Mistaken Identity...

Postby AznGagged » Mon Mar 14, 2011 8:50 am

Day 1
7 A.M.
Aaron Lim woke up to the sound of his alarm; he felt excited and happy about this day and had a feeling it was going to be a great day. He took a shower, brushed his teeth and got dress in his school uniform. As he went out of the washroom, he noticed that his 18-year old brother, Paul, was still asleep. “Gege (older brother in mandarin),” Aaron was trying to wake Paul up, but Paul tried to swat him away, “Gege, PAAUULL, wake up man, I’m going to be late for school.” Aaron screamed to which Paul indeed woke up to. “Ahhh, it’s so early and your already pissing me off.” He looked annoyed, Aaron looked down in disappointment. “Go get me my t-shirt in my closet, and hurry up.” Aaron quickly obeyed him and ran to their room to get his t-shirt. The two shared a room, they live in a small apartment, and Paul, being the oldest and just getting out of school, could only pay the income, just enough for the two brothers. Their parents died in a car crash 5 years before. But even with that, the two brothers loved and cared for each other dearly, one behind the other’s back. Aaron, came back, still with his head down, he still looked sad now and looked at his brother with a disappointed look, he passed the t-shirt to Paul and Paul quickly put it on, his short black hair was still messy but Paul was a good looking boy. He had an athletic built, tall (around 5’11), his almond shape brown eyes gave a nice feature to his smooth light tan skin. Aaron was like a carbon copy of his brother, except skinnier, smaller and had a lighter skin tone. But he hung his head down still, hoping that his brother would notice him.
“What are you doing Aaron, why do you look disappointed?”
“Nothing. I was just hoping that you would remember.” He replied with a sad voice.
“Remember? Remember what?” he took something out from under the table that Aaron did not notice,
“You think I’d forget about your birthday?” he gave a wrapped gift to Aaron, who smiled and hugged his brother. “Alright, open it later after we go to the arcade, remember I promised you I’d take you there right? And beside your grown up now, you shouldn’t be disappointed at your cool older brother.”
“What does that have to do? I still think you’re the best. But okay then, but hurry up I’m going go be late for school.”
It was Aaron’s birthday, and he was turning 13.

8:30 A.M
(in the bus)
“Alright, I’ll pick you up later from school, if anything happens call me on my cell phone okay, ask one of your friends to borrow a phone or whatever, I’ll be at school around 3:30 alright?”
The bus stopped and within walking distance, Aaron’s school was there, the kids we’re all going in, Aaron waved at his brother goodbye and the bus drove off.

4 P.M
Aaron was still waiting for Paul with his friend Kevin. Kevin was a rich little kid, with a rich father who owns a big company. He wore the school uniform like Aaron, and a bright red hat he was known to always have worn. Like Aaron, he had a cute Asian features.
“Aaron, you sure Paul is coming, it doesn’t seem like it.”
“I don’t know, He promised he’d be here for 3:30.” Aaron looked worried.
“It’s 4 now, I think we should go. He promised to bring you to the arcade right?”
“Yeah. Hey Kevin, can I borrow your phone?”
“Sure.” He passed his phone to Aaron, and Aaron took out a piece of paper with numbers scribbled onto it.
The phone rang for a couple of second before he heard Paul’s voice.
“Hello? Who is this?”
“Paul, It’s me, Aaron, I’m using Kevin’s phone…Where are you?
“Oh Aaron, I’m so sorry something came up at work, they asked me to take care of it, I promise you I’ll take you to the arcades next time okay?”
“What, no Paul... you said you were going to take me today.” Aaron looked really disappointed.
“Aaron, come on man, your old enough to understand these things.” And Paul hanged up the phone.
Aaron looked really sad now, and Kevin wanted to do something about it.
“You know what, I’ll take you to the arcade, it’s Friday anyways and there’s nothing else better to do, come on, my driver will drive us there.”
With that, Aaron called his brother to get his permission, he told Paul that he was going to be home around 8.

5 P.M
The boys were having a blast at the arcade, playing so many games, playing against each other and what not. It wasn’t until they decided to try out this virtual game, in which you wear a helmet and play as the character you see, while the audience watches you play through the TV screen. Kevin went first, he put his hat on Aaron’s head while he put on the helmet, and he played, the two boys were enjoying and laughing so much, that they didn’t notice someone was approaching them.
A man approached them, pushing a baby stroller along; people around him did not notice there was not in fact a baby on it. The man took a good look around, looking for someone, and he found it. His target was that of a boy wearing a red hat. It could’ve been anyone but he knew it was the right target. He quickly walked towards the two boys, and the play area was away from the public the virtual game was tucked in the corner, covered by other games and whatever.
He walked behind Aaron, took out a cloth and hand gagged him. Aaron tried to scream, and pull the hand away from him, but it was too strong, he could smell something strong, but a few seconds of struggling, he went unconscious. The man put him in the stroller, put a blanket over him and went out of the arcade.

7 P.M
An hour past since then, and Aaron woke up on a cold wet floor. He didn’t know where he was, there were no windows, and the room was big, Aaron tried to stretch out his arm, but he couldn’t, he soon realized that he was handcuffed, his arm was behind his back, his feet was tied to together by rope.
“HEEEELLLLLPPPP” Aaron screamed for his dear life, only to be answered by the door opening and a man holding a roll of duct tape.
“Shut up kid, No one’s gonna hear you hear except me, but I want to shut you up, cuz I hate annoying little kids” the man told Aaron, he had a calm voice.
“Who are you? What do you want fro-mmmpppphhhhhhh?” Aaron was afraid. The man wrapped duct tape around his mouth multiple times as Aaron tried to scream for help. He could not see the mans face, the light was too dim, and the man covered the light from Aaron’s eyes. The only thing Aaron could see is the thin silhouette of the man. He must’ve been young.
“Kid, you’re gonna make me rich.”
“MMMPPPHHHHH”
The man walked away after taping Aaron’s mouth, he went toward the door and left Aaron alone. Aaron could not believe this was happening. He started to cry, the only sound he could hear was his own whimper and muffles through his gags. After a few minutes the man returned, he had a phone with him. He dialed a number and the phone rang loudly. A man on the other side answered.
“I have your son, get 10 million dollars in 48 hours if you want to see him alive.” He said with his calm voice.
“What do you mean? My son is right here beside me. I have no connection with whoever you have. Don’t call here again.” Said the man on the other line. “Dad, who was that?” the voice was familiar to Aaron. It was in fact, Kevin’s voice. The kidnapper ended the call. He looked pissed now. He looked at Aaron for a few second and bent down to unwrap the duct tape from Aaron’s mouth.
“Call your father; any cries for help, I’ll beat you to death.” Aaron was frightened. He had no choice but to do as he was asked. Aaron looked at his captors’ handsome face. He did not expect his captor to look like the way he was, except for the fact that he had a huge scar across his right cheek. The kidnapper threw the phone at Aaron. He knew that he had no choice but to call Paul. It wasn’t after a couple of calls that Paul answered. He did not tell the kidnapper that he had no father, but either way, his brother was the father figure in his family.
“Paul, Help me plea-“before Aaron could finish, the kidnapper took the phone.
“I will give you 48 hours to raise 1 million dollars. I will call tomorrow for further directions. Time will start at exactly twelve o’clock. Goodbye.” And the line was cut off.
The kidnapper quickly regagged Aaron, and left him alone for the night.

10 P.M
Paul was pacing around; he still couldn’t believe what had happened. He had no money, and he did not know how to get that much money that quickly. He then heard a knock on the door, and quickly rushed to open it. It was Paul’s friend Ken.
“Hey Paul, you sounded really worried on the phone when you called. What’s wrong?”
“I just needed to relieve some stress, I can’t waste time, I need your help.”

TBC
Thanks for reading guys, feedback is much appreciated. I know there wasn’t a lot of TUG, there’s gonna be more TUG in the other one xD
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Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby sarumansauron » Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:19 am

Good story! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby Jack Smith » Tue Mar 15, 2011 2:28 am

I can't wait for the next one.

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Postby MattyH » Tue Mar 15, 2011 5:16 pm

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Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby JackBrentonSucka » Tue Jun 07, 2011 1:03 pm

Love it!
Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby kidnapplz » Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:39 pm

brill story plz go on

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby chloroformmeplease » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:22 am

Good story but I wish the kidnapper was hot chick. I am not downing your story I was just hoping for a woman is all. Please continue.
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby JackBrentonSucka » Mon Jun 13, 2011 2:42 pm

Real awesome. Continue
Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby Laurenrox » Sat Jun 18, 2011 7:03 pm

Nice story please continue
Always the damsel in distress, waiting to be rescued.

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby AznGagged » Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:59 am

Since school is finally done, I thought about putting the continuation of this story... Please enjoy and feedbacks well appreciated :D

10:30 PM
Aaron woke up from a dream... Or so he thought he did. He had fallen asleep since the last time the kidnapper called his brother. Aaron started to struggle out of his bonds, noticing that he was now tied differently, the handcuff was instead replaced with rope, his mouth still wrapped tightly with duct tape. He started reminiscing the past... He remembered being tied up like this when he and his brother played some tie up games. He struggled as much as he could to loosen up his tie. Miraculously he was able to loosen it, his kidnapper underestimated what a small 13 year old boy could do.
Then finally, he broke free, his hands were free and quickly began untying his legs. He started to feel excited, but scared at the same time. He always liked being tied up, but not in this situation. As soon as he finished untying his feet, he swiftly stood up, but carefully as to not make any sound. He look around, he was in a washroom... He looked in the mirror and admired the gagged he wore before removing it. He then went to the door, hoping that his kidnapper was not awake, as he knew it must've been pretty late now. He opened a small bit of the door, enough to see if it was clear. The washroom was not locked to keep him in luckily. He stepped out...

"What are you planning to do the Paul?" Ken asked, Paul couldn't stay still, he was too worried.
"The time starts at 12 I have 48 hours, so two days to raise a million... But... I don't know how."
"Just relax man, I'll help you," Ken walked to the fridge and took out a couple of beer.
"I know, I may sound kind of insensitive right now, but man... You can't be too stressed over this or you won't reason things out properly." Ken handed Paul a beer.
"I guess your right, I just hope Aaron is all right."

10:45 PM
It's been 15 minutes since he escaped... As he stepped out of the washroom, the coast was clear. Aaron smiled with relief, and quickened his pace to find the exit. He was in an empty building. Finding his way out took a while before he finally found it. But a struck of misfortune occured. He stood awestruck by the figure that stood right in frontof him. His eyes was fierce and cold, his hair messy but his face was young and handsome. He didn't look much older than Aarons brother, may even be a bit younger. But that didn't matter. He was thin, but built and Aaron afraid of what may happen next quickly ran for his life, where is he going? He did not know.

11:00 PM
Meanwhile, Paul and Ken were drinking, to dull out the troubles in his head, but Paul goy drunk... As did Ken.
"Man you know what we haven't done for a while?" Ken said as he stood up and headed towards the kitchen cupboards under the sink.
"Shit man, fml, if your thinking of doing what I'm thinking... Seriously dude, now is not the time" Paul knew instantly.
"Fck Paul, you're kinda getting annoying bout that sh-t, I told you not to worry, come on man... I know you want this." Ken had duct tape in his hand.
"No man, fck this sht... What about Aar-" It was too late.. Ken grabbed a sock he found laying around andh while Paul was being all dramatic, Ken took the opportunity to stuff it into his mouth and wrestle Paul to the ground. Their physiques were even, but Ken had the upper hand as Paul did not struggle much, but left his captor do his job. "Don't worry man, I'll tie you up simply.'' As soon as he finished tying Pauls hand, he quickly wrapped duct tape around his mouth multiple times
"Let's head to your bed" Ken picked up Paul and dropped him on his bed, Paul did not struggle, as he was enjoying this moment. Ken took out rope from under the bed and tied his foot first to the bed post. As soon as he did this to both feet,
He cut off the tape around his wrists, and tied his hands to the bed post, ultimately in a spread eagel position. Paul had on a hard on, as did Ken.
"How long had it been?"
"mmmppphhhhh" Paul replied, assuring Ken that it had been a long time since the two played.
"I know its the wrong timing to say this, but I'm pretty sure your brother's in the same situation as you're in now"
"mmppphhuuuhhh" Paul mmpphhed angrily, probably swearing at his friend. But Paul thought that Ken may be right.
"Too bad buddy... Tristan isn't around anymore, I wonder what happeed to him."

11:15 PM
Aaron was caught, his running did not do any use. In the light he saw his captors handsome face. Oddly familiar to Aaron. His kidnapper looked at Aaron and smiled "You've grown up since the last time I saw you," He said as he approached Aaron with saran wrap in his hand. Aaron was confused. He cannot remember where he saw this man before. "I don't think you remember me... That's okay, you'll find out soon. But I'm afraid I can't let you go back home to Paul. At least not yet." Aaron was tired and hungry. But his kidnapper did not care. His kidnapper noticed the weak and tired boy, and started to wrap him in saran wrap, Aaron's hands and arm was on his side, too tired to struggle.
"Sir, what are you gonna do to me? Please, let me go. Who are you?"
"Don't worry, just trust me, I won't hurt you. You're escape led you to being tied up like this. Of course being mummified... Let's just see how you can escape from this now." The kidnnaper was done with the saran wrap, Aaron was laid down softly on the ground. As Aaron was about to say something, a small rag went into his mouth, followed by a bandana tighlty tied around and then duct tape being wrapped around many times. As soon as he was tighlty gagged, his kidnapper soon began wrapping duct tape around him from shoulder to feet.
"mmmmpppppphhhhhhh" Aaron's soft muffled cry enjoyed his kidnapper as he smiled at the effectiveness of the gag. Aaron could not move a muscle anymore. The kidnapper used two rolls of duct tape. In addition, the kidnapper stood him up on a pole. He wrapped the mummified Aaron onto the pole with duct tape, wrapping it around his mouth, his chest, and legs, and to top it off, tied rope around his chest and legs. Aaron liked the feeling, but again the timing and situation was horrible.
Aaron was now facing his captor eye to eye, and his captor looking down at his work. "You are now always gonn be under my sight, should've expected more from Paul's brother. But I got to say, you are pretty much like him."

TBC
Comments and suggestions would be awesome THANKS :D

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby xtc » Sun Jul 10, 2011 8:23 am

Ni hao
Xia xia
Wassail!
Xtc

or shoud that be "Ni hao ma"?

P.S. I like the time-scale. You beat me to that idea!
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby sarumansauron » Mon Jul 11, 2011 11:52 am

Great continuation! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby Laurenrox » Wed Jul 13, 2011 9:19 pm

I think i know who the kidnapper is.
Always the damsel in distress, waiting to be rescued.

Re: Mistaken Identity...

Postby mikeybound » Sat Apr 27, 2013 7:31 pm

No more? :-(