Postby viking » Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:59 pm
holy diver, go easy on the guy.
why wouldn't this be a true story? and come on, i understood exactly what he was writing even though the story seems to be written in a haste.
yes it's a little confusing, but you don't have to go so hard on him.
instead of writing things like "this sucks" and "this story can't be real" you should rather try to give him some advise.
i'll say you should absolutely write some more, but take yourself the time to do a proper spell check. make sure everything is written properly.
then i'm pretty sure you'll get a really good story out of it.
if you don't have anything positive to say then don't say anything at all... unless if you actually know the guy and you know that he won't feel offended by a little burn once in a while.
Once a scout, always a perverted pyromaniac with a fetish for knives and duct tape