
Just as a wee tip though if you wish for tips.. try splitting it up into paragraphs, makes it that much easier to read without getting lines mixed up

Looking forward to more details!

Scottstud94 wrote:"Seems quite likely to my mind" "in my humble opinion". You claimed this was a real story, these quotes prove your a blatant liar. Call it like I see it.
randomentity wrote:Thank you b0yfeet! Indeed, Scottstud94, I am not the one who wrote this story, I was merely replying to the post by the user above me, stating my opinion on his opinion lol.
Hopefully you will see this and realise the misunderstanding!
063122122 wrote:Accidental post? Lol my first one congratulations sweetie