## the lonely drunk

Post by deanosmyth » Sat Nov 01, 2014 5:02 pm

Guys first story coming up..
As i'm from Scotland, First thing i'd say is that i am a massive Glassgow Celtic fan, and would love to be tied in one of their tops, so hear goes.
Chapter 1
We had our very first game of the season today. I loved getting out and playing for my local team. My passion was definitely playing soccer and some day i hoped to play professional. Today I was awarded the man of the match trophy having scored 2 goals for our team. i was in such good form, so me and all the team went to the local bar for a drink to celebrate.
When we arrived we partied for hours, chugging beer all afternoon and into the night. One person i noticed in the bar was the village drunk, Dan Reid. He had always been a peculiar guy. He was a bit of a loner and never really had many friends. Mr Reid was known for being a little forward with people, he seemed to long company, but no one really paid any attention to him. he kept staring over at our team. it was weird, but then things just got weirder. As i went into the bathroom the next thing i knew he was following me in...
"Corey isn't it?" he questioned me, he knew me from working in the local shop a few years back.
"Yes it is, How are you Mr Reid?" i responded whilst trying to pee in the urinal.
He stood right beside me and started to do his own business "Please, call me Dan. That was an impressive game you boys had today. Really good."
"Thanks" i tried to keep communication to a minimum. he stunk of drink and cigarette smoke. i just wanted to get out of their as quickly as possible.
"I see your a big Celtic supporter, you could play for them in a few years I'd say."
"That's the dream, hopefully get spotted in the next few years. Get away from this small town and all the crap that comes with living here."
I had been living here in this town all my life and I couldn't wait to get moved. i wanted to go as soon as i could get going. Somewhere with a little more opportunity. I was actually waiting from a response from my Chris, my old college roommate about traveling the country. He was due to get back to me within the next couple of days.
"I'm sure you'll get signed up soon son, all they'd have to do is look at you, in that top and know you were a keen fan." After our match had finished i had changed into my celtic shirt and tracksuit. i did to be fair look like i was a player getting ready for training. The jacket I had on was a green and white baseball type jacket that looked really well on me. it then hit me was this guy hitting on me? He complimented my looks in this football gear. How odd.
"I had better get back out here Mr reid, but thanks for the that"
Anytime kid, listen anytime you want to talk you come and see me, my door is always open, especially for a fellow Celtic supporter like yourself." This was weird, i didnt know what was happening. He seemed to be coming onto me. I left the bathroom and went to rejoin my friends.
as we sat drinking, i received a text from my old roommate, he was able to get us a place in Glassgow. Yes this was my lucky break. i told the guys that were in the bar. they all seemed excited and told me to go for it. "It could be your big break" I text Chris and said i was in. Though he said he was going tomorrow to sort plans if i wanted to go with him. This was it. I was getting out of this crappy little town. I said goodbye to the lads before going to get my stuff together. i was so excited.
As i ventured home i started getting all excited. i was feeling a little drunk having been in the bar all day. when suddenly i heard my name. "Corey" i turned around and there was Dan Reid, staggering up the street behind me.
"wait up mate, are you walking up the hill. I'll walk with you sure." Dan walked towards me and we walked up the hill together.
"Will you be watching the match tomorrow then Corey?
"I'd say so. Don't know where though, it should be good."
Yea, Im sure there will be plenty of action, I'll have to get my matching shirt, like yours for the game."
Dan was a little desperate he just wanted to talk, i had heard stories that he used to stalk this woman, she was a friend of his sisters, she used to come into the shop with him, and he was always very possessive over her. he got jealous if she talked to other people.
As we walked up the hill, Dan slowed down a few doors before his house.
"Corey, you don't fancy coming in for a beer to you." WTF i thought
not reallly Dan i had better get going, i declined
"Please you'd be doing me a huge favour, i have this table that needs moving and you'd be a great help."
Although i was hesitant i thought i may as well have one beer with him. "Ok, though we'd better be quick, I've stuff to get done."
It shouldn't take long," just you go in and sit down in there. We entered the house, i went on into the living room whilst Dan closed the door. Unbeknown to me he locked the door and removed the key. i wonder why??

### Re: the lonely drunk

Post by deanosmyth » Sat Nov 01, 2014 5:09 pm

Let me know any thought.
what will happen to clueless Corey???

### Re: the lonely drunk

Post by chadmc90 » Sat Nov 01, 2014 7:21 pm

Hmm..interesting start and a really good beginning. Good description of plot and details, and I didn't spot any grammar/spelling errors. Keep going, bud.
And one more thing: is this gonna be all M/M? If so, please have the mods move it to the appropriate section.
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### Re: the lonely drunk

Post by Jason Toddman » Sun Nov 02, 2014 3:35 am

This thread has been moved to the M/M section at author's own request.
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