I am Tied Up

Postby faran123 » Wed Jun 24, 2015 5:07 am

it started as i and my sister was invited to a party of our cousins by one of my cousins and her sister , so we couldn't deny it , when the party ended , the cousins which lived far from the party place left early , as our home was so close to party place , so we decided to to stay there , we were 4 , ,my sister , me , my cousin and her sister , we decided to play a game , ( ludo ) , it is a specific game in which everything goes on luck , and we decided that the last comer will be in the hands of 1st winner , i was the one who lost and my cousins ( female ) won it , she was 13 and i was 15 , everyone decided as the games rule , so i had to be in the mercy of her for one night .

she ordered me to stay in the room and left the room , while she was planning , i immediately heard a voice of my name , i went there to the room , when i opened the room , i was running , so i didn't see that she had attached a robe to one side of the door and other she was holding so tightly that i fell on the floor , so she immediately took her black sheer scarf and tied me hands and legs and said that what can you do twerp , i was about to abuse her then she took off her black dirty panties and stuffed in my mouth and tied it with her black scarf , so i was bound , tied , gagged with her panties, and left the room , i was delighted that she wasn't be able to torture me because it was the agreement of one night , so i slept delightedly , when i woke up , i was still tied up holding the panties , i was awkward to see her that she was dressed in black and said back to routine , i was worrying , then she said that she is going to torture for 3 days and made a timetable of punishing me ,

1st day :
she tied me to the poll and removed my every cloth and took her hunter and beat me up by hitting it on my ass , it continued till 3 hours , i was crying in pain , then next time table was that she held my ass facing to her face and started putting red , spicy , spices in my ass , i couldn't bear it for a sec

Re: I am Tied Up

Postby Sealherlips » Fri Jun 26, 2015 12:32 am

I have no idea what I just read.

Re: I am Tied Up

Postby Lake Lover » Fri Jun 26, 2015 7:57 am

Hi faran123: the previous word expressions seemed mentally disexpressable. Otherwise, very nice.

Re: I am Tied Up

Postby Jason Toddman » Fri Jun 26, 2015 9:32 am

You definitely need to work on your sentence and punctuation. These are some of the worst cases of run-on sentences I've seen this month, and they ruin what otherwise might be a pretty interesting story.
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Re: I am Tied Up

Postby Bondage Bunch » Thu Jul 23, 2015 8:23 am

What the hell is this? It looked like a kindergardener was tortured and tried to write about it. Faran, what grade are you in?