## The cop

Post by handman24 » Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:22 pm

(the main character is John,Male, 5'10, latino, and a runners build, wearing blue volcom shirt and faded blue pants with white cut off socks, black hair)
i had been home alone all week. my parents were on their work trip together and were not going to be back for a whole month. They have left me alone like this since i was 13 so im used to it. I was playing my xbox and it was about 10PM. i took a quick restroom break and when i was on my way back to the xbox i heard a knock at the door. I thought it was pretty strange someone would be here at this time of night. i go the door and look out of the peep hole. there was 2 female cops at the door that looked really hot, one was a redhead with a slim build and nice upper body as well, the other was a blonde with almost the exact same build. i open the door kinda exited to talk to them. i act tired "yea, whats the problem here?". the blonde one says "there has been a couple of robberies in this neighboorhood and your parents called us personally to make sure you are safe". "and how are you going to do that? i think i can handle myself." the redhead says in a very dominant manner"your going to have to come with us." "Um i think im safe here, would i have to spend a night at the station or something i dont understand whats going on?" the Blonde walks in making me back up. "We are going to take you to our house, you can come quietly or the hard way your choice."
Soo much was going through my mind "let me go get something really qu..." the redhead interupts "we cant let you do that now are you gonna come quietly?" i turn around to run up the stairs but the second i do i am yanked down by my wrists. the blonde had pinned me down on my stomach. She wispers in my ear "looks like its the hard way". the redhead uses her tazor on me while the blonde handcuffs me. the pain of the tazor didnt allow me to move. suddenly my anckles are cuffed and then i am put into a hogtie. "Alright your comming with us" says the redhead. i am lifted up by both of them and taken to a police car that wasnt even from around the area. in the car i yell for help and the Blonde comes to the back and kisses me on the lips to distract me so she could quickly put a ballgag in. "gawd thats better, here we can let you see how to get back, you wont be doing that now would you?" i look at her and she slowly puts a sack over my head blinding me.........
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### Re: The cop

Post by Male shortstied » Mon Jan 18, 2010 3:11 pm

What are you wearing?

### Re: The cop

Post by kidnapplz » Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:01 pm

More please. A very good story.

### Re: The cop

Post by chloroformmeplease » Tue Jan 19, 2010 11:09 pm

> Boy shortstied wrote:What are you wearing?

(the main character is John,Male, 5'10, latino, and a runners build, wearing blue volcom shit and faded blue pants with white cut off socks, black hair)
I don't mean this to sound rude to you shortstied but above is the first things the author wrote in this story. Why do you ask what are you wearing when he already told us?
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.

### Re: The cop

Post by ilikebeingtiedup » Tue Feb 02, 2010 10:51 pm

in the actual post it says "shirt"

### Re: The cop

Post by chloroformmeplease » Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:08 pm

I fail to actually see what it matters what the person(s) in a story is wearing anyway. Unless you are detailing every little thing but then it sounds more like a list then it does a story.
And yes it does say shirt. Who cares I just want the author to finish the story. Please continue.
Treat others as you wish to be treated. Having said that I will not sit idly by while someone is disrespecting another just because they think they are better than everyone else.