SHOPPING TRIP GONE WRONG

Postby abductionfan » Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:20 pm

I live in a neighborhood that is upscale compared to where i was, not many people will talk to newcomers; so one day sitting in the mall food court i see a girl who at a guess would say is about 15, she was alone and noticed me sitting there and comes up and says hi. I say hello back, tell her my name is Rob, she says her name is Mia; and says she is 15.Mia was wearing a light colored green skirt with straps over the shoulders of her white blouse, long brownish hair. As we sat and talked awhile, she says i looked familiar; i told her where i moved to, she happily said she lived right across the street from me. What a small road i said, and asked her what people did around here for fun. Her reply was that she spent most of her time alone shopping, walking; because none of her friends liked her passion for being tied up. I was shocked, and asked how she got into those type of games. She said that she saw this on the internet, tried it and thought it was fun.Further on she told me about her fear of being kidnapped; being taken miles away and never seeing her family again.With me not telling her i was in hiding for a kidnapping attempt, i started thinking about trying it again. As we kept talking, her mom comes up and says it was time to go home; asked Mia who i was, Mia said that my name was Rob, he just moved in the house across the street from us. Her mom said thats nice, we got to go. We say goodbye and off they went. I headed home myself a few minutes later with the thought of taking her and going to the old warehouse i bought 500 miles away.



Two weeks go by, i kind of sit home planning out a way to get Mia tied and gagged drive to my old warehouse where she would be kept bound and gagged only to be allowed to go to the restroom and shower.One afternoon i heard her arguing with her mom about not going with her out of town on Saturday, so; her mom says fine, you can stay home alone to go shopping again, but you will walk the mile to the mall and be back home before dark. Mia says fine mom and heads off for a walk. I head off to the garage and see if i had rope,so; i put it all in the back of my van with duct tape and zip ties; drove off to see which way Mia went to see if i could find a place to park on saturday to take her. Finding a place, i parked and watched seeing how much traffic drives by which to my surprise was maybe 3 cars in an hours time. So, driving back home; i see Mia just getting home, waving hi she says hi and waves back as she goes inside.I go inside saying to myself, just two more days Mia; and you will be on your way to a new home.





Saturday morning around 8, i am wide awake watching as Mia walks out with her mom to the car in her green skirt and white shirt, hugs her mom goodbye saying she will be going to the mall around noon. Her mom says be back before dark and drives away.Just before noon, i am in my van getting ready to go gas it up for the long trip after i kidnap Mia; when she walks up and asks me for a ride to the mall, surprised i said hop in and she gives me directions thru side streets to the mall that no houses are on; saying that she always walks home this way whenever she walks from the mall. Making mental notes, i find another place to park and wait,as we reach the mall; being nice i asked if she wanted me to come back and give her a ride back home. Mia said thanks, but she liked walking back that way and hopped out waving goodbye an walked into the mall.I drive off and gas up, then head back to the deserted neighborhood to get ready. Parking behind some thick trees, i get ready for my victim to come walking by.After about 4 hours, i am hid behind a tree when i see Mia heading my way; so i make sure the side door is open and no traffic is visible;i pull a black ski mask over my face and zip up the black coveralls and as Mia gets right in front of me, her phone rings and she tells her mom she is 5 minutes from home and hangs up.So, as she puts her phone away with her back to me; i jump out and clamp my hand over her mouth grabbing her around the waist pinning her arms with the other, i say in her ear to stay quiet; and you will not be hurt.Mia nods her head yes, as i pick her up and carry her to my van opening the side door, and stepping inside still carrying her i slide the door shut.




Once inside, i take her bags and lay them aside; i say that she would be safe as long as she did what she was told, then told Mia what was going to happen. First, i need you to give me your phone; she did, now i am going to take my hand away from your mouth so no screaming. She stayed quiet, as i told her to put her hands behind her back; as she did i took a piece of duct tape and put it over her mouth sealing her lips, followed by 4 more pieces covering from her chin to below her nose. Then taking a piece of rope, i tie her hands together tight by wrapping it around the wrists and between cinching it tight and knotting it off out of reach of her fingers. Then, to be safe; take the duct tape and tape her fingers together making sure she would not get untied before taking the other rope and tying her ankles together and laying her face down on the floor of the van and using another rope to secure her down so she would not roll around and get hurt. Before heading off, i look in the bags, seeing more clothes; sit them in the passenger floorboard taking her phone and tossing it in the brush in case there was a GPS. tracker on it. Satisfied, i get up front and start driving the 500 miles to show Mia her new home.

Re: SHOPPING TRIP GONE WRONG

Postby abductionfan » Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:27 pm

Hope you like this first part,this is for Mia Tied Up with her permission.Hope you like it Mia.

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Postby Jason Toddman » Sun Jan 11, 2015 8:09 pm

Well, at least you broke it up into some paragraphs this time. cheers
Now, could you break this up into smaller paragraphs? They're still a wee bit unwieldy here.
I'm not trying to be a jerk here; just trying to help you make your stories more readable and help you get more positive feedback.
You should start a new paragraph every time there's a change in subject, such as when time passes or a different person is speaking or doing something from the line before.
Such as I've been doing here with these paragraphs.
They don't have to be this short of course (unless there's lots of dialog); but more than five or six lines (of the long width ofthis screen) per paragraph is usually pushing it.
That's it; I won't bother you about it again. I promise. :D
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: SHOPPING TRIP GONE WRONG

Postby abductionfan » Sun Jan 11, 2015 9:50 pm

Thanks again Jason, i will follow your advice and; i dont think youre being a jerk i consider it constructive critism and anything that will help me i appreciate it

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Postby SelenaGfan » Mon Jan 12, 2015 4:45 am

Can't wait to see more. Wish Mia wore hose.

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Postby Tieup1 » Mon Jan 12, 2015 10:51 am

A nice start to the story, look forward to reading more :)

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Postby abductionfan » Mon Jan 12, 2015 1:52 pm

Thanks i hope to get some more done tonight

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Postby abductionfan » Mon Jan 12, 2015 6:01 pm

Driving half the distance to my warehouse, i stop at some other property i leased out; and switch vans to make sure i had not been seen. This van is a box van which has hooks bolted to the floor,which after letting Mia use the bathroom in the shed i drove into so she had no chance to see her surroundings. The whole building has no windows at all,i untied her hands; let her go to the bathroom, gave her a sandwich and water; leaving her ankles tied; let her eat before picking her up and laying her down in the box van re tied each wrist to the hooks which caused her arms to be in a y position, untied her ankles and retied each the same as her wrists, making Mia stretched out spread eagle.


After telling her we had about another 3 hours to go; which would put us reaching the warehouse at around 2 in the morning. Mia asked me why i was doing this, i assured her it was not sexual; she would not be sexually touched, not even fondled; it was all for a ransom from her mom.Mia saw that i was going to use the tape to re gag her with, she asked me not to because it was hard to breathe. So, i remembered her shopping bags full of clothes; looked in them and found new pairs of socks and pantyhose, as well as scarves she had bought. Taking a pair of the new socks, i rolled them up and stuffed them in her mouth, taking a scarf and tying the socks in place by cleave gagging them in with the scarf behind her teeth; wrapping it around her head and knotting it off in between her teeth making sure she could not get it out. With another scarf, and a sleep mask out of her bags, i blindfold her before i drive off again for the warehouse.


Thinking about how i was going to keep Mia secure at the warehouse, i remembered the zip ties and that there was an old table in there; and an old heavy metal chair that i could bolt to the floor so it could not be tipped over. And, if she tried to escape or anything; there is an overhead chain hoist that would come in handy. For the next 2 hours, i plan on how to send an untraceable ransom demand to her mom, i remembered another old thing in the warehouse office being a typewriter that was really old, so i had that part figured out but; how to get the money without being caught.Before i could think about that, i arrive at the gate to the driveway back; get out unlock it, and re lock it behind me driving to the warehouse a mile back open the overhead door and drive inside.


Before getting Mia out of the van, i go to the table to get it ready for her to be tied down to. This table was solid from head to just below where your bottom would rest with 2 long extensions for whatever it was used for, but; works good for tying someones legs to, and they open outward spreading so that they could not use their feet to try getting free. Taking more ropes, i tie one to each spot for each leg; so i go and get Mia untied from the van, and help her walk to the table still being gagged and blindfolded; and lift her up and then help her lay on her back telling her we were where she will be until her mom pays, as i tie each ankle to the bars after stripping her shoes and socks off so the ropes will stay in place. With that done, i move to her wrists and tie them crossed in front and take them above her head before tying the rope off under the table.Lastly, i go to her feet, and spread the bars apart about twice my shoulder width and secure them in place so they would not be moved. I said i would be close in case she needed the bathroom later and went to the corner and sat back plotting the ransom demand and drop.

Re: SHOPPING TRIP GONE WRONG

Postby Tieup1 » Tue Jan 13, 2015 11:57 am

Nice continuation :)

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Postby abductionfan » Tue Jan 13, 2015 9:33 pm

The first day of keeping Mia in her warehouse home for who knows how long started off with me leaving her alone still tied to the table exactly as i tied her the night before, i go out and find a queen size bed; and buy it to make her stay more comfortable for her.With the bags of clothes she bought at the mall, i never had to buy them; but, i did buy bathroom needs, soap; shampoo' tooth paste, she also had bought her monthly needs while shopping yesterday. My last stop was for food, no clue what she likes; so, i bought a lot of different thing that needs to be cooked, as well as snack foods while i allow her to have her hands untied to eat. Also, i bought a television and made sure the cable still had service to monitor the movements of the search for Mia.


Returning to the warehouse, i go in and tell Mia that as long as she does what i say; i will let her shower and use the bathroom and eat a bite. She nodded,so i untied her hands first helping her sit up. I take off the blindfold but leave her gagged for now.I untie her feet and help Mia stand til she gets her balance. I ask if she likes sleeping with her legs open that wide, or; did it hurt too bad. Removing the gag, she said it hurt, caused her legs to cramp. My reply was, good; now you know one way you will be bound if you disobey what i say.I show Mia where her bags are, tell her to get a change of clothes give her a new towel i picked up, all the bathroom supplies i got walk her to the shower in the middle of the area we are in. Mia looks at the open shower, then at me; i giggled at that and put up the new curtain for privacy and as i walked away i say just look up above you Mia, and see what that overhead hoist looks like, any time you try an escape' you will see after you shower and eat what i mean for an hour.


While Mia took her shower, i sat her in the heavy chair that is bolted to the floor; noticing the new outfit she put on which was a light green shirt, and another green skirt. The new one was a little darker green. Nice i said, and bent down and zip tied her right ankle to the leg of the chair; moving up to her knee; and doing the same to the top part of the chair leg. Moving to the left side and repeating the process there, i follow that up with a 3 foot cable tie and secure her stomach area to the back of the chair, being satisfied i place a folding table in front of her and tell her to enjoy what food she can, i guessed at what you would like to eat; now, i have to set up your new bed and get started hooking up the television so we can see later on if you are being looked for yet and walked away.


Mia said she was finished and needed to use the bathroom again, so i go and cut her free; follow her to the bathroom and wait outside the door again; telling her to be quick i need to get busy. Mia comes back out, so taking her by the arm we walk back towards her food table; i show her where the trash goes, and told her she needed to clean up after eating. Mia done what she was told, bringing back the fork and spoon; but no knife. I noticed this, and; tell her to put her hands out in front of her palms together. She does, and i take some rope and tie her hands together again tight, then her ankles, i tied to a rope i ran through a metal pipe about 3 feet wide. Making sure the pipe does not cut her i put her over my shoulder, feeling what i knew i would in her waist band under her skirt and shirt. Sitting her on the floor again below the hoist overhead, i tell her this is where you will be tied if you try anything, and start to lower the hook just above her head; and ask if she has anything to tell me before i hook her up. At first, she says no; but after i blindfold her again; she says yes; and raises her skirt up showing the new bikini bottoms she bought and pulls out the knife and hands it to me. Well, that will cost you an hour at least here hoisted up til you are on your tip toes.Hooking the hook to her wrists rope, i raise it up til her arms are straight above her head, then i take her dirty socks this time stuff them in her mouth and taking a roll of medical bandage cleave gag her deep behind her teeth again, i say to Mia that this is what it feels like to be suspended off the floor and raise her off the floor about 3 feet; then lower her down til the pipe between her feet rest in the stand and i lower her down so the feet are above her head a bit it causes the skirt to ride up showing the new pink bikini bottom i raise her back up til she is laying out almost level and say that i will be back in an hour to check on her before moving to the t.v. and hook it all up to see if she has been reported missing.

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Postby tony2 » Tue Jan 13, 2015 10:50 pm

Is that what happens when she shops at a strip mall?
If you believe in yourself enough -
nobody else will figure out you're faking it.


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Re: SHOPPING TRIP GONE WRONG

Postby abductionfan » Tue Jan 13, 2015 10:59 pm

Not sure what that comment means, but; this story is NOT sexually oriented,so; if anyone does not like it, you dont have to read it. No sexual content will be in this!!!!!

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Postby tony2 » Wed Jan 14, 2015 2:57 am

Relax --- never intended to presume you were leading in that direction. You have a cute story going. i just was thinking this cute girl was a little dense in looking out for herself. OK?
If you believe in yourself enough -
nobody else will figure out you're faking it.


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Re: SHOPPING TRIP GONE WRONG

Postby abductionfan » Wed Jan 14, 2015 3:02 am

OK, sorry man; its just some people instantly think that way. Sorry for reacting that way, i am glad you like it.

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Postby Tieup1 » Wed Jan 14, 2015 4:21 pm

Another good chapter :)

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Postby abductionfan » Wed Jan 14, 2015 6:06 pm

Thanks,will do more tonight.

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Postby abductionfan » Wed Jan 14, 2015 7:49 pm

After a half hour after Mia tried hiding a knife and being tied and suspended above the floor; i finally have the bed set up ant the television all hooked up. I go and release Mia, asking her if she was ready to earn my trust a little at a time and maybe not be so restricted every day.Mia says yes, but; can we start by not being gagged so much?? I agree, and let her do her thing at the bathroom; when she finishes, i show her the bed she would be sleeping in, so she could have some comfort while she is here. Mia said she likes the bed after testing the softness,as we sit there waiting for the news to come on; we talked about what foods she liked, what she did for fun; boyfriend??? No she said to the boyfriend, friends very few; shopping was her idea of fun and most any food she loved as long as it was not wild game. I laughed at that, and she asked me why i kidnapped her, all the other girls in that area; you chose me.


I start off by saying that she was the first girl i have ever taken, why?? Well, you were so open from the time you sat at the food court in the mall, to asking me that day for a ride to the mall.I guess i figured if you were here for a long period of time, we would at least talk, unless you force me to gag you again. Mia says no way, i know you will keep me tied up, but; i promise no more being crazy like that so i can keep from being gagged. I say that is fair, but; if i need to leave for a couple hours, you will be gagged until i get back. Mia agreed, and we continue talking til the news came on; as we both sat and watched to see if after 2 days her mom has reported her missing. To my surprise, there was nothing about her being abducted or even missing on the news. I look at Mia, and she looks back at me and says that her mom will probably not report me missing until the school contacts her asking why i have been missing school days.


We sit and eat a good dinner, i let her shower again while i write up a letter to send her mom, showing it to her when she finishes her shower; she sees no money amount written down yet, so; Mia writes in a $ 500,000 number for her return puts it in the envelope and seals it closed. I ask her address and zip code she gives it to me and lays down in the middle of the queen bed on her back.Now around 11 pm, i almost let Mia go to bed without being tied, but she requested being tied; and pulls another knife from the waist band of her sleep shorts and gives it to me. I just looked, and asked if there were anymore she had hidden, Mia stands up and tells me to search her, so; using the back of my hands, i do a quick check and make her prove that she has nothing under her shorts. Mia pulls her shorts down, turns in her panties showing nothing hidden and pull her shorts back up and lays back down on the middle of the bed.


I already had gotten some ropes tied at each corner of the bed; so, i start with her wrists, tied to each corner then her feet, making sure she was tied tight. Then, to her surprise; i put a pair of gloves on her hands and tape them on so her fingers will be no use in trying to get free. I then take another rope, and tie it across her hips to the bottom of the bed so all the movement there was is her head. Mia asked if i could put the pillows under her head, i placed 2 of them under her head, and put a blanket over her.As i start to walk away, Mia ask me to sit by the bed for awhile and talk, at least til she fell asleep. Another hour, we talked; laughed and watched a movie on t.v.; it gets quiet after the movie was over; looking over i see that Mia is sound asleep, checking the ropes; i decide to change them; and get a set of ankle cuffs, and a chain about 6 foot long untie her ankles and cuff one to the bed frame; securing the chain with a padlock. Then, pulling the cover off, i cut the rope off holding her to the bed, untie her wrists after her showing no more surprises hidden on her, i feel around the bed, in the pillows finding nothing, i go and sit in the shadows and watch what she may do through the night if anything.


After hours of watching, i turn the t.v. on facing away from Mia and watch it and doze off myself. I was woken up by Mia hollering that she needs to go to the bathroom badly. I get up and unlock the cuff from her ankle as she runs to the bathroom. I ask what she wants for breakfast, she says cereal is fine again and i set it out for her and the milk, juice. I sit across from her and make sure she does not try to hide any more possible weapons from me. As she cleans up her mess, she raises her shirt and shows nothing hidden this time and giggles at me. Laughing back, i follow her to the bed and as she makes it, i re cuff her ankle, she sits down and asks why i have not tied her again yet today; i said that this will be all unless she mis behaves, or i need to leave for awhile and grab a longer chain so she can reach the bathroom on her own.Mia says thank you, and asks to watch t.v. with me so we sit back and watch whatever she chose to watch and the rest of the day was pretty easy going.

Re: SHOPPING TRIP GONE WRONG

Postby abductionfan » Fri Jan 16, 2015 11:31 am

After 4 weeks of me kidnapping Mia, and holding her in my old warehouse; she still has not been reported missing, even after sending a ransom demand to her mom at home; so, i send a copy to her work and to the police as well as to Mia:s school. Mia and me have gotten along pretty well since being here; she loves to talk; tells me with her mom always being on the road working and no other family she sits at home alone working out; out of the blue one day, i see her doing leg exercises when Mia asks me to help her with some stretching. Not thinking, i agree; as Mia lays down on her back and lifts her legs up one at a time tells me to push them up as far as i can until she says let them down. This goes on for an hour, we stopped and i tell Mia i need to leave for a couple hours to go shopping for food and things we need, she asks me if i would pick her up a couple pairs of workout shorts, gives me her size; i tie her to the chair, and gag her until i get back and head off.


Now, i have kind of figured out that Mia has an escape planned; so, i set up a trap outside that will let me know when and if i am right. I have a web of ropes covered by dirt around the building with trip wires to once tripped will snare whatever up above the ground sounding an alarm inside to let me know where, and; others covering shallow holes about 8 foot deep to close around her and easily go to the bottom of the holes and rest about a foot above the bottom. With this done and ready, i go shopping and return with food, water; soda, juices as well as 6 different pairs of the shorts Mia requested, untie her and take the gag off, we ate dinner, watched the news which this time a picture of Mia was on with a copy of the ransom letter the school reported they received asking if anyone knew about it, to contact the police which said they also got the same letter.Mia looked at me and says i told you mom would not report it until someone else did first,got up went to the shower as i cleaned up the dinner mess; when she returned, asked to watch another movie; we sat and watched something like Twilight. As it ends, i reach for the leg cuff; Mia asks to not be cuffed, says i can trust her; she has not tried to run away yet; so, seeing she has a pair of the shorts on i just got her, i said o.k., i will trust you and walk away to the chair across the warehouse and sit behind the computer monitor to click on the cameras that were also added and act like after an hour i fall asleep.


Hearing Mia moving around, i see her on the cameras; making her way to a door that she found; and slips outside thinking she is home free walks the side of the building, making sure she sees me still inside and heads towards one of the nets set up to lift her up above the ground; steps on the tripwire and up she goes with a scream. I wait a few minutes before going and i grab some ropes, walk outside look at her, i tell her that now she will be tied up all the time except for her showers, lower the net down; Mia struggles to try and run, but to no avail; i grab her and tie her hands behind her, sit her down tie her ankles and picking her up over my shoulder carry her back inside to a little room i set up in a different corner.Mia begs me to not leave her in here alone, as i untie her hands and retie them in front of her, lay her on a homemade table tie her hands above her head to the wheel, tie her feet to the other end, turn the wheel stretching her out flat, then taking some scarves, stuu her mouth full; tie another in behind her teeth tightly, tighten the wheel another turn, lock it in place tell Mia that now there was no trust, so; be ready to remain tied up every minute of her stay turn the light off and lock the door leaving her in the dark room.


Thinking i trusted her, i sat up the whole night wondering why she did this; i got online and read some of the comments people were saying about her being kidnapped. Some believed it, while others including her mom thought it was her running away. So, i guess some photos would need to be sent to prove it is a kidnapping. A girl from her school, posted that she found a phone where the abduction happened, called the police who took the phone trying to see who it belonged to. After a few days, they confirmed it was Mia:s phone, and started searching for her a lot harder than before.After Mia being tied in that dark room for the last few days, i bring her out, allow her a shower and eat before being retied to the corner posts of the bed, Mia repeatedly saying she was sorry for trying to escape, i said that she will not try it again; keeping her tied up will be her punishment but i would not gag her for awhile. Mia thanks me, i turn the t.v. and we watch more news of her abduction as she falls asleep.

Re: SHOPPING TRIP GONE WRONG

Postby abductionfan » Sat Jan 17, 2015 6:19 pm

After another 3 weeks pass, Mia;s mom still has not responded to the ransom demand; Mia looks at me and says that her mom would not answer the letter i sent,what will you do with me if she does not respond?? I said that i don;t know, i never thought about that being most parents would want their kid back safe.I re tie Mia to the bed, and go outside to think about what to do. After a half hour, i go back inside; ask Mia why her mom would do this to her. Mia says that her mom thinks that it is a joke she is playing, and puts it in the back of her mind, besides that; she is too busy with her job and is always gone. I said that i felt sorry for her with that, and ; maybe i should just take her back home and let her go. Mia said that she wants to go home, but; wants more time with her mom, so; after Mia falls asleep for the night, i load the van up with her things; to get ready to return her home the following day; when i get finished i see on the news broadcast where her mom is on and begging for her daughter to be given back to her, realizing now that none of the friends knows where Mia is. I wake Mia up so she can see this, she starts to cry knowing now her mom does care; i check the account where the money was to be sent to and it is there; i tell Mia that i will get her home tomorrow night, she thanks me and is awake the rest of the night with me.


Around midnight the following night, with Mia tied and gagged; we arrive back near her home, i make sure there is no traffic in the area; leaving Mia tied and gagged in front of her house; knock on the door and get back to the van and drive away. The next morning, i see on the news that she was found minutes after i leave her and is safe, untouched; and healthy. Mia said she had no clue who abducted her, but; she knew it was me, and seemed happy to be back home. People who would not talk to her before, now are close friends with her again; wondering how she felt being held hostage somewhere and how scary it was.



Still today, 3 years later, Mia still remembers her ordeal; and, somehow got my new location and write me saying that she has no hard feelings about it all, and thanks me again for not doing anything sexually to her.

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Postby SelenaGfan » Sun Jan 18, 2015 5:22 am

Thanks for a good story.

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Postby Tieup1 » Sun Jan 18, 2015 6:21 am

A good story, well done :)

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Postby abductionfan » Sun Jan 18, 2015 3:21 pm

Thanks everyone for the feedback, i was worried it may not be liked.