A question about a story in progress

Postby Pazue » Sun May 01, 2016 12:28 pm

Hello.

I'm not sure this is where I'm supposed to post this, but I suppose the worst thing that could happen is that it's moved. Either way, I have a question about a story I'm writing at the moment. Over the last few days I've been working on it on and off and I've so far produced around 12 pages of content, albeit without any bondage content so far. I'm planning on adding some of it later on in the story, although I'm not sure how much of it there will be.

My question is the following: do you think it would still make sense to post a story like that on here, even though it doesn't only have bondage themes? Perhaps a story like that wouldn't be very interesting for the people perusing a forum like this, I don't know. I figured I'd ask around a bit before I just end up putting it out there, at least.

Thank you in advance for any thoughts you might have on the matter.

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby drawscore » Sun May 01, 2016 2:34 pm

Whatever floats your boat. There's only one person you gotta please, and that's you. Everybody else can go pound sand. Me, too.

Drawscore

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby Pazue » Mon May 02, 2016 1:57 am

I suppose that makes sense, yes. Even with that mindset however, I'd be more pleased myself if others would be pleased as well by reading the story. That's why I was curious to begin with.

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby drawscore » Mon May 02, 2016 5:14 am

The mindset is something like "This is what I like, and I am sharing it with you. If you like it, hey, great. If you don't, I don't care. It would please me if you liked it, but I'm not going to lose any sleep if you don't."

Drawscore

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby Pazue » Mon May 02, 2016 6:38 am

That seems like a good attitude. Hey, thanks for your thoughts, they helped me make my mind up on this.

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby spd138 » Mon May 02, 2016 7:30 am

Write want you feel like. Lots of bondage little bondage it's all good

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby spd138 » Mon May 02, 2016 7:30 am

Write want you feel like. Lots of bondage little bondage it's all good

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby Pazue » Tue May 03, 2016 8:07 am

I will do just that, thank you.

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby Domination » Tue May 03, 2016 12:48 pm

I actually enjoy stories that contain description, information and build up. :D
Woah, don't mind if I do.

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby Poloboy » Tue May 03, 2016 7:24 pm

That sounds great! I love information and background in a story. Good job for writing 12 pages! :big:

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby cellofello » Tue May 03, 2016 8:22 pm

Two suggestions:

1. Use paragraphs.

2. Proofread.

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby drawscore » Wed May 04, 2016 2:32 am

Line space between paragraphs.

Be aware that the English language is full of homonyms (words that sound alike, but are spelled differently). Know the differences.

SpellCheck is your friend. Use it. It won't catch everything, so find someone who reads, writes, and speaks English as a first language, to proofread your work.

Accept constructive criticism gracefully.

Drawscore

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby Pazue » Wed May 04, 2016 5:41 am

Hearing that people would hopefully enjoy a story like that and some of your suggestions, I feel much more inclined to finish my story and to share it as well. I will make sure to keep everything in mind so that I don't screw up too bad. I don't think I'm terrible at writing, so hopefully what I make will be readable for whoever is interested.

Thanks again for everything.

Re: A question about a story in progress

Postby Onodera » Wed May 04, 2016 4:59 pm

I think that you could at least give it a try x3! A story with some content besides bondage is also good :D! This would be cool for we know better the characters, the story, his emotions and feelings! This would make us more eager to see the character that we liked most be tied up and gagged soon (since you told that you will also write some bondage scenes too x3)! There is nothing wrong to set the place, characters and atmosphere before start to write some TUGs with the characters x3!

But the people here are right, you should write what pleases yourself :D! If you like it and think that your story have potential, don't hesite to show it to your friends and people! I am sure that a lot of people will read your story and enjoy the reading x3!
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