## Beware of the big brother.

Post by Chris12 » Mon Sep 14, 2009 6:46 am

This story is about my brother kidnapping me and my friends
The persons in this story are.
Edward 14. my best friend and classmate.
Oscar 14. Edwards cousin and also a good friend of mine.
Amy 14. my older girlfriend.
Sara 14. my evil and i mean really evil but close cousin
Paul 12. he is my cousin and Sara's younger brother unlike me he was not smart enough to skip a year but because he was one of my best friends my friend where okey with letting another younger kid hang out with them sometimes.
Tom 16. he is my older brother and somewhat of a role model for me and Paul but despite that he still beats me as much as my friends do.
And me of course i was 12 when this happened
Every year at the start of a new school year my school has some kind of sports day everyone must go to a field where there are many things to do football , basketball , spear trowing almost every sport you can think of.
After all the events where over (my class won) me and my friends stayed on the field to just rest a bit talk a little and spending some time teasing me.
After a hour Paul asked me to take a walk with him because he wanted to show me something cool .
' If you two are trying to play a prank on us we will carry you home tied up and gagged' Edward warned us.
Me and Paul where quite famous for playing many practical jokes on everyone we knew most of my friends enjoyed having us brighten everything up with our jokes except our targets they would punish us which amused everyone even further.
Paul was acting a bit strange he seemed kind of nervous and was constantly looking on his watch.
' is something wrong' i asked him when we reached the toilets.
He made a nervous laugh 'no nothing Chris do you mind if i take a quick pee.
Before i could answer he already rushed to the toilets.
'okeeeey that was weird ' i said to myself and then i was surprised that i talked to myself.
I waited a while for Paul but he did not came back and for a few moments i thought this was a plan of Paul to tie me up but when i got inside Paul was nowhere to be found.
After that i went back to the place my friends where hanging out but noweone was there either
'Come on guys this is not funny '
You can come out now ' 'GUYS???!!.
'Hey little brother' i quickly turned around and saw my older brother standing behind me.
"Tom do you know where everyone is ' i asked with a bit of panic in my voice.
Tom just smiled a 'sure i do Chris i take you to them ' and without warning he tackled me to the ground and begun to tickle me.
I giggled a little 'hahaha get off me tom your to heavy hahah. He stopped tickling me and took a small rope from the ground i did not noticed before.
Hands behind your back little brother or i will make you do it'
When he was done tying my hands behind my back he pulled me off the ground .
'Walk and if your to slow you'll regret it' he treated.
'Come on tom where are you taking me let me go and what have you done with my friends.
'Stop whining and get a move on we are taking a walk to the forest your friends are fine and about letting you go i dont think so .
Next to the sport field there was a small forest well it was too small to be a forest and I'm not really sure there are any real forests in the Netherlands but to keep it simple i just call it a forest
After Walking a little we arrived at a place that seemed like a camp it had some nets hangind to the trees to ly one , some old wooden chairs and even a couch that seemed like it belonged to homeless people.
I was trown to the ground and i saw my friend Edward and Oscar where hogtied on the ground and Sara and Amy where tied to a tree all four of them where gagged with tape.
My brother began to speak in a very business like manner
'okey i know all four of you have either tied up my little brother or helped to torture him some of you have even tied ME up' he looked at Sara which said he had not forgot that she tied him up.
'And everyone who picks on this little brat(he placed his foot on my back) has a problem with me any questions'
Everyone made some mmpphh's but since i was the only one who was not gagged i was the only one who could ask something
'Yea i have one ' i yelled' 'two actually '
1 what have you done to Paul .
2 If you want to teach my friend my friends a lesson about teasing me THEN WHY THE HELL AM I TIED UP TOO.
'did not want to feel left out ' he simply replied.
'And about Paul.
FLASHBACK
written by my buddy Paul
Well i'm Paul i'm sure Chris has written at least one story about me(or else )
well anyway a few days before all this i got a visit from my cousin tom.
It was a fun evening the two of us played a little football after that some time he asked me if i could help him capture Chris and his friend Tom promised to let me go if i helped him.
While i am verry pleased with my freedom i told him i would not betray my little buddy.
But in the end i ended up helping him because asked in the nicest way you could imagine(he tied me up gagged me and drowned me in the swimming pool until i agreed to help him.
When the sport day was over all i needed to do was to get Chris away from the others and by the toilets one of tom's friends would kidnap Chris.
Once i was in the toilets i was greeted by a hott girl who was toms girlfriend .
'hey Chris is outside so if your quick you canmmpphh' i was hand gagged and dragged to the girls room(thank god nobody was there she tied me up with tape and gagged me to keep me silenced .
Back to my point of view 'bye Paul '
That traitor i yelled quite mad.
My brother was clearly enjoying seeing me furious 'yea anyway for hurting my little brother all of you including Chris and Paul once he gets here will be tortured BUT 'he said like he suddenly knew the meaning of life ' i give you a chance to win back your freedom.
All of my friend where mmpphhing at me to take the offer.
'What do you think little brother ' tom asked while he ruffled my hair a bit.
If i can get you back then HELL YEA.
TO BE CONTINUED.
i know ts a bit slow but i promise in the next chapter you will see more tug action.
About Paul's flashback that was his idea he thought about creating account here but decided against it out of fear because his parents would find out.
once again sorry if my grammar is not that good.

### Re: Beware of the big brother.

Post by kidnapper » Thu Sep 17, 2009 1:41 am

i like it...especially the part of changing the character! good method for telling "paul's" story
keep writing i wait to see what is on your brother's mind

### Re: Beware of the big brother.

Post by Chris12 » Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:43 am

part 2
wanted to know what i would have to do to get my freedom but tom wanted to wait until Paul arrived.
When toms girlfriend Ruth came to bring Paul he was thrown next to me.
MMMPPPHH MMPPHH' Paul was pretty angry that he was tied up.
'Whats the matter want to say something' tom yoked and he walked to Paul.
MMPPHH auw' tom had ripped the tape from his mouth 'you said you would leave me alone traitor.
Tom went to sit on my back and since im pretty light that hurts.
'i said I would not tie you up and i did keep my promise it was my Ruth that tied you up.
Without listening to pauls complains he turned to me .
'well i let you guys go for now if you and your friends can win aginst my friends.
I thought about this for a while it was good that my brother would give us a chance to defend ourself but he and his friends where older then us and he alone could overpower all of us even at once however it would be best to just accept his offer .
'Deal' i said 'when do we begin'.
Tomorrow morning 'tom ansered.
He released everyone but me and paul.
'Hey what about us ' i yelled.
'I carry you two home with me i already made sure paul will spent the night at our place.
'Thats unfair people might see let me gooommpphh ' Ruth had gagged me with the tape.
'good work Ruth my little brother has a way too annoying voice well i see you all tomorrow at 10 hour in the morning.
After he took me and paul on his back we began on a pretty embarrassing way home.
Before when went to bed i made a phone call and made Paul do the same When we where done making phone calls we had two new members of the team.
Mike. A classmate of mine While he had never tied me up he was present when Edward tied me up in the classroom when my teacher was away so he knew whe where into tie ups.
he had blond hair and was not only big but HUGE(his legs where taller then me) he is also the only person i know that is about the same strength as my brother.
Ross 12. a Irish boy Paul's best friend he was a bit of a shrimp or wimp but still not nearly as much as me
because we are both weaklings we are often dominated by Paul and while i did not see him that often being tied up together by Paul every time we meet each other makes a bond .
Everyone would go shirtless and wear shorts or something like that if everyone of your team was captured you lost the game.
When we arrived by the forest edward Oscar Amy and Sara where already waiting for me .Oscar placed his arm around my shoulder.
'and genius have you got a plan'
I'm the smartest of everyone so for plans they always come to me.
'I have one you must make sure you separate them from each other then you can either lure them to make or attack them together if you see Tom run away as fast as you can and let mike tie him up .
This guy ' i pointed at Ross will be our spy my brother does not know him so he can search for his base or distract them Any questions.
Great another little kid to look after ' Edward sighted not really happy about another boy to defend.
When we where done arguing we where ready to begin.
Paul and i would be go together since everyone was sure they would go after me first i was not allowed out of Paul's sight.
the two of us walked trough the forest untill paul trew me in some bushes.
'mmpphhhfff paul clamped his hand around my mouth.
'shh tom is coming .
Paul was right Tom Ruth and another friend of tom where coming and i saw they had captured Edward his arms where twisted around his back by tom.
'This place will do to the ground' tom said to Edward and toms friend begun to tie Edward a tree.
Where is Chris ' tom asked Edward.
'Like i would tell 'Edward said .
Ruth gagged Edward and began to tickle him.
MMPPFF Edward laughed behind his gag.
After tom told the two to guard Edward and torture him until he said where i was.
Paul dragged behind a tree.
'I go get Ross dont get captured again ' he told me.
When he came back we would let ross lure them away so we could rescue Edward.
Wait Ross you do know they will torture you much harder then the rest when they find out do you' i asked.
'relax Chris i wont get catch I'm not like you'.
Ross runned to Ruth and started pulling at her arm.
'Miss could you help me i cant find my doggy anywhere and I'm worried' he made some fake sobs.
i found the i lost my dog excuse a bit lame but Ross was for his age a great actor and because of his cute(in a puppy like way)appearance am his sweet voice most girls found it hard to say no to him .
After Ruth and the other guy left(Well in case of the other guy he was forced to come by Ruth). i Went to the tree.
'not so fun if your the one that captured is it' i teased him.
I heard MMPPHH coming from behind me but i did not really noticed.
Edward made some angry mmpphhs at me i gave him a wedgie out of revenge for the wedgies he gives me every day.
I untied Edward at first it seemed like he would hit me but instead he rann away and when i looked behind me i knew why.
Danny toms best friend had handgagged paul and my older brother was smiling at me .
'hey little brother ' he said and before i knew it i lay on the ground bound and gagged .
Take them to the camp' tom commanded his friend.
MMPPHH i cried into my gag
i had a bad feeling because i knew i was going to be used as a hostage and knowing my friends they would surrender if tom used me in such a way.
i could only hope the others had more success then me or that Ross would not get captured
Next chapter the story will continue.

### Re: Beware of the big brother.

Post by Chris12 » Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:00 am

so..... anyone interested in the rest of the story

### Re: Beware of the big brother.

Post by Ducttapestar » Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:02 am

Umm... YES!

### Re: Beware of the big brother.

Post by Chris12 » Sun Sep 20, 2009 7:44 am

part 3
Danny and tom where quite happy about running into us edward might have escaped but they now had two new prisoner and from what i heard they had already captured oscar .
Because they now had me as their prisoner meant they would use me as either a hostage or bait which always works because i'm very easy to capture and my friends always will get captured to get me back.
When we reached the camp where i had been tied up the other day Tom and Danny laid there captives on the couch.
mmpphhh' i pleaded to be released.
'what did you say chris i cant hear you ' danny yoked
MMPPHHFF Both me and paul screamed.
Tom just tickled us a little and took his celphone.
I'm going to make a small phone call kiddies.
While i struggled against my bonds Tom was already speaking on the phone.
Hey amy i just called to say i got chris as my little hostage' he held the phone close to us so we could make some desperate mmpphh's into it ' if you want him back you can either surrender or trade Chris and paul for ruth and jake(seems that ross let them straight to mike who tied them up somewhere).
I heard amy refuse and i got a little scared and made some mmpphh's at tom .
O wait a minute chris wants to talk to you' Danny ripped the tape from my mouth and tom held the phone by my mouth.
'Hey its me WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN WITH THE IM NOT SAVING YOU BULSHIT and after that more cursing which i will not describe due to the nature of this board.
'faul languese does suit you sweetie besides they are going to torure you either way so it wont matter wat we do.
You will sent ross to save me right' i hopefully asked
'dont count for it bye.
soo you have another one of your friends sneaking around thats cheating little guy' tom said while he made a fist.
I totally forgot Tom was listening to the whole conversation and i felt a little guilty since ross would be tortured more then any off us let alone for what tom might do to me for cheating.
'Take paul to the lake to be tortured i will take care of my little brother.
Paul was dragged of to the lake by danny and two of toms other friends and after making some scared mmpphhs they where gone
No please no tickle torture please ' i begged my brother.
Sorry chris but you must learn a lesson about cheating besides i was going to tickle you anyway.
'let me goooo ' i screamed.
Ignoring my pleads tom started to tickle my sides.
'hahahah stope tom hhaahahahahhaaa im to ticklish hahah i cant take anymore haha SOMEONE PLEASE HEEELP.
Tom sighed 'seems like i have to gag you again kiddo'
nooommpphh' Tom stuffed some socks in my mouth and gagged me with a black bandanna.
so now i can tickle you without the whole village hearing you' my brother was now tickling my feet which was my most ticklish spot.
MMPPHHFF MMPPHH MMPPPRRPPHH!!!!!! ' I cried already in tears.
After a while he stopped tickling me.
'And are you going to tell where you are keeping ruth and jake are being held' tom asked me.
mmpphh' i shook my head.
Before Tom got the chance to beat the ansers out of me another boy was coming with two prisoners and to my surprise it was paul!!.
His captives where his older sis sara how he ever overpowered her was a mystery but i was glad she would was captured since she torments me on a daily basis.
his second prisoner was to my shock ross he looked rather scared but i was surprised that paul kidnap his best friend just to escape torture himself with ross cute appearance and amazing ability to make puppy eyes(even better then me) it would almost be a sin to hurt him something Sara and amy always scold paul for.
'I made a deal with your bro's friends' paul happily told me.
MPPHH ' i yelled at him angry.
Tom gave paul a high five and a beer (the yerk never gives me a beer no matter how much i beg and paul gets one once's he helps him )
So this is ross 'my brother said 'well see how ticklish he is.
I basicly lost all hope that moment ross was just as ticklish as me and he was not used to torture if you combine this and the fact that he is easy to scare my team was pretty much doomed.
MMMPPHHFF ross was fiercly struggling shooking his head and begging behind his gag.
You should know this was going to happen when my little bro asked you to spy one us 'tom said and he started to mercilessly tickle the begging and terrified boy .
After my brother had tortured me and ross for a while we where both crying of laughter.
'And ready to talk he asked both of us.
MMPPHH ross nodded wich seemed like the torture worked on him .
Some of toms friends who had already returned started to pay attention.
'good boy 'tom said and he ungagged ross.
Ross told him where mike amy and edward where laying a trap for them and where our base was.
MMPPHH i screamed at paul angry that he just laughed while his best friends where tortured in front of him .
Paul just poured the rest of his beer down my pants.
'Something to say chrisieboy" he cheerfully asked .
i decided to not even bother to even try say something.
y.y.you are g.g.going to release me ' the still shaking Ross asked
Nope buddy you and Chris will stay like this and be tortured some more' Paul informed him
WHAT BUT YOU SAIMMPPHH' ross was gagged again and some other guys started to tickle him again despite that little ross was scared to death(or was he You just never know with a guy thats a natural actor)
Tom sent all his friends to where ross said everyone was but paul and himself stayed behind to torture us some more.
However we had not lost yet and my friends had still one last move to make.
to be continued.

### Re: Beware of the big brother.

Post by Chris12 » Fri Oct 02, 2009 5:52 am

LAST PARRRRRT
All of toms friend left to the place ross told them where my friends where laying a trap tom stayed behind to torture us a bit as was paul but that was because everyone would kill him if they found out.
My big bro came sit next to me.
'well looks like i win chris' he ruffled my hair a bit.
'i mmpphh't in despair.
'nah dont worry we wont torture you that much ' he reassured me.
'As for you ' he turned to ross ' i think i let you go without any punishment'
we both made some surprising mmpphh .
Before tom could explain why he was suddenly tackled to the ground by tree different persons at once.
Edward and Amy now begun to tie my brother arms behind his back as mike restrained him.
I saw paul making a run for it but my friends made no attempt to go after him instead the untied me and ross.
'Thanks guys 'i said and i was then quickly hugged by amy.
'How did you guys get past all of them' i asked a little confused as no one of us could beat the older kids.
we did not have to ' edward ansered 'We already knew paul would try something like this and that you and ross would get captured so we made ross pretend like he told them everything While in fact he just lured them away.
'Cool but why did't you tell me ' i asked.
'Because you would tell your bro everything if he tickled you for even a minute' amy teased me.
'HEY' i was insulted but decided to just focus on tom instead who was gagged with tape by now.
'BIG BRO ' i yelled and i started to jump on him a bit.
MMPPHHH it seemed he was not happy with his little bro jumping on him.
Im going to have so much fun with you' my voice went more cheery with every word i spoke.
But unfortunately tom managed to stand and tackle me to the ground which made him lose his balance and he fell on top of me.
Who beaten by a guy who's tied up i just lost all my respect for you chris. Edward teased me.
Amy came to look to and could not stop laughing for a minute at seeing her boyfriend like this 'say kiddo if we ever going to marry your going to improve your muscles right'
GUYS get him off me he's CRUSHING meeeee!!!
Because everyone was too busy laughing at me no one noticed paul was sneaking up to ross and took him hostage.
whammpphh' his scream was silenced by pauls hand and he was dragged away.
when the guys had dragged tom off me i went after him my friends did not since we could not risk my brother escaping.
When i chased paul for a little while i managed to tackle paul which made him release ross.
What the hell are you doing' ross asked in a panicking voice
Im not going to get killed by my sis' he sounded even more scared then ross.
Both ross and i tied to capture paul ourselves but since the both of us are realy(and i mean realy realy )weak we where quickly forced to the ground.
'You two are SO weak its getting scary by now' he said with a big smile and he tied us back to back.
Your going to pay for this ' i struggled against my bonds in vein.
LET ME GOOO!!! ross screamed and he faked a realy scared voice.
shut up both of you' paul gagged us with socks and put some tape over our mouths.
bye guys ' he said.
'mmpphhh i pleaded him to release me and so did ross
He just left us so that he could escape while my friends looked for us but my friends did not find me instead it was.....tom.
It seemed like he escaped and captured mike and without him we where doomed and everyone was captured before he found us
he took us back to the camp where everyone was gathered.
My friends where al released and given a beer exept me and ross because the girls found us so cute the just had to tickle us.
' enjoying yourself little brother' my brother came sit next to me and moved his knuckle to my hair.
MMPPHH i shook my head trying to deny it.
Hahah my Little brother likes to be tied up .
We where kept captive for the rest of the afternoon but we where released eventually .
when we got to school the next day we had a little talk with paul about traitors(he got humiliated in front of the whole school.
the end.
Im sorry this part might be a bit boring because there is little action .
In my next story im going camping.

### Re: Beware of the big brother.

Post by Footboy » Tue Aug 10, 2010 9:19 pm

dude......thats really cool. all of your stories are good, i love them. keep going cus u can write brilliantly despite the fact english is not your first language.