## Family Ties, # 1

Post by sarobah » Tue Aug 05, 2008 12:12 am

Although this is another true story, I have taken many, many liberties with the dialogue. Letâ€™s call it artistic licence. (My writing has entered the â€œexperimentalâ€ phase. If itâ€™s a load of rubbish, please tell me so and I will go back to normal storytelling.)
â€œIâ€™m bored.â€
â€œSo am I. Why donâ€™t you read your magazine?â€
â€œFinished it. This hotel room sucks. Not even a TV set.â€
â€œItâ€™s only for one night.â€
â€œYeah, but it still sucks. When will Mum and Dad be back?â€
â€œNot until late. Do you have to make that awful noise?â€
â€œIâ€™m singing. Itâ€™s called talent. You wouldnâ€™t understand.â€
â€œObviously not. So letâ€™s do something. What about a game of cards?â€
â€œDid you bring any?â€
â€œOkay, good point; so how about...â€
â€œNah, too boring.â€
â€œGood grief, Alex, I didnâ€™t even get to say it.â€
â€œWhatever you say, itâ€™s going to be boring.â€
â€œDonâ€™t mess with me. Iâ€™m still bigger than you.â€
â€œYeah, but Iâ€™m the man of the house.â€
â€œOkay, man of the house, since weâ€™re both bored out of our minds, you can tie me up.â€
â€œWhatâ€™s in it for me?â€
â€œWhen youâ€™ve tied me up, I canâ€™t beat you up.â€
â€œYeah, that works. What are we gonna use?â€
â€œUm... I know â€“ a couple of pairs of my pantyhose. Wait a tick while I get them... Here, now try not to ruin them... Help me move the coffee table.â€
â€œRight, this is... here we go. Put your hands out.â€
â€œNo, behind my back. Thatâ€™s it. Wrists crossed are better, but itâ€™s up to you...â€
â€œLike that?â€
â€œMake it tighter. The nylon stretches, so you have to make it secure. Now loop it between the wrists. Ouch... No, donâ€™t stop. Itâ€™s okay.â€
â€œDone. Pretty good job, huh?â€
â€œNot bad... for an amateur. Now do my feet, same way. Hold on, it will be easier if I sit down.â€
â€œNo, not there, on the floor.â€
â€œFair enough. Now, only use one leg of the pantyhose. Just do it, and then Iâ€™ll explain... Nice job. Okay, give me a moment to get the circulation going.â€
â€œYour toes have turned blue!â€
â€œThatâ€™s my nail polish, smartarse.â€
â€œHowâ€™s it feel?â€
â€œFeels good.â€
â€œThen stop struggling...â€
â€œHey, donâ€™t... let me up!â€
â€œNo way... down you go, on your stomach where you belong.â€
â€œFine... you win... Well, since Iâ€™m in position, letâ€™s finish the job.â€
â€œWhat ya got in mind?â€
â€œIâ€™ll tell you what to do. Use the other leg of the pantyhose... Now when I bend my knees...â€
â€œI can see, dummy. Iâ€™m standing right over you.â€
â€œSorry. Now tie my ankles to my wrists. Thatâ€™s it... tighter. Oh!â€
â€œGood enough?â€
â€œNice job.â€
â€œSo try to get out of it.â€
â€œI am. Why do you think Iâ€™m wriggling about?â€
â€œMaybe the carpet has fleas.â€
â€œMaybe you have brain damage. Ouch! You little...â€
â€œWatch yourself, sissy. Your arse is mine now.â€
â€œEnjoy it while you can.â€
â€œYouâ€™re not getting out of it. I told you. Give up?â€
â€œYes, I give up. Congratulations Alex, youâ€™ve done your first hog-tie.â€
â€œSo is that it?â€
â€œBored already? Okay, go get three handkerchiefs... big ones... clean ones!â€
â€œHow about these?â€
â€œTheyâ€™ll do. Fold the first one a couple of times... No, chucklehead, diagonally.â€
â€œYouâ€™re asking for it.â€
â€œSorry; at least now youâ€™re doing it right. So tie it around my head... for gawdsake, over my eyes. Itâ€™s a blindfold. Tighter. Thatâ€™s better. I canâ€™t see a thing. So what are you doing now?â€
â€œIâ€™m folding another handkerchief, making a... umm...â€
â€œWad.â€
â€œYeah, wad. Okay, open wide.â€
â€œAggg...â€
â€œStop squirming.â€
â€œRrgghh.â€
â€œHow does that feel?â€
â€œMmmff!â€
â€œPardon?â€
â€œMmmff!â€
â€œIâ€™ll take that to mean: Youâ€™ve done an excellent job, Alex. Youâ€™re the boss of me.â€
â€œMmmff?â€
â€œIâ€™m glad we agree. Well, thatâ€™s it. Iâ€™m off to bed.â€
â€œMmmff-fff! Mmmff-fff!â€
â€œBye-bye.â€
â€œMmmm!!â€
â€œHa, just kidding! Whereâ€™s your sense of humour?â€
â€œGurrrg.â€
..........
â€œThere you go. All over. How ya feeling?â€
â€œOh, geez. I was just starting to enjoy it... not! Let me just stretch my legs.â€
â€œAll good?â€
â€œYeah. Wow! That was intense. Nice work. Youâ€™re going to make some girl very happy one day.â€
â€œIf sheâ€™s a weirdo twisted freak like you.â€
â€œThatâ€™s the only kind you... oh, forget it. Help me with the coffee table.â€
..........
â€œHi Mum. Whereâ€™s Dad?â€
â€œHello Sarah. Heâ€™s parking the car. You look tired.â€
â€œYeah. How was the show?â€
â€œI loved it. Your father slept through most of it.â€
â€œTypical male.â€
â€œHas Alex gone to bed?â€
â€œJust now.â€
â€œDid he behave himself?â€
â€œI kept him busy.â€
â€œGood. Your brother needs to be kept on a very short rope.â€
â€œThatâ€™s just what Iâ€™ve been thinking.â€

### Cool

Post by knightmaniac » Tue Aug 12, 2008 4:08 pm

That was a cool story.
Shy guy

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Post by sarobah » Tue Aug 12, 2008 4:45 pm

Thanks, although I donâ€™t think it worked as well as I hoped. It sagged a bit in the middle. I think I will stick to more conventional story-telling in the future.
~ Sarah
Words, like Nature, half reveal and half conceal the soul within.

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Post by Nuclearo » Tue Aug 12, 2008 6:09 pm

It's pretty good. Gets a little hard to figure out who's who in the beginning part but other than that well done!
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Post by Duct Tape Boys » Tue Aug 12, 2008 6:39 pm

I Agree. It was a good short sweet story.
Silence is Golden!
Duct Tape is Silver!
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When I'm done with you,
You'll be Bound & Gagged

### Re: Family Ties, # 1

Post by Qarl » Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:50 pm

Was it your idea in the real episode? Did he ruin the panty hose? ;-)
-Qarl