The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby tapeman45 » Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:56 am

Part 1: The Take
Henrietta was walking back from school, as she always did. She liked the walk as it was a guaranteed half hour of exercise in privacy. As she was walking she felt the cold wind cut into her black tight clad legs. ‘Christ its cold! Why can’t we wear trousers!?’ Hen thought. She was dressed in her school uniform, which comprised a very tight black pencil skirt with a matching black jacket and jumper with a white shirt, she also had to wear a blue and red tie. For shoes the girls were told to be sensible, so Henrietta’s parents had, buying her a very sensible pair of boring black leather brogues from Clarkes, well known for their sex appeal. To top off the dullness she had to wear a black hat with a ribbon with the school crest on it, just great.
Hens parents were both extremely intelligent and very wealthy, her father was one of the country’s most successful bakers, while her mother ran a very successful chain of beauty salons, upshot was that they could afford to send their Henrietta to the finest school, Lady Summerton’s Young Ladies Academy, famed for hard work and strict discipline, it appealed very strongly to her parents. The school was so fancy it had 3 uniforms, one for winter, what Hen was wearing, a summer one, a white dress with matching socks and straw boater hat. To further add to the misery of the girls and their parent’s wallets the 3rd uniform was only worn to formal occasions, it comprised of black skirt, very smart starched black blazer lined with a red stripe down the lapels and round the cuffs as well as the hat. Henrietta was wearing the winter uniform, and was hating it, though she was grateful she wasn’t a boarder, they had to wear regulation panties and bras.
As Henrietta was walking she was thinking about the boy she’d seen checking her out in the town, and why wouldn’t he? Hen was the darling of her year, someone girls wished they looked like. Hen had shoulder length blonde hair, a healthy freckled face with a nose that didn’t jut massively out. This along with the slender curve of her jaw and mouth and emerald green eyes helped her stand out. What also helped was her decently sized chest, a DD, helping make guys eyes pop out on stalks.
As Henrietta walked down the alley she noticed a man behind her, nothing suspicious probably going to the shops. Then she noticed a pair of men standing at the other end of the alley, again nothing suspicious, they were just chatting. Hen approached the men, doing what she always did when men stared, looked away trying to not make eye contact, this was her fatal error. The closer of the 2 men suddenly flung his hand over her mouth. Hen screamed, ‘HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!’ Too late the other man was behind her pinning her arms behind her back. Then she hear the sickening sound of a cable tie and felt her wrists being strapped together. Hen struggled, kicked and bucked. The men just grunted and the leader held his hand tighter over her mouth. They dragged her writhing body to a van. The last thing Hen saw was a cloth being shoved over her mouth and a man running his hand up her leg.

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby jsherwood » Thu Nov 06, 2014 12:25 pm

Please paragraph

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby 31acujoker » Thu Nov 06, 2014 2:18 pm

Good start man! Can't wait to see what happens to poor Henrietta!
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Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby tapeman45 » Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:32 pm

Part 2: Into the Dungeon With Ya!
Henrietta began to wake slowly...blinking as the light of a naked light bulb burned into her eyes. Slowly she began to try to rise, as she lifted her head she saw her legs had been tied together with a length of rope, she tried to wriggle her feet, but there was no give. Then she tried moving her arms, no joy bound as tightly as her feet. Then she tried to open her mouth...to her horror she realised it was taped shut, and worse something had been stuffed in it. The worst part came when she she saw the length of rope hanging on the front of her skirt. Slowly she realised it was connected to the reason why her panties felt tight, they, whoever they were, had tied a crotch rope to her. Realising this, along with the shock of her kidnapping, and start to scream.
'HMMMMMMMMMMMMMFFFFFFF!!!! HEMMMMFFF MFFGG' She screamed.
As she screamed she saw the door open and a masked man enter the room. Seeing Hen was awake he said nothing, instead her walked over and grabbed the rope on the front of Hen's skirt, yanking it hard.
'HMMMFFF!' Hen squealed as a wave of undesired pleasure shot through her body. Still the man said nothing, seeing Hen's displeasure, he yanked again, causing her to grunt loudly. At this the door opened again and another man, dressed in black and masked entered. The other turned to him, grinning.
'Leave.' The new man instructed, wiping the grin of his comrades face, the other man left, disappointed. The new man turned to her, 'Welcome Henrietta. I hope you're ok,' Hen just grunted, quieter than last time. The man then came closer, Hen could see his great grey eyes, leaning down he whispered in her ear 'That was a taster of what's to come,' Hen screamed, terrified of what was going to happen to her. The man waited for her to stop, before producing a large red rubber ball gag, pointing to it he said 'You're gonna wear this go it?' Hen just looked at it thinking 'that's way to large for my mouth!' Indeed when the man peeled of her tape gag, allowing her to spit the rag out her mouth she refused to allow him to put the ball in her mouth.
The man just looked at her, before pinching her nostrils together, 'This is going in your mouth and then I'm gonna play with you,' Hen was begining to run out of air, she had to open her mouth, when she did she screamed....AAHHHHHHMMMMMFFFF!!!
The man forced the ball between her teeth and did the strap up as tightly as he could, pulling Henrietta's lips back. 'There now you look nice,' The man said, starting to smile. He then reached down and picked Hen up, his arms wrapping around the hem of her skirt, as her torso drooped over his shoulder an her breasts pressed against his back. 'Hmmm I like this' The man said, rubbing Hen's arse and tight clad legs. Tears began to roll down Hen's face as he carried out of the room, smiling the man exclaimed 'Into the dugeon with ya!' Giving Hen's arse a real good squeeze
'HMMMMFFFF AMMMFFF!' Hen squealed.

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby jsherwood » Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:58 pm

very hard to read...do space your paragraphs.

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby Sealherlips » Fri Nov 07, 2014 10:45 am

jsherwood wrote:very hard to read...do space your paragraphs.

It's not that difficult to read. Quit bitching.

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby jsherwood » Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:19 am

Sealherlips wrote:
jsherwood wrote:very hard to read...do space your paragraphs.

It's not that difficult to read. Quit bitching.


Bitch to you.

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby xtc » Fri Nov 07, 2014 12:09 pm

Please don't make any more abusive posts, folks.
They will be removed in the first instance.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby jsherwood » Fri Nov 07, 2014 12:22 pm

xtc wrote:Please don't make any more abusive posts, folks.
They will be removed in the first instance.


Right I simply said to space between the lines. Am I not allow to say that? She brought in the b word.

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby chadmc90 » Fri Nov 07, 2014 12:40 pm

jsherwood wrote:
xtc wrote:Please don't make any more abusive posts, folks.
They will be removed in the first instance.


Right I simply said to space between the lines. Am I not allow to say that? She brought in the b word.


But you did say it back to him(yes, his profile says he is a guy).

But as far as the story goes, it is better to read with spacing. You can edit your previous posts to make the changes by clicking the top right button called 'edit'. Your readers will thank you for it. cheers
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Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby jsherwood » Fri Nov 07, 2014 2:02 pm

I repeat myself, story needed spacing in paragraphing and is also disjointed in parts. And am not bravoing.

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby xtc » Fri Nov 07, 2014 2:04 pm

All it needed was to say it pleasantly.
The argument now stops!
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby jsherwood » Fri Nov 07, 2014 2:06 pm

I guess my point is made.

Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby Mister Mistoffelees » Sat Nov 08, 2014 9:54 pm

Well, to get back to the actual story...something's very "off" about this kidnapper. A ransom kidnapping seemed to be the idea at first, but he's playing very rough games with Hen. I fear this guy might get very very dangerous as the abduction goes on...
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Re: The Abduction of a School Girl

Postby tapeman45 » Sun Nov 09, 2014 7:32 pm

Hello everyone, thank you very much for your comments, especially the ones about paragraphing, this will happen as soon as possible. I also wish to apologise if the story causes offence I will consider removing it.