I like the story so far --- there are a few spelling issues but other then that it was interesting.
I do have a few thoughts though ---
Question One , why is the title "Mom and I were captured burglars 1& 2" if you are the mother in the story? Shouldn't it be "My son and I were captured burglars 1& 2" or "Mother and son were captured burglars 1& 2"
Question two , why would you dress up like a burglar if you were supposed to be watching the house anyway you could have dressed normally?
Comment , your friend asked you to watch the house while she was gone but then she never left cause she knew you would steal her stuff?
Comment , She already owned a ballgag which makes me wonder what she used it for before this ---
