## Enemies

Post by Scottstud94 » Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:19 pm

Smash! The sound of my sprinting body hitting a trash can, echoing across the near empty school. I quickly scrambled up and rounded the corner, hiding in a locker where the lock had been broken.
I panted to myself trying to keep quiet. How foolish of me to be lured here. The empty high school at 8:30 at night. An anonymous phone call telling me to come or there'd be "consequences". I heard the squeaking of tennis shoes along the tiled floor. Holding my breath in i tried to keep quiet as I looked through the thin slots of the locker.
"I think he went this way." A classmate of mine named Chad said pointing down the dim lit gym hall.
"Nah," another classmate named Eric said. "He's around... And when we find him...," RIIPPPP! I saw tape being ripped off the roll.
The two left the way Chad pointed, I stayed still but had to keep moving. The doors were locked from the inside and out, so no escape here. I had gotten on the wrong side of things with Eric, Chad, and Justin. Combine that with the fact I busted Eric's Xbox last year out of frustration and.... Well it wasn't good.
I was smaller than them too. We were all Sophomores, but I was only 5'4. So easy pray for these.. Bullies. My small frame crept out of the locker. In a Track t-shirt, shorts, white ankle socks, and running shoes I slithered down the other way into the dark locker room hoping to hide out there.
The other 3 were around but all on the baseball team thus had "special privlieges" in this town. I peeked out of the locker room down the hall to see if anybody was ar...
"Aha!" I heard the voice of Justin around the corner, each boy was carrying a bag with ropes and stuff to kidnap me with and a walky-talky.
I turned and scrambled through the locker room, out the hallway where I framtically moved looking for some freedom. I tried the main doors outside again. No success. Quick! Downstairs I though and I sprinted to the schools stairs where I ran down. I popped out in the lower level, where I ducked into a bathroom, locked myself in a stall and hurridly tried to text someone that I needed a ride.
No responses. Of course, when I am studying my phones goes off all the time! But now ugh.... Then the door opened. I heard alot of footsteps.
"We know your in here, so end it now and let us take revenge peacefully there Alex."
I unlocked the stall knowing I had turmed the light on revealing my location. Ok so what if they brought stuff to kidnap me? We used to be friends they wont seriously do this.. Or would they? I thought to myself as I faced them.
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Post by xtc » Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:17 am

Good start. Have you finished writing the story before starting to post it or is it an on-going task?
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!
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Post by Scottstud94 » Fri Apr 08, 2011 6:59 am

Its ongoing, I dont write installments ahead of time. It allows me to... Shape the story

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Post by PowerRanger » Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:50 pm

That's a great beginning! Keep up the good work man

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Post by Jack Roper » Fri Apr 08, 2011 3:08 pm

I agree--great start and hope you enjoy writing your next installment!

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Post by Scottstud94 » Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:32 am

TThanks for the responses.
I slowly emerged from the stall and faced my 3 former friends. Each one of them a little sweaty from the running. I studied them from left to right. First was Justin: An outfielder for the baseball team, he was a genius in his own right. He was also maniacal. This was probably his idea. He was smaller like me, with black hair. A t-shirt revealed his bulging arms, and shorts, with Nike shoes and crew black socks. Since thats what all the "cool" kids are wearing.
Chad was big and tan. The definition of a bully essentially. Large, looming frame, wearing a baseball shirt, shorts, and basketball shoes. His abilities as pitcher allowed his drinking habits to go unnoticed.
Then there was Eric. He was in the gym twenty four-7 but heightwise was fairly normal. He had the same things on as Justin. Eric had gotten into pot so was a little out of wack at times. I tried to avoid him.
"Down on the ground squirt. Nowhere to run." Chad said.
"Justin, lock the door with that janitor key."
"Already done," Justin said with a smile.
Thats how all the doors were locked. My fate was sealed so I went down to my stomach and rested my chin on the tile floor. The 3 boys quickly got on top of me, dumping there bondage contents on the floor.
"I got his feet!" Chad said.
"Hands." Eric said.
"Wait what do I do?" Justin said.
"What do you think? Tape his mouth shut, cant have him yelling.
I felt my shoes being taken off and thrown aside, and tape being applied to my ankles. My wrists had been cuffed already and now Eric was tying them off with rope. Meanwhile Justin was about to tape my mouth.
"Guys do I have to take off my sock? It feels weird when they are off." Justin complained.
"Jeesh," Chad said, "I'll do it." He untied his shoe pulling off his ankle sock and jammed it in my unwilling mouth. Then tape was wrapped around my head to seal it in. I decided not to complain or yell since at least they weren't Justins.
The 3 forced me up. Cutting away the tape that held my ankles together. A baseball sock was wrapped around my eyes and I felt a bag being put over my head as I was being walked to the door.
Justin tied rope around each of my ankles then connected them to make some sort of shackle.
I was led out the bathroom, up the elevator, and outside in the cold. No turning back now.

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Post by Scottstud94 » Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:40 am

These guys couldn't be serious? They'll let me go right?
I struggled and tried to scream into my gag as I heard a van door open. Mmmppplhhhh! I screamed as I felt a swift punch to the stomach. I was lifted and thrown into the van, my head hit the metal floor and I screamed again.
"Shut up." I heard Eric's voice say as the bag was pulled off my head. The sock was pulled off my eyes and I looked around. It was pretty empty except for me, my captors, and a small dog cage. Chad must've been driving.
Justin wrapped some more tape around my head to secure my gag. My hair was killing as i cringed everytime it passed around my head. He wrapped up my head around my eyes.
"Thats enough." Eric said, "It's not coming off.
I felt my body being stuffed into the cage and i tried to kick unsuccessfully as I was jammed in the cage. The door shut and I heard the clicking of locks. Nowww my fate was sealed. I was bound, gagged, blindfolded, and stuffed in a tiny dog cage not big enough for a poodle. My legs were jammed up by my head. Arms pinned against the top of the cage.
The van pulled to a stop and I heard the van door opening.
"Well since you don't have money or nothing for us. Torture should take care of you. Step one, dump water. What was he talk.. Mmmpppphhh! Water poured over my body soaking me.
"Step 2," Chad said." Suspension." I felt the cage being pulled out of the van. It was put on the ground. Then after a bit of jostling, in the blackness, I felt it being lifted into the air.
"Tie it off. OKAY! You have an hour up there for preparation. Its 45 out by the way. Good luck! I heard high-fiving. I hope they return for me. No clue where I was.

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Post by markyboy » Fri Apr 15, 2011 9:56 pm

Great story! Continue please!

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Post by Scottstud94 » Sun Apr 17, 2011 7:13 am

Hmmm... 2nd part didnt go as planned.
After what seemed like ages, I was lowered and forced to hop to wherever I was being taken. I could feel the wet grass on my socks as I jumped. Soon I heard a slider door open up which I hopped through only to be shoved into a chair. My hands were untied but quickly ziptied and taped to the arms of the chair. The same happened with my feet. Soon my blindfold and gag was removed.
"Why are you guys doing this?" I asked as I looked around at my surroundings. I was in a dark basement room, no windows but a dim light above. Boiler to the right. Door locked.
"You know why." Justin said. "You owe us 300 bucks for breaking my Xbox. Soo.. We you aint gettimg free until we get enough for repayment."
"Got a phone, and a wallet with 40$ in it."
"Good, thats worth 100 now, his fancy new Itouch would complete the deal.. Where is it?"
I wont tell you!" I yelled as I struggled to get free.
I saw eric remove his sock, I tried to nrace for it but he was quick and rammed it into my mouth, holding it in with his hand. First they pulled out an ice cube and placed it into my pants. I mmpphhheedd and cursed into the gag. When I calmed down, I was asked if Id tell them where the Ipod was. I shook my head no.
Then a fresh coat of tape secured the sock im my mouth.
"Fine... Meet Mr. Clamps." Clamps and clothespins were pinned onto my body and it still wasn't enough.
"Alright... Mix up some wet cement and throw it on him!" I shook my head fiercly no, and allowed them to remove my gag. I lied about where it was, and was quickly regagged.
"If your lying," Eric said. Your done. As he held up the cement and newfound blackmail photos of me as a crossdresser. Although that was photoshopped.
I reconsidered. But by the time I made the decision. Eric and Justin were gone. Leaving only Me and Chad

### Gone!

Post by MattyH » Sun Apr 17, 2011 6:50 pm

Gone!
Last edited by MattyH on Tue Nov 22, 2011 7:15 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by markyboy » Wed Apr 20, 2011 10:46 pm

Good continuation!

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Post by ThatDude » Tue May 03, 2011 6:08 pm

is the story done or something????

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Post by fratboydanny » Wed May 04, 2011 6:51 pm

As always very well done. Looking forward to more.

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Post by Scottstud94 » Sun May 08, 2011 6:10 am

Man I thought this was one was horrible, it went a different direction then i intended. But i will continue

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Post by ThatDude » Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:32 pm

r u gonna continue??

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Post by Scottstud94 » Sun Dec 11, 2011 3:33 pm

Chad looked at me with an evil grin on his face. He tickled me fiercely as I tried desparately to rip myself free. But to no avail. I was left alone for awhile after that as Chad devilishly mixed together dry cement and water.
I mmmpphheeeddd into my gag. He knew I had lied. And when the other boys returned I was done. I finally ripped my hand free from the duct tape that held me to the chair. Chad quickly stopped what he was doing and looked up. I scrambled to untape my other hand as Chad grabbed the duct tape and walked over.
I hurled myself into him knocking him to the ground. His head slammed against the concrete.
With a shock and bit of luck. He was unconscious. I scrambled now untaping my limbs, yanking my gag off that sealed my screams.
I disappeared into the night, out the slider door. Escaping the wrath. Eventually I was home. I was free. But they would be after me, I knew it.
To be continued as new story?

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Post by xtc » Sun Dec 11, 2011 5:13 pm

Please do continue.
I know what it's like to have a story take off on it's own path. That's one reason why I like to have some more written than I actually post.
Nevertheless thanks for finishing even if you did have to bully the plot a bit.
I look forward to reading more misadventures of this protagonist.
Wassail!
Xtc
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!
More by the same author: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=22729

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Post by kidnapplz » Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:35 pm

great story
keep going