Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chris12 » Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:59 pm

This story is about a series called sengoku basara which takes place in japan during the sengoku period which was somewhere between 1500 and 1600 i doubt anyone except wedgieboy has played it so i'l explain it as best i can

These characters are from a video game and i'l let a number of them appear but not all are very important

The characters are(by clan)

The Oda clan

mori Ranmaru: a bratty archer in the service of Oda Nobunaga the demon king of the sixth heaven. he's somewhere between 12 and 14 and totally worships his master despite the fact he's the most evil person ever. has the habit of talking in first person
pic http://sengokubasara.wikia.com/wiki/Fil ... anmaru.jpg

Oda nobunaga: the demon king of the sixth heaven the most evil person of Japan everywhere he goes lightning and omnious latin chanting follows. he's not very nice only rewarding ranmaru with candy(he doesn't mind) caring nothing for his wife and killing everyone but despite that ranmaru still insists he's awesome
pic http://media.photobucket.com/image/seng ... sara10.jpg

Nouhime: the wife of Oda she loves him very much while he...doesn't kill her and acts like a mother to ranmaru
Pic http://www.capcom.co.jp/basara-x/images/chara/ss18.jpg the woman next to ranmaru

Akechi Mitsuhide: a comander in the Oda army he's really creepy and seems to get turned on by killing people he seems even more evil then nobunaga himself.
Mitsuhide is famous in real life for betraying and killing Oda nobunaga at hononji in the capital of japan

The meada clan

Maeda Toshiie and Matsu: leaders of the maeda clan and vassals of the Oda clan but they are very nice.

The takeda clan(not a big role)
Takeda shingen: the tiger of kai leader of the takeda clan and one of the two greatest generals of Japan he is the mentor of yukimaru but he's a bit...exentric about it.

Saneda yukimura: shingens student and right hand despite the real one being beneath ten when shingen died. he screams all the time and calls shingen ''OYAKATA-SAMA!'' which means house lord or something
pic http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_NkCzASFxmxY/S ... -87853.png shingen is the big one and yuki the younger one

(in japan the family name come's first so for example with mori ranmaru ranmaru is actually his first name and mori his family name)

Well that was a long intro or at least it seems one when i'm typing this

i'l start the story now

''wow awesome!'' ranmaru yelled as he saw the land of Kai burn around him obviously he didn't realise slaughtering a whole province was a bad thing

he shot a bunch of arrows at some takeda soldiers who tried to attack his lord ''are you watching nobunaga samma! is ranmaru doing a good job?!'' he yelled exited

''humph decent'' Oda snorted without looking and walked right past ranmaru

''wow he's soooooo great!'' ranmaru said with a big smile and ran toward the takeda castle where Oda was slaughtering his enemies

''OYAKATA-SAMA!'' yukimaru ran towards shingen ''the enemy is breaking trough at all sides

''ha so this is how it ends!'' shingen laughed any ideas?'' he asked his student and they started to echange tactics while screaming each others names and punching each other with every word.

'' OYAKATA-SAMA! YUKIMARU! ''OYAKATA-SAMA! YUKIMURA!'' they yelled at each other and punched each(likethis http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4NfhXoq ... re=related) other this went on untill all soldiers lowered their weapons in surprise to view this spectacle

''wow what a bunch of idiots!'' ranmaru said amused Oda's on the other hand found his blood presure getting higher by the second

''ARE YOU MOCKING ME!!!!!!!'' he yelled and raised his gun and sword making darkness flow trough the battlefield ''pay for your behavior by dying!''

''Ran retreat with you unit and come with me'' a female voice ordered and he saw nouhime stand besides him ''we are ordred to march ahead to the next battlefield

''What! ranmaru want to fight here!'' ranmaru yelled annoyed

nouhime smiled gently at him ''your just in it for the candy'' making ranmaru blush a little

''nouh now!'' Oda yelled while the famous takeda cavelery charged at him and his armies

''allright guys time to take off! i'l take command from here!'' ranmaru said

''why are we taking orders from that kid!'' a soldier named tenkai whispered annoyed to his squadmates he hated nobunaga and everyone else working for him

Ranmaru and his squad retreated from the battlefield and traveled north the was to let nouhime's army attack the next clan while ranmaru's squad would go
another way and attack the clan from behind. Nouhime wasn't pleased with this plan as she didn't want ranmaru to travel alone but was forced to agree.

After a few days of traveling it was time for nouhime and ranmaru to part ways

''see you in a few days!'' ranmaru yelled exited as he and his squad took off

''we'l sleep here! good job where going really fast!'' ranmaru praised his troops when they reached an inn

While resting in the inn at 7 hour because ranmaru wasn't allowed to march after bedtime the soldier named tenkai shared a plan with the rest of the squad while ranmaru was sleeping

''We can't go on like this! we spend all our time on the battlefield proving our loyalty nobunaga-samma and he puts some kid in charge of us! is this how he thanks us for our service!'' tenkai yelled angry ''the other warlord will pay big money to have oda's head i say we charge back to kai and take his head!''

''can we even do that?'' a soldier asked the demon king of the sixth heaven wasn't easily killed

''he won't see us coming and he will be weakened from dealing with the takeda the only problem is....him'' tenkai's eyes went to the kid sleeping besides them

little did they know ranmaru was awake and fully listening to the conversation with eyes wide from shock

it seems quite boring till now i'l make the next part more interesting

To be contineud

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby jb99 » Sat Oct 16, 2010 3:15 pm

It does, but I'll give it a chance......

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chase Ricks » Sat Oct 16, 2010 4:03 pm

Good story idea Chris. I am familiar with the game and have some Japanese relatives so I grew up listening to stories about honor and the tradition of samurai.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chris12 » Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:50 am

jb99 wrote:It does, but I'll give it a chance......


haha don't worry i'l make the next part more interesting :big: ....i hope

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chris12 » Fri Oct 22, 2010 4:25 am

Tenkai and his soldiers discussed their plan to ditch ranmaru and eventually ally themself with the demon of the west sea ''Chousokabe Motochika'' a pirate warlord

''with him on our side we win for sure!'' tenkai yelled exited picturing a demon with a huge fleet

''ranmaru won't let you!'' he suddenly jumped out of bed and kicked tenkai away ''Bow! bow! bow!'''' he yelled and rushed to the other side of the room where his bow was

before ranmaru could reach his bow two soldiers grabbed him ''Hey let ranmaru go or he'l kill you!'' he screamed and kicked with his legs

''keep him quite there are others in this inn!'' one of the soldiers handgagged ranmaru

''mmpphhh!'' ranmaru bitt in the soldiers hand making him release him and ran to his bow again untill Tenkai knocked him out

''stupid brat'' he muttered and ordered his soldiers to tie up and gag ranmaru

When ranmaru woke up he was bound gagged and tied to the back of a horse ''mmppggg!'' he screamed and started struggling

''knock it off or we'l make you walk''a soldier treatened

Ranmaru kept struggling and screaming untill they reached the sea where a huge ship was waited for them

The ship was so big it seemed like an island and even had a castle build on top of it

Wow!'' ranmaru's eyes went big he'd never seen such a ship

Tenkai with his soldiers and ranmaru entered the ship where a huge party was being held

a man with white hair a purple shirt and an eyepatch seemed to be in the middle of the attention and was drinking heavily ''Whats the A word?'' he asked the crew ''ANIKI!!!'' the whole party yellled

That man was Chousokabe Motochika(http://i2.ytimg.com/vi/UF1l3Nd3Yus/0.jpg) the pirate lord although he never has done everything pirate-like he's a big bro type of guy which is why his soldiers call him aniki (aniki means big bro or something like that) wield an anchor as a weapon

''Hey? mateys what are you doing on my ship?'' he asked while drinking a whole bottle of alcohol

ranmaru's jaw dropped so much his gag fell out he hadn;t expected a ''demon'' to act like Motochika did

''W-we s-sent a letter'' Tenkai said already whishing he had choose another warlord to ally with

''Ah yeah Oda's cronies'' Motochika said uninterested ''and who's the lil guy here ?'' he asked

''Ranmaru isn't a litle guy!'' ranmaru yelled angry and started struggling again

''ahyes Oda's....um....what are you exactly?'' Motochika asked as he never heard of him

''He's the hostage whe promised in the letter'' tenkai explained

''man for a warlord ranmaru thinks you suck'' ran told him ''Nobunaga-samma will have no trouble beating you up''

Is that so?'' Motochika got an evil look in his eyes and moments later ranmaru was tied to the ships anchor and lowered into the sea

''aahhhh! get ranmaru up!'' he screamed in a very high voice when his legs reached the icy water

''What did you think off me again kid?

''You're the greatest guy ever if nobunaga_samma would die! Motochika...um_samma!'' ranmaru lied

''you forgot the A word!'' Motochika yelled down

''uh..um a-anike..samma?'' Ranmaru said a little uncertain

''This is fun huh? allright mateys get the kid up!'' the pirate asked tenkai ''yeah....great'' tenkai replied grumpy.

Ran was very relieved when he got off the anchor

''allright men set sail to Owari!(home of the oda clan) Motochika said exited

Meanwhile a very angry sat in his throne room with two new skull cups ''Nouh what happened?'' he asked his wife

''It appears Ranmaru has gone missing he didn't appear on the battlefield which is why we lost'' nouhime said nervous ''....how wend the battle of kai?

''Before us no one stands behind us no one stood'' was nobunaga's vauge answer

''It was absolutely wonderfull! the carnage! the killing! the tears!'' Akechi yelled getting turned on just thinking about it

Meada Toshiie tried hard to hide his disgust and turned to oda ''our spies told me tenkai now leads ranmaru's squad and he has a captive but they don't know who''

''Nouh take matsu and go find the kid beat some sense into him if you need to'' Nubonage said

''yes lord nubonaga'' Nouhime said Matsu followed her out of the room ''i hope he isn't hurt'' matsu said in a motherly way thinking what to cook for ranmaru when they founded him

''Toshii take some armies with mitsuhide and patroll the beaches that pirate brat will make his move soon'' Oda ordered his two generals who where clearly uncomfertable with travling togheter

Nouhime and matsu left as soon as possible to look for ranmaru and eventually found out he was on Chousokabes ship. they immidiatly rode out to save him.
Last edited by Chris12 on Sun Feb 06, 2011 11:16 am, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chase Ricks » Fri Oct 22, 2010 2:34 pm

A few spelling and grammar usage errors, but otherwise very well told so far Chris.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Wedgieboy14 » Fri Oct 22, 2010 2:42 pm

I like the story since i actually know most of the characters anyway you should use paragraphs since the beneath is a bit confusing when the whole story is written that way.
''allright men set sail to Owari!(home of the oda clan) Chousokabe said exited

Meanwhile a very angry sat in his throne room with two new skull cups ''Nouh what happened?'' he asked his wife

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chris12 » Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:41 am

The trip to owari would take a few hours because the Chousokabe's ship ''the Fugaku'' was so ridiculesly big

''Ranmaru is booored'' he whined

''Don't worry we will reach the demon king in just four hours!'' Motochika said

''Thats too long! ranmaru needs to do something!'' ranmaru yelled and struggled against his bonds

''We could go fishing'' Motochika suggested

The boy immidiatly got very exited ''ranmaru is good at fishing''

''I just hope they like our new bait'' the pirate said and played with his weapon an anchor with a chain attached to it

''New.....bait?'' ranmaru asked confused when he saw Chousokabe Motochika coming towards him with an evil glare and a new rope

In a few moments ranmaru was tied to Motochika anchor and lowered back into the sea by the chain attached to it.

''aaahhh! stop it ranmaru doesn't like this he wants to be bored again!'' ranmaru screamed

''Don't worry the fish are nice!'' the crew yelled down

When Chousokabe lifted ranmaru out of the water many fish had bitten into the boy ''Ranmaru really hates you!'' he yelled at the captain

''Well at least you got to be ussefull!'' he laughed

after being dragged to the kitchen to get the fish off of him Ranmaru was to attend the next party

''Ranmaru can't pary when he'stied up!'' ranmaru screamed at the crew

''we know!'' they happily said

''Man ranmaru looks forward to seeing you guys get killed''

''Now now thats not very nice to say about your hosts!'' Motochika went to sit next to ranmaru and started tickling him

''hahah w-what are you doing hahahaha!'' ranmaru screamed in panic

''what do you think lil guy!?''

''hahah s-stooop hahahah ranmaru is too ticklish AND HE'S NOT A LIL GUY! The moment ran started screaming the crew grabbed their ears

''Shut him up mr mouri!'' the captain ordered and a large green parrot landed on Ranmaru's head

''Ahhh?! its hurting Ranmaru please aniki make it stop!'' ranmaru screamed when the parrots talons reached his head

mr mouri seemed enjoy it and started hitting ranmaru with his beak ''Yeah he's a real sadist that one!'' Motochika laughed

''ahhh Aniki-samma pleaaase!''

''Allright allright mr mouri gag time!'' the pirate ordered and the parrot flew away returning with a gag

''ha that thing wont gag ranmaru!'' ranmaru boasted

''He won't'' mr mouri drooped the gag in Motochika hand

''Y-you know what A-anike-samma ranmaru will s-shut up!'' ranmaru stuttered in fear and tried to get away but Motochika gagged him anyway

''mmpphh mmphh mgg!'' ranmaru yelled screamed and begged

''This is fun huh!'' ranmaru was tickled

''mmpphhhh!'' the kid quicly got tears into his eyes from laughing

in the following hours Ranmaru was panked and tickled allot by the crew untill the reached their destination

''Aniki we reached Owari'' a soldier yelled

''ah, its getting started'' Motochika dragged ranmaru to the upper deck

''mmppggg!'' ranmau struggled and kicked a lot

When they reached the deck everyone started preparing for the war

Chousokabe had already sent fleets and soldiers to the beaches of Owari while the Fugaku would shoot from the distance

while the Fugaku was shooting Motochika took the time to boast about his ship ''Fierce firepower and unrivalled range! With this fortress we are invincible!''

Ranmaru tried to yell his master would slaughter them in a second

''allright mateys its time to strike our blow for conquest!'' Motochika yelled ''FIIIIIRE!''

ANIKIIIIIII!'' the entire crew yelled and the huge cannon started shooting even hugger cannonballs at the beaches where the Chousokabe army where fighting the Oda forces under Mitsuhide and toshii

''Sir demon!'' tenkai yelled ''our forces are still fighing on the beach!''

''I don't care! if they are dumb enough to die from these they did't stand a chance against the demon king in the first place!'' Motochika yelled while the Fugaku shot at everything that moved

Ranmaru giggled a bit when he saw Tenkai's face of disbelief

''Allright have fun babysitting'' the pirate yelled and jumped into the water using his anchor as a surfing board to surf to Oda's burning castle ''ha looks like Fugaku's cannon was on target! men elliminate absolutely everything!''' he yelled exited

''mmpphhh!''' ranmaru would have found the pirate very cool if he wasn't after nobunaga's head

'Babysitting what did he?...oh no!'' when both realised what the pirate meant they became green from disgust ''I hate you!'' both yelled at each other

''while ranmaru screamed his lungs out at tenkai he noticed two huge bird flying towards the ship with two woman on them ready for battle

To be contineud
Last edited by Chris12 on Sun Feb 06, 2011 11:25 am, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chris12 » Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:46 am

Shane Bikman wrote:Good story idea Chris. I am familiar with the game and have some Japanese relatives so I grew up listening to stories about honor and the tradition of samurai.


Really i though no one knew it because its was only released in japan

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chase Ricks » Sun Nov 07, 2010 11:22 am

Chris12 wrote:
Shane Bikman wrote:Good story idea Chris. I am familiar with the game and have some Japanese relatives so I grew up listening to stories about honor and the tradition of samurai.


Really i though no one knew it because its was only released in japan


Oh my dear friend, by now I am getting tired of repeating my maxim: "Knowledge is power. The one more learns, the more knowledge they accumulate. The more knowledge gathered means more power in the next life." I go out of my way to learn everything I possibly can about any subject in order that I can share with this site and others the fruits of my labors.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chris12 » Sun Nov 07, 2010 11:56 am

.....i don't think you've never said tht here before :? :big:

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chase Ricks » Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:08 pm

A long time ago as cricks5 I used it as my signature here.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Jason Toddman » Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:57 pm

Shane Bikman wrote:
Chris12 wrote:
Shane Bikman wrote:Good story idea Chris. I am familiar with the game and have some Japanese relatives so I grew up listening to stories about honor and the tradition of samurai.


Really i though no one knew it because its was only released in japan


Oh my dear friend, by now I am getting tired of repeating my maxim: "Knowledge is power. The one more learns, the more knowledge they accumulate. The more knowledge gathered means more power in the next life." I go out of my way to learn everything I possibly can about any subject in order that I can share with this site and others the fruits of my labors.


Chris, if this was released only in Japan, how do *you* know about it?
However you did, Shane probably found out the same way.
Naturally of course he can't just come straight out and *say* that! :lol:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Ranmaru's adventure

Postby Chris12 » Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:46 am

I never played the games i only watched the anime which you can view online