## Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by DMC13 » Sun May 05, 2013 6:27 pm

My last tale, Blueflame, had one reader. I liked the characters too much to stop, though, so I am doing a sequel. Enjoy part one:
I woke up on a Saturday.
Getting dressed, I went downstairs to eat food.
Melody greeted me.
"Good morning!"
I nodded and poured myself coffee. Grabbing the paper, I sat down in front of the plate Doc set out full off buttered toast. Melody danced while I ate.
I wasn't thinking about how I lost my powers. That happened two years ago. Besides, high school is hard enough on fifteen year olds.
So I could say I was surprised when I got the letter.
"Mrs. Sara Brown:
We at Rafe Powerrs Science apologize for previous actions. Now that several men were released from prison, we offer this:"
Enclosed was three tickets to Florida.
Two weeks later, we enter the plane.
Sitting down, a familiar face nears me.
Grabbing a skymall catalog, I hide when Rafe comes near me.
"Sara," he says. "I'm so sorry."
I want to tell him that he shouldn't be if he did it anyway, but I don't.
An hour in, a man steps up.
Rafe.
"Ladies and Gentlemen," he says.
"This flight belongs to me."
After killing the pilots and attendants, he turns to me.
"Now, after breaking out of prison," he says.
"I've come for revenge.
He pulls a gun.
The trigger pulls.
Sitting next to me is the dead body.
WHO'S BEEN KILLED?
Find out next time. Guess in comments!
I don't care.

### Re: Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by DMC13 » Wed May 08, 2013 5:56 pm

Sorry about the rush pace. And, predictably, no comments
I don't care.

### Re: Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by Zandor » Wed May 08, 2013 9:48 pm

Melody you bastered!
You are q immortal

### Re: Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by Zandor » Thu May 09, 2013 5:34 am

Also, i was gone for awhile, so calm down. Anyway, MELODY YOU BASTARD!
You are q immortal

### Re: Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by DMC13 » Thu May 09, 2013 2:44 pm

In the seat next to me was the dead body of Doc.
"YOU BASTARD!" I shouted, as the phrase was somehow in my mind.
Trying to forget the fact that Doc had died and that my situation was less than hopeless, I lunged. I couldn't fly, as people were still watching. Melody busied herself tending to Doc's body as I tried to avoid being shot while attempting to disarm him. After a few bullets, I manage to wrestle it out of his hands. Before doing much else, though, his assistants grab me from behind.
"Now," he says, grabbing the gun.
"I've decided being shot is to good for you. So I have a better idea."
The assistants make easy work of covering my mouth with a rag covered with chloroform.
I hold my breath, but to no avail.
Soon I am knocked out, at the mercy of the one man in the world with his heart set on killing me.
I wake up.
Slowly remembering how I got myself where I was, and who I was with, I sit up.
My hands and feet are bound together tightly with white rope.
My chest is tied to an airline seat.
And I'm gagged.
Predictably, I'm facing Rafe.
"Have a nice nap, Sara?
The way he says this seems as though my name is that of a hideous disease which I have.
"Look to your right."
Not wishing to do so, I protest, but he puts his hands to my face and turns it.
To my horror, next to me is Melody. She is bound in an identical fashion.
"Now," he says, his smirk enlargening.
"I am going to kill one of you."
We both shiver.
"I think it'll be Sara," he says.
"She's already been tested too much. I say it's time for a new test subject," he says.
He unbinds me from the seat and picks me up, fireman's-carry style.
He opens the plane's door. They're close enough to the ground to not be pressurized.
Screaming to the best of my ability, I close my eyes, predicting the inevitable.
Helpless and unable to use my power, I'm thrown from the plane into a forest.
And I see the bottom of the plane.
And then just sky.
I'm falling.
Falling.
*thunk*
Yeah, you thought it was Melody, but It was Doc. I think we've got an interesting setup here, so... feel free to comment, I am 100% more likely to continue this if I get comments.
I don't care.

### Re: Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by Zandor » Thu May 09, 2013 3:20 pm

You better not have killed her.... Or ima be MAD!
You are q immortal

### Re: Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by DMC13 » Mon May 13, 2013 4:17 pm

The next bit, soon...
I don't care.

### Re: Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by DMC13 » Tue Sep 17, 2013 7:08 pm

I'm not sure on this one... should I keep going?
I don't care.

### Re: Blueflame Burning Again (Sequel to Blueflame)

Post by Zandor » Wed Sep 18, 2013 12:12 pm

Yes.
You are q immortal