She found quite a surprise (Self, F/M)

Postby Unknown-User » Mon Apr 29, 2013 2:58 am

This story is appropiate for any age. English is not my native language, so please do not insult or offend me for my use of grammar and vocabulary. The story did really happen, but is slightly altered to make it more enjoyable to read. So.... eehmmm.... enjoy.

PART 1

Let me first introduce myself. I am 14 years old, about 6 feet tall (1,80) and I have brown hair. My sister has long brown hair and she's 19 years old. She is about 5"7' (1,68) and she is quite beautiful. Our names are different in the story, to maintain privacy. I shall be called Charlie, and my sister will be called Katie.

It was about 11:30 p.m. when I thought everyone would be asleep. I started tying myself up with the limited materials I had. I eventually got myself in a pretty tight hogtie, with especially my legs really tightly tied together but my elbows weren't tied and I was easily able to get my hands untied. It would only be a matter of 3 to 5 minutes to get my hands untied and after that it would be easy to get out in another 3 minutes. So I was struggling, but I didn't know that my sister couldn't sleep that night. She has had trouble sleeping before, and she was awake this night as well. She heard some noises from my room, but she tought it wouldn't be anything. After a while, at about 00:00 a.m. she decided to take a look though.

She found a hogtied boy and was shocked. "Charlie, what the hell happened?" "ehm..... This is kind of awkward" Katie didn't really know what to think, until she said: "Did you do this to yourself?" I must have been glowing like a red supergiant star. I was extremely embarrassed, but I eventually nodded. "So you like being tied up, don't you?" "Well..... yes...". "You really scared me to death! hmm.... Well, since you like being tied up, let's make it a little bit more interesting, shall we?" "What?". I was trying to get my hands untied, but Katie decided to re-tie them. "Let's make sure you wont escape, while I get some more stuff to get you more comfortable." I was no longer able to escape. I couldn't really reach the knots at all. When she came back she found quite a bit of rope and she had some tape as well. The first thing she did, was give me a gag.

She used the tape to cover all the knots with it. That means that I couldn't touch the knots at all, even if they were in range. She also tied my elbows together, and then tied my elbows to may waist. I was almost completely immobilised. Her rope-work wasn't really that good, but she was aware of that and that's exactly why she used the tape.

"Hmm, I don't really like the way you're tied, I'd prefer a chairtie." She untied my hands from my feet and got me on the chair. She untied my elbows from my waist, got my arms behind the chair and tied my waist and my elbows to the chair. I was actually enjoying it, but I still didn't really know what to think. She tied my feet to a little 'tube' under the chair, so I was unable to get my feet forwards.

"Well, that will do, right Charlie?" I tried struggling but once again she taped the knots. I 'mmmmph'ed but my gag was really effective, no one would ever be able to hear me, not even my parents upstairs. "Good night, sleep 'tight'..... Mooohahahaha (evil laugh)"

To Be Continued

Re: She found quite a surprise (Self, F/M)

Postby xtc » Mon Apr 29, 2013 3:19 am

Please don't be aggressive/defensive about possible replies. Most will be made with the intention of helping and supporting you and not offending or insulting you. If, however, you're not interested, you might as well skip the rest of this post.

There is no need to make excuses about your standard of English. Like some other non-native English speaking writers on this site, your English is of a better standard than that of some native speakers. Your punctuation helps the reader and it makes the story so far an enjoyable read.

And now for the bit you might not like:
As has often been remarked on this site, each new speaker should take a new line. In contemporary style that, of course will be a new paragraph.

If you find this post offensive or insulting, I'm sorry but please don't assume that people will be out to "get you" and be prepared to accept help. That way we will be able to enjoy your quite skilfull writing better.

I look forward with pleasure to reading the next episode.
Wassail!
Xtc
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: She found quite a surprise Part 2 (Self, F/M)

Postby Unknown-User » Tue Apr 30, 2013 12:48 pm

As a reply to xtc: I do not feel insulted by your post, but the reason I said that is that I have quite a lot of experience with forums and SoundCloud and YouTube and that kind of stuff, and I have often noticed that people are being offensive. I can notice the difference between an insult and someone giving me advice, but most of the time people were just being offensive. I do never feel insulted because of advice, although it sometimes depends on what kind of advice (I would be insulted when giving me advices like: "Go take a shower" :? ). Oh, and thank you for the advice :)
And now to resume the story:

Part 2

I tried moving, but Katie had tied me incredibly tight. She had aslo blindfolded me with a pink scarf she found in her own closet. I was still quite confused about what just happened, but I knew it was going to be a long night. After about an hour I fell asleep. When I woke up, my parents were both actually already gone to work. I was still quite confused how I got tied up like this, but I slowly managed to recall what had happened. After a while my sister came upstairs to check up on me.

"Well had a good night, little brother?"

"MMMMMMMPPPHHH"

"I'll take that as a yes. Now, it is saturday, so you won't have to go to school today, and neither do I. Mom and Dad are already at work and my boyfriend won't be coming today either. As it seems you like being tied up, I shall keep you here for the rest of the day until mom comes back. It seemed you liked your hogtie, so I'll get you back into that."

"mmmmmmmmph"

She got me into my tight hogtie, and I was still blindfolded. I was really hungry, and apparently she could hear my stomach as she left and came back with a plate of a recipe she had which was called "Bread with egg", which was really the most idiotic name ever. She picked up a spoon and started feeding me, which was quite a weird expedience, but as I was still tired and the food tasted quite good, I didn't really care. That is, until she said this:

"Remember I used to feed you when you were little? Well of course you don't, you were 2 years old. You were so cute back then. Hihihihii."

Never say to a 14 year old he was 'cute' when he was 2 years old. I was really angry when she said that.

"Now, let's talk about the situation. You are tied up, unable to escape and at my mercy and I can keep you like this for the rest of the weekend. Dad won't come home until 12 O' clock and mom won't be home until tuesday. I will however, not tell anyone about what you were doing this night. I play TUGs with my boyfriend as well and we know how embarrassing it can be for anyone else to know about such a thing. What I was kind of wondering is, is there anyone else who knows about this?"

There has once been another TUG-incident which is why my girlfriend knows about it, but I decided not to tell her, so I shook my head. (This may possibly be featured in another stort in the future)

"Btw, you had really gotten yourself in a nice hogtie. I couldn't even tie anyone up like that without the use of tape. I can see you are still kind of angry because I said you were cute, hihihiii. :) You will be facing embarrassment from me over the weekend, but don't worry, no one else will find out. I would like some pictures though...."

To Be Continued :)

Re: She found quite a surprise (Self, F/M)

Postby xtc » Wed May 01, 2013 2:35 am

Good one so far.
Thanks for the reply.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: She found quite a surprise (Self, F/M)

Postby barefoot99 » Thu May 02, 2013 11:58 am

great story please continue
BAREFOOT AND CUFFED, THAT'S THE ONLY WAY TO GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: She found quite a surprise (Self, F/M)

Postby canuck100 » Thu May 02, 2013 2:07 pm

Love it too!

Re: She found quite a surprise (Self, F/M)

Postby fuegoski » Tue Apr 01, 2014 1:37 pm

please continue