The TUCFEYO

Postby frogtied66 » Mon Feb 10, 2014 9:23 am

TUCFEYO stands for... Tie Up Competition For Eighteen Year Olds

Let's just get some things straight...

-- Characters --

This list shows all characters in the series so far, so if you want a surprise do not read until finishing the series.

Jack, 18
Fred, 18
Robert, 20

Team Blue

OceanBlast, 18

Team Yellow

ScorpionHead, 18
SandPile, 18
SandBreath, 18
CrabClaw, 18
SunLight, 18

If you have any questions, do not hesitate to ask?

-- Images --

These are pictures of things in the games.

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-- Story --

I will type up the story on Notepad and publish each chapter when finished. Patience is key.
Last edited by frogtied66 on Mon Feb 10, 2014 11:02 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby mikeybound » Mon Feb 10, 2014 5:37 pm

I see no pics

Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby bondagefreak » Mon Feb 10, 2014 6:51 pm

Anxious to see how this develops :o Don't keep us waiting too long for the first chapter!
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Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby frogtied66 » Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:52 pm

mikeybound wrote:I see no pics


I will add them, mikeybound

Chapter 1: The Poster

Jack was an 18-year old boy who had just finished college. He had always enjoyed playing tie up games with his friend Fred (also 18), and they had a older friend named Robert, who was 20 years old. Robert was a very rich boy who held different kinds of contests every year, and many of them had a money prize of up to $50,000, except his castle contest which held $60,000 of a prize. They were on the way home from college, and on the way home they asked Robert what kind of contest he was going to hold. "It's a surprise, but there will be posters up for it soon," Robert answered. They then went their separate ways to their houses, and did their natural afternoon ideas of fun. That night, Jack wondered what the contest could be about. "The prize could be anything, from money to rewards to anything! It's so exciting," he thought. He wondered about it all, and then dozed off to get some sleep.

He woke up the next morning, made his breakfast, and noticed a poster on the front door. He read it. It said:

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"So it's a tie up contest this year," thought Jack, seeming happy. He then walked to the signup area and signed up with Freddie. "Attention all signups!" shouted the nearby speaker. "The contest is next week. You will then receive all necessary equipment from your team leader. There will be 10 teams and each team will have 10 players, meaning 100 people may participate. When the teams have been chosen, one lucky team member will be appointed the team leader. Any extra participators will be 'free natives' and may wander the battlefield. They may be enslaved by any teams. Each team gets a key and the prize is $45,000, which is in a chest locked in a cage which requires all 10 keys. When you capture a team leader, they are forced to hand over their key. Players have code names."

They signed their names, and waited for the following week to pass. Then they recieved the following objects in the mail:

Rope
Handcuffs
Team ID
Team Guide (shown below)
Battlefield Map

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Team Guide

You are on Team Blue.

Your code name is BlueWhale(Jack) and RainDrop (Fred).
Your fortress is at the blue pillar.

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Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby bondagefreak » Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:59 pm

This sounds fun and definitely has lots of potential :odd:

I can't help but wonder though, did you get the idea to start this story from reading cmcd290's "A Game of TUGs"?
The concept and scenario seems pretty similar.
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Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby frogtied66 » Mon Feb 10, 2014 11:07 pm

bondagefreak wrote:This sounds fun and definitely has lots of potential :odd:

I can't help but wonder though, did you get the idea to start this story from reading cmcd290's "A Game of TUGs"?
The concept and scenario seems pretty similar.



Well, when I read his story, I wanted to write a slightly similar story to the fans like me that are waiting for Chapter 11 and onward, but I didn't want to completely copy him, so I changed the way the story starts and how you must be 18 to compete.

I must give every piece of credit I can for this story to cmcd290. I really reckon his story beats mine because I'm not exactly the best writer.

Here's Chapter 2, anyway.

Chapter 2: Hostages!

That day, when the contest started, Jack headed to the field. The contest started, and each team had a fort. It was time for round one. Each team was assigned another team to try and take over. "OK." said the speaker. "This is round 1, each team is assigned another team to fight. The winning team in each fight wins the 2 keys." Team Blue was up against Team Yellow. When the GO! bell rang, they grabbed their equipment and charged.

Jack was up against SandPile. Jack pushed him on the floor and tied his hands behind his back, then his feet up, and then hogtied him and tied his elbows to leave him busy. Jack was then wrestled to the floor by ScorpionHead, but OceanBlast from his team saved him. Jack was the leader of his team, and a high target. He was pushed to the floor, handcuffed, and had his feet tied. Fred came to help him, but was cuffed too. The other Blues were either tied up or fighting, so their elbows were tied and a waist rope was added, then some extra rope to tie the knees. They were then frogtied( ankle tied to thigh) and hogtied. They struggled with no luck, and were picked up by ScorpionHead, SandBreath, CrabClaw, and SunLight, then taken away.

Jack and Fred woke up in a cell strapped to chairs. They squirmed with no luck, and CrabClaw swiped the key from Jack's pocket. "We win," he exclaimed. However, Jack heard natives head up the hill, fight through the Yellows, and free Jack and Fred. They escaped, Jack swiping both keys from the cabinet. They talked about joining, and Jack gladly accepted their signup. They headed back, freed the tied up Blues, and laid down the keys.

"The teams with 2 keys should be ready for defense," Jack thought. "Then again, that includes us." They were suddenly attacked again, this time by the Greens. The Greens fought dirty, tying up every Blue. Jack was brought to the Green base and laid on a bed in a cell. They tied his hands and feet to the bedposts, then tied his elbows and knees together. He was immobilised now, staring into space without escape.

Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby bondagefreak » Mon Feb 10, 2014 11:30 pm

I'm sorry frogtied66. I don't normally interfere in these types of things and I don't want to sound like an ass...but I don't find this acceptable AT ALL!

For the past eight weeks, cmcd290 has been laying the foundation for a complex and involving story, and just when he finally finishes laying the foundation and starts getting to the fun part...someone else comes along and snatches the carpet from underneath him.
I'd be really pissed off if I spent two months building up a story, just for someone to take my idea and basically do a copy/paste.
I'm sorry, but this is just not fair and I can't stand by and say nothing.
I hate to sound patronising, but theres a difference between getting inspiration and outright plagiarism.

Not cool...not cool at all :(
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Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby Jason Toddman » Tue Feb 11, 2014 12:45 am

So far, this not only seems to be a mere rip-off of Cmcd290's A Game of TUGs, but a badly rushed and inferior one at that. I hesitate to call it outright plagarism, but it does seem to me that it crosses a line somewhere.
I'm not prepared to interfere with this the development of this story directly... yet. But perhaps you should concentrate on writing a more original story and hold off on this one at least until cmcd290 has finished his own (and much better written) story first.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
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Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby xtc » Tue Feb 11, 2014 3:56 am

Frogtied, may I suggest that,if you fill out the action with descriptive passages and some indication of what your contestants are thinking and how they are feeling, it would serve two purposes:
1) It would no longer be the arid list that it is currently
2) You would get the chance to impose something of your own personality on the story.

It IS difficult with a narrow remit to be original but, if you have nothing original to say, people will react negatively to what seems like plagiarism.
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but little speedos rule!

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Re: The TUCFEYO

Postby frogtied66 » Tue Feb 11, 2014 7:48 am

I'm stopping this. :annoy: