Small Town, Tightly Bound

Postby DMC13 » Sun Oct 28, 2012 8:27 pm

Hello. I know blueflame's still active, but here's a new idea. I think you guys might like the story...

Hey man, you're awake!
Weird, do you remember me?
Marty Mcpherson?
Weird! Surely you remember why you're in my apartment, all tied up, right?
Geez!
Well, I'll tell 'ya. That should jog your memory.
Well, we were out drinking at the pub... and you made a bet with me about some weird sport we were watching... I won, and you drunkenly went crazy. You hit me with a bottle of Sam Adams! See my bump? Well, the bartender kicked you out, and I took you home! You made some comment about doing something with your hands tied behind your back... It was driving. Drunk driving's illegal, so I didn't let you, and you got angry and before you hit me, I got my trusty rope from the backseat and tied you all up! Of course, after that, you passed out, so I took you to my place! Well, now you're awake, but I'm thinkin' maybe I'll keep you...
Yes... Someone to serve me...

If you liked, comment! If it's really good, I might add a part 2 from mystery captive's point of view!
I don't care.

Re: Small Town, Tightly Bound

Postby lasse672000 » Mon Oct 29, 2012 5:41 am

delorean225 wrote:If you liked, comment! If it's really good, I might add a part 2 from mystery captive's point of view!

It's good, but I think youd have to work a bit more on your part one, and extend it a bit before adding a second part.
Whazzzz up!.

Re: Small Town, Tightly Bound

Postby RopeMaster » Fri Nov 23, 2012 12:54 pm

Let's hear more...