Postby Opinionated » Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:23 am
I wouldn't say it's that sad. I think, maybe if the writer would make his/her posting a bit more coherent, broken into paragraphs, less racing thoughts, structure and better grammar, it will improve greatly. In other words, a nice writer who only needs to flesh out the story a little more and take his/her good time telling it. To him/her : please do post again! And take your time telling us - we're patient patients!
"Sometimes in quiet desperation you realize it's never gonna be the way it was." - Carole King
"You've just been lonely too long." - Carly Simon