Deleted by Author's request.
Xtc
Sealherlips wrote:Someone just had to complain.
Headmistress wrote:I didn't see the story, so I can't comment on it.
But, maybe you could try changing the storyline or rewriting the story in a different way or coming up with a different scenario?
I have done that with a few of my own pieces, so maybe it would work for your story?
Cheers.
The Wrapster wrote:Hold it!! I wasn't complaining !! In fact, I was hoping to see the lady get her just desserts11 I just wanted to share my story!!