Who's in Charge?

Postby canuck100 » Mon Nov 24, 2008 8:44 pm

I'm always a little bit wary when a story starts this way:

bluestraggler wrote:The girls:
My sister Kate, 16½
Kate’s friend Rachel, 17
My neighbour Suzanne, 16
My cousin Rebecca, 14
The guys:
Rebecca’s brother, my cousin Rowan, 16
Suzanne’s brother, Kyle’s twin Jason, 14
Suzanne’s brother, Jason’s twin Kyle, 14
Me, the narrator, 14½


because the storyline of these multi-characters tales tend to be hard to follow when the writers are not particularly talented. But the use of
Dramatis Personae should have been a hint of the good things to come...

I loved your story. Not only was it entertaining, but it was also extremely well written. I hope you will have other tales to share with us.

Re: Who's in Charge?

Postby rash357 » Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:46 pm

Fantastic story, extremely well written and a thoroughly enjoyable read - sounds like a fun vacation too! Hope to hear more from yah