ABBY GOES TO CAMP KIDNAPPED

Postby VictimNumber1 » Thu Sep 06, 2012 3:51 am

Great story, you have a particular writing style that keeps me wanting more and sorry for not commenting earlier. As for some constructive feedback, I'm a bit of a spelling guy and I just wanted to point out one thing. Throughout the story you spelt haven't like have"nt. No big deal and great story, just wanted to point that out :D
I just know they're going to tie me up tonight,
They're bound to.

Re: ABBY GOES TO CAMP KIDNAPPED

Postby randomentity » Fri Sep 07, 2012 4:46 pm

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Re: ABBY GOES TO CAMP KIDNAPPED

Postby randomentity » Sun Sep 09, 2012 12:50 am

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Re: ABBY GOES TO CAMP KIDNAPPED

Postby Zandor » Wed Feb 20, 2013 2:51 pm

Loved it.
You are q immortal