## kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 6:59 am

the people in this story are.
me 12 years old short skinny blond hair
my friend edward is 14 years old and has long brown hair he's cool to me but can be a yerk sometimes
my friend oscar 14 has black hair and is athleticly build he protect me from being tortured to hard wich makes him cool.
my girlfriend amy 14 has long blond hair she's obsessed with cute things cats , puppy's kids younger then her wich is the biggest reason se like to tie me up
my cousin sara 14 has long black hair she is amy's best friend as she is my cousin she likes to tease me.
After my first tie up games amy and sara began to tie me up every time i saw then and would torture me for hours they even held me captive for an entire weekend so naturaly i wanted revenge but the problem was that they where older stronger way taller and almost always togheter so trying to overpower them alone would only result in me being tied up and tortured for hours again so i asked oscar and edward to help me .
we would all go to edward's place to sllep there and we would make sure amy and sara would come at different times so we would have no problem capturing them.
amy arived first when she came in edwards room edward quicly forced her hands behind her back and handgagged her.
mmpphh she yelped surprised.
'to the ground 'edward ordered wich she did.
Im going to take my hand off your mouth if you dont scream.
mmpphh amy nodded.
'She's all yours chris' oscar said to me.
while oscar and edward restrained amy i tied her hands behind her back and her feet togheter.
'Please chris im your girlfriend you've got to help me'.
'No way you kidnap me all the time and torture now its payback time.
'SOMEBODY HELP IM GETTING KIDNAPT HEEEEEEEEEELLLPPPP'
'SOMEWHONE PLEAMMMPPPPPHHHHHH' i clamped my hand over her mouth 'could you give me the tape i asked oscar.
'please cutie untie me im sorry she pleaded.
'shut up this is your punishment for tickling me ' i wraped the tape several times around her head and then i tested the gag by tickling her.
'hhmmpphh she laughted.
she wasn.t to pleased with being tied up sh strugled tried to kick us and made many mmpphhs.
MMMMMMMMPPPPPHHHHHHHHH she screamed at me.
' you are saying that im the boss over you i asked.
MMMMMMMMPPPHHHH she angry screamed at me and shook her head.
Lets tickle her until she admits it guys i said.
i was lying on top of her and tickled her ribs while oscar and edward tickled her ribs.
MMMMMMMMMMMMPPPPPPPPPPPHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH she was pleading laughing andcuring us behind her gag.
whe continut to tickle her until whe heard the doorbell .
'time to kidnap sara oscar said.
Sara was pleading behind her gag both to let her go and to not be part in the kidnapping her best friend.
edward and oscar hid in the closet while i went to the door .
hi kiddo' she said while rubing my hair .
hi ' i said with a big smile on my face.
what are you so happy about .
you see it later ' i said
when whe came in edwards room she was surprised do see amy tied up.
MMMPPHHHH she tried to warn sara .
i tried to tackle sara to the ground but she easely overporwerd me i was forced to the ground while she twisted my arms behind my back.
'auw your breaking my arms LET GOO!
'dont worry im going to untie you amy but first im going to make this little boy suffer for wat he hass done to you.
'NOW' I yelled oscar came out of the closet and draged sara off me and edward bound her wrists togheter.
'Not fair she yelled at them'.
well you did not think the kid could tie amy up on his own did you oscar said.
yea chris was too weak to take revenge so we helped him with that . edward said ' isn't that right chrisieboy he said while piching my cheeks.
STOP THAT i yelled .
'Yea whe know chris is pretty pathetic 'sara yoked
shut up ' i gagged her with the tape
now both the girls wher mmpphhing at us .
you know it would be fan if whe tied all the girls.
huh whe did tie all the girls i said confused.
no we havent oscar said with a wide grinn.
your the only one thats left edward said to me.
when i knew what they meant i quicly ran away but they where faster and i was tied up along with sara and amy.
TO BE CONTINUD

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Shaun » Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:56 am

Aw, you finally get your revenge and that happens 'eh? Would love to hear the rest

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:32 am

once they where free they beat me up as usual it think i continu the story tomorow.
come to think about it there has not been even one time that i sucesfully tied somewone up(it rarly hapends ) without paying for it

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by wadeb444 » Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:42 am

yea my best friend can be a yerk sometimes too LOL
WADE

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Fesselfan » Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:37 am

Again a basically good story which could be improved a lot by using a spell checker and more structure (interpuncion especially), wasting a lot of it's potential that way.
Cheers
FF
There are 10 kind of people in the world.
Those who understand binary numeral system, and those who don't.

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:08 am

interpuncion??????????????????????/

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:08 pm

part 2
Come on guys this is unfair let me go ' i pleaded.
'shut up chris'.
i was really pissed off now because this was supossed to be my revenge and instead of tickling my girlfriend and cousin to death i was tied up with them and would share the same fate i had in mind for them.
but instead of torturing us they left the room but not before gagging me with tape
i looked at the two older girls next to me they where strugling and making mmpphh's as hard as they could.
they looked extremely cute and they where acting like my perfect damsels in distress if i actualy had the strengt for it i would tie then really much.
MMMMPPPPPHHHhhhhh sara screamed at me i could not understand what she said but because of the angry look in her eyes i assumed it was i treat.
i crawld away from her as far as i could she can be really scary sometimes.
the guys came back and ungagged as only to gag us again with cleave gags so we would not choke in our sleep.
then they got to bed as it was getting pretty late whe where left to sleep on the floor .
my night was not really good because amy and sara who blamed me for wat happend where kicking me for a long time till we fell asleep.
When i was awake the first thing i saw was sara's smiling face.
'aaaaaaah 'i yelled totaly terrified .
the now untied sara removed the piece of cloth gagging me and she went to ly on top of me.
You dont mind if i have a little fun with my little cousin before whe get revenge on the guys' she asked sara.
she gave me a atomic wedgie(that REALLY REALLY hurts ) then she gave me a super noogie and many nipple twists.
'I think our little brat has learned his lesson 'she said to amy
'Please dont hurt me anymore ' i begged.
Of course not they both said while giving me a big hug.
with me being punisht quite brutaly i can tell you the 2 girls made plans to get the boys back.
Sara would go after oscar as they where the stronger ones and amy would capture edward.
this one is a bit short but its getting late and all that stuff
to be continud

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Male shortstied » Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:02 pm

Are you a male or female in the story?

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Fri Aug 21, 2009 10:53 pm

Male how else would i have a girlfriend.

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Suestruggles » Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:18 am

> Chris12 wrote:Male how else would i have a girlfriend.

you could be BI !....however you do make it clear at the start you are male, the other boys just call you agirl cos they think you're a wimp
Sue
Fit to be tied, wants to struggle.

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Sat Aug 22, 2009 12:29 pm

Compared to them i am a wimp but thats because they are older then me.

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Shaun » Mon Aug 24, 2009 4:22 am

> Fesselfan wrote:Again a basically good story which could be improved a lot by using a spell checker and more structure (interpuncion especially), wasting a lot of it's potential that way.
> Cheers
> FF

Sorry I am a bit late on this. But... I think it was established a while ago that Chris was... oh what was it? German? So... take notice that for one... it's understandable that his English spelling is not so good, even though I think for the most part it is fine.
Second... I don't know about Chris... or anyone else but, I really don't care TOO much about grammar in things I would post here. The only thing I would really care about is a school essay or something. So... you have to consider that his web browser (if it has any grammar check at all, like Mozilla FireFox) is set to the German language. As mine is set to English... it does not correct ANY other grammar problems if in another language. And... I'm not going to go download a multi - language spell checker, or reconfigure my internet/Word Processor for a few stories on this site. Sorry, just my opinion on the matter.

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by trammel » Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:12 pm

I understand being patient with Chris because English is not his native tongue, but the comment that you don't really care about grammar and punctuation is tragic. There is more to life than being tied up, you know!

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by trammel » Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:14 pm

Sorry, I digressed into the grammar thing, but I'm a stickler for it and it drives me nuts when people don't bother to proof read (different from the native tongue thing!)

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Mon Aug 24, 2009 2:02 pm

Part 3
'What you going to do with me 'i asked because knowing sarra she would torture till i cry or pee my pants(it did happen once or twice )
Whe are going to leave you here until we get the boys .sara ansered.
And after that where going to torture you guys for the rest of the day 'amy said it was only 8 o clock in the morning so that would be really long.
Come on please dont do that pleeeeeeease ' i begged while making cute puppy eyes.
You did this to yourself kiddo so stop whinning.
OSCAR HEEEEEELP THEY HAVE ESCAMMPPHH ' before i could finish amy had stuffed some socks in my mouth.
you scream way to much chris' sara said while amy taped my mouth so i would not spit the socks out.
I was now trying to escape my bonds more desperate then ever because i knew i would get the most torture since it was my fault they spent a night tied up and they would not have to worry that i would take revenge.
aaahw isn't he adorable well where are going to capture the guys be a good little guy and dont cause any more trouble sara 'said and amy kissed me on my cheek.
'bye kiddo'.
RRGMPH MRPHHH' i screamed as hard as i could trying to warn my friend but they did not hear me of course.
A while later amy came in the room and she was dragging a bound and gagged edward with her .
Amy placed him next to me me and tied us togheter.
mmrrphh 'edward squermed he sounded really afraid if not terryfied but thats natural as amy is really good at beating up and torturing people(i know that all too well) .
whe waited for sara but she did not came back and after a while sara became woried .
if anything has happends to her your gonna get it she treated.
edward gave her a defying MMPPRRGGHH wich meant he had regained his courage bad choice.
Think your though 'she smilled and she tickled edward for a minute.
You two are just weak little boys so if even one of you goes against me i will flush both of your heads trough the toilet do i make myself clear.
whe both quicly nodded not wanted to anger her.
After that the door went open but instead of sara bringing a tied up oscar oscar had tied sarra up she was yelling hystericly into her tape gag.
amy was surprised and tried to capture oscar by herself but she was easely trown to the ground and was pinned down .
MMPPPMHHH whe yelled at him hoping he would free us.
i help you in a sec just need to do something' he dragged amy to a cair and taped her to the chair .
when he made sure the girls could not untie themselfs again and gagging a screaming amy he went to us and untied his cousin.
I made a few begging mmpphh's so he would untie me.
what do you think 'he asked edward.
'the kid has got eneugh you can untie him.
'thanks for freeing me but you are real yerks for tying me up too i got kicked the entire night the wedgie i got from sara still hurt andmmpphh' growing tired of my whining edward put the socks back in my mouth.
i think we should keep you gagged the whole day that would give us a break of your quirky voice he said.
after edward gave me a playfull noogie whe went outside.
with the girl sucssesfully kidnappped whe spend the rest of the morning playing football.
I you think this story got a happy ending think again.
Whe where relaxing in the garden in front of the house when edward suddenly grabbed me in a headlock .
you know oscar there is still some tape left it would be a shame if whe would not use it.
i see what you mean oscar said with a smile and he went in the house to get the tape.
Edward lifted me up and placed me on the wall will oscar taped me to the wall and gagged me.
i was left taped on the wall for the most of the midday and before they untied me they invited the younger kids in the streets to trow water baloons at me for 20 minutes .
my friends are all way too evil

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Fesselfan » Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:12 am

Sorry if I drop in again here....
but I am German, too. I have a german and an english spell checker. If I write a story, I (usually) type it into a word processor (i.E. Word) which manages to spell check in multiple languages, too. I think my stories are (at least halfway) correct and readable english because of that.
The point I have about grammar/style: there are things like reading flow. Which gets interrupted by lack of such things. Which- in turn- often makes an otherwise good story not so good.
My point is...if you take a lot of time writing a story, you should at least take the 5 minutes it takes to make an automated spell check.
CHeers
FF

> Shaun wrote:

> > Fesselfan wrote:Again a basically good story which could be improved a lot by using a spell checker and more structure (interpuncion especially), wasting a lot of it's potential that way.
> > Cheers
> > FF

> Sorry I am a bit late on this. But... I think it was established a while ago that Chris was... oh what was it? German? So... take notice that for one... it's understandable that his English spelling is not so good, even though I think for the most part it is fine.
> Second... I don't know about Chris... or anyone else but, I really don't care TOO much about grammar in things I would post here. The only thing I would really care about is a school essay or something. So... you have to consider that his web browser (if it has any grammar check at all, like Mozilla FireFox) is set to the German language. As mine is set to English... it does not correct ANY other grammar problems if in another language. And... I'm not going to go download a multi - language spell checker, or reconfigure my internet/Word Processor for a few stories on this site. Sorry, just my opinion on the matter.

There are 10 kind of people in the world.
Those who understand binary numeral system, and those who don't.

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Jason Toddman » Sat May 08, 2010 6:35 pm

> come to think about it there has not been even one time that i sucesfully tied someone up(it rarly hapends ) without paying for it.

I'll bet there are a lot of people reading this who would be happy to change that for you. Ever try asking for volunteers?

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:24 am

I did but being tied up by a little kid is not something my friends are willing to do. Acording to my friends if you cant capture somoene on you own you have no right to tie him up.

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Jason Toddman » Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:33 am

Too bad I'm not your age and living in your area.
I assure you that you woulkd easily win every such encounter!

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by DJScias » Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:42 pm

First of all.. nice story
Second of all. I have to point this out.. He isn't from Germany.. He's from the netherlands, which is a whole different country.
They speak Dutch there..Which is similar to German but they do not conclude with each other.
The only country that is similar to it is Belgium (I live there).
-DJScias

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Jason Toddman » Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:47 pm

In any case Chris's English has improved since he posted this story, and though it could still use some improvement I think the humor and wit Chris puts into these stories more than make up for any shortcomings in his English skills. So will you people please give this kid a break and encourage him to keep writing rather than diss his spelling? Too many people have stopped posting to this site because of discouragement like that. I'd rather Chris not be one of them.
Thank you!

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by ducttapeboy001 » Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:21 am

great story...
wish I had cousins and friends like yours...
who knows, mb one of my friends would be actually into TUGs, and if i am fortunate I myt even get tied up...
btw, amy and sara, would have tied and tortured u alot for all that...

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Post by boundboy » Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:23 am

great story! too bad i got no one to do that with

### Re: kidnapped for the weekend

Post by Chris12 » Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:48 am

> ducttapeboy001 wrote:great story...
> wish I had cousins and friends like yours...
> who knows, mb one of my friends would be actually into TUGs, and if i am fortunate I myt even get tied up...
> btw, amy and sara, would have tied and tortured u alot for all that...

Yeah they where pissed at me for weeks! mostly Sara