English Drama Play(mm/mm)

Postby EmJayCute » Tue Nov 22, 2011 5:37 am

Scenario: English Drama Play practice
Characters involved: Jonas: 4"11, brown complexion, fat with eyeglasses
Cedric: 5"1, brown complexion, thin, cute face
Cristoff: 4"10, brownish complexion, thin, cute face
Mik: 5"6, spanish complexion, thin, handsome.
Setting: House of Jonas, Abandoned House at the back of the house of Jonas
Materials: Rope:20 ft. long; script; duct tape; 2 bandanas, scissors


Jonas: Mik, can you be the one who will go to my house to practice our lines in our English role play?
Mik: Yes, I can.
Jonas: Thank you! I expect you, 5pm, Saturday.
Mik: No problem!
Cristoff: Hey Jonas!
Jonas: Why?
Cristoff: What will you do to Mik?
Jonas: Me? We are just practicing the Lines for English play. I think you should go to.
Cristoff: Me? Sure, why not?
Jonas: Great!
Jonas: Hey Cedric!
Cedric: Hey Jonas!
Jonas: Can you be at the abandoned house at 5pm? We are having the practice there.
Cedric: I think I should come.
Jonas: Thank you!

Saturday afternoon
Jonas and Cristoff standing at the gate of the house. Mik, walking, wearing white sleeveless shirt and a black short with his shoulder bag. Cedric, in opposite direction, also wearing a blue sleeveless shirt and a black short with blue backpack.
Mik: How are you, Jonas?
Jonas: I am okay.
Cedric: Are we going to go inside?
Jonas: Yes. This is a perfect shooting place for our play.
Mik: Are we going to come inside now?
Jonas: Good time. Let us have our snacks first inside.

Jonas, Cristoff, Mik and Cedric eat their lunch. Jonas and Cristoff go to a place which is darker and have 2 poles inside.
Jonas: Cristoff, do you think Mik and Cedric would like to join our game?
Cristoff: I think, Yes. Perhaps, It is a part of the story.
Jonas: You are right, Cristoff!

Jonas and Cristoff returned to the place and say that the practice will be at 8pm so that the two "victims" will notice their parents that they are not going to go home for that night. Cristoff and Jonas lead the two to the darker room with poles and 2 beds.

Jonas: Cedric, Mik, let us practice now.
Mik: Okay! What is the first scene?
Cedric: We cannot do the scene one if Jenny and Arlene was not around.
Cristoff: I think, we will do the scene 5.
Cedric: Scene 5? You mean the kidnapping?
Cristoff:Yes. It said to the script that their are 2 lads that are kidnapped because the murderers do not want them to say all the things they know.
Mik: But there's none for the scene 5, the ropes, the tapes, needed for a kidnapping scene.
Jonas: I Have those at my Bagpack.
Mik: What? Do you plan this?
Jonas: No! I have all of this at my back pack since June of the school year.
Cedric: I think you'll going to be a kidnapper, Jonas.
Jonas: That's not a funny joke. Let us do the scene 5.

Jonas and Cristoff game off with their plan to truly hand gag the two. Meanwhile, Mik and Cedric are conversing to play their roles as Adrian and Daniel at the story.

Cedric: Adrian, we must be brave.
Mik: But, my father is not safe, Uncle Alvin kidnapped him and kill him if my mother do not reply to those.
Jonas: Two of you!
Mik: Uncle Alvin? Where's my father?
Jonas: Put your hands above your head if you want to see your father.

Mik and Cedric put their hands at their heads but Jonas and Cristoff put true chloroforms at the handkerchief they use. Mik and Cedric became unconscious and do not know what's happening. Jonas and Cristoff carry the two at the poles in the dark room. They only put a rechargeable as the light. Jonas tied Mik at the pole using the 1 foot of the rope to tie Mik's hands at the pole, same with Cedric's hands. They use 2 ft of the rope to tie their feet at the pole and truly secure them tied at it. They use another 5 feet of the rope to tie Cedric and Mik's body securely to the pole. They left 5 more at the back pack to tie the two for tomorrow morning. Mik and Cedric gagged with tape 6 times at the pole. They also use bandana to blindfold them. Few hours later,

Mik: Mphhh!!!
Cedric: Mphhh!

Jonas and Cristoff untied the bandana and use scissors to cut their mouthgagged.

Jonas: I will remove you two's mouthgag, make sure to be silent and react not so violent, okay?

Cedric and Mik nodded and Jonas cut the gag of Mik first.

Mik: Wh*t a F*ck! Why do you tie me? Is it in the script or do you want to play tie-ups only?
Jonas: It's our decision. Since you are wearing Adrian Joseph Del Mundo's kidnapping costume, we decided to tie the two of you up.
Cedric: Mphh!
Jonas: Cristoff, remove his gag.

Cristoff removed his gag and Cedric became free to talk.

Cedric: If this is part of the script, it's okay with us. But if it is only a joke, can you please untie us up?
Jonas: No! This is not a part of script. But it is part of our game. If two of you to be untied, shut up and do not attempt to escape. Understand?
Mik: But, this is uncomfortable for us to sleep. Our bondage is so tight and we are uncomfortable to move.
Cristoff: That is now your problem. You shout to us if you want to sleep and we are going to chloroform two of you again.
Mik: What can we do to make you untie us?
Jonas: Nothing. We only want two of you to be tied up here forever. At this moment, you must cry because two of you are our captives for lifetime.
Cedric: No! You can't do that!
Cristoff: Where are you Miguel?
Mik: Shut up! I will not accept it! Untie us up now!
Jonas: Do not shout! We are not going to untie both of you if you are not in silence.
Cedric: Okay. We are going to be silent.
Jonas: There is an effective way to shut up. Cristoff, bring the tape here!

Jonas and Cristoff gag the two. Sunday Morning, Mik and Cedric took the chance to escape but they are hopeless because of their condition.
Jonas and Cristoff ungagged them and said, Do you want us to untie you both?
Cedric Replied, "Definitely, Yes!" Jonas and Cristoff untied Cedric but they left Mik tied.

Mik: Wait! How about me?
Jonas: I am sorry but you are not yet free.
Cristoff: We are leaving you here tied and gagged, Mik. Unless, your mother gave us $200,000 for your ransom.
Jonas: Goodbye, Mik!
Mik: What? Cedric help me!
Cedric: I am sorry?

Jonas and Cristoff untied Mik to the pole and tie his hands and feet together. They put the used bandana of Cedric for Mik to swallow and they wrap he duct tape 10 times. They make a knot 10 times around his hands and body that even an Houdini cannot free himself. They blindfolded him in a dark room and lock the door of the room. Mik is really helpless. What do you think Jonas and Cristoff will do to him?

(to be continued)

Just Kidding to Kidnapping(Chapter 2: English Drama Play)

Postby EmJayCute » Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:02 am

Mik is so helpless when Jonas, Cedric and Cristoff left him tied up in the dark room of the abandoned house. He is worried about the reaction of his mother about his disappearance. He was now like Adrian in the "EmJay's Nasaan si Adrian?" which is kidnapped for the sake of his family. How would Mik untie his binds? Find out how on the Chapter 2.

Chapter 2: Just Kidding to Kidnapping

Mik is still helpless in the dark room of the old abandoned house. Mrs. Cruz, Mik's mother, worried about his disappearance and suspected that he was kidnapped by the rugby boys in their village. Mrs. Cruz went to the school and confronted Jonas. Jonas give her a "fake, devilish" smile. Mrs. Cruz starts to ask Jonas what happened. Jonas said the reverse of the true happenings. Jonas said that Mik left the meeting place around 10am for church and home. Mrs. Cruz said that Mik do not return after that time. Mrs. Cruz's face is sad and disappointed on what Jonas said to her.

Meanwhile, after school, Jonas visits Mik in the abandoned house. He is still on his position when he is left alone. He untied Mik's hogtie and his gag. Mik starts to shout.

Mik: Help me! Help me!

Jonas laughed and laughed about Mik's action.

Mik: Why are you laughing? Why are doing this to me? What day you plan to free me?
Jonas: First of all, this is an abandoned old house at the center of the city. People do not go here when it is darker. Even if you shout from this room, No vibrations or sound heard from outside. I am doing this to you, let say, for money. I will kidnapped you, as Adrian, what Adrian felt when he is kidnapped. On your third question, what do you think? I am going to free you? I thought I am not. I tied you ten times and gag you ten times. A kidnapper who is only joking do not tie his victim 10 times and gag it 10 times. It means, I have more plans for you.
Mik: What am I going to do for you to free me?
Jonas: None!
Mik: What? Are you not pity with me? I am an honor student in our school. My mother is worried about my disappearance. Can you understand it?
Jonas: Yes, I did! But I am not pity at all. Come with me.

Jonas walked through the basement of the house while Mik gently hopped and hopped to follow Jonas. He is conscious about the place and he found out the people who are missing and tied there up.

Mik: What? You are the one who kidnapped the people for a very long time?
Jonas: Yes, I am. I am reincarnated 100 times a century. All the handsome boys of that school, I tied them up and execute them all here at the basement. But for you, there is a special place for you to be executed and I am not the one who execute them but the girls.
Mik: Girls? My Phobia are Girls. Please, have pity! I am not the one who kill you and reincarnated you for a century.
Jonas: I am sorry, Mik. If my mission failed, I did not go on to heaven and my soul would be at hell. Aren't you pity of my condition too?
Mik: Even though you are going to hell, many people expect that I am the next president of the republic because of my intelligence. Aren't you happy to help others than yourself?
Jonas: I am sorry, Mik. That's the order. If my conscience will run on me, my soul will be punished in Hell. I cannot see my friends, cousins and family who are waiting for me.
Mik: Why you chose me? Why not Andrew or Jayson? They are handsome too.
Jonas: Because you are the one who marked the "t" mark. The "t" mark is the mark wherein I see my next victims.
Mik: Jonas, if you kill me, I will not promise you to go to heaven. Even you kill me, the Hell's gate will welcome you because God doesn't want every human being to kill others instead love them as your friend and as the golds, jewelries at the treasure chest.
Jonas: I think you're right, Mik. But even if I free you, will you promise me to pray for my soul?
Mik: I promise.

Jonas go to the edge of the room and think about the fortune of his victim. He consumed many hours until he said "No! I am not going to free you!"
Mik was surprised and hurriedly hopped fastly but Jonas was too fast to him.

Jonas: Where are you going, Larvae?
Mik: I will escape. Do not touch me. Free me instead.
Jonas: I am sorry, Boss. I will not promise you that.
Mik: Get out of my sight!
Jonas: How dare you say that to me, Miguel? Remember, you are my captive. I am not tied up but you are. So, I can do anything with you. Unless, you untied yourself out of me and escape in this abandoned old house.
Mik: Can you untie my binds and make me independent? I want to jump freely. I want to speak in many people.

Jonas interrupt him by putting his hands in Mik's mouth. Mik is struggling about the handgagging but his captor won and he fell down the ground unconscious. After of 4 hours of being unconscious, Mik is again hogtied but this time, with no blindfolds. Mik see a scissor at the floor and slowly crawling to get it. But a chain bound his legs and feet and he see himself tied up at the compartment of the basement. It is like a box secured, dark, can't freely move. It is like a torture to Mik. He is struggling on that box and the box turned and turned around. Mik became drowsy and dizzy so slept at that particular box.

Can Mik escape from the soul of Jonas? Will he find way to free himself from the compartment of the basement's cemetery? Will his life be normal again? Can he survive the suffocation inside the box or he will say goodbye to the people who expect from him? Find out in next chapter of English Drama Play.

Re: English Drama Play(mm/mm)

Postby xtc » Thu Nov 24, 2011 7:32 am

English is obviously not your first language but this is an interesting start.
Good luck with your venture.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: English Drama Play(mm/mm)

Postby EmJayCute » Tue Nov 29, 2011 8:12 pm

I am sorry if my grammar is wrong... Yes, its my first time to write stories using 2nd language which is English.. By the way, thank you for reading this...:)

Re: English Drama Play(mm/mm)

Postby xtc » Wed Nov 30, 2011 2:41 am

Don't appologise. Your writing is lucid and pacey. It also has an original slant for this site.
Your writing is easier to follow than the ungramatical offerings elsewhere on this site because it is well structured. It is really just the coloquial nature of English that makes it easy to spot a non-native writer (other than the remarkable Lasse!). I certainly could not write in a language other than *English.

When is the next epiosde due?

Wassail!
Xtc

* Although some of my "friends" would say that I am also fluent in Bullshit and Rubbish!
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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