Hi i'm chris im a dutch boy and have just joined this site.
this story is about the first time my friends tied me up all names exept my own are changed
This is my first time writing a story and since English is not my first language it wont be the best piece of writing you will ever see.
part 1
first i describe myself and my friends.
I'm Chris(duh) im short skinny i have short blond hair and green eyes most girls call me cute but since im a guy i cant really confirm that. i have skipped a grade and because of that im a bit younger/weaker then then my friends so if they need a victim its always me.
Edward(13) is longer then me bu still short and has brown hair that come to his shoulders his cousin Oscar(14 has black hair and is athletically build.
My girlfriend Amy(13) has is slim and has long blond hair
i will now begin with the story
i was 12 when this happened me and my friends where at my place when Edward found some rope and asked why i had them
my brother has tied me up with them once i said a little embarrassed.
And you let your brother do that to you Oscar replied.
n no i but my brother is twice my size and i even have trouble lifting my school back so i cant do anything about it.
Amy quickly laught and told edward to follow her which he did.
the stayed away for then minutes so Oscar and i begun watching tv when they came back i saw that they had gathered more rope and a role of duck tape.
What are you going to do with that i asked worried.
duh where going to kidnap you kiddo.
i immediately runned away but edward tackled me to the ground and pinned me down you tie his feet he said to amy.
Edward tied my hands behind my back and Amy tied my feet together . in a few moments i could not move anymore.
LEMME GOOOO! i yelled at them .
not a chance kiddo your our litle hostage .
at that moment my brother came home so i tried to scream for help.
TOM HELP IVE BEEN KIDNAMMMPPHHH before i could finish oscar had handgagged me . sorry Chris but i want some fun too so im joining them.
amy came with the roll of duck tape and gagged me with multiple pieces of tape.
Edward wanted to gag me with sock first but was punched when suggesting it because Oscar and Amy found it to dangerous.
MMMPPHHH! I screamed at them .
owh isn't he cute this way Amy said.
my brother heard so he came upstairs at first he was a little surprised to see me that way but then he began laughing .
you can breath Right he asked me .
i nodded okey so there nothing for me to worry about he said and left.
my friends now begon to wonder what they would do with me
i tell the rest latter like i said before its not the best piece of writing so i would appreciate some advise so i can write a little better.