It's been forever since I wrote this, so I've decided to share it with you guys to maybe get some feedback. This one is the thing that was based off of the RP I posted. I'd like some feedback. This was written two years ago mind you.
Prologue
There once was a mage, his name was Drafon Syphon. He had friends that helped him more then he thought. He had a staff, a normal one, but then something weird happened. His “normal” staff morphed into a crystal engulfed magic storage. His friend Toop went to find out this magic anomaly not knowing it was Drafon. When he got there he was amazed, he asked how he got the staff. Drafon answered” my old staff transformed into this staff” They went to the headquarters when the situation happened. A Dragonoid attacked full force. Drafon managed to put up a magic shield, with the help of Toop, which warded off the first blast. But dissolved shortly after, leaving them defenseless. Another mage, Alc, put up another barrier. But they were running out of time. Drafon yelled “Can you keep this barrier up? Alc yelled back” Yea, for a while not to long!” Just then Zaroc came in and said “You guys go, I’ll hold the blasts off. “Then the trio left to get the attack ready, they ran into a few problems. The Harbinger was there. He blasted Drafon back. Drafon fell back and passed out. When he woke up, he saw destruction. The Harbinger saw he was still alive and said” You are no mortal being to still be alive, Drafon”. Drafon saw Toop come and hit the harbinger and then Drafon used his staff to stun the Harbinger (which didn’t work) He threw a blast that knocked him out AGAIN.
Chapter 1
Drafon yelled ‘Alc where are you?’ Alc wakes up and sees Drafon. He gets up and yells “where’s everyone else “Drafon yells back ‘I don’t know they went missing a while ago when we encountered the Harbinger” Then they see Toop get up out of the rubble. Toop says “where’s the harbinger? And where is my sword?” Alc hands him his sword. “I found your sword; ask Drafon if he knows were the harbinger went. “ Drafon says “I was still out when he left so I have no idea.” They go back to the headquarters to find Zarco struggling to keep the shield up. Drafon put an extra shield up. Zaroc says “thanks, I was nearly a goner.”
‘The Harbinger is gone and nowhere to be found and they are sending more forces to try to take over.” says Drafon.
The heroes have many trails ahead of them, each harder than the last. Later that day, The 4 heroes went to find the harbinger. The harbinger was nowhere to be found, which worried our protagonists.
“Where is he?” Screamed Zaroc “Calm down Zaroc, we are all worried about where he is” Just then they get a note, it reads
Dear Drafon Syphon
We have your sister, come with your group, and fight for her if you want her alive.
The Harbinger
“Will you guys come help me rescue my sister?” Drafon says “We all will” said Zaroc.
So they go and find Drafon’s sister being help by a few of the harbinger’s goons.
Toop knocks the goons out, and then gets sidelined by the harbinger. The harbinger says “my name is Victor; I am an agent of the devourer.” Drafon starts transforming into this thing. Toop Yells “NOOOO, everyone run, he gonna blast anyone in his sight.”
Everyone ran, and soon Victor was gone, and Drafon is found out cold with his sister in his arms.
Well Toop grabs Drafon and Alc helps Drafon sister up. Later, when Drafon wakes up, he is wondering what happened and where he is.
“You went into your supercharged state, and obliterated Victor.” Said toop “then Alc asked “Toop, I thought that form was just a myth, wait, how did you know what that he went supercharge?
“I used to be a mage, until I got this sword, then I became a fighter. In truth, I used to be an Elder mage.” Said Toop
Drafon then said “Wait, Toop why didn’t I know this? And what is this supercharged state.” Alc answered “It is when a person gets so angry, all of their Energy gets released from 1 blast.” Drafon then asked “Then, Where is my sister?” Just then his sister ran up to him and hugged him.
After a while, they settled down, thinking about what to do, Drafon thought “I wonder if the harbinger is truly done.” Then, it hit him. “But, how did I not evaporate?” Alc answered “We all wonder that, wait do you know where your staff is?” Drafon Panicked, Then his staff came into his hands, in its crystalized state.
After all that happened, Victor was still alive, and vengeful.
Chapter 2
After Drafon had rested, he sees Toop fighting off a few of the dragonoids goons. Drafon says “You want some help?” And then gets up and blasts the goons away. Toop says ‘well, I see your up to full strength, which is needed, because he’s back.” whose back” asked Drafon, Then it hit him, Victor was back.
“O dear, this is bad, he has to be invincible, Unless, Toop, get your old staff and hurry.” “Heh, this is my old staff” Answered Toop. His sword then transformed into staff. Drafon just stood there in awe. Toop then said “it’s an ancient magic that only the elder mages know” Then Victor burst into the room, At that second, They both went into super charge, and hit victor, But victor stood tall. He took Toop and Drafon to the dragonoids’ prison.
When they wake up they are in the same cell, Toop says “where are we? And where is my staff?” Just then his sword returned to him, being too weak to turn it into a staff, he sighed. Drafon said, “It was victor, he grabbed me just before I passed out.”
Back on Zenoa, Alc and Zaroc were looking for the two, when they got to the house they realized what had happened. “It can’t be they were so powerful.” Alc said with astonishment, Zaroc answered “They both went supercharge, but the enemy survived and took them somewhere.” After that they went to find Toop and Drafon.
Alc then wondered “how do we get to their base, and how do we get out?” Zaroc answers “well, your staff has the energy to go back and forth, except there’s 1 problem, it’ll take its full power to do so.”
Alc decided to not use any magic whilst the mission was a go.
Back in the Dragonoids’ jail, they sat full strength, but the barrier was made to block all ways of escape.
Alc and Zaroc finally get there, while they were fighting off the goons, two of the goons were going to take Toop and Drafon out of cell, but as soon as they opened the cell door, the two went into action.
They knock out the two goons and then went to go help Zaroc and Alc even the field. Zaroc and Alc were grateful, they were about to be goners. Then, a mysterious lady in a Different type of armor appeared. “Who are you people, and where is Abolix” said the lady. Drafon answered “I don’t know who this ‘Abolix’ is, but, we need to know your name.” The lady answered “My name is Alexandria, I come from Landoria, where am I?” “You are on Zenoa, Alexandria” said Drafon “Also my name is Drafon, This is Toop, and this is Alc” He pointed at each person respectively. “Also ,how did you survive the transportation” Alexandria answered “I’ve been through much worse” Just then a goon comes behind her grabs her and points a gun at her head “Don’t move or she dies” Said the goon then she jumps out of the ship.
Chapter 3
Alexandria wakes up and wonders how she got where she was and got up and sees Drafon beside her still out cold. “O dear this is bad.” With that Drafon wakes up, He says “where am I?” “About that, I have no idea, except that you jumped after me, and became unconscious on impact, I was too weak to fight them off, and so I gave up.” Said Alexandria “I have a few wounds to show for it, it’s pretty amazing that were even alive.”
Drafon there and realized, “Alexandria, We might be stuck if we don’t do something” “Well, that is true but, how are going to fend them off? We don’t have any of our weapons. All I have is this armor.” answered Alexandria.
“About that…” Before the guard can continue, Alexandria went off on him. “Why do you think I have this armor on it can’t block attacks, or anything! It’s basically just clothing nothing else!” At this point the guard slapped her. This did not go down well with Drafon, who tackled and started attacking him.
Alexandria tried to separate Drafon, but he would not stop. Another guard comes, hits Drafon which knocks him out. Alexandria is in trouble, when Toop comes from behind and knocks out the guard. He sees Drafon out on the floor, then asks Alexandria if she’s okay, then carries Drafon out. Then Alexandria feigns Zaroc and Zaroin carry Alexandria out. They didn’t get back in time, so they had camp. During the night, they take Drafon and Alexandria.
Later, Zenaria hears about this and grabs her staff and runs on the way there she meets Link, a spell-sword. He agrees to help Zenaria go save Drafon. “Thank you, Link” So they go to where Drafon I being kept. They had a bit more than they bargained for, which means they got overwhelmed.
They get put in a cell with Alexandria, who recognized Drafons sister right away. “Why are you here? And who is he?” pointing at link (who is passed out) “He is link, he helped me to try to rescue Drafon, we didn’t know they got you.” She barely says
“It’s okay, Drafon is in a few cells over; we will meet him in a minute.” Alexandria says, then the alarm rang so Alexandria told Zenaria “Watch your back, It will scan you.”
Zenaria gets escorted away from Alexandria, then gets scanned the results are
Height: 5’7
Weight: 120
Armed: No
Emotional state: Sad
Well Alexandria went through the same thing the results were
Height: 7’1
Weight: 250
Armed: no
Emotional state: Neutral
Link went through right after her.
Height: 5’2
Weight: 120
Armed: No
Emotional state: Pissed off
Drafon went in after link:
Height: 5’6
Weight: 115
Armed: No
Emotional state: Dazed
They then met in the courtyard, Drafon went and hugged his sister, they get separated, Link summoned his dark sword, Drafon summons his staff, and Alexandria just starts zapping everything. The guards scrambled to try to neutralize the targets, but they got shocked by Alexandria, which means they failed. The group headed towards the weapons locker. Well, when they get there, they are almost all out of energy, which means, that they get taken back to their cell, after being cuffed.
Well, Alexandria sat there not able to neither break the cuffs nor melt them. (She is a destructive mage, so she knows electric and fire.) The only one that was at full strength was Zenaria, but she couldn’t do much without her staff, which means she was screwed. Link isn’t strong enough to break the cuffs, so all of them weren’t in good shape. Well, when Alexandria got enough strength, she melted her cuffs, and melted the bars of her cell. She went to Drafon’ cell (He was passed out), so she decided that she would get link first to help her. She goes and gets link, which helps her get Drafon out of his cell. Zenaria was waiting when Alexandria melted her cuffs and cell bars.
“Thanks” Zenaria told Alexandria, and then Zenaria sees Drafon was passed out and asks “is he passed out, or dead?” “He’s passed out, don’t worry.” answered Alexandria.
Well, they snuck out of the jail. On the way home, they were interrupted by people who wanted them out of the town. Drafon woke up and kicked their ass, and went on to go home. When they got home, they got a BIG surprise. Victor was waiting for them (Not knowing about Alexandria, who is far more powerful.) Alexandria incinerated Victor without a second thought (because she saw the look on Drafon and his sisters faces.) Well, Drafon and the group were utterly amazed at the power she withheld at the jail. “How did you do that? That power is amazing not even me and the rest of the group can muster that much power!” Drafon Exclaimed “well, first of all, he was nothing compared to the things on my planet, do you want to come to my planet to flee this place?” Alexandria answered
“Sure, but we must bring Toop and Alc” Well, they go and get the two and teleport (which takes a lot out of Drafon and Alexandria, but they are okay, after they get some rest anyhow.) Well, while they were resting the rest of them went exploring and fell into a hole, and went out cold. Which means they are doomed, unless the villagers come, which they do. (Author here, it’s a long story why they came, that’s for another day) Well, 2 of the villagers take the 4 nimrods, and hide them away. Well, Alexandria and Drafon find out, which releases Hiru Aka Drafon in his anger form. “They Will Die. I swear upon my name” says Hiru, now during this his energy levels spike to high levels, which mean his staff becomes a Bladed staff.” Alexandria tries to plead with this new found side, but fails, although she feels the energy is spiking. She realizes this is because when anger is happening energy raises.
In the monumental moment Hiru comes out she had realized this, he has the same energy level as Abolix. “You’re not Drafon, your something else!” “HAH, I’m what am locked inside of Drafon, in what he calls Hiru, now who are you?” answered Hiru “I’m Alexandria, and You are not the Drafon that’s always out and friendly are you?” Alexandria proclaimed. “Hah, I’m his alter ego; you do know Drafon is made of pure energy right? Because, no one else would be able to ever harness the staff, because, it would electrocute them.” Answered Hiru Alexandria was speechless, for now she knew that Drafon was made of pure energy, which explains his high energy level. She decided that she can trap him in a magic vortex IF this gets out of hand. Well, they go and find Alexandria’s’ staff ‘Zarcaria’ which tends to have a magic overfill, which means a beam of red heat comes out, which is extremely useful.
Well, with this magic overfill; she has enough magical power to trap him (Hopefully). They go and find the people who did it, and Alc sensing the huge energy level coming from Drafon, tried to grab his captor to save him, but he was to late he had been killed. When the guy died, Alexandria trapped
Drafon/Hiru in a magical barrier, which breaks instantly. Toop was their last chance; he grabbed Hiru and throws him down. Hiru tries to fire a blast, but it was held back by Drafon.
Drafon comes back out and looks at the carnage Hiru caused, which was a lot, and tried to find his staff. (This wasn’t there because it was overloaded, so it went back to its smiting place.)
“Now, Alexandria, you know why I don’t let him out, he just destroys everything” Drafon explained
“Well, we need to learn if we can split you two, so that we can have numbers” Alexandria said “WHAT! You only saw a tiny part of him; you do not want to split us!!!” Drafon yelled, Well, at that moment they did happen to split, when Hiru looked different, he was confused because they were supposed to be the same person! “Heh, How are we separate?” Hiru asked “well, according to my and Alcs examinations, the amount of energy between the two sides overcharged, which ended in splitting you two. At least, that’s what we believe.” Alexandria explained with some uncertainty, and manages to get Hiru some clothes. “Well, now that we are fully clothed. We must figure out, who Hiru really is!” Well, after a few test, they figure out that Hiru really is the dark side of Drafon. They Figured out, why, after a while why he shouldn’t have come out. When they found the two girls missing Drafon feared the worse. Well, Drafon knowing Hiru the best, had to fear the worst. The girls were still out cold. For Hiru, had grabbed them in the morning, they had no idea where they were or how they got there when they woke up. Drafon also noticed Hiru was missing, which, exasperated his worry.
Chapter 4
Alexandria began to say “Do you know how w-“Just then she was interrupted by Hiru, who came through the door. “You can’t burn down the door Alexandria; it has an extreme magic shield.”
Well, while all that was happening, Drafon was looking and looking, and went to an area where he could hear Alexandria. When he found where Alexandria was being held, he kicked the door open.
Hiru was expressionless, for he had no idea how much more power Drafon had when he was in an aggravated state. He had more energy than Abolix (which Alexandria thought to be impossible). The two then started wrestling, and then Drafon finally was able to securely cuff Hiru and get him down on the ground. Then he untied the girls, and started running, “Go ahead he will be out here in a few minutes and I’m the only one who can hold him off.” Drafon continued to say. The girls started running before they heard a thud (which was Hiru hitting the floor) and ran faster.
Drafon was wrestling with Hiru, barely winning, the only reason he was winning is the rage that was fueling him. Drafon pushed Hiru down and then started to run, but was soon caught by Hiru and knocked out. Well, the girls went back after a while to look for Drafon, who was in the exact same position (which was tied up) that they were in less than an hour ago. They then got blindsided by Hiru, and were back in the situation. Toop and link go and try to find Drafon and the others, (these two are physically stronger then Drafon), and after a few hours they find them. They go in and Hiru began to say “well, I never thought you would co-“At that moment, Toop tackled him and held him down while link got the rest of them out of their predicament. Drafon was out cold though which meant they had 2 Unconscious drafons to carry. When they got back to Alexandria house, a, few other heroes that didn’t want them there.
They took out Drafon and the others from Zenoa out in 1 hit (Near death), but Alexandria stood there, and then promptly Owned them. She healed her friends and said “We must leave, and soon, But, to where be the question.” Link remembered his home world, Jupiter, and said they could go there.
They went to see that it was mostly Forest and other biome areas.
“Want to go to a city if so we shall meet my brother and sister.” They then went to go to meet Links brother, who challenged Drafon right away. He got more than he bargained for when he had to face Hiru instead of Drafon. After the fight they learned that Drafon and Hiru had switched, and gave both of them a hood, gold for Drafon and black for Hiru upon request of both of them. The hoods where made that way to identify the two from each other besides their hair. Whilst, this all was happening Zenaria actually ran off and was captured by bandits.
Zenaria what happened
Zenaria woke up to the clashing of steel and rocks breaking. Zenaria tried to grab her staff but found it gone. Zenaria checked to see if she had any weapons, she had a sword and that was it, being as weak as she was it wouldn’t do much. But then she realized a slight glow, she had a magic sword! Zenaria gets up and then walks forward until she sees and medium sized bandit girl. The bandit girl sees her and says “It’s okay… what’s your name? My name is Kelandra.” She said, and then Zenaria answered “My name is Zenaria and I was captured by you and your group. I have a group here on this planet but there is no way in heck im gonna be able to contact them.” Kelandra said “I will have to pretend to be going to execute you for trying to escape but I won’t on 1 condition, that you take me to your group as a mercenary” Zenaria responded by saying “sure, we rather do need more physicality in our group instead of magic, as me and my brosef are mages and so is Alc. The only physical people are Hiru and Toopkarther, we could use a mercenary.” So Kelandra grabbed Zenaria and tied her wrists behind her back, to make it seem real, as she did Zenaria asked “so, what will go down with this rescue mission? Also why do you have to tie my wrists behind me?”
Kelandra answered her “Because they think you will escape, and then kill you immediately, the way this will happen is that I will take you and yell she tried to escape so we gotta execute her.”
They go and try the plan, but the plan gets saw through. Kelandra get caught for treason. She and Zenaria get tied back to back and were going to get killed before Toop came and finally started fighting off some of the bandits. But after a while he also got captured because of the shear amount of bandits.
After Toop came to he started struggling, but Kelandra started to try to calm him down. “Calm down stranger… I am Kelandra, are you part of this girls group?” Toop answered “I am Toopkarther, and yes im best friends with her brother. But how are we going to get out of the predicament? “Kelandra answered Toop by asking “The way in which the pole is in the ground can be broken with enough force... but how can we even do anything against their sheer numbers.” Toop and Kelandra apply enough force to break the wooden pole and grabbed Zenaria and ran as fast as they can. “We are almost there, but watch out for Hiru the one in the Black hood, he is a dangerous individual, because he’s slightly spontaneous.” Toop said, Zenaria added “He tends to separate us by kidnaping us girls, why, I do not know. But since he is part of Drafon, Drafon always finds us and saves us. Don’t try to say you can out strength him, he’s too strong.”
With that Conversation over they reached the camp with Drafon Worried out his brain. Drafon asked Kelandra “What is your name Ma ’lady and how did you meet my sister and Toop?” Kelandra answered “I was part of the bandits who captured Zenaria but I came and left them for a better cause.”
“Someone untie my wrists PLEASE!” Zenaria pitched in, but Drafon being the big brother he is, said “Don’t, let her get out herself; she will need to learn how to with our running record we are probably wanted around in this galaxy. To, explain Kelandra, We have been wronged multiple times and have had to flee a few planets.”
Kelandra pieced it together before saying “you’re Drafon and he’s Toopkarther…” She began naming and pointing to them each. “Heh, I guess we are famous… and wanted most likely” Hiru said as Zenaria kept struggling to get out of her binds. Drafon encouraged her by saying that Hiru will secure you all night with tighter bonds then that. About 30 minutes later she finally gave up. Hiru went over and tied her to a tree. Zenaria began yelling “I won’t be able to get out of this!” over and over again. Hiru answered by saying “Want us to stuff something in that pretty little mouth of yours?” Zenaria was stunned by Hiru saying that and looked at Drafon who said “My thought exactly.”
Well Zenaria responded by whining with “Nooo man.” They shoved an apple in her face, and that was it for the night
After that night, they stayed in that specific camp for roughly a week, as Kelandra' group of bandits were not attacking them, and the hunters haven't gone yet. When they left, they looked like quite the group.
* Drafon, at this point, still stood somewhat short, at 5'6, except now he had a somewhat short and small beard, along with decently long hair.
* Zeneria, one of the few who actually cared what she looked like, had her hair cut shorter then Drafon, and made sure to find a way to keep her face well shaven.
* Toopkarthur isn't really changing at this point.
* Kelandra was still, in Drafons mind, a somewhat big brute.
* Hiru still wore his black hood, although stood at the same stature as Drafon.
* The rest are, for the most part, sitting aroud.
* How the left wasn't all to special, they got on the ship they got here on, and left, except with one more person, who was mainly used to block people.