Annie's desperation (vote on stories progression)

Postby Tiemeandkissmeplease » Thu Mar 02, 2017 6:27 pm

Hey guys, please be kind as this is my first time writing on here.
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Chapter 1: Her name was Annie

Her name was Annie, she had said. I had picked her up at a classy bar in the city. I had chosen a bar so far from my apartment because I had an idea in my mind with reference to what I wanted to do with a girl from this peticular establishment.

Annie was wearing a yellow and gold dress, with a wavy pattern of black spots running along the bottom trim. She had blond hair with chilling blue eyes, the kind a guy could get lost in for hours at a time.

We had flirted at the bar and I had scooped her up and gotten her to come home with me.

We were driving back to my apartment in my car when I saw Annie squirm.

"What wrong?" I asked faining concern while smiling on the inside; already knowing the answer.

"Ummmmm.... it's nothing," she said blushing adorably.

"It's ok. You can tell me," I said. "I won't judge."

"Ok," she chuckled nervously like a school girl talking to her crush. Still blushing she comfirmed what I had already known to be true. "I have to go to the bathroom," she said in an embarrassed tone.

"One or two?" I asked calmly, trying to contain the excitement that was brewing inside of me.

She looked at me agasted. "That's not the kind of question you should ask a lady, Tom!" She said.

"Just curious," I replied sheepishly.

"Well if you must know I really have to take a number...
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Ok sorry that this chapter was so short guys. Please tell me what you think and vote for what form of relief Annie needs.
I want her to tackle me, holding me down while she ties my wrists together behind my back. She tells me she loves it when boys struggle, but now I'm at her mercy. Finally she silences my protests by pressing her lips to mine.

Re: Annie's desperation (vote on stories progression)

Postby BoundJana » Fri Mar 03, 2017 12:02 am

Quite short, but good describtion on everything. Maybe try to describe yourself aswell.
What are you looking at? Finally put a gag in my mouth and play with me!

Re: Annie's desperation (vote on stories progression)

Postby Tiemeandkissmeplease » Fri Mar 03, 2017 12:20 pm

I will, thank you for the input
I want her to tackle me, holding me down while she ties my wrists together behind my back. She tells me she loves it when boys struggle, but now I'm at her mercy. Finally she silences my protests by pressing her lips to mine.

Re: Annie's desperation (vote on stories progression)

Postby CerberusKing » Fri Mar 03, 2017 12:42 pm

1, I think this is the start of an awesome piece