I enjoyed the story. It's not badly written, really, but I do have some suggestions.
My main observation is that you are writing the way you would talk. When talking, you can't go back and modify what you said earlier. Happily, when writing you can do just that. As an example, you wrote, "(I forgot to mention that they were very close to edge, with the handle kind of sticking off the table)." You could have gone back and inserted that detail where it belonged - nobody would have known that you forgot it. If you think of a better way to say something, go back and change it - and don't feel obliged to tell us that you changed it. Few if any writers, even professionals, can nail what they want to say without feeling the need for a single correction.
You can also stop to check on things you're not sure about. For example, if you weren't certain about the spelling of "karada" (you had it right), you can stop and look it up rather than putting "(sp?)" after it. Google is your friend.

On a more technical matter, I would recommend cutting some of the "ands" and "thens." For example, I would have opened the story with, "It was a Friday night. My brother and mom were sleeping, while my dad watched TV downstairs." Towards the end, "... I decided to keep the karada thing on. I put my pajamas on over it and went to sleep."
Finally: proofread! Spell checkers don't catch all mistakes. "I did NOT what to be seen" is not want - oops,
what you meant to write, despite the fact that every word was perfectly spelled.
I look forward to reading your further adventures.