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Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue Jul 15, 2014 12:50 pm

Hallo, nice first part I hope more for french please give next time a translation. Such teacher missed in my school. That with Manga an Fantômette Hood was nice joke. Now I even know more about Antiaris toxicaria. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby skybird137 » Tue Jul 15, 2014 1:01 pm

This is a great first part, Doctor George.

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby hafnermg » Tue Jul 15, 2014 1:47 pm

Yay Nina is back!!!! I can't wait for to see what happens next.

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby LordNelson » Tue Jul 15, 2014 3:38 pm

Great start to an interesting story.

What is it about art teachers? A while back I endeavoured to write a story about each of my teachers that I ever had a TUG fantasy about. I started with my art teacher and it seemed like every second story came back to her again. She was a beautiful woman and just a little odd; the type of odd that could be considered necessary to volunteer to be tied up. She, like Miss Pennywright, had her own sense of style that at first seemed rather unusual but later really began to look quite attractive.

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby Plueschbabycd » Wed Jul 16, 2014 1:35 am

Hallo now wait on the tied up that Nina Mother give her I think school is close at last another day and If remember right say the sport teacher some thing about wrapping in blanket. I think her mother think nearly same as prophylatic measures against illness.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

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Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby KP Presents » Wed Jul 16, 2014 5:27 am

I think it works as well as when I use french in the Pussycat Gang stories - and i get it checked by a native speaker as well.
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Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby Plueschbabycd » Wed Jul 16, 2014 8:41 am

Hallo, I will see how far it stops my reading. I had no French in school and I know only some words and phrase in French. It is possible not sufficient to survival in France with it. Self English was in school my bad subject. But now near 20 years training outside of the school and in vocabulary we had never in school :), as side not the word "Lodger" was new for me.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby LordNelson » Wed Jul 16, 2014 1:24 pm

Just a suggestion to anyone who has a half decent word processor program such as Microsoft Word or WordPerfect. If you copy and paste any French phrases that you don't understand into a blank document then you can use the built in translator feature to convert it to English or in Andrews case I believe German would be more appropriate. There are also on line translators one can use.

I live in Canada where French is our second language but unfortunately I speak it poorly. I actually live near a community where French is the first language and many of the older residents have never learned English.

On a humorous note many of our French speaking citizens have gone to school in English and as a result have not learned many of the French words they need to have a full vocabulary. They instead will speak a fractured language. When they are trying to speak either language they will fill in the gaps with words from the other. We call it Frenglais.
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Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby skybird137 » Wed Jul 16, 2014 1:28 pm

I never learnt any other languages, and as a result I can only speak fluent Google...

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby Plueschbabycd » Wed Jul 16, 2014 2:13 pm

Hallo LordNelson, I let me translate word or phrases in pages like google translator and that help often understand and learn. The same make I if I want write something that only cane say German. In case look long witch suggestion I take.
In some case I let me translate a phrases and found out that I nearly guess right what it mean

In my "type of school" had never chance to learn a second language. Byway none my parents had French as second language. That I have a dyslexia had make any language not favourite subject. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby Chloé The Librarian Extraordinaire » Wed Jul 16, 2014 6:43 pm

This could help ! ... Or not. :wink:
Learn French in ONE word !
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GSeaDQ6 ... w&index=18
:lol:

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Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby Plueschbabycd » Thu Jul 17, 2014 7:16 am

Hallo,
I think I will learn more French with this story. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 1

Postby Chloé The Librarian Extraordinaire » Thu Jul 17, 2014 8:10 am

This, mes amis, might help you !
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=edYHlnhxyOI
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Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 2

Postby Plueschbabycd » Wed Jul 30, 2014 8:23 am

Hallo, nice part yes manga Idea was great. As hobby author thought short if should it. But if come more fames will do it. For German is very time amazing how fast the USA get electric breakdown. For us some easy say they should put more in the underground but know the electro producer have Germany same problems in very cold winters with our oldes power lines but now was forced to modernize them.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 2

Postby skybird137 » Wed Jul 30, 2014 3:37 pm

This is a wonderful story.

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Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 3 (updated 12/08/14)

Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue Aug 12, 2014 1:59 pm

Hallo, Like idea of the hooded onesie in golden-brown fake fur. I wish would know war get it. I had put her the hood on. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

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Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 3 (updated 12/08/14)

Postby The Wrapster » Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:23 am

Hi Doctor!! I'm enjoying this story very much! Have also read and enjoyed your stories on KP's site!

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 3 (updated 12/08/14)

Postby Plueschbabycd » Wed Aug 13, 2014 7:43 am

Doctor George wrote:Custom-made onesies available from: http://www.the-all-in-one-company.co.uk/ Not too expensive either.

G

Hallo I have one problem, my low body is shorter as normal. I`m as tall as Danny DeVito only bit slender. So I would nee tailor. The other that my family would not understand it. :)
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 3 (updated 12/08/14)

Postby skybird137 » Thu Aug 14, 2014 3:51 am

Each episode is better than the last, and it's turning out to be a great story.

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 3 (updated 12/08/14)

Postby Chloé The Librarian Extraordinaire » Fri Aug 15, 2014 11:55 pm

And wait till the DVD is out !
:quirk:

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 3 (updated 12/08/14)

Postby Plueschbabycd » Sat Aug 16, 2014 2:47 am

Hallo Chloé,
I think would not like the DVD, perhaps only the movie have lengths of a Bolliwood movie. I have read the book "Hannibal" and than seen movie. The was movie weak. I don´t if was only because have know the story or also the movie was bad make.
Andrew.
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show

Re: Nina and the Lodger: Part 3 (updated 12/08/14)

Postby skybird137 » Sat Aug 16, 2014 5:03 am

Perhaps a HBO series, with Rose Leslie as Miss Badelaine...