Help me write this story.

Postby Jay Feely » Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:23 pm

I would like someone to write a story about kids who is tied up by a race different from humans and is tortured. Perfer that the kids are adolescents. Try to create some kind of drama in the story. Maybe each kid could have a different personality that could enable them to escape. Maybe one of the kid could be a spy on the other kids and lured them to a trap. Use your imagination to help me write a story of this nature.

The only restrictions I have is these:

1. The kids must not be hurt in any way that causes scabs, burns, or other painful methods.
2. The kids should be in the age range of 9-12
3. No kind of sexual themes in the story.

There may be a reward for completing my story. Maybe I will dedicate a story for you.

Thank You Everyone and try to take on this task.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Help me write this story.

Postby Jason Toddman » Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:17 pm

Would elves or space aliens do for the non-human race?
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Help me write this story.

Postby Jay Feely » Tue Aug 31, 2010 4:37 am

Yeah, that would be great.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Help me write this story.

Postby Jason Toddman » Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:24 am

Okay. Have written similar stories but in comic book form, and these don't quite fit your paremeters for one or another reason anyway (only one boy character for instance).
I'll put this on my projects to do list.
In case you see this first rather than my PM, somehow I lost all the PM s we exchanged about the other(community church) story you wanted; need you to resend me a description of the characters you wanted.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...