Help flesh out the details

Postby Drummerboy » Tue Apr 05, 2016 12:04 am

I am thinking about writing a story about someone who wakes up bound and gagged with no memory of who they are or how they got there. As it reveals, they are set to become a bondage slave and the story starts of day one of their training. I have a few ideas of what will take place, but I am in need of suggestions. Keep in mind the story will most likely be PG-17, so something in the vein of that.I am also thinking more warehouse/clean asylum than dungeon.

What I need suggestion wise:
- Main character/slave (Age, Name, M/F)
- Master or Mistress (or both),
- Bondage/slave training activities
- 1st or 3rd person POV

Anything that might help would be greatly appreciated. Feel free to either comment or PM me with your ideas. Everything will be considered and appreciated. Thanks.

Re: Help flesh out the details

Postby AlexUSA » Tue Apr 05, 2016 1:07 am

Age: somewhere from 18-40, male or female
Dom: either gender again
Activities: increasing gags from simple to complex, etc.
View: 1st, maybe alternating to 3rd to explain details about things that happen out of view if at all doing that
I rite on a tabblit, so speling errurs will hap pin free quintly.

Re: Help flesh out the details

Postby Indianjones » Wed Apr 13, 2016 3:39 am

The plot of "Ihbat" from talesoftheveils is exactly like this. For the other details ;

Age ; 16-24 years. Catch 'em young and train them over time.
Master/Mistress ; Depending on the story if it is a "forbidden kingdom" style setting or a historical setting.
Bondage/slave training ; Increasing bondage over time, keeping the slave in some form of bondage for most of the day.
I am biased towards 1st person.