The Unexpected Visitor (F/M)

Postby A_Tied_Melon » Sat Jun 06, 2015 2:52 pm

My first ever post on here so bare with me! Just ended up having an idea in my head so here it is!

Chapter 1

My names John and I live on my own. Being 25, I do sometimes feel that I should get in to a relationship and try and settle down. However, most of my attempts at trying to kick start relationship have ended up in one night stands.

It had been an average Saturday morning. I had kept myself busy with watching the TV, binge watching a boxset that I had bought on DVD a couple of weeks back.
Once I decided I better get something productive done, I went and had a quick lunch before changing in to an old T-shirt and joggers - with a view of getting some gardening done. That's when there was a knock on the door.

I made my way downstairs, grabbed the house keys and unlocked and opened the door. I was greeted to a woman who looked to be a similar age to me and she looked stunning. Her long blonde hair flowed down her back and she was stood in a coat and skirt. "Hello" She greeted me as if we had met. I glanced down at her hand bag which looks like it has a shed loads of bricks in it - it gives the impression its that heavy! "Remember me?" She asked in a seductive voice.
"No sorry I don't." I replied honestly as I thought long and hard. I was sure I'd remember a face like that.
"How can you not remember me?" She said with a gasp.
"I'm sorry" I said "Give me a clue?"
"Hang on" She said getting her phone out her inside pocket. "Close your eyes while I get this picture up, once you see this you'll remember"
"Why do I have to close my eyes?" I laughed.
"Because it's a surprise" She laughed back.
I didn't really think much of it as I closed my eyes. Looking back I don't know what made me trust her like that and follow what she said, but hindsight is a wonderful thing - as it was I was stood there with my eyes closed and a woman I didn't remember on my doorstep.
"That was too easy" She said and before I could fully open my eyes I was pushed into my own home forcefully by the woman.
"WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING?" I shouted as I quickly started to stand up.
"I wouldn't retaliate if I was you," she said carmly and I looked up to see her holding a gun in her left hand. "Cooperate and I won't have to use this. " She gave me a devilish smile before shutting my own front door and locking us in.
I just stood up and stared at her. Wanting to say every expletive under the sun...wanting to violently get her out of my home and call the police...but she had a gun - and that was a big advantage. I had no choice but to do as she wanted..

Re: The Unexpected Visitor (F/M)

Postby 31acujoker » Sat Jun 06, 2015 4:12 pm

Not bad at all for your first post buddy, good job!
"A thing is not beautiful because it lasts"
- The Vision

Re: The Unexpected Visitor (F/M)

Postby xtc » Sun Jun 07, 2015 6:13 am

Good start.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: The Unexpected Visitor (F/M)

Postby linkedin » Mon Jun 08, 2015 1:29 pm

Very intriguing start! Very much looking forward to more :)

Re: The Unexpected Visitor (F/M)

Postby Bondage Bunch » Tue Jun 09, 2015 9:49 am

Nice story, glad that it's FAKE.