## My first story ideas, may need some input

Post by wololololo bondager » Fri Mar 31, 2017 4:25 pm

Hey there, call me Sam, really fresh and green to this site, as I had just joined 5 minutes before typing this topic. And i typed this from a phone, so just don't slay me yet guys
Now I want to make my first story post in this site. I'm by preference a dominant in the bondage world. Here are a few story ideas i got
A family of mom, daughter and younger son got tied up. The son must endure the humiliation of helplessly watch the women of his life got groped and humiliated . The bad guy can either be an escaped convict or the mom's ex bf
A small group of vacationing students encounter a stranded boat, only later to encounter that the boat have a survivor- a bondage loving pirate. The students can be casted by a variety of ethnicity and background(i dunno if there will be a submissive male student here tho)
A beautiful school teacher got kidnapped by a bunch of brats from her home and spent a day in bondage.
Other questions:
Can I post any pictures of females in the forum for the story's cast? I will not post nude tho.
I know that the most probable legal age in this site is 18. But are there any limits by scene? Like no hitting or spanking or no incest?

### Re: My first story ideas, may need some input

Post by Jason Toddman » Fri Mar 31, 2017 5:20 pm

Hello WB; welcome to the site.
As doms here are heavily outnumbered by subs last I knew, you may possibly be very popular here in short order.
I moved this first post to TUGs Talk as being a more appropriate venue for this topic; I hope you do not mind.
Addressing your ideas, as long as the following conditions are met, you should be okay. If in doubt, show either me or xtc a draft of your story for approval before submitting it; that way you can avoid any and all problems.
You mainly need to be concerned about the following:
all characters must be either all above 18, all below 18, or no more than about three or four years apart in age from youngest to oldest if the youngest is under 18 (or two to three years if the oldest is over 18). So for instance no interactions between someone in their mid-teens with someone over 21.
Hitting, spanking, and even incest (if consensual) is permitted provided everyone is over 18; the first two are okay at any age however - within reason.
No rapes; role-playing a rape when actually consensual is however probably okay as long as this is depicted as such right from the start.
It used to be that your third idea about the teacher tied by brats would be accepted here; but now (even though we still have some in archives) this is much less certain. Zanev, the site owner, would have to determine the suitability of that. However, if kept to something you could see portrayed on a TV show (or a Dennis the Menace comic strip) with no sexual contacts and only kid-level sexual innuendo, it probably would probably be all right here as well.
It's good you don't want to depict nude women; that wouldn't fly here as we have under-aged members. Photos or drawings alike of bound people are quite acceptable provided they do not show genitals, bare breasts (on women), or anyone under 18 in a sexually provocative way. Just use common sense, or run such pictures past xtc or me in a PM first... you won't get in trouble for that unless you deliberately troll us or something.
If you need any other questions answered just ask away.
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### Re: My first story ideas, may need some input

Post by drawscore » Fri Mar 31, 2017 8:36 pm

My best suggestion, is "Write about what you know." The theory, is that if you write about what you don't know, you write a lousy story, and it gets roundly panned.
For Instance, I know about the games I played as a boy. That's what I write about, and involving a cast of characters mostly between 10 and 14, with an occasional 15 year old tossed in. No sex, no nudity, just kids playing games. Because it IS what I know, I like to think I do a reasonably good job of it. However, I have given it up, as the stories get a lot of hits, but little or no feedback. That's discouraging, and I know several other people on the board who have written, who feel the same way. But to see one, see viewtopic.php?f=37&t=11860&p=82411&hilit=Doug+Moves+In#p82411 ...
Keep in mind that writing is an acquired skill. Supposedly, the more you do, the better you get. In most cases it's true, but I have known some who wee no-talent hacks when they started, and, after several stories, are still no-talent hacks,
Other hints? SpellCheck is your friend. Use it. It won't catch everything, but it will catch about 95% of misspelled words. Still, keep in mind the poem "Spellbound,:
"I have a spelling checker
It came with my PC
It plainly marques for my revue
Mistakes eye cannot sea.
I've run this small poem threw it
And I'm sure your please too no
Its letter perfect in it's weigh.
My checker tolled me sew.
Run that through SpellCheck, and it comes out clean, because all the words are spelled correctly. So, get a trusted friend who knows the language, to proofread your copy. He/she can catch what SpellCheck misses.
And line space between paragraphs!
Drawscore
Last edited by drawscore on Sat Apr 01, 2017 9:28 am, edited 5 times in total.

### Re: My first story ideas, may need some input

Post by wololololo bondager » Fri Mar 31, 2017 11:22 pm

The pictures I'm talking about are pictures of girls i found online, since it's probably from social medias, no nudity is present, but i do concerned about said picture owner's actual ages tho. I'll try to write the first idea first, keep in touch with that

### Re: My first story ideas, may need some input

Post by wololololo bondager » Sat Apr 01, 2017 4:20 am

viewtopic.php?f=84&t=29411&p=228075#p228075
My first story, from a recycled old story
Comments are welcome(and great help if you can figure out the girl)

### Re: My first story ideas, may need some input

Post by drawscore » Sat Apr 01, 2017 9:30 am

In my post above, the address to one of my stories was incorrect. That error has been corrected.
Drawscore

### Re: My first story ideas, may need some input

Post by Kidnapable82 » Sun Apr 16, 2017 10:22 pm

Hi, wololololo bondager:
I just wanted to add some VERY FRIENDLY advice (Looks like Jason covered everything):
While using a spellchecker is very important, at least eight times out of ten, you will get some type of comment about bad grammar. Not to be a "Debbie Downer", but it's happened to me. My bondage photos were even critiqued because "kidnapable" watermark was incorrect and should contain two p's (when this has been a username I have used for years on other sites). Type the best you can, proofread, and check for grammar. I stopped writing stories, because there was always that one person that would catch some type of error. I've also had a few people correct my entire story and felt like I was in English class. Don't let it get you down, just keep writing. There are usually way more good comments rather than the bad ones.
Wishing you all the best!
Den
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