Football Celebration!!!

Postby Edgeworth » Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:38 pm

discourages further posting
"If a man cannot not care, what can he do?"

Adieu

Edgey Edgington Edgeworth the VIII

Re: Football Celebration!!!

Postby Fesselfan » Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:43 am

I can only subscribe to what my foreposter said...

You may want to check some advices for writers which are around this site. As it stands now, your story- honestly- leaves much room for improvements.
Just don't give up, improve! :-)

Cheers

FF
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Those who understand binary numeral system, and those who don't.