The Soccer Divide

Postby Scottstud94 » Wed Nov 10, 2010 2:51 pm

I've decided to begin a story based on a soccer team who after a crushing loss and end of their season divides into 2 groups and begins a series of unfriendly TUGS. Although I am not sure how its gonna turn out, its gonna be long, interesting, and full of TUGS. So enjoy it for the long haul hopefully! Once I get it started it will get less confusing,

Characters (Not that its important now). I have found with long stories the worst part of it is so many characters and the challenges posed in trying to remember them. So I will do my best to make each of them memorable. All characters are 16, 15, or 14.

Quick points about the team, and players.
Offense
Derek - Ethan's twin brother. Offensive leader in goals.
Jason - Rich prep, known for bragging alot.
Martin - Tough guy of the team.
John - Straight A student, poor social skills.
Dylan - Quiet, nostalgic teammate who truly hates Zach.

Defense
Ethan - Derek's twin brother, defensive leader.
Zach - Engaged in rivalry with Dylan, known as a typical bully.
Andrew - Smallest guy on the team, extreme OCD.
Tyler - One of only 2 who on the team who can drive.
Josh - Closet gay, very shy but into TUGS.

Re: The Soccer Divide

Postby Jay Feely » Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:16 pm

This sounds like it would be a good story. Just let your imagination flow.
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Re: The Soccer Divide

Postby tiedup101 » Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:58 pm

Very good. Like the idea very much. Love to see soccer intergrate into the story...*ahem socks ahem* haha. Can't wait
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Re: The Soccer Divide

Postby Scottstud94 » Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:54 pm

Chapter 1: The Ends of All Means
Locker room
All characters wearing soccer uniform consisting of red jersey, white shorts, red socks, and cleats.

"Anyone want to explain to me how we lost this freakin game??" Derek, the offensive leader of the team said.
"I scored 2 goals in that game and our neurons on defense blow the game and our entire season I've worked all year for!

"Shut up Derek it wasn't our fault," said Derek's twin brother Ethan whos blond hair was soaked with sweat.
Derek: Yeh it was you blew it for us! I mean cmon, you guys are pathetic!

"Look guys lets not fight," interjected Josh, the poor closet gay, who had seemingly been humiliated all but always.

Derek: Shut up gaywad. Look its the defenses fault we lo...."

A flying punch came in from an infuriated Josh and soon an all out brawl started. You were either on Ethan's side or Derek's. Anyone in the middle got slaughtered thats how it was. Double teams ensued, a war was going on. Dylan and Zach were two sworn enemies. Dylan and his jet black hair went right at Zach crushing him into the lockers. The two sides which had been hating on eachother and arguing all year erupted.

Soon it calmed, blood was shed, people were hurt, but nobody seriously injured.
After a long dead silence, and sobs of frustrations, Ethan stood up and spoke somberly.

"Alright, whoever's with me, come over here. If you aren't go with Derek."

Soon 5 boys joined each side in the line-up everyone expected.

"There's got to be a way to settle this fairly. Where no one is hurt and we can all take out this anger." Ethan said quietly.

After much negotiations, both sides agreed to a sort of war game. Anything goes, whoever captures all the other sides players wins. You could capture them by any means and when captured you could torture them to whatever extent. To Josh the only gay one on the team and into TUGS it was a dream come true.

"For 5 whole days?" Andrew said, his severe OCD impaired his life. Goodness whenever he was goalie and stopped a shot he had to run around the net an odd number of time in increments on 7. Jesus.

"Yes." Zach said, and if we capture another teams player we can do almost whatever we want? He eyed Dylan with a big smile.

"Alright, then" Derek said. Our base will be the park and picnic Pavilion, your base will be the Crypt and Graveyards.

We begin tonight, after all thanksgiving break is this whole week. Lets go boys. And with that Derek and his guys walked out, leaving the defense in shock.


In Martin's van the 5 boys collaborated their plans. Beginning to think of torture materials.
Derek said, "Boys, this is when we get revenge on the group that lost us our season! When we expose Ethan and make him suffer! This is why we live!"

"Yeah!!!" All the boys screamed in unison.


In the locker room, Ethan gave a similar speech, and all of a sudden they were piling into Tyler's van, on their way to the supermarket, there was a lot of materials to buy. The hatred had escalated and now this game was seriously going down.

"Wait a minute guys...., wheres Andrew?" Ethan said. Soon the Defense guys knew this game had started a little earlier than expected.

"Tyler go run in and quick get some duct tape. We gotta secure this kid down then we can buy the rest of the supplies." Derek said as he and the other 3 boys held Andrew down tightly in the back seat. Derek kept his hand firmly over poor Andrews small mouth. His hands and feet held down by the other two boys.

Tyler quickly ran to get duct tape. "Jason, I have an idea, pull of his cleats and take the shoelaces out of them; we can tie him up temporarily until Tyler gets back with the tape. Take off the socks too." Andrew mmppphhheeedd into his handgag.

Andrew's cleats were removed, as were his socks. Soon he found his hands bound behind his back, his barefeet tied together, one of his socks tied over his eyes, and the other tied around his mouth muffling his cries.

"Back with the tape guys," Tyler said. Make sure he cant get out and we'll lock him in the pavilion tonight while we set up.

The boys went over Andrew's bindings with tape to keep him secure and also hogtied him. "Sorry Andrew, I actually like you a bit," Jason said, "but we got to do this." As they arrived to the pavilion they had to set up a defense fast, or this war could get out of hand quickly.

Meanwhile those on defense were already a man short, they arrived to their headquarters in the graveyard. Time for war.

Re: The Soccer Divide

Postby fratboydanny » Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:40 pm

Nice story...i'm looking forward to its continuation. thanks!

Re: The Soccer Divide

Postby tiedup101 » Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:47 pm

Love the detail. Sweaty blond hair, socks, cleats, etc. Can't wait for a continuation!!!!!
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Re: The Soccer Divide

Postby snobound » Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:15 pm

I agree fully with danny and 101! Great start... eagerly anticipating the next installment.
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Re: The Soccer Divide

Postby Scottstud94 » Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:12 pm

Sorry guys, I had a huge addition to the story but I got logged off randomly and all of it disappeared. I am ticked beyond belief.

Ill try to get over it and rewrite it ASAP but Im pretty mad. In the mean-time if you guys could give me ideas on what you'd like to see tell me! I know whats gonna happen next chapter. Its just rewriting things is a pain.

Re: The Soccer Divide

Postby xtc » Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:10 am

At the risk of repeating what has been said elsewhere, why not write it in, say, Word and paste it in? Then you would be less likely to lose your work.

xtc
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