Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:51 pm

Okay, this is gonna be short because I'm pressed for time, but here goes:

BLUEFLAME

DELOREAN225

"Hold still."
As the scientists give me more injections, I sigh in defeat.
I'm never going to live my life.
See, when I was four, my mom told me in her last words, "Sara, be safe." Of course, she said it while her car skid off a cliff, so it sounded more like "danger be Rafe" but I'm sure I dechipered it right. Anyway, next people to see me are some big men who looked serious and drove in a black van.
What was it my mom told me, "talk to strangers?" Well, I guess I'll never remember.
Anyway, you put two and two together. Yeah, I was kidnapped by an illegal science place that's like underground or something.
So, when not in use as a guinea pig, I'm kept strapped to my chair in my cell. Or, closet or whatever. Anyway, now I'm like, mutant, and I've got great hearing and sight.
If only I had this earlier. I would see this coming.
As they inject something new called blueflame that's like strength and iq, I sigh.
They finish making their seven-billionth piercing in my arm, and force me to the room. Soon I'll be tested for new brainpower and strength. Oh, joy.
They do my usual: Legs together, hands together, legs to chair legs, hands to upper legs to under-chair, chest to backrest. All with zip-ties. I wonder how many they go through in a week.
Then, darkness.
I struggle.
The camera sees me, but what do they care that I'm trying to escape their nearly-impossible-to-escape-zip-tie-fun-fest? Ohh well.
Hours.
I remember something I heard.
"Blueflame. Strength and brainpower increase."
Why do these scientists tell me things? Now I know that in a sec, I'll have all the tools to escape.
Suddenly I feel weaker and jittery.
Almost as if I'm a supernova, I burst with weird energy.
It hurts. I'm tempted to scream, but if I do, they'll come sooner then they will with the camera.
It ends after a minute of torture. Of course, with my luck, it's not over, and a much more powerful burst comes seconds after.
Somehow the zip-ties haven't burned off, but now I'm supposed to be strong, so I try to break free.
They all give.
Then, I crush the camera. Next, the door. My final obstacle: the facility.
I run down halls, smashing through glass dividers like they're butter.
Wow. I'm really strong.
As I go, I'm tempted to see what things they were going to try next, but my new smartness says that that idea will not help my situation.
I find the door to the elevator. It gives easily.
I wait, and then catch a ride, surprised at how easy it was to escape.
Then, I run miles away. I don't know where I'm going, but it's far away. As I get closer to a nearby bridge, my feet slip.
I slide off the ledge next to it, and land in the ocean. Knocked out, my body drifts away...

I awake.
Now I'm definitely not the kind of person who freaks out, but waking up tied to the roof of a car when you just escaped hell isn't a great thing. The car I'm on drives for hours, until we arrive. Luckily, it's not "there". But I wasn't so sure it was good.
As a man unties me, I wonder why I didn't just break out while the car was going.
I'll never know.
The man speaks.
"Hey, sorry. No room in the car."
Still not wanting to know this, I try to jump off the car roof.
I'm not sure who was more amazed when I didn't land.

Sorry, but I like making cliffhangers when I know the conclusion. Guess what happened, and I will tell you if you are right. Oh, and comment if I should continue.
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Thu Oct 04, 2012 6:37 pm

People: If you like this story, please comment to me whether or not it's worth continuing! Sorry it's not too bondage-centered. I can't write a good story about bondage. Just fair stories with bondage. Here's a sampler more:
I'm not sure how, but I'm not falling. Just'... floating.
The man starts staring, and soon he's not moving. I do the old wave-arm-in-front-of-eyes thing. He luckily snaps out of it.
"Hey, sorry. Come in."
Not officially having a home, I gingerly follow him. We enter his house.
The first room is a great library. Stacks upon stacks, shelves, piles, even the couch has books between the cushions.
I pick up a book called "The Science of Flight". I'm sure there's never been so many sticky notes in a single book before.
The man summons me to the table.
"So, allow me to introduce myself. I'm professor John Brookes. I study areodynamics and astronomy. You might be very helpful to me."
I'm very concerned now, as I've seen it before.
"Hey, little girl. We're some scientists. You could help our research."
I shiver at the thought.
John produces a pen from his pocket and writes down something. It looks important.
"What's your name?"
I hesitate.
I haven't used my voice since I was five. At thirteen, I don't even know what I sound like.
In an unfamiliar voice, I begin to speak.
"Sara," I say, warming up to a new voice.
"My name is Sara."

Sorry about the shortness. I was trying to add some spice so it'll be interesting. Again, COMMENT!
-Delo
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby hafnermg » Thu Oct 04, 2012 9:21 pm

Don 't worry about not being able to write stories about bondage Ive seen some great stories that aren't about the bondage. As for this story in particular its definitely interesting so far!

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Fri Oct 05, 2012 3:48 pm

Thanks everyone for commenting. I will continue this story tonight.
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Fri Oct 05, 2012 6:42 pm

BLUEFLAME - Part 3
Now, I get how I'm posting in short bursts, and that makes consistent speed hard. So, excuse me if it's bad, but I'm making it a bit fast-paced here in the beginning for story-setting. Sorry for the lack of bondage so far.
After I say my name, he writes it down.
"Last name?"
"I - I don't remember," I say.
"Ok," he says, folding the piece of paper and pocketing it.
"Try to remember, though."
I go outside to figure out why I'm flying. Surprised at how he simply left, I almost try and run away. But then I realize:
I've got no home. This man just offered me one.
I fly over to the backyard.
There's not much. Windmill in the corner, stepping stones outlining a lush garden.
I fly inside to see the house.
After the library, it's a small dining room opening up to to a large, modren kitchen. Doors lead outside, to a small bathroom, and to a staircase. To the other end, garage. I go upstairs.
The professor's room is just like the library: Flithy and covered with books.
I find the professor, typing away at his computer. I've never used one, but I know what they are. Tne scientists talked about them a lot. I step next to him.
"John?"
"Yes?"
"Where do I stay?"
"Ahh, yes," he says, and scurries over to the hall.
"Do follow," he says.
He takes me to the last door, opens it, and shouts.
"Melody, dear, pick up the bottom bunk of your bed. You've got a new friend!"

Here's a good spot to leave you hanging. Until next chapter,
-delo
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby VictimNumber1 » Sat Oct 06, 2012 5:58 am

Great story so far. You don't even need to apologize, you're the one keeping us entertained by your story, so I'm happy to wait until you're ready.
I just know they're going to tie me up tonight,
They're bound to.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Sat Oct 06, 2012 7:16 pm

Thanks for commenting, you guys! Nothing helps me go like comments, so thanks again!


A small girl, about 8 or so, walks out of the room and looks at me.
I wonder: Who leaves an 8-year old home alone?
Anyway, she looks at me, and I notice her. She's got pale skin, orange hair that goes to her waist, and blue eyes that contrast the professor's orange eyes. Orange eyes? I wonder. As the girl goes to pick up her room, I notice she moves a lot of rope. Odd, I think. Perhaps she took apart something like a climbing wall? Then she grabs a pillow from her bunk, which has at least four, and puts it on the bottom bunk. Finally, she takes a blanket from her closet and drapes it over the bed.
"Done."
The professor motions for me to walk in.
"Melody, this is Sara. She's just like you."
What? My hair's dark brown! I have green eyes! Is this guy blind?
Then, he leaves, and Melody explains.
"I was an orphan," she says.
"Doc found me."
"Okay," I say, remembering to talk to strangers.
"How old are you?"
"10."
My guess was off by two years.
"You?"
"I'm 13," I reply, almost on auto-pilot.
I'm staring at the bundle of rope and tape lying in the corner.
"What's that for?"
The girl looks.
"That? That's my stuff," she says.
"For...?"
"You'll see."
I also notice the shiny new laptop on the table near ner closet.
"That's my computer. Want to use it?"
"I've never used one before," I say.
The girl is shocked.
"Where'd you come from?"
I tell her my long story. I do not tell her about Blueflame, though.
"Scary," she says.
"I can teach you to use the computer."
So, after thirty minutes, I'm on the computer, playing a game.
"Don't," she says franticly.
"Relax," I say.
Moments later, my character dies a horrible death.
"Should of left the garlic," she says.
I close the game as Doc calls us for dinner.
We eat a lot.
Steak, gravy, mashed potatoes, corn, and biscuits. Soon we're stuffed.
"Melody," I say.
"I want to show you something."
We go outside, and I tell her about Blueflame.
"Cool," she said.
"But somehow, I also got this."
I fly up.
I think Melody faints.


There's tonight's edition. See you tomorrow night!
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Mon Oct 08, 2012 5:40 pm

Comments are like fuel! The more you have, the faster and longer and better the story gets! Trying not to bee a noob, but the views are arisin', and there are no comments. Show me how you feel! Just remember, though, I am OPEN to suggestions, ideas, feedback, even criticism! It all helps me write.
So go ahead.

I rush down to help Melody, who has fainted. I offer assistance getting her to her room, and she flinches. When we get there, I lay her on her bunk and wait.
She comes to after a while.
"Sara?"
"Yeah..."
She turns her head.
"Did you just fly?"
"Yes. Just for you."
The shock hits her after a while.
"You're so cool."
"Thanks," I say, smiling.
Little did I know she wasn't the only person thinking I was cool.
"Where is she?" the scientist in the van asks.
"I don't know," the other says.
They are from my facility. I did not know they watched me fly.
"She appears to have gained an extra ability," the first says.
"Just like the others."
The scientists leave, coming up with a plan to recapture me.
Meanwhile, Melody is back and out of her mini-coma. She's still recovering from the shock of my flying, though. She asks me for the umpteenth time if it was a trick as I watch TV for the first time ever. It's a guy named Nick, but it's also an animated sponge? Weird. Suddenly, a figure bursts the door open, walks to me, and throws me outside.
"Sara," he says.
"Yeah?"
"Get ready to fight."

Bye for now. I'll tell you if you guess what is happening right.
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Sun Oct 28, 2012 8:03 pm

Guys: this is THE LAST THING. the count of views rose gently, but NO ONE HAS COMMENTED...
FINAL OFFER: you comment. i only want one per post. it's how I can tell you're interested. If you don't like it, pm me and i'll stop posting. Just please. Let me know if you want more.
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby Zandor » Sat Feb 02, 2013 4:49 pm

I want now make moar.
You are q immortal

Re: Blueflame

Postby ChloĆ© Badelaine » Sun Feb 03, 2013 3:02 pm

Lovely and antertaining story.
Really want to know what 10y old Melody does with all that rope...
:lol:
What I say is, a town isn't a town without a bookstore. It may call itself a town, but unless it's got a bookstore it knows it's not fooling a soul.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Thu Feb 14, 2013 7:45 pm

Ok. Thank you for the comments. My self-esteem is weak and without feedback I go kinda nuts! Here is the well-anticipated fight scene, typed from my crappy internet device keyboard!

I am not ready to fight a strange kid, but I take off into the sky, preparing for an attack. He throws various items at me. After dodging a plastic flamingo, I dive and deliver a quick punch. Before he can respond, I hit him in the chest, sending him to the ground. As I go to tell Doc what has happened and attempt to explain the wreck of the yard I aided in making, the kid grabs my leg and pulls me down.
"Not that easily."
I take notice of his odd strength. He grabs tight as I fly away. I lift him up in the air. Hopefully, he's afraid of heights. I can make him afraid by - Falling.
As we freefall, he lets go, scared. I fly away.
As the kid plummets to presumably his doom, I get back to the house to explain the mess.
I realize as I return, that kid had been awfully strong and... Had I seen that face before?
I realize who I just fought.
Another Blueflame kid.
GASP!
I explain the events to doc, and he just thinks...
Seemingly hours later, he asks me a question.
"Was he flying, too?"
"No."
As he ponders further, I decide to see my new sister and learn what sisters do.
After discovering the definition of "fashion" I declare myself a tomboy. That's when Melody gets a weird smirk on her face...
"I can't wait to show you my next game..."

You can see what happens next, but I'll let it be a cliffhanger. Like aforementioned, Comments are the coal that make this train roll! More soon,
Delo
P.S.
I am not gay. No one has accused me, but I can just say for future reference, I just like female main characters.
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby Zandor » Thu Feb 14, 2013 8:33 pm

Moar!
You are q immortal

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Fri Feb 15, 2013 4:39 pm

Soon...
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby tie.me.up. » Sat Feb 16, 2013 12:59 am

Yh this storys cool. Carry it on!

Re: Blueflame

Postby ChloĆ© Badelaine » Sat Feb 16, 2013 5:52 am

Yes please !
What I say is, a town isn't a town without a bookstore. It may call itself a town, but unless it's got a bookstore it knows it's not fooling a soul.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Mon Feb 18, 2013 8:26 pm

Ok. Here is a well-hyped-up chapter from my big book of BlueFlame:

"What is it?" I asked Melody, completely ready to beat her in whatever it was. Could it be "Monopoly" like I heard so much about?
Suddenly, Melody tackles me to the ground. After discovering that my strentgh has a cooldown period that I am still in, I struggle to get away.
SEVERAL MINUTES LATER...
I come to.
In Melody's closet, I sit bound to a chair, reminding me so much of the torturous confinement I spent my life in.
Still recharging, I try to call for help, to discover that seemingly an entire roll of duct tape was harmed in the making of Melody's handiwork. I mmph out some small SOSes, to no avail. Resigning to the terrible memories my head bears within, I try to sleep more. I nod off after a minute.
You know what's a lot scarier than waking up from a nightmare?
Waking into a much, much worse one.

Short, but featured bondage. I'm certain Sara will never come to enjoy the TUGs after her past experiences, but with any luck Melody can help her cope. I am going to add a new thing after this point: Each little bit will have a hidden reference to a topic I like. Plus, suggestions in the comments, and I promise to add one of them per post!
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby Zandor » Mon Feb 18, 2013 8:30 pm

This should be a rp.
You are q immortal

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Tue Feb 19, 2013 8:38 pm

Idk how to roleplay flight...
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:26 pm

Ok, I PROMISE the next bit will be out tomorrow. The wait is almost over!
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby Zandor » Mon Feb 25, 2013 7:31 pm

Common I. Don't have all day.... only school hourz
You are q immortal

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Fri Mar 01, 2013 12:12 pm

Sorry, was the site down or something? Couldn't get on. Try to post today. In school, though, so later.
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Fri Mar 01, 2013 5:11 pm

Ok. Thanks for waiting patiently. I lost connection, and... Ok. Let's just hear the damn story.

Upon awaking, I was still in the closet. Pulling off the rope with my strength, I walked out of the closet and found the bedroom empty. Odd, I thought, but nothing else crossed my mind. As I went downstairs, I found Doc going frantic.
"What's wrong?"
"This!!!"
That's when I found myself holding a ransom note.
We have your daughter. We request Blueflame test subject #7 in exchange for her life.
I dropped the note, and... well, I fainted.

Coming to for the second time in five minutes, I realized my predictions about the kid was correct.
There's at least five other kids with Blueflame that probably are coming for me!
As the thought sank in, I realized my only option.
While Doc was running after me, I left.
I flew...
Home.


I woke up in a very dark room. I couldn't move, and looking upon myself, I noticed I was tied down to a table. My mouth had a -what was the term? - cleave gag in it. Being used to such conditions, I at first figured it was Sara getting her revenge on me for earlier. But then my memories came back.
I remembered just before falling asleep, when the man walked up and talked to me, and then when the rag came out.
I had been kidnapped!
In a mix of excitement and utter fear, I wondered where I was.
The lights came on, and a man in a lab coat came out.
"Hello, ... Melody?"
"Mmmph?"
"Well, hello. Today we'll be testing a new system we came up with. It's a cryogenic freezing method we've discovered, and you'll help us test it on humans for the first time ever. When we have other tests, we'll unfreeze you for them."
Hearing these words, I screamed as loud as I could, which wasn't very loud, but still,...
"First we need to inject a muscle relaxant. Hold still while I inject it...
He injected it into a slot in my arm. It appears while I was out, they had made one of those tubes for me so the shots wouldn't puncture skin any more than they needed.
"Now, we'll be back in an hour to finish."
An hour later, I was greeted by three men, one of which was the one from earlier.
"Hello, Melody."
If I wished to speak, I couldn't, as the relaxant was strong and I could not feel anything, much less attempt to control it.
"Okay. Now we need to inject a few more things to keep your body running while your brain is... offline. Alright?"
After five injections, the table was flipped into a sideways platform, I was untied, and sat down in a chair inside of a large tube.
After tying me to the chair, glass came down in the tube, trapping me in.
A gel substance filled the tube, and it was cold. I could feel my body just... pausing. As it approached my head, I struggled, but the tube filled fast, and soon, I could not move, but I was still very conscious and my sight was still ok.
"It will kick in soon," one of them said.
"Sleep tight, Melody. See you in a year."
A year? Oh no. I wasn't going to be here that lo-
ZZZ


I flew onward and onward. I eventually got myself very hopelessly lost, and had to retrace my steps and several hours later, I arrived at the place I remember so well.
Rafe Powerrs Science, the sign read.
"Danger be Rafe", my mother had once said.
Suddenly a huge chunk of my forgotten past came back, and I remembered my mother being freakishly strong and smart.
Come to think of it, she quite clearly had said "Danger Be Rafe"...
OH MY GOD.
As I walked into enemy territory, I was completely unprepared for the - could it be four? - Blueflame soliders left for me to fight, and the possibility of saving my new sister.
I probably should have fainted.
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:51 pm

Does it count as bump if it's a story comment? and, please, if you comment, I'll be esteemed enough to put out the next bit.
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby Zandor » Fri Mar 08, 2013 6:42 am

Now.... moar.
You are q immortal

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Thu May 02, 2013 8:20 pm

After what I call "A looooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng haitus," Blueflame's back.

I walk in and the Rafe Powerrs Science logo is present everywhere. Never noticed it before.
Yeah, let's skip this. Look, they ambushed me, alright?
"So, that's it," I say to Rafe. I'm finished recapping my tale. You can guess that there's no way they didn't tie me down.
To be specific, Blueflame proof rope.
"Very well. Care to join your sister?"
"Sure."
He's forgotten I have smarts, too.

I'm to be cryogenically frozen. I'm put in glass, and...
Nothing.
My foot holding up the glass?
Exactly what was needed.
They get the gel flowing. I resist the urge to go into hibernation.
So... Sleepy...
As I'd hoped, the gel spills out of the glass.
The scientists turn the gel off, and I'm free.
Gel is like soap.
Soap can squeeze things free.
I smash the glass, and begin to faint.
As the scientists mop up gel, I try to reach the lever to free Melody.
I'm stopped by the final four.
They had them here the whole time. That's why I didn't get caught by them themselves.
But still, I try to will the lever down while they beat me up.
Trying to discover that I'm telepathic, I try to will it down.
They pin me down and I doze off.
Just then, the lever flips.

I come to in a strange place.
Melody is near me.
"Hi," she says.
"Hello."
She tells me what happened next. She got free, managed to summon Doc and the police, arrests were made.
While I was knocked out.
After major surgery to remove glass fragments, my Blueflame went away.
Well, mostly.
When no one's looking, not even Melody, I still love it.
There's nothing like flying.


There it is. The finale. Yup.
Look out for a sequel, I might do one. If you want it, that is...
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby Zandor » Thu May 02, 2013 8:42 pm

I want it.
You are q immortal

Re: Blueflame

Postby DMC13 » Fri May 03, 2013 5:40 pm

Thanks for the support. Request acknowledged the seemingly one person who reads my stories!
I don't care.

Re: Blueflame

Postby Zandor » Fri May 03, 2013 9:32 pm

Yw.
You are q immortal