Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby james14 » Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:32 am

Life at Rosie's school was getting back to normal after the excitment of the last few weeks. Her aunt and uncle, with their cronies, were behind bars awaiting trial as effectively out of Rosies life now.
Rosies two nearest freinds Jane and Janice asked her if she wanted to go to town to do some window shopping. Rosie had not been off the prenmises for a week or so and jumped at the chance to go out. The three of them went to town and window shopped but a new shop in town attracted them. It had literally just opened its doors as the girls came upon it. A charming women greeted them inside and closed the door behind them. "Try on anything you want" the women said and helped the three girls choose a dress each- the summer ball would be soon upon them and the price of the clothes looked cheap. The women showed them to the cubicles in the corner. Each had a curtain across - Rosie took of her own skirt and top -when a door at the rear of the cubicle opened and someone reached in and dragged her through the door. Rosie was too stunned to call out. She looked around and saw she was in a store of some kind. Before she could react a women had gagged her with a hankie forced into her mouth and a long scarf tighted over this. Rosie's wrists were tied very tighly together as were her elbows and uppper arms. Her arms were fastened to her body so they were secured to her sides. Rosie realised there was no way she could escape the ropes. A further rope was put around her upper body further securing her arms to her body.
The rope went right over her bust and it hurt as they crushed her bust to her chest. Rosie looked to her right and saw her friends in the same prediciment- Both were tied like herself except Janet had rope holding her arms to her body over and under her bust. Rosie saw that Janet's bust was quite large . Jane was tied also like rosie - they were made to move to a large van. Inside the three had their legs tied at the ankles, shins , below and above knees, and thighs- the ropes were very tight and Rosie could not move a muscle. IT was then Rosie realised that all three were in just in their school knickers, cotton top, and little else. "They were all blindfolded. A womens voice said" Don't even think of escaping! Anyway I bet you wouldnt anyway undressed as you all are" Rosie thought she detected a sneer in the woman's voice. The doors were shut on the van but light came through the translucent top so it was not dark. Rosie's blindfold slipped off and she saw Janet and Jane in the same predicament as herself.
Why had this happened?Had her aunt and uncle even from the confines of a prison got someone to kidnap Rosie and get their revenge? Rosie ha no plan this time- no deception idea- she was helpless in the clutches of someone she did not know . It had to be her aunt and uncle's doing- were they going to take revenge for her deception of them? Rosie's mind was in overdrive thinking what was going to happen. The ropes dug into her flesh and she knew escape was impossible... what now Rosie wondered...TBC

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby jennybond » Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:24 am

Good start, I'm looking forward to reading more.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby Scottstud94 » Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:43 am

Please continue

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby james14 » Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:14 am

Rosie realised also the ropes were so tightly tied and fastened that she had no chance of getting free. The ropes were hurting her and her bust felt very painful.
She looked at Jane as saw how tight they had also tied her. She seemed to have had more rope put on than herself and Rosie wondered, in her state of confusion, why.
It seemed a long time travelling and bumpy road led to the truck stopping and the rear doors flung open- A woman's voice said" See you did escape then" The women went on" No escaping this time". Rosie realised then her kidnappers were ,indeed, something to do with her aunt and uncle. Jane and Janet were lifted out by two rather heavily built women and taken inside what seemed to be a house . One of the women came out for Rosie and lifted with ease and into the house- taking her into a room on the ground floor. Jane and Janet were being tied to chairs and the woman held Rosie whilst that task was done. Rosie bonds were loosened then she was tied to a chair also. Her arms were fastened to the chair with a lot of rope and over her bust again. Her legs were tied fastened to the rear legs of the chair so they were drawn back in a painful way. Her knees , shins were also tied separate to the chair. One of the women spoke" We will take your gags out now but any attempt to shout and they will go back for all. The 3 Friend's gags were removed and Rosie and the relief was welcomed.Her mouth hurt from the tightness of the scarf. Jane said something like" Who are you" and the women nearest slapped her face hard enough to make it red" Shut you mouth bitch or else". I saw tears coming down Jane's cheeks- the slap would have hurt a lot. Rosie felt very exposed though, her legs were open and she wore only her school knickers and had nothing else to cover her. Jane was worse off -she was wearing her knickers but only a bra covered her bust. Janet was in the same state of dress as Rosie- in other words exposed quite a bit. The women turned the 3 friends around in the chairs so they could not see each other. Rosie glimpsed Jane's tied wrists and arms and saw how tight they were. She herself felt in pain from the ropes and she began to realise that she was in great danger- more to the point she was cursing herself for also putting her 2 friends in danger too! . Now she also realised that her friends would no doubt perish with her. The women said" all your riches cannot save you now bitch".And you freinds cannot save you either".
Then it dawned on Rosie- as her parents were dead, her uncle and aunt would , if she was dead, inherit all her wealth and possessions and if they got out of prison early for their crimes and as Rosie was out of the way and not able to be in court-they may even get off the charge. She would not be safe after all.
More to the point there was nobody who knew where she was and nobody ,therefore, to rescue her. 2 of the women went out and the van drove away. There was only one women left. In Rosie's mind a plan began to evolve- what if.................TBC.

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby Plueschbabycd » Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:57 am

Hallo very intressting story. But I wounder in other country you can inherit of a person that is killed on your order. In Germany your would lost the right to do it. No profit out of crime. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby james14 » Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:50 am

Hmm.... try reading the story again - you have not read it properly and I suspect read all the words. There is a lot of ifs in Rosies thoughts and being scared etc ... do I need to go on -- it is fiction for goodness sake- I bet your one who thinks Coronation Street is real life too!!!!LOL!
Ah well....some people...............!!!!

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby bondagefan » Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:11 am

So far good sequel to the first Rosie story.Can't wait to read more.
Hope all goes well for Rosie,Jane,& Janice(Janet).

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby Plueschbabycd » Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:55 am

cricks5 wrote:Yes well James it can be tough reading for anyone who speaks English as a Second Language.

Yes is my Second Language and was never good in it. Allso I have Alexis.
Ok can now belief the do not know this fact. But belief even fiction have base fact. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby Plueschbabycd » Sun Aug 29, 2010 12:11 pm

Hallo was better in Meath and Physic. That read in English story an try write one would my old english teacher not belief. :)
The fact that know much of the law of other country.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby james14 » Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:56 pm

I will have to translate the story into German, French, Moronic( for the fick!) and USA (for the very fick!!)LOL!!

Next chapter soon. Read all the chapters though and do not "jump the gun" so to speak-

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby james14 » Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:41 am

Yes because I have served with the US forces on an exchange programme- and I noted you were USA so thought I wind you up a bit!- and whatever some say about the ordinary USA person, I had a great time in The States etc. People see the USA people through the Govt of the USA and think all USA people are like that!!

Next Chapter soon...ish!!

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby Plueschbabycd » Mon Aug 30, 2010 7:12 am

cricks5 wrote:Why not try using a German to English dictionary to help you out with grammar usage?

Hallo cricks5, try find out most dictionary give the basic form. :) The second problem is. If translate German to English find more one, not only British, also if give the American and Canadian form, then all British translation I have than find out witch word should now use. :) Look self at http://dict.leo.org/?lang=de. That can only help me understand the basic meaning of a story. Self some some German story I must read more than once to understand them full. If I really like story I make.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby james14 » Mon Aug 30, 2010 7:34 am

In Rosie's mind a plan was starting to form- now there is only one women here and three of us- If only she would untie us and let us go to the loo. Rosie realised she would probably only let one go at a time so her plan was flawed unless she could detract the women long enough to untie one or both of her friends- Rosie realised the amount of rope on them that it would take perhaps too long. The women tested the ropes on rosie and she heard a grunt of satisfaction that they were tight enough.
So what now- Rosie knew she could not loosen the ropes herself and she was not near enough or able to slide her chair to one of the others. She heard the van return and the two women came in-one said got the stuff now. Rosie and her friends were turned to see each other- Rosie could not work out why and she saw the frightened faces of her freinds . A mask like the oxygen masks in hospital was put over her face and the others too. The women open a valve on a cylinder and gas flowed through- Rosie began to go dizzy and her vision wnet blurred- she tried to struggle but the bonds held her tight in the chair. A blackness enveloped her - it was the end...Rosie opened her eyes- there was her two friend s standing over her- sayin g "Come on Rosie" time to get up and go to town. Rosie had had a horrible nightmare that seemed very true.
She was safe and her two freinds laughed at her - her fluffy toys all over the place. She got up washed and dressed, the nightmare still vague but there. What had it meant?
Was she wanting her friends to be tied up- did she fancy them even?. Rosie laughed to herself, then a sudden thought came over her- her aunt and uncle still had freinds- and they had not been convicted yet. Until they were she would have to be on her guard- yes it was a nightmare, but it made Rosie realise how vunerable she might be to kidnap.
Come on Rosie we will miss the bus came a shout from her freinds and lauging they all went happily on their way.
Next Story soonest.

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby jennybond » Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:22 pm

Good ending, I don't think anyone saw that coming. Well Done. :P
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby bondagefan » Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:58 pm

Great & interesting ending to this story.Waiting patiently for
next story to post.

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby jennybond » Mon Aug 30, 2010 1:45 pm

Plueschbabycd wrote:
cricks5 wrote:Why not try using a German to English dictionary to help you out with grammar usage?

Hallo cricks5, try find out most dictionary give the basic form. :) The second problem is. If translate German to English find more one, not only British, also if give the American and Canadian form, then all British translation I have than find out witch word should now use. :) Look self at http://dict.leo.org/?lang=de. That can only help me understand the basic meaning of a story. Self some some German story I must read more than once to understand them full. If I really like story I make.
Andrew


Andrew you keep on enjoying and commenting on the stories on here, I'm sure most people know and understand English isn't your first langue. I really appreciate you making the effort to comment on my stories, I really hope others do to.
It only gets tighter if you struggle...

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue Aug 31, 2010 4:52 am

jenny, know you think about it. Byway my english is much better than it was in school. There I never hear anything about bondage vocable I need hear or in other part of net. If we would only talk oral, you would probably never find out my problems. My first comment hear was more question how is USA and other country I know only the German laws, the other but want learn more. :)
james I like you story very much. That was only nightmare is big ending. Perhaps the dream had could a bit longer. :) But think would that it was not her last and if her uncle and aunt can break out, it would even worser.:D
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Rosie In trouble again!!

Postby james14 » Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:07 am

You will have to wait and see what happens in the next story!! Thank you everyone for the comments.