Mike's first TUG

Postby omgtugs » Sat Dec 25, 2010 10:06 pm

and my first writing one! constructive criticism appreciated! more coming soon...part 2 and maybe part 3


PART ONE




There are three main characters in this story:

-Eli: Lanky boy, 15yrs old

-Jared: Asian, he runs on the tack team, 15yrs old

-Mike: Somewhat short, likes video-games, doesn't go outside a lot, also 15yrs old.

They are all friends of each other




Part One: (at jared's house)

mike puts down the controller for the xbox, and says, “hey guys you can keep on playing ill be right back just gotta go to the bathroom, k?”

eli replies enthusiatically, “yeah whatever”, and winks at jared. jared smiles back knowingly. When mike was out, jared and eli turn off the xbox, grab some rope and a roll of tape they had hidden under the couch, and take up position on either side of the doorway.

Mike walks into the living room and eli and jared grab him. Eli, who was holding a huge piece of duct tape, slaps it over mike's mouth, so he doesn't yell or anything. They quickly tie mike's hands behund his back and tie his legs together loosely, so he can sort of walk but would fall over if he tries to run away. They shove mike into jareds bedroom, and pin down mike. Eli sits on mikes legs and jared kneels over mikes chest. Jared ties mikes wrsists with a long rope to the corners of the bed. Mike looks over and notices that the posts have quite a bit of wear near where the rope is tied to the bed posts. Jared notices mikes looking and grins down to mike. Mike manages to force his mouth open and shouts furiously, “let me go what the f-” jared stifles him. He picks up a ball gag off of the side table and forces it into mikes mouth. Mike mmmmumphs firrously trying to say something, but jared ignores him.

“eli, are you done with his legs yet?”

eli replies, “yeah,” and gets off him. Jared also gets off the bed and they servey their handywork. Mike looks at them and mmmumphs loudly.. jared and eli go over to mike. Jared removes mike's shoes, and his socks too. Jason starts tickling mike's feet and eli sits on mike's chest and tickles mike's armpits. Mike, who is extremely ticklish, is laughing hysterically (well a lame attempt at it with the ball gag). This continues for about 10mins, until jared and eli stop to give mike a break. They climb off of mike, and leave the room to talk about what to do next.

(Meanwhile, mike is lying there, catching his breath after being tickled so much. He realizes something very embarassing: he has a boner. He hopes that since he is wearing jeans its not so noticeable.)

Jared and Eli plan their idea and come back in. mike gets a little less woried when they don't really seems to look at or notice he has a boner, so he figures they didnt notice.

Jared ask mike a question that we already know the answer to; “do you want to stay tied up for the rest of the next three days and us tickling you more?”

mike shook his head no.

“so do you agree to whatever we want you to until the end of the day?

Mike nodded yes.

“and you understand that if you complain or don't co-oprate you will have to be under our control for three days?

Another hesitant yes.

“and you promise not to try to escape?”

mike nodded yes.

Jared looked at eli, and they started. The first thing that was in order was to untie mike. Eli did that while jared dug around in his closet for something.

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby omgtugs » Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:27 pm

PART TWO:

(sorry if this doesn't go seamlessly with the first part, I will edit it later so it does match perfectly im just hammering this out quickly)
While Jared tried to find what he was looking for, Eli led Mike up to the bathroom, where he let Mike (still gagged but otherwise just handcuffed at the ankles, not tied anywhere else), relieve himself, according to Eli,“so you don't have to go later in the middle of our fun.”
When Mike was done, he was taken back into the bedroom (now devoid of Jared). Mike was tied back down to the bed the same way as before, sort of spreadeagled on the bed. Eli put some duct tape over the ball gag so that Mike had to breathe through his nose.
Eli then said, “We're all alone now, Jared has gone running a few miles, he'll be back in about a half hour. Meanwhile I get to do whatever I want with you with no interference. I'm going to watch TV now, but first I need to make sure you don't get to bored or lonesome. I'll give you a good friend of mine to talk to.”
Mike, blindfolded, can't tell that Eli is dangling one of his gross, worn-daily shoes over Mike's head. He gets hit very hard by the odorous stench of the inside of the shoe when Eli shoves it over his nose and, before Mike can resist, attaches it in place with a piece of duct tape.
Mike tries to say something, but he turns out to saying, “MMMMPPH, MMMMMMMPUMPH-MPH.”
Eli replies happily, “glad you like it, i'll be back with Jared later.” and turns off the light (not that mike could see anything anyway), and closes the door behind him.

Mike tries to shake the shoe off, but it's firmly attacched. He is forced to breathe in through his nose, the disgusting smell of Eli's old stuck-inside-a-shoe-foot-sweat infiltrating his every thought. He stops trying to shake the shoe off, and notices his erection is pushing against the inside of his jeans...

He hears the door open, and then he hears Jared, saying, “Oh!”, and then Jared leaves again.
He hears muffled discussion out in the hallway, then the door opens again. The shoe gets removed, along with the old scarf that was used as a blindfold.

part 3 coming soon (probably tonight, if not then tomorrow
Last edited by omgtugs on Tue Dec 28, 2010 7:22 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby sarumansauron » Mon Dec 27, 2010 9:50 am

Good begining! That story promises to be very entertaining. Thanks!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby omgtugs » Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:13 pm

ok...give me some time to continue...

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby Jason Toddman » Tue Dec 28, 2010 12:09 pm

Nice story so far.
By an interesting coincidence I began a similar story a few hours later on the same day that you started this one with a similar title; David's First Tug. This was just a coincidence on my part however, as this is the first time I've noticed your story. Just in case you noticed mine later and wondered WTF. :D
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby omgtugs » Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:07 pm

Jason Toddman wrote:Nice story so far.
By an interesting coincidence I began a similar story a few hours later on the same day that you started this one with a similar title; David's First Tug. This was just a coincidence on my part however, as this is the first time I've noticed your story. Just in case you noticed mine later and wondered WTF. :D

i read that i like it very much its a story way better than mine :) but i will try to do my best here :)

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby Jason Toddman » Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:21 pm

omgtugs wrote: i read that i like it very much its a story way better than mine :) but i will try to do my best here :)


So far I think you're doing pretty good on your own. Definitely please continue your installments too. :D
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby omgtugs » Tue Dec 28, 2010 6:46 pm

There's part two, im working on part 3 now!

sorry ive been busy- ill try to make this next part soon!

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby omgtugs » Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:03 pm

who wants me to continue?

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby Jason Toddman » Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:18 pm

omgtugs wrote:who wants me to continue?


WTF!!! It took you all this time just to ask THAT?!? :shock: OMG!!!
Fine! *I* want you to continue!!! Now get ON with it already!!!
Umm... Please!
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby sarumansauron » Fri Jan 07, 2011 7:06 am

omgtugs wrote:who wants me to continue?


Definitively continue. I badly can wait to read the next part.
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby omgtugs » Fri Jan 07, 2011 11:28 pm

ok. lol. i will take time tomorrow (i was busy with working on getting both of my websites in good working condition!) but tomorrow i will have all day to write and same with sunday!

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby omgtugs » Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:37 pm

grrr!
i didnt get a chance to do it again! this is frustrating! lol

Re: Mike's first TUG

Postby Jason Toddman » Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:34 pm

omgtugs wrote: this is frustrating! lol


You're telling us!!! :cry: :big:
Dare to be different... and make a difference.
To boldly go where no one in their right mind has gone before...