Roomate Trouble

Postby tiedup101 » Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:42 pm

New story coming up involving a past roomate and myself. We fought, and ended up with some intense bondage situations. True torture and bondage. Anybody interested?
Hey! I'm John! I love bondage! Send me a PM or send me a message at John_9734@yahoo.com! Open to anybody, but more into m/m bondage!

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby canuck100 » Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:45 pm

tiedup101 wrote:Anybody interested?


Are you kidding? lol of course we are!

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby tiedup101 » Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:49 pm

I went to Florida over summer vacation a few months ago. I didnt have enough money to rent a house i wanted, so i joined with someone my friend knew that would pay half. It sounded good to me so we joined. We would switch off throughout the summer, but at the end of the summer we would have to be with each other. This guy, Jack seemed nice. 17, blonde, 6 feet, straight. I didnt know his background much. So everything went good until that last week. I was already there, and some bondage equipment was in a room that i could lock. When we got there, as soon as we saw each other, hatred was brought up...... this was going to be a long week. Neither of us would back down, and neither would give in..... Please comment so i can write more!
Hey! I'm John! I love bondage! Send me a PM or send me a message at John_9734@yahoo.com! Open to anybody, but more into m/m bondage!

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby bondagefan » Wed Dec 23, 2009 2:37 pm

To be waiting for more I hope you are female.

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby Edgeworth » Wed Dec 23, 2009 3:46 pm

bondagefan wrote:To be waiting for more I hope you are female.


If not you can pretend they are so that it isn't ruined for you.
"If a man cannot not care, what can he do?"

Adieu

Edgey Edgington Edgeworth the VIII

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby tiedup101 » Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:12 pm

um, i am male. Sorry.
Hey! I'm John! I love bondage! Send me a PM or send me a message at John_9734@yahoo.com! Open to anybody, but more into m/m bondage!

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby tiedup101 » Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:59 pm

Okay. i cleaned the house before jack came. (Cleaning person came) i got it all ready and when he walked in the door i was astounded at what i saw. Jack was the guy that stole by girlfriend last year. i pretended i didnt regonize him. i assumed he didnt regonize me. i had gotten jack back though. I had some things stolen from his house. (i gave them back, but erased some information) i brought up his bags and told him i was leaving and would be back in a few hours. I left and got some things. i bought some rolls of duct tape to ensure my stockpile was plentiful, went to my friends house and got some old jocks, shoes and socks that smelled FOUL!

i walked back in a few hours later. i didnt see him, so i went to take a shower. i took a long shower and got out 20 minutes later. i wrapped the towel around me waist and walked out. Jack jumped on me, knocking me to the ground, shaking my towel off, leaving me bare naked. he was quick, and prepared, but i was strong. he was wearing his boxers and some gym shorts. i pulled them down, leaving him completely naked, except for his socks. All the while, we were shouting, swearing and cursing each other, blaming each other for turning away that girl. it turned into a naked wrestle. it was kinda gross actually. Jack eventually got on top of me and snapped a pair of handcuffs on my wrists and it was all over. though i kicked, he had me. he led me downcellar to the room that he had locked and kept for himself. he opened the door and i was amazed at what i saw. there was bondage equipment like mine, a rack of devices etc. A dungeon, even better than my makeshift one. he brought me over to a chair and shoved me down. he quickly had me cuffed and roped down to the chair. tight. i cursed him and he quickly got a gag. i yelled at him before he put a funnel gag in place in my mouth and face. he wasted no time by hooking up a tube from my dick to a bucket. he brought over a huge thing of gatorade and began having me drink. i couldnt do anything about it, so i drank up to prevent choking. after i had a huge amount of gatorade in my system, he got to work yelling at me. he was furious at me for ruining his chances with the girl, and erasing that info on the software. he got some nipple clamps and put those on my nipples as i screamed. i even peed a little, going right into the bucket. i was legit scared on what he was going to do with that!

he got a piece of rope and tied it from the nipple clamps to my dick, making it tight, tugging at my dick and nipples. i screamed in agony. he said to have fun with that, and left me in the dark room, naked, tied to a chair, nipples clamped, peeing out piss into a bucket, and asking myself why i wasnt so cautious.


Thats part one. Probably another 10 parts to go. sorry if this offends some. just telling the story.
Hey! I'm John! I love bondage! Send me a PM or send me a message at John_9734@yahoo.com! Open to anybody, but more into m/m bondage!

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby Z » Wed Dec 23, 2009 10:08 pm

What kind of information did you delete to piss him off so much?

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby tiedup101 » Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:41 pm

Do anybody like this story? Should i continue?
Hey! I'm John! I love bondage! Send me a PM or send me a message at John_9734@yahoo.com! Open to anybody, but more into m/m bondage!

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby Z » Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:06 pm

Yes, and yes.

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby Fesselfan » Wed Jan 06, 2010 12:01 am

Basically something that could be promising.

You might want to use a spellchecking word processor (i.e. MS Word) to type your story though- that helps to prevent a lot of mistakes.
For style...IMHO it would help if you would use more different sentence structures. As now, almost every sentence goes "i did that. I did that. He did that" and so on, which makes the story somewhat akward to read.
A little more detail and structure would not hurt, either.
And please...stop fishing for compliments, just write the story. If it is good, people will praise it...if not, you can't force them.

Please go ahead with the story, I just wanted to point some improvements out.

Cheers

FF
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Those who understand binary numeral system, and those who don't.

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby havok978 » Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:17 pm

Whatever happened with this story? It started off like there were 10 parts to go and nothing ever updated...

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby tiedup101 » Mon Jul 05, 2010 2:18 pm

Nybody still looking for me to finish this? I will continue if anybody is still interested.
Hey! I'm John! I love bondage! Send me a PM or send me a message at John_9734@yahoo.com! Open to anybody, but more into m/m bondage!

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby tieup2008 » Mon Jul 05, 2010 3:39 pm

Go for it! :wink:
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Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby Jason Toddman » Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:36 am

Yes, write the story already!
Please assume afterward we want to KEEP reading it!
You don't need to ask anymore! Just write it!!!
WE WANT TO READ MORE!!! :big:
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Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby runitsm3 » Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:33 pm

can you pm me the rest of the story please? :)

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby starduster » Tue Apr 19, 2011 12:34 pm

tiedup101 wrote:Do anybody like this story? Should i continue?


yes!

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby sarwrductan » Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:12 am

Gee!...LOL...I'd love to see how this one comes out!.. Funnel gag huunnh?
Those who walk forward always looking back, don't see that which makes them stumble

Re: Roomate Trouble

Postby fratboydanny » Thu May 12, 2011 2:55 am

Please 101, can you continue this? I really enjoyed the first bit and would love to read more