Tied up

Postby Nuclearo » Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:17 pm

KeiranB wrote:I want into my sisters bedroom and she decked me and said what are u doin here and i said are u ok then she decked me and put a brar,girls pants,tites,girl top and tied me up and handcuffed me and handcuffed and then tied my feetup and then she blifolded me then i ws so scard that i kept tlkin so she put masking tape over my mouth then she put her socks infrount of my nose and then she tied me to a pole in the basement and left me there and i was upsidedown and she left me there for 3 days and on the 3rd day she locked me in the carboot and then the next day she locked me in the loft for 3 dys again and after that she took pictures of me then i went to my bed handcuffed and she untied me but i cunt get the girls clothes of and i had to wear the tites for skwl

Please don't swear :P

Isn't it awesome that I can quote the entire story without making this post look too weird?
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Re: Tied up

Postby Youfromthefuture » Fri Dec 11, 2009 6:04 pm

I really like how have your own unique writing style. Other people would use detail, imagary, and remotely understandable phrases that are, frankly, overrated.

I also love the realistic aspect of your story. I have no problem believing you were tied up for over a week with no explanation of how you ate, drank, went to the bathroom, ect.

Spelling is also overrated.

Re: Tied up

Postby Youfromthefuture » Fri Dec 11, 2009 6:06 pm

KeiranB wrote:Yestoday i got tied to the bed when i was assleep by my brrother and sister


A masterpiece of litature.

Re: Tied up

Postby bondagefan » Sat Dec 12, 2009 1:49 am

I think you should just be like me and only read the stories not write any.

Re: Tied up

Postby haftwin » Sat Dec 12, 2009 9:06 am

So far the comments are more entertaining than the story - and (believe it or not) I really don't mean this as a put-down of the original writing.

Re: Tied up

Postby barefootboy » Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:11 am

Youfromthefuture wrote:I really like how have your own unique writing style. Other people would use detail, imagary, and remotely understandable phrases that are, frankly, overrated.

I also love the realistic aspect of your story. I have no problem believing you were tied up for over a week with no explanation of how you ate, drank, went to the bathroom, ect.

Spelling is also overrated.


This is the most entertaining thing I've read here for a long time.
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Re: Tied up

Postby Nuclearo » Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:07 am

Bad writers bring out the best in us XD
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Re: Tied up

Postby jb99 » Sun Dec 13, 2009 4:30 pm

or will ever be..?

Re: Tied up

Postby Youfromthefuture » Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:12 pm

Is punctuation not a part of his native language? Or being realistic?

Re: Tied up

Postby Chris12 » Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:45 am

Never knew you guys could be such yerks :(

Re: Tied up

Postby Chris12 » Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:56 am

its sad really really sad :(

Re: Tied up

Postby Chris12 » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:33 am

I agree with every word you said.

Re: Tied up

Postby binder » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:40 pm

vailaholic wrote:Every language is different with different punctuation. You guys are all having a laugh at his expense because of something he probably can't help... so quite frankly... you all need to shut up. Plain and simple... I've known for a long time that this board is full of kids, but never before have I seen you all act so childish. It's pathetic.

Ahh, don't you just love it when someone desperately tries to take the moral high ground for the sole reason of trying to make themselves feel important, whilst completely missing everything that's going on around them?

That's childish, just like your clearly false assumption that English is a second language for him (which, again, your're just using for that moral high ground to make you feel like this guy's saviour).

Re: Tied up

Postby Chris12 » Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:18 am

Being "this guy's saviour" is much better then the pathetic behavior you guys have been showing.
If a guys grammar is below some standerts then you offer advise and dont make fun of him what most of you are doing is just too pathetic for words.

Re: Tied up

Postby Chris12 » Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:56 am

Then offer advise instead of.....well these reply's

Re: Tied up

Postby binder » Tue Dec 15, 2009 10:57 am

Chris12 wrote:Being "this guy's saviour" is much better then the pathetic behavior you guys have been showing.

Actually it's not. You two know that there's nothing wrong with people's behaviour here, and we all know you know it. If you really must do that then at least wait until people are actually doing something wrong until you start mindlessly insulting them.

And what advice is there to give? I shall write a list of the most important advice I think should be given. Please feel free to add onto it:

1-You're not superhuman. You can't go for days without food or water trapped upside down.
2-Your friends aren't superhuman. You won't suddenly faint if they slap you. At worst you might get a sore face.
3-If you look back at your story and it's only one sentence long (it's true, go and look at the story and count the sentences) then you've gone very wrong somewhere.

Re: Tied up

Postby Chris12 » Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:06 pm

I did not have to wait long untill someone did something wrong and i'm not mindlessly insulting people.
Most of you are acting like yerks and everyone knows it.

Re: Tied up

Postby Nuclearo » Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:27 pm

Listen guys, this is no reason to start fighting each other. The "insults" might have crossed some people's boundaries, but KeiranB doesn't need you defending him either. He knows how to reply, and so far he hasn't. He might even be taking an even higher road than you and ignoring all this :lol: I agree this is close to going on for too long, but a good amount of this is going to bickering on the way people act and whether or not it is appropriate.

Now, my opinion about Dominik's examples: using extremely long sentences with throngs of "then" is not an uncommon error of new authors. On the other hand the unrealism (pretend that's a word), shortness and lack of detail of ALL of the stories is something else. For one thing, this section is for real stories. I wouldn't post my best most believable fiction in the true section, so I like to expect that kind of honesty from others. I think most of the board would appreciate it if this thread is just left to die.
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Re: Tied up

Postby Lappi112 » Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:48 am

In my Opinion he Writes like in Grimms Tales Hour.I don´t belive any Word.Sorry for this Harsh answer ,but it´s the True.#

Lappi

Re: Tied up

Postby Caesar » Fri Dec 18, 2009 8:14 pm

Alright Chris and Val are both completely wrong. His story is physically impossible, his grammar and "formation" of the English language is gruesome at best, and he barley has enough detail to convey what happened in his story. If English isn't his first language then maybe he should actually learn it before he posts here. Making people suffer through jibberish is unfair to everyone. And while I back nuclearo's original statement he is being quite hypocritical
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Re: Tied up

Postby binder » Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:14 am

Actually you did come to nonsensical assumptions, and you're doing nothing but hurling out insults.

No one was being insulted before you two entered the thread and there was none of this bullying you preach about, and now you're going about screaming insults at people for no reason other than wanting to make yourself feel important. You were wrong and now you're making an embarrassment of yourself, just get a grip and let it go.

Re: Tied up

Postby Chris12 » Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:25 am

I'm not wrong about anything i did not even gave my opinion of the story i just said you acted like yerks which is true.

Re: Tied up

Postby Spreadeagle » Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:11 am

Stop all yer bickering guys. Its a free site, its not like you have to pay for what you read, its open content for all and if someone wants to write a story, bad or good then let them, i do agree it should be in the fictional section tho, but I like everyone here is a member and not a story critic else we'd all have our quotes printed to publisise someones book. Keiron B at least contributed something unlike alot of people who are members and thats better than critising other peoples material when they dont share their own. I was a guest on here for a while reading other peoples' stories and thought it only proper to post my own and give something back to the site. Wish my stories had 20+ comments tho... Good on you Keiron.
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Re: Tied up

Postby Spreadeagle » Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:19 am

And by the way how good are MGMT?! Just bought their album and think their wicked!
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Re: Tied up

Postby Nuclearo » Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:49 am

vailaholic wrote:Nuclearo, you were among the first to fire, and that first shot was not your only shot. And now you're telling us not to argue? Then you laugh at us because you think he may be taking a higher road by ignoring the insults that you helped begin?

*sigh* And yet again I fail to convey my tone through the keyboard...

My new theory: KeiranB is trolling us for lulz. And succeeding...
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Re: Tied up

Postby zanev » Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:18 am

I got a PM asking me to check out this topic and delete it...I'm not going to (as part of me did enjoy reading your replies). I will say though that if you want to bicker please take it to the general chat section or blast each other in private messages. Don't want to make it a habit of posts getting this off topic. Behave children. :D

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