## It's a madhouse! A MADHOUSE!!!

Post by Sealherlips » Tue Jan 15, 2013 10:49 am

Can someone write a story about a beautiful young journalist named Alayna Clifton, a perfect worker and goody two shoes who is sent by her female boss (who really doesn't like her) to admit herself into a madhouse under a false name (Kaitlyn Douglas) to write a story about the experience to show how the patients are treated. The nurses strap her into a straitjacket (and after a while of discomfort, panel gag her for complaining too loudly) and treat her like the other patients, often restraining and gagging her (panel gags, bit gags, and microfoam tape). I want her ordeal to last a week, and on the last day when she reveals her real name and that she was just there to write a piece on it, they call her boss in to confirm it. When she arrives, she talks to her alone in the cell, with Alayna restrained in her straitjacket, and reveals that there never was any story, officially. She just wanted to get rid of her. She then strokes her cheeks before looking into her eyes and telling her to enjoy her new life, before kissing her on the forehead and walking out, telling the doctor she is Kaitlyn Douglas, a disgruntled former employee that she fired for attacking another employee, and even shows them a work badge with her picture and the name Kaitlyn Douglas. The doctor then desides she is mentally unfit to discharge herself, and says that she will remain there until she shows improvement. I want the story to end with her being dragged to her padded cell screaming, "My name is Alayna Clifton! I'm not crazy! I'm not crazy! I'm not crazy!" Before being re-gagged with the panel gag, and slamming the door shut. The lights go out, and she sobs, contemplating how her new life is going to be. Throughout the corridor is silent, except from the muffled screaming from her cell. I want the story to be long, and at least seven parts (one for each day). I would like someone who can write a very detailed story that would be interesting to read. Someone who can really show what's going on in her mind. Now that I think of it, I also think it would work better in first person point of view as well.

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Post by MoonDust » Mon Jan 21, 2013 8:47 am

The idea is fantastic! This plot is so great and it could be one of those more tear dropping stories maybe a bit twisted. I love such stories and I would have loved to write this for you. But one of the main reasons I will not, is because this is such a amazing story line, and I think you would have written this better than any other since you're the creator of this beautiful created plot.
The second reason is I sadly have no time to post each day and write each day. The third reason I will not do this is because I already is writing two stories, no four.
But I'm not commenting here just to say I won't write the story for you. I did this to tell you that this is awesome and I would love to see it as a fully made story. I think with just the plot people would be thrilled by facination, and I don't say this just to say it. I have experience writing stories, lol. Please have someone write this story or if not anyone will do this, I hope you will write it. The talent is there, it's clearly a talent here.
Good luck to you!
Friggin cold =_=

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Post by Plueschbabycd » Mon Jan 21, 2013 9:31 am

Hello I think also with your request you given basic storyline so that you write self, no one tells that must finished tomorrow. You can work on it till you be satisfied.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

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Post by Zandor » Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:34 pm

Hmm. How long do y'all want it?
You are q immortal

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Post by Sealherlips » Tue Jan 22, 2013 6:48 pm

Oh MoonDust, I didn't mean post each part every day, I meant each day in the story. Each fictional day. Whoever writes it can take their time. Although hopefully not too much.

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Post by MoonDust » Wed Jan 23, 2013 7:36 am

Oh, my bad. But seriously you should think about doing this yourself since it's so great and people can abuse this to make it their own which is rightfully yours and your original idea. I mean, there is people out there who would.
Friggin cold =_=

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Post by tightstightstights » Mon Jan 28, 2013 9:58 am

I'll write it if you like
My name say's it all...you like tights...socks...anything about feet? And a couple of tape gags with a side of no escape? Message me anytime...we can talk as long as you want to xxx
Breagh Cassie 20

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Post by Sealherlips » Mon Jan 28, 2013 10:15 pm

No thanks.

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Post by tightstightstights » Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:04 am

Why
My name say's it all...you like tights...socks...anything about feet? And a couple of tape gags with a side of no escape? Message me anytime...we can talk as long as you want to xxx
Breagh Cassie 20

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Post by Sealherlips » Tue Jan 29, 2013 9:14 am

I want someone with more experience in writing.

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Post by tightstightstights » Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:57 am

Can I try write one chapter and then send you it if you don't like it I'll not write it if you do then I keep going? Please I'm really attracted to this story idea
My name say's it all...you like tights...socks...anything about feet? And a couple of tape gags with a side of no escape? Message me anytime...we can talk as long as you want to xxx
Breagh Cassie 20

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Post by Sealherlips » Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:14 pm

Alright but I doubt it'll be up to my standards.

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Post by Sealherlips » Tue Apr 09, 2013 11:32 pm

Well surprise, surprise, surprise. Tightstightstights never wrote anything. Anyone else want to give it a shot?

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Post by xtc » Wed Apr 10, 2013 2:17 am

Not if you treat people with so little respect.
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but little speedos rule!
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Post by Sealherlips » Wed Apr 10, 2013 4:25 am

She's done this to other people. She always claims she will write their story and never does.

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Post by Jason Toddman » Sun Apr 21, 2013 8:32 am

> Sealherlips wrote:She's done this to other people. She always claims she will write their story and never does.

Perhaps so but under the circumstances if I were talked down to that way I wouldn't have bothered to write anything either. Writing stories for other people can be... and for me often has been... literally a thankless job .
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

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Post by Sealherlips » Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:08 am

I wouldn't have been like that to anyone else. She trolls people by saying she will write a story without any intention of doing so.

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Post by bluebird » Thu Apr 25, 2013 10:31 am

You should still give her the benefit of the doubt. She might not be a troll at all. Maybe she's just shy or can't find the time.
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Post by Nuclearo » Fri May 03, 2013 7:43 pm

So this means this never will get written? :<
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Post by Janbound » Thu May 16, 2013 5:11 am

> Sealherlips wrote:Well surprise, surprise, surprise. Tightstightstights never wrote anything. Anyone else want to give it a shot?

No. Write it yourself since no one else is going to come up to your standards.

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Post by Sealherlips » Thu May 16, 2013 9:10 am

> Janbound wrote:

> > Sealherlips wrote:Well surprise, surprise, surprise. Tightstightstights never wrote anything. Anyone else want to give it a shot?

> No. Write it yourself since no one else is going to come up to your standards.

Most people would. But this person can't even use proper grammar or spelling, so obviously they can't write a story.

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Post by Sealherlips » Thu May 16, 2013 9:11 am

Not to mention I already knew hat they never had any intention of writing it. This person always says to people, "oh sure I'll write your story!" But then they never reply again.

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Post by Jason Toddman » Thu May 16, 2013 10:58 am

Okay... no more bickering please, or this topic is going to get locked.
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

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Post by Janbound » Fri May 17, 2013 4:27 am

Sorry Jason