Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Thu Dec 11, 2014 5:18 pm

Kylad Details
Anyone in the Kylad Military is competent in a style called; Zenaitu, on other planets, known as the light step style. The light step style is based on the idea that, yes, you can beat a man who is much bigger, and stronger than you, but you must use your skills in combat, and hope he can’t match them. It’s a style that few planets know how to deal with, which allows Zenaitu to be a style quite feared.

The planet is called Kylad. It’s a planet, about the size of earth, although that’s a rough estimate in real world terms, however, it’s a planet known for fighting constantly against the Dragonoids, a very powerful group of things that grew up on a different planet. They want Kylad to be there’s now, although for a storage planet, rather then a main planet.

The ecology on Kylad is completely man-made, as it used to be a big red rock in the universe. The whole society would fall down if the Oxygen Barriers, made by Machines, would fall down and break. They, however, have thos things protected by people called Elder Mages, which are, to place it simply, very powerful mages who, depending on thier background, might be unbeaten in the arena for 100+ battles, or just have the power of a battalion in themselves.


The elder mages have two classes within themselves as well, the ones who are unbeaten in the arena, for various reasons, and the ones who have a battalion of power to themselves. They always have people at these generators, no matter what time it is. If put on the battlefield, they are often put there in charge of a battalion, which is roughly 700 each. To be fair to them, 700 is required when the Dragonoids have much higher actual power, physical and magical.

The total population count is according to the last census, minus the soldiers; 2 million. That rounds the total population up to 4 million spread out throughout the planet to a quite a few un-explored areas. They’ve explored roughly half the planet.

When the Zenaitu styke fails, they go into a style much like Krav Maga, which involves killing blows and neutralizing blows more often than not. It’s not much different then the Zenaitu Style, although it uses Zenaitu in a more agressive fashion.


Yet, compared to most Stratocracys, they are still quite powerful due to military. They, on Kylad, believe in object exchanges rather than the exchange of money. That makes a corrupt version of marketing, but, you must figure in that most people only use the market to get food, and other part of it gets got by doing what you’re told to in society.

The total count on the troops on the planet… is roughly 2 million. They have roughly 2857 Battalions on the planet, which is a ton compared to the dragonoids, yet, that’s only the military.

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Next, The neighboring planet next to Kylad, veikr, in old nord, it means Weak, or something close to it. However, in Physical combat, it can beat even Kylad. Compare them to Kylad magically, Kylad would destory them, however, in physical combat, thier people are more or less stronger then most of Kylands military, and that’s the basic people. The military is much, much smaller the Kylands, although more specialised. It has 1000 special opritives, which for a planet, is much much smaller.

They are the only other planet, within the system that they are in, that could hold of the Dragonoids, although for different reasons. They can fend them off because they would cut off supplies, take down select leaders, that whole thing. Due to that, they are actually more feared then Kyland. Kyland is known, yes, but they are not feared. They aren’t feared because they don’t try to strike you down with a fierce strength that they could.

The reason Veikr is feared is because they are ruthless, willing to do pretty much anything to murder the opposition, even cast their own leader to battle.


The reason of this, is because they believe that their leader must be willing to do anything for them, even die. They signed up for this, ya know? Due to this, when the leaders of planets get together and compete, Veikr often wins in the Physical confrentations, also in the hand to hand fights, although it isn’t won just like that.

That fact alone makes them not attacked, even by Dragonnoids, who don’t fear them, rather, they respect them for their power. They are always in a ‘civil war’ which is actually a constant fight to see who’s ruler, yet, if someone were to attack, it wouldn’t be fighting, I’d be a slaughter, the people of Veikr would take them down.

They have an art of thier own, mainly composed of weapon arts, and Jujutsu. Due to the nature of the army, every single person that is of age on the planet knows it The weapon jutsus use Kamas, each person has 2 of them, to fight with. Some have them chained together as a special fighting style, but that’s a rare few.

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I made an effort to make worlds, although this all starts in a bar on Kylad, whichever reason you may have for being there.

I actually have a character sheet somewhat made up.

Name:

Age:

Looks:(Involves both physical and clothing they tend to wear)

Personality:

Weapons:

Magic:(If they have any.)




Here's mine.

Name: Zenaria Zandor

Age:26

Looks:She's very thin, with white skin, and in general nice looks. She stands at 5'8, wieghs 180. She wears a white shirt, and black pants, with a Black bra on over her very small breasts. She also wears blue panties.

Personality:She tends to try to be nice, although, she has a liking to bondage that it seems not many know about. She also tends to find enjoyment in fighting, although she almost always sets the rules in which she would follow.

Weapons:N/A

Magic: Sounds Magic, able to make a loud noise from far away next to someones ear.

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Shanyalovestape » Thu Dec 11, 2014 8:40 pm

This so detailed that you deserve an award .

Name: Lina
Age: 23
Looks:(look like the dota lina :) )
Personality: feisty, like working alone, she tends to think she's formidable and has a bondagw fetish
Weapons: n/a
Magic: fire magic (only through incantation)
Just your average,bondage-loving asian girl

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby chadmc90 » Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:04 pm

Wow...

Let me just say that this is well detailed. When I look at most of the other roleplays in this section, I just roll my eyes as they have highly vague intros, but this one is a rare exception.

BUT, I do have an issue. What is the goal? It wasn't clearly stated(if not at all). I don't know what is going on, other than I'm some sort of alien warrior(or whatever). Are we fighting each other or what? Please clarify this.

Again, it's much more detailed than 95% of the other roleplays here, so good effort.
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Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby tony2 » Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:12 am

Probably just like real life Chad:

Kill, Kill, Kill and torture the rest....
If you believe in yourself enough -
nobody else will figure out you're faking it.


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Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:18 pm

Well, the goal, Since It wasn't stated, since I'm extremely dumb. Basically, I'm going to be controlling the story through posts, but the whole start here is to get you guys together. It, currently, doesn't matter if you get along well, it just requires you meeting. Sorry for being dumb.

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby chadmc90 » Fri Dec 12, 2014 8:49 pm

It wasn't dumb. You likely just got caught up in typing the information and simply forgot. It happens. Certainly not something I would consider dumb. If I thought any of this was dumb(or boring...) I would of just hit the back button. It is a well thought out and detailed roleplay, unlike 90% or so of the others in this section.

But, I have another question: will this be a TUG role-play? It doesn't have to be, as I've seen others in this section that aren't TUG oriented, but I think it would be important to know.
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Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Fri Dec 12, 2014 9:31 pm

It can be, I wouldn't mind either way. It'll involve some situations, but you guys have a bit of freedom.

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Shanyalovestape » Fri Dec 12, 2014 10:47 pm

Lol you aren't dumb. And a mother question, as there is two planets(correct me if I'm wrong),must we pick which planet we are from?
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Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Sat Dec 13, 2014 8:51 am

Later, yes, but that's not important right off the bat. A lot of it is going to be done through dialogue.

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Shanyalovestape » Sat Dec 13, 2014 11:39 am

Oh.. Okay!hopefully this will pick up fast
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Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Sat Dec 13, 2014 1:07 pm

Ok, tieupgal may I just say as a fellow nerd this is freakin' awesome! I really love the detail you put into all this! :)

Name: Devan Kane
Age: 30
Looks: Tall, brown hair, well built, scar through right eye.
Personality: A tough grizzled veteran who likes to discipline his troops with bondage, tormented by the loss of his friends and loved ones in war.
Weapons: Laser Pistols and Rifles, or his bare hands
Magic: Electricity and lightning magic
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Tue Dec 16, 2014 8:35 pm

(Starting rp now, join when needed)

Each of you standing, sitting, in this bar had their own reason for being here. Ranging from a break to more... Nefarious reasons. No one holds them against you in this bar. No reason to. A few things you may notice upon entering, which seem off.

-Unlike most bartenders, this ones quite large, and rarely speaks.

-There's a group of people in the very back of the bar, shady and rather creepy. The group totals to roughly 5 men. They seem average.

- The tavern has 5 rooms, planted into the right side, with the bar being on the left. They are empty.

The rest of people are average. What do you do?

(On phone, trying my hardest.)

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Tue Dec 16, 2014 8:50 pm

I approach Lina at the bar and order a drink, looking around I am suspicious of the bartender and the group of men at the back, I then mumble to Lina

"Don't say or do anything, we're sitting in the middle of an ambush"
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Tue Dec 16, 2014 9:00 pm

I then look over to Zenaria, and give her a nod
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Shanyalovestape » Wed Dec 17, 2014 8:11 pm

I give a nod to Devan,
They're just pansies.. We can take them on easy
Just your average,bondage-loving asian girl

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Wed Dec 17, 2014 8:34 pm

I'll take the bartender, you get the guys at the back
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Wed Dec 17, 2014 8:53 pm

The bartender sighed, and with a loud voice, said "Don't start things in my bar." He then took out another glass and started cleaning it.

(Warning, this bar tender is a previous elder mage and could most likely murder you all.)

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Wed Dec 17, 2014 9:16 pm

I take out one of my laser pistols and slide it to Lina, then pull out my other one and fire at the bartender, he holds up his hand and the beam just dissolves in front of me, so I use my electricity powers to kill the lights
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Thu Dec 18, 2014 5:23 pm

The bartender,as he held up his hand, sighed. He had a single thought in his head currently, one that would not go away. He used to be a gladiator, and the lack of light was not new to him, not at all. He closed his eyes, grabbing a glass from under the table, and throwing it at Devan, without any indifference, but with extreme accuracy.

The 5 at the back, who were mysterious and rowdy from the beginning, got up, and pulled out a knife each, as to defend themselves, they didn't mean any harm.

In all, the rest of the patrons were sent into a panic.

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Thu Dec 18, 2014 6:16 pm

I shoot the glass to pieces, then moving fast, I appear behind him and pull out my knife for a killing blow
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Thu Dec 18, 2014 6:17 pm

The man frowned, and grabbed Devan, and throws him on the other side of the bar. He hadn't used his magic yet, which would be rather scary if he did.

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Thu Dec 18, 2014 6:27 pm

"Damn it! Little help here Zenaria!"
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Thu Dec 18, 2014 6:29 pm

Zenaria shook her head and stayed where she was.

The bartender, using his voice to full extent, yelled, "STOP."

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Thu Dec 18, 2014 6:30 pm

I hesitate, my knife still at the ready
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Shanyalovestape » Thu Dec 18, 2014 8:11 pm

== stop fighting or I'm gonna scorch this place.. And remember..this place is full of alcohol
Just your average,bondage-loving asian girl

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby 31acujoker » Thu Dec 18, 2014 8:21 pm

Cautiously, I back off

"Hope you'll forgive me, but a man in my position can't trust anyone"
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Wed Dec 31, 2014 9:05 am

Zenaria frowned. All she was... was a teacher in the magic highschool not too far from here. She had just come for a nice day at the tavern, get a drink or two, and now these two get feisty, along with the 5 guys in the back, who thankfully, never stabbed anyone. She had decided to use her magic, but for shits n giggles use it with an incantation.

"To those who hold thier hearing dear, I suggest running swiftly away." She snapped, but the sound went to the roof in the middle of the room, and anyone in the room but her would most likely fall back cupping their ears.

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Shanyalovestape » Wed Dec 31, 2014 9:19 pm

I fall down cupping me ears due to the loud sound
I look around trying to find the source
Just your average,bondage-loving asian girl

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby Tiedupgal22 » Sat Jan 03, 2015 1:44 pm

Zenaria got up, and walked over to the girl who had fallen back. She crouched and simplely stared at her.

Re: Galactic roleplay? I dunno.

Postby jdhpiano924 » Thu Jan 15, 2015 10:00 pm

Name:Geoffrey

Age: 28

Looks:A large man with broad shoulders, and a somewhat unkept beard. Wears his uniform most of the time

Personality: A gentle soul of sorts, but can take care of himself in a fight. Leading him into trouble as well as out of it.

Weapons: his fists, or a broadsword.

Magic:no magic, fighting skills compensate.

Walks into the bar....unsure what he is seeing infront of him "What the...."