## Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by bookl0ver » Fri Oct 07, 2011 9:23 am

plz comment or tell me what u think of my stories so i know wheter or not to continue what to include and if i'm good at writing
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### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by bindKelly » Fri Oct 07, 2011 12:09 pm

I think they're pretty good. You can visualize them, and each chapter ends at a point that makes sense.

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by Chase Ricks » Fri Oct 07, 2011 10:14 pm

You have a very good eye for details. I might advise you to use your imagination to come up with more original ideas.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by lonewolfandfriends » Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:52 am

i agree

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by bookl0ver » Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:57 am

who with me or him?
DIRECTIONER FOR LIFE!
NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE
Also addicted to slash. ^,^

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by lonewolfandfriends » Sun Oct 09, 2011 11:19 am

The other two guys

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by bookl0ver » Sun Oct 09, 2011 11:45 am

ooh shane?
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NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE
Also addicted to slash. ^,^

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by Chase Ricks » Sun Oct 09, 2011 4:57 pm

Yes I was one of them.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by lonewolfandfriends » Sun Oct 09, 2011 7:57 pm

That's quitE a big surprise
(no seriously)

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by Chase Ricks » Sun Oct 09, 2011 8:04 pm

> Lonewolf wrote:That's quitE a big surprise
> (no seriously)

My moods change easily and my imagination is hard to fully understand. bookl0ver is but one of a few who understands this from reading my stories and through pming.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by bookl0ver » Mon Oct 10, 2011 11:21 am

ur pms frek me out som times
DIRECTIONER FOR LIFE!
NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE
Also addicted to slash. ^,^

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by lonewolfandfriends » Mon Oct 10, 2011 7:18 pm

That would make sense.

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by Chase Ricks » Mon Oct 10, 2011 10:34 pm

> bookl0ver wrote:ur pms frek me out som times

No need to go into details about them please. They are just my way of currently brainstorming for new chapter ideas.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Plz comment/advise about my stories

Post by bookl0ver » Tue Oct 11, 2011 8:49 am

i aint telling no 1 bout them. theyd ban u from pming
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NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE
Also addicted to slash. ^,^