Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Wed Jan 16, 2013 3:41 pm

(This part is an intuduction to xamd)


Hi my name is xamd and this is how I fell in love.

First of all I'm 5'6 and not very strong. I was comeing home 1 night to see robbers in my house.
They hadn't saw me yet so I tried to sneak past the robbers but I got grabbed and was knocked out in a sleeper hold. I was 21 at the time. When I woke up I was in a ring and the people who kidnapped me said fight or face punishment!

Well I chose fight and was beaten badly then I was tied to a chair both of my legs to the chair legs and arms to the armrests.

For sacrafical love
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:39 pm

This is good. Watch for typos though. But I'm just being picky.

Anyway, I'm assuming, since this is just an introduction, you'll be expanding on the whole thing a lot and writing longer posts. Nothing beats long descriptions of a helpless guy and a kick butt chick.

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:44 pm

Yea but when I get on Cpu
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Wed Jan 16, 2013 4:54 pm

I woke up still tied and cleave gagged in a chair. They came to get me and said "put these on your going to fight again." Well I listened to the command and I was face to face with a girl...
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Wed Jan 16, 2013 8:45 pm

She said her name was veronica she was bigger then me and said she was gonna try to get out tonight.

Later that night they were trying to formulate a plan. "Ok ill grab you and say we gotta tie you up to get it over with then I grab the dude that comes up and you just lay there." Veronica said. Xamd just nodded.

During that match after getting beat up they went with the plan. After the match he got tied up by veronica then veronica tried to fight them but got got tied back to back with veronica.
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Wed Jan 16, 2013 11:18 pm

Hey, now wait a minute here.............what's this about Veronica getting tied up? Is she supposed to be the heroine? Cause that's not very heroic.

Anyway, you could elaborate on the fight scenes. Like, you know, have a lot of brutal, brutal violence. Punches, kicks, everything. If you want any examples, check out some of my stuff (yes, I'm guilty. I just promoted my own stories on someone else's story. Forgive me).

But yeah, I'm hoping Veronica escapes big time, and then a real brutal fight starts, and you don't even know who's going to win for half of it.

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 6:25 am

Will update later and yes love fighting will ensue
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 2:59 pm

After awhile veronica and xamd finally wiggle out of the ropes and get caught BUT this was their plan as veronica started the fight by roundhousing one of the people as I attacked another one of the soon enough I was out like a light. When I woke up i was hogtied and gagged. When i turned my head Veronica was still throwing punches and kicks. I tried to yell GO VERONICA but it came out more like the MPPPH. At one point one of the people was fighting knocked her to the ground i became worried. But as he came down she lifted her leg to kick him in the face. Another guy came and she kneed hm in the face.
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Thu Jan 17, 2013 3:42 pm

Yes. That's getting better.

It would be nice to have long posts though. Do you have time for that? You start getting my adrenaline pumping, and then it just ends.

And more description of Veronica would be good. Like, how big her muscles are, hair color, exactly how much taller she is than Xamd, stuff like that. And clothing style is always a plus too.

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 4:21 pm

I don't have a lot of time usually but here's the next pArt.

As she was doing this I felt worse everytime she got hit. Also just incase you wondering were both In shorts and tanktops. While she was fighting I examined her waist length midnight black hair her blue eyes that looked like the sea. She was about 6'5 and considering my bight i felt short. Now once she finished fighting off the last bad guy she came and hoisted me on her shoulder well tried before untieing me. I bandaged her and asked if she wanted to go to the hospital. She said no! And started walking before she realised she needed a home.(she had just got kicked out of her last house)


So she asked me if I could house her awhile so I said sure.
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Thu Jan 17, 2013 4:42 pm

Nice! I like the description of her.

Now I'm left wondering: why'd she get kicked out of her home?

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 4:43 pm

Want me to tell her backstory in her words?
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Thu Jan 17, 2013 4:49 pm

Go for it!

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 4:50 pm

When we got home she was tired beyond knowing so she fell asleep but I had a surprise. Before I awed if she was a heavy sleeper well she said yes then slept. Well I grabbed some rope and started tiring her In a hogtie before she woke up I had finished and left the room...
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 4:54 pm

Hi its me veronica and I'm here to tell ye about how I got kicked out ofmy last house.

It started when I couldn't pay rent as much as I used to so she said pay or get out...xso I went into the owners room and tied him to a bed and placed a note saying IM OUT BRO.
Yep that's how
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:50 pm

Lol. That's kind of funny. But mean...don't if I liked that she did that. Did she not have a job or something?

Also, what's this about tying her up? Especially if it's against her consent......I hope she gets him back for that. Nicely, of course. But still, some payback is necessary.

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:52 pm

O don't worry.
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 5:57 pm

Once she woke up she struggled a bit, until she found a weakness in the ropes. She went behind Xamds and grabs his wrists and ties them to the chair hes sitting him in. She then continued to tie my legs to the chair and secured my arms to the back of the chair and asked your into this to huh? Well I was red faces when she grabbed the ducktape and waraped it around my head a few times.
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Thu Jan 17, 2013 6:13 pm

Hehehehe....nice.

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 6:17 pm

Now should I switch pigs or stay xamds
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Thu Jan 17, 2013 7:04 pm

Pigs?

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 7:15 pm

Pov. Stupid auto correct
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Thu Jan 17, 2013 8:04 pm

That's what I thought you meant.

I would say stick to Xamd's, but you can decide to have Veronica narrate. I'm down with either.

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 9:33 pm

Xamd realised he was at her mercy. I struggled a bit befores she took the tape off. Now have you at my will!
Now will you promise to not bind me without premission! I yelled ok just please untie me!
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Thu Jan 17, 2013 9:51 pm

As she unwound the rope and other bindings same did oneself why he felt somewhat attracted to her but he couldn't tell why..
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Fri Jan 18, 2013 11:20 am

Probably because she saved his life, she's a hot muscular woman, and she just tied him up...

Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Fri Jan 18, 2013 1:58 pm

Shh staple ruining the story!
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Fri Jan 18, 2013 2:29 pm

At that monument I had to ask if she loved me and she answered ya I do because your kind genorous and you have guts... she turned around to hug me and I was ultimately supried to see her crying.
She asked if I needed anyything from the store so I said nah. As I began to learnnmore about her the more I wonder how she fought those guys off.

When she got back she said you.back.room.now. I felt bad for her so I went only to find myself being told to sit... which meant that she was gonna tie me to the chair... she did tie my extremities to the legs and arms of the chair and then asked a question... what is your real name?
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Zandor » Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:36 pm

At this point I wondered how she found out. But I decided not lieing would be a good idea... I said then "names zarinous cafertari I just go under xamd to be safe.

After I said that she slapped me and it hurt like heck but I dealt with cards I had and asked if she had anymore questions.

She did ask more but there is no question that was surprising as this "isn't the Cafertari rich? And famous? Why don't you live at the mansion? And why did you lie?" "I lied to protect you because I ran away from home when I was 16 and lived alone eversince. Yes the family is rich but its hard to live there because of the strict rules and because...because... I don't have parents anymore and I couldn't handle it.
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Re: Xamd's story

Postby Sacrificiallove » Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:59 pm

Interesting turn of events...

I was about to say slapping him was a bit mean, but then again...I might too if a guy whose life I saved had lied to me and I felt I might not be able to trust him.