## Defeted by the girls

Post by surferjax » Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:31 pm

Try spellcheck

### Re: Defeted by the girls

Post by Nuclearo » Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:15 pm

> KeiranB wrote:Reply and tell me what u think i hate it

I think the story lacks a nice injection of detail. I can't even complain about formatting when it's so short >:(
Also I have a hard time believing someone slapped you unconscious XD
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### Re: Defeted by the girls

Post by Suestruggles » Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:39 pm

Try reading before you post.
Sue
Fit to be tied, wants to struggle.

### Re: Defeted by the girls

Post by Scottstud94 » Fri Dec 11, 2009 1:12 pm

> KeiranB wrote:I was going home when some girls got my arms andput them behind my bak and 1 slaped me so i fainted and when i woke up i was at their house they was tieing me up and i had girls clothes on so the girls kept slapping me then they locked me i the spare room it was a little room and then a few hours laterthey came in and said they were gunna undo my hands and untied me then they handcuffed me and they hung me upsidedown and i had lipstick on so the next day when i went to see my mates i had girls clothes on and the acsesers and now them girls tell me what i do if i dont they will post a picture on facebook

Yes, you should fix this part

### Re: Defeted by the girls

Post by Youfromthefuture » Fri Dec 11, 2009 6:16 pm

> KeiranB wrote:Reply and tell me what u think i hate it

I hate it too.
Although the phrase 'one slapped me so I fainted' made me laugh for half a minute, so thanks for that.