SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby jennybond » Fri Apr 18, 2014 1:04 pm

Eighteen year old Philippa Weston is the only daughter of Lord Anthony Weston and his wife Lady Sylvia Weston the richest most powerful couple in the town of Millbrook. Despite having everything she could have want pretty blonde Pippa as she was known to her friends loved the thrill and the challenge of shoplifting which had often landed her in trouble with the police much to her parents disgust.

Pippa was taking her regular Saturday shopping trip to Denton Shopping Mall which was a few miles away from her home town of Millbrook, she was alone and bored as most of her friends had gone away for the weekend as it was the Saturday before Easter Sunday and a bank holiday weekend. The Mall was much busier than usual because it would be closed for the next two days. She was about to leave when she spotted a new lingerie shop called JENNY’S, her eyes were drawn to a notice in the window which read “SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION.” There was a drawing on the notice of a woman dressed all in black leather with a whip in her hand, which made Pippa smile.

“Now there’s a challenge if ever I saw one.” She said out loud to herself.

She went inside where her eyes we immediately drawn to an escalator with sign above it saying ADULT DEPARTMENT and an arrow pointing down an escalator, and she went down. At the bottom of the escalator she was greeted by an attractive woman with long blonde hair who Pippa guessed was in her early to mid-thirties she was wearing a pink uniform with Jenny’s embroidered in red on her breast.

“Hello welcome to Jenny’s my name is Sharon I’m the department manager. Are you looking for anything in particular?”

“Errr no.” Pippa nervously replied.

“Just browsing, that’s fine if you need any help just ask myself or one of the girls.”

“Thank you.” Pippa replied.

Pippa began by looking at all the various dildo’s and vibrators on display she’d never seen many different styles, sizes and colours. As she was the only customer in the department at that time she couldn’t help notice that Sharon and her two sales assistants were watching her all the time which made her feel uneasy and it was going to be impossible to steal anything from down here so she decided to try her luck up stairs as she quickly headed towards the escalator she passed through the bondage section on her way out, and the large display of various gags, masks, cuffs, straps, whips, paddles etc. made her stop.

“Jesus what type of sick people buy this type of thing?” She said to herself as she picked up a big red ball gag.

She was so engrossed by the bondage display she never noticed Sharron approach her.

“Is bondage your thing then?” Sharon asked.

“No it certainly isn’t.” Pippa replied.

“If you’d like to try any of the equipment on display before you buy we have samples in the back room I can I have one of the girls take you in there and you can try. They will even tie you up if you wish.” Sharon continued.

“Didn’t you hear me I said bondage isn’t my thing.” Pippa replied before hurrying away to the escalator, which brought a smile to Sharon’s face.

“This is a bit more like it.” Pippa said to herself as reached the busy lingerie department at the top of the escalator, she quickly noticed all the sales assistants were busy dealing with customers which was good.

Her eyes were soon drawn to a display by a company called Prima Donna which made very expensive bras and panties. She could feel the quality of a pair of white silk brief style panties she’d picked up between her fingers as she searched for any security device on them. Then checking no one was looking she slipped the panties into her bag along with a matching bra. Confident no one had seen her she then headed passed the checkout area to the exit. She was about to leave the shop when she was grabbed by the arm. She turned around to see a large middle aged woman with slightly greying collar length straight hair, she was wearing a navy blue jacket and matching skirt.

“Excuse me young lady but I believe you have some items on your person that haven’t been paid for.” The woman said in a no nonsense tone.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about get the fuck off me.” Pippa replied.

“Let’s not make a scene here miss in front of all these people come with me to the office and we’ll sort this out.” The woman replied pulling Pippa’s arm.

“You can’t do this I haven’t stole anything.” Pippa cried struggling to stop the much bigger stronger woman from pulling her towards a door marked private.

“Come along miss don’t make me use any unnecessary force, if like you say you have haven’t stole anything then you have nothing to worry about have you.”

Pippa soon realized it was hopeless to resist and she was no match for this woman and allowed herself to be lead away.

The woman lead Pippa through the door marked private and up a flight of stairs, the top of the stairs there was a small landing with a couple of doors on it. Pippa was taken over to a wooden door with a brass plaque on it with read JENNY BOND in black lettering. The woman knocked on the door.

“Come in.” A voice from inside called out.

Pippa was taken into the office where a dark haired woman wearing rimless spectacles sat behind a desk, Pippa guessed she was in her early thirties she was wearing a black business suit with a white blouse under it, she also had a black and white patterned silk scarf tied around her neck, Pippa didn’t have to be a genius to work out this was Jenny Bond the store owner. Across the room was another desk where a pretty blonde girl sat typing away at a computer she didn’t look to be much older than Pippa and was wearing a black skirt and white short sleeved blouse.

“Hello Maria who is this you’ve brought to see me.” Jenny asked.

“I saw her slip some items of underwear in her bag and attempt to leave the store without paying for them.” The store detective replied.

“Is that correct miss?” Jenny Bond asked Pippa.

“I was going to pay for them honest I was, I just forgot.” Pippa sobbed.

“That’s what they all say, empty your bag on the desk let’s have a look at what you’ve got.” Jenny replied in a firm tone.

Pippa took the bra and panties from her bag and placed them on the desk.

“Is that the lot?” Jenny asked.

“Yes.” Pippa replied.

“I don’t believe you, Maria strip search her.”

Upon hearing this the blonde secretary stopped typing on her computer and looked up to watch.

“You can’t do this, this isn’t right. Do you know who I am?” Pippa protested.

“I couldn’t care less who are, now strip or I’ll send for a couple of the sales assistants to strip you.” Jenny barked.

“I’m Philippa Weston daughter of Lord and Lady Weston my parents will have this place closed down when they hear about this.” Pippa sobbed as she began to slowly remove her clothes and handed them to Maria who checked each item before dropping it on the floor, it wasn’t long before Pippa was left wearing only her white silk bra and panties.

“You can stop there.” Jenny told the blushing embarrassed girl much to her relief.

But her relief soon turned to horror as Maria placed her cold hands inside the cups of her bra.

“Get the fuck off me.” Pippa cried

But Maria ignored her carried on her search once she had checked inside Pippa’s bra she slipped her hands inside the waistband of her panties.

“This is so wrong. My father will make you all regret this.” Pippa protested.

“She’s clean Miss Bond.” Maria said as she removed her hands.

“Thank you Maria. Now put these on her please and then you can leave us.” Jenny Bond replied throwing Maria a pair of silver hand cuffs she’d taken from a draw in her desk.

“Hey! What the fuck? You can’t do this get off me.” Pippa protested as Maria roughly pulled her arms behind her back and snapped the cuffs on her wrists.

“Thank you Maria another excellent job keep up the good work.” Jenny said as Maria left the office.

“Now then young lady take a seat on the chair in front of my desk and we’ll discuss what to do with you.” Jenny told Pippa.

“You can start by taking these fucking hand cuffs off me and giving me back my clothes.” Pippa cried.

“All in good time my dear. Becky escort our little thief to her seat will you.”

The young secretary got up from her desk and took hold of Pippa’s arm and roughly pulled her over to the black leather office chair in front of the desk and pushed her down.

“Thank you dear.” Jenny said to the secretary as she returned to her desk.

“Now then Miss Weston, give me one good reason why I shouldn’t pick that phone up right now and call the police?” Jenny asked looking over the top of her glasses at the girl.

“Please Miss Bond not the police do anything you want but please don’t call the police.” Pippa tearfully begged.

Jenny looked over at Becky and smiled hearing this.

“You still haven’t given me a reason.” She replied in a firm tone.

“Please my parents say they will cut off my monthly allowance if I get in trouble with the police again, please Miss Bond not the police.” Pippa begged once again.”

“Ok then if don’t want the police then you’ll have to let me punish you myself.”

“You punish me? How?”

“I can’t tell you too much because part of the punishment is the fear and suspense of not knowing what going to happen to you, but after we close this evening you will accompany me to my home where you will my guest for the remainder of the holiday weekend.” Jenny replied.

“What? No way.” Pippa cried.

“Then you leave me no option but to call the police, Miss Weston.” Jenny replied reaching for the phone.

“Ok ok I’ll do whatever you say, please don’t call the police.”

Jenny smiled and put down the phone.

“Is that your final answer Miss Weston?” She asked with a hint of a laugh.

“Final answer.” Pippa replied in a dejected tone.

“You’re going wish you’d have let her call the police.” Becky said from her desk without looking up from her computer.

“You two are crazy, let me go right now.” Pippa cried.

“Sorry my dear that isn’t impossible, I’m sure you saw the warning notice in the window when entered the stored but still you chose to ignore it and now you must pay the consequences.” Jenny said as she reached into one of the draws on her desk.

Pippa watched as Jenny took a number of coils of rope from her desk.

“What are those for?” She nervously asked.

“I have to go out for few hours, Becky over there has a pile of work to do so I can’t have you disturbing her can I?” Jenny said getting to feet and unravelling one of the lengths of rope.

“Hey you’re not tying me up.” Pippa cried trying to get to her feet which wasn’t easy with her hands cuffed behind her back.

Jenny moved quickly to push her back into her seat.

“Becky give me a hand here she’s a struggler.”

Becky dashed over and held Pippa down on the chair by placing her hands on her shoulders and pinning her to the chair.

“Crazy fucking bitches get the fuck off me.” Pippa cried out as she tried to struggle with no success.

Jenny pulled Pippa’s cuffed arms over the backrest of the chair and then bound her elbows very tightly together so the touched causing her great discomfort, this thrust her large breasts forward and the outline of nipples became clearly visible through her thin silk bra.

“ARGHH! You’re fucking crazy.” Pippa cried as Jenny pulled the rope binding her elbows as tight as she could.

With Becky’s help Jenny then positioned Pippa so her back was pushed right up against the backrest of the chair and ensured she stayed in that position by tightly wrapping a long length of rope around her upper body making sure it went above and below her rather large breasts securing her to the chair ensuring the knot was well away from Pippa’s fingers. More rope was applied to across Pippa’s lap securing her to seat of the chair. Then Jenny switched her attention to Pippa’s legs binding her ankles tightly together, she then pulled Pippa’s legs wide apart at the knees and lashed each thigh very tightly to the chair arm next to it.

“ARGH!! It’s too tight, I can’t move.” Pippa protested.

“That’s the whole idea of it my dear you’re not supposed to be able to move. Thank you Becky you can return to your work now.” Jenny said with smile.

“Please let me go I’m rich I’ll pay you anything you want if you let me go, please untie me” Pippa pleaded trying to fight back the tears that were welling up in her eyes.

“I don’t want or need your money spoilt rich girl.” Jenny replied.

“Fucking crazy psycho bitches let me go right now or you’ll both fucking regret it.” Pippa screamed.

“I think we’ve heard enough from her foul mouth don’t you Becky?”

“I agree Miss Bond. I didn’t know royalty knew such terrible language.” Becky replied which made Jenny laugh.

Jenny took the pair of Prima Donna panties that Pippa had tried to steal and removed all the price tags she then folded them up into a tight wad.

“Open up.” Jenny said holding the panties to Pippa’s lips.

But just as she expected Pippa clamped her mouth shut, Jenny was too wise for her and pinched the girl’s nose tightly together with the finger and thumb of her other hand. Pippa tried to resist but eventually gave in and opened her mouth gasping for air this allowed Jenny to easily stuff the panties inside.

“Don’t you dare spit them out.” Jenny warned her by pointing her finger in the direction of her face.

Pippa watched helplessly as Jenny unfastened the silk scarf from around her neck and folded it into a long band and tied a large double knot in the centre of the band.

“Prima Donna panties and a Hermes scarf this must the world’s most expensive gag.” Jenny said with a laugh as she forced the double knot between Pippa’s teeth and tied the two loose ends behind her neck as tight as she could over her long blonde hair.

“Count yourself lucky I didn’t wash your mouth out with soap and water first young lady any repeat of such language at my house I will do.” Jenny warned her.

Jenny hadn’t finished Pippa who was now beginning to wish she’d have chosen the option of calling the police, just yet. She then securely lashed Pippa’s bound ankles to the centre pole at the base of the leather office chair, this was to stop her moving the wheeled chair with her feet. Pippa could still move her arms slightly but this freedom was soon taken from her when Jenny attached one end of a short length of rope between to her cuffed wrists she pulled it under the chair and attached the other end to the rope binding her ankles, when the rope was tightened Pippa’s arms were pulled down so she couldn’t move then at all.
Pippa moaned into her gag as she tried to move but she was fixed rigidly to the chair unable to budge at all apart from her head which she could move from side to side.

“You may think I’m overdoing it a little but I have to be confident to don’t go causing Becky any problems while I’m away.”

Jenny Bond stood back and admired her handy work for a short while, before looking at her watch and saying.

“Is that the time it really does fly when you’re having fun. I really must dash or I’ll be late for my meeting. I’m sure she’ll give you no trouble Becky but if she does you have my number.”

“Don’t worry about me Miss Bond I’ll be fine you have a good afternoon enjoy your date.”

“For last time it’s not a date, he’s a business associate who’s asked me to lunch to discuss business. He is rather nice though.” Jenny replied with a cheeky smile.

Jenny checked her hair and make-up in the mirror on the office wall before picking up her bag from her desk, before she left she made one final check on Pippa’s bindings once she was happy with them, she ran her hands over Pippa’s breasts which bulged beneath her silk bra, and flicked her nipples in a teasing way.

“I’m so looking forward to the weekend.” She said with a wicked grin which sent a shiver down Pippa’s spine.

Jenny Bond then left the office leaving Pippa alone with Becky, the room was silent apart from the sound of Becky taping away at her keyboard and the occasional gagged moan from Pippa. After a short while Becky broke the silence saying.

“You really are stupid, you’ve no idea what you’re letting yourself in for have you? Like I said before you should have let her call the police. I’ve known her take young shoplifters just like you to her house for punishment in the past and they’ve never been seen again.”

Pippa screamed into her gag hearing this and tried to struggle but she was unable to move, tears started to roll down her cheeks as she let out another gagged scream.
Just then there was a knock at the door.

“Come in.” Becky called out.

“Oh my god she’s letting someone they’re going to see me like this.” Pippa thought to herself.

The door open and Pippa immediately recognized Sharon from the adult department.

“Don’t tell me. Another shoplifter?” Sharon asked seeing the bound and gagged girl.

“This one is no ordinary shoplifter she’s almost royalty.” Becky replied.

Sharon turned and looked at Pippa more closely.

“Hello again, I thought there was something not right about you.” She said with a smile.

“You know her?” Becky asked.

"Not really she was in my department early looking around and acting very oddly, who is she?”

“Philippa Weston, Lord and Lady Weston’s daughter.” Becky replied.

“You’re joking, she must be loaded why does she need to shoplift?” Sharon asked

“Spoilt bored little rich girl who thinks she’s above the law I guess.”

“Well this spoilt little rich girl is really going to regret her actions.” Sharon said with grin.

“Anyway enough about her, what brings you up here.” Becky asked.

“Is Jenny about?”

“No she’s out on that date I told you about. Can I help you?”

“Oh yes I forgot about that. The sales rep from B&G just popped in she left a couple of samples of new lines with me so I thought I’d bring them for Jenny to look at. Isn’t this just the biggest ball gag ever, Jesus I wouldn’t fancy having that thing strapped in my mouth, and aren’t these just the cutest pair of silver nipple clamps you’ve ever seen?” Sharon said placing both the extra-large red ball gag and the little silver nipple clamps which were joined together by a silver chain which had red and green glass beads evenly spaced along it.

“I’m sure Jenny will be interested in those, I know how about we have her ladyship over there model them for her.” Becky replied with a wicked grin.

“Do think Jenny will mind?”

“No not at all, in the past when you have brought things for her to look at she’s often said she wished she had a someone to model them for her, now she has her wish hasn’t she?”

Pippa squealed into her gag hearing this which made Becky and Sharon giggle.

Sharon picked up the ball gag from the desk while Becky set about untying the scarf from Pippa’s mouth and removed the sodden panties.

“Thank you.” Pippa sobbed. “I know you are going to stuff that thing in my mouth but please can I have a drink of water first?” She continued.

Becky looked at Sharon who nodded, Becky then went over to a water cooler in the corner of the office and half-filled a clear plastic cup.

“Please untie me, let me go. I’ll make you both very rich you’ll never have to work in here for that horrible woman again. Please let me go.” Pippa sobbed.

“That horrible woman as you call her will have our asses if we let you go.” Becky replied holding the water to Pippa’s mouth.

“I’ll tie you both up you can say I escaped when she finds you, please I’ll pay you anything you want, come on please let me go I beg you.”

“I’ve heard enough put the gag in her mouth Sharon.” Becky said.

“Waitmmmmpppphhhhh.” Pippa words were cut short as Sharon forced the huge ball in her mouth and pushed it as far between her teeth as she could before tightly buckling the leather straps behind her head.

“NOMMPPPHHH!!!” Pippa screamed into her gag as Becky then pulled down the cups of her bra to reveal her naked breasts with large nipples while Sharon collected the nipple clamps from the desk.

Again Pippa screamed into her gag more in frustration this time as she tried with all her might to struggle and resist even though she knew it was useless, as Sharon approached her with a wicked grin on her face holding the nipple clamps out in front of her. She screwed up her tear filled eyes and screamed once more into her gag as Sharon clamped and tightened the painful little clamps on her breasts, finally Sharon gave the beaded chain linking the clamps a hard tug causing Pippa to scream once again into her gag.

Becky who was now actually beginning to feel a little bit sorry for Pippa after seeing the discomfort she was in, took the silk scarf that Jenny had used to gag her with untied the knot from the centre of it with, and gently wiped her tear stained face and her drool covered chin.

“Doesn’t she look amazing?” Sharon asked her as she took photographs with her smartphone to show the other girls on the shop floor.


“I’m not sure this was a good idea after all.” Becky replied.

“Too late to do anything about it now.” Sharon replied hearing the door begin to open.

“She’s back early.” Becky thought to herself as Jenny Bond walked into office her face was blood red with anger.

“Don’t ask I don’t want to talk about.” She said as she stormed over to her desk.

Then she spotted what the girls had done to Pippa.

“Well certainly looks like you two have had a good afternoon at least.” She said.

Becky and Sharon stood and watched nervously as Jenny inspected their work.

“Where are these items from? We don’t sell these” Jenny asked.

Becky and Sharon looked at each other

“Well is one of you going to tell me?” Jenny barked.

“Tracy from B&G dropped them off for you to look at they’re a couple of new lines she wants us to stock.” Sharon nervously replied.

“You know how you always say you wish you had someone to model new items for you, well we thought her ladyship could model them for you.” Becky continued.
Then much to the girl’s relief a smile broke out on Jenny’s face which soon turned into an evil cackling laugh which frighten Pippa.

“This afternoon hasn’t turned out too badly after all. I love what you girls have done thank you, you’ve really cheered me up. That ball gag is amazing it’s biggest I’ve ever seen her jaws must be killing her by now, and I just love her ladyships new jewellery, fit for a queen these are,” She said giving the beaded chain on the nipple clamps a hard tug causing Pippa to scream once more

“Gorgeous aren’t they I’m sure they’ll be a big seller? Anyway I’d better be getting back to my department now Miss Bond I’ve been away far too long.” Sharon said in an attempt to make a quick exit.

“Very well Sharon I’ll speak to you after the holiday about ordering these.” Jenny said with smile.

Becky took the scarf and wiped Pippa’s face again before saying.

“Shouldn’t we take them off now, we’ve had our fun she must be really uncomfortable?”

“I say when we take them off not you, give me that scarf and get back to your desk.” Jenny snapped.

“But….”

“But nothing get back to work I want those papers finished before you go home.” Jenny barked.

Becky handed the scarf to Jenny and returned to her work.

Pippa watched as Jenny folded the damp scarf into long band, and then moaned as she tied the scarf tightly over her eyes plunging her into a terrifying darkness.
The final couple of hours until closing time was pretty uneventful the office silence was only broken when Jenny decided to play with Pippa’s nipple clamps making her jump and moan into her gag.

The moment had final come that Pippa had been dreading she had heard Becky leave for home after helping Jenny cash up, and knew she was all alone with Jenny.

“Right then Missy let’s get you ready for home.” Jenny said standing over the bound, gagged and blindfolded girl.
Much to Pippa’s relief she felt the painful nipple clamps being removed and her bra was neatly replaced, and then all the ropes binding her to the chair were untied but her hands remained cuffed behind her back. Jenny roughly pulled her up from the chair. Pippa began to panic as she felt something being buckled very tightly around her next.

“Relax bitch it won’t harm you.”

Next Jenny knelt down at Pippa’s feet and buckled a leather strap around each of her ankles these were connected by a short length of chain which would allow Pippa to walk but only in small steps, once she had done this Jenny finally removed Pippa’s blindfold.

“MMMMPPPPHHHH MMMMPPPPPHHHH.” Pippa cried.

“No dear the gag stays in, if that’s what you’re trying say.”

Once Pippa’s eyes had adjusted to the light again she guessed Jenny had buckled some kind of collar around her neck as there was a leather dog leash dangling from it.
Pippa watched as Jenny picked up her briefcase, and then with her free hand took hold of the leash

“Walkies.” She said with laugh giving the leash a tug.

“Oh my god she isn’t giving back my clothes she taking me out like this.” Pippa thought to herself as Jenny headed towards the office door.

Pippa struggled to walk at the same pace as Jenny as they left office and walked down the corridor, the hobble chain connecting her ankles made descending the stairs at the end of the corridor extremely difficult especially with Jenny tugging on the leash for her to hurry up. When they finally reached the bottom of the stairs much to Pippa’s relief Jenny wasn’t taking her out through the shop into the mall where there was sure to be shoppers still hanging about. Instead Jenny pulled her down another corridor which lead out to a private car park where Jenny’s car was waiting. As they approached the door to the car park it opened and two uniformed security guards a tall thin middle aged male and small younger overweight female entered. Pippa had never been so embarrassed in her life and just wanted big hole to appear in the ground and swallow her up as the guards stopped and stared at her.

“Evening Miss Bond. Another shoplifter?” The female guard in a Scottish accent asked trying not to laugh.

“I’m afraid so Susan.” Jenny replied.

“You’re really in big trouble now young lady.” The female guard said looking at Pippa who was now trembling and sobbing.

“Sorry I can’t stand here chatting I have to get this little madam home.” Jenny told them.

“You have a good holiday weekend Miss Bond.” The male guard said.

“Thank you Frank I'm sure I will.” Jenny replied giving Pippa’s bottom a playful slap.

“Yes I'm sure I will.”

THE END
Last edited by jennybond on Sat Apr 19, 2014 2:36 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby Sealherlips » Fri Apr 18, 2014 8:46 pm

No please! It can't end there! I want to see what kind of fun she has on her holiday weekend.

Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby jennybond » Sat Apr 19, 2014 1:21 am

Sealherlips wrote:No please! It can't end there! I want to see what kind of fun she has on her holiday weekend.


I'd rather leave that to the readers imagination :twisted:
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Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby nadal1234555 » Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:34 am

Please don't leave it to imaginations!

Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby Tieup1 » Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:18 am

As usual, jennybond has come up with another great story. Pity there is not a part 2, as I am sure jennybond would have come up with another superb storyline.

Still, as she says, use your imagination, think of all the things you could do to that spoiled brat Pippa ! :spank;

Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby jennybond » Sat Apr 19, 2014 9:13 am

Tieup1 wrote:As usual, jennybond has come up with another great story. Pity there is not a part 2, as I am sure jennybond would have come up with another superb storyline.

Still, as she says, use your imagination, think of all the things you could do to that spoiled brat Pippa ! :spank;


Thank you
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Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby Plueschbabycd » Sat Apr 19, 2014 11:41 am

Hallo
and for all how mean the have not imagination, put all worst case from old story together and I think this to write would even for PG 17 to extreme. :) If girl would see again then possible there enrol them self in special boarding school :) and work late for her as obedient sales assistants.:D
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby jennybond » Sat Apr 19, 2014 11:47 am

Plueschbabycd wrote:Hallo
and for all how mean the have not imagination, put all worst case from old story together and I think this to write would even for PG 17 to extreme. :) If girl would see again then possible there enrol them self in special boarding school :) and work late for her as obedient sales assistants.:D
Andrew

That is exactly the reason I stopped where I did I didn't want to go into writing scenes of extreme pain and torture its not my style. Thanks Andrew
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Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby Plueschbabycd » Sat Apr 19, 2014 12:56 pm

jennybond wrote:That is exactly the reason I stopped where I did I didn't want to go into writing scenes of extreme pain and torture its not my style. Thanks Andrew

Yes know I that is more skybird137 way tell this story. My thought what could happens would only repeat off old stories. One hand I would kinky this forum.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby LordNelson » Sat Apr 19, 2014 5:37 pm

A great story and I for one love the way you ended it. Leaving the rest to the readers imagination means that everyone can have it end exactly the way they think it should. The hardest part for a writer is creating the situation that leads up to the TUG and you have done an excellent job.

Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby jennybond » Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:07 pm

LordNelson wrote:A great story and I for one love the way you ended it. Leaving the rest to the readers imagination means that everyone can have it end exactly the way they think it should. The hardest part for a writer is creating the situation that leads up to the TUG and you have done an excellent job.


Thank You
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Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby Headmistress » Sun Apr 20, 2014 3:30 am

Good story and glad to see you back.

Re: SHOPLIFTERS WILL BE PUNISHED WITHOUT EXCEPTION

Postby jennybond » Sun Apr 20, 2014 5:44 am

Headmistress wrote:Good story and glad to see you back.


Thank you marm :D
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