Rachel's Story by Gaglover32

Postby Jason Toddman » Sun Sep 01, 2013 8:59 pm

A new member named Gaglover32 posted his first story in the wrong place and for some reason was unable to post it in the appropriate place himself, so I am doing it for him here. Once he gets straightened it maybe we can about getting this credited to the correct person instead of to me.
Story below is as originally written; I have made no editorial changes.

Hi i am rachel. This is a story when i was tied by my best friend Stacey's mom 3 years ago. Both i and stacey where 15 when It happened on the 15th of may. It was staceys birthday and i was invited over. We had dinner and cake. Stacey's aunt had bought plane tickets to italy and they would leave immediately . Stacey hugged me and went with her aunt. Everyone had went so I thought that I could. Help Tracey's mother with the dishes. Suddenly it was very quiet. Suddenly I felt my hands being cuffed. And I said what in the name of mmmph.i felt someone's hand being held over my mouth. -shh darling. I heard Tracey's mom say. I tried to fight against. It but I was dragged to a chair. The,hand was lifted from my mouth and my legs were tied. Miss what are you doing? - doing something I have wanted to do for years. - open your mouth. I opened my mouth to ask why she did this but something soft was pushed in. Mmmph I was completely helpless and I had been gagged so I couldn't scream. I looked at Stacey's mom who had a big smile on her face and she,giggled.- aww you are so cute Rachel. All tied up and gagged. - you know I really like you and I know you like to be tied. I did not know how she had found out that I was in to bondage. And I struggled to try to get free. - there is no need to struggle Rachel. Lets make a deal. - I won't tell anybody about this. But...you will have to be my bondage slave anytime Stacey isn't home. So do you agree? I nodded and Stacey's. Mom smiled. - good I will have lots of fun with you this week. I was thinking what I had got myself in to. But I had no other choice.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Rachel's Story by Gaglover32

Postby SelenaGfan » Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:32 pm

I don't know if you posted it the way it was written or not but some of the sentences are cut short then
finished as other sentences.A couple of time Stacey is refered to as Tracey.There are proper nouns that
are not capitalized like I,Rachel & Italy.Someone should fix this if the story is to continue.

Re: Rachel's Story by Gaglover32

Postby Jason Toddman » Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:01 pm

Vivianfan wrote:I don't know if you posted it the way it was written or not but some of the sentences are cut short then
finished as other sentences.A couple of time Stacey is refered to as Tracey.There are proper nouns that
are not capitalized like I,Rachel & Italy.Someone should fix this if the story is to continue.

I agree but decided to let the original writer deal with it rather than try to edit it myself; frankly, it'd have been too much work! gaglover32 just asked me to post this, and that's what i did. It was apparently written on a mobile phone, which probably explains the problems you cite as well as why gaglover had trouble posting this story in the correct forum. Other than posting it for gaglover32, i had nothing to do with this story's content or form.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...