Hi all,
to help you to write stories about bondage, I will tell you the things which in my opinion are the common pitfalls. Of course this is just my opinion; if you think I am wrong, nothing wrong with it.
1) Language
Let's face it, no matter how good your story is, if it's written poorly, no one will read it. So take a little care to:
-Run a spell check over your story
-Use paragraphs now and then
-Use interpunction!
-Avoid shorthand and internet slang; it makes stories harder to read
-Avoid using the same words too often (e.g. "I tied sara up, then I tied vanessa up, then I tied ....") Think of different words to say it.
-This may be controversial... but I don't like it that much if a bondage is described by every loop of the ropes. Give the reader an idea what you did, and how.. but leave room for some imagination.
2)Characters
Take a little time to describe the characters of your story. and I don't mean just the looks...how they behave, how they act. Example, a story of someone who ties up 3 girls. This can be very enjoyable, but if every girl is just a name and age, it doesn't really catch the spirit.
3) Edit your story
After you wrote your story, read it again. Does it sound good? For me, whenever I read a chapter I just wrote, I find dozens of places where I could make it better.
4) Surprise
Don't be a one hit wonder. Think of new things to write, new turns plots could take.
I once read a really good story from one author, so I looked for more stories from him. Sadly I discovered that most of his stories were the same, down to the point of copy&pasting whole sections!
5) Dialog
Use quotation marks to indicate that someone's talking. It really makes reading easier. And don't put dialog from two different people in the same paragraph. By separating them into different paragraphs, it's easier to tell when the speaker changes.
Feel free to add more!