## My First Story

Post by barefootethan » Sun May 09, 2010 9:55 am

I've been lurking and reading stories on the net for a while now, and this has been cooking up in my computer for a while, I'm finally putting the finishing touches on it and getting it out there. It's all REALLY fun stuff to me , but this being my first-ever published story, I don't wanna post anything that'll break the rules, the story's totally humiliating and has strict tie-ups.
http://tinyurl.com/29vbteg - I Didn't Expect to Lose [m/m]
http://tinyurl.com/35h4dqc - I Didn't Expect to Lose: Part 2
Anyways, that's the link above. I'd love to hear comments, suggestions, etc., but it's my first time, so be gentle.
P.S. - If I'm breaking the rules in any way, sorry in advance!
EDIT: Couldn't sleep, so I finished up Part 2. Just follow the link.
Last edited by barefootethan on Sun May 09, 2010 9:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Sweaty bare feet + tight ties = AN AWESOME FUN TIME!!!

### Re: My First Story

Post by Jason Toddman » Sun May 09, 2010 3:17 pm

I am so loving this story. Of course, if you've read any of mine yet, this probably won't come as a big shock to you.
As far as I can tell, you aren't violating any rules at all, but only guys like Zanev or Nuclearo could tell you for sure. But especially where you've put it on a link and warned of possible offense, I'd say you've covered all the bases.
DO PLEASE continue this story! I'd be envying you if you hadn't said it was fictional. But it is great. You tell a story very well; especially if you're really only 16.
Funny thing though: there seem to be an awful lot of Tylers in TUG stories! I know of at least 10 others. Must be the first syallble - tie-ler.
BTW is Tyler based on someone you actually know?
Definitely keep going with this story.
Suggestion: ask Nuclearo if it fits so this story can be put where more people are going to see it and read it; he'd be the best judge. This doesn't belong in obscurity and it... ok I'll shut up now.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

### Re: My First Story

Post by barefootethan » Sun May 09, 2010 3:25 pm

Thanks! I guess having this fantasy stirring in my head for a loong while kind of helped me get the creative juices flowing. Reading everyone else's work also gave me some inspiration.
Thanks for the advice on asking the mods, I'll be sure to do that. I just didn't want to get in trouble on my very first post.
I'll definitely be continuing this story. I'm having a great time writing it, and I'm glad that ppl are having a great time reading it.
BTW, Tyler IS kinda based on someone I know, but his name's not Tyler lol. I didn't really think of anything as I was typing it out, maybe that 'Tie-ler' thing is subliminal or something.
Anyways, thanks again, look out for Chapter 2 real soon.
Sweaty bare feet + tight ties = AN AWESOME FUN TIME!!!

### Re: My First Story

Post by barefootethan » Sun May 09, 2010 9:41 pm

Couldn't sleep, so I finished up Part 2 and just published it. Check the original post for the link. Thanks for reading!
Sweaty bare feet + tight ties = AN AWESOME FUN TIME!!!

### Re: My First Story

Post by Jason Toddman » Sun May 09, 2010 9:57 pm

Excellent story. But only 35 views in several hours? This story really needs better exposure (pun unintended) than that! Though if it gets any more interesting it may have to go into More Intimate Tugs rather than the fictional section. But it'll still get seen more there and it is under Tugs Links.
But the loving way that you describe all this... are you sure it's ALL fictional?
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

### Re: My First Story

Post by barefootethan » Sun May 09, 2010 10:44 pm

Yeah...I kind of got carried away on the, I guess...intimacy stuff on Part 2. I don't really plan on that side of the story going further than what's already written, that's not the focus I'm going for.
Unfortunately, it's all fictional. I guess I have a knack for turning the picture in my head into words.
Sweaty bare feet + tight ties = AN AWESOME FUN TIME!!!

### Re: My First Story

Post by Jason Toddman » Sun May 09, 2010 11:51 pm

> barefootethan wrote:Yeah...I kind of got carried away on the, I guess...intimacy stuff on Part 2. I don't really plan on that side of the story going further than what's already written, that's not the focus I'm going for.
> Unfortunately, it's all fictional. I guess I have a knack for turning the picture in my head into words.

That is perfectly fine if that is what you want to write. A little disappointing to a dirty old man like me but I'll get through it - provided you keep up the good work. AFor someone who never experienced it, you are doing a very good job of writing it. I have a good imagination myself, but mine is aided by actual (if not recent)experience. Yet your 'enjoyment' in the story matches what mine would be were I in the same situation and the same age.
Just one very minor thing; I'm unsure it's possible for even an athletic boy to hop up steps (unless they are lots lower than I am imagining) without help while bound in the fashion you described i n part 1. I'D keel over for sure; though I admit I'm no athlete. Your character apparently only gets help getting down the stairs, which actually would be easier unaided simply by sitting down on the steps as you go.
I am hoping this is a nice, long, well-detailed story.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

### Re: My First Story

Post by barefootethan » Mon May 10, 2010 12:03 am

I'm kind of envisioning this long story as kind of an introduction to a life of TUGs. Maybe in a future episode I'll delve into the more heated stuff. This is just gonna be three days of tight tie-ups and lots of humiliating things.
Thanks for the feedback on the stair-hopping. I'll take that into account in any future situations.
I really hope this story falls within the rules so I can just post the full text. But in any case, I'll keep plugging away at it and keep on posting links. I'm glad that at least one person likes it, so I'll keep writing some more. I still can't sleep, so I'm about to start on Part 3 right now.
Sweaty bare feet + tight ties = AN AWESOME FUN TIME!!!

### Re: My First Story

Post by Jason Toddman » Mon May 10, 2010 12:26 am

[quote="barefootethan"]I'm kind of envisioning this long story as kind of an introduction to a life of TUGs. Maybe in a future episode I'll delve into the more heated stuff. This is just gonna be three days of tight tie-ups and lots of humiliating things.
There's nothing wrong with that whatsoever. I only wish it were real and happening to me - but I'm unusual that way. Anyway, write only what you're comfortable with now and save the 'heated stuff' for when YOU'RE ready to do it no matter how eager guys like me are to read it.
Thanks for the feedback on the stair-hopping. I'll take that into account in any future situations.
In your Friday afternoon story I have a similar problem with disbelief that anyone could get far on just their elbows and knees like that - especially up stairs. But there's no need to change this. Just because I couldn't do it...
I really hope this story falls within the rules so I can just post the full text. But in any case, I'll keep plugging away at it and keep on posting links. I'm glad that at least one person likes it, so I'll keep writing some more. I still can't sleep, so I'm about to start on Part 3 right now.[/quote
Only a moderator can say for sure. You should PM one ASAP; though it might be a while before he writes back. So far though, you've been far less graphic than some writers on the TUGsite - including me. BTW Please don't deprive yourself of too much sleep... because then how are you going to keep on writing these nice stroies that are currently depriving me of mine?
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

### Re: My First Story

Post by barefootethan » Mon May 10, 2010 1:26 am

I've already PM'd the mods, haven't gotten an answer back but hopefully I'll get one soon, and it'll be a good news answer.
No school tomorrow, so I don't gotta worry about that sleep stuff.
Besides, I'm having too much fun.
Sweaty bare feet + tight ties = AN AWESOME FUN TIME!!!

### Re: My First Story

Post by Jason Toddman » Mon May 10, 2010 5:31 am

Me too - as if I hadn't already made that obvious!
Note to anyone else; the entire story can be found under the Fictional Section. The title is: "I didn't expect to lose!" Great Tugs read!
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...