Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Eloise » Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:08 pm

Recently I decided to take a shot at writing fictional stories, as my “TUG buddy” Rachel is away for a month or two, I asked for people’s requests and NaughtyNats was the first, and so far only request I have received. Once I have finished this story, I will be open to more requests. Also “Nats” can be short for many things, and I am presuming that it is short for Natalie. Please tell me if I am wrong... So anyway, here it is.

“What do you mean you can’t pay me?” I asked.

“I... I’m sorry! It’s just, business hasn’t been great recently, a new hair salon just opened up across the street and all our regulars are going there now!”

Natalie was late on her rent again, this was the third time in a row and I was having none of it!

“Well you’d better find some way of paying me!” I replied.

“Look, if you would just...” She stopped mid-sentence and looked behind me to my laptop, my heart sank as I knew what was open... it was this site, she looked at me and raised an eyebrow, I tried my best to not look worried, but I don’t think it was working.

“So...” She said “You’re into that sort of stuff then are you? I looked at her nervously as she smiled “How about... instead of me paying rent... I let you tie me up?” She sounded confident as she said it. I didn’t know how to react; on the one hand I was tempted... I had a beautiful 20 year old blonde asking me to tie her up, but on the other hand... I wanted my money!

I decided to go for it... I mean, what could go wrong? “Okay, sure... how do you want to do it?” I asked.

“Well, you’re the one who wants the rent... you decide.” And so I did, I lead her to my bedroom and sat her down on my bed. First I tied her hands behind her back, palms together with a silk scarf, and then I tied her legs together with another scarf at the ankles. I took some time out to admire the gorgeous bound girl at my mercy. She looked great in her Denham skirt that went halfway down her thigh, and her tight black and red striped top that showed her figure brilliantly. Then I noticed her bare, vulnerable and no doubt ticklish feet, and so with that I stroked my nail down the sole of her foot, as she squirmed and giggled I turned it up and relentlessly tickled her feet. As she wiggled about trying to fend me off she also started screaming in laughter.

“We can’t have that, can we?” I said as I got an ankle sock from my draw, shoved it in her mouth and kept it in place with a few pieces of duct tape and carried on tickling her, she tried to laugh through the gag but it didn’t work. As I tired of this, I turned her onto her back and rolled her shirt up just below her breast revealing her toned, smooth belly. She looked at me with pleading eyes as if to say “No” but it didn’t work, I started drawing circles on her belly as she again, fought with her bonds, she screamed with laughter as I attacked her full on.

TBC
Last edited by Eloise on Sun Apr 04, 2010 3:12 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Boundgal08 » Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:33 pm

Eloise, this is a perfect fictional study, I bet you are glad you have started to write fictional stories... we are all glad...

Hope to read more on them :D

Cheers,
BG
BOUNDGIRL!
Probably the kinkiest woman you will ever meet!
I am a switch, I like to put a man in ropes and also have a man put me in ropes!
I am the 'Queen of bondage'

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby jennybond » Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:41 pm

Very good start, I'm looking forward to reading more.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby tugsbd » Sat Apr 03, 2010 4:23 pm

Wonderful story, Ellie (as usual)!
And I hope you enjoy my self bondage story in the Intimate section.

Cheers!
I love tying and being tied up! Struggling hard but unable to escape. Mouth filling gag. Helpless. Vulnerable.

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Spreadeagle » Sat Apr 03, 2010 5:07 pm

tugsbd wrote:Wonderful story, Ellie (as usual)!
And I hope you enjoy my self bondage story in the Intimate section.

Cheers!



haha a shameless plug. Like your story El. Can i call you El? Cant wait to hear more
Always looking for new TUG buddies :)

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby C.Sully » Sat Apr 03, 2010 9:49 pm

I like where this is going, hope she will keep Nat hers for a long time.

You write only about Girl\Girl tugs or bondage?

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Suestruggles » Sun Apr 04, 2010 12:35 am

Ohhh Eloise, an excellent start. I'll have to drop you a request too.
Sue

Fit to be tied, wants to struggle.

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Eloise » Sun Apr 04, 2010 3:42 pm

While I was tickling her, a few things went through my mind, such as, how was I going to keep living here with less income, and why was Natalie willing to let me tie her up, but the main thought that pondered on my mind was... what position next?

I decided on spread-eagle, my favourite position...

As I untied her hands, I noticed her shirt was getting damp, so I asked: “Are you warm?” to which a nod was her reply. “Here, let’s deal with that.” I said, removing her shirt. Once her hands were tied to the bed, I moved onto her feet, I then realised that the bed was too wide and her skirt had to come off. “This is coming off, okay Natalie?” I asked, not that I cared about her opinion.

Once the skirt was off and she was tied to my bed in a tight spread-eagle position in just her black, lacy bra and panties, I decided on what to do next. I settled on tickling again as more skin was revealed, as I attacked her beautiful, bound, revealed and ticklish body, I saw her face getting red. As I put my hand to her cheek and said “Wow! You’re warm! You know what this mean, don’t you?” as I went to the kitchen and got a bowl of ice, I also picked up a few clothes pegs.

When I got back to my room and Natalie saw the bowl of ice, she went crazy trying to fight her bonds! “Oh, so you have enough money to pay me now then?” I asked, as she thought about that, she then ceased her struggle and just looked at me worried.

As a placed an ice cube in each cup of her bra and two in her panties, she squealed, jolted and attempted to fight her bonds, even more so as I started tickling her again.

Picture it, a gorgeous blonde, tied spread-eagle and gagged in just her bra and panties while being tortured by ice and myself tickling her.

After around 20 minutes, I noticed something... her nipples were hard... I think she was enjoying this.

Got that picture? Good, I hope it lasts until I post part 3.

TBC
The mistress of TBC...

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Nuclearo » Sun Apr 04, 2010 10:20 pm

Oh yes, and quite a delicious mental picture it is.
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Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby NaughtyNats » Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:27 am

Absolutely fantastic first 2 parts. Thanx so much Ellie :big: Can't wait to see what happens to me next. :tied: :gag: :spank;
:evil: :tied: :tickle: :gag: NAUGHTY NATS :gag: :tickle: :tied: :evil:

Maybe blindfold, maybe gagged, always barefoot

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby C.Sully » Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:43 am

My family has another apartment, would you like to rent it Natalie ? :wink:

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby bondagefan » Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:46 am

Great story Eloise,can you do a fanfic where the Harry Potter girls tie & gag each other
for fun and to practice if they are held hostage as pawn to get Harry.

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Eloise » Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:45 pm

After seeing the hard nipples, I decided to release her of her strain, and removed her bra. Well, I say relieve her, when actually I mean have more fun.

I put the pegs that I got earlier on her nipples and toyed with them, as she moaned, I saw her hair sticking to her damp, slightly sweaty face and cooled her off with some ice in her panties.

As she squealed, I laughed... if I’m honest.

But then I realised something. If this WAS her rent, then I could do it over and over again, so, I decided to let her go, for this week that is.

Once I untied her I said “So, will you have my rent next week?”
“I hope not...” she said with a wink as she went off for a shower (but don’t worry, I left the tap on for a cold shower ;) ).

A short last part, I know.

I will now be taking more requests, by PMs only!! Requests received any other way will be ignored!!

Hope to be writing again soon!

And NaughtyNats? I hope this story was good enough for you.
The mistress of TBC...

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:01 pm

terrific!
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Boundgal08 » Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:04 am

Very very good there :D Enjoyed it very much

Thanks for sharing :D


Cheers,
BG
BOUNDGIRL!
Probably the kinkiest woman you will ever meet!
I am a switch, I like to put a man in ropes and also have a man put me in ropes!
I am the 'Queen of bondage'

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby barefootboy » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:03 am

Good fun. An interesting way to pay the rent. I wonder if I should open up a boarding house on that basis.
Tied :tied: gagged :gag: and tickled :tickle:

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby NaughtyNats » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:35 am

I love that story. Thanks so much for writing it about me.
:evil: :tied: :tickle: :gag: NAUGHTY NATS :gag: :tickle: :tied: :evil:

Maybe blindfold, maybe gagged, always barefoot

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Eloise » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:39 am

NaughtyNats wrote:I love that story. Thanks so much for writing it about me.



Beleive me... the pleasure was all mine! ;)
The mistress of TBC...

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby NaughtyNats » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:53 am

I think if you really tied me up in lieu of rent the pleasure would be mutual. Just imagine it living rent free with regular tickle torture, or worse :D
:evil: :tied: :tickle: :gag: NAUGHTY NATS :gag: :tickle: :tied: :evil:

Maybe blindfold, maybe gagged, always barefoot

Re: Couldn’t Pay The Rent (request by NaughtyNats)

Postby Eloise » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:57 am

Aha!! Fair enough ;)

Rachel's away for a month or two (hence my change of career).

Want to move in? ;)
The mistress of TBC...