## Remote Captivity (MMMM/FFF)

Post by 31acujoker » Thu Oct 09, 2014 5:12 pm

Hey everyone, this is my first attempt at a story so I hope you like it, being Australian I set it in Australia
Emma and Kim are both 21-years-old, both blonde. Emma has a very round behind and average-sized breasts (maybe C-cups?), green eyes and a fake tan, she is also fairly tall at about 6'0. Kim has a wider bottom slightly smaller breasts and brown eyes, she is approximately 5'10. The kidnappers are all 19 years old, Tom is 6'4 with brown hair, blue eyes and a 5 o'clock shadow, he's more wiry than his mates but still well built. Shae is about the same height as Kim, dark brown hair, a very strong build and handsome face. Kurt is about 5'11, with a crew cut, and an average build but very developed muscles, and Stephen is the same height as Kurt, with black medium length hair and a beard, also well built.
Ok, hope you enjoy... btw for any non-aussies TAFE is similar to college but its like a level below university
Emma didn't know where Shae was taking her, he had said it was a shortcut to the club, but she knew the way there and hadn't heard of this alley being a shortcut, still she naively trusted that he knew what he was doing. She had chosen to wear a sparkling silver dress with matching white heels, that way she could well and truly dazzle the clubs' patrons. As she thought of this she smiled and looked over at Shae, who seemed incredibly nervous, and he gave a little grin back. This wasn't like him, he was always so lively and funny back at TAFE. She grabbed his arm and he seemed to jump in horror, then quickly corrected himself.
"What's wrong, Shae?"
"I- I'm sorry, this was Kurt and Tom's idea!"
"Wha- mmmmmmph!"
A gloved hand suddenly clamped over Emma's mouth and a strong pair of hands latched onto her wrists, two men dressed in black wearing balaclavas had snuck up behind her and were now wrestling her away from Shae, whom Emma couldn't believe grabbed her ankles and helped carry her! She tried to scream but couldn't, whoever this guy was he had a firm grip, so she bit his hand
"Aah, goddamn it! I'm gonna enjoy making you suffer!"
"Shut up and put her in the bloody van!"
"HELP! Somebody He-mmmmmmph!"
The man's hand clamped once again over her lips, Emma was able to glance behind her and see the van in question, it was white, and there appeared to be... red P plates on the back? That meant her kidnappers would have to be fairly young, between 18 and 21. But as the door slid open, a new shock awaited her, it was Kim! She was lying prostrate on the floor of the van, her wrists, ankles, thighs and upper body (above and below her breasts) wrapped in silver duct tape, she was black leggings, a white singlet, and a thin grey jacket, her bright blonde hair was strewn across the floor and she had several strips of tape over her mouth and eyes.
"Go, Go, Go! Christ!"
With that the door slammed shut, and Emma was force onto the floor beside Kim, she looked up at Shae, now wearing his own balaclava, who seemed unsure of what to do, and glared at him. She was gonna get that bastard back if she ever got out of this! But at the moment that was the least of her concerns, as the gloved hand was taken off her mouth and the van started moving.
"Please, I'll give you whatever you want, I won't tell anybody just please let us go!"
"Sorry Emma, not gonna happen."
"Wait... Tom! Is that you?"
"Ah, screw it, she knows who we are anyway..."
The men all took their masks off, sure enough Tom was the man who had been hand-gagging her, Kurt had grabbed her by the arms, and Stephen was driving the van.
"What the hell are you guys doing? This isn't funny!"
"You're damn right it's not funny!"
"Look, I said I was sorry, don't you think this is a bit of an overreaction"
"Emma..."
Tom moved his face right up to hers.
"If anything, I'm underreacting."
Kurt forced her onto her belly, and Tom set about taping her wrists together, next were her ankles and thighs, in the same manner as they had done to Kim, who had been whimpering into her gag the whole time. Tom then wrapped tape above and below Emma's breasts, he then stared at them in awe as the tape caused them to bulge. Kurt slapped him on the back of the head.
"Hey! Concentrate, we'll have plenty of time for that later"
"What?! Time for what?!"
"Don't you worry just sit back and enjoy the ride."
Tom ripped several pieces of tape of the roll and stuck them to his thigh, then pulled a small white rag from his pocket
"Open your mouth"
"No! Please!"
"I Said... Open Your Mouth!"
Tom seemed incredibly aggravated, she wasn't going to be able to reason with him, so she complied. He force the rag into her mouth and then placed them firmly over her thick luscious lips.
"Mmmmmph Mmmmph Mmmmmmmmph!"
"Not quite done yet sweetheart"
He took a longer piece and covered her eyes with it, everything went dark except a small patch of light through the bottom, effectively blinding her.
Kim continued to whimper through the tape, she was terrified and still in shock from the suddenness of her abduction:
(30 minutes earlier)
Tom had texted her asking if they could meet in the TAFE carpark, he said he wanted to forgive and forget over their little incident. Very mature, she thought, she had been hoping to apologise properly, she felt so bad about what she and Emma had done. Just as she saw him in the carpark she waved, and he waved back, smiling in a friendly manner, he then took her hand as though to shake it, and that's when the other two jumped her, she was thrown into the van with lightning speed and before she knew it she was writhing on the floor, tightly bound with duct tape, and screaming through a gag unable to see a thing. Although scared she had been listening to see if she could identify her captors, and now she knew, Kurt, Tom, Shae and Stephen, all classmates in their TAFE course! Now it seemed Emma had been taken as well, and Kim was very much regretting performing that little act on Tom...
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: Remote Captivity (MMMM/FFF)

Post by LordNelson » Fri Oct 10, 2014 11:36 am

It will be interesting to see where this goes next.

### Re: Remote Captivity (MMMM/FFF)

Post by 31acujoker » Fri Oct 10, 2014 5:44 pm

Oh it gets better from here, trust me
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: Remote Captivity (MMMM/FFF)

Post by 31acujoker » Sun Oct 12, 2014 3:57 am

"Damn it"
"What's up?"
"We need gas"
"Well this'll be interesting"
Stephen had been driving for two hours, Kurt was navigating and Shae and Tom were watching their captives. They knew with such a long drive they were going to need to stop and get petrol eventually, so while Shae and Tom kept the girls quiet, Kurt would fill up and Stephen would pay, nice and easy, in and out. Well, that was the theory anyway. Kim and Emma had stopped struggling an hour ago, Tom sure knew how to do a tight tie, but the possibility of rescue seemed to reinvigorate the helpless ladies, and they started writhing around like fish out of water.
"Jesus! I thought you had them under control, Shae!"
"Stephen, just shut the hell up and go pay!"
Emma squealed through the tape over her mouth, she tried kicking, screaming, even wriggling so hard she might as well have been a rodeo bull, she wanted to go home, see her mum and little sister again, she'd done some bad things, but she didn't deserve this, Tom was genuinely scaring her, he was getting more obsessive and mad by the minute
"Tom, is all this really necessary, man?"
"I don't wanna hear it, Shae! You said yourself, mates look out for each other, I've helped you out before, now you said you'd help me out, yeah?"
...
"Yeah"
"Then will you please quiet that bitch down?"
With that, Tom covered Emma's nose, which quickly silenced her as her air supply was threatened, Kim was crying now, great hysterical sobs were erupting from behind her gag, Shae felt terrible, but then, he wasn't Tom, so he didn't have to take Tom's approach, so he knelt down next to her ear and whispered
"Hey Kim, it's ok, nobody's gonna hurt you alright? It's just a prank, we're not gonna hurt you or Emma, Tom's just really caught up in the moment"
"Rlly?"
...
"Of course, just relax, don't make any noise, ok?"
"Erkheh"
Shae always was a terrible liar, but he guessed Kim would've believed anything at that moment because she went quiet...
Kurt stepped out of the van and headed straight for the pump, he tried to look normal, but as it turned out, that's extremely hard to do when you have two girls tied up. He glanced up for a second, and by God he wished he hadn't, the girl at the opposite pump was stunning! She was fairly short, maybe no taller than 5'6, nice round breasts, golden brown hair with black streaks, wide hips, olive skin and a real baby face, probably of South American or similar descent. She took one look at him and smiled, and, unfortunately, he smiled back.
"Hi"
"Hi, how's things?"
"Ah well, you know, vans, bloody petrol guzzlers"
"I'm Alysia"
"Ku- Kyle, my name's Kyle..."
"Nice to meet you Kyle"
"Heading far?"
"Oh, just heading to Bairnsdale, my cousin's getting marr..."
...
"Everything alright"
"I thought I heard a bump in the back of your van"
"Ah, my fault, need to keep my gear properly restrained heh heh"
"Right, fair enough, ha ha"
...
"Kurt!"
Stephen had paid and was coming out of the station, Alysia was confused.
"Come on, let's hit the road!"
"Who's Kurt?"
...
"Oh my God, is there someone in there?!"
"Ah shit..."
Kurt grabbed her by the waist and silenced her with his hand, Stephen rushed to help
"What are you doing?!"
"I couldn't do anything just take her!"
"HELP! HELP! SOMEBODY!"
Kurt slid open the door, and Alysia's eyes went wide as she saw the two masked men leaning over two prostrate and helpless girls bound, gagged and blindfolded.
"PLEASE! Som- Mmmph!
By this point the station attendant had seen what was happening and grabbed a cricket bat from behind the counter, Alysia could see him coming and fought as hard as she could, all of a sudden an ear-splitting bang rang out and the man slumped to the ground, Stephen's grip on her loosened for a moment before tossing her in the van and slamming the door.
"What the hell just happened?"
"Just shut up and tape her up!"
Tom grabbed her arms, forcing her wrists behind her back, and Tom produced a fresh roll of tape. Meanwhile Kurt and Stephen were going at it in the front
"Why do you have a bloody gun, Kurt?"
"I was just gonna scare the girls with it"
"ARE YOU FOR REAL?! YOU JUST SHOT SOMEONE!!!"
"I panicked..."
"Besides, you don't put bullets in a gun unless you're planning on shooting them back out!!!"
"Look, I'm sorry"
"Do you know how much trouble we're in now?!"
Alysia was wrestling for all her worth, she tried scratching at the man's face who was holding her arms, and ended up pulling his mask off.
"Oh My God! Shae!"
"Alysia! Holy Shit, no!"
"What's going on? You know this chick?"
"Yeah, she's my ex..."
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: Remote Captivity (MMMM/FFF)

Post by 31acujoker » Sun Oct 12, 2014 4:04 am

I'd love some constructive criticism, just so I could get an idea of how i'm going, thanks
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: Remote Captivity (MMMM/FFF)

Post by SelenaGfan » Sun Oct 12, 2014 4:21 am

This is getting intense. Hope the attendant will survive. Hope the three girl do not get hurt.

### Re: Remote Captivity (MMMM/FFF)

Post by 31acujoker » Sun Oct 12, 2014 5:12 am

Glad you like it so far, I'll probably have some more up in a couple days
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

### Re: Remote Captivity (MMMM/FFF)

Post by 31acujoker » Mon Oct 13, 2014 3:50 am

Shae couldn't believe how this had turned out, what was supposed to be a harmless act of getting back at the girls had turned drastic, a man was probably dead, three innocent girls, including his ex-girlfriend were now terrified for their own lives, and two of his best mates seemed like complete strangers and seemed to be losing their minds more with each passing minute.
"Shae, put some tape on her mouth will ya?"
Alysia had stopped struggling when she saw Shae's face, by now she had been taped in the same manner as Emma and Kim, she must have been in shock, Shae thought, which was fair enough given the circumstances, but as he tore off a piece of tape and stuck it firmly over her lips, he saw the look in her eyes, and she didn't see shock or anger, or even pity, just sadness, even after all this, she felt sad for him. He quickly finished the gag and then blindfolded her like the other two, he couldn't bear looking at her eyes any longer. Stephen spoke up from the driver's seat.
"Tom, this has gotten way out of hand, mate, we should just let the girls go and turn ourselves in."
"Why the bloody hell would we do that?"
"Kurt just shot somebody Tom!"
"Which is why we can't give ourselves up! We can't exactly just waltz up to the cops and say Oh sorry officer it was just a joke, we didn't mean to shoot a man and kidnap three girls!"
...
"And if you think I'm letting these two bitches go after what they did, you are dead wrong!"
Nobody said another word for the rest of the drive, the girls were exhausted from struggling and barely moved, and Stephen and Shae were too afraid to confront Tom while Kurt was still sticking up for him, after all, Kurt was the man with the gun.
(3 hours later)
"Alright ladies, up you get!"
Alysia was woken from her sleep, only to find it was still pitch black because of the tape covering her eyes, rough hands wrapped around her stomach, and instinctively she squealed with fright, she could hear the other two girls moaning and sobbing through gags as well, and she was stood up on her feet, but after hours on the floor with her circulation cut off, she almost collapsed but her captor caught her as she fell, and then the tape around her ankles and thighs was cut with a knife, and all of a sudden the tape was ripped off her eyes, blinding her as she adjusted to the light. She looked around and saw the two blonde girls, who had also had the tape removed from their legs and eyes. and the four guys all with their masks off. She didn't know where she was, but it was Beautiful! The bush surrounded them all the way around except for a massive clearing to their left, where there was a paddock of long grass leading downhill towards more bushland, above that were several mountains, and off in the distance, one covered in snow, so, they were up in the high country, which would explain why it was cold. Behind them was a small wooden cabin with a tin roof, with a smaller extension on the side which was probably an outhouse, the cabin looked as though it could accommodate maybe 4 or 5 people, if you crammed them in.
"Shae we can't keep this girl, she's just gonna cause trouble"
"What else do you expect us to do, Tom? We're in the middle of bloody nowhere"
"Well, if we can't let her go, and we can't keep her, maybe we should just get rid of her"
"What do you mean ge-?"
...
"Tom, No"
"What other choice do we have?"
"Tom, you can't!"
"No you're right, you can"
...
"Kurt! Give me the gun!"
"Why?"
"Just give me the goddamn gun!"
Tom snatched the pistol from Kurt's hand, then thrust it into Shae's. The girls were looking more scared than ever, especially Alysia.
"Either you do it, or I will!"
Shae didn't know this guy, this wasn't his friend, it couldn't be. He took the gun and then heaved up Alysia by her left arm, Emma and Kim protested through their gags, and Alysia pleaded through hers, he went off into the trees, she struggled the whole way. Finally when he was well out of sight, he dropped her to her knees.
"Pwehs, Sheh, Pwehs!"
He was pacing back and forth, tears were now in his eyes as well as hers, he hesitated, then pulled her gag off.
"Shae, please, I know you, you're a good person! Please don't do this!"
"It's not that simple Alysia"
"I can tell the police you did all this under duress, you don't need to take the fall for this!"
"PLEASE!!! Just be quiet, please!"
"I still love you!
...
"What?"
"I still love you"
Shae knelt down to her level, looked her in the eye, then embraced her in a passionate kiss, one that they must have held for a lifetime before coming apart.
"I'm so sorry"
"NOOOO!"
He pulled the trigger...
"Sorry I didn't do this sooner"
He got his knife out and cut the tape from Alysia's wrists and torso, he had fired harmlessly into the air.
"Oh Shae thank you so much!"
"Run that way, there'll be a dirt road in about a kilometre, when you get to it, follow it to the right, it'll take you to a town"
"Aren't you coming with me?"
"I've gotta keep Tom and Kurt under control, especially Tom"
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision