The Number four club

Postby james14 » Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:09 am

JOHN, HANNAH, HARRY, CHRISTINE were members of the Number Four Club- this name was given to them because they were always together and friends had made up the name for them.
Hannah was 16 and slim and lithe- Christine was 16 too and more rounded but not fat. The boys were 16 and whilst not short were not tall either- They were not fat as they played in the school football team.
They were all at Christine’s house trying to make their minds up what to do at the weekend.
Various things had been mooted- the cinema, swimming and some other things. There was a theatre production which seemed okay and a matinee performance was actually within their budget for once. It was one of those variety acts that were almost extinct theses days but were always popular for the people around .The friends all agreed that they would go to the Saturday afternoon. John said he would get the tickets as he was going near the theatre after school on Friday.
On the Saturday they all went to the theatre and saw a good show although the Chinese show was just a lot of simple tricks and illusions.
As they left Hannah saw a police car outside her father’s shop- she ran in to hear her father had been robbed of a diamond bracelet. A man and woman had come into the shop and asked to buy a diamond bracelet- they had asked for it to be gift wrapped and the man had offered to pay by cheque but her father said for that a bankers draft would be needed. The man held the package and then gave it back to be put in the safe until they got back. They had not come back and the banks were closed by 12 being a Saturday). Hannah’s father had taken out the bracelet and unwrapped it- To his shock inside the package was a cheap bracelet- somehow the man had switched the packages and had the real diamond bracelet !!
The description of the people was of tall man with dark hair and wearing a suit and coat. the women was a blonde - the CTV camera was out of order unfortunately.
The 4 were upset and went back to the shed they called the den at Johns. They all said “ We must do something”. After various theories Harry said - they put up a good act and with a an easy trick to swoop the packages. In each of their heads a light came on and all said “ The Chinese at the theatre”!! “ Of course “ said Hannah-” they have everything going for them” “ They know some tricks and I bet they are experts at makeup etc. A Plan came to mind- They would book again for the Sunday afternoon performance and try to go back stage and search their dressing room- Harry said “But they were on stage when the robbery took place”. The friends considered this and Christine thought they would have time to do the job , quickly change and then go on stage. Hannah’s fathers shop was only yards from the theatre - and there was the stage door they could have gone through. They went that afternoon to see the show again and all watched the first turn of the Chinese performance- Yes there was time between that turn and the second turn they performed in. Hannah and Christine left their seats and snuck out and got in through a open window in a storeroom- Fortunate it was not locked- the found the dressing room with the sign on it “MR MACARDO”
On . Opening the door slowly and finding it unlocked they crept in. They carefully looked around -in a case was a suit , a wig and some shoes that would make someone look bigger. Also was a blonde wig and some women’s clothes. Hannah said “ we have to go to the police now”. Unfortunately just as Hannah said that in walked the man and women. “I think not” said the man. He pulled a gun out of his belt saying “This is not a replica either”. Hannah and Christine did not argue! Okay do not move. The woman opened a bag and got out some ropes- She grabbed Christine and put her in a chair. She tied her wrists behind the chair tightly together and then her upper arms too together. The ropes were very tight and Christine’s arms were helpless.
She tied Christine’s arms to the chair and then tied her ankles and shins separately to the chair legs . Christine knew she was a helpless prisoner. The woman gagged her with a some cotton wool shoved in her mouth and a long scarf wrapped over this. Hannah was tied like Christine and gagged too, Both were helpless in the hands of these criminals- Nosey brats “ said the woman- but we will be long gone before you get free. Christine was feeling a bit venerable as her skirt had pushed up and with her legs wide open her thighs were exposed and her knickers were showing. The man and the woman quickly packed up and seemed to go in and out. The show had not yet finished . Left in an empty room the two girls looked at each other - John and Harry would come to their rescue soon they thought. The show appeared to finish but nobody came, They both tried to shout but the gags were too tight and the cotton wool prevented them from making any noise. The woman and the man returned and she checked to see if the ropes had loosened.
She said “You interfering brats will be here for hours- hope your comfortable “ She laughed and they went,
Hannah felt the ropes biting into her and tried to loosen them ,but they were tied to well!! She heard the show end and then for a while there was a lot of activity outside the room, Try as they could the gag was too cunningly tied for them to be heard. Hanna thought that her friends would search for them, but after a while the theatre went quiet, Had they been left here for the night. Hanna hoped not as her bonds were making her uncomfortable and the gag made her mouth feel sore.
Chrisitine looked very frightened as she seemed to be in pain from the tight ropes- her eyes had tears in them. Hannah could not even comfort her friend. Hannah realised that Christine had some very tight rope just under her bust that must be painful as Christine's bust was not small at all and the rope must be painful. Hannah wondered if that particular peice of ropework had been put there on purpose to make chris as uncomfortable as it could be. .. Hannah heard someone coming and thought it must be the boys- if only she could shout out but the gag held firm-the door knob turned and the door slowly opened...........to her shock...................
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Re: The Number four club

Postby james14 » Mon Oct 04, 2010 9:27 am

In came the man and the woman- Hannah had thought they might be miles away now, but here they were. They brought in Harry- He was bound and gagged too but his legs were free. They too him behind a curtained-off area of the dressing room. Hannah noticed the woman had a case in her hand. There was a lot of shuffling and a loud noise like someone was being slapped " Stop moving brat" she heard the woman said. The Curtain opened and there was Harry but he was dressed like a girl now. He wore a white blouse and a green skirt- He had obvious false breasts on him - Hannah realised they were theatre people and would have such things. He was tied as before but his legs were still untied. He looked very uncomfy and it was also obvious, due to red cheeks, that he had been slapped across his face hard. The woman then did a curious thing:She lifted up his skirt revealing he was wearing green school knickers. Just why was a mystery to Hannah. He was then shoved out the room by the women and the man stayed in. The woman returned after a while- we wondered where was Harry. The woman checked our bonds for tightness - retieing here and there. She tied the rope under Christine's bust tighter it seemed and also appeared to cup Christine's breasts as she did so- Hannah wondered if it was to check that the rope was tight enough.
The woman had not done the same to her though. The man lifted Hannah's chair and took her out, He came back after about 2 minutes and Carried Christine out. Hannah found herself in the rear of a large van. Harry was on the floor and now his ankles, knees and thighs had been tied very tightly together. The woman then put a wide long scarf over our mouths and noses and made them tight at the back of the three's heads- Hannah wondered why but she thought it was just another layer to stop them shouting out. The van's doors shut with a slam and Hannah heard a lock being fixed on. The van moved off- after about 2 hours the van stopped and the doors at the rear were thrown over. The woman blindfolded them. Hannah felt the chair lift and get carried out of the van. She did not know where she was. The woman removed the blindfold and Hannah seemed to be a small room. Then Hannah saw out of the round window and realised she was on a boat. The others were brought in and Harry was thrown onto the floor. The woman warned"Stay still of else". The engines of the boat started and soon it was going along....to where thought Hannah....TBC
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Re: The Number four club

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Oct 06, 2010 5:15 am

Please continue.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Number four club

Postby james14 » Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:43 am

Hannah looked over to see Christine and saw her look very scared. Harry was on the floor and lay very still. The ropes had been very tightly tied on him and Hanna thought they must be hurting. The woman came in and with a menace in her voice said " Any trouble from you and you'll go overboard. She went over to Christine and once again seem to touch and cup her breasts whilst checking the rope under them. Hanah thought she was obsessed with Christines bust for some reason. The woman put a rope around Christine's neck and down between her breasts and lead the two rope strands under the rope under Christines bust and down between her legs - she pushed it so the rope ends came out of the crack of christines bum and then pulled tight to the ropes bit into Chrisitines crutch. She tied off the rope to the rope around Christines wrists,It must have been painful. Chrisitne looked in horror as this happened but she was helpless to do anything. The woman left and It seemed about 3 hours when in came the women. She untied Hannah from the chair but left her hands and elbows fastened together. She undid Hannah's legs and took her to another cabin. In here there were some male clothing on the bed. "Now bitch" the woman said," I am going to untie you and take off your gag, there is no escape as we are miles off the coast".The woman told Hannah to use the loo etc and then change into the clothes on the bed. Hannah was untied and the gag taken off her - she was told to get on with it. Hannah was left alone for about 10 mins before the woman came back in. Hannah was half undressed and she covered herself quickly- the woman laughed at her saying " I seen it all before bitch" now get dressed in those clothes. Hannah saw there was some male pants which she put on.Hannah noticed the red marks from the ropes on her body but the woman motioned to her to hurry up. She put some trousers on and a shirt and a male pullover. Socks and shoes were then put on. The woman said " You will have your legs free and be able to walk around the deck- With that the women retied Hannah's wrists and elbows as well as securing her arms to her body. The woman gagged Hannah with some strong tape and a scarf over that. The woman took Hannah out and took her into a lounge type room. "Make comfortable bitch" said the woman
and went out of a door. Hannah was left there and managed to sit down on what was a comfortable settee. Hannah saw throught the open door Christine being taken to the same cabin as she was. There was silence then she heard Christine shout out--please dont -no and a scream from her- what had happened.....was Christine okay..what had the woman done to her to make her scream out like that...TBC
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Re: The Number four club

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:46 am

Don't take this the wrong way, but I can help give you advice on this detective story if you want it to be a bit better. All you need to do is pm me for it only. But still great story.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: The Number four club

Postby Ducttapestar » Wed Oct 06, 2010 4:45 pm

XD. Christine was 16. I love the KISS reference.

Re: The Number four club

Postby james14 » Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:46 pm

Go on what do you mean by the Kiss reference??

Re: The Number four club

Postby james14 » Fri Oct 08, 2010 3:28 am

Hannah wondered what the woman was doing to Chrisitine- was she torturing her - Hannah had no clue and being tied tightly as she was could do nothing anyway.
The woman pushed Christine into the cabin. To Hanna's shock Christine was totally naked. The woman said" So you do not want to wear those clothes you can wear nothing then- Chrisine was tied up and the ropes were cuttinng deep into her flesh. She looked very frightened. The woman tied her to a chair and embarassingly Christine s legs were tied apart. "Sit there and reflect you fool". The woman looked at hannah and said -"you can take a walk with me on deck " Although tied except for her legs and somewhat therefore unbalanced Hannah managed to walk quite well. The woman pushed her from behind saying "If you dont behave you will end up without any clothes on- It does not bother me . Your friend was uncooperative so she had to be as she is". The sea air filled Hannahs nose and that was a relief to breathe some fresh air even through the gag. "Now bitch you will be able to sit and walk around but try anything and overboard you go- no problem for me to do that." Hannah was led into a lounge type room "Now sit and keep out of trouble" the woman said. She checked hannah;s bonds for tightness and retied a rope here and there tighter. All Hannah could think was of poor Christine sitting naked in a cabin exposed and vunerable. Was the woman and man going to rape her, perhaps both, what was going to happen to Harry, who had stayed rather still when he had been thrown on the cabin floor. Could she, Hannah get loose from the tight ropes and call for help somehow- perhaps the boat had a radio or something. The vital thing was to get loose but the ropes were so cunningly tied and seemed to be checked often that escaping would, Hannah thought, be hard for Houdini.But she thought she had to try- poor Christine would be relying on her and Harry might be hurt. She tried to work her arns and wrists but the ropes remained very tight....gosh she thought what are we to do... here we are prisoners on a boat, one male dressed as a girl, another naked and tied to a chair and herself tied tighly and unable to think how to get loose. The Hannah realised that her legs were free so she could walk around- she looked around and saw a metal edge on a door - it might be sharp enough to cut her bonds- even if not it could help wear away the rope. Hannah got up with difficulty and walked steadly to the door and turned so she could rub the ropes against the metal. It would be slow but she thought it just might work. Hannah heard the woman saying to Christine" Bitches like you get nowhere". Hannah kept rubbing her wrist bonds against the metal strip-- nothing seemed to be happening. She heard the woman coming down the corridor to the lounge so quickly sat down- the man had lifted Christine and the chair up- but Hannah saw to her to horror that Christine was......tbc

Re: The Number four club

Postby james14 » Fri Oct 08, 2010 7:49 am

Christine was still naked . Her head was bowed - The woman tied a rope to Chrisiints thumbs and lead it around her neck and pulled so Christine had to put her head up to stop the rope choking her- the woman then fastened the loose end to Chrisitines other thumb so if she tried to bow her head her thumbs would be pulled up and if she then tried to lower her thumbs her neck would become sore. It was viciously tied and meant to make Christine be in pain whatever she did.The women shouted out " That will teach you not to cooperate you bitch". Poor Christine look scared and in her vunerable positin totally helpless. The woman went out to the wheelhouse of the boat- but must have forgot that Hannah had a her legs loose. Hannah got up and started sawing her bonds against the metal strip - after what seemed an age she felt the ropes part and her wrist became freed- Jus the elbows now she thought and soon sawed through those- With difficulty Hannah untied herself and then slipped over to Christine- she as quickly as possible untied her. Christine and her hugged each other but they knew they were still not entirely free. Hannah asked Christine if she was ok- Chritine answered " She kept touching my breasts and making comments about them-and I am sure when she rubbed my bum she did it on purpose- Hannah said-Never mind that we have to get off here somehow. Christine said "What about Harry"- Hannah slipped into the cabin but Harry was not there anymore. Christine got dressed quickly as Hannah slowly snuck to the wheelhouse. She looked through a small window and saw the man and woman sitting and also to her horror saw Harry. He had only the green school knickers on and a what seemed like a very padded bra. He was tied to a chair and was gagged. The man and the woman was saying something to harry but hannah could not make it out. Hannah noticed he had also a suspender belt on and some stockings on him. He did look like a girl.
Hannah looked around herself and found a very pistol - was it loaded- she had fired one once at a Coastguard demo , and hoped she remembered what to do. The pistol was loaded- She found some more cartridges and slipped out onto the deck- she saw , to her suprise some ships around . She pointed the pistol skywards and pulled the trigger- the pistol went off with a huge bang and the flare soared into the sky and burst in the air. Hannah reloaded and just as she was going to fire another saw the man and the woman coming towards her...Hannah pointed the pistol.....................tbc

Re: The Number four club

Postby Ducttapestar » Fri Oct 08, 2010 5:33 pm

This is what I meant by "KISS reference."
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMlVZ6RDets
Cool story btw.

Re: The Number four club

Postby james14 » Fri Oct 08, 2010 11:44 pm

Thanks for that- I should have recalled that!!
I am glad you are enjoying the story - more to come soon(ish).

Re: The Number four club

Postby james14 » Fri Oct 15, 2010 9:17 am

Hannah felt someone grab her from behind and a cloth was put over her face- it smelt funny and Hannah felt dizzy and vague- Hannah came to- She was tied upside down from a beam in the cabin roof. She was completly undressed and her wrists and arms were tightly tied and rope was holding her arms tightly to her side circled her body.
She was helpless- the woman was there and said in a menacing voice " You bitch-this will teach you to be clever- now stay ther bitch and reflect om your stupidity" Hannah was horrified to see that the woman had a whip in her hand- was she going to use it on her for trying to escape. The woman said again in a very menecing voice " You'll get some of this if you do not behave"- The woman swished the whip until it made a "Crack". Hannah was really terrified now . There was no way she could get away and the threat of that whip put escape out of Hannah's mind for a while. Hannah soon took stock and reckoned she could get free if only she could loosen her ankles from the beam. She moved her ankles so the rope rubbed against the beam- the rust on the beam was starting to wear away the rope and it parted.Hannah fell to the floor but as the carpet was thick she made little noise. Now to get help first and worry about the others afterwards. Although tightly tied Hannah found a sharp eddge and eroded the rope away until she was free. The red angry rope marks made her more determined to get help. The flare gun woukd be out-she saw the time as 0130 and the boat was still- She figured it was at anchor somewhere. She snuck out of the cabin - fortuantly unlocked- Hannad wondered about that but she guessed they thought she would not escape or perhpas just forgot- whatever the reason Hannah went towards the wheelhouse and slowly slid the door back and entered- it was empty and she looked in the blue light of the moon. She found the radio and saw the on switch- it lit up and for a moment hanah wondered if the light would disturb anyone. She looked and saw a ch 16 come up and some faint voices coming from the speaker. She saw the volume controls but decieded not to touch that. She found the mike and pressed the button. Recalling some film, she said "Mayday Mayday" I and my friends are being held on this boat- a voice came over- saying what craft is calling- there was some numbers on the radio and Hannah said these- The voice came back- position- hannah said she had no clue- but then the coastgurad came in and said"we know where you are " we are sending a navy patrol boat to come to you. Hannah said " be quiet as our captors are asleep. Hannah then went off and found Christine in a cabin and untied her- they found their clothes and freed Harry who was still dazed - they found his clothes too and dressed him. It was a hour before they heard some shouting on deck and in other cabins- In real style someone said "The Navy is here"...It was not long before all their captors had been arrested . Hannah and her friends were taken back to the Navy patrol boat- The Captain said " Your safe now" Some of our crew are taking the cruiser back in to port.
Three days later all of the gang were being cheered as they came out of the Police Station having given statements,their friends all being there.
Well said Christine we really got ourselves in a mess then , I hope never again but knowing us.............Hannah said nothing but gave her freind a little wink and smile..

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