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A good start, thanks for sharing it
For some (hopefully constructive) criticism:
-use some paragraphs to structure your story. Your space is not limited here

-use a spell checker. It may sound nitpicky, but a text without big mistakes is far more fluent to read.
Cheers
FF
There are 10 kind of people in the world.
Those who understand binary numeral system, and those who don't.