Kidnapping Jill (a different one)! Pt.1

Postby bondagefan » Tue Jan 20, 2009 1:45 am

dudue don't leave us hanging like that : :x

Re: Kidnapping Jill (a different one)! Pt.1

Postby ReaderG » Tue Jan 20, 2009 4:53 am

Please>

1. Al least finish the last sentence.

2. Add some blank space so your thoughts don't run together.

Use the edit button to fix this.

The story is good so far, don't lose us.
Gerry

Re: Kidnapping Jill (a different one)! Pt.1

Postby kidnapper » Wed Jan 21, 2009 3:14 pm

maybe you must have written :"to be continued " or at least if there is no more ,write:"guess the end of story yourself!!!"