[First story] Suspended!

Postby Hybris » Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:22 pm

This is my first story on this board.
It is, however, not my first TUG experience.
At first, shy as I am, I was hesitant to post my stories here.
Finally, I managed to convince myself, since all of you are here to read and share them.

Since this was typed on a touch screen, spelling errors may be included. Sorry for that.

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My true name isn't going to be on here. Just call me Mick.
You won't get to know the name of the girl in this story.
I am a small boy for my age.
My eyes are green of color, and my hair a dark brown. Nothing too special. When people first see my pictures, I'm often defined as cute or even adorable.
However, I'm pretty strong, and I need that strength when I go climbing.

Now for the real story...

It was about four weeks ago, on a saturday. My parent's weren't home, so a female friend of mine was coming over.

I knew her from my biggest hobby: climbing. She is about the same size as me, has blue eyes, and black, long hair, which she usually ties into a ponytail.

She hadn't been in my house before, and was eager to see it. So, I showed her around, we had some fun together, and then we made our way up to the attic, where my bedroom is.

When we were at the top of the stairs, she suddenly asked what was in the closet next to my door, outside my room. When she asks a question, she had the odd habit of tilting her head slightly to the right. I just shrugged, "My climbing gear. Nothing special." she smiled, and opened the door of the closet without a word. She glanced around, before taking out one of my climbing ropes. "I've learned how to tie a climbing harness with these." She said with a smile. "Do you want me to show?" I nodded at her, "Sure." I replied. I knew it was possible, but I had never actually seen someone do it. She quickly made her way back ober to me, and started tying. I had expected her to do it on herself, but I was too shy to actually tell her to do so. I waited instead, andnwhen she was done, she stood next to me and said, "There. Pretty fast, huh?" she was obviously content with her work. When I tugged the rope in front of me, she quickly looped the end behind my back and knotted it off tightly. I gasped in surprise. "What are you doing!?" I said quickly, but her answer was quick and clear. "Making sure you won't take it off" she said, the smile now glued to her face.

I tried reaching for the knot, but I couldn't figure out how exactly it was tied. Meanwhile, she had gone back to the closet where she grabbed another rope. Then, she walked back to me and started tying it to the front of my harness. I took a small step away from her, but a fast "Don't move" followed immediatly.
So I just waited, not resisting even a little. then, she looked up, and that was the point where I realized what her intentions were.

Near the roof, there were some holes in the support beams. She swiftly moved the rope through two of them, leaving me staring at her in confusion. Then, she jerked the rope downwards, lifting me up into the air with ease. I knew she would be strong, but I never expected her to be capable of this. But after all, I don't weigh much, either.

She pulled it again, lifting me even higher. Sitting on the rope, she tied it to one of the closet legs, then she stood up. I dropped a little, but I didn't touch the ground. "How do you feel?" she asked. "Pretty good, I guess." I paused, "Just hanging around." I joked. "Good" she said, giving me a little push, "Then you wouldn't mind if I left you for a little, would you?" I shook my head violently. "Of course I would! Just let me down!" I almost yelled, but she had already made her way for the stairs.

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To be continued,
I'm tired.
Tell me if you like this,
There shall be more soon :D
"I expected you to be more of a struggler, boy."

Re: [First story] Suspended!

Postby myself1931 » Mon Nov 14, 2011 4:44 pm

Great first story, please continue!!
Finally got out of that small town, I now live in Toronto. Anyone nearby feel free to hit me up.

Re: [First story] Suspended!

Postby tyme115 » Tue Nov 15, 2011 3:18 am

Yes, please continue!

Re: [First story] Suspended!

Postby Tied14Racer » Tue Nov 15, 2011 8:39 am

Sounds good so far. I look forward to reading the rest

Re: [First story] Suspended!

Postby Hybris » Thu Nov 17, 2011 2:16 pm

Glad you like it!
Time for more writing, I guess.
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She headed down the stairs, ignoring me as I begged for her to get back and untie me. But of course, she didn't do so. "I'll be back soon enough." she said, and quickly after that, I heard a door close. I was now alone.

Of course, I wasn't just going to sit (or hang) there and wait for her to get back. I struggled to reach the ground, but I was at least a feet away from it. Then, I tried picking the knot that connected the rope I hung from to the one around my waist. But, since my entire weight was hanging on it, the knot had pulled really tight and I couldn't loosen it. I climbing the rope to get my weight off the knot, but to pull myself up, I needed both hands, so I couldn't work on the knot. When I gave up on that, I tried the knot on my back, quickly realizing I couldn't untie it as I couldn't see how it was tied...

It was pretty weird. Neither my ankles nor wrists were tied up, but still, I was completely locked in place, except for the gentle swinging I could manage.

I repeated my escape attempts for about 15 minutes, but to no avail. I sighed to myself, and waited. I could hear the television downstairs, so I knew she was still in the house. After another 15 minutes, she finally came back upstairs.

I stared at her as she did, relieved that she finally came. After all, although the rope harness wasn't uncomfortable, after at least 30 minutes of hanging and struggling I could really feel the places where I supported on the rope. But she wasn't untying me instantly. I dont think that would've been much fun, either.

She grinned at me in a slightly evil way, "I see you haven't moved an inch. Lazypants. You know, I believe lazy people should be punished." Upon saying that, she stepped towards me, and started to tickle me in my sides and chest. I laughed hysterically, as I kicked and writhed as much as I could. She gave me a little break, went to stand next to me to avoid my kicking legs, and resumed the tickling. I hated tickling. But I liked it, too. It's kinda weird. I had always been extremely ticklish, so this wasn't the first time someone enjoyed my helpless kicking. The tickling lasted about 5 minutes, then she decided that I had had enough. I gasped for air, and panted. I was exhausted after all the tickling. She held my shoulder to stop me from swinging, then she moved her face close to mine. "Poor little boy." she teased, "Do you want me to untie you?" Of course, I nodded eagerly. "Too bad. I'm not done yet." she said, before attacking my sides again. I kicked, groaned and struggled, and after another exhausting five minutes, that seemed like an eternity, she finally stopped. "I think you've had enough." She said, smiling at me. I nodded silently, a lot less eager than the first time. "Well, I'll let you go.." she said, as she walked over and began untying the climbing rope from the closet. "Finally." I said, but she just grinned. "What? Didn't you like it?" she said while gently letting me down on the ground. I didn't know what to say, so I didn't say anything, quickly starting to untie the knot on my front. It was a lot easier now that I wasn't dangling in the air.. She smiled more at my lack of reaction, because apparently, saying nothing said enough.
She then helped me by untying the knot on my back, which took her pretty long. (it was a complicated, tight knot.) Finally, I was free...

We had a fun evening after that, and I will make sure to get my revenge some day.
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The end.
Goodnight (It's late for me! =P) and I might post more soon. Maybe even how I got my revenge...
"I expected you to be more of a struggler, boy."

Re: [First story] Suspended!

Postby sarwrductan » Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:54 pm

I give this story a 10 I'd say. Loved it. I even think of it as a little rich in matter of factness. Thank you for sharing.
Those who walk forward always looking back, don't see that which makes them stumble

Re: [First story] Suspended!

Postby lonewolfandfriends » Sat Dec 03, 2011 7:17 am

Very good story, hope to hear more soon from you.

Re: [First story] Suspended!

Postby xtc » Sat Dec 03, 2011 11:33 am

Please do post again when you're ready.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: [First story] Suspended!

Postby randomentity » Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:57 pm

Great story! Really enjoyed reading it! :)