No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Thu May 22, 2014 6:00 am

The Jet and Anthony in this story are based off of the ones in my Jet's Adventures series so expect some anime style fights to be happening in this. Also this story will have bondage in it just not right off the bat like usual. I will be continuing my Summer war story as well so don't worry about that.

Chapter 1: Hope

The twenty year old Anthony stopped reading the letter he found in the river, he had never thought their was such a cruel hospital. He quickly realized he needed to rush back to the campsite, he was playing some tugs games with his best friend a red furred Pikachu named Jet a year younger than he was. Now that he read about the ants, he knew he couldn't leave Jet alone. Wasting no time he rushed back to the campsite as fast as he could. He wore a red t-shirt, tan shorts, white socks, red and black shoes, had white skin, brown curly hair and brown eyes. Slightly chubby but in a cute way. He also had on his back a fusion sword, it rested in it's sheath for now.

"I sure hope I remembered to put the food away." He thought.

He made it to the campstie and found a trail of ants coming toward Jet who was currently staked out in front of their tent. Reacting fast he pulled Jet out of the ground and jumped away from the ants. He landed on the ground.

"That was too close." Anthony sighed in relief

"What's wrong Anthony?" Jet asked.

He explained everything he read in the letter to Jet who reacted in shock. He knew Jet would be especially horrified from this as he loves tickling but only using it in a friendly way, he hated when someone used it for cruelty such as this.

"We need to help him and the other kids at that hospital." Jet explained.

"I know, but let's find that Alexsis kid first. If I remember correctly we past a bamboo grove about an hour ago." Anthony explained.

Jet nods and they quickly pack up their stuff rushing over to the bamboo grove. Jet using his super good hearing listened for any sounds praying this kid was still alive. He heard feint sobbing, he sped off quickly. They found the boy, to their relief he was still barely conscious. The Bamboo had begun to pierce his skin, but they could take care of that no problem. Anthony untied him and then carefully layed him on his belly. The boy laughed from this as the tickling sensations were still pretty active. Jet focused electricity into the palms of his hands, then he gently placed them on Alexis's back where he was bleeding. He sends a healing shock wave through the kids body healing the wounds, but something even more amazing happened. Alexis stopped laughing.

"Y-you,you cured me." Alexis gasped.

He began to shed much deserved tears of joy. He hugged the red Pikachu in a tight hug. Jet found it a little hard to breathe but he didn't mind, Alexis was happy so that's all that mattered besides he liked being squeezed. Anthony joins them in the hug.

"I'm not sure how you did it, but thank you." Alexis smiled greatfully.

He eased his grip on Jet a bit.

"Well I call it my pulse heal, I didn't know it could cure something like this." Jet explained.

"But now we do, and I think it's time we went to raise some hell at that so called hospital." Anthony smirked.

He held the letter in his hand clutching it tightly, he couldn't believe he never knew about this. He made a mental vow to make up for it by saving everyone in that hospital. Jet walked in front of him.

"Don't worry Anthony we can do this, but what about this kid?" Jet wondered.

"Hm well we can't just leave him here those ants are all over the place. Besides I think I've got a plan that will put him out of harms way, but still help us." Anthony said.

to be continued
Last edited by Wyatt9999 on Thu May 22, 2014 8:46 am, edited 1 time in total.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby tony2 » Thu May 22, 2014 6:26 am

don't forget his metal helm and the gag --which apparently come loose under it. keep going, 19 kids left.
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Thu May 22, 2014 8:45 am

I will do you like it.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby tony2 » Thu May 22, 2014 9:53 am

I think i'm more Edgar Allen Poe but the story probably needs a Walt Disney ending like yours too. Hope everyone likes our association too.
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby chadmc90 » Thu May 22, 2014 10:46 am

So we have ants that inject tickling venom inside their victims and a red talking pikachu that just so happens to have the ability to cure those said victims? This story gets weirder by the chapter, lol. Not that I'm complaining because I tend to write "out of the box" material as well. I look forward to the next installment.

By the way, is this a collaborative effort between you guys? I personally would rather write my own sequels than have someone else write it.
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Thu May 22, 2014 11:10 am

hehe well like I said Jet is from my series Jet's Adventures so if you want to learn more about him read my stories on deviant art my username is Cloud5001. Pulse heal is something I just recently thought of for him, bascailly how I figure it the healing electricity kills any germs or cells that shouldn't be in someone's body.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby tony2 » Thu May 22, 2014 11:54 am

chadmc90 wrote:So we have ants that inject tickling venom inside their victims and a red talking pikachu that just so happens to have the ability to cure those said victims? This story gets weirder by the chapter, lol. Not that I'm complaining because I tend to write "out of the box" material as well. I look forward to the next installment.

By the way, is this a collaborative effort between you guys? I personally would rather write my own sequels than have someone else write it.


I wanted to see what a younger mind can do with the stage set. As long as he leaves the professor alive, he may well return --- with his ants too.

Nerve damage as described can never be fully healed so I would expect to see James in the muck again down the line. For now, we'll see how they get the kids out of the Amazon.

keep going wyatt - you've got a touchy problem to solve because of the recharge needs of the collars ???
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Thu May 22, 2014 12:31 pm

hehe so the professor needs to survive alright, thanks for letting me know before this got too far.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby NemesisPrime » Thu May 22, 2014 3:54 pm

I know I'm gonna catch flack for this but WTF with the red-furred pikachu?

I understand the setup is vague enough to be placed in any universe but still there were details in the original story to place it in the real world then you throw that out and someone like me goes "The hell did I just read?"

Sorry, personal gripe. Hope the boys get saved soon or Anthony may just end up falling prey to the ants as well.
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby xtc » Thu May 22, 2014 5:39 pm

Must agree with Nemesis.
A sequel should be consistent with the original.

Embarrassing admission: as a sixty-*cough* year old, I didn't have to look up 'pikachu'. Old AND sad, there's no hope.
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby chadmc90 » Thu May 22, 2014 6:37 pm

Honestly, I had mixed feelings about it. One part of me finds it interesting, but the other also understands where XTC and Nemesis is coming from. It just seems to have been plopped into the story without no rhyme or reason.

Could you maybe offer some explanation as to why the pikachu is there? Maybe it was manufactured inside a lab by the professor and it went 'corrupt'?
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Thu May 22, 2014 8:25 pm

Alright I'll do my best to summarize Jet in the next chapter for you guys.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Wed May 28, 2014 11:23 am

Chapter 2: The Mission Begins

As Jet, Anthony, and Alexsis walked towards the hospital the boy was curious as to why a Pikachu was even here. He didn't really understand it, and Anthony didn't seem like a normal human either. It's like Anthony had fought jerks like the guys at the hospital before.

"Um so what's your guys story anyway?" Alexsis asked.

"Well it's a bit of a long one, but we'll do our best to summarize. First off I'm from a different dimension, one day Anthony fell into my dimension through a portal and we became best friends. We went on many adventures and fought many evil creatures, made lots of strong friends. Eventually we learned that unless Anthony went back to the human dimension time would stop, so he went back." Jet explained.

"That wasn't the end of it however, another villain was threatening to destroy the world and Jet had to help me. Then we found a way to connect our two dimensions so we could visit each other and nothing bad would happen." Anthony finished.

Alexsis did his best to take it all in. This was really incredible to him, to think two heroes would stumble across him. He wanted to know more about their adventures, but that was not to be now as they got to the entrance of the hospital.

"Alright, time to put my plan into action" Anthony smiled.

His hand glows using magic to coat Alexsis in a white aura, making it seem as if he was a ghost. Alexsis took a deep breathe then entered the building. First thing he had to do was to scream as loud as he could to get the staff's attention. About ten of the doctors came and were shocked by the appearance of the boy.

"You killed me, now I will haunt you till you meet your end." Alexsis said in a monotone voice.

The doctors scream and begin running as he gives chase. He made them run to a wall with a window, they saw Jet under the window. When they look back they see Alexsis is gone. They look at the Pikachu before them both shocked and angry.

"That's right I made the ghost." Jet said.

One of the doctors reach into their coat pockets, he blows sleep powder in Jet's face making him fall asleep laying on his back. Alexsis watches from a closet as they take him somewhere in the hospital. He knew it was going as planned, he just hoped Anthony would make his move before the doctors decide to give him the virus from the ants.

In the basement Jet was tied to a metal table spread eagle, he was also blindfolded. The staff of doctors were around him.

"Why are you here?" A doctor asked.

"Do what you want I won't talk." Jet explained.

Two doctors began skittering their fingers along his defenseless belly. He laughed hard from this squirming madly. He couldn't even try to hold it in since he was very ticklish. However he knew he this was not a game, but he needed to keep their attention on him according to the plan. Two more doctors wiggled feathers in his armpits his laughter and squirming increasing hard. Suddenly two lightning blasts pierced through the four doctors chests. They look back to see Anthony holding his hands in front of him.

"Who are you?" A doctor asked.

"Your worst nightmare, we won't let you continue your experiments on these kids. We're putting an end to it and getting all these kids home!" Anthony yelled.

Jet smirked using electricity to break his ropes. He jumps off the table and lands beside Anthony ready to fight. One of the doctors alert the security guards. Jet still had doubts about killing all the doctors here.

"We can't show any mercy Jet. These people forced kids away from their homes and families just for their own plans. Their no different then monsters." Anthony explained.

"Yeah your right, it won't end if they live. They'll just do it again." Jet confirmed.

Anthony drew his sword as two security guards approached them with plasma spears.

to be continued.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Wed May 28, 2014 11:45 am

Hopefully my brief summary of my Jet's Adventures series should satisfy you, if you want to know more again my stories are on my Deviant art page username Cloud5001 and the stories have a wiki page too.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby tony2 » Wed May 28, 2014 12:41 pm

nice and clear background information segue into the character line. Remember, I need the chief dr alive and out of there before you kill everyone (grin)Also james will only e able to take a partial or temporary heal. The rest is yours, have at them!
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby NemesisPrime » Wed May 28, 2014 1:02 pm

And that clears up all the gripes I had! Excellent job Wyatt, can't wait for more!
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Wed May 28, 2014 1:12 pm

hehe thank you. Don't worry when they fight I'll explain more about their powers.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Mon Jun 30, 2014 2:49 pm

Chapter 3: The Strongest Scientist

Jet has his tail glow for Iron-tail, then slams it into one guard's stomach sending him into a wall. He dodges as the guard get's up trying to jab him with his lance. He rolls to the side when the guard swings at him, then fires thunderbolt at him knocking him out. Anthony was blocking blows from the other guard with his sword.

"You've made a grave mistake in coming here." The Guard said.

"Perhaps, but it's unwise to underestimate your enemy. Especially since he's a soul reaper." Anthony explained with a smirk.

Electrical spiritual pressure began to circle around his body. He knocks the guard back a few feet, then holds out his sword. The electricity starts flowing around the blade of his zanpakto.

"Electrify Pikachu." Anthony calls.

His blade splits into two pieces with electricity flowing down the middle. He still finds it great how he became a soul reaper. It was during the night the legendary Cloud Strife took him under his wing, he had always respected Cloud's skill. As such that night when Cloud gave him a fusion sword like his idol he was very excited. So excited he attack the first thing that came out of the bushes. He was unaware that creature was Jet. A shield of electricity covered Jet's body as his blade struck. Though he didn't know it at the time, this was when Jet ran away from home and a hollow a demon who ate the souls of the dead entered his body.

He felt the electric spiritual pressure enter his sword and body. It turned him into a soul reaper and it connected Jet and him. They didn't realize until much later that they were fated to reunite. He was brought of his thoughts as the guard tried to swing at him.

"Oh yeah." Anthony said.

He fires a wave of lightning across the guards chest sending him across the room. Jet and Alexsis watched on, Alexis particaluarly was awestruck at his and Jet's power. Alexsis felt hope enter his heart, he was sure that they would be able to put a stop to this.

"Alright, I need to find whoever made the collars. Alexsis you show Jet where all the other boys are and start getting them out of here." Anthony explained.

"You got it." Alexsis smiled.

"Come on Alexsis." Jet said.

Alexsis leads Jet out of the interrogation room. Anthony started looking around for a scientist lab of some kind. The boy led Jet to the second floor where all of the boys were. Jet began entering rooms and after making sure their collars were charged started leading them out. With the guards taken care of they didn't risk being recaptured.

"Oh Alexsis, do you know who the person was that wrote the notes about this place?" Jet asked.

"Well the only one I could think of is James. He wrote notes for four days then felt it unwise to continue doing it any further, I caught him doing on the second day but didn't dare rat him out." Alexsis explained.

"I see, is he among these boys." Jet explained.

"No for some reason, the doctor who runs this place took a liking to James the most. His room is right next to the stair case to the second floor. The staircase leads to the doctor's office. I don't know who was making the collars though."

Jet then heard something trying to pounce on them. He quickly get's Alexsis into one of the rooms as something lands on him. From what he could tell the person seemed to have tentacles, this was confirmed as a tentacle wrapped around him and pulled him up to the face of a women, she was beautiful dressed in a long blue dress, with brown long hair and white skin. Eight tentacles were coming out of her back.

"So cute, shame your an intruder. I guess I can make the most of it, I'll tickle you a bit that way you can have a few more laughs before you die." The women said.

Jet looked confused, she was an enemy so why would she merciful especially since she works with this place. He found her grip to be surprisingly strong, it wasn't impossible to get out of, he felt her hold him upside down by his ankles.

"Uh I'm curious why do you have tentacles growing out of your back, and what's your name?" Jet asked.

"Oh my apologies, my name is Wave I'm a special protector of the hospital here. The boys here are sick and so regrettably I must protect them even from cuties like you. My tentacles were the result of the scientist also the creator of the chargers. He had me drink octopus dna and it gave me my tentacles. The scientist is pretty tough, his name is Proffesor Cline." She explained.

As he listened he knew Wave was being lied to, from her perspective she's only protecting sick and weak children. She has no idea of what's really going on in this hospital. Sadly he knows she won't listen right away. He decided to let her have her fun with him before getting down to the fight. He begins laughing cutely as two tentacles wiggle on his helpless belly. Alexsis looks on, wondering why Jet would let this happen.

Meanwhile Anthony found Proffesor Cline's room. He opened the door, he saw a man roughly in his thirties. He had scars all over his face, black spiky hair, bloodshot green eyes, pale skin, a tattered white coat, with a torn up grey t-shirt, and ripped black pants, this man however had preying mantis arms instead of human ones.

"My my my so your the intruder. That fool Wave thinks she's protecting the kiddies, but we both know that's not the case huh. I gave her those octopus arms cause I convinced her it would make her strong enough to protect them. Foolish girls." Cline rambled a bit insane like.

"I don't know exactly who your talking about, but it sounds like your not very nice to your co-workers either." Anthony stated.

He charged toward Cline swinging his sword at the mad scientist. Cline blocks his blade with those arms, they were surpsingly strong as if his blade was pressed against actual swords. He knew this was not going to be easy.

to be continued.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby tony2 » Mon Jun 30, 2014 4:03 pm

cute development so far. i don't know much about the cartoon characters so I don't have the understanding background but this is being authored for you "young'uns (under 50ish) so comment and let Wyatt know how he's doing.... Thanks
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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Mon Jun 30, 2014 4:41 pm

tony2 wrote:cute development so far. i don't know much about the cartoon characters so I don't have the understanding background but this is being authored for you "young'uns (under 50ish) so comment and let Wyatt know how he's doing.... Thanks


My idea with Wave was to show that not every adult knew what was happening, plus I can use it to help show the fun side of tickling.

Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby tony2 » Tue Jul 01, 2014 2:47 am

as the one chipmunk said to the other chipmunk: "Gopher it"
If you believe in yourself enough -
nobody else will figure out you're faking it.


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Re: No Laughing Matter the sequel

Postby Wyatt9999 » Tue Jul 01, 2014 5:33 am

You will have permission to use my two characters in your next entry to this. Since again there's no way they'll quit at the end.