes were too tight, and my brothers have been in the army! Its impossible for a teen girl like me win 2 strong army men.And so i just tried to relax. After about an hour, all of my friends had arrived. ( I knew i shouldnt have gave jake and sam my friends phone numbers! ) All of them stared at me with a evil smile and i screamed. MMMMMMPPPHHHHH!!! I dont want them to hurt me! Johnny sat beside me on the bed and patted my back and i gave out a small mmmphh.Johnny:What should we do to her? Sam:Whips? Tickles? Ice cubes? right after sam said that i screamed to my gag, Probably again. MMMMMMPPHHH!!!!'' Ashley:I'll go with tickle! Jake:Lets just cool her down? Sam:I prefer whips cause she stole my $20 last time! ( I really did ) Johnny:How about we do all of them? I thought to myself, I'm doomed!! Sam got a long wooden stick while Ashley brought many ice cubes, And jake just got his hands ready while my other friends prefered watching. Sam: Lets make her laugh hard first! Ashley and jake agreed. Jake started to ticled my bare feet and my ribs. MMMMMPPPHHH MMMMMPPHHH MMMMMPPHHHHH!!!!! ( I am very ticklish ) After 15 minutes of tickles with just short breaks. I took a deep breath after that tickle torture! Then they started to untie me, I thought to myself. Finally,thank god! But in a sudden they rolled me on my stomach ( on the bed ) Then tied my hands to the bedpost up and my ankles to the bedpost the other side! I kicked sams face while struggling, Sam: Your gonna owe me big time girl! While me on my stomach, I was sweating and very tired, and then jake blindfolded me with a black cloth or something.Now i was even more frightened, I didnt know what was going to happen! To be continued!!

Re: Bad brothers part 2

Postby Jason Toddman » Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:14 pm

Presumably you posted this here in Milestones because as a first poster you couldn't post in the story section.
I think you'll find that with two posts under your belt you can post your story there now. Three things:
The Milestones forum is not the best place for this type of post. For one thing few people will even see this story here. I suggest you re-post it under True Tugs (if it's true) or Fictional Stories where it will be noticed much more. Then instead of feweer han a dozen readers you'll have more like a few hundred.
When you post continuations, you really don't want to post them in a new thread like you did here with these two parts; it makes your story very hard to find and follow and feedback on if there are too many parts. The best way for us to read them is to post a reply on your own thread to continue the story, the same way you write feedback for someone else's. That way all the parts of your story are in one place and in the correct order, and makes it easier for the rest of us to read and enjoy. Posting to a new thread is fine when you start new stories though, of course.
As for the story itself; it sounds very interesting. Hope there's more.
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Re: Bad brothers part 2

Postby TeenGirl1239 » Wed Nov 24, 2010 5:56 pm

Thanks alot, I really didnt know much about this website much! thanks for telling