and my first writing one! constructive criticism appreciated! more coming soon...part 2 and maybe part 3
PART ONE
There are three main characters in this story:
-Eli: Lanky boy, 15yrs old
-Jared: Asian, he runs on the tack team, 15yrs old
-Mike: Somewhat short, likes video-games, doesn't go outside a lot, also 15yrs old.
They are all friends of each other
Part One: (at jared's house)
mike puts down the controller for the xbox, and says, “hey guys you can keep on playing ill be right back just gotta go to the bathroom, k?â€
eli replies enthusiatically, “yeah whateverâ€, and winks at jared. jared smiles back knowingly. When mike was out, jared and eli turn off the xbox, grab some rope and a roll of tape they had hidden under the couch, and take up position on either side of the doorway.
Mike walks into the living room and eli and jared grab him. Eli, who was holding a huge piece of duct tape, slaps it over mike's mouth, so he doesn't yell or anything. They quickly tie mike's hands behund his back and tie his legs together loosely, so he can sort of walk but would fall over if he tries to run away. They shove mike into jareds bedroom, and pin down mike. Eli sits on mikes legs and jared kneels over mikes chest. Jared ties mikes wrsists with a long rope to the corners of the bed. Mike looks over and notices that the posts have quite a bit of wear near where the rope is tied to the bed posts. Jared notices mikes looking and grins down to mike. Mike manages to force his mouth open and shouts furiously, “let me go what the f-†jared stifles him. He picks up a ball gag off of the side table and forces it into mikes mouth. Mike mmmmumphs firrously trying to say something, but jared ignores him.
“eli, are you done with his legs yet?â€
eli replies, “yeah,†and gets off him. Jared also gets off the bed and they servey their handywork. Mike looks at them and mmmumphs loudly.. jared and eli go over to mike. Jared removes mike's shoes, and his socks too. Jason starts tickling mike's feet and eli sits on mike's chest and tickles mike's armpits. Mike, who is extremely ticklish, is laughing hysterically (well a lame attempt at it with the ball gag). This continues for about 10mins, until jared and eli stop to give mike a break. They climb off of mike, and leave the room to talk about what to do next.
(Meanwhile, mike is lying there, catching his breath after being tickled so much. He realizes something very embarassing: he has a boner. He hopes that since he is wearing jeans its not so noticeable.)
Jared and Eli plan their idea and come back in. mike gets a little less woried when they don't really seems to look at or notice he has a boner, so he figures they didnt notice.
Jared ask mike a question that we already know the answer to; “do you want to stay tied up for the rest of the next three days and us tickling you more?â€
mike shook his head no.
“so do you agree to whatever we want you to until the end of the day?
Mike nodded yes.
“and you understand that if you complain or don't co-oprate you will have to be under our control for three days?
Another hesitant yes.
“and you promise not to try to escape?â€
mike nodded yes.
Jared looked at eli, and they started. The first thing that was in order was to untie mike. Eli did that while jared dug around in his closet for something.