## A Hallowen Surprise (Final chapter added)

Post by jennybond » Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:51 am

Chapter 1
Thirteen year old friends, Jenny, Meredith, and Alissa had been challenged by their classmates to spend Halloween night in a creepy old empty house which is believed to be haunted near Denton High School where they are pupils. The girls who are always game for a laugh readily agreed. It is believed the last owner of the house an old guy called Edward Johnson killed his wife in the house before killing himself, and their ghosts now haunt the house.
Ali is a cute little blonde girl with a body which any girl three or four years older than her would be proud of, this makes her popular with the boys at school.
Brown haired spectacle wearing Jenny was always the sensible one of the three, she too was now growing the body of a young woman, but her glasses and the braces on her teeth make her not so popular with the boys although she does have a boyfriend.
Meri is a tall skinny flat-chested girl with short chestnut brown hair to which she added blonde highlights because people were often mistaking her for a boy.
â€œWhat are we going to tell our parents? My mum would go crazy if she knew I was spending the night in that old house.â€ Meri asked.
â€œTell her Iâ€™m having a Halloween sleepover at my house, you tell your mum the same Ali.â€ Jenny replied.
â€œWhat about you Jen what will you tell your mum?â€ Ali asked.
â€œIâ€™ll tell her youâ€™re having a sleepover at your house. It shouldnâ€™t be problem for any of us as Halloween is on Saturday and we have no school the next dayâ€ Jenny replied.
The girls spent the rest of the week making plans for their night and making lists of what equipment and clothes theyâ€™d need. They agreed to meet up at Jennyâ€™s house as her mum and dad would be out as always on a Saturday evening. They made one final check on their equipment and food before leaving.
â€œWhoâ€™s frightened?â€ Meri asked as they walked.
â€œNot me, I donâ€™t believe all that ghost story rubbish.â€ Jenny replied.
â€œNor me.â€ Ali said lying trying to sound braver than she actually was.
â€œWhat about you Meri are you scared?â€ Jenny asked.
â€œIâ€™m shitting myself.â€ Meri said with a nervous laugh.
On their way to the house they passed a number of friends from school in fancy dress out trick or treating who wished them luck.
They reached the house and stopped at the huge gates
â€œLast chance to chicken out.â€ Jenny said.
â€œNot me.â€ Ali replied.
â€œCome on letâ€™s go inside before I change my mind.â€ Meri said quietly and nervously.
The girls wet round the back of the house where there was a missing window just big enough for them to squeeze through. Inside the house was dark, it felt cold and damp. All the original furniture remained where it was left but it was all covered up with white dust sheets. Jenny tried a light switch but just as she expected there was no power. The girls set up their camp in what used to be the lounge, spreading their sleeping bags out on the floor.
â€œIâ€™m freezing.â€ Meri said.
â€œWe have matches and firelighters letâ€™s get a fire going. There must be something around here that will burn. Have a look aroundâ€ Ali replied.
â€œWhile you two are getting a fire going, I need the toilet badly.â€ Meri said taking her torch and some toilet roll from her bag.
â€œWill you be ok on your own? Weâ€™ll come with you.â€ Jenny asked.
â€œIâ€™ll be fine you two just get have fire going for when I get back.â€ Meri replied before going upstairs.
Jenny and Ali looked around and found some old papers and wood for the fire, after a while they had a nice fire burning in the fireplace.
â€œMeriâ€™s a long time. Do you think sheâ€™s alright?â€ Jenny asked.
â€œIâ€™ll go see, you keep an eye on that fire donâ€™t let it go out. Weâ€™ll have toasted marshmallows later.â€ Ali replied taking her torch and going upstairs.
Jenny kept watch on the fire for a while throwing on more bits of wood.
â€œWhatâ€™s keeping those two? I bet theyâ€™re hiding and going to jump out on me when I go looking for them. I wonâ€™t spoil their fun.â€ She thought to herself picking up her torch and going upstairs.
She looked in the bathroom but there was no sign of her friends.
â€œMeri, Ali where are you?â€ She called out.
She checked one of the bedrooms again no sign of her friends
â€œOk you two this isnâ€™t funny I know youâ€™re hiding.â€ She called out.
She checked a second bedroom again no sign of her friends.
â€œOk youâ€™ve had your fun, come out now, and letâ€™s go toast those marshmallows. Ali, Meri where are you?â€ She called out again.
She opened the door to the next bedroom; to her surprise the room was dimly lit.
â€œAli, Meri are you in here.â€ She said as she nervously walked in.
â€œMMMPPPHHH!!! MMMMMPPPPHHH!!!!â€
â€œOH MY GOD ALI, MERI WHO DID THIS TO YOU?â€ She cried rushing over to her friend who were sitting bound hand and foot on the floor both girls had cloth gag tied her mouth.
The door slammed behind her
â€œCome away from you friends dear.â€ She heard a womanâ€™s voice say.
She looked round to see a man and woman standing behind her. The man was holding a small pistol.
â€œMike and Molly Malone. I recognize you you're that couple wanted for robbing all those banks in the area.â€
â€œBright kid.â€ Mike Malone replied.
â€œTake a seat next to your friends dear.â€ Molly said picking up some more rope.
Jenny sat down on the floor next to Ali
â€œWhat are you going to do to us?â€ She nervously asked as Molly began tying her wrists behind her back.
â€œIf youâ€™re good little girls nothing, weâ€™ll going to be out of here in a day or two weâ€™re just going to keep you here until we leave so canâ€™t go running to the cops.â€Molly replied.
â€œYou canâ€™t keep us tied up all that time.â€ Jenny cried.
Molly just smiled as she began binding Jennyâ€™s feet and knees over her jeans.
â€œFinding me something to gag her with dear.â€ Molly said to her husband.
â€œI donâ€™t have anything else, use one of her socks.â€ He replied.
Molly pulled off Jennyâ€™s trainer and removed one of her sports socks and rolled it into a tight ball.
â€œOpen up dear, nice and wide for Aunty Molly.â€ Molly said holding the sock to Jennyâ€™s mouth.
Jenny knew it was useless to refuse and opened her mouth as wide as she could.
â€œBraces, how cute.â€ Molly said before stuffing the sock in Jennyâ€™s mouth.
While she was doing this her husband cut a strip off one of the white dust sheets with his swiss army knife and passed to his wife, who wasted no time in tying it tightly over Jennyâ€™s mouth.
Molly stepped back and smiled at the three bound girls pleased with her handy work.
â€œDid I hear someone mention toasted Marshmallows theyâ€™re my favourites come along dear, too bad you girls canâ€™t join us.â€ Mike said taking hold of his wifeâ€™s hand and they left closing the door behind them.
Last edited by jennybond on Thu Oct 13, 2011 8:52 pm, edited 2 times in total.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise

Post by Chase Ricks » Wed Oct 12, 2011 2:06 am

Just the type of story to go along with the horror movies I am currently watching on my computer. If interested in evil bondage leading to death, I suggest watching "Chain Letter" but try not to have a stomach for strong gory sadistic violence. Bwahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise

Post by jennybond » Thu Oct 13, 2011 1:10 am

Chapter 2
Ali had told her sixteen year old sister Kathy in confidence what they were planning to do that night. Kathy and her friend Emma who was also sixteen were walking home from a Halloween party later that night; both were still wearing fancy dress. Tall busty blonde haired Kathy wore a scream mask and a long black hooded robe, while her shorter brunette friend dressed as a zombie nurse in a blood stained white nurses uniform.
â€œDo you fancy some fun Em?â€ Kathy asked as she spotted the old Johnson house in the distance.
â€œWhy what are you planning?â€ Emma replied.
â€œMy bratty sister Ali and a couple of her little friends are staying the night in old Mr Johnsons house how about we sneak in and scare the living daylights out of them.â€
â€œIs your sister crazy? Letâ€™s do it, it will be right giggle.â€ Emma replied.
They sneaked around the old house until they found the window the girls climbed through, it was tight squeeze but they both managed to get through it and into the kitchen.
â€œLetâ€™s find the little brats.â€ Kathy whispered
They crept out of the kitchen and into the hall.
â€œTheyâ€™re in there.â€ Emma whispered spotting the glow from the fire under a gap at the bottom of one of the doors.
Kathy spotted a large vase standing on a shelf in the hall; she picked it and smashed it on the wooden floor.
â€œPoor little mites theyâ€™re probably shitting themselves now.â€ Emma laughed.
â€œWhat was that?â€ Molly said to Mike
â€œThe kids theyâ€™re up to something letâ€™s go check?â€ Mike replied standing up pulling his pistol from his belt.
â€œ Weâ€™re coming to get you little girls.â€ Kathy called out in really deep voice which made Emma giggle.
She was about to open the door, when it opened from the other side. The girls were surprised to see Mike and Molly Malone standing before them Mike pointing his pistol in their direction.
â€œWhat have we here?â€ Molly asked.
â€œWhere are my sister and her friends, what have you done with them?â€ Kathy asked recognizing the two crooks from their pictures in the newspapers and on the television news.
â€œYour sister and her friends are fine for now, take that mask off and letâ€™s have a look at you?â€ Molly replied.
Kathy took off her hood and removed her mask, to reveal her long blonde hair.
â€œVery nice, no prizes for guessing which one is your sister.â€ Mike said with a big smile on his unshaven face.
â€œCan I see my sister?â€ Kathy asked.
â€œVery well theyâ€™re up stairs.â€ Molly replied.
The two crooks took the girls at gun point up the stairs and into the bedroom where the younger girls sat bound, gagged and crying.
â€œKammppthy.â€ Ali cried out seeing her sister.
â€œAli are you alright?â€ Kathy asked.
â€œLike I said sheâ€™s fine.â€ Molly replied.
â€œTheyâ€™re only kids let them go.â€ Kathy said.
â€œSo they can go running to the cops I donâ€™t think so.â€ Mike told her.
â€œRight thatâ€™s enough.â€ Molly said.
â€œIâ€™ll take these two into the next room and tie them up, you babysit the brats.â€ She told her husband.
She looked around the room but there was no more rope
â€œMike cut me about ten long strips off that dust sheet and two squares about the size of a large handkerchief.â€
While her husband was doing this Molly gathered up some candles and her cigarette lighter, when heâ€™d finished Mike handed the strips of cloth to his wife, who tested one of the strength.
â€œThese will do nicely.â€ She said tugged the strip of cloth.
â€œAlright you two come with me, and donâ€™t try anything stupid you wouldnâ€™t want Uncle Mike to hurt to harm the brats would you?â€ She said taking hold of Kathy and Emmaâ€™s arms.
Kathy had no idea how long Molly had been living rough in the house but judging by her body odour and her bad breath along with the state of her dirty greasy long ginger hair, it must have been a while since sheâ€™d had a proper wash. The jeans and jumpers that both she and her husband were wearing were tatty and dirty.
When they arrived in the next bedroom Molly started by lighting the candles.
â€œI canâ€™t possibly tie you with that on it will have to come off.â€ She said pointing to the long black robe Kathy was wearing.
â€œBut Iâ€™ve only got my underwear on under it.â€ Kathy protest.
â€œThatâ€™s too bad, take it off or Iâ€™ll call my husband to take it off for you.â€
Kathy reluctantly did as she was told, revealing her curvaceous body and her matching black lace bra and panty combo set.
â€œAlright both of you lie on the bed.â€ Molly said pulling the dust sheet off a rather grand king sized double bed.
Once both girls were on the bed Molly started by tying their hands together above their heads and securing them to the metal head stead, she then did the same to their feet securing them to the foot stead, both girls then had their knees bound tightly together. Molly folded up one of the cloth squares and held it to Kathyâ€™s mouth.
â€œOpen up.â€ She said with a smile which showed off her dirty teeth.
Kathy shook her head not wanting the dusty rag stuffed in her mouth, but Molly reached inside the girlâ€™s d cup bra and pinched and twisted her nipple as hard as she could causing Kathy to cry out in pain, allowing Molly to quickly stuff the cloth in her mouth, before tying a strip of cloth tightly between the girls teeth.
â€œI hope youâ€™re going to be a little more co-operative.â€ She said to Emma holding the folded cloth to her mouth.
Emma nodded and opened her mouth wide allowing Molly to gag her exactly like her friend. Molly opened a bedding chest that was in the room, and pulled a couple of large blankets.
â€œTheyâ€™re a little dusty, but hey beggars canâ€™t be choosers.â€ She said as she threw the blankets over the girls leaving just their gagged faces showing before tucking them tightly under the mattress.
Not only were the blankets dusty they also felt and smelt damp and musty, which neither girl found very pleasant. After one final check on their bindings and gags once she was satisfied the girls werenâ€™t going anywhere Molly left and rejoined her husband.
â€œHave you checked to see theyâ€™re still tied nice and tight.â€ She asked Mike.
â€œNo dear Iâ€™ll do it now.â€ Mike replied.
â€œDonâ€™t bother getting up Iâ€™ll do it.â€ Molly told him.
Starting with Jenny, then Meri and finally Ali, she checked and tightened the ropes binding them.
â€œYou girls are terribly cold do you want your sleeping bags?â€ She asked.
The three girls moaned and nodded.
â€œMike dear go and fetch their sleeping bags while Aunty Molly gets them ready bed.â€
Mike left the room
Molly bent down besides Jenny and removed her trainers, and untied her legs and ankles.
â€œYouâ€™ll be much more comfortable in your sleeping bag without these on.â€ She said as she started to unfasten Jennyâ€™s jeans and pulled them off revealing her little pale blue panties, and then retied her legs and ankles.
She repeated the process with Meri taking off her jogging pants to reveal her white cotton brief type panties, and finally Ali she took off the girls jeans to reveal her white and pink cotton panties with tiny pink flowers printed on them.
â€œCute panties.â€ Molly said with smile patting Aliâ€™s bottom
Mike returned with the sleeping bags and all the rest of the girlâ€™s belongings heâ€™d gathered up and dropped them on the bed. He smiled at the sight of the three young girls tied up in their panties.
â€œPut your eyeballs back in your head and help me get them in their sleeping bags.â€ Molly told him.
Starting with Ali, Mike picked her up and placed her in the sleeping bag which Molly was holding open; Molly zipped the side right up to Aliâ€™s neck, before they repeated the operation on the other two girls.
â€œSnug as a bug in a rug.â€ Molly said as she zipped up the last of the sleeping bags which was Meriâ€™s.
â€œYou girls try and get some sleep now, Uncle Mike and Aunty Molly are going back down stairs to that nice warm fire to toast those crumpets you girls very kindly brought us.â€ Molly said with a big grin on her dirty face.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise

Post by Chase Ricks » Thu Oct 13, 2011 1:14 am

One wonders if actual ghouls or wraiths might come upon the crooks and give them a fright too horrid to visualize before the night is through? Great story so far jennybond.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise

Post by jennybond » Thu Oct 13, 2011 3:50 pm

Chapter 3
Meri lay in her sleeping bag looking around the candle lit room, when she spotted something on the bed reflecting in the light of the candle close by.
â€œHeâ€™s left his knife.â€ She thought to herself.
â€œMMMPPPHHH!!! MMMMPPPHHH!!â€ She moaned to Jenny and Ali trying to draw their attention to the knife on the bed, but neither of her two friends could make out what she was trying to tell them.
Jenny and Ali watched as Meri struggled and wriggled her way out of her sleeping bag, and shuffled her panty covered bottom across the floor it was only when Meri reached the bed that the other two spotted the knife. Meri sat with her back against the side of the bed and slowly struggled to her feet only to lose her balance and topple over crashing on to a bedside table knocking a bedside lamp on to the floor. The girls wondered if the crooks had heard the crash, their question was soon answered as Molly came dashing into the room.
â€œItâ€™s alright Iâ€™ve found our little sleep walker.â€ She called to her husband who was checking on the two older girls.
Mike came into the room as Molly was dragging Meri back to her sleeping bag.
â€œYou idiot you left your knife lying around thatâ€™s what she was after, go and make yourself useful see can you find some more rope.â€ Molly snapped at her husband.
â€œYouâ€™re all going to regret this.â€ Molly barked stuffing Meri back in her sleeping bag.
Mike returned a few minutes later carrying two large coils of thin rope.
â€œPerfect, cut them into good sized lengths for me.â€ Molly said throwing Mike his knife.
As Mike cut the rope Molly tied the first length tightly around the outside of Meriâ€™s sleeping bag and around her feet, the second length was then tied further up her legs, a third around her waist, and two more around her upper body.
â€œIâ€™d like to see you wriggle out of this now.â€ She said before moving on to Ali and then Jenny repeating what she had done to Meri.
Once she was satisfied the girls couldnâ€™t get out of their sleeping bags, Molly and Mike returned to the lounge and the nice warm fire. After a while Molly got up.
â€œIâ€™m going to the bathroom.â€ She told Mike.
When she entered the bathroom she was shocked to see writing on the mirror it had been written in what looked like blood. â€œLET GIRLS GO OR YOU WILL BE SORRY!!!â€ It read.
Molly rushed back down stairs to her husband
â€œI suppose you think thatâ€™s funny donâ€™t you?â€ She raged.
â€œWhatâ€™s funny?â€ Mike replied in a puzzled tone.
â€œYou know what Iâ€™m talking about that writing on the bathroom mirror.â€
â€œI donâ€™t know anything about any writing what does it say?â€
â€œLike I really need to tell you, it sayâ€™s let girls go or you will be sorry. What did you write it in it looks like blood?â€
â€œI swear to you Molly I didnâ€™t write it.â€
â€œIf you didnâ€™t then who did?â€
â€œCome on, come and show me this writing.â€ Mike said taking hold of his wifeâ€™s hand.
The two of them went into the bathroom, and to Mollyâ€™s horror the mirror was clean there was no sign of the writing.
â€œIt was there Iâ€™m telling you.â€ She cried pointing to the mirror.
â€œAlright, alright I believe you.â€ Mike replied giving Molly a hug not really believing what she had told him.
â€œYou use the toilet Iâ€™ll be right outside and Iâ€™ve got my gun.â€ He continued.
â€œDonâ€™t leave me stay in here with me.â€ Molly sobbed.
After Molly had finished in the bathroom the two of them returned to the lounge only to find the room in total darkness, their raging fire in the fireplace and the candles they used for light had all gone out.
â€œThatâ€™s weird that fire shouldnâ€™t have gone out in that short time.â€ Mike said.
â€œI donâ€™t like it Mike, something strange is happening here.â€ Molly said taking a tight hold of her husbandâ€™s arm.
Just then there was a loud crash in the room as picture fell off the wall making them both jump.
â€œI donâ€™t like it Mike this is all too much of a coincidence, maybe this place really is haunted.â€
â€œRubbish.â€ Mike replied.
â€œBut you didnâ€™t see that writing.â€
â€œYou light the candles Iâ€™ll get the fire going again youâ€™ll feel much better with a bit of light in the room.â€ Mike told his terrified wife.
Molly took her cigarette lighter and lit one of the candles no sooner had she lit it than it blew out again, she tried again with the same result.
â€œIt must be in a draft move it over there.â€ Mike who was having the same problem lighting the fire said pointing to the other side of the room.
Molly took the candle across the room and tried again only for it to blow out again, just then one of the shuttered windows blew open and a cold wind blew into the room. As Mike rushed over to close the window a vase flew off a self narrowly missing him, Molly dashed over to her husband as a large potted plant picked itâ€™s self up off the floor and flew towards the pair of them causing them both to quickly duck.
â€œLetâ€™s get the fuck out of here.â€ Mike cried taking hold of his wifeâ€™s hand as another large vase flew towards them.
â€œWhat about the girls?â€ Molly cried as they ran towards the front door.
â€œIâ€™m sure someone will find them soon letâ€™s just get the fuck out of here.â€ Mike replied as they dodged a number of flying ornaments in the hall.
The crooks opened the front door and ran like hell down the drive. Upstairs both Kathy and Emma felt the strips of sheet binding their wrists suddenly loosen enough for them to get free.
â€œHow very odd.â€ Kathy said once sheâ€™d removed her gag.
â€œI know how strange. Did you hear all that noise down stairs I wonder what was happening?â€ Emma replied.
Kathy and Emma crept out of their room and looked down the stairs at the mess in the hall and noticed the front door wide open.
â€œI think theyâ€™ve gone.â€ Emma said.
â€œSo do I. Letâ€™s go check on the brats.â€ Kathy replied.
Kathy and Emma slowly opened the bedroom door and went inside once they were sure it was safe to do so. Kathy couldnâ€™t help but laugh at the sight of her kid sister all trussed in her sleeping bag.
â€œI suppose weâ€™d better untie them and take them home.â€ Kathy said.
First thing the next morning Mike and Molly Malone turned up at Denton Police station and turned themselves in.
The girls still donâ€™t really know what happened in the house that night. Did the ghosts of Edward Johnson and his wife come to their rescue?
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise

Post by lonewolfandfriends » Thu Oct 13, 2011 4:24 pm

Great yet surprising ending.

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise (Final chapter added)

Post by Chase Ricks » Fri Oct 14, 2011 2:53 am

Guess my suggestion paid off. lol
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise (Final chapter added)

Post by jennybond » Fri Oct 14, 2011 3:47 am

> Shane Bikman wrote:Guess my suggestion paid off. lol

It was always going to be the plan....lol. But thanks anyway.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise (Final chapter added)

Post by Chase Ricks » Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:08 am

Not a problem. Thanks for the nice story.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise (Final chapter added)

Post by Plueschbabycd » Fri Oct 14, 2011 11:54 am

Hallo the end with the hunted was really good. Byway I first wished that the ghosts had captured the girl that would interesting fiction story.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise (Final chapter added)

Post by jennybond » Fri Oct 14, 2011 3:28 pm

> Plueschbabycd wrote:Hallo the end with the hunted was really good. Byway I first wished that the ghosts had captured the girl that would interesting fiction story.
> Andrew

Hi Andrew
You mean the ghosts capturing Molly the girl crook? That would have been cool shame I didn't think of it
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise (Final chapter added)

Post by Plueschbabycd » Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:09 pm

Hallo mean the captor is the ghosts not Mike and Molly Malone. But this Version think miss that ghost thanks the girls for his salvation.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

### Re: A Hallowen Surprise (Final chapter added)

Post by bookl0ver » Sat Oct 15, 2011 4:53 am

so sorry jen i only just noticed this story. it was great! Very entertaining.
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