Babysat

Postby AndyR.B. » Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:58 pm

This is my first story so be nice. 1 day my mom had to go out so she asked Aly from next door to come wach me. First we wached TV. But after an hour I started laughing to hard. I have a real anoying laugh and Aly was geting anoyed with it. She said she was geting tape and I said fine. She went to the garage and came back with a roll of duck tape and stuck a strip over my mouth. I took it off so she grabed my hands and taped them behind my back. I started runing away and she ran after me. When she got me she taped my feet together and put more tape on my mouth. Then she carried me to the living room and taped me to a chair. I licked the tape off my mouth and she said You just wont keep quiet will you? So she took the tape and put it all the way around my head to shut me up. Then she said Thatll keep you out of my way for a litle bit. I started mmmpphing and wigleing but I was stuck. Then my mom came home and laughed at me. She tied me up before to. Then Aly went home and mom untaped me. Thats it thanks for reading. did you like it?

Re: Babysat

Postby ReaderG » Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:53 pm

The story was nice, but the style could use a little work (spelling, paragraphs etc.) All in all an 8 on the old 10 scale. Keep posting!
Gerry