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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby chadmc90 » Tue May 06, 2014 8:47 pm

This is a great story! It's well written and detailed! Can't wait to read the final two chapters!
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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby Lake Lover » Wed May 07, 2014 6:45 am

Very nice tale. Every boy should have someone like Steve or Dane to guide them thru their early uncertainties and fears.

Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby mikeybound » Wed May 07, 2014 8:51 am

It's a pleasure to read this. I love the new ones.

Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby Jack Roper » Wed May 07, 2014 1:05 pm

Excellent story and very well written; almost like a tutorial (which I guess it was for Dane) on how to do a tie up scene for the very first time.
Love to read more of "your experiences".

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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby chadmc90 » Wed May 07, 2014 8:17 pm

Haven't read, but you have to do two things.

1. Use the [img]<url%20of%20image>[/img] code and it will render the image in it's place.
2. Upload it to the site and add it as an attachment.

I use option 1 because this site has had problems in the past, and many images posted have been corrupted. Option 1 is definitely the safer route. If it is on your PC, Dropbox or some other file sharing website is your friend. For Dropbox, just place the pic in the public folder and copy the link(url) and paste it in the code.

Hope this helps. :)
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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby chadmc90 » Wed May 07, 2014 8:46 pm

Wow what a cliffhanger! I could only imagine what is going through her head! I seriously hope you continue this!
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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby tony2 » Wed May 07, 2014 11:33 pm

I can't wait! Does he send her a bill for home tutoring her son??
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Re: Escalation - Part IV of VI

Postby Lake Lover » Thu May 08, 2014 6:46 am

TLR wrote:I think my mother was seeing someone. ...

After Christmas she had started going into the City more on the weekends. ...

"Mmmpphhh! Mmmmmppphh!! MMMmmmmppphhh!!"

"Oh my god! What are you doing to my son?!"



Hopefully, she is a very understanding Mom. That would depend upon her life experiences, I suppose. This story is very enthralling. And it is beautifully written.

Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby ropebound » Thu May 08, 2014 1:09 pm

Fucking hell! This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time! You are really great at storytelling. I really enjoy the fact that so many things feel familiar, especially in the first part, since I am in this phase right now. I guess these things can really make you confused and insecure.

Anyway, please keep writing! I love it. And that cliffhanger made me shudder so violently I might have woken up my parents just now.
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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby chadmc90 » Thu May 08, 2014 6:44 pm

I loved this chapter! Can't wait to read the next one, which I assume i the last. I hope you still continue to write even after this story! You are an impressive writer!
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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby mikeybound » Fri May 09, 2014 11:04 am

I believe the appropriate term for the last two chapters is "damn!"
I hope your story doesn't end with Steve, and I hope even more that you got to see him again after he left. Did you ever find out why he doesn't like guys tying him up?
And I hear you on the pain. At least you had lube.

Re: Escalation - Part V of VI

Postby FelixSH » Fri May 09, 2014 11:31 am

TLR wrote:"I am for you."


I think my heart melted right there. The rest was great too. Very touching, especially the last chapter.

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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby chadmc90 » Fri May 09, 2014 6:46 pm

At this point I don't see how anything I could suggest would be better than what you have planned. You know how to tug at people's emotion strings. A great short story and one potential entry for that Hall of Fame(Not Canucks, the improvements that were in discussion a while back) that may never come to this board. I loved every minute of it! I take my hat off to you, TLR! Thank you for this marvelous story!
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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby FelixSH » Sat May 10, 2014 6:03 am

I can only second what chadmc90 said. It was an excellent read.

Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby tony2 » Sat May 10, 2014 10:47 am

nice read, interesting twists, smooth ending. thanks.
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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby NemesisPrime » Sat May 10, 2014 1:37 pm

I must say you know how to spin a tale! I loved all of it!

I have to agree with Dean here that bondage isn't always about sex even though the two are intertwined but it's important to always trust your partner and more important have them trust you.

Looking forward to more, I see a bit of myself in Dean difference being 22 and haven't had a boyfriend like Steve to help me along. Kinda had to learn on my own.
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Re: Escalation (M/M)

Postby Jack Roper » Sat May 10, 2014 4:26 pm

Lily,
This is such a great story. It wasn't until I saw your name that I realized it hadn't been written by a guy--you get into the male psyche so wonderfully. I suspect your writing skills will only increase and who knows, maybe the New Yorker awaits one of your pieces in the future.
Aloha,
Jack