## The Defiant Girl

Post by Jay Feely » Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:36 pm

My name is Drew Smith and is the best hunter out there to capture mischevious girls who did not respond to jail time, corner time, or any other kind of punishment. My job is very complicated since the girls who I capture are 18-21 and has a knack for getting away with crime. Today was a normal day as usual as I woke up and took a shower. After brushing my teeth, and getting dressed, and eating breakfast, I received a phone call from my supervisor, David Lowe, who is known to get right to the point instead of wasting my time with details. He told me of a girl named Tiffany Lawerence who is having trouble with the law in shoplifting and that she can be located at nearly any candy store in which she decided to rob because her father and mother are densits and they do not allow her to eat any form of candy for the fear of it rotting her teeth. I received a nice picture of the girl in my email and she had the most attractive feature that I ever seen in my career. Her hands were propery manicured and her feet was pedicured as if she was a fashion magazine girl. If only her attitude would change, and that would be very difficult. After locating her address and parking my Red Chevy in front, I calmly walked up to her door and knocked on it with my bare hand. She answered within seconds, and when I showed her my badge, she bolted and I chased her as she ran into her living room. She was very quick and it was hard to keep up, but I knew that letting her get away would not be an option because I had a perfect record of apprehending suspects and I was not about to let my supervisor down so as she cruised into her bedroom, I lunged at her, and tackled her. She was in tears as I pulled her wrists behind her back and tied it up with a piece of rope. As I restrained her feet, she was finally able to speak to me, as she told me in a begging tone, "Please let me go, I promise that I will be good". I replied that I was not going to let her off so easily as I finished tying up her toes with a piece of yarn and then picking her up as she was screaming and being defiant into the back of my chevy. As I shut the trunk of my car, I wondered through my head, thinking carefully on what I can do to her as far as torture is concerned.
To be Continued
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

### Re: The Defiant Girl

Post by randomentity » Wed Feb 29, 2012 9:22 am

Very good beginning, jay! I'm looking forward to reading the continuation!

### Re: The Defiant Girl

Post by lasse672000 » Wed Feb 29, 2012 12:57 pm

Yea, I agree with "randomentity" , it's a good story. a bit hard to read, though, due to the lack of paragraphs.
Whazzzz up!.

### Re: The Defiant Girl

Post by Jay Feely » Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:58 pm

I decided to soley use tickling in order to drive her insane. I started with my fingers and dug straight into her underarms which elicted a small response from her that I did not suspect because most girls I tickle are insanely ticklish in a point that it would cause them to laugh very loud so I was afraid that it would not send a message to her, so I stepped up my game by increasing the speed of my fingers in a circular motion and this worked because she immediatly erupted into laughter that bounced off the walls and it severly wrecked her vocal chords because she could not communicate with me. I wanted to stop tickling her in order to give her a breather, but then she used the 'F' word on me, and that officially ceased my lenient punishment for her so I used my tongue to lick her armpits which is too much for her because she erupted into a river of laughter and said that, "You will never get away from this because my parents is going to sue you for everything you are worth and you will be on the receiving end of some payback". I was not fazed at her statement because I was not going to let a little threat lead me to back down. So, I decided to enhance my tickling methods by using my teeth to caress her underarms and she became more defiant with everything I did from using my collection of feathers which led to her laughing in terms of being a hyena.
Because I was not getting through to her, I decided to stop tickling her underarms and move to her belly in which I started to blow raspberries on her stomach and she was sent into a frenzy when she burst out with enough laughter to be in a comedy show and it was going to be far worse. I used a pen to draw on several regions of her stomach that included her belly button and tracing her six pack and that was the final straw for her, as she was finally able to calm down and say, "I'm sorry for not doing well in school, but I will correct myself if you let me go".
Question is, should I let her go or should I continue to tickle her?
2 possible endings will arise from your decision, so 1st come and 1st serve basis.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

### Re: The Defiant Girl

Post by three time's a duct taping » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:38 pm

Continue, I say!
Mwahahahaha-*cough*
I hate having a cold...

### Re: The Defiant Girl

Post by randomentity » Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:24 pm

Definitely continue!! And if you feel like it, perhaps some other methods as well as tickling?