Sakura's date

Postby Chris12 » Wed Sep 08, 2010 5:31 am

This story was requested by naruto its my first time writing a story about fictional characters so i hope i'l do a good job :big:

The story takes place in shippuden(the second part of the anime) which means naruto and sakura are both 15/16

Naruto was busy training in the forest he was a bit down because sakura had rejected him again.

Naruto had asked Sakura on dates many times but she always refused or had beaten him up because he was ''annoying'' or ''an idiot''

Not for from narutó Sakura was training with her rival Ino but it looked more like they where trying to kill each other.

Being a brat naruto thought this was a great oppertunity and quicly rushed home to get some ropes.

''Ready ino pig!'' sakura said and prepared her fists

''I'm always ready to beat you forerhead girl!

The two rivals glared and started fighting

By the time naruto got back the two girls where exhausted when sakura trew a smoke bomb he took his chance

Naruto grabbed Sakura clamped his hand over her mouth

''mpphh!'' she made some surprised screams

When the smoke was gone Ino stood alone on the battlefield ''D-did she flee?'' she asked very surprised ''Well i guess i won from forehead girl then!''

Naruto had already taken a struggling Sakura to a different place ''are you sure you don't want a date?'' Naruto teasingly asked her

''mmgarutoph!'' she said angry because of the hand on her mouth

''Shhh de quite!'' naruto smiled cheekly and pulled her forehead protector over her mouth gagging her ''Its just untill i have some tape'' he told while binding her hands

''mmggghhh!'' Sakura tried to struggle but she was too tired from her fight with ino

When sakura was tightly bound and gagged naruto summoned a shadow clone to get him some tape

''mmpphh! mmhhh! mmppggg! Sakura's muffled screams where full of anger and naruto feared she would use her super strenght to kill him once she was free

''Don't you think this is a nice first date?'' Naruto asked with a huge grinn sakura responded by struggling and screaming furiosly ''Kage bushin no jutsu!'' in a puff of smoke many clones of naruto appeared all with a feather in their hand.

''mmpphh!'' Sakura's anger now got fearfull

Naruto took a feather too and approuched her with the biggest grinn he ever had :twisted:

Re: Sakura's date

Postby Naruto Uzumaki » Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:40 pm

awesome! please continue!
I am the captor of sakura to keep her away from sasuke. And maybe tickle her a bit :)

Re: Sakura's date

Postby Neko » Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:45 pm

Very good. ^_^
I'm a massive fan of the Naruto series myself and I really like this because the actions that you have made your characters do are exactly how you would imagine the original characters to be like. So good job on their personalities. (:
Also...Please continue! x

Re: Sakura's date

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Sep 22, 2010 5:35 pm

Congratulations Chris. You have almost surpassed my own skills at writing stories about fictional characters. Your graduation ceremony is simple. Just do a similar story but about any of my non evil fictional created characters and it has to be this well done.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Sakura's date

Postby Chris12 » Sat Sep 25, 2010 2:52 am

i'l contineu tonight

Re: Sakura's date

Postby Chris12 » Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:56 pm

''Allright! get in line! get in line!'' naruto told his clones.The shadow clone took turns tickling Sakura and because there where so many a huge waiting line emerged

Sakura was still struggling and cursing as hard as she could

Two clones took off her shoes so everyone could tickle her

''mmpphhh!'' Sakura laughed and used her bound feet to kick naruto's clones when they came near. They dissapeared in a puff of smoke.

''Hey stop that!'' naruto took Sakura's feet and started tickling them

Sakura moaned cursed and eventually used her feet to kick naruto himself too making him fly into a tree

''Ouch even when she's tied up sakura-chan is still violent!'' a disturbed naruto said to himself ''In fact she will be more violent then ever when she gets out!''

Naruto's clone's started tickling Sakura everywere untill they where to exhausted to go on and dissapeared. meanwhile the clone who was sent to get some tape returned

Sakura was exhausted too from all the struggling and screaming

''Fun date right!'' naruto grinned

Sakura thought it was better not to respond but in her mind(called inner Sakura in the series) she was screaming she would take naruto's head

Naruto took her forehead protector off ''Naruto!' you'l paMMPHH! Naruto had gagged her with the tape before she could finish

''Don't be so loud Sakura chan people will hear'' Naruto laughed

She screamed even louder which made naruto tickle her even more

The pair suddenly heard voices ''Is she here?'' a woman named shizune asked she was the assistent of Sakura's teacher and leader of the village Tsunade

''Ino told her she last saw her here! Dammit she's late!'' apperantly Sakura had an appointment with Tsunade and she was very Angry that Sakura hadn't shown up yet

Naruto went white from fear ''Granny Tsunade is even more violent then Sakura! if she finds out i tied sakura i'm dead!'' he thought

''mmpphh! mmghhh!'' Sakura screamed as hard as she could.

A panicking Naruto quicly took Sakura to another spot in the forest

''Looks like i have to tickle some more for calling for help!

Sakura made some begging mmpphh's but naruto ignored it and started tickling

Her muffled screams drew the attention of a man reading a (porn) book in a nearby tree. he was their teacher Hatake kakashi

''Naruto you are disturbing my reading'' he said

''ahh! K-kakashi sensei! what are you doing here! naruto yelled horrified

''Reading'' he said without taking his eyes from his book ''Don't be so loud people come here for rest''

After finishing his chapter the man jumped out of the tree ''One Thousand Years of Death'' he said (not really comfertable explaining that attack :big:) and charged at naruto still reading

Naruto was shaking from fear so much he couldn't do anything and soon he flew trough the air in pain untill he hit the ground

Kakashi untied Sakura and after thanking him sakura moved to naruto

''Naruto!'' she yelled angry readying her fist and puching down every tree she passed

''S-s-sakura-chan i-i'm s-sorry!'' naruto said in a begging tone but Sakura didn't even hear it

Naruto's screams where even heard in the village and he was later found knocked out by the gates after recieving a huge beating and if Kakashi hadn't stopped her Sakura would have broken all of naruto's bones.

Naruto didn't dare asking Sakura about date's afterwards

The end

Re: Sakura's date

Postby Naruto Uzumaki » Sat Sep 25, 2010 1:07 pm

haha great ending! i'm going to start writing naruto tie up stories
I am the captor of sakura to keep her away from sasuke. And maybe tickle her a bit :)

Re: Sakura's date

Postby sarumansauron » Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:14 am

naruto uzumaki wrote:haha great ending! i'm going to start writing naruto tie up stories


Remember that Naruto possesses the Jutso clone of the shadows, therefore for him to tie somebody is very easy, but for him to be the victim is difficult.

Good story. Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Sakura's date

Postby Naruto Uzumaki » Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:19 am

got it dude!
I am the captor of sakura to keep her away from sasuke. And maybe tickle her a bit :)

Re: Sakura's date

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:49 pm

Takes a master to tie up a master. I look forward to reading more anime genre style stories like this one.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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