## Blessing In Disguise (m/m)

Post by FelixSH » Fri Nov 04, 2011 1:15 am

Nice, promising start, especially for your first story.
Keep going.

### Re: Blessing In Disguise (m/m)

Post by xtc » Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:42 am

Welcome.
Keep writing, be true to your own style but don't forget the paragraphs!
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!
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### Re: Blessing In Disguise (m/m)

Post by sarumansauron » Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:38 pm

Cool story! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

### Re: Blessing In Disguise (m/m)

Post by xtc » Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:03 am

Pretty good start I would have thought.
It is so difficult (or even impossible) to proof-read one's own writing; I sypathise! The couple of oversights have not, however, spoilt my enjoyment of your writing.
More power to your typing fingers,
Wassail!
Xtc
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!
More by the same author: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=22729

### Re: Blessing In Disguise (m/m)

Post by FelixSH » Mon Nov 07, 2011 8:51 am

That was surprise. What happened as well as the short length. ThatÂ´s no critic, though, itÂ´s a good read as it is.
But itÂ´s a promising start for a potential series, which I hope you will write. Or also something completely new. In other words, I hope for more, in whatever form.

### Re: Blessing In Disguise (m/m)

Post by sarwrductan » Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:14 am

Shoot man! LOL I was on the edge of my seat!...I can't tell you all enough How I ache inside to re unite with old friends or find a new one. May-be someone like this.... www.youtube.com/watch?v=mC-OnM and www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3POSi which seem as adult versions of Louis in the above story.
Those who walk forward always looking back, don't see that which makes them stumble

### Re: Blessing In Disguise (m/m)

Post by OverLooker » Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:43 am

I hope there is much much more where that came from..... If I was you I would have wished for more time alone with Ryan.... wink hint wink
"Mmmmppphhhhhhh"