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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby lonewolfandfriends » Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:35 pm

continuation please

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby Jack Roper » Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:46 pm

Yes; please continue. Reese does remind me of you for some reason...lol!
Great story Matty.

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby xtc » Wed Oct 05, 2011 2:39 pm

I look forward to seeing where the new line of thought is going.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby lonewolfandfriends » Wed Oct 05, 2011 5:05 pm

Please continue great story

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby Jack Roper » Wed Oct 05, 2011 6:26 pm

I like it when you look at the same scene from the differnt peeps involved.

Write more when the spirit moves you, please!

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby tyman » Wed Oct 05, 2011 7:04 pm

Great stuff Matty!

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby xtc » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:06 am

Yes, the parallel accounts were very well handled. I try this sometimes but I think you've done it better in the first part of this chapter. Keep going! - - - - Please.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby Chase Ricks » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:13 am

Not very often have I seen it work out so well with different views from different people in the same scene. I am very impressed.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby Jack Roper » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:50 pm

Excellent writing; great story. I want more.

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby lonewolfandfriends » Thu Oct 06, 2011 6:17 pm

More

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby bookl0ver » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:28 am

continue
DIRECTIONER FOR LIFE!
NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE

Also addicted to slash. ^,^

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby Chase Ricks » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:32 am

This is getting good.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby bookl0ver » Fri Oct 07, 2011 5:07 pm

loveing it m8 keep a coming
DIRECTIONER FOR LIFE!
NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE

Also addicted to slash. ^,^

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby xtc » Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:03 am

Good pace. The constatly changing aspects of the narrative from the ponts of view of the different characters hekp to maintain interest.
Thanks for the early morning (for me) entertainment.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby Chase Ricks » Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:09 am

Reading stories like this one help me to refresh my imagination after I have spent time carefully writing and editing story chapter posts on here. That is a very good thing indeed. Please keep it up.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby bookl0ver » Sat Oct 08, 2011 6:16 am

so amzing man keep it going!
DIRECTIONER FOR LIFE!
NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE

Also addicted to slash. ^,^

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby kidnapplz » Tue Oct 11, 2011 5:51 pm

brill story

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby Jack Roper » Wed Oct 12, 2011 8:49 pm

Thanks for the great story continuation!

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby sarwrductan » Thu Oct 13, 2011 7:09 am

Wow! Gasp...Wheeze...cough cough..Gee! I think I can breathe now! LOL What a story!
Those who walk forward always looking back, don't see that which makes them stumble

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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby bookl0ver » Tue Oct 18, 2011 12:07 pm

plz continue this is so good matt.
DIRECTIONER FOR LIFE!
NIALL HORAN'S FUTURE WIFE

Also addicted to slash. ^,^

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby xtc » Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:12 pm

Nice to read the latest episode. Are we still to enjoy the different perspectives infuture episodes?
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby tyman » Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:56 pm

great job, Matty.

Re: What do we do; with this Kid?

Postby JesseGiven » Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:12 am

I think we would all like some more - please