Sneaky like snake! or so she thought...

Postby Jeffrey1225 » Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:53 pm

"Du due doo du doo do loo du! Cha wa ha Dong ping me haro Dum pa ka ha way ma yamo Hoy ya way don-shon-negleso!" She sang quietly running through the hallway.
"Omg gurl! Wht is rong wit tat gurl" "Ya tly grl" "Like Totly werdo ther!" The two "popular" girls continued to bicker about her in text-talk :roll:
One of the big trucks of a girl came over and said to the "popular" girls "We should teach that self-minded b***h a lesson!" "wtcha planen? im so in if i can get at tat mfer"The other girl said.(guess witch one?) "You can help if you fix your grammer and talking..." the truck replied. "AHAAAHEM"The popular girl coughed"I'll have you know i'm quite the master of this sort of thing. mmmmm yes" "Kill the f*****g british accent" "Oh fine. Anywayyyyyyyyyyyysssss What'ch planing?" "Well were gonna get here when she goes out for her run" Truck #2 said. "So we're going to kidnap her?!?" "In a way yes I think it will be quite.....fun" The truck replied. "Come to my appartment later we can eat if you want." The truck said
The two girls agreed and they went over.


"We never formally introduced oursleves did we? Anyway Im Jen and my friend is Abbagail we call were abb though."Jen said "Ok I'm Drake and my girlfriend is Maaaaagaaaahh"
"Whats wrong???" Jen asked. Drake proceded to fall over a tranquilizer dart in his neck. "Did you forget about me see?Du due doo du doo do loo du! Cha wa ha Dong ping me haro" "O My F*****g God not that dam theme song!" "Well I made it up so I caAAAAAAANNNNNNN" Drake woke up (it was a weak tranquilizer) and pushed Rachel into his girlfriends arms. "Well guys we dont have planning time" he said putting his hand on Rachels mouth...Rachels mouth was gone....She was gone...! "Dam she's good" Abby said
"If you steal a car the original is lost but if you copy a game there are simply more in the world"~Notch

Sneaky like snake! or so she thought...

Postby Jeffrey1225 » Thu Mar 13, 2014 7:50 am

Part two!

*We are now in Rachel's POV*
Hahahaha! They thought they could get me myaaaa!They should get a :spank;ing for messing with me!!!!Beep beep beep. "There goes my alarm watch,Time for lunch then for my run!"

She went to Cafe Rain and had a club sub with turkey, fried califlour and REALLLLYYYY good wafle fries!After eating she went home to get ready for her run. She put on a deep blue T-shirt, nylon/silk tight-ish pants, a random pair of ankle socks, and her Greensh-blue Addias^TM running shoes. She left her house and walked to the track(It was near her Appartment building)


*Moving to 3rd person seeing Jen, Abby, Drake, and Marge(RN Margret she introduced after Rachel got away in the last part)*

They were hiding in the tree line in the back part of the track no-one was at the track so it would be even easier to get her. Drake checked his backpack, he had everything he needed, 5 or 6 coils of ro.pe, 2 rolls of duct tape, Some handcuffs and keys, some silk ties, some zip-ties, a bandana, 3 diffrent pars of socks, and a pair of extra athletic shoes This was going to go perfectly to plan...

*Cut to Rachel*
What was that?? I thought I heard something in the bush line..Rachel proceded to investigate singing a new theme song in her head
Bum to che cha wa me how no boo ta chee king me soprano! Hi ya? WaShe was sneaking through the bushes not knowing her kidnappers await her.

SNAPShe just stepped on a stick they knew where she was....


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"If you steal a car the original is lost but if you copy a game there are simply more in the world"~Notch

Re: Sneaky like snake! or so she thought...

Postby vantran » Thu Mar 13, 2014 8:18 am

huh? Don't really get it.

Re: Sneaky like snake! or so she thought...

Postby Jeffrey1225 » Thu Mar 13, 2014 8:22 am

what don't you understand? Sorry I write weird everyone tells me it :P
"If you steal a car the original is lost but if you copy a game there are simply more in the world"~Notch

Re: Sneaky like snake! or so she thought...

Postby vantran » Thu Mar 13, 2014 8:24 am

the whole story.

Re: Sneaky like snake! or so she thought...

Postby Jeffrey1225 » Thu Mar 13, 2014 8:36 am

XD ill try to sum it up for you. Rachel the one with the theme songs is basicly annoying and pising people off so the Trucks (Big beefy gym addicts) and the popular girls are gonna kidnap her when she goes for her fitness run. Does that help if not pinpoint what you dont really get and ill try to explain it better this is my 2nd story and my others on hold so im not the best writer. Thanks for your response!
"If you steal a car the original is lost but if you copy a game there are simply more in the world"~Notch

Re: Sneaky like snake! or so she thought...

Postby Jeffrey1225 » Fri Mar 14, 2014 7:41 pm

Part three sorry for not posting earlier had to do stuff

*Rachels POV*

Shit Shit Shit Shit!!Calm be Calm....Oh fuck being calm!I need an idea a plan a...At that point a hand fell over her mouth and the handcuffs fell on her wrists 'C-k-k-Lick C-k-k-Lick' *Sigh* she was caught...But she didnt give up! She tried to stop her captors foot but he stepped back and yanked her head pulling her head back. "Tie her feet Abby,like a showed you!"Drake ordered "Well where are we taking her?" Jen asked "Well we will start with phase one then we will transport her" At that Abby cleave gagged Rachel with a towel with a large knot tied in the middle like an improvised ball gag. Now Rachel started completely freaking out She strained every nano-ounce of muscle power from her body and ignored the pain, alas it was all in vain. The handcuffs were reinforced and the knots on her feet held good,She wasn't leaving with her own free will anymore....

** ** **
Ok Phase one here we go! Rachel was squirming like an excited dog in her arms...It would only hurt her. She was going mental Yelling through her gag straining *Sigh* She didn't want to slap her.Fuck it she reared her hand back and hit her as hard a she could.... Rachel gasped in pain and started exasperatedly crying...She felt so mean for doing that... and it hurt her hand too.......


End of part Three Hope you guys are enjoying please post your responses/questions! Tell me how my writing is so I can improve


Thanks, Jeffrey1225
"If you steal a car the original is lost but if you copy a game there are simply more in the world"~Notch