Brother Bond

Postby JackBrentonSucka » Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:23 pm

Thirteen year old Anthony Sinicrope was enjoying his typical day. Hanging with friends, skateboarding, writing, the works. Currently, Anthony was writing a story of his, while listening to his favorite band-Black Veil Brides. Anthony had a group of super close friends, but he was not-by any means-considered to be popular, unlike his brother, Jordan.

Seventeen year old Jordan Sinicrope was in the middle of the dance floor at his best friend's party. He was busting like a real professional, mainly because he spent so much time watching MTV. In so many ways, Jordan and Anthony were different. Taste in bands, favorite subjects, movies...they didn't agree on hardly anything.

Drew Evans and his friends Jared, Paul, and Brandon were planning everything. The Sinicrope's parents were out of country for the time being, and they planned to set up the ransom then. They knew Anthony was a bit of a loner, with only a couple friends, so they thought they chose the right people-until they learned about Jordan. They knew Anthony's older brother was a social climbing party animal, and that's where their plan hit a snag. It had been Paul who came up with the idea...

"Land it, Anthony!" August Kramers yelled to Anthony as he was in the middle of a laser flip. The outburst made Anthony lose his concentration, so he landed on the concrete.

"You're such a help!" Anthony yelled to August as he got up. August shrugged.

"Sorry, bro." He said, handing Anthony his skateboard. Anthony rubbed the back of his head, which he had hurt pretty badly.

"Whatever. Listen, man, I'll text you later. I really gotta go." He said.

"Alright, you better miss me Sinicrope!" August warned, not serious at all.

"I'll try my hardest." Anthony joked, and started the walk back to his house-more like mansion, although. As he walked, he didn't notice the black van with no windows trailing him. Eventually, he did notice. After about five minutes of the van's constant trailing, Anthony freaked out and broke into a sprint. The van screeched to a stop, and Brandon jumped out with an object Anthony didn't recognize. He continued to run, until he tripped on a crack in the sidewalk. Ben pulled Anthony up by his arm, and stabbed something into his shoulder. Anthony had no idea what it was, but he started to feel very light headed, and he eventually passed out.

You guys want a part two? I think I know where this story is going...
Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened

Re: Brother Bond

Postby xtc » Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:34 pm

Yes, please continue - but PLEASE don't keep asking.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: Brother Bond

Postby fratboydanny » Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:54 pm

Please!

Gone!

Postby MattyH » Mon Jun 13, 2011 4:55 pm

Gone!
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Re: Brother Bond

Postby JJTauzell » Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:15 pm

Wow, you would go there with Black Veil Brides. You better continue!
I'm me, can you compete with that?

Re: Brother Bond

Postby sarumansauron » Tue Jun 14, 2011 11:35 am

Nice start! I badly can wait to read the next part. Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Brother Bond

Postby JackBrentonSucka » Thu Jun 30, 2011 3:38 pm

JJTauzell wrote:Wow, you would go there with Black Veil Brides. You better continue!

Ahhhh, whatever John.
I will finish it, but I'm currently caught up in lots of things-but part two will come!
Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened