Walked in the Wrong House

Postby 10Fingers88KeysNP » Mon Jul 30, 2012 4:58 pm

My first story after lurking around this site and finally making a profile:D

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Jace laughed as he ran away from the windows of his school bus where his friends were pelting pebbles at him. Jace hollered an insult, but doubted they could hear him as the bus started to speed away noisily. He shook his head with a smile. The school day was boring, as usual, but the bus ride home was enjoyable.

He jogged into his home, which was just in front of the bus stop. The solid white double-doors flew open to reveal an empty house-the usual. He was 16, a sophomore in high school. His only sibling, Jenna, had graduated and lived at the college campus a dozen miles down the road. His parents both worked at the same place and didn't get off till 6, leaving him every day after school 3 and a 1/2 hours alone.

Jace chucked his Nike backpack onto the kitchen table and instantly opened the fridge. He found nothing instantly appetizing and checked the cupboards. Nothing in them sounded appetizing either, so he checked the fridge again with lowered standards and retrieved some leftover chocolate pudding. With his dessert in his hand, he bolted downstairs to his bedroom.

Downstairs, Jace heard thumping sound of bass speakers playing very loudly in a room down there. Their house was large. Large enough to have a room in the house, blaring with heavy metal music and not be heard in another room. Jace had no clue who would be home at this hour, and walked over. The closer he got, the music became louder. He stopped right outside the origin of the music: the mini-movie theater they owned with sound-deadening walls. He put his ear to the door and finally recognized the song: Party Rock Anthem. He hated that song. He heard people shouting and laughing, rambunctiously.

Jace stood there for a good ten minutes, just listening. When, with no warning sign, the door he had his ear on suddenly opened. He instinctively took a step back when his sister, Jenna, appeared in the door way. Her face, seeing him there, was just as surprised as he was to see her.

"Jace! Oh my I forgot you were...is it already 2:30?" Jenna started to sputter the words out.

"What are you doin..." Jace started to question when Jenna lunged over to him and put her hand over his mouth.

"Sh sh sh sh...you have to promise me you won't be tell mom and dad about this...party..." She removed her hand. Jace looked at the floor for a moment before responding.

"What will I get in return?" He asked cunningly, eyeing his sister. She rolled her eyes.

"I'm not gonna be black-mailed by my little brother." Jenna retorted, slightly annoyed and slightly humored. Jace laughed, realizing he had a bargaining situation in his hands.

"If I don't get something in return, I'm gonna rat you..." Again, Jenna shoved her hand over his mouth.

"Jace, you're not gonna tell mom, got it?" She commanded sternly. Jace rolled her eyes and laughed in his hand-gag.

The two of them didn't do anything for a couple seconds then, they just stared at each other."Well..." Jenna broke the silence, and sorta giggled. She then eyed him and tried to cover up a smile. "Well, I guess I don't have a choice, do I?" She asked rhetorically. She turned around, and went back into the theater. "Wait here." She ordered just before she entered.

Jace just stood there with a confidence that he had beaten her and he wasn't going to let his sister go without fulfilling her debt. He smiled and set his dessert on the ground and folded his arms.

No more than a minute later, Jenna returned. Following her were to other college guys. Jenna retained a straight, emotion-less face while the two guys couldn't help but idiotically smile for some unknown reason. The trio stopped right in front of Jace. "The only time I get to have a party in this enormous house is during the day, and I don't want you ruining it." Jace took a step back when his sister snarled at him. "Get him haha!" Jenna ordered her two followers.

The two guys were quick. Real quick. They lunged at him and instantly brought Jace to the floor. They turned him onto his stomach, and one guy sat on his back and grabbed his head and hand-gagged him. The other guy took off back into the theater and returned within seconds holding a chair with duct-tape and zip-ties. The guys picked up Jace with ease and set him onto the chair. "What are you doing?!" Jace yelled at his sister.

"I already told you!" She laughed in reply. With the strength and speed of the two guys, Jace's arms were pinned to the arms of the chairs and were zip-tied down. They did the same thing with his legs. Jace was strong and muscular, but his furious struggling wasn't anything more than vibrating his limbs as now he had been zip-tied at the ankles (one at each chair leg), below the knees, a large tie was at his thighs (securing him onto the chair), chest, wrists, and elbows.

"Yeah!" Jenna clapped her hands in giddy. Now that her brother was secure, she went over and hand-gagged him until her guys secured his permanent gag. Now, the two boys were securing each zip-tie with layers of duct-tape: creating impenetrable bonds. The only thing that Jace had the capability to do was MMPPHHing into his sister's hand.

"Get the ball-gag." Jenna ordered and one of the guys retrieved it from his pocket. Jace didn't allow him to secure it on but clamping his mouth shut, but he plugged his nose until Jace was forced by default to let him secure it.

Finished, Jenna took a step in front of her brother and admired her plan. "Now that I have you out of the way, here's the deal: I don't plan on doing cleaning up this party for another three hours. I promise, I'll pay you $200 if you don't tell mom or dad. Shake your head yes or no if you agree." Jace looked down at the floor first to think before shaking his head. "I'm sorry I had to do this, but it's the only way I'll be able to assure you won't secretly record this or anything." Jace rolled his eyes. She giggled. "Well, now that we have an understanding, I'll put you away." She turned to her guys, "Put him into his room." The guys lifted him up and brought him into the very center of his room just down the hall. They set him down and Jenna came up to him and flicked Jace's skin-tight shirt. "By the way, you look cute in this." She giggled. "Have fun!" She shouted as the three of them left the room and closed the door.

As soon as the door closed, Jace began to furiously pull at his doubly reinforced bonds. He did this, almost falling at times, for a good twenty minutes before he gave up. He had no progress and he didn't expect to have any. So, instead, he sat there, staring onto the blank wall of his room, sullen, and only filled with rage in his situation.

Another half-hour passed and Jace decided to try to sleep, but his mind was too busy to even consider sleep. So, once agian, he only tried to pull at his bonds.

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Jace suspected at least two hours had gone by, with absolutely nothing to do but sulk, when the door opened. It was Jenna and two girls accompanying her. They started giggling as soon as they entered.

"You're right," One of the girls said, "He IS cute!"

Jace instantly turned bright read. As the girls circled him, he knew what was coming. The torture time.

"I'll throw in another $50..." Jenna said under her breath, just before the three of them lunged in, tickling him in every tickling spot possible. Unfortunate for Jace, he was extremely ticklish. He started to resist so hard that his chair fell backwards onto the floor, leaving the girls roaring with laughter, even more so than before.

This tickle torture went on for a good 45 minutes until Jenna decided it was time to hurry and clean everything up and they raced out of the room. They still didn't untie Jace or even lift him from the ground from his fallen state.

Twenty minutes later Jenna came back in with a camera. "Hang in there for just a little bit longer!" She brightly smiled and wasted no time in taking pictures, as Jace could tell she was in a rush. She took one of him in every angle and every distance. "Blackmail and for laughs!" She said, into his ears. Jace turned red again as he imagined the blackmail possibilities.

After the countless pictures, Jenna began to quickly cut his hand bonds with scissors then set them on his lap. "You can cut the rest, I gotta go." And she ran out the door.

Not ten minutes later did he free himself his parents arrived, and Jace couldn't believe he had to hold his toungue. However, his anger did leave a little when he found $250 in cash on his bed...;D

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Last edited by 10Fingers88KeysNP on Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Walked in the Wrong House

Postby Chase Ricks » Mon Jul 30, 2012 11:56 pm

Excellent story sir so far for your first one here. As the creator of two rp characters here that have the same first two names as your main characters, I only ask that if your characters are based off of people you know before joining that you say so. Otherwise I have no complaints on this well written piece of literature.
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Re: Walked in the Wrong House

Postby xtc » Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:42 am

Good writing, if a little formal at times. (Dear pot, love kettle!) May I point out a couple of typos as it would be a shame to have them spoil such an entertaining piece?
"They still didn't untie Jake . . ."
"Or lifted him from the ground. "
"chair fell backwards onto the chair"
I hope you don't hink this is too picky but, if I may criticise at a higher level (which your writing deserves), I wonder how she produced the handy ball-gag. Not the usual type of thing kept in a party room. Although . . .

I look forward to reading the next piece that you would like to share.
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Re: Walked in the Wrong House

Postby Scottstud94 » Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:47 am

Great story!

Re: Walked in the Wrong House

Postby Jack Roper » Tue Jul 31, 2012 2:32 pm

Yes, 10 Fingers, very good story. I doubt that many peeps on here would object to making $250 that way!

Re: Walked in the Wrong House

Postby sarumansauron » Wed Aug 01, 2012 3:54 pm

Great story! Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Walked in the Wrong House

Postby 10Fingers88KeysNP » Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:59 pm

Chase Ricks wrote:Excellent story sir so far for your first one here. As the creator of two rp characters here that have the same first two names as your main characters, I only ask that if your characters are based off of people you know before joining that you say so. Otherwise I have no complaints on this well written piece of literature.


The name Jace was just a cool name I decided to use, but the name Jenna is from my similar-aged cousin. I used her for my representation, in my mind anyway.

Re: Walked in the Wrong House

Postby 10Fingers88KeysNP » Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:02 pm

xtc wrote:Good writing, if a little formal at times. (Dear pot, love kettle!) May I point out a couple of typos as it would be a shame to have them spoil such an entertaining piece?
"They still didn't untie Jake . . ."
"Or lifted him from the ground. "
"chair fell backwards onto the chair"
I hope you don't hink this is too picky but, if I may criticise at a higher level (which your writing deserves), I wonder how she produced the handy ball-gag. Not the usual type of thing kept in a party room. Although . . .

I look forward to reading the next piece that you would like to share.



Thanks for the advice, and I'll fix the errors:) However, to tell you the truth, I didn't really think that in depth about this story (in response to the ball-gag). You see, I was actually in a rush to write this as I had to leave on a trip, but wanted to get some kind of story up before I left. Hasty, I know, but in my mind a goal.