The weekend with Aly

Postby AndyR.B. » Wed Feb 04, 2009 4:23 pm

Sorry I haven't been on in a long time. I got grounded and had a lot of homework. But now that I'm better at writing, I want to tell the story about Aly, my neighbor who babysits me. this was just last year, when I was 9.
My mom was leaving for the weekend because of work, so she called Aly again. Aly had babysat me before, and she tied me up sometimes. Sometimes she tied me to a chair and sometimes she just tied me up but it was always for a few minits and it was always fun. 5 minits before she left Aly came in. she was wearing a red t-shirt and blue jeans and light green crocs. I was wearing a light grey t-shirt and black sweat pants and barefeet. My mom kissed me goodbye and said "See you in a couple days." then she left. when she was gone, Aly made dinner and I watched TV. after dinner, I asked Aly if she could tie me up. She said "I have a better idea. you tie me up. But if I get free, Your my prisoner for the weekend." I said "Sure!" I ran to my room and found some ropes and a bandana. Then I ran downstairs to tie up Aly. She sat down on the floor and put her hands together. I tied them together and then tied her feet. Then I tied the bandana around her mouth to gag her. The I went to watch TV. A little later, I went to get a snack and found Aly was free. She said "Come here squirt." so I did. she said "You won't be any trouble for me this weekend." I shookmy head no. She smiled and said "turn around." When I did she tied my hands with the rope really tight. Then she rolled up the bandana and put it in my mouth and tied it behind my head. She sat me on a chair and started tying my feet and said "I'm going to keep you tied up for a while ok?" I nodded and she finished tying my feet. Then she picked me up and took my to the living room where we watched more TV. Later Aly said "ok bedtime." It had been almost 2 hours she had me tied up. we went upstairs and she put me in my bed and tucked me in. "Goodnight" she said and turned out the light. I was really looking forward to tomorrow!
TO BE CONTINUED.................................

Re: The weekend with Aly

Postby kidnapper » Thu Feb 05, 2009 2:19 pm

does she tie you up these days yet?

Re: The weekend with Aly

Postby Ducttapestar » Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:16 pm

I like it! I too am a big fan of "Babysitter Ties Up Kid" stories. And you're getting better at writing stories too. Keep going!

Re: The weekend with Aly

Postby ReaderG » Fri Feb 06, 2009 4:54 am

The story and writing are quite good. One suggertion: Break up your thoughts into paragraphs so a reader can detect changes in the story line. Much easier on the eyes :shock: ,
Gerry

Re: The weekend with Aly

Postby AndyR.B. » Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:14 pm

Sorry about that. I was a little tied up all weekend. I'll write that next.

So when i woke up the next moring I tried to strech but I forgot I was tied up. So i yelled for Aly then I remembered I was gagged to. So Aly came in and said "You sleep like a rock squirt. Ready for breakfast?" I noded and she took me down stairs. She gave me Lucky Charms and she took my gag out to feed me. When i was done she untied me and told me to use the bathroom. When I cvame out, She had more rope and she told me to sit on a chair. Then she tied my hands again and tied my feet. Then she gagged me with the bandana and tied me to the chair. I spent the rest of the day like that and she fed me lunch and dinner. When I went to bed she untied me and said "I had fun, how bout you?" "Yeah" I said. "Lets play again sometime."
"next time maybe it can be a biger game." But the next day she was gone and we didn't play any real big games for a long time. She tied me up a few times but It was last weekend that we played a BIG one!

Re: The weekend with Aly

Postby kidnapper » Sun Feb 08, 2009 9:20 pm

AndyR.B. wrote:"next time maybe it can be a biger game." But the next day she was gone and we didn't play any real big games for a long time. She tied me up a few times but It was last weekend that we played a BIG one!

sorry man!