The Wrong Person

Postby Jay Feely » Mon Aug 09, 2010 12:28 pm

18 year old Jack is an average boy in high school as a senior. He is the lead quarterback of the school football team. He is very muscular, has a six-pack, and is strong. He had dyed his hair red, and has green eyes. On a winter night, he is remembered for scoring the winning touchdown in a 21-14 victory over the rival school. He had caught the ball just as time expired for the win. At the field, he is lifted into the air by his fellow team members, as he raises the trophy high and proud. They are district champions for the first time. After the game, he gets a phone call that causes him to say goodbye to the team. None of his teammates know who the caller is because Jack did not say. He did seem a little nervous and frightened, but no one question it because they assumed it was nothing serious.

As Jack is walking along the path to the parking lot, a man around the age of 18 is looking at him without him knowing. He has a binocular and enhances the image to a close up of Jack. Another person, a female who works at a beauty parlor, age 19, walks over to him as Jack is about to enter his car, a Jeep Cherokee that he had just been given by his father because Jack got straight A's for the first time in his life. The girls asks Jake if he could offer her a ride to her house. Her explanation is that her car broke down due to flat tires, and she is in a rush to get home. Jake says okay, but as he fumbled for his car keys, he is hit from behind by a blunt object. He falls down, and loses his vision before losing consciousness. The female takes Jake's hands, while the men who was stalking Jake takes his feet. The man and women puts Jake in the trunk of their Ford 450 pick-up truck. It was late and no one saw anything as the truck speeds off in the distance.

The truck heads up the ramp leading to the highway, and gets off at Delta Road in Austin, Texas. It passes by several roads before it makes a right turn at a cemetery and makes a stop at a shack in the middle of the area. The passenger gets out some rope from the compartment in the front of the truck, and pops the trunk. She sees Jake still knocked out from the suprise attack. The men gets out of the truck, and grabs the boy's legs and takes him inside the shack. There is bed in the far right corner of the room. The shack has devices hanging from the ceiling from tools to an array of feathers, bathroom equipment, and other items. The men and women ties Jake to the bed with his hands and feet at the railings. They ponder over themselves about what to do with the boy when he awakes. The women seem confused by the appaearance of the boy, and questions if they have the right person. The men assures her that he was the one who rattled her out. She believes him, and carries out her business of putting a gag and blindfold on the boy. When Jake awoke from his slumber, he tries to move, but finds that his hands and feet is bound to the bed. He hollers for help, but it only attracts the attention of the people who had kidnapped him.

"Hello Jake"
"Who is this?"
"I'm the person who you told on me for cheating and got me expelled."
"You have the wrong person, just let me go please!"
"I know it was you by my boyfriend who caught you in the act"
"No mamn, you have it all wrong. I do not even know you"
"That is a lie"

Did Jake really rattled her out for cheating, or is he innocent and the women has the wrong person?
What will the women do to him?

To Be Continued
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Wrong Person

Postby kidnapplz » Mon Aug 09, 2010 4:39 pm

brill story keep it up. Can't wait for more

Re: The Wrong Person

Postby Jay Feely » Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:41 am

Jake was confused of the accusation that was made by the unknow female and male. He never turned anyone in for cheating, but his memory was short so maybe he was involved some how. His inability to see his captors made him more tense. He wished he had walked back with his football teammates because they could have protected him. However, none of this mattered anymore as he was trapped and secured in the hands of his kidnappers.

The female asked him again if he rattled her out for cheating. He gave the same response which infruirated the girl to the edge. She left Jake for a brief period to remove a pair of scissors from the wall. She kept one pair to herself and gave the other to the men. The men procedded to cut Jake's favorite football jersey much to his dismay. The other attacker removed his shoes and socks, and in the process of doing so, he accidentally ran a finger up Jake's feet. The response stunned the male and female as Jake giggled.

Ticklish are we Jake? said the female
No mamn, please don't touch my feet, as he wimpered like a baby.

Jake was in fact very ticklish, but only on his feet. He used to endure frequent tickling sessions from the Jocks, as they would hold him down and tickle his feet for hours before and after every game. He would be unable to escape the fingers of his players as they tickled him without any mercy. He was forced into submission and that was the secret to his success on the football field. He expected it but he realized that he must be tickled to get better, but in this situation, aspects has changed. He knew that his tormentors would give him a tickling of a lifetime, so he would be suffered to the point where he would be forced to confess to his deed despite him not committing it.

At this point, the female ran her fingers up Jake's left foot. He was laughing hysterially as his foot was being tickled. You can see the expression on his face that he was not enjoying the tickling. After five minutes, the female ceased the tickling. Jake begged to be released, but the female did not say a word as she took pleasure in tickling his feet. She then attacked Jake's archway and this induced a mild response as if he was a pre teenager. The more he laughed, the more sinister the tickling was. She used all five of her fingers on Jake's toes, scratching in between his adorable and cute toes. As Jake lay there laughing, he wished that he was dreaming but it was real for him and it would only intentify. He could easily just give in and tell her that he was the one who told the teacher that she cheated, but he was strong minded and could not take responsibility for something he did not do. Jake was the female's tickle toy, and the female became relentless. She let Jake catch a breather after twenty minutes of non-stop tickling. She went back to the wall, and removed the feather. This feather was softer and it would be perfect for tickling. She wondered if Jake's right foot was more ticklish then his left foot. She handed the feather to the male, as she left the room. The male was more devious than the female. He feathered Jake's right foot and immediately, Jake exploded with laughter and tears flowed down his checks. This tickling was far worse then he ever experienced. The men used the feather to explore Jake's tops and bottoms of his feet. Jake tried to hold in the laughter, but it soon was emitted out from him.

As the men tickled Jake's feet, the women was outside thinking of more ways to torture her prisoner. She then had an idea and returned to the shack. She ordered the men to stop tickling Jake. Jake was relieved but if he could see what was happening, he would have returned to a state of shock and dispair. The women opened a container of brine, and using her hands, she slapped it on Jake's defenseless feet. Jake felt something cold on his feet, but could not identify the substance. The women tried to tickle Jake's armpits, belly, and side, but when she got no response, she decided on a clever idea. She got out a container of itching powder, and dumped it all on Jake's torso covering him with the substance. The itching powder made Jake suffer more and he could not handle it, but shortly after applying the itching powder, the women and men left the shack but kept the door wide open. They got in their pick-up truck and drove away, and as Jake heard this, he was sad and frightened. Suddenly, he felt his feet being licked by an unknown animal, but he soon realized that it was goats, and he screamed above his vocal chords. He was being tickled crazy by these goats, and the itching made it worse. It was going to be a long night for him as the brine was layered six times enough for 12 hours of non-stop licking and to make matter worse, his captors was long gone, and he could not free himself.

Will Jake be able to escape this nightmare?

To Be Continued
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Wrong Person

Postby sarumansauron » Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:42 am

Very Good! Thanks! More please!

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I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: The Wrong Person

Postby Jay Feely » Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:54 am

Jake was being tortured for 12 hours straight with no sign of stoppage. When he survived the previous torture, his captors returned with a chain saw, and Jake realized that they planned to kill them. The saw was activated and it was hold in the air above his body. Jake was not going to die, but the fact that his captors made him think he was going to die was torture.

Jake's gag was destroyed during the process of the chainsaw effect. Rather then apply the gag again, his captors let him rest in peace. They left the room, bolted the door, and kept him in there. Jake did not know what was going to happen next. Suddenly, he heard gunshots outside the barn, and his door was burned down. There stood in the doorway was the police, as they helped him get released from the bed. As the last wrist and ankle restraint was removed, Jake's nightmare was over. The police said that his captors was Mitchel and Nathan, two of the baddest people around in the city. They had kidnapped 12 boys and girls, and tortured them before burying them in an unmarked grave. Jake was lucky because the chainsaw alerted the cops to his location. The police also said that the captors told lies to keep their prisoner.

Jake was given a ride back to his house, where his crying mother and brothers awaited him. It had been three days since he was kidnapped, but Jake was in safe hands. His captors was sentenced to life in prison for their role. Jake may have survived, but he had plenty of stories of tell at his school.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: The Wrong Person

Postby sarumansauron » Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:36 pm

Very good!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: The Wrong Person

Postby Male shortstied » Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:12 pm

Awesome story, excellent ending: this is the kind of ending I am talking about: chloroformmeplease.