Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Sat Oct 25, 2014 8:46 am

Donna Starr is a Private Investigator, she takes on any jobs, no matter what they might be, as long as they pay her fee, she will do it.

She was sat in her office (which was quite small). Her desk was covered in papers, which she was trying to sort out. She had kicked off her black shoes, and was sat there in a white blouse, and short black skirt. Her long legs were stretched out under her desk, and she was wearing her usual black stockings.

She began by opening the morning's mail. One letter stood out from the rest. Donna raced to open it. Upon opening the envelope, Donna found a small diamond, a cat's whisker, and a short hand written note. Donna recognised the writing at once, it belonged to Anna Hurst. She was well known to Donna, from their schooldays. Anna was a bully at school, always having a go at someone, including Donna. Since she had left school, Anna had not had a proper job, she just got by making money, by means which were, shady to say the least. Anna had put a cat's whisker in the letter, because Catwoman was her heroine, she dressed like her, and was as cunning as her.

Donna read the note, Anna wanted to see her. Donna knew this would mean trouble, but she had to go and find out, what it was all about. Donna called the phone number in the letter, and she was given instructions, on where and when to meet Anna.

Donna put her shoes back on, slipped on her black jacket. Before she left the office to meet Anna, she left a note for her assistant, Chloe, telling her where she had gone.

Re: Donna Starr

Postby SelenaGfan » Sat Oct 25, 2014 9:04 am

Good to see you writing again.

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Mon Oct 27, 2014 11:00 am

Donna drove out, to meet Anna. She had to leave her car, parked by the roadside, and make her way to Anna's house on foot. Anna lived in a small cottage in the woods, Donna followed the path, until she reached Anna's door.
She knocked on the door a couple of times. A few seconds later it was opened. A young girl, of about 18 years of age, wearing a tight black catsuit, stood there if front of Donna.

''Come in'' said the girl, Donna entered the cottage, the girl showed her to a room, it was Anna's study.

Donna looked around the place, then she nearly jumped out of her skin, as a slender hand, with long black fingernails, clamped upon her shoulder. Donna spun around quickly. There standing in front of her was Anna, she was wearing her full Catwoman outfit. A tight fitting latex catsuit, and a mask over her eyes.

''So glad you could come'', hissed Anna.

''My Great Aunt died some months ago, I was left some diamonds, in her will. Trouble is, snarled Anna, is that somebody else, has got hold of them. I want you to get them for me''.

Donna asked for a list of all those that were left something, in Anna's aunts will.

Anna gave her a few names,''Don't trust any of them'' hissed Anna, ''They are all creeps'' !

Anna then ran her hand up one of Donna's legs. ''Those black stockings really suit you, and they are soooooooooo smooth''. giggled Anna.

Donna said she would do her best to find the diamonds, and began to leave. As she did she was stopped in her tracks, by the young girl, who had shown her in, and another girl of about the same age, she too, wore a black catsuit. One of the girls had several lengths of rope in her hand, and had a wicked smile on her face.

Anna laughed out loud, ''Let Donna leave girls, she has work to do for me''

The girls parted, and Donna left the cottage, and went back to her car. Before she set off, she phoned Chloe, told her what it was all about, and that she would meet her, at the office....................................................

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Thu Oct 30, 2014 11:58 am

When Donna got back to her office, she told Chloe all about Anna. Then they began phoning some of the names on Anna's list. After several phone calls, they found out that Anna had been cut out of he aunts will, shortly before she died. They also were told that Anna had threatened some of her relatives, she demanded the diamonds, she said they should belong to her.

It was by chance that Donna found out who had the diamonds, one of Anna's uncles, let slip that Anna's cousin Lucy was in possession of them.

Donna phoned Lucy up, Lucy admitted to having the diamonds, and pleaded with Donna, not to let Anna know, as there would be trouble. Donna ageed not to say anything to Anna.

''What do we do now'' asked Chloe. ''We'll, said Donna, we sure won't tell Anna where or who has the diamonds, that would cause too much trouble''.

The next day, Donna decided to visit Anna, she phoned her up, to tell her she was coming.

When she got to Anna's cottage, Anna met her by the front door, she was again wearing her full Catwoman costume. She walked towards Donna, and put one of her fingers on Donna's lips.

''What a cute mouth you have'' giggled Anna, ''Such a shame that we are going to have to gag it''.

''what do you mean'' gulped Donna. Anna clicked her fingers, and her two friends suddenly appeared. ''She's all yours girls, tie and gag the bitch, as tight as you want''.

Donna stood there frozen to the spot, as the two girls jumped on her, and began to bind her..................................................

Re: Donna Starr

Postby SelenaGfan » Thu Oct 30, 2014 1:07 pm

It is getting good now. Wonder what they will do to Donna.

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Tue Nov 04, 2014 11:57 am

Donna tried to fight off the two girls, but she was no match for them. Within a short time she lay there, bound and helpless. Her ankles, and knees were tied together tightly with rope. Her hands were tied in front of her, and her arms were bound tightly to her body. She tried to squirm and free herself, but she was tied real good. She looked up and saw Anna leering down at her. She tried to scream, but the girls had gagged her well, some cloth had been stuffed in her mouth, and a black knotted scarf was also tied tightly around her cute mouth.
Anna came closer, she put her boot on Donna's chest. Donna looked up, she could see Anna's long latex covered legs, towering over her. Then she looked at Anna's face, it had the most satisfied, and wicked grin on it.

MMmmmmpppppph ! groaned Donna.

Anna laughed ''We have plans for you bitch'' sneered Anna.

Anna clicked her fingers, her two friends came over.
''Put that bitch in the car, we are taking her for a little ride'' said Anna.

The two girls did as they were told, they dragged Donna over to the car, and bundled her in the back seat.

Then Anna got into the drivers seat, the two girls sat in the back with Donna.

''I'd better phone your friend Chloe now'' giggled Anna. ''We have business to discuss, I must get those diamonds, and your the insurance, that I do'' cackled Anna. Then she drove off, as the two girls teased Donna in the back of the car................................................

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Sat Nov 08, 2014 9:02 am

The car journey only took a few minutes, once at their destination, the two girls dragged Donna out of the car. She looked around, and found herself standing in a disused railway yard.

''Tie her to the tracks girls'' Anna hissed. The girls obeyed, and soon Donna was tied down on the tracks. Anna leaned over her, Donna's black stockings were in shreds, the two girls had clawed, and scratched her legs on the journey.

Donna moaned through her gag. Anna laughed, ''Don't worry, trains don't come here anymore''.

Anna then phoned Chloe again, and gave her instructions on where to take the diamonds.

Mmmppppph ! moaned Donna. Anna grinned, and said. ''I know Lucy had the diamonds, she would never give them to me, but I'm sure Chloe can persuade her to give them up for you''

Anna then sent her two girls to meet Chloe.

Anna then stood astride Donna, she had a cane with a cat's head on it. She poked it into Donna's throat. ''By the way'' she hissed, no trains here, but there is a Puma on the loose, around these parts, it has already attacked several people, I think it would like your nice tender flesh''.

MMmmmmppppphhhhhh ! moaned Donna again.

''Don't think Chloe is going to save you, my two kittens, have plans for her''


Meanwhile Chloe had got the diamonds, and she was heading for the meet up.............................................................

Re: Donna Starr

Postby The Wrapster » Sat Nov 08, 2014 8:09 pm

Very much enjoying this tale!!

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Mister Mistoffelees » Sat Nov 08, 2014 10:03 pm

You can never go wrong with a lady detective story! Fine work, old sport!... :D
Welcome to Snowden! Enter at your own risk...

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Lake Lover » Sun Nov 09, 2014 3:35 am

I really dislike Anna.

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Wed Nov 12, 2014 11:37 am

Anna's kittens, had reached the meeting point, it was about a mile through the woods, from where Donna was being held captive. There was no sign of Chloe. One of the girls decided to walk up the path to see if she could see Chloe.

Little did they know, that Chloe was already there, and was hiding in some bushes. As soon as the girl had walked up the path, Chloe seized her chance. She jumped out on the other girl, and knocked her to the ground. The girl was holdiing some rope, which Chloe quickly snatched off her, and began to tie her up. The poor girl was soon hog-tied, and lying helpless, Chloe took off her scarf, and tightly gagged her with it, then dragged her into the bushes.

A few minutes passed, and the other girl returned , she looked around for her friend, but could not see her. As she was searching, Chloe jumped out on her, she still had lots of rope left, and after a frantic struggle, she managed to tie her second victim, again, in a hog-tie. The girl was screaming and cursing, and said that Anna would get her back for this. Chloe laughed, ''Shut up bitch'' she said, and seconds later, Chloe had gagged her with a knotted hankerchief. She then put her with her friend.

''Right you two'' scowled Chloe, ''Which one of you is going to tell me where Donna is''

One of the girls gave a loud moan through her gag. Chloe took the gag out of the girls mouth.

''Tell me bitch, where is Donna'' ? The girl looked scared, and told Chloe where Anna was keeping Donna. Chloe put the gag back in the girls mouth. ''I'll come back, and free you, when I've found Donna'' said Chloe, as she walked off.

The two girls lay on the ground, struggling, and sqiuirming to try to free themselves.

As Chloe was on her way to find Donna, she phoned Lucy. She told her where Donna was, and to meet her there.

Meanwhile back at the railway yard, Anna was teasing Donna. ''It's dusk now honey, soon it will be dark , and the Puma will be hungry'' hissed Anna.

Donna struggled in her bonds, and moaned, MMmmmmmppppphhhhh ! !

''Just think very soon, I will get my hands on the diamonds, and you will be cat food'' said Anna, as she ran one of her long fingernails across Donna's throat.

Mmmmmmppppppppppph ! Mmmmmmmmppppppph ! groaned Donna.

'' My kittens should have the diamonds by now'' hissed Anna, she then got her phone out, and rang them.....................................................................
Last edited by Tieup1 on Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:02 am, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Donna Starr

Postby The Wrapster » Sat Nov 15, 2014 6:11 am

Good story so far, and waiting for more!! One small quibble though: That should be" walk up the path " in the last update.

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:02 am

Good spot, thanks :)

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Thu Nov 20, 2014 11:21 am

Anna could get no answer from her girls. She through a fit, started cursing. She went over to where Donna was tied up. She bent down, and said, '' My two little kittens sem to have got lost, I shall, have to go and find them, enjoy the scenery while I am gone, I won't be long'' she hissed.

Donna watched Anna stride off, as soon as she was out of sight she struggled as hard as she could to free herself.

Meanwhile Anna was making her way down a steep bank. Unfortunately for her, she lost her footing, stumbled, and rolled down the bank, hitting her head as she fell. She lay at the bottom of the bank in a heap, slighly stunned.

Before she had the chance to get up, Lucy appeared, she grabbed hold of the groggy Anna, and dragged her over to a small clump of trees.

Back at the rail yard, Donna was stiill trying to free herself, when she heard a friendly voice, it was Chloe.

Mmppppppppppphhhhh ! moaned Donna trying to attract Chloe's attention, Mmppppppppph !

Chloe heard her moans, and was soon untying her. ''Where's Anna, ? asked Chloe.
''She's gone to find her girls'' Donna squealed, ''She went that way''.

Chloe told Donna where she had tied the girls, and they followed the path that Anna had taken.

As they were going along their way, they met Lucy. ''Glad to see you are ok'' Lucy said to Donna.
''Yea, I'm fine, just a bit stiff, from being tied up though'' Donna answered.

''Talking of being tied up'' laughed Lucy, ''Come with me''.

Donna and Lucy into the woods, and much to their delight, there was Anna. She was tied to a tree, her ankles were bound with rope, her waist and chest were also tighly bound with rope, securing her up against the tree. Her hands were tied above her head with rope, to a branch, and she had a big white cleave gag, tightly tied around her mouth.

The three of them stood there laughing at her, ''MMmmmmmmppppppphhhhhh ! moaned Anna, ''Mmmmppppppppphhhhhhhhhh ! she moaned again, her face getting redder, by the second.

Lucy then told her that the diamonds were no longer in the country, she had sent them to a cousin in Australia, for safe keeping. Anna's head dropped, she gave out a little whimper through her gag. Donna, Lucy, and Chloe just laughed.

''I hope you are comfortable'' Donna said to Anna, ''Because we are going now''.

Anna struggled with her bonds, Mmmmmmmmmmmmpppppppppppphhhhhhhhhh ! she groaned, as she watched the three girls walk off................................................

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Re: Donna Starr

Postby SelenaGfan » Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:55 pm

Nice update my friend.

Re: Donna Starr

Postby Tieup1 » Tue Nov 25, 2014 10:55 am

Donna and the other two girls made their way to where Chloe had tied up Anna's friends. They were still there, both hog-tied on the ground, and struggling like mad. The girls untied them, and with much laughter, told them where Anna was tied. Then the three of them made their way home, afer their adventure.

The two girls made their way through the wood.There she was in all her glory, in her Catwoman outfit, bound to a tree, gagged, and helpless. Anna caught their eye, Mmmmmmmmmmppppphhhhhh ! she mumbled, Mmphhhhh !

The two girls freed her, she was livid, her language was terrible, she called everybody, everything. ''Let's go home'' Anna yelled. She walked off, and the two girls followed sheepishly behind.


The next day Donna was sat in her office , when the phone rang. She answered it, Anna's voice came booming down the other end.

''I've not finished with you, or your friends yet'' hissed Anna, I swear, I will have my revenge, just you wait''.

Donna could hardly supress her laughter, but managed to say, ''I do hope your two friends are ok''.

''Oh, they will be alright, they just need to be taught a lesson, not to let me down again, sneered Anna. Donna laughed, and put the phone down.

Anna slammed down the phone too, she was seething. She went to a cupboard, and pulled out a whip. Then she went over to her two friends, whom she had tied up earlier. They had their hands tied above their heads to a beam in Anna's cottage. They were both cleave gagged with thick white cloths.

Then she cracked the whip, the two girls mumbled timidly through their gags.

''You know what I do to bad girls' Anna laughed. ''It's 10 lashes for the both of you.'' :spank;

The End. :)

Re: Donna Starr

Postby SelenaGfan » Wed Nov 26, 2014 1:51 am

The two poor kittens will be sore when Anna is done with them. Great story Tieup1.