Postby Jason Toddman » Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:14 pm
Presumably you posted this here in Milestones because as a first poster you couldn't post in the story section.
I think you'll find that with two posts under your belt you can post your story there now. Three things:
The Milestones forum is not the best place for this type of post. For one thing few people will even see this story here. I suggest you re-post it under True Tugs (if it's true) or Fictional Stories where it will be noticed much more. Then instead of feweer han a dozen readers you'll have more like a few hundred.
When you post continuations, you really don't want to post them in a new thread like you did here with these two parts; it makes your story very hard to find and follow and feedback on if there are too many parts. The best way for us to read them is to post a reply on your own thread to continue the story, the same way you write feedback for someone else's. That way all the parts of your story are in one place and in the correct order, and makes it easier for the rest of us to read and enjoy. Posting to a new thread is fine when you start new stories though, of course.
As for the story itself; it sounds very interesting. Hope there's more.
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