## Spin the Bottle Gone Wrong f/m

Post by Girlpoweralexis » Thu Nov 19, 2015 9:01 am

Introduction -
This is a story I thought of the other day in which a young goth girl is at a party with her crush.
The kids decide to play spin the bottle, and the goth girl is lucky to get her crush as her partner.
And so, when the pair go into a nearby storeroom to make out, she makes sure he can't escape her....

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Thu Nov 19, 2015 9:46 am

Part 1 -
12 year old Ellen was a goth.
Or, at least, that was what the other kids called her.
Personally, she just liked black, leather clothes.
And dark makeup.
She didn't really like labeling herself.
She sighed to herself as she looked at her reflection.
She had done her makeup, and her face was pale.
Her lips were black, just as she liked them.
She stuffed a tube of black lipstick in her pocket.
Then she stepped back so she could look into the full-body mirror her wardrobe door contained.
She smiled. She didn't look that bad.
She wore fishnet tights that she had borrowed from her older sister.
Her older sister was smaller than average, so the tights fitted her well.
Over that, she wore a dark black dress that went halfway down her thighs.
Her jet-black hair fell around her shoulders. She had decided to not do anything about that. She liked it as it was.
Ellen smiled. This was her first secondary-school party.
It was super important to her.
Naturally, she would not normally have been invited.
But her best, and some would say only, friend, Antony, had sweet-talked the hostess into letting her attend.
Maybe this would be the end of the teasing, and maybe she would make friends.
Maybe Geoff would be there.
Ellen headed downstairs and was pulling on her knee-length boots when the doorbell rang.
She smiled. Antony had offered to walk her to the party.
He was such a sweetheart: he could have gone to the party with any of the many girls who liked him, but he chose to go with her so she didn't have to arrive awkwardly alone.

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Thu Nov 19, 2015 10:41 am

Part 2 -
Ellen opened the door and smiled as she saw Antony standing there.
He looked good - he was wearing a pair of jeans and a party shirt, and his short brown hair was gelled back.
She giggled and touched one of the spikes of hair sticking up from his scalp.
"Were you going for the electrocuted look, Antony?"
Antony put his hand on his chest, looking at her with mock offense. "How dare you! I will have you know that my hair was done specially for this party! I must look my best!"
Ellen laughed. She enjoyed Antony's company immensely.
He was the only guy ever to show any interest in her, and he had befriended her on the day she arrived at her new school.
He was the only person who didn't treat her like a leper.
And she was infinitely grateful for that.
As Ellen closed the door, Antony pulled out a little box from behind his back.
He blushed and smiled at her. "I...uh...got you something. Just thought...you know...it's an important party and...."
Ellen smiled. "Just give it to me!"
She took the box, wrapped in vibrant blue and green paper with a red bow, and opened it.
She gasped as she laid her eyes on a beautiful silver necklace, with a heart symbol at the bottom.
"Oh! Antony, it's beautiful! You didn't have to do this!" she gushed.
Antony's blush increased. "Well, I just...you know...I saw it and thought it'd be perfect for you."
Ellen threw the box away and threw her arms around him. "Thank you! Thank you so much!"
Antony smiled. "I'm glad you like it. You want me to put it on?"
Ellen giggled. "But you said it was for me...."
He grinned as he got the joke. "Very funny, Ellen."
She turned around and pulled her hair up, while Antony slipped the necklace round her neck and fastened it together.
She let her hair fall and looked at her chest.
The necklace was beautiful. It really matched her outfit.
She hugged Antony again. "Seriously, thanks. Not just for this, but for the party invite too."
Antony grimaced. "Yeah, well now I have to go on three consecutive dates with Martha. So I really stuck my neck out for you here."
"Who are you kidding? Martha's gorgeous." Ellen said, shocked that Antony sounded so down about the prospect of dating the most popular girl in school.
Antony sighed and muttered something.
It sounded like "She's not the girl I like."

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Post by canuck100 » Thu Nov 19, 2015 12:26 pm

Sounds to me that it's going to be a game of Spin the Bottle gone ... right!

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Sat Nov 21, 2015 1:19 am

For Ellen, yes!

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Sat Nov 28, 2015 1:47 am

Part 3 -
The two friends walked to the party, chatting away without a care in the world.
Ellen smiled to herself.
It felt good when she was with Antony.
It made her feel like she had proper friends and a proper school life.
Unfortunately, that image was shattered when they reached the house the party was at.
The door opened and Martha, the hostess, stood there.
She was wearing a tight-fitting top and a skirt that only came halfway down her thighs.
Her feet were bare and her toenails were painted red.
Ellen curled her lip in distaste - this girl cared about her appearance too much for her liking.
Martha ignored her and wrapped her arms around Antony.
"Ant! You came! It's so good to see you!"
Antony pulled back from the hug and smiled at Martha.
"How could I refuse such a...compelling invitation?"
Martha giggled. "Good point." Then her eyes fell upon Ellen, and her mouth twisted into a sneer.
"Did you have to bring this?" Martha said.
Ellen felt anger boiling up inside and was about to retort.
Antony, ever the hero, leapt to her defence.
"Martha, please. She's here as my guest. And we're friends. Give the girl a break, ok?"
Martha rolled her eyes. "Fine. But only because you agreed to our little deal. See you later, Ant."
She turned on her heel and walked away, joining a group of giggling girls.
Antony touched Ellen's arm. "You ok?"
She smiled at him. "Yeah. Thanks for that."
Her friend grimaced. "You sure you want to endure this? You've got nothing to prove."
"Exactly. By showing up, I show that they don't get to me."
"But they do get to you." Antony said quietly.
Ellen sighed. "I know. But we can't let them know that, can we?"
Antony pulled Ellen into a hug. It surprised her, but she smiled and hugged him back.
"If you need help - with ANYTHING - just find me, ok?" he said.
Ellen beamed. "Thanks, Ant. You're the best friend a girl could have. I'm going to mingle. See you."
"See you. Good luck, Ellen."
She walked away from him and into the middle of the party.
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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Fri Dec 04, 2015 2:06 am

Part 4 -
Ellen slid through the party, keeping her eye out for her crush, Geoff.
Hopefully she could find him and tell him how she felt.
Eventually she sighted the back of his head and excitedly began to walk over to him.
A few paces away from him, however, she stopped.
She could hear what he and his friends were saying.
One of Geoff's friends was saying, "Did you see that Goth chick? Arrived a few minutes ago?"
"Ellen, I think." Geoff said.
For a moment, Ellen's heart leapt. He knew her name!
But then she was crushed by what was said next.
"Oooh, Geoff, you know her NAME?" laughed one of the boys. "Are you her boyfriend?"
Geoff scowled. "Are you stupid? I'd never go out with her. Goth chicks are weird. I hear that she's a fan of bondage and stuff like that." He shuddered.
Ellen felt tears pricking her eyes. She felt as if a dagger had been pushed into her chest.
A hand on her arm made her turn.
It was Antony. From the pitying expression on his face, he had heard everything.
Ellen felt a tear slide down her cheek and she threw her arms around Antony, crying quietly into his shoulder.
Antony steered her into a more empty part of the house, so that she wouldn't be seen by anyone.
He sat her down on a couch and let her cry into his shoulder.
Eventually, she raised her head and wiped her eyes.
"God, what a jerk!" she said.
"I'm so sorry, Ellen. I know how you felt about him."
She managed a smile and squeezed her friend's hand. "Thanks, Antony. I know I've said this before, but you're the best friend a girl could have. You don't have to look after me, though. You should go and enjoy yourself."
Antony grimaced. "Enjoy myself? That'll be hard considering Martha's been following me around non-stop. I think she wants to get me into one of the rooms alone, and I'm terrified of what'll happen to me if she does..."
Despite her situation, Ellen giggled. The look of genuine fear on Antony's face was hilarious.
He smiled at her. "You sure you'll be ok?"
She nodded. "Yeah. I just want to be on my own for a bit."
"Sure."
He left, but five minutes later he returned, and excited smile on his face.
"I've got an idea!"

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Post by SelenaGfan » Fri Dec 04, 2015 2:40 am

Is there a tug in this story somewhere?

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Sat Dec 05, 2015 1:57 am

Yes, but be patient.
I'm getting to it.

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Thu Dec 17, 2015 12:53 pm

Part 5 -
Ellen looked at Antony with bemusement.
"What do you mean?"
Antony smiled. "I'm sure Geoff isn't one of your favourite guys at the moment. So I have an idea about how you can...privately....give him a piece of your mind."
Ellen was intrigued. "Go on."
"We play Spin the Bottle. Rigged, of course, so that he chooses you. I can get my friend Charlie to do that."
Ellen looked unsure. "What if he refuses to go with me?"
Antony smiled again. "I'll make the rule of "no quits". Should pressure Geoff into accepting."
Ellen hugged Antony again. "Thanks again."
Antony grinned. "You'll hear me shouting for everyone to come when it's ready. Until then!"
He left the room, and Ellen smiled, anticipating the moment she would get her hands on Geoff.

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Sat Jan 02, 2016 6:02 am

Part 6 -
True to his word, five minutes later Ellen heard Antony shouting for everyone to gather round.
She joined the crowd around him.
He gave her a quick smile, then turned to look at everyone.
"All right, ladies and gentlemen!" he began in a stage announcer's voice. "It has been decided by the lovely hostess of this party," At this he smiled at Martha, who batted her eyelashes at him. "that we will play Spin the Bottle.
There were excited mutterings until Antony shushed the crowd. "The rules are as follows: we take turns spinning the bottle. When a person spins the bottle, the closest person of the opposite sex it lands on will go with them into a private area...for the entire rest of the evening!"
There were gasps and exclamations of excitement at this, and Antony held up his hands again. "And no quits! Now, form a circle."
Antony sat down next to Ellen and smiled at her.
"It's all planned. Martha and her friends will surround Geoff, so he's the only boy for a while. Charlie has set up a magnetic ball bearing in the bottle. He'll make sure the bottle lands near to Geoff. Good luck."
Antony stood back up and went to the middle of the circle.
A blonde girl giggled and shouted to him, "Aren't you playing, Antony? Scared of what us girls will do to you?"
There was a ripple of laughter and Antony smiled at the girl. "I am truly terrified, Michelle. But I'm afraid I can't anyway, because a certain young lady has been very insistent that I don't participate."
There was a chorus of "Oooh!"s and Martha blushed scarlet. It never ceased to amaze Ellen how smooth her friend was. He wasn't in any large friend groups - as far as she knew, she was his only close friend - but everyone liked him.
Then Antony placed the bottle in front of her. "You go first Ellen. Good luck." He winked at her and stood back.
There were unhappy mutters from the group.
Ellen tried to ignore them and placed the bottle in the middle of the circle.
Then she spun it.

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Sun Jan 10, 2016 12:33 am

Part 7 -
Time seemed to slow down.
The bottle spun slowly passing once, twice, three times around the circle.
Then Ellen spotted a boy sitting a few people down from her surreptitiously pull a small magnet out of his pocket.
The bottle began to slow down.
And then it stopped.
Pointing at Geoff.
The entire room was silent.
Geoff looked angry, which made Ellen upset, but she tried not to show it.
Antony looked ready to intervene - tell Geoff that there was no going back.
But Ellen beat him to it.
She stood up and looked at Geoff.
"You scared, Geoff? Scared of a girl you don't even know but will readily insult? Remember, the rules say you can't decline. So get off your arse and follow me."
Geoff was so shocked by her words that he mutely stood up and followed her to Martha's room, which had been designated as the first private area as her sister was away.
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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Sat Feb 06, 2016 12:59 am

Part 8 -
Ellen was seething with anger.
She had seen the way Geoff had looked at her.
Seen how he despised her without even knowing her, just because everyone else did.
Oh, she would still play the game.
But she would play by her rules.
Geoff followed her into the room and smirked.
"Ok, so now we just sit and wait, right? You're not actually expecting me to kiss you, are you?"
Her anger surged, but she didn't say anything.
She calmly drove her knee up into Geoff's groin and covered his mouth with her hand to silence him.
She threw him onto the bed and pinned him down.
Then she grabbed some tights and panties from Martha's wardrobe and began to tie Geoff to the bed.
Once he was tied, she gagged him with some panties and a sock tied around his mouth.
She sat back to admire her handiwork.
Then she stood up, walked over to the door and used a pair of tights to secure it, making sure they would not be disturbed.
She smiled sweetly at Geoff, who now looked both angry and afraid.
"Geoff, you had your chance. Now it's time for you to suffer."
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Post by HelplessKev » Sat Feb 06, 2016 6:00 am

Loving this story so far.
Ellen reminds me of an old girlfriend.
Hope it ends with her tying Antony up and kissing him.

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Mon Feb 08, 2016 12:00 pm

Hmmm, I'd be interested to hear about the girl Ellen reminds you of.
Feel free to PM me if you want to chat.
In the meantime, keep reading and I'll continue this story very soon!

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Post by HelplessKev » Wed Feb 10, 2016 6:51 am

Her name was Carrie.
A goth girl my aunt introduced me to.
Always wearing black makeup
Her idea of a first date was to tie me up

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Post by canuck100 » Wed Feb 10, 2016 8:11 am

> HelplessKev wrote:Her name was Carrie.
> A goth girl my aunt introduced me to.
> Always wearing black makeup
> Her idea of a first date was to tie me up

That's another story I would love to read! The kind of date I wish I had!

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Wed Feb 10, 2016 1:42 pm

Me too!
You should write it as a full story!

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Post by HelplessKev » Fri Feb 12, 2016 7:45 am

Aw thanks
But I need to get my act together and finish my first story about Erin

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Fri Mar 18, 2016 4:17 am

Part 9 -
Ellen kicked off her boots and climbed onto the bed, straddling Geoff.
She looked down at the boy she had once loved with distaste.
"I wanted to prolong your suffering, Geoff, but now I'm here I just want it over with."
She pulled back her arm and punched Geoff in the face, smacking his head to the side with a satisfying "THWACK".
"That was for me."
THWACK
"That was for what you said about me."
THWACK
"That was for making me like you."
She sighed and looked at his now very red face.
Then she leaned down and pressed her lips softly to his gagged ones.
"And that," she said quietly. "Is to show you what you could have had if you had been a decent human being."
She stood up and turned around. "I spit on you, Geoff. You're scum. I'm going to leave you here for someone to find. I imagine they'll find it very amusing when they do."
She pulled on her boots, ignoring Geoff's frantic pleas.
Then she reached the door and put her hand on the handle.
She turned back and smiled at Geoff.
"And if you think I'll get in trouble for this, just think about how many people will believe that I beat you up. And even if they do, what that will make you look like!"
With a smile, she left her former crush bound to the bed and struggling in vain.

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Post by HelplessKev » Wed Mar 30, 2016 5:07 am

Brilliant story.
I still hope she gets with Antony

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Sun Apr 17, 2016 3:06 am

Part 10 -
When Ellen emerged, most of the others were gone.
Evidently, while she'd been punishing Geoff, the others had got their partners and disappeared.
Martha and a few girls were standing around, chatting, but they weren't important.
Ellen was looking for someone in particular.
Then she spotted him.
He was chatting to a pair of guys who hadn't been involved in the Spin the Bottle game.
She marched over to Antony and whirled him round.
"Ellen!" he exclaimed in surprise. "How did it-whoa!"
The last was because Ellen had begun to drag him off.
"Shut up and follow me," Ellen said matter-of-factly.
Antony had no choice but to follow as she dragged him to a small closet.
She shoved him inside and closed the closet.
"Ellen, what are you-?" he began to say.
She didn't let him finish.
Instead, she grabbed his head and began to kiss him deeply.
She held the kiss for a long time, longer than she could count.
Eventually she pulled back, smirking at the surprised look on her friend's face combined with the smears of black lipstick on his face.
"Ellen..." he murmured, as if he couldn't believe what had just happened.
"Antony, I'm so sorry," she said. "I was too infatuated with Geoff to see past his looks. He's a jerk, selfish and rude and he doesn't deserve me. There is one guy who deserves me. One guy who always stood by me. One guy who was always there for me. And I wish I'd realised it sooner."
Antony smiled nervously. "Do I know this guy?"
Ellen grinned. "I'm looking at him. Now shut up and let me kiss you."

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Post by ClarkKentAKASuperman » Sun Apr 17, 2016 9:55 am

LOVED the chapter, SO glad she chose Antony in the end!

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Post by HelplessKev » Mon Apr 18, 2016 9:00 am

Yay!
Great ending

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Tue Apr 19, 2016 2:22 pm

Ah, but it's not done yet!
Still more to come!

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Post by HelplessKev » Thu Apr 21, 2016 7:36 am

Even better!

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Sun May 22, 2016 2:55 am

Part 11 -
When Ellen was finished, she pulled back and smiled.
Antony's face was covered with smears of her black lipstick.
His face was completely shell-shocked, which made her want to giggle.
Instead, she stroked his cheek.
"Antony?" she said tentatively.
Her friend looked at her, still clearly surprised.
"I...I..." He swallowed, then began again. "I never thought you'd like me. Not with the constant chatter about Geoff."
Ellen touched his hand. "But you still helped me try to get him? Even though you liked me?"
Antony nodded.
Ellen sighed. "Oh, Antony, you're the best friend a girl could ask for. In fact, you're the best boyfriend a girl could ask for..."
Antony stared at her. "Does that mean...?"
"Yes," she said with a smile. "I'm asking you out. You'd better say yes. You don't want to end up like Geoff, trust me..."
Antony grinned widely. "Oh, I say yes. I'd never dream of doing otherwise..."
"Good boy." She kissed him quickly on the lips. "Now, shall we leave this place? Go somewhere a little more...private? My house, perhaps?"
Antony nodded. "You're the boss."
Ellen giggled. "That I am..."

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Post by HelplessKev » Thu May 26, 2016 12:54 pm

Oh lucky Antony

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Tue Jun 21, 2016 6:00 am

Epilogue -
Ellen pulled Antony home, wondering why she'd taken so long to see how attractive he was.
It wasn't just that he was cute, but he was so nice and he would do anything for her.
She just felt guilty that she had been chasing Geoff, all while Antony had liked her.
When they got home, she pulled him upstairs to her room, kicking off her boots.
She pushed him onto her bed.
She pulled off her fishnet tights and used them to bind Antony's hands above his head.
She then straddled him, and he looked at her in surprise. "Ellen-"
She shushed him with a finger. "Be quiet, Antony. Now that you're mine, I get to play. And I like to play rough."
Then she began to kiss him, leaving smears of black lipstick all over his face.
He didn't seem to care.
She certainly didn't.
As she kissed him, she grinned inwardly.
It was perfect.
Sure, Martha would be annoyed that she had lost Antony, but Ellen could handle her.
Besides, she had left Martha a present.
She thought that it would appeal to her.
Meanwhile, back at the party, the hostess Martha sighed.
Antony was nowhere to be seen.
His friend, Charlie, said that he had left with Ellen.
But that couldn't be right.
How could he choose that strange girl over her?
The party was almost over.
There were only a few people left.
Martha wanted some alone time.
So she pushed open the door to her room.
And she gasped at what she saw.
Lying on her bed, bound and gagged, and struggling frantically, was Geoff.
She had wondered what had happened when he had gone into the room with Ellen.
Apparently Ellen had got a little revenge.
Geoff looked at her with pleading eyes.
"MMMPH!" he cried.
Then Martha noticed something else.
It was a note, on Geoff's chest.
She picked it up.
It read,
"Dear Martha,
This is a gift from me to you.
I felt the need to punish Geoff here for how he's treated me.
But I don't need him anymore, and I prefer Antony anyways.
I know you like Ant, and I'm sorry for that.
Please, by all means have Geoff.
I'm finished with him anyway.
Love,
Ellen xxxx."
A smile began to spread over Martha's face.
Sure, she'd lost Ant.
But she HAD started to feel sorry for Ellen when she saw how resistant Geoff was to pair off with her.
He deserved what she had done.
And now she had a replacement.
After all, Geoff was pretty cute.
And he was all hers.
With a wicked grin, Martha kicked her door shut with her bare foot and locked it.
She walked towards the bed, her eyes hungry, insatiable.
"Ready for some fun, Geoff?" she asked. "Oh wait, I forgot. You're not getting a choice!"
For the next hour, all that was heard from Martha's room were excited giggles and muffled cries for help.
And by the time the last guests had left, Martha was happy.
Very happy.
Which was more than could be said for her new boyfriend.
Or, perhaps "love slave" was a better word, she thought as she looked at Geoff, who was kneeling at her feet, doing her nails.
She smiled. She'd definitely have to thank Ellen.
Maybe she'd had the girl all wrong.
Maybe now they could be friends.
Good friends.

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Post by Girlpoweralexis » Tue Jun 21, 2016 6:03 am

You know, as a story writer it's quite odd.
Most of the time, I come up with stories (whether fictional or true) that are written with average or moderate skill.
Then I find certain stories which I become attached to writing.
This is one example, and it's a pleasure to have finally finished it!