Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Sun Sep 16, 2012 5:21 pm

Tanner- Blonde Seventeen year old boy. Blue eyes, 6'3'' Star Basketball Player
Collin- Tanner's twin brother; Blonde, 6'0'' Blue eyes
Missy- The boy's mom.
Last edited by Megan on Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Wed Sep 19, 2012 5:14 pm

Tanner layed there in the tight trunk space, trying to recollect himself. He wished that he had worn his jacket outside to the bus. He couldn't help but blame himself for forgetting both his inhaler ad his warm-up shirt. All he had to do was put them in his bag.
Tanner ran out of the locker room in order to go back to the bus to get his inhaler and warm-up shirt. Now Coach Peters asked if he wanted him to go get it, so Tanner could stretch and start warming up. But he said he'd go himself. Which now he realizes was the biggest mistake of his life. When he got to the bus, he got on and grabbed his stuff. As soon as he stepped off, a strong arm wrapped around his waist and a strong smelling cloth was pressed against his face. He fought it as long as he could, but then slipped into darkness.
When he woke up, he couldn't move. His wrists were bound behind him tightly with both rope and tape. Tape was wrapped from his ankles to midway up his lower legs. He couldn't have been more thankful that his mom had made him ge a hair cut due to the fact that tape was wrapped around his head multiple times. He wanted nothing more than to go home, and be with his mom and brother. He layed there, trying not to let himself cry. But tears slowly started coming after realizing, he couldn't get out of his current situation that easily

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Wed Sep 19, 2012 5:23 pm

Being mid December and having his white basketball shorts with his matching white jersey, Tanner was freezing. He thought about his current situation through the long trunk ride.
"Even though I'm tied up, maybe just maybe, when whoever this is opens the trunk if they let me out, I can kick them or do something to make them loose balance. I wonder if Coach and the guys are looking for me. Or mom. Or Bub. What am I going to do?? Every hard thing I've been through, I have had my twin brother at my side. I guarantee he noticed I was gone. It's hard not to realize someone who looks exactly like you almost is missing. What does this person want. I wish I could stop crying. If Coach was here, he'd tell me to suck it up. But I'll admit it, I'm scared out of my wits."

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:35 pm

Collin's Point of View
People say when your twin is stressed and other stuff, you can sense it. I never did until about 10 minutes into the game. Tanner never came back after he left to go back to the bus. I started getting shooting pains in my head. I had the ball, was going on my A-Game, and just collapsed I was in so much pain. All I could do was curl up into a ball and lay there. I tried not to scream, but it just came out...Along with tears.
I heard my coach asking if I was ok and my mom saying Honey what's wrong. I tried to answer, but nothing came out. I had never felt so helpless to the point that I couldn't tell my mom what was going on. That's when I heard call 911. I don't even remembering going to the hospital, I passed out because I was in so much pain.
I woke up in the emergency room of the local hospital, the doctors were saying stuff to my mom... I was still kinda out of it. I just wanted to see my mom and brother. My mom noticed me awake, and the doctor left. I told her about the pains in my head, and then asked if Tanner ever came back. And she said no. She said as soon as the doctor drew up the papers, I could go home.
On our way home, my phone rang. It was coming from the backseat of the car where my gym bag was. I grabbed it, and it was a number I didn't know the number, and I really don't know why I answered it, but I felt as if I needed to.
All I heard was a raspy voice saying I have your brother. And a click.
Mom pulled over because I started breathing heavily. So heavily to the point that again, I passed out.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:18 pm

Can you guys give me some feedback? This is my first story and would appriciate some.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Jack Roper » Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:40 pm

Megan,

This is a great start, and I like the different points of view to the twin brothers--very realistic, seemingly.

Please continue.

JR

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Scottstud94 » Sun Sep 23, 2012 5:52 pm

I like it! Keep it up!

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Mon Sep 24, 2012 5:30 pm

This part is going to be kinda short because I have school tomorrow.
The car Tanner was in came to an abrupt halt after driving for so long. He was getting very restless after loosing feeling in his wrists. He was fed up. No other way to describe how he felt. He was straight up ticked. This person, grabbed him, drugged him, tied him up, stuffed him into a trunk, and took him away from his family and friends. And don't even get him started on making him drop his jacket. It was extremely cold by this point, only about 46 degrees F. The trunk opened, and standing there, was a man with a mask on holding a gun straight at Tanner's head. "Alright kid, don't make this hard on yourself. Because I will shoot you here and now. I don't deal well with kids. Just nod your head if you understand. And again, if you don't I can make you understand." He said as he turned the safety off the gun, making it visible to Tanner. Tanner quickly and repeatedly nodded his head trying to fight the tears about to come pouring out of his eyes.
"Good, I'm glad we're on the same page. Now I'm going to lift you out of the trunk and your not going to fight are you?"
Tanner shook his head no. The man put his gun back in its side holster, and lifted Tanner out of the trunk, not even stopping when he smacked Tanner's head on the side of the trunk while lifting him out. He threw Tanner over his shoulder as if he weighed nothing and shut the trunk. He then carried him into a building that Tanner couldn't see the outside of with him being thrown over this mans shoulder. They walked for a little short ways before the man not so gently threw Tanner down. All Tanner could focus on right now was the shooting pain in his elbow as he landed with all his weight on it.
The floor was cold. Ice cold. The man left the room and locked the door. And all Tanner could do was lay there and wait for the man to come back.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby kidnapplz » Tue Sep 25, 2012 11:13 am

love it, so interesting

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Wed Sep 26, 2012 1:26 pm

Tanner's POV
What the hell is going on?? Well technically I know that I've obviously been kidnapped. But why?? This person obviously has the wrong kid. I just hope he wasn't thinking that he was grabbing Collin. Collin has way worse anxiety than I do. But this is pushing the limit a tad bit. I just want my mom and to see my family. I guarentee that when mom finds out she'll call uncle Mitch. He's a cop, he finds people everyday. I can't think the for the worst here. It's a definate sign of weakness. I've got to stay strong, but it's hard. This guys got a gun. And he doesn't like kids. It kinda pisses me off that he thinks I'm a kid. I may be kinda young looking but dude! I'm older than you think!
I hear voices coming from outside of the room. Whoa! That's definately a girl voice. The door opens and I look over there. Yeah, she's definately a woman. Why does she have to be hot. She doesn't even take a glance over at me. I mmph loud into my gag, trying to get her attention. Finally she looked over at me, and chuckled. Why the hell is she chuckling??? This is no joking matter! Let me GO!
"Your a little cutie aren't you?" She walked over towards me in her very tight white v-neck and red skinny jeans. She crouched down next to my head. "Now, I'm actually the one you should be more afraid of. Understand?...." I didn't answer, I was shocked. "I said DO YOU UNDERSTAND??" I quickly found a knife to my cheek. I shook my head frantically signaling yes. "Good, I didn't want to cut up the cute little baby face of your anyway. But don't you ever under estimmate me. And you'll be ok. Now I'm gonna lay down some ground rules that if you follow, you will make it outta here alive. After I'm done, I'll take out the gag. Now, You will not be untied what-so-ever. If you try to escape, you will be hurt. If you get to loud, we will hurt you. Fight me or my partner, we will hurt you. I'm not afraid to hurt you. I will. And to make sure you understand this, I'm gonna demonstrate.
What does she mean, she's gonna demonstrate??

Tell me if I should continue..

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby kidnapplz » Wed Sep 26, 2012 2:24 pm

YES YES YES YES plz go on.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:46 pm

Tanner's POV
Seriously, how is she going to demonstrate?? This woman grabbed me by the hair and pulled back making sure I was looking at her. She pulled out a knife and had the tip to my throat. I tried to hold back the tears, but it wasn't working. If my dad was still alive, he would have told me to not show any sign of weakness. But it's hard. I tried to pull away, yet I probably shouldn't have because that just made this bitch furious. She threw me back, hitting my head off the concrete repeatedly. It hurt so bad. My hair felt sticky, and I rolled over to see blood on the floor where I landed. I juts layed there on my stomach trying to recollect myself, but my head hurt really bad. The woman again grabbbed me by the top of my head by the hair. I drug over to a pole in the corner of the room and faced with my back to it. She grabbed a roll of duct tape and pushed my as close to the pole as she could. She then proceeded in taping me to the pole tightly.
This woman grabbed my nose and pinched it shut. With my asthma and my mouth being taped tightly shut, I felt as if I was going to die. After a few seconds, my eyes began to flutter. She let go, hitting me acrossed the face as she did. She did this about 5 more times before I couldn't take it anymore. My weezing started in. I couldn't breathe. I'm going to die here.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Sun Oct 07, 2012 12:02 pm

Tanner sat there, heavily breathing. He felt like he was going to pass out. The tape was unwrapped from his face and hair, it hurt, but he could care less at the moment. On the verge of passing out, Tanner felt a very familiar device pressed up against his mouth. There was a puff of abuterol and Tanner felt some relief. After a second puff, he felt incredibly better.
Tanner was still light headed, but he saw the woman walk over to a cabinet in the room and grab a box. She came back over to Tanner, opened the box, and put on a pair of gloves.
"That's a really nasty cut, I'm gonna clean it for you. Are you allergic to tylenol, aleve, or advil?"
"No. Thank you for giving me my inhaler."
"It's not a problem. I couldn't let you die, my husband would kill me. This may sting, I don't have any peroxide, so i'm gonna put some alcohol in it. So bare with me. Lean your head forward."
Tanner did what she asked just being grateful that he can breathe, and that she cares enough to clean his head. The woman dumped some alcohol on his head and she was right, it hurt. He was finally getting the full affect of his injury. His head was now pounding. But he assumed she would give him some medicine. And he was right, she dumped two advil in her hand, and grabbed a bottle of water of the table and took off the lid. She put the pills up to his mouth and he took them willingly and then accepted the water.
"Kid, I have to tape your mouth back. I have to take some pictures to send you mom."
"I'll be quiet, I promise. Please, just don't. Please, I promise I'll be good." She grabbed the duct tape and fiddled with the end. Tanner's tears started falling as he begged for her not to. "Please, please, no. I'll be good."
"Sorry kid. I have too."
Tanner tried to move his head away but with being taped to the pole, he wasn't moving very well. She pushed the end up to Tanner's check and started wrapping it around his head three times. Silencing him.
She pulled a camera out of her back pocket, and took about 20. Tanner kept crying. He wasn't going to hold it in anymore. He just couldn't.
The man came in. The woman went over to him, and he gave her something. Then walked out. She came over with a bottle and a bottle and a needle. She put some in the syringe, and then went for Tanner's arm. He was afraid to jerk away. But she put it in his upper arm. A few minutes later, he felt dizzy. And soon after that, he passed out.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Sun Oct 07, 2012 12:45 pm

Collin's POV
I woke up laying on the couch. Mom was sitting in the chair talking to Uncle Mitch. Good, he's here, I can just tell them now. But wait, mom's crying. Uncle Mitch is dialing frantically on his phone and putting it up to his ear.
"Mom, whats going on. Oh gosh did they kill Tanner? No, no, no, Please oh God no."
"Honey, how did you know someone took Tanner?"
"The call in the car. It was a man. He said he has Tanner. Is he ok? Please tell me he's ok. I knew something was wrong at the game. I felt it. My head started hurting really bad. Like, I felt stuff that was happening to him."
"They sent pictures. That's why Mitch is here. There was a package on the porch. It had some pictures, and Tanner's warm up shirt in it. Mitch got her as soon as he could to help me with you. But then finding it, made him stay. He's on the phone with Rob right now."
Oh shit, Rob only works on hostage and kidnapping cases for the FBI.
"I'm gonna go get changed mom."
I walked up the stairs, into my room and got changed into sweatpants and a tshirt. On my way back down stairs, I couldn't help but stop and go into Tanner's room. Sitting there on his dresser were pictures of the two of us before going to prom with seniors out freshman year. And basketball and baseball pictures. And the picture of us and dad the day he died in his accident. I picked up one from the first basketball game. It was me, Tanner, and Chaz. We were happy as could be. Smiles on our faces. Not a care in te world. I couldn't help but just start crying.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Mon Oct 08, 2012 1:41 pm

WARNING!!! SOME SEXUAL CONTENT
Tanner's POV
I woke up really dizzy. I had goosebumps up my arms and legs plus I felt like him head weighed a ton. I saw the woman sitting fairly close to me in a chair. She noticed that I was awake and came over and took the tape off my mouth. She gave me a long drink.
"Can I get a blanket or something? I'm freezing."
"We went to your house the other day when your mom was out and grabbed some other clothes since we knew you'd be in your basketball uniform."
"Thanks, wait.. You were in my house??? And seriously, how did you know I would be in my uniform. I forgot my inhaler and warm up shirt on the bus on accident. I have never done that before. Ever. And when can I go pee?"
"Well I'll take you to the bathroom. But you better not run, or I'll kill you."
"Wait, tell me why you took me."
"I'll explain the best I can when we get back in here. Just shut up or the gag goes back in."
She untaped me from the pole, and started untaping my legs.
"Stop, stop, stop, stop. OW! I'll hobble. Just please, leave the leg hair alone."
"I'll carry you."
Before I could protest, She scooped me up like I weighed nothing at all. I felt even more helpless than I did. She carried me to the bathroom, and stood me in front of the toilet. She pulled down my shorts and compression shorts leaving me exposed. I couldn't help but tear up. I had never been exposed like this in front of anyone. And especially not when I'm tied up. She didn't even untie my hands, she just stood behind me, grabbed, and aimed. I felt ashamed and relieved both at the same time.
After I was done she pulled up my compressions and shorts and carried me into a new room. It had a bed, and I went into panic mode. I thrashed around trying to get loose, but the woman shoved me forward making me loose my balance.
I regained it shortyly after being pushed onto the bed and then getting a gun pointed at my head.
"Lay on your stomach. I'm going to untie you then, retie you to the bed. Do not protest or fight me. I will shoot you. Trust me, I will shoot your brains out and mommy dearest will get you back in a body bag."
She took a knife and cut through the rope and tape binding my wrists. Then ordered me to roll over on my back. Taking a set of steel handcuffs, she took both my wrists and cuffed one side to my left wrist, wrapped the otherside through the knotches in the headboard and then fastened the other side to my right wrist. Then, she sliced the duct tape and peeling it off my legs ripping my leg hair away with it. I just winced in pain. My legs were free, and my shorts and compressions were pulled off, leaving me fully exposed. I tried pulling up my legs to cover myself up, but they were quickly pulled back down and tied to each of the bedposts.
I soon found the woman stripping and standing naked right in front of me. She came over with her panties and a scarf.
"Open up cutie." I shook my head frantically, clamping my mouth shut. She went to pinch my nose closed again, but I found my mouth popping open very quickly, not wanting another asthma attack. She shoved her panties into my mouth and tied the scarf around my head, pulling it tight behind my teeth. No possible way that I could spit it out.
I was rendered helpless. I was fully exposed with the exception of my jersey, and had this womans underwear in my mouth. I couldn't protect myself for what was about to happen next. She climbed on top of me and started playing with my hair. And then on top of that, she was right on top of me. Her parts on my you know what. I felt my jersey being cut away with the knife she held and then I was as naked as a baby. She then did things to me that I couldn't ever imagine. This was my first time, and it was being taken away from me, unwillingly. I let the tears roll as she pumped me in and out of her.
"I laced your water. You have no say in this what so ever. Just lay back and enjoy it."
I fought for a long time, but stopped when she put the knife up to my throat and demanded I clean her. I knew what she meant by that, but I waas to upset to do anything. But I had to or she could kill me. She took out my gag and put her womanhood up to my mouth. I licked as ordered and continued to cry. Shortly after, she got off, and got dressed. She left me there for a minute, just laying there bawling my 16 year old eyes out. When she came back, she untied my legs and slid a pair of my boxers that she grabbed from the house on and then put my shorts back on, leaving me bare chested. I didn't see her pull out a phone and dial a number. But he found the phone up to his ear and a gun pointed at his forehead. He recognized the voice that picked up.
"Hello, who is this?" It was his mother.
"Mommy.." I hadn't called my mom, mommy since I was littler. "Mommy I love you, I'm scared. I wanna come home. They drugged me. And I'm tied up. And she made me do things."
The phone was pulled away from me and the woman took the safety off the gun. Shit just got real. Oh shit oh shit oh shit... This is the end, I'm gonna die.
"MOM!!!!!! MOM!!!! SHE HAS A GUN! MOM SHE'S GOING TO SHOOT ME! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, JUST DO WHATEVER THEY SAY!!!"
The woman yelled at me, telling me to shut up. She shoved the scarf into my mouth and held her hand over it. But I continued to scream. She told my mom somthing that I will never forget.
"Pay the price we told you or your son is dead. I have a gun pressed up to his head right now. Don't under estimate me. Your son is counting on you."
She hung up and kept her hand pressed over my mouth. She grabbed a roll of duct tape and wrapped it around my head as tightly as possible. Then she left. All I could do was cry.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Sat Oct 13, 2012 5:10 am

The woman came back in a short time later and untied Tanner's legs. He was happy he wasn't fully exposed right now. He had his shorts and boxers on at least. Then she uncuffed on side pulled both arms down so they were infront of him and cuffed them back together. Tanner could see where the cuffs were rubbing his skin raw. His hands were now tied in front of him at least. The gag was still tightly in his mouth. The woman tossed him a pair of jeans, last years state basketball shirt, and his baseball pullover. His shoes and socks were pulled off before and Tanner didnt even notice. The woman held up his Nike's and a pair of socks.
"Get dressed, its gonna be a cold night. You'll have to take the shorts off" she said as she chuckled.
Tanner slowly slid his shorts down, still having at least boxers on, and then put his jeans on. She tossed his socks and shoes towards him. He put them on one at a time.
The woman came over and undid the gag.
"How am I supposed to put my shirt on?"
"I'm gonna uncuff you so you can, I mean unless you don't want a shirt."
"Please let me put a shirt on."
She uncuffed both hands and tossed his tshirt first then his pull over. Tanner put them on quickly before she could change her mind. He didn't see the gun. She came over and recuffed his hands in front of him. She had both cuffed, and Tanner bolted. The door was open. He wasn't going to just sit there. Tanner didn't know his way around this house but, he was going to get out. He ran down a flight of stairs and saw the front door.
"Tanner this is a BIG MISTAKE. YOU JUST BROKE A RULE!"
Tanner didn't care about a dumb rule. He was inches away from freedom. He fiddled with the lock and opened the door. He saw a lady acrossed the street.
"Oh my gosh! Please help me. Please you got to help me!"
The woman came out and grabbed Tanner before he could run. She hit a button on her keys and the trunk popped open. She drug Tanner over there and shoved him in the trunk. Before she closed it she whispered, "End of the line"

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Sun Nov 04, 2012 4:28 am

I'm going to finish this, later today.

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby Megan » Tue Jan 22, 2013 2:37 pm

Collins POV
I was sitting in the living room with Uncle Mitch and mom when I asked if I could see the package the people who took my brother sent. At first mom said no, but Uncle Mitch thought maybe if I saw it, maybe I could notice anything out of the ordinary. I let out a gasp when I saw the first picture. I could tell that it was my brother. He had been taped to a pole from what I could see. And I could see a bruise on his forehead. Able to see the fear in his eyes. He was gagged but I could still read his expressions. The first one was the same look he gives Natalie Taylor every time he sees her. That's his VERY VERY hot girl look.
"The kidnapper is a girl."
"How do you know sweetie?"
"That's the Nat Taylor look"
Uncle Mitch asked who Nat Taylor was and mom explained. The next one was the same expression he had tears in his eyes. Meaning he was scared shitless. Tanner NEVER cries. I wish he was back here. I wish we were still at the school playing basketball, eating dinner, hanging out with friends. Just being teen boys. I felt tears coming now.
"Mommy, I want Tanner back."
Uncle Mitch's phone went off and when he got off all he said was we found Tanner. Come with me, we're gonna go get him back. I promise.
Tanner's POV
I'm back in the trunk that I was trying to AVOID. I hope that lady I saw called the cops. I mean, if you saw a kid being shoved into a trunk, wouldn't you call the police? It's just an instant reaction if you ask me. We drove for a few minutes before hitting gravel. A few more minutes and we stopped. The trunk was popped open and there was that man again. I don't like him. I really don't. Now we hoisted me out and stood me up right by him.
"Kid you made a big mistake. I didn't want to have to kill you, but you brought this upon yourself. Now, I'm going to uncuff you and recuff them behind you."
He did what he said he was going to. I couldn't fight him though. He was much larger than the woman and I knew what she was capable of. But not him. Then the woman tossed him a roll of tape and he taped my mouth shut for the last time. He then pulled out a gun and told me to run. I could hear sirens coming our way as I ran away. That's when I felt the pain in my leg. I collapsed and laid there. The pain was so intense I lost vision. I heard the cars driving away and the sirens getting even closer. Soon the sirens were right by me. I could hear my Uncle's voice telling my mother to stay in the car. Then asking if I could hear him. I nodded and he pulled me close. Uncle Mitch said that the ambulance is on the way. I blacked out.

A WEEK LATER
I was released from the hospital a few days after they found me. Mom still cries a lot. Collin has never been happier it seems like. He told me about the whole figuring out my kidnapper was a girl. Uncle Mitch told me that the tip that led to finding me was from his girlfriend. Turns out she was the girl I saw before getting shoved into that trunk again. But even though I'll have scars from this and never forget it, but I have never been so thankful for being alive. Other than being benched due to the bullet I took to my knee, school and basketball are going good. And Natalie Taylor talked to me.

THE END (sorry it took so long. Been REALLY BUSY!)

Re: Tanner gets Kidnapped

Postby martin82 » Thu May 21, 2015 8:22 am

Don“t feel fine with this story, because the boy is an Teenager and the Kidnappers are adults. Although there is to much violence like breath control. Perhaps you think that this is ridiculous, but the rules of the forum are necessary. In my opinion the story should be banned