Today is a normal day in the life of Jenelle Bean a.k.a Beanie. She is a Jr in S High. She is 15 and verry cute. She plays claranet in band and runs track. Her best friends are Christean also 16 and Allison aka alli also 16. When she was younger she and her friends played tugs but no one knew that. And in their spare time they also snoop around. But today will not be a normal day for her, she would snoop to much.
"So did you hear about the robbery at the bank?" asked Allie to Beanie. "Yeah I did, there is this old house that I saw people in that I'm going to look at." Beanie replied. Beanie was wearing a blue sweat-suit, and sneakers.
So after school Beanie went to check out that house she told Allie about. So she sneaks around the house and looks in a window to see what she could see, and what she sees is a bed full of cash. She turns to run to tell the cops what she saw. But before she dose, she is grabbed from behind and a cloth with a sweet smeling substance coming from it. She tries to fight it but it's no good. Before long she is knocked out cold.
She comes too, she tries to move but she soon noticed that she is tied to a chair. Her hands are tied to the back of the chair, her feet are tied to the legs of the chair. Ropes are tied around above and below her breasts, her knees are tied togeather but her feet are tied apart. She tries to yell but all that comes out is "MMMMMMMMMMPPPPPPPPPPPHHHHHHHH" She is gagged with a sock or a cloth or something and there is duct tape wrapped around her head like 6 or 7 times. She looks down and sees that her shoes have been taken off and so its her socked feet out there.
END OF PART 1
Will like feed back as this being my first post of a story ever.
Should I add Allie or Christen?