my weakend tied up(first story please send all fead back)

Postby tiedupbiker101 » Fri May 17, 2013 8:49 pm

Hi my name is Persy, 21 years old. I have a six pack beafed up on my arms and legs. I was getting home from a long bike ride, the front door of my house was open. Of corse I had my cell to call 911 but I did not. The only people who can get into my house are my Mom,gf, and me. So I walked the door. A girl grabs me and takles me and hold me down(tired form the bike ride) I can not get up. I know what is best so I do not try to get away. A voice like my gf(name is Alli) said "left hand behind your back. I did as she told me to. She cuffed my left hand and then said "right hand". Hands cuffed behind my back she pulls me up, blindfolds me and walks me to a room. She pushs me on my bed cuffs my legs to a bed post then she cuffs one of my hands to one bed. Tied spead eagle she cuts my shirt. Half way I yell "Stop it you dick!". THen she forces a ball gag into my mouth. She cuts of the rest of my shirt and cuts my pants and boxers. I am rock hard and she plays with my boner, gives me a blowjob then leaves. I do not try to free my slf because she cuffed me. Thas all for now!

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Postby Jason Toddman » Fri May 17, 2013 9:36 pm

Moved this to Fictional Intimate Stories section because of explicit actions toward the end of thestory chapter.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Fri May 17, 2013 10:26 pm

that was chapter one...

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Postby Jason Toddman » Sat May 18, 2013 6:31 am

Moved this to Fictional Intimate Stories section because of explicit actions toward the end of the story chapter, then.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

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Postby mikeybound » Sat May 18, 2013 8:25 am

Sounds great, but I doubt she'd need you to be tired!

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Sat May 18, 2013 6:48 pm

dude it is fake

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Sat May 18, 2013 6:49 pm

also chapter two will be out by sunday i hope

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Postby mikeybound » Sat May 18, 2013 8:27 pm

tiedupbiker101 wrote:dude it is fake

I know. Just commenting on gender equality :big: . But seriously, this is a really good read.

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Sun May 19, 2013 5:43 pm

ok is i guess i should discribe Alli, allie has blonde hair. When she exhales all the air in her lungs you can see a small six pack. When she flexs her arms there is a little mussle. But she is a GOOD runner.
chapter two:
I wake up in a car being tickled on the ribs. I hate it I am still blind folded so I do not try to find the culprit. I try to move my arms but I can not they are hand cuffed to the head rest. I hear: I think he is awake. So I yell: Hell yeah. Then my the other person in the car, witch is Jill. Jill has red hair small but has muscles like alli. She gags me ans then Alli turns on the song I had a bad day. The next song is Baby by Justin bever(spelling correct.

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Tue May 21, 2013 7:13 pm

of corse torture by song and fyi chapter two will be out in a few hours

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Wed May 22, 2013 6:51 pm

sorry about chapter 3 but here it is:
So there are 2 others in the car(or so i thought) and that one hated me. So the car stops for 2 seconds nothing happens, then 2 hands on my boner ,two and on my balls, two hands trying to slap my face, and two hands on my chest tickling me. So I think 5 people is a party. I was able to avoid the slaps because if the hands were coming from the right i looked to my left. Then the car starts moving but not vary fast , my hands and legs are uncuffed and somebody puts clothing on me. As some as the door opens, I DASH but of corse blind folded somebody walks in front of me and slaps me on the fase then I am walked into a building...

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Thu May 23, 2013 7:46 pm

I am tied in a hogtie on my nees. Still gaged blindfolded facing a piece of glass.Knowing that they could see me I gave them a " you are motherfucking assholes” look. Then a door opened. Ali ,Jill, a boy(we will see more),a girl, and Hannah. Hannah has blond hair, 5 foot 6’ and she is a great biker but a good runner. But I am only thinking about the GAY guy. The guy gets naked and shoves is 6’ boner at my face, takes off my gag then says: suck.

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Sun Aug 18, 2013 6:13 pm

do you guys want me to keep on writing

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Postby mikeybound » Sun Aug 18, 2013 8:18 pm

If you proofread this, then yes. You should put some time and care into your stories.

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Wed Aug 21, 2013 7:05 pm

ok then i will continue this weakend

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Postby xtc » Thu Aug 22, 2013 2:08 am

mikeybound wrote:If you proofread this, then yes. You should put some time and care into your stories.


Agreed!

This is not a story at present; it's just a list.
Sorry!
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

More by the same author: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=22729

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Sun Aug 25, 2013 6:53 pm

chapter 3...i think
So I do not do what he said so he holds my nose shut.I make a small hole so I can breath.Then he slaps my face and I fall down on my side.Then he getts dreased and leaves. So of corse they used metal rope to tie me up. I break it with out a sweat. So I see a chair untie the rest of me, jump up and break the glass with the chair. I get out of the building and see a bb gun. I look around and see a trip wire.So i get some rubber and use it to keep the trip wire armed. I pick up the gun get in my yellow mustang, with black racing stripes and drive it to my house and park on the east side in the grass. I deside to send in a robot. And what I see is an ambush party guarding each door covered.So I get gack in my car , honk three times then drive away. Texting my gf" ha ha ha ha ha in your face”. I get to the hotel and stay two nights, then leave. da da daaaaa... to be continued

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Sun Aug 25, 2013 6:54 pm

chapter 5 chapter 5

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Postby bondagefreak » Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:04 pm

Whoa! You really lost me there...
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Postby Jason Toddman » Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:12 pm

tiedupbiker101 wrote:chapter 5 chapter 5

I think this chapter was a little too short. :worried:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Wed Aug 28, 2013 5:23 pm

so what happened was i get out, go to my house they are there go to hotel then i leave you at a cliff-hanger

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Wed Aug 28, 2013 5:25 pm

also i will make chapter 6 rrrrrrrealy long

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Postby bondagefreak » Wed Aug 28, 2013 6:06 pm

:worried: Making it longer will NOT help. You need to stop rushing and start taking your time.
Put your feelings into this. Once you are finished writing the chapter, read it over two or three times and try to correct the typos and mistakes.
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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 6:10 pm

thank you for comments I will try to slow down. When I am done with the story I will make a inproved copy. But that it when the story is done.

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Mon Oct 14, 2013 6:30 pm

I to tired to write but I will get it written tomorrow

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Postby tiedupbiker101 » Thu Oct 17, 2013 6:44 pm

chapter 6... I think I lost track
So I went to my house and my gf was there.I had my sister's phone and in BLOOD RED letters I texted her quote I AM COMING TO TAKE YOU AWAY HA HA end quote.In camo with binoculars I saw her run out side and at that moment, in blood red I texted her quote WHO WHO HE HE HA HA end quote.She got sand bags and her friends maned the sad bags with airsoft M 16s. As soon as they came out and got comfortable I shot, with out the mask she had on, it would have hurt. They got bonoculars and searched. My older brother was there to, and he thought he could make me move by hiking out to were I was. He steped on my back. To no success I lay there. When they moved one was not there. I layed still. Then one hour by, sun set and they were there. I buried my heavy stuff and ran to my car. Got in and got away I was being shot at.

I have a question. Are big brothers nice. I know that big sisters are only fun to prank. But a yonger brother is scary most of the time.. For about 900,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 reasons as you can see I can not list them in a night.