hello, I'm new and this is my first story so please be patient.
"jeez it's hot in here...", Bunny thought as she crawled through the air ducts of an evil person's mansion. But she wasn't having a hard time moving through them, being only 5'4'' and weighing 104 lbs. the 17 year old hero crawled through the vents with ease. "no offense,but that idea is completely stupid.", she heard a chilling voice say. She looked down an opening and saw the owner of the mansion. According to the files her leader had given her, the 18 year old was named Shadow which she had no problem believing, for he appeared to be 7'0'' tall with long black hair that covered both eyes so you could not even see their shape. He wore a grey long-sleeved shirt that was torn around the collar and sleeve openings, and black pants torn around the openings and no shoes. "Well, it was a hell of alot better than your ide-", someone had said when the floor of the tile cracked beneath her and she fell on the conference table. She looked at Shadow who simply said,"Heavylifter, it appears we have a spy..." She looked for who he was talking about and was stunned when she saw him. Standing on the other side of the room was Heavylifter, a 17 year old that had a nice tan, long dirty-blonde hair, and the most beautiful green eyes. He wore a clean, white tank top and blue jeans with boots. But she was only partially stunned by his looks, she was mostly stunned by his size. He stood 8'3" and looked like he weighed 259 lbs...of pure muscle. H.L. let out a chuckle," Yeah, it looks like it."', he said with a sexy hispanic accent as opposed to Shadow's chilling english one. " What a spy? Me? That's silly.", she said nervously to them, "I was just...uh....checking the air-flow? Yeah, checking the air-flow." She looked at Shadow who replied,"You must think we're stupid...Heavylifter immobilize her." Bunny tried to say something when she was grabbed from behind by H.L. "Hey!", she protested,"What in god's name do you-mmph!" she said when Shadow had put a black tape around her mouth to silence her. Some of Shadow's hair started to glow red, when she realized that his eyes glew when he was angry. "You shouldn't use God's name in vain.", He growled, "Heavylifter interrogate her, see what she wanted to know", he said while wrapping her arms together behind her back and wrapping her feet together. She couldn't even bother trying to struggle, H.L.s strength held her completely still. When he was finished he said," You two have fun", and left the room. She started to wonder what would happen to her when she was pulled back by H.L. who started to grope her." Alright my little spy...let's see what we can get from you.", he whispered in her ear when he put a dark black bandanna over her eyes, chuckling.
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