Postby xtc » Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:53 am
Intriguing start.
But . . . .
. . . . "restroom" - Yuk!
Good luck with this project but please be discriminating about the suggestions you accept. The "usual suspects" (sorry, guys) will soon post their customary replies and you could end up with a very formulaic story.
However, I think that, with careful editorial control, we could be in for a treat here.
Welcome to the league of TUGs writers.
Wassail!
Xtc