First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby ziptiedboy » Mon Oct 24, 2016 3:54 pm

Sorry I haven't posted in a while, very busy this time of year...and I guess all year round :P

My previous tale talked about my first experience by myself - but what's better than being able to do it with your friends, right? My very first TUG took place about 6 months after my interest in bondage began, so you can imagine it has only made me want to continue. Please feel free to leave a comment about how you find my writing style and if you want to hear more. Anyway, enough talk. On with the story!


Part 1

A lot of my summer holidays are spent fairly isolated because I live out in the middle of the English countryside, so you can imagine that any invitation I got to go to a friends house was (and still is(!)) quickly accepted. My friend was inviting over a few guys just for a bit of fun: we were watching TV, swimming in the pool, hide and seek etc... when it suddenly dawned on me that I could expand my self-bondage onto others. Obviously, I was pretty nervous that the others would think I was a freak and would call me out for being weird, so I incorporated it into a little game of Capture the Flag. As there were eight of us, and my friend's house backs on to a huge wooded area, we divided into two teams and set off into the woods.

I hadn't been so prepared as to bring anything along with me, so I quickly raided his dad's garage for some black duct tape and a length of rope, and set it aside in our base for later.

I'll quickly explain the two teams just to make things simpler (we were all 11 at the time):

Team 1
Myself
Harry

Ollie
Tom

Team 2
Josh
George
Ben
Dan

To begin with, we kept the usual rules of nothing too physical and brutal etc and began to hunt down the other team's base, I paired up with my friend Harry - whose house it was - and set off on the left-hand side of the wood. The wood is amazing and has pretty much every sort of terrain feature you can imagine. As we both snuck round, we heard someone running towards us and quickly hid either side of a large ditch, usually filled with water.

George completely ignorant to our location began running through the ditch. In hindsight, I was gambling as to whether or not Harry would go along with the idea, or wonder what the hell I was doing: I jumped up and ran at George, almost knocking him to the ground, while pulling off my belt and beginning to tie his hands - rather badly - with them. At this point, I should also mention again I was very new to all this at the time so I was way out of my league in terms of knots or anything like that.

'What are you doing!?' George shouted at me, obviously totally confused and scared, 'That's not part of the rules!'.

Harry then chipped in with a 'Shutup George, open wide!', and to my surprise he pulled out a sock, stuffed it into George's mouth, effectively silencing him with another one around the mouth cleave-gagging him, leaving him unable to protest or alert his team of our whereabouts.

To be continued.

Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby bondagefreak » Mon Oct 24, 2016 4:51 pm

A very promising start!
The ending was especially enjoyable, with George being tie up against his will.
Harry, using his own socks to stop George from calling out to his teammates was the icing in the cake, so-to-speak.

Well done!
I look forward to reading the next part.
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Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby drawscore » Mon Oct 24, 2016 7:05 pm

Interesting. Not unlike the "hide and go seek" games my friends and I played as boys. Well written, too. No glaring spelling or grammatical errors. And line spacing between paragraphs always make it an easier read.

I thought it could have been longer - more "fleshing out" of the characters, such as age and apparel. (Summers were cool in New Brunswick, so our 'uniform of summer' consisted of faded jeans or hand-me-downs, and white T-shirts. When the temperatures dropped at night, the T-shirts were exchanged for sweat shirts.")

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Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby mikeybound » Thu Nov 03, 2016 7:30 pm

Nice story. Sorta wish you'd be more descriptive of the boys, but oh well.

Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby ziptiedboy » Sun Nov 13, 2016 6:54 am

Part 2

We hurried back to our base with George slung over my shoulder, where we quickly tied his feet and hands together, shoving him into the corner in a tight and restrictive hogtie. 'He won't be getting out of that anytime soon' Harry and I both laughed. 'Don't go anywhere now George!' I sniggered. With one member of the opposition down, we decided to carry on searching for the other team's flag as the game was still going on. After about forty minutes we had won the game, and we all went back to go and find George.

When we arrived back at our base George hag managed to undo everything except his hands, and was luckily not too angry about the whole thing. As a forfeit to the team that lost, I proposed that the rest of them should be tied up and humiliated like George had been. They half-heartedly accepted their position and very quickly we had the other free on the floor - Ben and Josh tied together, and Dan tied to a tree.

As the others in my team went off to get some pizza, to bring back for us all to share, I took the liberty as one of the victors to torture my prisoners further: Dan lasted seconds as I plunged into a frenzy of tickling him before he sank down the tree in surrender; I also poured a bowl of cold stream water over Ben and Josh, and laughing as I watched them struggle to free themselves because it was so cold!

It was a fun afternoon, but it soon came to an end and we decided we should do this more often, to which we have kept our promise and done something similar on the rare occasion ever since.

The End.


Sorry it was a short second part guy, especially since it took me so long to get around to write it. I promise I'll have another story with you soon - hope you enjoyed and I'd love to hear any feedback!

Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby drawscore » Sat Nov 19, 2016 9:11 pm

I think you should continue with your adventures, whether they be true, based on actual events, but "embellished," or total fiction. Writing is an acquired skill, and, supposedly, the more you do, the better you get.

Develop your characters. Help your readers identify with them. Age, appearance, and apparel, would be nice to know. You don't need to give a full description of each character at the start, but weave it in to the story. "The young teenager stretched his lanky frame across the back seat of the car." From that, we know he is a young teenager, probably 13 or 14, and that he's slender (lanky). Other bits of information can be woven in as opportunities present themselves.

Check the story section for different writing styles and different authors. Most of them are fairly well written, and you can pick up writing hints from reading them.

Write about what you know. You will be more credible.

Write to the high school level (10th-11th grades) If you write above that, younger readers won't understand it, and if you write below that level, the older readers will think you're "talking down" to them.

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Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby xtc » Sun Nov 20, 2016 2:53 am

I must have missed the chance to comment on this tale, sorry. Thanks for posting it. We are short of brief, innocent stories at present and it was good to read this one.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby Lake Lover » Sun Nov 20, 2016 3:04 am

Yes, a nice story of innocent youth exploring their fantasy of playing their first tie up games. Fun fun fun!

Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby fratboydanny » Mon Nov 21, 2016 2:03 pm

Well done and thanks for the submission. I hope you will write more.

Re: First Time Tied Up (MM/M)

Postby drawscore » Mon Nov 21, 2016 6:51 pm

A recommendation, not just for you, but for all writers, and that's to type out your story in a word processing program, such as Open Office. There are a lot of them out there, and most can be downloaded for free.

When finished, activate the Spell Check sub-program, to go back and catch any misspellings or typos you may have made. Then, cut and paste it to the site.

Of course you can type it out on the site, then hit "submit," but remember, that a red squiggly line under a word, means it's misspelled. Mouse your cursor over the word and right click to get the correct spelling.

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