So the posts are kind of short. SO WHAT?!!!
As long as the sections continue to run, and are done frequently enough so that one post follows the next (without being interrupted by the kibbitzers), it is still a highly enjoyable read! The English, spelling, and sentence structure are all excellent, so going between posts is no worse than going to the next paragraph!!!
So will you critics kindly give Tapegaglover a break!!! Criticism like that has caused more than one person to stop posting altogether! And Tapegaglover shows promise!
So please continue your story, Tapegaglover!!! You said you'd continue 'tomorrow', but now it's next week! WE WANT MORE!!!
Well,
I do anyway!!!! And I want it NOW!

Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...