Kidnapped Waitress

Postby TheTieUpMaster » Wed Apr 22, 2015 1:27 pm

Hey everyone! I have been reading on this site for a while and I finally decided I'm going to write a story. Here's is the first part. I know it's kind of short but I want to see if it is a good beginning. Let me know if I should continue the story. Any tips will be greatly appreciated :)


Ashlee sighed as the last customer left the restaurant. She was glad the day was finally over. She had been working at the restaurant for over a year now and tonight was her first night closing alone. She enjoyed her job and especially her work uniform which consisted of a tight short sleeve button up blouse, a black form fitting skirt that ended mid thigh, jet black stockings and penny loafers. She removed her apron and adjusted her skirt, brushing away some crumbs. She was about to clock out when she heard the front door open. She turned to see a young girl standing there crying. "I can't find my daddy!" she wailed. Ashlee without hesitation, ran over to the girl. "Here sit down" she said taking the girl to the closet booth. "Now calm down and tell me what happened". The girl didn't say anything and sniffled as she sat in the booth. "Here let me get you some water" Ashlee said as she walked into the kitchen. Ashlee poured her a glass of water and walked out of the kitchen. She walked over to the booth and the girl was nowhere to be found. Ashlee set the glass on the table and looked around. "Little girl?" she called out, "Where are you?". She knew the girl didn't leave because she did not hear the bell at the front door. She walked slowly around the restaurant calling out to the little girl. Ashlee had just made her way back into the kitchen when something hit her very hard in the back of the head. Ashlee let out a moan as she fell to the floor unconscious.

Re: Kidnapped Waitress

Postby xtc » Wed Apr 22, 2015 2:13 pm

Welcome the the League of TUGwriters.
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!

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Re: Kidnapped Waitress

Postby Shanyalovestape » Wed Apr 22, 2015 11:22 pm

I think this is the first waitress peril story I've read in this site lol
Just your average,bondage-loving asian girl

Re: Kidnapped Waitress

Postby TheTieUpMaster » Fri Apr 24, 2015 10:33 am

Ashlee moaned as she started to wake up. She felt something in her mouth and tried to spit it out but it was held in by the duct tape that was wrapped around her head. In an instant she tried to move but suddenly realized that she was tied tightly to a chair. Scared she started to struggle hard as tears began to roll down her face. "Helllffffpphh" She tried to yell but only a quiet muffle came out. She realized she was not going anywhere. The room she was in was a tiny cellar. Suddenly ashlee remembered what happened. The little girl! What happened to her? Ashlee wondered as she gave up struggling.

Upstairs in her play room, little Katy sat watching cartoons. Her mother sat behind her, brushing her hair gently. "Mommy, is your friend okay?" she asked. Her mother smiled and said "Yes baby, she is fine and you did a good job playing the game". Little Katy smiled, "I cried just like you asked me too, it was fun!". Her mother finished brushing her hair, "Its time for bed". Little Katy crawled into bed and was tucked in by her mother. "Goodnight mommy" katy said. "Goodnight my sweet" her mother replied as she kissed her forehead. Her mother then turned off the light and shut the door.

Ashlee cried as sweat dripped from her forehead. The ropes were extremely tight and were beginning to hurt. She couldn't believe what was happening. Suddenly she heard the door being unlocked. She froze in fear as her captor opened the door. Ashlee gasped when she saw her captor. She couldn't believe her eyes. Her captor placed a rag over her nose and pressed tightly. Ashlee began to struggle as the sweet smelling cloth covered her nose. Ashlee soon became groggy and her eyes slowly closed. She was out cold once again...

Re: Kidnapped Waitress

Postby abductionfan » Fri Apr 24, 2015 11:26 am

Great story so far, and; welcome. Hope to see more from you. :big:

Re: Kidnapped Waitress

Postby Headmistress » Sat Apr 25, 2015 6:40 am

Very good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Re: Kidnapped Waitress

Postby AlexUSA » Sat Apr 25, 2015 5:21 pm

Great job so far!
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Re: Kidnapped Waitress

Postby Mmph Squad » Sat May 30, 2015 8:04 pm

We'd like to know what happened to poor ashlee! So far so good!
To tie or be tied? I'm not one to care as long as there are gags!

Re: Kidnapped Waitress

Postby Bondage Bunch » Tue Jun 09, 2015 12:21 pm

This is mystifying. Never thought a robber/ kidnapper would use a child for the job.