Kidnapped at her own Bar Mitzvah

Postby TieUpThisChick » Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:05 pm

This is my first ever story and I have the first three parts all in my head but I will just write the first part for now. Hope you enjoy my hard work! :big: :odd: :quirk: :D :) :o :lol: :P :wink: :mrgreen:

Ella looked down and fidgeted with her dress some more looking down at her feet. She was probabl the onlymone not enjoying her bar mitzvah. Ella had long brunette curls and mournful hazel eyes even though she was normally happy. Her fair skin positively glowed against her royal blue sleeveless dress her cousin Monica picked out. It showed off every curve and made her breasts look five times larger causing many of the male guests to stare at her. Ella absolutely detested the black pumps and pantyhose her mom made her wear. She also hated the crowd and attention just for her 13th birthday- espescially since last year she had decided to go athiest and didn't believe in god and only Monica knew.

"Hey Ella." Ella looked up to see Preston a cute guy she met at the gym and flirted with her even though he was nearly 15 he had sandy blonde hair and black eyes.

"Oh hi Preston" she said without much enthusiasim.

"Someone said they wanted to talk with you outside real quick." he said.

"Okay be right back." Ella turned around and walked out front where on the curb she sawa big black SUV. Immediately Ella knew something was wrong. She turned around about to run inside when rough hands grabbed her, covering her mouth and pinching her nose. I CAN NOT BREATHE!!!!!! she thought as she struggled against her attacker but the hands were strong. She heard harsh laughter before everything went black...


Continue???
Tie me up gag me SOMEONE!!

Re: Kidnapped at her own Bar Mitzvah

Postby lasse672000 » Fri Aug 05, 2011 10:41 am

Yup. Please?
Whazzzz up!.

Re: Kidnapped at her own Bar Mitzvah

Postby TieUpThisChick » Fri Aug 05, 2011 3:46 pm

Okay thanks for your support lasse! I have read some of your stories and they are super good. Here is part two.

God knows how long later Ella finally stirred and attempted to bring up her fist to her eye to rub it when she found out that her hands and elbows were fastened together as were her ankles and knees with rough uncomfortable rope. "What? Hey!" she shouted.

"Ella! Your awake! How wonderful!" Ella whipped her head around and came face to face with- "Preston?!?" Ella exclaimed her hazel eyes widening. "You did this to me you bastard! Untie me now!" She screamed.

"Now Ella; that's no way to treat someone who can do whatever they damn well want to you so behave." Preston responded calmly patting and stroking her hair his beady black eyes were twinkling maliciously.

"Let me go! You have no right to do this to me! They'll realize that something's wrong, that the guest of honor is missing!!!" Ella retorted furiously, "They are gonna call the cops!"


"Actually no, they aren't. I already sent Mommy and Daddy a text saying that your in some trouble and if they bring the cops into it your gonna get hurt, bad. And although you are stunningly gorgeous, you need to shut up now." he said smirking holding Ella's pantyhose in his hands moving in.

"What? No please! I'll br quiet I swe- MMMMMMMMPPPPHHH!!!!" he shoved the pantyhose in her mouth and secured it with duct tape aroujd her head.

"You deserve everything comin to you for ignoring me you little bitch." he sneered fondling Ella...


To be continued...
Tie me up gag me SOMEONE!!

Re: Kidnapped at her own Bar Mitzvah

Postby lasse672000 » Fri Aug 05, 2011 11:25 pm

Pantyhose gag? That's a new one!
Whazzzz up!.

Re: Kidnapped at her own Bar Mitzvah

Postby cellofello » Sat Aug 06, 2011 5:38 pm

Um ... actually, if it's for a female, it's a Bat Mitzvah, not a Bar Mitzvah. (I attended one this morning.)

Re: Kidnapped at her own Bar Mitzvah

Postby TieUpThisChick » Sun Aug 07, 2011 5:55 am

Sorry imma christian i just am writing this for my friend
Tie me up gag me SOMEONE!!

Re: Kidnapped at her own Bat Mitzvah

Postby tugsbd » Mon Aug 15, 2011 7:20 pm

Nice tying and gagging! Poor girl, I hope she's not too scared :cry:

BTW, you can edit your story subject/title (to change the Bar to a Bat) :)
I love tying and being tied up! Struggling hard but unable to escape. Mouth filling gag. Helpless. Vulnerable.