## Velma's Revenge Gone Wrong

Post by Dark-Desire » Fri May 27, 2011 10:43 am

This is my first attempt at writing so tell me what you think and if you like it i will post the rest of the chapters.
VELMAâ€™S REVENGE GONE WRONG
Chapter 1
After successfully solving another mystery Daphne and Velma decided they needed a relaxing girls only spar weekend at the Feminine Wilds spa and hotel, all the way to the spa Velma silently burned holes through Daphne because she was bound and gagged in her underwear in a cold dark room unable to move until she was found by her friends all because Daphne messed up the plan and got lost, Velma was planning to get payback on Daphne by tying her up and making her feel the same way she did once they arrived at the spar.
Upon arriving Daphne Checked in while Velma got the bags, while she waited she opened up her rucksack to reveal coils of rope roles of duck tape ball gags and an assortment of dildos she had purchased before the trip along with a bottle of chloroform to subdue Daphne quickly and without to much hassle, Daphne gave Velma there room key and said she was off to the massage parlour for a few hours and then the bar which would give Velma plenty of time to come up with ways to torture Daphne once she was restrained, upon entering the room Velma noticed that it was infact 2 bedrooms joined by the bathroom in the middle gave Velma a place to hide when Daphne returned.
A few hours later Daphne was about to the leave the bar when to women approached her and asked if she was Daphne Blake and if so whether she was with Velma Dinkly, being tipsy she told them everything little knowing they where Christina and Alexis to crooks they put behind bars years before after a string wealthy women where abducted and subjected to bondage before being ransomed back to there familyâ€™s, before leaving Christina asked for Daphneâ€™s room number and how long she would be staying at the spa with miss Dinkly and without hesitation Daphne gave up the information before both women left for there own room across the over side of the spa.
In the room Velma was waiting nervously for Daphneâ€™s return from the bar when she saw her ascending the stairs towards there door Velma put on a mask and hid the bathroom with a chloroform rag ready for Daphneâ€™s sweet face, upon entering the room Daphne wasted no time in stripping down to her bra and pantyâ€™s and getting into bed not once wondering where Velma was, within seconds of Daphne getting into bed Velma crept into the bedroom and pounced pining Daphneâ€™s arms to her stomach and clamping the chloroform rag over her mouth and nose, Daphne tried to scream and thrashed about in the hope that she could shake her attacker off but to no avail as she slowly got weaker by the second until she fell into darkness.
Velma quickly grabbed her bag of supplyâ€™s and got to work on Daphne by firstly crossing her wrist behind her back and tying them tightly making sure not to leave any knots Daphne could reach after which she removed Daphneâ€™s bra and pantyâ€™s and got to work on Daphneâ€™s legs, she began by tying her ankles together before moving up to her kneeâ€™s she decided that it would be best to tie above and below the knee before moving onto Daphneâ€™s thighs testing the bonds as she went until all that was left her elbows, Velma first tested whether Daphneâ€™s elbows would go together which to her amusement they did she then took a long coil of rope and proceeded to tie them together making sure the ropes where as tight as they could be before admiring her work which she was pleasantly satisfied with.
By this point Daphne was stirring which didnâ€™t concern Velma much until she remembered she hadnâ€™t gagged her yet which was a problem seeing as Daphne could scream a house down in a crisis, she quickly raced to her bag and grabbed a bright purple ball-gag and rushed back to Daphne who was now completely aware of her situation and was about to start screaming but was stopped by the ball-gag was forced behind her teeth before she could get a sound out, at this point Daphne began to thrash about wildly trying to make some noise to attract help but it was no use the ball-gag stopped nearly all the noise and reduced her to a tearful mess after she realised that this time she was really in trouble and there was no-one to save her in her time of need.
Velma was absolutely thrilled that not only had she completely over powered and restrained Daphne but she had reduced her to tears which made this revenge all the sweeter for her, over the course of the next few hours Velma subjected Daphne to may different tortures including whips tickle torture and tazer shocks to name a few before she decided to give Daphne a break and go prepare her next toy for Daphne, at this point Daphne was sore all over and dreading the next torture being prepared for her she saw this brief rest as a chance to try and escape she struggled frantically but the bonds wouldnâ€™t budge an inch all she seemed to be doing was tiring her self out.
After 10 minutes Velma returned holding Nipple Clamps and a pair of Vibrating Panties, the sight of these items made Daphne thrash more wildly than she had thrashed before which was going to make the job of applying these items very difficult indeed, Velma decided to give Daphne a small dose of chloroform to calm her down, as she approached with the sweet smelling rag Daphne tried her best to try and kick her but it was no use and the rag was clamped over mouth and nose once more, once Daphne was out cold Velma quickly removed the bond upon Daphneâ€™s legs and slid the Vibrator Panties on and applied the nipple clamps which she gave a strong tug to make sure they would put.
As Velma was about to rebind Daphneâ€™s legs as before she had a much more enjoyable thought a frogtie, before she started the tie she decided it would be much more fun if Daphne was in heels and quickly ran over to Daphneâ€™s shoe collection and picked out a pair of plain black high heels with straps for the ankles so they wouldnâ€™t slip off, after applying the heels Velma bent Daphneâ€™s leg so the heel of the shoe dug into Daphneâ€™s firm rear and tied it into place and repeated on Daphneâ€™s other leg, Velma took a step back and admired her handy work waited for Daphne to wake up.
As Daphne woke up she immediately began to thrash but almost instantly she felt the pain of her heels digging into her rear which caused her great discomfort and to make matters worse the nipple clamps where connected by a chain to the bed post which made most movement extremely painful on her nipples, as she tried to her best to find a knot or one of the straps on her shoeâ€™s Velma approached and gave her a smack on the rear which caused her to spasm in shock which made her heels dig in deeper and her nipple clamps tug sharply at her already tender nipples, Velma then placed her hand between Daphneâ€™s thighs and flipped the vibrator panties on which caused Daphne to spasm uncontrollably causing yet more discomfort.
Daphne was mortified not only was she bound and gagged nude and frogtied she was also being forced to climax in front of someone for there twisted pleasure, as Daphne climaxed she let out a muffled scream of pleasure followed shortly after by one of pain because as she climaxed she yanked off one of her nipple clamps this brought a flood of tears to her eyes and an evil smirk to Velmaâ€™s face, after another 6 climaxed 2 of which where Velmaâ€™s she decided to call it a night on the torture and continue in the morning when she was refreshed and had time to think of new ways to humiliate Daphne, She decided to leave Daphne as she was with and addition of a blindfold and ear plugs to completely cut her off from the world around her, she lift the now completely helpless Daphne off the bed and lay her down the sofa in the corner of the room and lay down on top of the covers and went to sleep thinking of the pleasure tomorrow would bring.
I write F+F storys open to M+F/F+M if im in the mood, if you want one send me a pm to discuss the details(P.S Im a DUDE).
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### Re: Velma's Revenge Gone Wrong

Post by jennybond » Sat Jun 11, 2011 1:56 pm

Am I the only person that likes this story and wants to read more?
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: Velma's Revenge Gone Wrong

Post by SelenaGfan » Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:53 pm

I'd like to read more.I've just been enjoying the stories in the intimate fiction
section by skybird about some of our female contributors.

### Re: Velma's Revenge Gone Wrong

Post by italianarg » Sun Jun 12, 2011 4:38 pm

Awesome story thus far

### Re: Velma's Revenge Gone Wrong

Post by Dark-Desire » Sun Sep 18, 2011 6:41 am

Mis-post oops:)
Last edited by Dark-Desire on Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:46 am, edited 1 time in total.
I write F+F storys open to M+F/F+M if im in the mood, if you want one send me a pm to discuss the details(P.S Im a DUDE).
Requests Accepted:16
Requests Cpmpleted:16
Requests Closed Till Current Pile Finished

### Re: Velma's Revenge Gone Wrong

Post by Dark-Desire » Sun Sep 18, 2011 6:55 am

sorry i havent added more to the story a few things have stopped me, mainly losing my internet and my hard drive corrupting, ive been forced to start the story again im currently p to chapter 3 they are posted here: http://darkenvy99.deviantart.com/art/Velma-s-Revenge-258444693
I write F+F storys open to M+F/F+M if im in the mood, if you want one send me a pm to discuss the details(P.S Im a DUDE).
Requests Accepted:16
Requests Cpmpleted:16
Requests Closed Till Current Pile Finished

### Re: Velma's Revenge Gone Wrong

Post by bookl0ver » Tue Sep 20, 2011 5:06 am

just g on wiv ur other 1
DIRECTIONER FOR LIFE!
NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE
Also addicted to slash. ^,^

### Re: Velma's Revenge Gone Wrong

Post by SelenaGfan » Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:22 am

deviant art does shit to my computer,I don't visit anymore.