## Tied up In a Cabin

Post by Leopord » Tue Nov 29, 2016 4:22 pm

Note: I won't reveal anything about the people named here and these aren't their real names.
(The story is when I was 14(my fake name being Tim.) and a friend of mine named, let's call her Lily and she is the same age.)
My family and Lily's always went on a camping trip for three weeks just after school ended. Lily and I just graduated from my middle school and we couldn't wait to go on our usual trip. We arrived around 4:00 pm. Me and Lily shared a cabin while my family stayed at another cabin tenminutes away. While Lily's stayed at another cabin also ten minutes away. I was an only child and Lily's Mother was just tested for pregnancy. Soon our families sat around a campfire at 8ish but my Mother and Lily's parents went back to their cabins. At 9:50 pm, my Father said "You two can stay up only too 1:00 at the latest ok." We both nodded and started to head back to the cabin. Our cabin was big and had several camping supplies like oars, firewood, and rope. But what our parents didn't know was that me and Lily liked to tie each other up. I asked "So who's gonna get tied up tonight ?" Lily responded with an excited tone "Let's flip a coin, Heads I tie you up. Tails you tie me up." "Alright" I calmly claimed. Lily flipped the coin and it landed on heads. She said anxiously "Alrighty let me get the stuff." I wasn't annoyed that I was getting tied up, but still I hope to get her nice and tied tomorrow. She dragged an old wooden chair and told me to sit down. I did as asked and put my hands through the back of the chair. She grabbed a big bundle of rope and got to work tying my wrists together. "So" I ask "How has your school year gone ?" She shrugged "Well it was okay, how bout you ?" "Mine was great and I was close to asking Lana out." She was still tying my hands together, I knew it was going to be tight. Soon she finally started to knot the bonds. "Ah there we go, how does it feel ?" She said in a sarcastic tone. I struggled but couldn't get loose "A little tight." "Good." She responded. She than started on my ankles. "So how do you want to be gagged ?" I looked down torwards her "What do you mean ?" "Well I think we should do something different this time, don't worry I'll allow you to gag me too." I was a bit relieved. She finally got my ankles firmly tied together and got to my chest and waist. "Well let's see you can use a handkerchief, a small towel...." "How about my socks ?" I was a bit taken away at that. "Well I guess, but are they, you know, stinky ?" She smiled evilly at me. "My stinkiest pair." She said as she was securely tying me to the chair. I was scared now but I'm open to trying it. She finalized the knot and tying a small sliver of rope from my ankle tie to my wrist tie. Making sure I wasn't going anywhere. She got on the floor ready to take off her right sock but stopped and I could see a glimmer of thought going through her head. She pulled back on the sock and pushed me towards her bed, right at the edge. She leaped and landed with her feet right near my face. "Alright Tim, smell my feet." As she slid her feet right in front of my face, I tried to move back, but yeah I forgot tied up. She placed her foot on my face and the stench overwhelmed me. "What Tim, don't like my stinky, stinky feet ?" I shook my head but she already left the bed and ran to get duct tape. She took off her socks and told me "Open your mouth." I didn't want too(obviously) but I knew she'd just pinch my nose so I opened my mouth wide. She packed her socks into my mouth and closed my lips than she wrapped eight rolls of duct tape around my mouth. The salty taste from her disgusting socks was almost torturous at first, I did enjoy the bondage. Soon she checked all the ropes and said too me "Goodnight." I mumbled but my mouth was too stuffed to even make a noise. I sat tied up and gagged with really stinky socks as Lily turned off the light. I tried with all my might to get loose but I had no chance. Lily can tie tough knots.

### Re: Tied up In a Cabin

Post by Jason Toddman » Tue Nov 29, 2016 4:41 pm

Story is okay so far, but could you please break it up into smaller paragraphs. A lot of people here won't even bother reading stories with run-on paragraphs like this.
One general rule of thumb: whenever a different person is speaking, it starts a new paragraph.
It makes stories much easier and more enjoyable to read.
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### Re: Tied up In a Cabin

Post by Leopord » Tue Nov 29, 2016 4:45 pm

Yeah it was my first of a many part story. I'll work on it.

### Re: Tied up In a Cabin

Post by drawscore » Tue Nov 29, 2016 7:35 pm

I gotta agree with Jason. (Quick! Run to the window, and see if pigs are flying.) Line spacing between paragraphs is a big help.
Drawscore

### Re: Tied up In a Cabin

Post by Jason Toddman » Tue Nov 29, 2016 10:07 pm

> Leopord wrote:Yeah it was my first of a many part story. I'll work on it.

Your second story is definitely much easier to read just for this reason.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

### Re: Tied up In a Cabin

Post by Leopord » Wed Nov 30, 2016 2:51 pm

Time 4 in the morning.
Finally Lily took her socks out of my mouth.
"Ugh thank you."
She was in the middle of untying me. "So how was the first night, never mind I could tell it all in your voice." As she laughed.
"Well we will how you like it tomorrow."
"No we gonna do the coin toss again."
I wasn't so approving but I hoped I'd get to tie her up.
This day we had a race through the forest and we both knew we were just running to get our feet smelly and stinky.
At around the same time as yesterday our parents left the campfire and we returned to the cabin. I pulled out a coin. "Heads I tie you up, Tails you tie me up again."
She nodded in agreement. I flipped and too my pain landed tails. She squeals with delight as she grabs only the tape. She tells me to sit in the chair again. She taped my hands through the chairs bars and worked on taping my torso too the chair.
"No fair your feet are so stinky now." She looked at me and just started taping my ankles and legs to the chair. "Alright" she says as she takes on my shoes and socks.
"No that's wro..." Than bam my socks were put in my mouth. She wrapped the tape around my head. I know my socks are staying in my mouth for good. She than puts her right sock over my nose and tapes it there.
"Good now you taste and smell stinky socks.... Goodnight." She says as she puts the left sock over my eyes and blindfolds me.
"Great tied up, socks I mouth, on nose and blocking my sight." I thought. Honesty my socks tasted worse than hers. I squirmed but than I fell asleep. Soon Lily whispers in my ears startling me. "Your gonna stay here all day while me and our parents hike too a waterfall. I tried to curse at her but mumbles just came out instead. I couldn't believe it all day blindfolded, stinky sock smelling and gagged. She better get her turn soon. But for the next week and a half I was always tied and gagged. It was finally the last day of the second week I could finally get my revenge.