Tie up guy 58 wrote:How should I continue?
It's YOUR story, surely you know where you intend it to go.
The idea is intriguing. It could/should be fun.
My advice is that one should always know where a story is going before starting to post. The author needs to be able to commit to what (s)he is writing if it is to have any style and if it is to be consistent. If that is not the situation, there is a serious danger of the story either just petering out or degenerating into disorganised nonsense. With a fantasy story like this, consitency is especially important because the world being created is not realistic to start with and the reader (speaking for myself) needs to be able to believe in the story on its own terms.
End of lecture.
Go your own way. You have an interesting premise here. Let's enjoy you creativity.
Wassail!
Xtc