Intruders

Postby reddwarf123 » Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:00 pm

Hi everybody! This is just a quick story, it’s completely fictional but I feel like a have to write another post after my last one went down like a fart in a crowded lift; it was rushed and just plain awful. Anyway, another day another dawn and I hope this one is a little better.
I know robber TUGs are overused but considering this is only my first fictional TUG I’m sure you can forgive me =)

Intruders!

It was a warm June afternoon and I was making my way home from school, only a few more weeks until the endless summer and the sun was beaming down overhead, brilliant! At this time I was 15 years of age, about 6ft tall and my blond hair was spiked up into a blonde mohawk (not dissimilar to David Beckham’s).
I inserted my key into the lock and unlocked the door; my parents wouldn’t be home for another 4 hours and my younger brother not for another half an hour. Yet, there was still a strange feeling in the air, the house was creaking and the air inside was stuffy, as if someone had been in here quite recently. I set my bags down and got a drink nonetheless.

I was halfway through my drink when I heard a footstep behind me, an intruder! I went to turn around but was tackled to the ground, knocking the wind out of me. “Now kid, you’re not supposed be home today but we can sort this out.” A man dressed in blue said this as he pinned me on the floor. A second man dressed in black came down the stairs “If you cooperate you won’t be harmed, we’re not murderers.” Knowing that I couldn’t fight 2 men, I stopped struggling. “That’s a good boy, now is anyone expected home soon? Tell me the truth or you’ll regret it!” One man snapped.
“Only my brother in about half an hour” I replied, a sense of danger encroaching.

The men muttered to each other, I became worried when I heard the phrase “We could tie him up”.
Sure enough, one man started going through the draws and shelves of the kitchen while the other pinned my arm behind my back. The man in back then exclaimed he had found a pile of bandages and medical tape. “Where did this come from son?” He asked me
“My brother’s in the St John’s Ambulance” I replied timidly.

I was ushered upstairs to my bedroom and they forced me onto my bed. The man in blue pulled out the medical tape and wrapped it over my feet then worked his way up my legs, over my ankles, my knees and up my thighs. When he finished, my legs from my toes to my thighs were mummified in white tape. The man in black then grabbed an exceptionally long self-adhering bandage that they use for thigh injuries and started to wrap it around my right wrist. Round my wrist, across my palm, down my arm a little then back round my wrist and palm again. He left a length trailing which he wrapped around my bedpost and secured my bonds with medical tape and bandage clips. This process was repeated for my left wrist.

I lay on my back; arms stretched above my head and peered over at my captors who seemed pleased with their handy work. One man leaned over me and gave my chest a tickle for which I spat at him and struggled against my surprisingly restrictive bonds. He slapped me across the face “Right! I was going to leave it at that, but you clearly want more!” He shouted. He went into my draw and pulled out a sock which he stuffed into my mouth and secured it with a muzzle he made by plastering the tape over my mouth, above it, below it and a few under my jaw. I MMMmmmmphed into my gag but the sock wouldn’t budge. He then wrapped a bandage over my eyes and I was plunged into darkness. “Go and get some stuff for his brother quickly, then we can have some fun with them before we go”. Hearing this, I thrashed in my bonds hoping to break free but I couldn’t slip my hands through their bandage work. Seeing this, the men laughed and departed out of the door and the nearby shop leaving me exhausted on my bed. I lay there worried about what they meant by “fun” and what trouble I had got my brother into.

I heard the door go and my brother called upstairs “Hello?”
Last edited by reddwarf123 on Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Intruders

Postby reddwarf123 » Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:01 pm

I hate leaving stuff on a cliff hanger but it's getting late over here in ye olde England
You've seen the best and now your gonna see the rest!

Re: Intruders

Postby xtc » Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:51 pm

Good start. Post when ready.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: Intruders

Postby Chase Ricks » Sun Dec 11, 2011 2:13 am

I see that you have the good talent for allowing readers to visualize your stories as they read them. I am very pleased.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Intruders

Postby boundboy » Sun Dec 11, 2011 8:25 am

great beginning!
This boy is ready to be bound with rope and gags

-boundboy

Re: Intruders

Postby reddwarf123 » Tue Dec 13, 2011 11:57 am

Hello everybody! Thanks for all the brilliant comments, that’s one of the reasons I love this website, the community is awesome :D

Anyway, this is going to be written from the perspective of my brother until otherwise stated.

Intruders Part 2

My brother is 12 years of age, blond hair and he is somewhat small for his age.

I opened the door and shouted “Hello?” no-body was home. My brother must have gone to his friend’s for a little while; this means I have the house to myself, brilliant!

I settled in front of the TV and tried to turn it on, only someone had unplugged it. I got up to plug it in when I noticed my brother’s shoes thrown across the room as if he had left without them and his customary post-school drink was in a puddle all over the kitchen. Then it struck me! He’d left in a struggle! I started to climb the stairs to his room for clues to his whereabouts when the front door swung open, two large men stood in the doorway. “Grab him!” I tried to dart away but they were too quick and I was soon getting a close up view of the carpet with the man in blue pinning me to the floor. He said to the other “Grab the stuff” and the man in black came in with 3 rolls of duct tape, a pile of ropes, 3 rolls of cling film (I think Americans call it saran wrap) and my St John’s Ambulance things! The man in black grabbed a roll of medical tape and placed a number of strips over my mouth son that I was effectively muzzled. Seeing there was nothing I could do to stop this, I stopped struggling. “Good boy, cooperate and you’ll be fine. You’re brothers all tucked up in bed and doesn’t want to be disturbed.” After this, the man in black grabbed a roll of duct tape while the other stood me on my feet, still keeping a tight hold on me. The man wrapped the duct tape multiple times around my ankles and above and below my knees. He then pulled my wrists together in front of me and wrapped duct tape around them before wrapping duct tape around my torso, pinning my arms to my body. “Sit!” said the man in black as I was shoved onto a nearby armless chair and cling film was wrapped over my whole body, round my legs, torso and back again several times. Convinced that I was strapped securely to the chair, they blindfolded me with one of my bandages and left me in my tiny prison to tend to other needs. “I’ll check on our prisoner upstairs”

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………..
This is now in my perspective, not my brother’s.

I heard the door go and my brother called upstairs “Hello?” He had beaten the intruders home! I struggled and MMMMMMMPPPPHHHHed into my gag as loud as could but he didn't hear me and began to settle down. Disheartened and exhausted I lay back and listened to hear if he came upstairs.

Nothing for a while but then I heard him take a step up the stairs but the door flew open. “Grab him!” My heart sunk as I heard the ripping of tape. I struggled again and felt my right arm come loose a little, renewed by this I tugged and yanked at it and it came out of web of bandage and medical tape. Wasting no time, I pulled off my blindfold and tried to rip my gag off but it was refusing to budge. I heard footsteps coming so I grabbed my phone from my pocket and went to video my captors for proof, it was a start. I pressed record and the door flew open, “HEY! THOUGHT YOU COULD ESCAPE! WE’LL SEE ABOUT THAT!” he then almost whispered “it’s time for some fun.” He grabbed my phone and threw it behind him. Furious at this, I reached out with my free elbow and met the back of his head perfectly as he grasped my phone. Stunned, he reeled back and looked at me with surprise, then anger. “Time for fun, you’re first” he spluttered through furious teeth and grabbed me by the neck. He then untied my left wrist and ushered me downstairs and shoved me on the floor.

I looked up at my struggling brother and felt I had somehow let him down. This was short lived and the man in black forced me to my feet and then to stand on a chair. Also standing on a chair, he tied my wrists together in front of me and with another rope, wrapped the rope vertically across the current bindings and then around a wooden beam above my head before knotting it off, suspending my hands above my head. The man in blue then untied my brother’s blindfold saying “He can watch”
You've seen the best and now your gonna see the rest!

Re: Intruders

Postby xtc » Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:45 pm

Well done so far. Please don't rush yourself.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

More by the same author: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=22729

Re: Intruders

Postby Chase Ricks » Tue Dec 13, 2011 11:22 pm

This is great.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Intruders

Postby boyscoutjm » Wed Dec 14, 2011 10:06 pm

I love this Keep Going!!!!

Re: Intruders

Postby tman » Fri Jun 21, 2013 12:07 pm

Please finish
Boys tied up can look AWESOME

Re: Intruders

Postby mikeybound » Thu Jun 27, 2013 6:54 pm

So far so good.

Re: Intruders

Postby kidnapplz » Sat Jul 13, 2013 12:59 pm

plz go on. i love it

Re: Intruders

Postby El_Llama » Sat Jul 13, 2013 4:31 pm

I think you two have broken one of the 10 commandments of the website by bumping a topic, YOU SHALL BURN IN HELL!!! I'm only joking of course xD

Thing is, this is my story on an old account that I forgot the password on and I lied about my age anyway to seem older than I actually was. I was going to finish this story, but I forgot about it after I re-joined the website with my new account and I didn't expect it to ever come up again. If you guys really want, I could write one much like this one from scratch or I could try to finish this one only 18 months later than I expected to.
As Abraham Lincoln once said: "People are often misquoted on the internet!"

Re: Intruders

Postby kidnapplz » Sun Jul 14, 2013 12:29 pm

Plz finish this, its brill. and they do the other one if you wish. BUT plz finsih.

Re: Intruders

Postby Tugsfan » Wed Jul 17, 2013 9:46 pm

Is a very good story, please more, finish it!!!
A very good roleplayer, waiting for play with you

Re: Intruders

Postby El_Llama » Thu Jul 18, 2013 2:42 am

I'm gonna try to finish this, hopefully before the end of the weekend :3
As Abraham Lincoln once said: "People are often misquoted on the internet!"

Re: Intruders

Postby Tugsfan » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:31 pm

thanks
A very good roleplayer, waiting for play with you

Re: Intruders

Postby El_Llama » Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:00 pm

Had a little bit of a hectic week, it'll be done by Sunday, that's a promise :3
As Abraham Lincoln once said: "People are often misquoted on the internet!"

Re: Intruders

Postby Tugsfan » Sat Jul 27, 2013 10:09 am

Ok, doesn't matter
A very good roleplayer, waiting for play with you