## This is why we can't have nice things- Real self/fantasy

Post by TicklishCosplayBoy » Sun Jan 26, 2014 3:39 pm

Pretty much first time I've posted anything remotely like this ever. This is the internet may I remind you
Up till the point when I say this is real, but most of it is just me fantasizing D:
Also iPhones apparently hate me so I won't be recorrecting my typos
I sat on my bed, looking at my bare chest. I had pajama bottoms on too. I crept across my room and grabbed 4 shoeslaces, reasonably soft but firm. I also grabbed a pair of "dirty socks" however I don't have sweaty feet sadly :'(
Grabbing one of the laces in both hands I remembered something, I went into my cupboard and took out my Umbreon hoody (google it <3) and put it on. I began by tying my ankles together by kind of knotting it and cinching it. Confusing but deal with it Anywho, I got my feet tied with a shoelace knot and moved to my knees, tying them on the thigh side, wrapping under my knees (like the bit that shoes when you're belly down) and shoelace knotting it on the shin side by my knee(s?). I proceeded to thread the next lace through the cinch on my ankles and tied my left hand in a double knot with one end of the 3rd lace. I didn't tie my right hand just yet, instead balling one sock inside the other and setting it aside. I tied my right hand like my second and placed my sock gag in my mouth, tying it at the back (also keeping my hood stuck in place). I tied it nice and tight and then grabbed the last lace.
I threaded it through the lace around my left hand and then same on the right, holding the final lace by both ends in a hand each (makes sense?!?). I turned off my bedside light, kinda tried to kick my covers off the bed and got into a hogtie position. I placed my head facing to door and pulled the final knot (4th lace) and managed to double knot it, new stuff for me. Then my fantasy began, also the time was 11:00 PM on a school night so... This was exactly one week ago ;D
-From this point on is what I was thinking whilst hogtied. I didn't mention her name her name because this is a girl I really know and she is nice, pretty, cute and unfortunately I'm not gonna say what she looks like incase she sees this, or anyone I know for that matter. I have a maHUSIVE crush on her and nobody who I know knows who she is, and I'm always scared my friends will somehow find my online activities out somehow so yeah...
#paranoid
-EDIT- On review this is vague, so yeah... Glwt.
"Mmmphhh!" I exclaimed as her hand clamped over my mouth. I felt some kind of smelly fabric in her hand.
"Shhhh little Umbreon boy, don't try and escape me" she said as she used her free hand to grab both or my wrists together. She forced the sock into my mouth and stated "If you don't behave expect me to probe you for tickle spots!"
My entire body was pushed forwards onto a coach causing me to "Mmphh" quickly. Out of her pocket she pulled a ball of shoelaces and she tied my hands behind my back, she let go of her hand gag but I didn't spit the sick out. I intended on being a "good boy"
After tying my ankles and knees like I had tied them irl she grabbed another sock. "Gimme the sock" she said. I complied and spat the soggy sock out of my mouth. She balled it up inside the other socks and shoved the ball-in-a-sock into my mouth and tied it around the back in a double knot.
"What to do, what to do?" She said, placing around me like I was a life problem. She tried tickling my foot with no result and quickly moved to my ribs. She dug her fingers deep and rubbed her fingers up and down my sides, causing me to spasm. She kept this up for around ten minutes before suddenly stopping without a word and carried me through to her room. "Kinky" I thought to myself.
She placed me at the end of her bed, grabbed her laptop and sat next to me. I struggled for attention and she "picked up" my head and placed it on her lap, satisfying me enough.
"Gooooood boy." She said like one would to a dog.
-Back to reality
I rolled around on my bed and moaned into my gag. I heard the kind of crunching noise wood makes and pretty much $#@7 myself, someone was coming upstairs. I tried for my hand but instead grabbed my cover and pulled it up just above my gag.
After around 10 mins I heard the stairs creaking again, I was safe. For now.
I kind of wanted out, but had only been tied for like 20 minutes. I began to pull at the string on my hands but it wouldn't come off. I panicked and pulled for my *_€&ing life at my bonds, eventually giving my struggle up. I'd have to cut the string off, which is a shame because 3 strings < 4 strings. I hopped/wriggled/rolled my way over to my desk, 4 meters away. It was pitch black but I know my room well and got my hands on the scissors after a total of 35 minutes of being bound. I figured "If I'm gonna lose a shoelace I'm gonna enjoy myself"
After rolling around the floor making minimum noise until 1 AM I eventually... Slightly... I'm a 14 year old boy, it's only natural I should have that bodily "functions" okay?!?! Incase you didn't get the hint: If I wanted to pee/poo I would've cut myself free sooner. Got it? K.
I grabbed the scissors and was about to cut myself free but got an idea, I used the scissors to wedge in-between the knot holding my left wrist to my ankles, and pulled free. I repeated the process until I was freed (including un-gagging myself)
I "cleaned up" (I have a toilet next to my room) and put the shoelaces/socks back. I then realized I might have gotten my hoody "dirty" but it was fine, also so was my carpet ;D
I went to sleep that night and was grouchy as... Too late for an analogy right now... Very grouchy the next morning. It's normal to sleep only 5 hours a night for me but I was grumpy for whatever reason.
Done! Please leave feedback for me, I do have real stories, some self, some m/m with my being the 1st and some of me being the second
Still hoping for a f/m to come my way
Tickle me, I dare you! See what it gets you! Well, probably not much because I secretly enjoy it

### Re: This is why we can't have nice things- Real self/fantasy

Post by TicklishCosplayBoy » Sun Jan 26, 2014 11:17 pm

On second review some of this is unnecessary and written slightly badly however I'm slowly learning and need people to help me to improve. For now my excuse is lack of sleep, as most of this doesn't make sense because I missed out certain details. lol. Anywho, need feedback, what worked well, what didn't, what should I have included?
Thanks!
Tickle me, I dare you! See what it gets you! Well, probably not much because I secretly enjoy it

### Re: This is why we can't have nice things- Real self/fantasy

Post by mikeybound » Fri Jan 31, 2014 2:10 pm

I looked up the hoodie. Which version do you have?

### Re: This is why we can't have nice things- Real self/fantasy

Post by xtc » Fri Jan 31, 2014 3:03 pm

I didn't know whether to post this or not due to "cultural" differences between me as a reader and you as a writer. OK, let's not pussy around: I'm an old fart an you're young! However . . .
I think that a style involving so many asides needs "tidying up" or else the meaning gets lost. I'm not suggesting losing the asides, they're part of your narrative style and, used well, they could aid character development. If they get in the way of comprehension, however, they make reading difficult. OK, that was a truism but asides shouldn't sound apologetic. Own your style.
"I went to sleep that night and was grouchy as... Too late for an analogy right now... Very grouchy the next morning." - - - You can have a very good light style when on form. And now the bit I'm not supposed to say: Don't be so intense. Lay back and write what you want; people WILL go with you if you entertain them.
Unstructured rant ends!
Wassail!
Xtc
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but little speedos rule!
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