Captured by bullies (ff/f, ff/fm, ...)

Postby WishPaladin » Sun Sep 16, 2012 12:45 pm

I felt like writing a non-intimate kidnap story, so here I go. :)

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Laura was running quickly through the streets of her village, her long chestnut brown hair fluttering behind her. She was heading for the abandoned mansion in a small forest near the outskirts of the village.

“Hey, Laura!” She was stopped by a voice calling for her.

Turning around, Laura recognized the face of a boy from her class. His name was Tom. They had been friends since junior high school. Because she was in a hurry, and because it was already getting dark, she hadn't noticed him.

“Where are you going at this hour?” Clearly worried, he turned around his bicycle and walked up to her. “I've heard there's a burglar running around. You shouldn't be outside all by yourself.”

“Aren't you by yourself as well?” Laura didn't have time for this. She liked Tom a lot. In fact, she even had a crush on him, but that was exactly why she didn't want to involve him in this.

“Well...” The boy was slightly taken aback by Laura's snappy response. “I had to run a quick errand for my mom to the store before it closed.” He showed the plastic bag he was carrying. “So where are you going?”

Laura didn't know what to say. If she spoke the truth, he would be even more worried. However, she didn't know a good lie to come up with. The one she told her mother, that she was going to stay the night with a friend from school, wouldn't work on him. After all, the 'friend' she had mentioned to her mother was Jennifer, a girl one year her senior. Tom would know that something was up, since he knew that she and Jennifer weren't on best terms. She finally settled on just trying to brush him off.

“That's none of your business.” She had said it a bit harsher than she intended and she wanted to apologize, but Tom already shook his head.

“You're right. Just be careful, okay?”

“Of course.” Laura waved goodbye and continued on her way.

The forest with the mansion was only a fifteen-minute-walk from her house. She got there in ten minutes, not counting her short conversation with Tom. Following the path between the trees, she soon reached the old building. She shivered. The place looked really creepy at night. It was a lot different from when she had played there as a little kid.

The gate made an eery, creaking sound when Laura opened it. It was getting so dark that she could barely see where she was walking. She regretted not bringing a flashlight. There was no time to go back, though. Jennifer had told her to come immediately, or else she wouldn't get her diary back.

There wasn't any light shining behind the windows. Laura carefully approached the front door. It might be some kind of trap, she thought, but she didn't have much of a choice. As soon as she stepped inside, her fears turned out to be true. The doors suddenly closed. Someone blinded her with a flashlight. At the same time, her arms were roughly pulled behind her back. She tried to kick her assailant. The only result she got from this, was that the girl holding the light put it down and grabbed her leg.

Laura clumsily hopped around a bit before finally falling on the floor with two girls on top of her. One of them was indeed Jennifer. The other one was Kirsten, a shorter girl with raven-colored hair who always hung around with Jennifer. The latter was the one who had been holding the flashlight. Now she was holding a piece of rope. Both girls were grinning devilishly.

Realizing what was going on, Laura struggled to break Jennifer's grip. It didn't work. She was too strong. While the girl restrained her arms, the other girl bound them together by wrapping the cord several times both horizontally and vertically around her wrists. When Laura started protesting too loudly, the two bullies shoved an old sock in her mouth and stuck it in place with a long piece of duct tape. Only then did Jennifer let go of Laura's back.

“Good, looks like you came here alone like I asked.”

Laura didn't pay any attention to what Jennifer was saying. Who knows what they might do to her now that they had her at their mercy. Before it would come to that, she had to escape. Laura quickly got up on her knees, ready to jump upright and flee. However, Jennifer didn't let her go that easily.

“So were do you think you're going?” she said while grabbing Laura's shoulder. “Didn't you come here for your diary?”

Laura looked her defiantly in the eyes.

“Jenn, I think she really needs to learn a lesson,” the other girl said.

“I think so, too.”

Ignoring their victim's muffled protests, they guided her through the hall, down some stairs, until they reached the basement. It was really cold in there.

“We dropped your dear diary over here. Since we're so nice, we'll leave you here to look for it. We won't even lock the door.” The bully snapped her fingers. Kirsten took some more rope out of a bag she had with her. “Of course, we don't want to make this too easy for you...”

With her hands bound behind her back, Laura couldn't offer much resistance when the two girls went for her legs. They tied together both her ankles and her thighs. Then, because they just couldn't get enough of it, they taped together her fingers and sneakers as well. Still not satisfied, they wrapped some more duct tape around her shoulders, pressing them against her back. To finish their job, they also connected the bonds around her wrists to the ones around her ankles, pulling her legs down until her fingers almost touched her shoes.

“I read that you've always dreamed of something like this. Aren't we nice? We're letting you live out your fantasies!”

Kirsten giggled. “Wasn't there something about wanting to be kidnapped together with that boy in her class?”

Laura turned deep red. They had even read that part of her diary. She had been right not to bring Tom with her. She would have to get out of this mess by herself.

“Yeah, that guy she has a crush on. She broke Paul's heart because she likes that guy.”

So that's what this was about, Laura thought. Paul was a guy in the same year as Kirsten and Jennifer. He was really popular with the girls for some reason, but he turned down all confessions and presents he received. However, one day he had suddenly proclaimed his love for Laura. She had promptly shot him down. The girls vying for Paul's attention hadn't taken this well. Coincidentally, that had been about the time when Jennifer had started bullying her.

The two bullies giggled a bit and whispered between themselves. Jennifer then turned back to Laura.

“I guess we'll leave you here now. I'm sure you'll make it back home eventually. If not, well... that just means you'll be spending the night here like this. I've already made sure to call your house to tell them you're having a blast at my 'sleepover party'.”

And just like that, the two girls went back upstairs. Laura was left all alone and helpless in the dark, struggling desperately in a tight hogtie. They had done a way too good job tying her. Would she really be able to escape this predicament?

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What will Laura do and will the bullies get away with it?
To be continued when I write the next part. :)
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Re: Captured by bullies

Postby WishPaladin » Mon Sep 17, 2012 8:17 am

And here is the second part. :)

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Only a few minutes had passed, but for Laura it seemed as if she had been there for hours. No matter how much she struggled, her bonds didn't gave way. Lying on her belly started feeling uncomfortable, so she rolled on her side. She'd need a different approach if she wanted to get free. The brute force method clearly didn't work.

Laura considered her options. Wriggling her wrists out of the ropes was impossible. She could try to pry open the knots with her fingers, but that was easier said than done with her fingers taped together like they were. Wasn't there anything in the room she could use?

She had already tried to get to her cell phone, which had already rumbled a few times. Someone was trying to contact her. However, there was no way she could reach her pockets with her arms strictly tied behind her back. And even if she could, she wouldn't be able to type a message or say something comprehensible. So the phone was no help either.

At first, Laura had thought that it was completely dark in the room. This wasn't true, though. There was a little bit of moonlight shining through the door the bullies had left open. Her eyes had gotten used to the darkness. It was just enough to make out the vague shape of something that looked like a pair of scissors lying just a little bit in front of her. It was lying next to a small book that she recognized as her diary.

Her heart started beating faster. Could it really be? Did Jennifer leave those scissors there out of pity, or was it just a fortunate coincidence? Laura wanted to get closer to the object that might free her. Moving around while tied in such a strict hogtie was a lot easier said than done, though. It took all of the girl's effort to worm her body forward even an inch.

The ropes stung a bit because of the pressure she applied during her struggle to get to the scissors. It didn't matter, though. Freedom was almost within reach. Just a little further...

Slowly but surely, Laura got closer to her target. It was finally within reach. She squirmed around in her bonds until she could feel the cold steel with her fingers. She clumsily grabbed the object. Part of it fell back on the floor. Confused and alarmed, she tried looking over her shoulder what had happened. Her blood went cold. The scissors had broken in two parts. In fact, it had been broken to begin with.

Don't panic, don't panic, she thought. She could still try and use part of it to cut through the ropes. It might take some time, but...

Suddenly, Laura saw a flashlight shining through the doorway. Did they come back to mock her? There was a sound of footsteps. Someone was definitely coming down the stairs. It was only one person. Without warning, the light shone right into her eyes. Startled, the girl dropped the part of the scissors she was still holding.

“Laura?” It was the voice of a boy. “What the heck happened here? Did Jennifer do this to you?”

She slowly opened her eyes to see Tom running towards her.

“Hold on just a second. I'll get you out of this.” Tom carefully pried the tape off Laura's lips.

Laura spat out the sock. “Thanks,” the girl said from the bottom of her heart.

Aided by the flashlight, Tom was fumbling at the ropes around Laura's wrists. He released the one connecting her hands to her ankles. Laura breathed out a sigh of relief when the stress of having her arms stretched out to touch her shoes disappeared. Next up were the cords binding her hands together.

Both teenagers had let their guard down, though. Neither of them had noticed the two girls sneaking down the stairs. When they jumped Laura's white knight, it was already too late. His arms were soon taped against his sides. He put up a good fight, but with his hands immobilized, he couldn't do much. Half of his body, including his legs and a great part of his arms and torso, were soon mummified in duct tape. His mouth had been sealed with tape as well.

“That... was a surprise,” Jennifer panted, turning her own flashlight back on.

“Let him go! He has nothing to do with this!” Laura yelled out.

“Oh just shut up.” The bully stuffed the sock back where it belonged and secured it with tape.

“Too bad we ran out of rope,” the other girl said.

“We have more than enough duct tape. How about we realize this girl's fantasy? The one about being tied together with her crush.”

Laura turned red. Tom had definitely heard that. She closed her eyes in embarrassment and didn't dare to look at him when the girls forced her to stand upright just a few inches from his face. To her horror, they completely taped both of them together like one big mummy in exactly that position before lying them down together on the floor.

“Really, you should be happy that he showed up. We came to check on you since we had decided you had probably learned your lesson by now, but this unexpected turn of events just begged for this.”

And with that last comment, the two bullies left again. Laura couldn't decide what to think of the situation. Now Tom had been captured as well, and she was lying there bound together on top of him. True, it had always been a secret fantasy of her to be kidnapped together with the boy she loved, but she was afraid of his response, both about her fantasy and about the fact that she had a crush on him. In a way, she didn't want to escape and just lie there to enjoy the moment for as long as she still could. How would she ever face him again now that he knew everything?

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To be continued...
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Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm)

Postby Switcher13 » Tue Sep 18, 2012 12:13 am

Love the story so far!

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm)

Postby WishPaladin » Tue Sep 18, 2012 4:20 am

Thanks for the reactions, everyone. :)
Anyway, time for the third part.

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Laura slowly peeked under her eyelids, trying to figure out what the boy she had a crush on was thinking. He tried to say something, but only muffled sounds came out. Then, without warning, he pressed his taped lips against her gag. Startled, Laura jerked her head back. Not that she could move far, though. After all, they were still mummified together.

Confused, she wondered what that was about. It couldn't mean that he actually liked her too, right? She could vaguely detect a hint of embarrassment in his face. Laura knew that she herself was blushing as well.

They lay there without moving for a while. Finally, Tom started wriggling in his bonds.

“It's no use,” Laura wanted to say. Of course, Tom couldn't understand the “Mmmph.” that actually came out of her mouth. Then again, whereas her own wrists had been tied firmly behind her back, Jennifer and Kirsten had only barely managed to tape Tom's hands to his sides. Maybe he could do something...

Her guess had been correct. It took him a while, but the boy slowly cut through the tape with a small pocket knife he had managed to get out of his pocket. His right arm was eventually freed. Then his left. He cut the tape binding him to Laura as well.

“We're lucky I had that with me,” he said. He didn't use the knife to untie his legs, though. It was so small that it was faster to just peel off the tape with his fingers.

“Mmph!” Laura wanted him to remove the tape covering her mouth so she could confirm what that gag-kiss had been about.

“To be honest, I think you look really cute as a damsel in distress. Ah, of course I think you look cute in any other situation as well.” Tom looked flustered. “You know, I... kinda like you. Well, not just like. You know, in the way of like like.”

Laura couldn't believe her ears. The fluttery feeling in her stomach made her feel as if she would explode. Was he confessing to her? She had never seen him as nervous as this before. It made him look even cuter than usual. She was thankful for the darkness in the room. Thanks to that, he wouldn't be able to see how beet red her face was actually turning.

“So... this crush Jennifer mentioned. Did she mean...” he paused for a moment to take a big breath. A few seconds of silence passed before he continued. “...me?” He shyly looked at Laura.

He didn't have to wait too long for an answer. She vigorously nodded with her head. Butterflies were dancing everywhere inside her body. If she weren't still tied up, she would have flung herself around his neck. No, actually she was too timid to do that this soon, but at least she fantasized about it.

“Sorry about not taking the gag off first,” Tom said with a dumb but adorable smile on his face while removing the sock and the tape holding it in place. “I was afraid of hearing that my guess had been off the mark.”

Even though she could speak again, Laura didn't really know what to say. She stayed silent while Tom undid the rest of her bonds. It felt almost too good to be true that her dreams actually became reality. She couldn't be dreaming now, could she? She pinched her own cheek. It hurt, so it definitely wasn't a dream.

“So.. I guess the two of us are going out now, right?” Tom asked meekly.

“Yeah,” Laura answered in a whisper. The awkward atmosphere finally lifted. She rubbed her wrists. The tightness of her bonds had left them a bit sore. Even in the darkness, she could make out the marks left in her skin by the ropes. When Tom finished freeing her legs, she massaged her ankles and thighs a bit as well.

“Are you all right now?” The boy gave her a worried look. “Did they do anything else to you?”

“No. They only tied me up and left me here. They had stolen this from me, though.” Laura grabbed the diary lying next to her and showed it to Tom.

“Shouldn't we report this to the teachers?”

Laura shook her head. Jennifer and Kirsten would surely know if she ratted them out. Who knows what revenge they might take.

“Well, if that's what you want. If they keep bothering you, I'll go with you to the teachers, though.”

“Okay.”

“Now let's get out of here before they come back to check on us.”

Since the bullies had taken Tom's flashlight, they had to maneuver carefully through the darkness. In case the girls were still upstairs, they sneaked around as silently as possible. When they left the basement and made way for the hall where the exit was, they heard a voice coming from a nearby room. The sound was too deep to belong to Jennifer or Kirsten. There was some light seeping through the open doorway.

“Want to check it out?” Tom whispered.

Laura nodded. She and her newly acquired boyfriend slowly walked closer towards the light. They looked around the corner into the room. The sight they saw there wasn't like anything they had been expecting...

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I'll leave you guys with a classic surprise-behind-the-door cliffhanger for now until I write the next part. :P
To be continued...
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Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm)

Postby burner59 » Tue Sep 18, 2012 3:31 pm

Wow, please continue, really good.

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm)

Postby WishPaladin » Wed Sep 19, 2012 11:42 am

And here's the next part. :)

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In the room, a heavily-built man with a short beard was sitting on a chair in the light of a candle. He wasn't alone. On another chair, a blonde girl was wriggling in her bonds. It was Jennifer. Her arms had been secured to the elbow rests, whereas more tape kept her thighs in place against the chair. Her lower legs were mummified together. The man had taken off her boots and had even wrapped together her socked feet. To prevent her from speaking, her lips had been sealed shut as well.

On the floor next to the girl, another one was squirming around. Just like her friend, Kirsten had been completely wrapped in duct tape. Her arms had been tied together tightly behind her back so the palm of one hand touched as far as the elbow of the other arm. Her shoulders were pinned against her torso, making it impossible to move her arms to her side. Her dark nylon tights were covered in tape as well. To be more precise, her legs were wrapped just above and below her knees and around her ankles. More tape bound together her thighs to her lower legs, which prevented her from stretching or standing up in any way. Just like Jennifer, her mouth had been covered with duct tape as well. Both girls were completely at the mercy of their captor.

“That's got to be the burglar who's been breaking into houses the last few days,” Tom whispered to Laura when they retreated back a little further down the hall.

Laura agreed. She thought exactly the same thing. “Can't we do something?”

“Well, there are two of us, and only one of him, so we might overpower him in an ambush. But who knows if he's armed.”

“You're right. Maybe it would be better if we escaped and informed the pol- mmph!”

Laura was interrupted mid-sentence by a gloved hand being pressed against her mouth. Another arm pinned her own arms against her body. Someone had sneaked up on them from behind.

Tom's reaction came quick. “Laura!” He punched the assailant, a short man in his late twenties, right in the face.

“Damn it, you brat!” He rubbed his cheek. He still held on to one of Laura's arms. “Bill, there are more of those kids here!”

The burglar cried out in pain and gasped for air when Laura bit him and Tom punched him in the stomach. He released his grip on the girl. The couple fled in the direction of the exit.

“Oh no you won't!” Bill threw himself against the door just when they were about to open it. The other burglar had already caught up as well. The two teenagers were trapped in a corner.

“Laura, run!” Tom lunged at the bearded man with his fists in an attempt to create an opening for the girl to escape. His target was prepared for it, though. Bill grabbed Tom's incoming arm, throwing him on the ground. At the same time, his accomplice easily restrained Laura.

“Now you'll be a good boy, or else Jack will have to twist her arms a bit.”

Seeing the painful expression on Laura's face when her captor started doing exactly that, Tom had to give in before any serious harm was done. The teenagers were taken to the same room as Jennifer and Kirsten. Bill used the remaining roll of duct tape it to gag and tie up the now obedient Tom in the same way as the girl lying on the floor.

“Looks like we ran out,” he said after gagging Laura as well. “Hold her a little longer, Jack. I'll see if I can find something else to use.”

A few minutes later, he already returned, holding four pieces of rope he had found in the basement. It were the ones Laura had been tied with earlier.

“Looks like these kids have been playing some interesting games,” Bill laughed. He then proceeded to tie Laura's arms in the same way as Kirsten's and Tom's. Her legs were tightly bound above her knees and around her ankles. With the remaining cord, he connected the bonds around her ankles with the ones around her arms. She was stuck in a hogtie again.

“So what will we do with them now?” Jack asked. “They discovered our hideout and saw our faces, so we can't just let them go.”

“Keeping them here won't solve the problem either. Their parents might know they came to play here.”

“So either way this place is no good any more. How about we just burn down this old mansion and make it look like an accident?”

“Why don't we just finish them off right here and now?”

Laura's blood went completely cold when she heard the short man say that. Was this the end for them? The two burglars nervously looked at each other for a few moments.

“We're just burglars, not murderers.” Jack finally shook his head. Laura let out a muffled sigh of relief in her gag. “I don't want my hand stained with blood from kids. You?”

Bill shook his head as well. “Pretending it's an accident is fine for me. Do we just leave them here?”

No, pretending it was an accident wasn't fine, Laura thought. It was just as bad. Or maybe not. If the burglars would leave before the fire spread, they might still have a chance to untie each other and escape.

“No, the fire will take some time to spread. We don't want them to escape, so we should put them in different place. Else they might start trying to untie each other after we're gone.”

Did he just read her mind or something? That statement effectively ruined Laura's hope for escape. The burglars first dragged Kirsten away somewhere. They returned after a few minutes. Tom was up next. Laura heard the men carry him up the stairs. When they came back, it was her own turn.

Without releasing Laura's hogtie, they lifted her from the ground and took her to the first floor. In one of the rooms, they found a big empty closet and unceremoniously tossed the helpless girl inside. A lock clicked in place. She was completely trapped. Not only was she immobilized by the ropes, but she was also locked up now.

She didn't hear the burglars climb the stairs again, so she assumed they had left Jennifer downstairs. It was only a matter of time before they set the place on fire. Fearing for her life, Laura started struggling more violently in her bonds than she had ever done before...
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Things certainly took an unexpected turn for the worse, didn't they? :P
To be continued...
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Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby Sacrificiallove » Thu Sep 27, 2012 12:05 pm

So this was well written and entertaining, although it wasn't my cup of tea. I don't really like damsels in distress. If you do continue, which I think you should, my preference would be for Laura to escape and save poor Tom, and the other two bullies if she has time, cause they certainly don't deserve to die. But that's just my preference, cause I'm more of a distressed dude kind of person than the damsel in distress kind of people. However, even if you do have Tom save Laura, I'd read it anyway, I might just cringe at it, cause it was never my thing. Good story though.

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby WishPaladin » Fri Sep 28, 2012 11:12 am

Sorry that it's taking so long. I've been too busy with school to write. I'll write the next part as soon as possible, though.
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Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby Sacrificiallove » Fri Sep 28, 2012 11:38 am

Take your time......but do consider making Laura into more of a heroine than a damsel in distress. Although, I don't know if that's your thing.

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby Sacrificiallove » Fri Sep 28, 2012 12:25 pm

I'd take Tom. Then I'd have Laura come and save him.

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby randomentity » Sun Sep 30, 2012 10:36 am

Well I'm just gonna burst in here and make a nuisance of myself and vote against Sacrificiallove, I think this DID plot is the way to go, WishPaladin, but in any case, fantastic story!! :) Looking forward to the next part!! :)

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby DMC13 » Tue Oct 02, 2012 5:40 pm

Aside from my arch-nemisis, cliffhanger, coming into this, I LOVE this story!
I don't care.

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby Sacrificiallove » Tue Oct 02, 2012 7:28 pm

randomentity wrote:Well I'm just gonna burst in here and make a nuisance of myself and vote against Sacrificiallove, I think this DID plot is the way to go, WishPaladin, but in any case, fantastic story!! :) Looking forward to the next part!! :)

Lollllllllllll!!!!!!!!! Well, to each their own I guess.

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby WishPaladin » Fri Oct 05, 2012 8:08 am

boundfan46: She's about 16~17 years old.

And now, the long awaited final part. :)

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Laura was panting in her gag from exhaustion. She had been struggling for many long minutes, but she had made only little progress. The masked men had done a great job tying her, except for the rope holding her in a hogtie. After all her wriggling, at least that one had come loose. The bonds around her arms and legs didn't budge an inch, though.

The closet she was lying in was rather old. Some moonlight filtered through the crack between the doors. They had been locked, but maybe she could force them open now that her legs were a little less restricted.

Laura wormed herself into such a position that her back was leaning against the wall. With her feet, she pushed against the door. Of course it didn't open. She put some more force behind it. Nothing happened. Then she gave it a sudden kick, or at least as much of a kick as she could manage with her ankles still tied together. The wood cracked a bit around the lock. Maybe it would really work. Another kick, another crack. She kept repeating the same thing over and over again. Finally, the lock gave way. The door flew open with a bang.

The first thing Laura noticed was the faint smell of smoke. The masked men had already started a fire. She had to find a way to release her hands as soon as possible. If only she had a knife like Tom's. That reminded her that he had been carried to the first floor as well. He should still have it with him.

Laura got up her feet and out of the closet. She hopped around in the semi-darkness until she reached the hallway. From a room to the right, she heard some thumping sounds. The smell of the smoke was getting stronger. With no time to hesitate, the girl went to investigate the source of the noise.

When she entered the room where the sounds were coming from, she noticed a closet similar to the one she had been stuffed in. Bingo! This had to be where they put Tom. To her relief, the key was still sitting in the lock. In her excitement, she hopped a little too far and slipped, painfully kissing the floor with her taped lips.

The thumping sounds stopped for a moment. Instead, Laura heard a muffled call from the closet. She wanted to shout back “I'm coming”, but of course nothing comprehensible escaped her mouth. Ignoring the pain from her fall, she wormed her way to the closet and got up. She turned the key around and jumped forward so the door could open.

Tom looked into her eyes for a moment. Then he said something that vaguely resembled “Knife.” Laura nodded and sat down on the floor next to him. With her arms behind her back, it took some time and effort, but she managed to fish his pocket knife out of his pocket. With some more effort, she also succeeded in cutting through the tape around his wrists.

The rest went very quickly. Tom immediately cut through the tape around his legs and took off his gag before freeing Laura as well and asking if she was all right. The smell of fire was getting clearer, so they decided to look around on the ground floor for Jennifer and Kirsten. Even though the girls had bullied her, Laura didn't want them to get burned alive.

They immediately found Jennifer still tied on the chair. However, the room was already half-engulfed in flames. Laura took the girl's boots lying on the floor, while Tom lifted both her and the chair, carrying her to safety. While Tom cut loose Jennifer's bonds, Laura went to look for the other girl. She eventually found her locked up in a closet just like she and Tom had been before.

When everyone was free, the four teenagers escaped the burning mansion.

“Laura, I'm really, really sorry about what we did to you,” Jennifer apologized. She still had tears in her eyes from the shock of almost being consumed by the flames.

“We promise we won't ever bother you again,” the other girl added.

“Um...” Laura almost admitted openly that she had actually half-enjoyed being tied up and feeling all helpless. Of course, it had been less enjoyable once the masked men had joined and the whole thing had turned into a real kidnap.

Tom interrupted the awkwardness by saying they should report the situation to the police. They would omit the details about Jennifer and Kirsten kidnapping Laura, though. Instead, they would just tell the police that they were playing at the mansion when the two men named Jack and Bill restrained them and left them tied up while they set the place on fire.

“All's well that ends well,” Tom said when he and Laura walked away together from the police station.

“I have one question, though,” Laura said.

“Ask away.”

“How come you showed up at the mansion?”

“Oh, that?” Tom blushed for a moment. “I thought it was strange you were in such a hurry, so I quickly dropped off my groceries at home and followed you.”

Of course, Laura thought. She had encountered Tom just two blocks away from his home. With his bicycle, it must have been easy for him to catch up with her.

“When you didn't leave the mansion, I tried calling you, but you didn't take up your phone. I went to look for you and found you in the cellar. And well... you know the rest.”

“Thanks for worrying so much about me.”

“Well... you know...” Tom held Laura's hand. She felt her own heart pound heavily in her chest.

He gave her a tight hug. Time stood still for a moment.

“I wanted to protect the girl I like,” he whispered. Hearing him say again that he loved her created a storm of butterflies in her stomach. They stayed like that for a while.

“Except that I ended up freeing you!” Laura teased him when she thought she had enjoyed the hug long enough.

“Hey, you used my pocket knife. And I freed you the first time!”

“Well, let's just say we're even.”

And so the events of that evening came to an end. Laura had become a couple with Tom and Jennifer would stop bullying her. Everything had turned out all right. Well, except that her diary had gone up in flames, but she didn't care. It was a small price to pay for the happiness she got in return.

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I prefer damsels in distress, but I like it when the damsel in question can save herself through some way or another. I also like romance, so this is the end result. I hope you liked it and didn't feel it got too mushy at the end. :P
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Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby Sacrificiallove » Fri Oct 05, 2012 10:16 am

Oh, but she didn't just save herself, she saved Tom, too! So all in all, it was a good ending. And written well, of course.

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby randomentity » Fri Oct 05, 2012 6:11 pm

Fantastically perfect ending, WishPaladin!! I really enjoyed reading this, you are very talented! :)

Re: Captured by bullies (FF/f, FF/fm, ...)

Postby WishPaladin » Sat Oct 06, 2012 12:37 am

Thanks for the feedback. :)

boundfan46: there should be another story in the Fictional TUGs Stories section and two in the Fictional intimate TUGs. More stories will come if I find time to write.
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