The life of Benni - PART 8 ADDED

Postby benni » Mon Jan 28, 2013 3:31 pm

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Re: The life of Benni

Postby canuck100 » Mon Jan 28, 2013 9:05 pm

Great story! Welcome to the TUGs forum. I hope you have more stories to share with us.

Re: The life of Benni

Postby benni » Mon Jan 28, 2013 9:52 pm

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Re: The life of Benni

Postby xtc » Tue Jan 29, 2013 2:36 am

Well told.

Don't worry too much about not being a native speaker, your writing is clear and entertaining.
There are obviously a few confusions of tense (some of which might only be typos) and the strange English practice of treating some words as plural (e.g. "tights"). The only thing I woold like to point out is the every/all, many/much confusion. Even native speakers fall into the trap with number/amount.

Don't worry about it and carry on!

I've sent a pm.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: The life of Benni

Postby benni » Wed Jan 30, 2013 2:48 pm

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Re: The life of Benni

Postby sarumansauron » Thu Jan 31, 2013 5:00 pm

Great story! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: The life of Benni

Postby benni » Fri Feb 01, 2013 4:15 pm

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Re: The life of Benni

Postby bondagefreak » Sat Feb 02, 2013 2:47 pm

Hello benni.

I just thought I should drop a note to say that I am really enjoying this so far.
As xtc mentioned, do not worry about not being a native speaker, you write very well.
The story is very entertaining and quite original in fact.
I like the concept of having to suffer through something you dont like to get to something you do like :)

The characters are all quite interesting and I am hoping you will continue to flesh them out during the upcoming chapters.
Again, well done ! Please continue.
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Re: The life of Benni

Postby sarumansauron » Mon Feb 04, 2013 4:18 pm

Nice continuation! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: The life of Benni

Postby bondagefreak » Tue Feb 05, 2013 5:17 pm

Still waiting for the next chapter ! I hope you will update soon ! :)
I am very much enjoying so far.
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Re: The life of Benni

Postby benni » Tue Feb 12, 2013 11:10 am

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Re: The life of Benni

Postby bondagefreak » Wed Feb 13, 2013 11:55 am

Hello Benni !
Thank you very much for this latest chapter.
I have very much enjoyed reading it !

But Tom just asked me why I should be the only one having fun with it and mentioned that being tight up was losing control and therefore the gag was. I also should be happy it wasn't his briefs he joked.
I hope that joke will eventually carry some weight :quirk:

Tom's sock gag and the description of how much Benni hated it was also really great !

Obliged to act like a dog...wow. That is something I would defenitely hate !
Poor Benni, that must have been awful.

I find Tom to be the most interesting character.
We do not know much about the twins, only that Tom seems to enjoy his power over Benni a lot.
I am anxious to see how this develops and anxious to see how the interactions between him and Benni evolve.

I will be awaiting your next chapter with impatience.

My sole remark so far, would be the clumping of text.
Is there away way you could seperate the text into smaller paragraphs for your next chapter ?
It will make it easier to read for those of us using mobile devices and smaller screens...etc

One thing that I mentioned before but that I will mention again, I really like the fact that Benni enjoys bondage but he also has to do things he does not like in order to keep the tugs going.
This is a fun balance you are creating.

Very much enjoying this.
Please keep writing.
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Re: The life of Benni

Postby StefanSocksNtights » Wed Feb 13, 2013 11:06 pm

Wow. As you can probably tell from my username, I love this story!!

Benni, you rock. Thanks so much for writing this. It made me join the forum, so I could encourage you to continue.

I can only hope young Benni finds another boy his age who encourages his tights-wearing, and I love how you are having his brothers develop Benni's interest from really hating tights, to developing what looks like may be a pretty intense tights-fetish.

I've loved soccer socks since I was 9 years old and I "had" to wear my best friend's socks once, when I got soaked from a rain storm. He was way taller than me (I was a shrimp) and I had my first really sexual feelings of my life, pulling his too-big, bright blue soccer socks up my skinny legs.

Thanks again for sharing this story. I think one or two of my own stories would interest you (they involve no tie-up, though, so I can't post them here).

Shoot me a PM if you'd like to read something, dude!

Re: The life of Benni

Postby sarumansauron » Sat Feb 16, 2013 9:52 am

Cool continuation! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: The life of Benni

Postby mikeybound » Mon Feb 18, 2013 3:35 pm

I wanna like this. However, between their ages and relations and the lying...this can get kinda disturbing if you think about it.

Re: The life of Benni

Postby benni » Tue Apr 02, 2013 2:30 pm

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Re: The life of Benni

Postby bondagefreak » Tue Apr 02, 2013 9:21 pm

Hey ! I had a nice surprise when I signed in earlier and saw this update !
It's so nice to see you writing again.

This is getting very interesting.
The difference between Tom and Marc is becoming more and more visible.

I wonder what the next chapters have in store for young Benni.
Keep going ! :)
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Re: The life of Benni

Postby xtc » Wed Apr 03, 2013 2:14 am

Thanks for the latest update.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

More by the same author: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=22729

Re: The life of Benni

Postby mikeybound » Wed Apr 03, 2013 2:58 pm

Happy times! I've gotten the impression that the twins have a bit of a crush on him.
It seems they love binding Benni as much as he loves being bound. Do you think he'll figure out this gives him a bit of bargaining power?
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Re: The life of Benni

Postby sarumansauron » Sat Apr 06, 2013 10:10 pm

Cool continuation! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: The life of Benni

Postby benni » Tue Apr 16, 2013 1:43 pm

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Re: The life of Benni - PART 6 ADDED

Postby mikeybound » Tue Apr 16, 2013 5:02 pm

I'll be blunt. They're starting to go too far. Especially Tom. He starts whipping Benni out of nowhere and doesn't let him back out? This is too one sided, and it isn't what he wants. They're turning him into a masochist. I hope he grows a backbone and sets some terms. If the twins refuse, they can just have fun playing with each other.

Re: The life of Benni - PART 6 ADDED

Postby sarumansauron » Sat Apr 20, 2013 10:32 am

Cool continuation! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: The life of Benni - PART 6 ADDED

Postby benni » Mon May 13, 2013 2:11 am

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Re: The life of Benni - PART 7 ADDED

Postby mikeybound » Mon May 13, 2013 4:54 am

This was a good read, and it's nice that he's enjoying himself a bit and the twins are making sure he's okay. I'm still hoping for them to be called out for some of their crueler behavior. Still a bit upset about Tom not letting him back out of the spanking last time.

Re: The life of Benni - PART 7 ADDED

Postby sarumansauron » Mon May 13, 2013 4:21 pm

Cool part 7! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: The life of Benni - PART 7 ADDED

Postby NemesisPrime » Mon May 13, 2013 8:38 pm

did anyone else laugh when they read "dirty dancing clothes"?
Everyone speaks in multiple languages...But gag talk is universal and a sock in your mouth is the perfect translator!

Re: The life of Benni - PART 7 ADDED

Postby benni » Tue May 14, 2013 5:06 am

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Re: The life of Benni - PART 7 ADDED

Postby xtc » Tue May 14, 2013 7:08 am

NemesisPrime wrote:did anyone else laugh when they read "dirty dancing clothes"?


To the pure in mind . . .
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: The life of Benni - PART 7 ADDED

Postby StefanSocksNtights » Tue May 14, 2013 9:38 pm

Right on, more Benni... there can never be enough!

It's soooo cool to watch him change over time. I think if I add up the time right, it's been a couple of months of 'story time' so far... I love how his fetish for being tied up has changed him from a tights-hating, or at least very shy, boy to one who can handle being seen in full-on, complete ballet-boy gear, even including the cute, tight knee-socks over his tights.

Also really like the way you are making it so his school-friends don't bug him all the time about his tights; I like how they are starting to just ignore it and accept him... probably the same way as his brothers do; to his schoomates, Benni has become 'just that wierd boy who wears tights all the time'. It totally works for the story.

I can't wait to find what else his fetish (and his enabling brothers!) drives him too!

I do hope, though, for Benni's sake, he finds at least one other boy his own age who actually enjoys (and encourages Benni) tights.