## Story Deleted

Post by jennybond » Mon Apr 06, 2015 10:08 am

Deleted by Author's request.
Xtc
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: Story Deleted

Post by Sealherlips » Mon Apr 06, 2015 3:35 pm

Someone just had to complain.

### Re: Story Deleted

Post by jennybond » Mon Apr 06, 2015 11:03 pm

> Sealherlips wrote:Someone just had to complain.

No one complained. Someone commented saying their brother had been tragically killed by a drink driver, so I thought it was only right that I didn't continue with the story and asked for it to be removed.
Jen.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: Story Deleted

Post by abductionfan » Tue Apr 07, 2015 12:16 am

BRAVO JEN

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Post by Headmistress » Tue Apr 07, 2015 12:31 am

I didn't see the story, so I can't comment on it.
But, maybe you could try changing the storyline or rewriting the story in a different way or coming up with a different scenario?
I have done that with a few of my own pieces, so maybe it would work for your story?
Cheers.

### Re: Story Deleted

Post by jennybond » Tue Apr 07, 2015 1:01 am

> Headmistress wrote:I didn't see the story, so I can't comment on it.
> But, maybe you could try changing the storyline or rewriting the story in a different way or coming up with a different scenario?
> I have done that with a few of my own pieces, so maybe it would work for your story?
> Cheers.

I was thinking of doing that, Thanks for the advice.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: Story Deleted

Post by The Wrapster » Tue Apr 07, 2015 5:48 am

Hold it!! I wasn't complaining !! In fact, I was hoping to see the lady get her just desserts11 I just wanted to share my story!!

### Re: Story Deleted

Post by jennybond » Tue Apr 07, 2015 7:07 am

> The Wrapster wrote:Hold it!! I wasn't complaining !! In fact, I was hoping to see the lady get her just desserts11 I just wanted to share my story!!

I never said you complained. In light of what you told me I didn't want to continue with the story as it was so I asked to for it to be deleted. I've re-written the first chapter with a slightly different scenario now.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...