BIGFOOT, REAL OR FICTION ??

Postby abductionfan » Sat Jan 10, 2015 3:35 pm

On a cold rainy day in the western region of the U.S.A. there is rumors of Bigfoot sightings everywhere dating back ages. Some people believe them and others think it is all a myth. So upon my relocating to the area, i settled in a homestead well out in the wilderness and met some of the local families near me. All of them said it was a hoax used to scare the kids into not going off into the woods on their own, but one young family had 5 adopted kids; 2 girls named Angie 16, and Hillary age 15 the 3 boys were ages 6 10 and 11. The boys were scared to wander off thru the woods, but Angie and Hillary were laughing about the stories the had heard. So, one weekend; the family went off for a shopping trip to the closest city but Angie talked her younger adopted sister Hillary into saying they wanted to stay home to catch up on their homework for school on Monday. The dad BILL asked me to drive by and check in on them for them, i agreed; and on Saturday around noon i did so, making sure they were safe; Hillary asked me if i heard any strange noises last night. I said no, other than the coyote howls and a mountain lion all normal sounds in the night; why ?? Angie, taunting her said that Hillary swore she heard something they had not heard in the year they lived here, said it was a BIGFOOT!!! I never heard a sound all night long.So, i reassured Hillary that it was nothing; and gave her my phone number to call if she got scared she could call and i would come by and take a look for them. She said thanks, and as i headed for the truck; Angie said that she was going to walk down the trail to the lake and check out the scenery in the hills behind their house. I told her to be safe and i would stop by tomorrow; Hillary said she was going to lay out and get a tan in the yard. As i drive off, and head for home; i get an idea to scare Angie. Stopping at the end of their drive, i realized Hillary called my phone so i had her number that way i would know who was calling; i called her and asked her if her sister was gone yet; saying no, i told her what my idea was of dressing up like a bigfoot; she giggled and said that her and Angie played some tie up games once in awhile and she would help me with this idea. I agreed, and told her where there was a cave in the hills between their place and mine; and to tell Angie she was going to go check it out and she should come that way in a couple hours. Hillary said ok, as i drove home to find an old costume i found at a sale one day; grabbed it and some rope then headed off for the cave. As i reach the cave, i go inside and get ready to set the plan in action. Getting into the gorilla costume; i sit and waited on Hillary to come, after a half hour she calls my name; and i say i am inside in costume; she walks inside and laughs when she sees me dressed as a Bigfoot; she was wearing her sneakers, bikini top and a pair of shorts. As we sit and talk about what we will do, which was tie her up and when Angie texts her saying she is on her way, i will put her over my shoulder hands tied behind her back; ankles tied and in the shadows carry Hillary out of the cave back towards their house and lay her in the yard for Angie to find. So, i tell Hillary to turn around and i tied her hands behind her back so she could not get them free, Hillary said that she has never been tied that tight before and says it felt good; her ankles were tied next she struggled and could not loosen the ropes. Hillary asked about being gagged, i said no; to make it look realistic, she agreed and said when you pick me up i will scream a couple times then act like i passed out from being scared. Now, we wait for Angie to text her, and; an hour later, just before dark; she textd and said she was getting close. Picking Hillary up over my shoulder, i carry her to the entrance of the cave and see Angie coming towards us on the trail. I told Hillary to scream and stepped out onto the trail next to the one Angie was on; it worked Angie stopped in her tracks just as i ran up the other trail with Hillary over my shoulder towards their house, Angie yelled at Hillary and dropped her pack that rollrd down the hill with her phone i went about a hundred yards, stopped looked back to see Angie following us, i turned and continued on to their house putting Hillary down on the grass laughing hard; i told her to stay still and quiet as i hid and waited for Angie to get to her, hiding behind a tree Angie comes to Hillary and tries to untie her as her back was to me i grab her and turn her to face me, she screams and passes out. I look at Hillary who is laughing again, tells me to tie Angie as well, but in a hogtie; because she could escape easier than Hillary, so; i did, and packed them both into their barn, and sat in the dark waiting for Angie to come to. When she did, Hillary asked her if she was o.k., when Angie said yes; and tried to get free from the hogtie, said that she was now a believer. Hillary started laughing and said good; now maybe you will not be so mean with the boys and me when we get scared. Angie said she was sorry, thats when i walked over and asked them what happened; Angie told me what she saw, i untied them both and me and Hillary both laughed, Angie looked at us then said you guys done this for a joke. We said we did, Angie said well, it worked; no more being in the woods after dark The two of them gave me a hug and went in the house i went home and the next morning went and found Angies pack she dropped returned it to her, when they asked me if i could tie them up again as a joke on their parents. So, i did after they got a call saying they were a half hour from home both were hogtied and gagged, in their rooms when the family got home and found them. They said someone broke in over night and left them this way all night before saying it was a joke. The outcome was that i found two girls who would come to my house when they could and play tie up games after this. A joke that turned out in a good way, and safe for them.

Re: BIGFOOT, REAL OR FICTION ??

Postby Jason Toddman » Sat Jan 10, 2015 5:58 pm

This would be far easier and more enjoyable to read if you broke it up into manageable-sized paragraphs.
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Re: BIGFOOT, REAL OR FICTION ??

Postby abductionfan » Sun Jan 11, 2015 1:23 pm

Sorry Jason, new unit i am still trying to figure out how it operates. I will mess with it before posting another story.

Re: BIGFOOT, REAL OR FICTION ??

Postby Jason Toddman » Sun Jan 11, 2015 1:54 pm

abductionfan wrote:Sorry Jason, new unit i am still trying to figure out how it operates. I will mess with it before posting another story.


That's okay; I understand that. It happens with new writers a lot. I think I had trouble with run on paragraphs myself when I began here... or at least in spacing them out.

Just in case you aren't sure how, just place your cursor at each point where you want to end a paragraph and begin a new one and hit enter... preferably twice each time so that you also have a blank line between paragraphs. This also adds to readability with longer posts.

Just as I did here. :quirk:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: BIGFOOT, REAL OR FICTION ??

Postby abductionfan » Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:06 pm

Thanks, i will try that.