Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:44 am

Hi all, i wrote this superheroine for a different website, thought it might also be applicable here. It gets quite raunchy so i may move it to the "intimate" forum if people want me to continue.
I know this website is mostly about true or "realistic" tie-up games, i just thought i would share the 1st chapter and see what everyone thought.

Chapter One: The Capture!!!
SuperGirl landed outside the New York laboratory clutching a piece of paper in her hand. She unfolded it and read it one last time:

SuperGirl, I have reason to believe the world is in great danger from a terrible villain. Please meet me as soon as possible at the Ashton Genetic Research Lab, signed Nurse Nightshade.

SuperGirl sighed, “This could be a long night” she muttered to himself as she rapped on the door. Moments later it was opened by a tall slender woman in a white coat.

“Greeting SuperGirl, I must say this is a great honour to meet you at last” she said. “Please come in.”

The two walked down a long corridor and into a kitchen “Please take a seat” the Nurse said.

“No thanks I’ll stand”, came the reply. “I’m sorry Madam but we haven’t got time for frivolities. If it is an emergency then please explain”

“Well I am Nurse Nightshade, an expert even if I dare say so myself, in genetic research and cloning technology. I discovered recently that a mad scientist is planning to use your genetic material in order to create a mind controlled army!”

“With an army of clones with my powers the world could never safe. Please Nurse tell me the location of this evil doer so that I can stop her”

“Right away SuperGirl. The important documents are stored in that safe on the counter.” Nurse Nightshade gestured towards a safe by SuperGirl.

SuperGirl turned the latch and opened safe door. She was greeted by a terrifying green glow. “Kryptonite!” gasped SuperGirl and staggered backwards “My one weakness!” The Nurse approached the heroine as the radiation poisoning overtook her. SuperGirl fell to her knees “Why are you doing this?” she mumbled.

Nurse Nightshade laughed again. “I can’t believe how easy it was to get you here” she chortled. “You walked right into my trap like a rookie. I was expecting a much greater fight than this!” She pulled the kryptonite out of the safe and knelt beside SuperGirl who was now curled up on the floor. She rubbed the glowing rock up and down SuperGirl’s body and laughed as the mighty heroine winced in pain. She stroked the inside of her thigh, “Yes I am glad I chose you as the subject for my clone army. I’m going to have lots of fun as I extract your DNA” she laughed as SuperGirl faded into unconsciousness.
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby bondagefan » Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:11 am

I hope you are allowed to continue this story,I am imagining Hayden Panettiere
as Supergirl.What other site did you write this for?

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby Boundgal08 » Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:54 am

Really well written, I do like Superhero stories, they are some of the best out there :D

Cheers,
BG
BOUNDGIRL!
Probably the kinkiest woman you will ever meet!
I am a switch, I like to put a man in ropes and also have a man put me in ropes!
I am the 'Queen of bondage'

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby BlackWingedAngel » Thu Apr 01, 2010 10:50 pm

This could be amusing. I'm curious.
I'm a girl
I want to be the submissive victim

I am such a total bondage newb

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby mistofoleese » Sat Apr 03, 2010 6:17 pm

OOOOO Yeah this DOES sound good please continue

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:56 pm

I would continue but i'm not sure how "intimate" i'm allowed to get on this page, the story contains a lot of milking, and a bit of penetration but it is all good natured and not very hardcore, please advise!
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby jennybond » Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:06 pm

matthec2 wrote:I would continue but i'm not sure how "intimate" i'm allowed to get on this page, the story contains a lot of milking, and a bit of penetration but it is all good natured and not very hardcore, please advise!


Do what I do and go with your own instinct, if you're not happy with it and think it isn't suitable go back and tone it down a little, try and leave something to readers imagination there is no need to go into graphic detail.
I hope this helps.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:26 pm

OK but don't say you weren't warned! Let me know if it is unsuitable

Chapter 2: Spread-eagled!
Nurse Nightshade lifted the sleeping heroine over her shoulder and carried her into the laboratory and dropped her onto the operating table. Noticing the heroine was starting to stir she knew she had to act fast to secure her. She stretched out the body of SuperGirl, chaining her arms and legs to each of the four corners. Once she realised that the heroine wasn’t going to break free anytime soon she started to pull down her tight red spandex dress to expose her crotch. The wicked scientist grabbed SuperGirl’s groin and squeezed tightly causing her to wake sharply.

“What’s going on? Release me at once!” demanded SuperGirl as she tugged valiantly on the chains.

“Just relax my dear SuperSlut. Cooperate and it will all be over be you know it. You’re about to become a mother you realise. Your DNA will help me to grow thousands of super powered clones, all mind controlled by yours truly.”

“When I get free you’re in for the pounding of your life!”

“Then I feel fortunate that you aren’t anytime soon, so you may as well get comfortable.” Nurse Nightshade dragged a trolley with a large machine on it closer to the operating table. She picked up a large tube connected to the machine and connected around SuperGirl’s vagina. She chuckled as SuperGirl tried to squirm away but to no avail. She then picked up two pegs, also connected via wires to the machine and firmly attached them to the helpless heroine’s nipples and again laughed as she yelped in pain. “You think that’s pain then you’ve got a pretty distressing night ahead. These two clamps will arouse your body into releasing its DNA. And this tube will be collecting it.” The Nurse then switched on the machine. An electric current rushed through SuperGirl’s body and she writhed in a mixture of pleasure and pain. She began to moan and groan very loudly. “Oh quit your whinging. Don’t act like you aren’t enjoying this” Nightshade sarcastically said as she placed a length of tape over SuperGirl’s mouth gagging the heroine.

Suddenly the machine began to shudder and rumble before shutting down and black smoke poured out of it. “Damn!” shouted Nurse Nightshade. “You’ve broken my machine”. She yanked the pegs off SuperGirl’s nipples and pulled the tube away. “Ah well…” she flashed an evil grin “I guess I’ll have to resort to more conventional methods now.” Nurse Nightshade lent over the heroine’s body. “Just think of me as Batman,” she laughed at the shocked face of her captive. She stroked the inner thigh of SuperGirl’s leg causing her body to shudder almost instantly. “Guess I know now why they call you SuperGirl!” she said before starting to lick the heroine’s pussy. SuperGirl closed her eyes trying to think about football, sandwiches, her grandpa from her home planet Omega-Pursicron 8, but to no avail, Nightshade was sucking and licking like a pro. She squirmed in her bondage, tightening her fists and toes. She shot cum into the Nurse’s mouth who spat it into a jar. She grinned at the heroine “Mmmm… tasty. Would you like a taste?” she then licked the remaining cum off SuperGirl’s hairy crotch and held it in her mouth. She rose up to SuperGirl’s mouth and pulled off the tape. Before the heroine could react the villainess had placed her lips to her and was using her tongue to transfer the cum. Nightshade then quickly replaced the tape gag forcing SuperGirl to swallow her own cum. It was dreadful and almost choked at the saltiness and intensity of it. Nurse Nightshade stood back and admired the squirming heroine. “How did you like that SuperGirl? Don’t start to think it’s over because we’ve only just begun.” She began to walk out of the lab. “Don’t go away, I’m just going to collect some equipment to fix my machine.”
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:27 pm

There are 5 chapters btw, none are really hardcore, however some people may be offended by them
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Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby Boundgal08 » Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:07 am

I do like that next part... can't wait for the other 3 parts :D

Cheers,
BG
BOUNDGIRL!
Probably the kinkiest woman you will ever meet!
I am a switch, I like to put a man in ropes and also have a man put me in ropes!
I am the 'Queen of bondage'

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:18 pm

Chapter 3: A Futile Escape Attempt and the Consequences

SuperGirl was helpless. Or so Nurse Nightshade thought. SuperGirl felt very weak but knew this was her chance to escape. She stretched her arms and legs as much as she could before pulling back in, sharply. This caused the chains to snap almost immediately. SuperGirl felt much weaker and on hearing the bitch walk back down the corridor she decided she wasn’t ready for a confrontation with the madwoman just yet. She wiped the superspunk from her legs, pulled up her spandex underwear and dress, went into the corridor and ran in the opposite direction to where the footsteps were coming from.

Nurse Nightshade had been watching all this on a monitor and smiled. She knew that SuperGirl was far too weak to make a decent escape attempt. She also knew that the laboratory had hundreds of gadgets with which to make the heroine’s stay all the more interesting.

SuperGirl ran through the foyer to the front door but it was locked. She pounded on the steel doors but her weak fists could only make the slightest of dents. Suddenly a giant plastic sheet fell from the sky, dropped from the balcony by Nurse Nightshade and engulfed the heroine. SuperGirl struggled as electric charges rushed through her body. Nurse Nightshade wandered up to the heroine.

MWAH-HA-HA-HA

“Really not a good idea trying to escape SuperGirl” she smiled as the heroine fell to the floor. “Guess I’m going to have punish you now.”

The Nurse removed the sheet from the dazed superhero’s body. “Stay conscious SuperGirl. I want you to see and feel what I’m doing as I strip you.” SuperGirl was helpless and struggled futilely as her boots, dress and underwear were removed followed by her top. Naked, she was dragged over to the nearby table and while lying with her back on the floor her arms were handcuffed, stretched behind her head and around a table leg. Nurse Nightshade then pulled out a brush-like implement which shee stroked slowly across SuperGirl’s chest. SuperGirl began to laugh and scream so loudly that she had to be cleave gagged using the nurse’s hankerchief. Nightshade began to brush quicker, increasing the panic and severity of SuperGirl’s complaints. The brush moved down the heroine’s body and brushed her pussy with great speed.

“Oh dear!” smiled Nightshade “Looks like somebody changed to superhero big girl pants a little too early”.

She uncuffed the heroine and dragged her naked body over to a chair and sat on it. She draped SuperGirl's limp body over her thigh, her arse raised high. "You don't know how long i've wanted to do this" she grined as she slapped an arse cheek hard. SuperGirl winced in pain as slap after slap came down. SLAP! SLAP! SLAP! "I can't wait to tell Catwoman" Nightshade guffawed. SLAP! SLAP! SLAP!

She then stood up and roughly placed SuperGirl on the chair. Getting close up to her face she begun to intimidate the heroine, "As you can see, escape is futile and all future attempts will have severe consequences" she grabbed the heroine’s vulnerable breasts and squeezed hard. She used strong, reinforced duct tape to secure the heroine’s arms behind her back and her legs to the legs of the chair spreading them wide open. “Not gonna dirty my mouth this time.” said Nightshade as she grabbed the heroine’s pussy. She began to move up and down ferociously. Faster and faster. Faster and faster. "Haha only a few more moments now," she laughed. For the second time in the night SuperGirl shot her load and went into a daze. Nurse Nightshade wiped up the valuable DNA and began to untie the heroine.

"Lets get you back to the Operating Table," she spoke softly "Long way to go still, my princess".

SuperGirl however, wasn't as stupid as the mad witch thought. Nor as weak and tired. As her hands were untied she made a swing at the Nurse. KAPOW!!! Knocking her unconscious to the floor. Finishing untying herself, she then ran into the next room and spied a telephone on the table top. She picked up the handset and began to dial. She managed to get through and said "Chief Wiggum please.... hurry". "One moment" came the reply as she was about to be put through.

"Surprise!"

Suddenly a revitalised Nurse Nightshade grabbed SuperGirl from behind. She clamped a white cloth over the heroine's mouth and nose unabling her to speak down the receiver. Nightshade pinned SuperGirl's arm to her side and whispered into her ear "Yes that's right. Nice deep breaths...". SuperGirl was breathing in fume after fume of a powerful chloroform that hit the spot instantly. She began to feel dizzy, then weak and slowly went limp in the Nurse's grip. Her eyes rolled back and she fell into a deep slumber.

Nightshade stroked the unconsious heroine's naked, vulnerable body and let her drop to the floor "I'm afraid it's now time for more consequences" she wickedly smiled.
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Tue May 04, 2010 4:14 pm

does anyone want me to finish this?
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby CHillDice » Tue May 04, 2010 5:03 pm

Yes yes YES...for the love of everything kinky and naughty YES!!
You got to ro ooo ooll me, and call me THE TUMBLING DICE!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby BlackWingedAngel » Tue May 04, 2010 6:33 pm

CHillDice wrote:Yes yes YES...for the love of everything kinky and naughty YES!!


Agreed, i've been waiting for a continuation!
I'm a girl
I want to be the submissive victim

I am such a total bondage newb

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Sat May 08, 2010 3:21 am

Chapter 4: A Close Shave and a Surprisingly Even Wrestling Match!

Nurse Nightshade walked over to a cupboard and pulled out several coils of rope and a roll of cling film. She tied the naked SuperGirl's wrists together in front of her waist, her ankles together and her knees together so movement was almost impossible. She then wrapped the heroine's body in cling film except for her groin area which was left exposed. Escape and movement were now definitely impossible. SuperGirl began to stir and mouthed her protests into her gag. The Nurse began to explain what was happening.

"As you can see SuperGirl you are completely imobolised. If you're wondering why, it is to make it easier for the shaving" she laughed. "See, the reason you broke my machine earlier is that it was sucking up too many of your pubic hairs and being that they are strong as steel they ripped up the mechanism. So now i'm gonna shave you to make sure it doesn't happen again".

She then took out some acidic shaving foam and wiped over the super vagina. Then she begun to shave using titanium razor blades.

"Don't struggle or i may accidentally cut you" she laughed. After a while Nightshade smiled "Secretly enjoying this SuperGirl? You seem to be awfully wriggly for a heroine facing almost certain death in a very embarassing situation. Whatever would Superman say if he could see you now?" she chuckled at the heroine's blushed face.

Once SuperGirl was bald, Nightshade untied her. "Time to get you reacquainted with the machine" she grabbed SuperGirl's forearm to drag her away. SuperGirl pushed Nurse Nightshade away and jumped up ripping off her gag.

"I don't think so punk. You've had the upper hand until now but now it's my turn to unleash the fury" SuperGirl stood triumphantly.

At first Nurse Nightshade was shocked at how resilient and cocky SuperGirl still was, but her lightning quick mind alerted her of a very important fact.

"You know SuperGirl, even at half strength your push then should have sent me flying across the room…. not a few feet" she flashed a grin at the suddenly nervous heroine. Nightshade picked up metal bar bending it in half "I think, messing with that Super Spunk of yours has made me temporarily invulnerable also. I think, i'm now as strong as you!"

"I'll never submit to you and your villainous ways" SuperGirl swung a punch at Nurse Nightshade.

The fist was easily caught and held in the villainess' hand, "Actually tonight i've twice made you cum, made you laugh in pain, made you scream and made you wimper like a kitten. I've already made you submit in more ways than one. I own you bitch!" SuperGirl was flung across the room. Dr Nightshade tossed the heroine around like a rag doll then bent her again over her knee. SLAP! SLAP! SLAP! SLAP! She threw the weak heroine to the ground and played with her breasts and body. She then turned her over. SLAP! SLAP! SLAP! "You are now but a play toy to me now. An item to use and abuse. Hahahahaha!"

"No! Never....."

"Yes! Now!" Dr Nightshade played with the heroine’s arse cheeks and rubbed her hands all over her body, visiting and violating every nook and cranny.

"Hey, maybe you'd like a taste of my DNA?" Nightshade pulled down her own pants and underwear to reaveal her already dripping vagina. She forced herself onto SuperGirl's mouth. "Suck on this bitch. Bite, and there will be consequences! I don't think i need to warn you again"

SuperGirl was weak and dizzy but couldn't stop herself from sucking as the Nurse helped her move her head in rhythm. SUCK! SUCK! SUCK! Nightshade then pulled away and unleashed her own DNA over SuperGirl's face. "Bam! Take that heroine!" she laughed triumphantly. She continued to play with her new toy. Caressing and fondling and squeezing and abusing everyhing. SLAP! SLAP! SLAP!

She then carried SuperGirl back into the lab and tied her up back on the operating table. She again attatched the nipple clamps and the suction pump and turned on the machine. She laughed as SuperGirl again winced at the pain and discomfort and of course unavoidable pleasure.

"I'll be back in a while to check your temperature" Nurse Nightshade quiped as she left the room.
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby CHillDice » Sat May 08, 2010 9:26 am

Yes...great chapter...more please!! :evil:
You got to ro ooo ooll me, and call me THE TUMBLING DICE!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Sat May 29, 2010 6:13 am

Final Chapter if anyone is interested.

Chapter 5: A Bomb in the Worst Place Imaginable!

A few hours later Dr Nightshade returned to admire her helpless prisoner "I can't wait till I have a clone army, all with your amazing powers, all willing to do my bidding" she smiled "Maybe I should keep the original for myself? Maybe I could sell you on EBay to the highest bidding superpowered horny hero? To be honest, we both know that i'm going to have to get rid of all the evidence once I've collected enough DNA" she laughed at SuperGirl's nervous face.

She held up a long, blue vibrator. "Allow me to introduce you to Mr Pointy. He's a real explosive character!"

Nurse Nightshade unattatched the machine and untied the weak heroine, who was now struggling to fight back. "Accept it she smiled." She turned on the vibrator. "Do you hear that Superslut? It is the sound of inevitability" she laughed. She continued to play with the helpless heroine's breasts again. "I may as well give you a happy ending" she smiled as she licked SuperGirl again.

After several minutes of frantic playing with the helpless heroine she tied SuperGirl's hands over her head and tied her ankes raised above to a metal frame above the lab table.

"Let me know if you get cramp, i am a nurse after all". She switched on the bomb vibrator and after lubing it up she slid it into SuperGirl. The heroine winced at the indignant invasion but could do nothing to stop it. Nurse Nightshade then stood up, placed a kiss on SuperGirl's cheek (and then one on a butt cheek for good luck) and began to leave.

"I've set the bomb for twenty minutes to give you a sporting chance" she smiled "Privately, I hope you do escape, not only so you can meet and be deafeated by your offspring, but also so we can get reacquainted in the future and do this all again, only hopefully with less moaning on your part".

She blew a kiss, exited the lab and shut the door.

WILL SUPERGIRL ESCAPE HER DEATH TRAP?

WILL DR NIGHTSHADE BUILD HER INVINCIBLE CLONE ARMY?

TUNE IN NEXT TIME, SAME SUPER TIME, SAME SUPER CHANNEL!
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby Jason Toddman » Sat May 29, 2010 9:52 am

WTF!!! GRAARRRR!!!! After all this build up and the final chapter ends in a GD cliffhanger?!!!!
Come ON, dude!!! Finish the freaking story for REAL!!! This part was okay but pretty superfluous as written.
It's a really good story, but leaving it like this and never REALLY finishing the story ISN'T cool!!!
Please put in another part and resolve this cliffhanger. It's too much like those stories people post that say they'll finish it and then they never do! There's too many of those already!!
Needless to say I like the story (so far) or I wouldn't bother to write this.
So PLEASE finish this for real. Revenge stories are nice, after all. Let's see Supergirl get even! :twisted:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Sat May 29, 2010 4:02 pm

It's a cliffhanger ending, you have to decide for yourself what happens next.

Maybe Supergirl is blown to pieces?

Maybe she escapes?

Maybe Nurse Nightshade comes back to release her?

Maybe SuperGirl wakes up and it has all been a horrible dream?


It doesn't need a concrete ending, it builds drama and tension. If you make a story last too long it becomes stale and repetitive. I find it better to cover all the bases then finish it on a hight note, rather than it fade away into obscurity.

Just tell me what you liked/disliked and want more of, and my next story will be just as good, i've got a few ideas in the works.

:)
Arrogant Superhero here, Looking for a Nasty Villain!!!!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby Jason Toddman » Sat May 29, 2010 6:54 pm

Just tell me what you liked/disliked and want more of, and my next story will be just as good, i've got a few ideas in the works.

I already did tell you. :mrgreen: I wanna see Supergirl kick that other b****'s ASS!!!
Or are you saying you wouldn't object if SOMEONE ELSE posts a sequel to YOUR story? :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:06 pm

No I don't think was mine, unless someone stole it lol! I'll sue for plagurism haha
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Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Wed Dec 15, 2010 5:10 pm

:)

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby alyssa_whoaisme » Tue Dec 28, 2010 8:24 pm

the story's a little old, but was amazing! kept me guessing each time. make more like this please!

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby capturedsuperhero » Sat Jan 01, 2011 3:32 pm

What do you mean it's an old story? I wrote it myself :)

Re: Supergirl vs Nurse Nightshade (F/F)

Postby alyssa_whoaisme » Sat Jan 01, 2011 5:51 pm

I mean you wrote it a while ago but I just found out about it :P