teachertied wrote:I could give it a go, what kind of details were you thinking of, the more you tell me the easier it it

All right, let me think. The guy could be like sixteenish, and the girl could be like eighteen or nineteenish. The guy's got to be five foot eight or shorter, and the girl's got to be over six feet tall. Like I said, I love cleave gags, and chair tie-ups are good too. And the guy actually has to be in danger of being killed, so that way she actually saves his life, not just saves him from a ransom. And let me think.....yeah, the guy's skinny and the girl's buff, and they're both a little punkish kind of? Yeah, that could work. And maybe make the kidnappers a man and a woman. They want to give him a weekend of torture and then kill him (nothing too terrible, not rape or anything, but they hurt him pretty bad I guess, I don't know). You don't have to do all of these things, cause I do want there to be surprises in it, but definitely make the girl a good fighter. But she can get beaten up too, a little bit. I wrote a story along these lines that I posted here if it's any inspiration. It's called kidnapped by my ex-girlfriend. But if you read it, definitely make it different from that.