The pink duct tape.

Postby SelenaGfan » Mon Sep 10, 2012 3:39 am

Is the person tied up m or f?What are they wearing?

Re: The pink duct tape.

Postby VictimNumber1 » Mon Sep 10, 2012 3:59 am

Good story, looking forward to the continuation. As for some constructive feedback, I suggest spacing out the paragraphs so it is easier to read. But other than that, great story.
I just know they're going to tie me up tonight,
They're bound to.

Re: The pink duct tape.

Postby burner59 » Mon Sep 10, 2012 4:47 pm

Great story

If i may be rude (it's a passion XD,) the only problem with this is no indentation, and the paragraphs are not seperated-but great!
Stay gagged,
Burner

Re: The pink duct tape.

Postby guardian741 » Mon Sep 10, 2012 5:25 pm

Awesome story so far! Lexi sounds like a blast! - How old were you guys when this happened? 16? 18?

How bad did Lexi's socks smell? Did she put her bare feet in your face? :shock:


Can't wait for the continuation!

-Guardian

Re: The pink duct tape.

Postby tiedupbballboy » Sun Sep 16, 2012 9:48 pm

Don't listen to the critics sometimes you dont even realize you don't have paragraphs you just type and submit anyway awesome story keep going

Re: The pink duct tape.

Postby Joseph_Mother » Tue Sep 25, 2012 7:55 am

Keep this going. I like it so far
My name's not actually Joseph, it's Sam. My name is a play on "Joe Mama"
YROO XRKSVI! GIRZMTOV!