## The Messenger (WIP), A Steampunk-y Story

Post by Jay Candice » Fri Jul 13, 2012 9:41 am

Whoa. Just whoa. This was very well written, and I enjoyed the dark edge to the story. It's okay that you don't know what happens next, some authors don't know what a thing they're doing. Take your time, and I hope to read more from you.
In the end, it matters not how many breaths you took, but how many took your breath away.
-shing xiong
We are not retreating, we are advancing in another direction
-General Douglas MacArthur
Fall down seven times, stand up eight
-Japanese Proverb