## Mia's birthday (Chapter 3)

Post by Obedience » Mon Mar 12, 2012 12:37 pm

Chapter one :1:
It was an early morning, 7:25 to be precise. Mia's birthday had arrived. She was 17 today, and had been awake since 5. Her friend Sam (girl aged 16) had slept at Mia's the night before. Unlike Mia, Sam had blonde hair, Mia had black.
Mia decided to get up, pulling back the bed sheets and walked over to her wardrobe.
"Hey" said Sam
"Mornin' " replied Mia
"Sleep at all?" asked Sam
"Not a wink!" said Mia happily.
Mia was wearing some lose dark grey joggers accompanied by a slim fit grey top. She looked in the mirror and rustled her hair.
Sam was wearing some short pajamas and a black tank top. She usually wore glasses but they were on the floor next to her roll bed.
Mia opened her wardrobe and grabbed her comfort clothes, short denim shorts, and two pairs knee high tube socks. She got a sports bra and slim fit white tank top.
"Why two socks?"
"Feet are really cold" replied Mia.
"Fair enough"
Sam decided to get up, walked over to her backpack and got her clothes for the day.
She pulled out a sports bra, a pair of joggers and another tank top, grey this time. Finishing by putting on some small ankle socks.
Mia and Sam got dressed and Sam picked up her glasses.
"By the way Mia? Happy birthday!"
"Thanks" said Mia as they left her bedroom.
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### Re: Mia's birthday

Post by Obedience » Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:18 am

Chapter two :2:
Both of the girls walked into the kitchen,
"Food? What do YOU want as it's your big day?" asked Sam.
"Erm... Got any pancakes in?"
"Let me see.... Yes! Only 4 though"
"That'll do, not everything can be perfect on my b-day."
Sam got out the pancakes, put them on a plate and microwaved them.
"Nice how our parents agreed to be put of the way this weekend, are you ok celebrating your 17th without your parents?" asked Sam.
"Yea, I suppose. 17 isn't that important, I want them here for my 18th though" Mia said with a smile
Ding!
"Pancakes done!" said Sam as she got them out.
Bzzzz Bzzzz, Bzzzz Bzzzz.
"What's that?" asked Sam
"My phone, text probably..."
The phone read: Happy Bday my special girl! Luv Mum and Dad xxx
"My mum and dad" said Mia smiling.
"What did they say?" asked Sam
"Just happy Bday, you know"
Bzzz, Bzzz-
Mia picked up her phone before the vibration had done.
The phone read: Lyanne here, mind if I come over and wish you happy birthday? Text me back please! xx
Mia replied "yes xx" she wouldn't refuse one of her best friends to come over on her own birthday.
Mia and Sam had finished breakfast and there was a knock in the door.
"I'll get it" said Mia
Mia got the door and surprise surprise it was Lyanne.
Lyanne was 16, blonde hair, and a perky nose. She has a small scar under her chin from when she was little. She was wearing a jogging top, loose pants and running shoes. Her hair was tied back and the sun reflected off her ocean blue eyes.
"Let me in?" asked Lyanne
"Sure but -"
A van had pulled up on the opposite side of the road. Two men in ski masks and leather jackets got out, one of them holding backpack.
"Shit! Lyanne inside now!" barked Mia
Lyanne dived inside and Mia slammed the door shut.
Little did either of the teenaged realize there was still a man inside the van.
After about 3 minutes the two men exited the house with a brown bag full of what looked like ornaments, mainly valuables.
The man that remained in the van told the other two that he had heard a door slam shut across the street, the men nodded and went into the back if the van.
They emerged holding another backpack, the other man with thin black strips.
Mia saw the men walking towards her house and commanded her two friends to hide, anywhere! Sam was in shock, the only place she could think to hide was behind the apple tree in the backgarden. Without tinking she ran and doves behind the tree. From were she was she could see one of the men go in from the back.
Mia went to her bedroom, into her wardrobe.
Lyanne went into the cupboard under the stairs, trying to get as far back as possible.
In there hiding spots, they waited and stood stiff as they heard the frontdoor kicked open...

### Re: Mia's birthday (Chapter 3)

Post by Obedience » Wed Mar 14, 2012 1:57 pm

Chapter three :3:
Lyanne heard the footsteps draw closer, suddenly stopping. She pushed herself further back into the small cupboard space, only to nudge a Hoover. If fell with a great thud!
Mia was crouched down in the bottom o er wardrobe when she heard the bang, it made her squeal a little bit.
Lyanne froze. The footsteps swiftly ran over and ripped the small door open.
"Oh, hello pretty. Wanna come out before we hurt ya?" asked the one of the men.
Lyanne could do nothing but nod.
"Good girlie!"
Mia could hear the conversation, faintly. She moved to hear it better but leant on the door of her wardrobe. She simply flopped onto her bedroom floor.
"What was that?!" asked one of the men.
"I'll go look" said the the other one.
He ran up the stairs and checked the rooms leading up to Mia's room.
Mai realized je must have been heard, she looked around and ran towards her bed. She pulled herself underneath and lay still.
Her breathing got louder as she saw two boots enter the room. They got closer and stopped. She then saw a knee.... Then an arm.... And finally.... A ski masked face.
"Heya cutie!" he said.
Her grabbed her arm and she bagan screaming.
"Shut it!" he commanded
She began hitting his arm and he let go.
"Hey!" he shouted.
Mai ran out of the room and towards the stairs, only to be grabbed by her hair.
"You ain't going anywhere cutie!" he said proudly.
He pushed Mia down he stairs and she was pushed to the ground next to Lyanne. Lyanne was tied with zip ties and then were being doubled up with gorilla tape. The men had only done her ankles. She was hand gagged by one of the men as the other man continued the tying.
The man doing the tying looked over to Mia, noticed her tube socks.
"Those socks look great on sweet legs!" he said as he smacked her butt.
"Mind if I take them for something?" he asked as he took the first pair off,
"Oh wow! Two pairs! My lucky day!"
He took the first pair off and lay them on the ground. He took Lyanne's short ankle running socks off and let them on the ground too.
"Wow boys. Couldn't have found any Cuter girls to take home!" said the man.
Both of the girls cried through their hand gags.
"Don't think they like the sound of that! Hehe!" said one of the other men.
"I going to gag you proper now, ok? You make a sound and we will make your stay at our place he'll on earth. Got it?"
Both of the girls nodded.
"Good girlies!" the man exclaimed.
He nodded at the men that had their gloves over the girls mouths and they removed them.
"Open wide!" he said sarcastically.
The man with the socks stuffed an ankle sock into each of the girls mouths. They were VERY sweaty as Lyanne had just been for a run and only just hot back.
Both of the girls scrunched their faces with disgust as the foul tasting socks were shives deep in their mouths.
The socks were secured in place with gorilla tape and reaped round at least 5 times.
"Tight enough?" asked the man
Both of the girls nodded.
He then picked up the type socks and put Lyanne's hands together. He put both of her ands in the same sock and pulled it up her arms until her hands made a fist. Her fingers were made useless. To keep it as tight as possible, he taped where the socks ended to her skin. He put two zip ties around her wrists and tightened them until Lyanne whimpered. He added tape around it to keep it in place.
Lyanne's eyes met Mia's as a bag was placed over her head and she was taken outside.
"Your next cutie!" said one of men.
"Yeah, you'll be fun to play with" said the other.
"What is going to happen" Mia said in her head as he was tied the same as Lyanne was.

### Re: Mia's birthday (Chapter 3)

Post by Obedience » Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:02 am

any comments? tips? I dont mind if you say its awful just comment!
Thanks

### Re: Mia's birthday (Chapter 3)

Post by notlongerhere » Mon Mar 19, 2012 11:05 pm

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### Re: Mia's birthday (Chapter 3)

Post by Chase Ricks » Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:31 am

Nice reading for a slow day in my opinion. Please continue when you feel like it.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Mia's birthday (Chapter 3)

Post by Jake_100 » Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:08 pm

I love it! Good work!
Can't beat a home invasion story, as long as it is fictional of course!
Keep writing please