Detention with a psycho teacher

Postby HuntressofArtemis » Wed Feb 01, 2012 1:12 pm

A/N:First story on this site!!!Please be nice.CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would be great though.Not things like "It was rubbish-"
Pheobe Johnson was a very Beautiful young woman.
She had Red hair that was dead straight and reached down to the tops of her shoulder blades, Eyes as green as grass in the spring, and lovely tan skin.
She went to a school a public school in London where she had psycho teachers and creepy lunch ladies.
Her uniform consisted of plaid bottoms(For Pheobe, a pleated skirt, white long sleeved polo, a blazer with the school symbol and black school shoes, no trainers.
Of course she never followed that rule she wore red superdrys to school everyday.
If your wondering, that wasn't why she got into detention.
"Wake up Pheobe!Perhaps you can take a nap at the detention I'm giving after school!"Pheobe's history teacher yelled.
Pheobe was actually a nerd, she was falling asleep because she had stayed up till 1 reading in the dark with her phone torch.
"But-"
"No buts, ms Johnson right after registration"mr Rossi said
Mr Rossi was a very irritating history teacher.He had salt and pepper hair and wore a messy suit.
He kept a safe in his office, and it was unknown to anyone what had been contained in it.
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Pheobe nervously stepped into Mr. Rossi's office.
"Errrrrr...Mr. Rossi?"
The lights switched on to show Mr. Rossi sitting on his desk, the safe was wide open to reveal a collection of whips,paddles,ball gags, scarves, ropes,duct tape and many other pieces of bondage equipment.
"Sir?"Pheobe looked at her history teacher, who was holding a length of rope.
"I will teach you to sleep in one of my classes again,Ms Johnson,"

Re: Detention with a psycho teacher

Postby tapegaglover! » Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:13 pm

'Tis rrrrrrrrrubbish! Absolute rubbish I say! Haha just kidding. It's nice to see people who can write well on this site. But for constructive criticism, a bit more details wouldn't hurt.
I love a woman bound and gagged in tape.

Re: Detention with a psycho teacher

Postby mattbind1974 » Mon Mar 19, 2012 12:26 pm

waiting for part 2 Huntress ...