101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby jennybond » Sun Nov 13, 2011 10:12 am

Chapter 1

Fifteen year old friends Kelly and Kristy were chatting as they walked home from Crooksville high school, both girls wore their school uniform which consisted of a grey skirt, a grey v neck jumper with a white shirt and of course the school tie which was grey and blue striped, both girls also wore white knee length socks with black flat school shoes.

“I can’t wait to see the puppies Kris.” Kelly said as they turned into Kristy’s road.

“You’ll love them they’re so cute, I’m so glad your mum said you could have one, I bet you choose the one with the black spot over his eye he’s adorable. I’ve already named him patch.” Kristy replied.

“Hey why is that van in your drive way that is your house isn’t It?” Kelly asked spotting a black van parked on Kristy’s drive.

“I don’t know hurry let’s take a look.” Kristy replied breaking into a run.

Just as the girls were a few metres from the house the van drove off at great speed.

“Did you see who it was?” Kristy asked.

“No it was going too fast. Did you see anyone?”

“No, but it turned down Warf Street that only takes you to the seafront and the old docks.” Kristy replied.

“Look Kris the back door it’s open.” Kelly cried pointing to the open door to the house.

“The puppies are in there.” Kristy cried.

The girls dashed to the back door and into the house. Where they found Purdy the mother of the ten Dalmatian pups asleep in her bed and the puppies were nowhere to be seen.

“THEY’VE STOLE THE PUPPIES.” Kristy screamed.

“Poor Purdy they must have drugged her.” Kelly said hugging the sleeping dog.

“I’ve got to call the police and then call mum.” Kristy said taking her cell phone from her school bag.

Kelly watched as Kristy made her calls.

“What did the police say?” She asked once Kristy had ended the calls.

“This is the fifth litter of Dalmatian pups to be stolen this week and the second litter today, they’re going to send someone over but it may take a while and mum is on her way home.”

“We can’t just sit here it could be hours before the dumb cops turn up lets go down to the docks and see if we can see that van.” Kelly said.

“Alright but first let’s get changed out of these uniforms, you can lend one of my tracksuits or something.” Kristy replied.

The girls went upstairs to change luckily both girls were of similar height and build both tall and slim so wearing each other’s clothes wasn’t a problem. Kristy leant Kelly a white t-shirt and blue and white Nike tracksuit and a pair of white trainers, while she changed into blue jeans with a black hoodie and black trainers. Kristy took small touch and Swiss army knife from her draw and put them in her pocket. The girls were about to leave when Kristy’s mum arrived home.

“Where are you two off to?” She asked.

“We saw the van that took the puppies it headed to towards the docks we’re going to take a look around the docks to see if we can see it.” Kristy told her.

“Well if you do see anything call the police, don’t go doing anything silly I know you Kristy.”

“Alright mum I’ve got my phone I’ll call you if we see anything.” Kristy replied.




The walk to the docks took about fifteen minutes; the girls looked around at all the empty warehouses.

“Where shall we start it’s going to be like looking for a needle in a haystack this place is massive.” Kelly said.

Kristy was about to suggest they split up and call one another if they found anything, when they heard the sound of an engine coming towards them.

“That’s our van.” Kelly said as black van sped past them and drove into the loading bay of one of the warehouses.

“Let’s take a look.” Kristy replied.

“Remember what your mum said about calling the police.”

“Yes but we have to make sure it’s the right van first don’t we?”

The two girls went up the entrance which the van had gone into, and crept inside once inside they hid behind a pile of crates and watched two women dressed in black one with long blonde hair tied in a ponytail and one with shorter black hair, unload a number of cardboard boxes from the van, they were close enough to hear the sound of puppies yapping coming from the boxes as the women carried them inside.

“Let’s follow them and see where they’re taking them.” Kristy whispered.

“I don’t know Kris we have our evidence let’s call the police and get out of here before we get caught.”

“We need a closer look maybe take some photos with our phones.” Kristy replied heading off before Kelly could stop her.

The two girls followed the women at distance down a long corridor as they walked the sound of puppies yapping got louder

“There must be loads of them.” Kelly whispered.

“One hundred and one to be precise.” A woman’s voice behind them said.

The shocked girls looked around to see a ginger haired woman dressed in black standing behind them pointing a pistol in their direction.

“Damn she must have been the driver.” Kristy thought to herself.

“Well well what have we here a couple of little snoops?” The woman said with an evil grin on her face.

“We weren’t doing anything honest miss.” Kelly replied.

“I take it you girls came to see some puppies.”

“You have my puppies I want them back.” Kristy screamed.

The woman laughed

“I’ll take you to the puppies, both of you put your hands on your heads and carrying on walking in silence.” The woman said menacing waving the gun.

The two frightened girls did as they were told, and the woman marched them into a large warehouse which contained lots of cages each containing Dalmatian puppies.

“We’ve got company ladies, I found these two little snoops in the corridor.” The redhead said to the other two women who putting the latest litter of puppies into a cage.

“What are we going to do with them?” The blonde asked.

“We only need two or three more litters of puppies and then our work here will done Cruella Deville have enough puppy fur for her coat we’ll be out of here in a day or two so we’ll keep them tied up until we leave.” The redhead replied.

“Noooo you can’t kill all those puppies.” Kristy cried in horror.

“Tie us up? You can’t do that.” Kelly cried.

“You'd rather we threw you and your litle friend off the end of the pier with lead weights around your necks?” The black haired woman laughed.

“Nooo.” Kelly replied.

“Well be quiet then.”

“You two tie them up while I call Cruella and tell her about our guests.” The redhead who was obviously in charge told the other two women.

The two women made the girls empty out their pockets they took their cell phones and removed the batteries from them; Kristy reluctantly handed over her knife and torch. The two girls were then made to sit on the cold stone floor back to back, and the blonde pulled Kelly’s arms so they were in front of Kristy and bound her wrists tightly together, while the black haired woman did the same to Kristy tying her arms in front of Kelly. Both girls then had their knees and ankles tightly bound together. The women then took a number of long lengths of rope and wrapped them tightly around the girl’s upper bodies binding them together.

“Nice work ladies, don’t forget their gags.” The redhead said as she returned to the room.

“Gags? Please don’t gag us we’ll be quiet won’t we Kris?” Kelly begged.

“Of course you will honey.” The blonde laughed as she took a balled up rag and stuffed it in Kelly’s mouth, another longer length of white cloth was then tied in her mouth to hold her gag in place. Again the black haired woman did exactly the same to Kristy.

“Cruella is on her way over she wants to check our guests out for herself.” The redhead told the others.

Kelly and Kristy tested the tightness of the bonds but they soon realized they’d been expertly tied up and they weren’t going anywhere for while. Tears began to roll down Kristy’s cheeks as she spotted Patch staring sadly at her in cage close by.

After a while the doors burst open and the strangest looking woman the girls had ever seen walked in. She must have been well in her sixties tall and thin her face was heavily made up, her hair was messy it looked like it hadn’t been brushed for ages and the strangest thing about her was one half of her hair was black and the other half black. She was wearing a long white fur coat which touched the floor as she walked her long stiletto heels clicking on the stone floor. She carried a white fur hand bag over one arm and long cigarette holder in the other hand

“Good afternoon ladies let me see the latest puppies you’ve brought me.” She said as she walked around inspecting the cages.

“Good afternoon Miss Deville.” The three women replied together.

“The ones in those cages over there are the latest Miss Deville.” The redhead said pointing to Kristy’s puppies and another cage.

“Very nice, I love the one with the patch I may keep him for myself.” Cruella replied.

“And you two little darlings must be the snoops.” She said bending down and blowing smoke from her cigarette into the faces of the bound frighened girls.

“Now what are we going to do with you?”
Last edited by jennybond on Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:58 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby bindKelly » Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:35 pm

LOL!!

I'm a huge fan of the original story, so this is really fun for me! I can't wait to see how we save the puppies....or who saves us.....(bet we don't get saved for some time, lol)

Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby Old_Villain » Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:46 pm

I'm interested in reading the answer to those questions myself...... :big:

Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby SelenaGfan » Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:09 am

I can hardly wait to sewhat Jenny has instore for Kelly & Kristy.Those puppies
should not be hurt.

Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby jennybond » Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:23 am

Chapter 2

While Cruella was thinking what to do with the girls the redhead received a text message on her cell phone.

“My contact at the kennel club has come up good again another litter of eight Dalmatian pups have registered I have they address right here.” She told the others

“Well what are you waiting for bring me those puppies.” Cruella instructed them.

“What about the snoops, what are we going to do with them while we’re gone?” The blonde asked.

“You’ve still got two empty cages put them in them.” Cruella replied.

The blonde and the black haired woman quickly untied the girls, and retied their arms behind their backs binding their wrists and elbows tightly together, which both girls found very uncomfortable. The blonde then took hold of Kelly’s arms and dragged her across the floor to one of the tiny cages, Kelly struggled but the woman was too strong for her and pushed her into the cramped cage and locked the door. The black haired woman put Kristy into the cage next to Kelly’s and locked it.

“That should keep you two little darlings out of mischief while we’re gone.” Cruella said with an evil grin.

“I have to go and see how the designs for my coat are coming along; I’ll be back later to see the new arrivals.” Cruella told the three women,

Kristy and Kelly watched as all the women left together. The cages were tiny there was no room to move in them, neither girl could find a comfortable position to lie, they just had to hope the women returned soon and they’d be let out.






Kristy’s mum was becoming worried about her daughter and Kelly, she’d tried to phone both girls and was now getting concerned when neither of them replied, it would soon be dark, she had that mother’s intuition that something wasn’t right. She called the police but the officer on the end of the phone wasn’t very helpful and said there wasn’t anything they could do as the girls had only been missing for a couple of hours. She decided to take Purdy who was now awake and none the worse after being drugged by the dognappers, and go and see if she could find the girls herself. On the way she stopped at the house of her friend and neighbour Tom Jenkins who was the owner of Pongo the puppies’ father. Mum told Tom what had happened and that the girls were missing and he agreed to take Pongo and help her look.




In the meantime the dognappers had returned with the latest litter of puppies.

“Take the Nancy Drew and her friend out of the cages and put the puppies in, while I call Cruella and tell her we’re back with the puppies.” The redhead told the others.

Kelly and Kristy were both relieved to be pulled from the tiny cramped cages, as their bodies were beginning to ache like crazy. They watched as the litter of eight puppies were placed into one of the cages and the blonde locked the door.

“Cruella will be here later to see her latest puppies.” The redhead said after making her call.

“What are we going to do with the snoops for tonight?” The black haired woman asked.

“They’ll have to come in our living quarters with us so we can keep an eye on them. I think I’ve a couple of spare sleeping bags in the van I’ll go and get them, you two see if they want to use the bathroom while I’m gone.” The redhead replied.

“Well do you want to pee?” The blonde bluntly asked.

Both girls nodded.

“Very well we’ll untie you and take you one at a time.”

The blonde haired woman set about untying Kelly.

“I’m going remove your gag too so you can take a sip of water, don’t try calling out or it will go straight back in is that clear?”

Kelly nodded.

The woman untied the rag from Kelly’s mouth and helped her spit out the cloth stuffing.

“Thank you.” Kelly said relieved to have the use of her mouth back even if she did know her freedom wouldn’t last.

“Right come with me, remember don’t try anything silly and I won’t have use this.” The blonde woman said pulling a pistol from the waistband of her trousers.

Kelly was taken to what must have once been the main toilet block for all the warehouse workers when it was open; it was now dirty, smelly and horrible. The woman pushed Kelly into a toilet cubicle

“Hurry up and don’t close the door, remember I’ll be right outside so don’t even think of trying anything.”

While they were gone the black haired woman began untying Kristy and removed her gag.

“Please let us go and let me take my puppies’ home, we won’t tell anyone about you or Cruella Deville, please let us go.” She begged once her gag was removed.

“Don’t be silly we can’t possibly let you go now you’ll go running straight to the police.” The woman replied.

“Please we won’t I promise.”

“Be quiet or I’ll gag you again.” The woman snapped.

Kelly was brought back into the room and they were followed by the redhead who was carrying two sleeping bags over her arm.

“I’ll go and put these in the living quarters, bring the girls in when they’re ready. She said.

The black haired woman took Kristy to the toilet block, while the blonde took Kelly to living quarters, which was a smaller room with three sleeping bags spread out on the floor, there were a couple of gas heaters and gas lamps in the room along with a gas camping stove, with some cooking utensils next to it, and very little else. The blonde took Kelly over to large bottle of water and poured some out into a plastic cup for her, it was only a couple of mouthfuls but it was very welcome after having the horrible gag in her mouth.

“Alright get yourself undressed.” The redhead told Kelly once she’d finished her drink.

“What? No way.” Kelly protested.

“Do as you are told girlie get undressed, or I’ll have friend undress you. Don’t worry you can leave your bra and panties on.” The redhead barked.

Kelly knew it was useless to refuse anymore and slowly began to remove her tracksuit.

After a while Kristy was brought into the room, she looked like she had been crying and was rubbing the side of her face.

“What’s the matter with her?” The redhead asked.

“Little bitch tried to make run for it, I had to give her a couple of slaps to calm her down once I’d caught her.”

“Bitch it was more than a couple of slaps.” Kristy screamed.

“Do you want some more?” The black haired woman said raising her hand

“No just leave me alone.” Kristy cried.

“Well be quiet then and get undressed like your friend.” The redhead said breaking up the argument.

Once both girls were stripped to their bra and panties the redhead told her accomplices to tie them up, gag them and put them to bed.





By now it was dark outside Kristy’s mum and Tom Jenkins searched the docklands for the girls.

“This is useless it’s too dark we’ll never find them.” Mum said.

“Don’t give up.” Tom replied.

Just then both dogs seemed to have picked up a scent, and began to pull hard on their leads.

“What is it Purdy?” Mum asked letting the dog go where it wanted to go.

“Look up there.” Tom said pointing to a light in one of the warehouses

“That’s where they’re taking us.” He continued.





Back in the warehouse Kelly and Kristy both had their arms tied tightly behind their backs at their wrists and elbows, the course rope dug deep and painfully into their bare flesh, both girls had their knees and ankles bound tightly together again the course rough rope dug deep into their bare flesh causing them great discomfort and as punishment for trying to run away Kristy was tightly and cruelly hogtied before they were zipped up in the sleeping bags, both girls had a rag stuffed in their mouth and their lips were sealed with a number of layers of clear tape.

The redhead received a text message on her phone.

“Cruella is here I’ll go and bring her up.”

She left the room and returned a short while later with Cruella Deville

“My my, don’t you two look nice and snug.” Cruella cackled as she stood over the two bound girls.

Neither girl felt very snug right now.

“Well good night and sweet dreams my darlings.” She said bending down and giving both girls a kiss on their gagged lips.

“Now show me those new puppies”
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby Chase Ricks » Tue Nov 15, 2011 3:07 am

I love seeing a new bondage twist on classic Disney stories.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby bindKelly » Tue Nov 15, 2011 4:07 am

Shane Bikman wrote:I love seeing a new bondage twist on classic Disney stories.


lol, so do I...since I get to star in it! Thanx Jenny!

Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby jennybond » Tue Nov 15, 2011 8:48 am

Shane Bikman wrote:I love seeing a new bondage twist on classic Disney stories.


I'm thinking of writing a bondage twist on Cinderella maybe has Christmas story, where Cinders kept tied up, gagged and teased by her wicked step sisters.
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Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby bookl0ver » Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:42 pm

oh yh do that! maybe you could do my personal fave, rapunzel?
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Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby dreadnaught3200 » Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:03 am

Cool story Jenny, really creative.
There's a permanent tension in music isn't there? On one hand you have three chords, you know, four four and three chords. Then there's the people like me, who say "Well, why don't we add a fourth chord and put it in five four?" - Bill Bruford

Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby jennybond » Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:11 pm

Chapter 3

Cruella had left satisfied with the latest batch of puppies, all the women were in the other room, feeding and cleaning out the puppies before bedtime. Kelly spotted a sharp knife amongst the cooking utensils, she knew she had to somehow get the knife and slip it into her sleeping bag, and then maybe she’d be able to cut the ropes binding her wrists. She began to shuffle across the floor, even though she was a fairly fit girl who loved to play sport, she found it hard shuffling across the stone floor while tied up in a sleeping bag, but she was determined to get that knife and wasn’t going to give up, she was only a few feet away from the small camping table with the knife on it when she heard a voice behind her

“Hey what do you think you’re doing?”

Kelly looked round dejectedly to see the black haired woman standing with her hands on her hips in the doorway.

“Nice try girlie, but if you can’t be trusted to be left alone, I’ll have to tie you up a little more securely like your little friend over there.” The woman said as she grabbed hold of Kelly and dragged her back alongside Kristy.

The woman unzipped Kelly’s sleeping bag and roughly rolled her over onto her tummy, then she took hold of the girl’s long tanned legs and bent them so heels touched her bottom, she then held Kelly in that position while she tied a cruel tight hogtie.

“There now that should stop anymore sleep walking.” She laughed as she rolled Kelly onto her side and zipped up the sleeping bag again.

Kelly had never been so uncomfortable in her life, the small of her back was already beginning to ache, from the tightness of the hogtie. She moaned into her gag as she wriggled and rolled around the best she could trying to find a more comfortable position to lie, Kristy knew exactly how her friend was suffering as she too was most uncomfortable neither girl knew how they could be expected to sleep trussed up like this. The black haired woman was joined by the other two and she told them what she had caught Kelly trying to do.

The redhead walked over to Kelly and knelt down besides the frightened trembling girl. The woman took hold of a huge handful of Kelly’s brown hair and gave it a hard pull causing the girl to scream into her gag.

“Uncomfortable are you?” She sneered.

“MMMPPPHHH, MMMMMPPPPHHH” Kelly screamed.

“Well let this be a lesson to both of you if you try to escape again you will both regret it. You must both be very hungry by now, my friend is going out for a take away, I was going to tell her to bring something back for you two but you can forget all about eating tonight now.” She barked before letting go of the crying girl’s hair.







Pongo and Purdey had pulled their owners into the warehouse, where they found the black van parked up in the loading bay.

“That must be the van the girls saw leaving after the puppies were stolen.” Kristy’s mum said.

“Quickly someone is coming hide behind those crates.” Tom said hearing a voice coming from the corridor ahead.

Mum, Tom and two dogs hid behind the pile of crates where they saw the blonde haired woman who was talking on a mobile phone approach the van. Before mum knew what was happening Purdey had pulled her lead from her hand and charged towards the woman Tom seeing this also let Pongo go. Both dogs bound into the shocked woman knocking her to the ground her mobile phone dropped from her hand and smashed on the stone floor as she fell.

“Get them off me.” The woman cried seeing mum and Tom as the two dogs stood over her and growled menacingly at her as she lay on the floor.

“Not until you tell us where my daughter and her friend are.” Mum replied.

“I don’t know anything about your daughter; get these dogs away from me.” The woman begged.

“Pongo thinks you’re telling lies don’t you boy? Believe me lady Pongo doesn’t like being too.” Tom said.

“Neither does my Purdey, just us where the girls are and we’ll call them off, if not we won’t be responsible for their actions.” Mum told the frightened blonde.

“Alright, alright my friends are keeping them prisoners on the second floor. Now get these dogs off me.”

Mum and Tom pulled the dogs off the woman and helped her to her feet.

“What are we going to do with her?” Mum asked.

“There’s some rope over there I’ll tie her up and hide her in the back of this van.” Tom said passing mum Pongo’s lead.

“You’ll never get away with this my friends will come looking for me when I don’t return with the supper.”

“Be quiet and get in the van.” Tom said holding the back door of the van open and pushing the blonde inside.

Mum watched as Tom expertly hogtied the blonde on the floor of the van.

“Give me your scarf.” He said pointing to the silk scarf around mum’s neck.

Tom then took a large handkerchief from his own pocket and balled it up before stuffing it in the protesting woman’s mouth. He then tied mums scarf between the woman’s teeth to hold her gag in place.

“Where did you learn to do that?” Mum asked once Tom was satisfied the woman couldn’t escape.

Tom blushed but never replied.

“Let’s go find the girls and get out of here.” He said quickly changing the subject.

“Shouldn’t we call the police now we know where they are?” Mum asked.

“No, by the time those clowns get here, anything could have happened to those girls, we’ll call them once the girls are safe.” Tom replied.






Meanwhile up on the second floor Kelly and Kristy helplessly watched as the redhead paced up and down the room nervously puffing on a cigarette.

“What’s keeping her she should be back by now?” She asked

“I’ll call her mobile.” The black haired woman replied.

The woman dialled an number and waited.

“It’s dead, something is wrong she never has that blasted phone switched off.”

“I know, I don’t like it, something isn’t right. You watch the brats I’ll take a look around outside. The redhead replied stubbing out her cigarette and pulling her pistol from the waistband of her trousers.

The redhead went out into the long corridor and headed towards the stairs, when she reached the top of the stairs she was stunned to see two large snarling Dalmatian dogs bounding towards her, before she could react the larger of the two dogs pounced on top of her knocking her to the floor sending her pistol flying out of her hand.

“Get these crazy animals off me.” She called out seeing mum and Tom.

“Not until you’ve answered a few questions.” Mum told her.

“Anything just get them away from me.”

“What have you done with the two girls?” Mum asked.

“They’re down the corridor in the end room; now get these bloody dogs off me.”

“Who else is with them?” Tom asked.

“Just one more girl, now call off the dogs PLEASE!!” The redhead begged as Pongo and Purdey growled menacingly at her.

“If you’ve harmed a single hair on my daughters head I’ll have them rip you to pieces.” Mum told her.

“Your daughter is fine, just call these dogs off.”

Tom took Pongo’s thin long leather dog lead and used it to tightly bind the woman’s hands behind her back, while mum picked her gun up off the floor.

“You’re crazy if I don’t return my friend has instructions to kill the girls.”

Mum took a handkerchief from her pocket and balled it up.

“I’ve heard enough out of you lady.” She said stuffing the handkerchief in the woman’s mouth; she then tied Purdey’s leather dog lead between the woman’s teeth to hold her gag in place.

“Get up you’re coming with us.” Tom said roughly pulling the redhead to her feet.

The two dogs ran a head as the sound of yapping puppies got louder, mum kept the gun fixed firmly on the redhead as she and Tom walked behind. The dogs stopped at the very last door.

“Is this where your friend is holding my daughter?” Mum asked waving the gun menacingly in the redheads face.

“MMMPPHHH.” The woman nodded.

“I hope for your sake, she hasn’t harmed her.”

Tom slowly opened the door and peeped inside he saw the black haired woman standing with her back to the door, so he quickly opened the door wide and let the dogs in, before the woman knew what was happen she was lying flat on her back with the two dogs standing growling over her.

“PURMMMRDYYY” Kristy screamed into her gag.

Mum pushed the redhead into the room and made her sit in the corner, before rushing over to her daughter.

“Kristy are you alright?” Mum asked as she peeled the tape off her daughter’s lips.

“We’re fine mum. How did you find us?” A relieved Kristy replied.

“You have Purdey and Pongo to thank for that. Now let’s get you two untied.” Mum said with a smile as she began to unzip Kristy’s sleeping bag.

“Mum wait we have no clothes on tell Tom to leave.”Kristy replied.

“I know where I’m not wanted.” Tom said taking the black haired woman and some rope into the next room with the puppies, Pongo and Purdey followed behind him.

Mum untied the girls and helped them get dressed, before going into the other room where Tom had hogtied the black haired woman. Kristy rushed over to the cage with her puppies in and took out Patch and gave him a big hug and a kiss before handing him to Kelly.

“He’s yours.” She tearfully told her friend.

Kelly hugged Kristy

“Thank you Kris he’s so cute.”

While this was going on mum called the police, who were quickly on the scene to take the crooks away. All the stolen puppies were soon reunited with their owners

Later that night police raided the home of Cruella Deville but the evil woman was nowhere to be found.

The End.

:lol: No puppies were harmed in the writing of this story :lol:
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Re: 101 Dalmatians (My version of a Disney classic)

Postby Chase Ricks » Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:39 pm

Even before reading the last line I knew a sequel was in the air hovering above this story.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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