Reaping the Rewards (m/f, f/f)

Postby Steak in a Tree » Tue May 09, 2017 7:25 pm

This is a continuation of sorts on a previous story, Making the Most of It. If you haven't read that yet, here it is:
viewtopic.php?f=83&t=29568 (Is there a better way to copy links? I have no idea)
For those of you that have read it, here we go.


The sounds of yelling and cheering could be heard in the air, as the game got closer to its conclusion. Kelsey's volleyball team was back in action, and looking on track to win their current game. They only needed to score one more point to take the match, giving each other looks of confidence. They stared down the members of the other team as the serve went up.

They rallied back and forth a little bit, no huge moves being done. A lob placed in the back row allowed the other team to set up, but the resulting spike was weak and flew right into a waiting teammate. She gave an excellent lob up to the front row, where Kelsey was prepared. Giving a quick look to her teammate Brittney, she volleyed it nice and high. Brittney stepped up, jumped, and smashed that ball. It crashed straight down onto the floor on the other side, right in between three opposing players.

TWEET. The ref's whistle blew, and the girls cheered. They gathered in the center of their court and had a big cheer, proud of their win. They shook hands with the opponent, and went back for some words from coach. After one more cheer, they made their way to the locker room. Kelsey and Brittney walked together, along with the third member of the winning trio, a blonde named Hannah. They gave out high fives to everyone on their team as they made their way into the locker room.

"So, you guys wanna head back to my place for a bit?" Kelsey asked, collecting her stuff and putting it in her bag.

Brittney nodded. "Yeah, I'm down." Hannah nodded as well.

"Great, let's go then," Kelsey said as she grabbed her bag, and the three of them made their way out.


The door opened and the three girls came into Kelsey's house. Victor was on the couch, dressed in a blue shirt with black jeans. He looked up from his laptop for a second, before looking back down. Kelsey got them all water bottles from the fridge, and as they drank they continued to talk about the game. They stood there talking for a few minutes before Hannah finished her water bottle.

"Where should I put this?" she asked.

"There's a bin under the sink," Kelsey told her. Turning to Brittney, she whispered. "How about we go into my room and have a celebration of our own?"

Brittney stifled a laugh. "Sounds great to me," she whispered back, and they left for Kelsey's room.

Making their way in and closing the door, they sat on Kelsey's bed. Side by side, Kelsey had no hesitation with reaching out and grabbing Brittney's butt, giving it a squeeze. Brittney jumped up and laughed, not used to Kelsey's bluntness. Though they were quite sure that they liked each other, they usually showed some restraint. Brittney carefully sat back down, watching out for another spare hand.

"I was thinking," Kelsey said, changing the topic, "that we could have a little more of last time." She gestured towards the closet, the box of ropes and such still inside.

"Well," Brittney said, biting her lip, "I'm not sure if I'm a fan of the whole 'getting tied up' thing."

"That's ok," Kelsey told her, "You can tie me up then."

Brittney looked at her. "Really?"

"Yeah of course." She stood up and grabbed the box out from the closet. "I won't force you to do something you don't want to."

Brittney smiled. "Thanks. I guess I can do this."

"That's the spirit," Kelsey told her. She leaned out and kissed Brittney right on the lips. "Now let's get started."

Brittney nodded, grabbing a length of rope from the bag. She took Kelsey's hands and brought them behind her. Trying to remember how Victor had done it, she looped the rope around Kelsey's wrists. After a couple passes, she looped it through, the memories coming back to her. She tied it off like it was nothing new.

"Wow," Kelsey said, testing the knots, "You're pretty good at this."

"Thanks," Brittney said, gathering more rope. "This is fun."


Outside, Hannah was still texting some people. Pushing send for the last time, she turned off her phone and put it down on the table. Taking a quick look around, she noticed the other two weren't around. She noticed a closed door in the hallway, presumably Kelsey's room. Hannah walked down the hall to the room. Knocking on the door, there was a slight pause. She waited for a second, before she heard "come in." She opened the door.

What she was not expecting to see was Brittney standing behind Kelsey, her hands tied behind her. Hannah had a perfect view of the ropes around Kelsey's wrists, and immediately felt herself going red. She stood at the doorway, not doing anything.

"Oh hi Hannah," Brittney finally said. "Did you want to, uh..."

She never got the chance to finish. "No, it's fine," Hannah said. "You guys do your thing, I won't interrupt."

Closing the door behind her, she went back out into the main room. She was not expecting to see that. Two of her best friends, who she had also suspected to be lovers, playing with rope? Hannah had often thought about being tied up, but never by or with other girls. It creeped her out for some reason. She grabbed her phone and sat on the chair across from Victor. Maybe he'd do it, she thought, turning on her phone.

Victor looked up again, and saw Hannah sitting across from him. He always did like her, but then again he liked everyone in a volleyball uniform. The long sleeved shirt, a dark red with the team logo on the front, fit very well and showed off Hannah's well developed chest. The black shorts did nothing to hide her toned legs, still shiny from the small amount of sweat on them. Her white socks were, well, socks. All in all, Victor liked the way she looked, and decided to talk to her.

"They're in Kelsey's room doing that tie up thing, aren't they?" Victor asked, putting his computer beside him.

Hannah looked up at him. "How did you know?" she asked.

He shrugged. "This isn't the first time," he responded. "I was the one who tied them last time."

Her eyes lit up. "Really?" she asked. "You know how to tie people?"

"Yeah, I guess," he told her. Perhaps this was his chance. "Why?"

"Nothing," Hannah said, looking back down at her phone.

Victor waited, staring at her. He had a great view of her nice breasts and toned legs, one crossed over the other.

She finally spoke up. "Could you, uh..." she trailed off.

"Yes?" Victor asked, getting a little excited himself.

"Tie... me?" Hannah finally got the words out.

Victor smiled. "Sure, if that's what you want."

Hannah paused, then nodded. "Yeah, I do. I just didn't want it to be with other girls though."

"Alright then," Victor told her. "I'll get the stuff, you don't go anywhere."

He set off to get some stuff, smiling the whole way.


Ok so for the next parts, there's obviously going to be two different things going on. So, would you guys rather I have one perspective per part, or try and jump back and forth between them like reality tv? If you decide on the first one, which group should I talk about first, the girls or Victor and Hannah? I'll leave the choices up to you.
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Re: Reaping the Rewards (m/f, f/f)

Postby Chaos846 » Sun May 14, 2017 8:20 am

First of all, great start. Now onto your question. The advantage with splitting perspectives into their own parts is that they are in general easier to follow. The disadvantage is keeping up the continuity is a bit tougher due to the fact that you have to remember what has happened in the previous parts, and you may have to back track quite a bit if you want everything to make sense. It is my preferred method to write with, but that's just me. As far as who goes first...I don't really think that matters, but again, that's just my view.

Re: Reaping the Rewards (m/f, f/f)

Postby bandit666 » Mon May 15, 2017 10:24 pm

Agree this is a great first part and you've set it up well. But just like Chaos846 I'd suggest you split it into different parts for different scenes. For example tell us all about what happens in the bedroom in the next part and then write a part about the other in the next. It will be easier to follow for the reader. And as a fellow writer Id suggest it would be easier for you to. After all you can keep track of everything and avoid continuity issues

Re: Reaping the Rewards (m/f, f/f)

Postby Sniper108 » Fri Aug 11, 2017 8:13 pm

great story