STAR WARS CLONE WARS To Ilum we go The untold story part 1

Postby mistofoleese » Sat Sep 13, 2008 6:02 pm

Hello everyone the story your about to read was a joint effort by myself and another who asked me to help write a few stories with her
Cannuk I hope the violence isnt too much but hey you cant have a good starwars fan fic /tug story without a fire fight or lightsaber duel
Here was the insparation for our story
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mxM1yHkV ... re=related


Here is OUR version enjoy


The Blue Holo image of Master yoda shown brightly illuminating the tiny crew cabin of Senator Padme Amidalas ship LIBERTY.Aalya listeing intently as padme and C-3PO entered the cabin, the golden protocol droids servo motors filling the cabin with a small whine.
Be wary my young jedi,Yoda said. "Keen must you be. The answers you seek, soon show themselves they will .

Ah Senator Amidala, I was just telling Aalya Secura on guard you must be.Oh dont Worry master Yoda I'll be alright she said with a smile.
Heed my words Senator,take instructions from Aalya you must. Keep you from harm they will."l Yoda said with a smile. IF ANYONE could find trouble on a routine mission such as this it woud be Padme. Yoda knew this to be true when the young senator volunteered to go. At first Yoda balked at the idea it was only after Aalya had agreed to go along did yoda allow it.
Very well then contact me you shall when the temple you reach. May The Force Be with you. Yoda said as his image faded.

As the Liberty entered the Ilum system Padme started checking the instemments Hmm this is really strange she said as she looked over the controls Whats wrong Aalya sid her left lekku twitching a bit
I am getting no reading what so ever from the temple power output Padme said checking her readings.
Maybe we are too far away from Ilum yet Aalya replied.
As the Liberty entered Ilums atmosphere, all seemd quiet too quiet.
Far down below on the surface others had already noticed the morning visitor.
As the Chameleon droid optical reticle zoomed in on the approaching ship it transmitted its finding.

In Count Dookos private chamber the Holo image of Nute Gunray appered
WHAT IS IT NOW GUNRAY, The count bellowed "My lord a ship has entered the Ilum system and at this time heading directly for the temple as you predicted."
Ah splendid, I knew this would work anythng else?
Yes my lord the ship is the LIberty Senator Amidala's ship what are your orders?"Count Dookoo was silent for several moments. "This could work to our advantage, yes she will make a valuable hostage and will no doubt give the leverage I need. You will capture her but see that no harm comes to her or her jedi allies is that understood."
"Yes my lord it shall be as you command>" Nute Gunray replied bowing low as Dookoo's image faded

As the Liberty touched down, Padme and Aalya changed in their cold weather suits. The only differecne between them was that due to Aayla's lekku she wore no head covering.
"Mistress Padme" 3PO said stepping forward."I think it would be a good Idea if I was to stay behind and guard the ship." The two women exhanged smiles as Padme shook her head. "C'mon 3PO if we have to go out inthe cold SO do you."
On a ridge overlooking the landing zone a snow covered battledroid popped his head up looking through his sniper scope he followed the small party for a moment with his scope then radioed in
"BTRX 369684 have spoted senator Amidala the jedi kight Aalya securea and a gold protocal droid they are 500 meters from the temple and closing rapidly"
"ROGER ROGER" we shall be waiting for them
As Aalya 3PO and Padme entered the temple all was strangely quiet.
Out of instinct, Aalya hand moved to her lightsaber hilt a she looked around.
3PO trying to keep pace with the jedi knight, didnt notice Padme lagging a bit behind.
I have a BAAAD Feeling about this 3PO said as he looked about
So do I Padme said waking a bit faster so do MMMMMMMMMMMMPPPPPHHHHHHH
without warning a Chameloen Droid suddenly decloaked wrapping steel bands around padme she was rendered completly silent and immobile in an instant as fast as the chamelion droid had appeared it disaperaed skitterring up high intothe temple ceiling.
Mistress Padme, Mistress Padme Aalya raced back to where Padme had just been ignighted lightsaber in hand she saw the marks on the wall
CHAMELEON DROIDS she growled.
OH NO threepio whailed Mistress padme has been captured.

Postby Godzillaman » Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:21 pm

At least keep it in one thread... :roll:
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