Vacation- camping
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by
Mr.B
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Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:36 am
You've already starting to write your story..?
Anyways, this is a great start! But you could be more specific about the characters, their appearance, and most importantly of all, the manners in which "Darren" tied up.
Re: Vacation- camping
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by
OverLooker
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Fri Jan 22, 2010 1:28 pm
Sounds like the start of a great campping trip... is there more?
"Mmmmppphhhhhhh"