Postby Sacrificiallove » Wed Jan 16, 2013 11:18 pm
Hey, now wait a minute here.............what's this about Veronica getting tied up? Is she supposed to be the heroine? Cause that's not very heroic.
Anyway, you could elaborate on the fight scenes. Like, you know, have a lot of brutal, brutal violence. Punches, kicks, everything. If you want any examples, check out some of my stuff (yes, I'm guilty. I just promoted my own stories on someone else's story. Forgive me).
But yeah, I'm hoping Veronica escapes big time, and then a real brutal fight starts, and you don't even know who's going to win for half of it.