This is only my second story to date. I hope you guys won't mind if it isn't up to scratch.
It begins at a secondary school, or high school of you would prefer. Brief intro:
Me: Danny, 16 (few months to 17th birthday), short and skinny, 5 ft 3'
Jack: Just past 17th birthday, 5 ft 7' moderate height for his age, average build, rich family
Yoong: Also just past 17th birthday, ,athletic, talkative , 5 ft 5'
Ivan: 17 in a few months, athletic, 5 ft 6'
It all started with Jack's family. Money always attract trouble, and one day Jack finds himself in the back of a van with his friends in a very hostile environment......
[2.25 pm - Outside school]
"Hey, wait up!" I said, me and Ivan catching up with Jack and Yoong. We were walking down a neighborhood that will eventually lead us to a bus stop. jack, being a modest boy, doesn't bother with having his own transport. He prefers to be with the crowd. "What's taking you guys so long?" "Tell the teacher that, with her lecture and whatnot"
We were so busy chatting away that we didn't notice a van following us for quite some time. It is a green van, without windows and small in size. The type you would find delivering goods/food. The neighborhood was so deserted by now as most students has cleared away. School ended at 2, and most staying here prefers to close their doors shut at this hour to avoid the so-called "ruffian" students.
Woosh. "Hey what the...? Don't ya know how to drive?" the van was right in front of us. Bang, the back doors open and people wearing ...ultraman masks came out. One, two, three, four. Each of them grabbed us before we had time to react - covering up our mouths and pushing us into the back of the van. "Go, go, go!" The van started moving. I and Jack, closer to the van door, wanted to kick it open now that they loosened their grips on us, when a glimmering sharp object appeared. Two, actually. One for both of us.
"Listen to us and all will be well." commanded one of them, "or else...."
The four of us nodded in defeat. They produced rope and tied our hands behind our backs, palm to palm, and even passing the rope under our school belt (part of the uniform) so we can't lift our arms. Next they tied our legs, from the ankles to thighs, so tight that my legs started to feel numb. They proceeded to slice mine, Jack and Ivan's white school shirt and pull them off, leaving us bare chested in our school shorts, and cut out a slice of the shirt, stuffing it into our mouths and wrapped the rest around our head, gagging us.
I nearly puked at that moment. My shirt was sweaty from my run to chase up with Jack and Yoong earlier, and now I'm forced to suck my own sweat. Ivan is suffering too from his looks, although Jack seems luckier.
Two of the kidnappers then pulled Yoong towards them and tied the rops tying his legs to the leg of the seat, keeping him in place.
"We won't hurt YOU, but if you don't cooperate, your FRIENDS will suffer. More than some of them are now, of course," said one of the man, laughing at his own joke.
What do they want with him? Jack's the rich kid, not Yoong. So...?
TBC? What do you guys think?