In the last part you said this happened yesterday, so writing
ducttapelover wrote:after that day there was no more bondage

is weird. It makes it seem like you are either lying about this being true or expecting to live your entire life tied up.
About the fiction: If you want to write and have good story ideas go ahead, but can you try to separate the stories into paragraphs? Even if every part isn't really long, it could get annoying.