## The pink duct tape.

Post by SelenaGfan » Mon Sep 10, 2012 3:39 am

Is the person tied up m or f?What are they wearing?

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Post by VictimNumber1 » Mon Sep 10, 2012 3:59 am

Good story, looking forward to the continuation. As for some constructive feedback, I suggest spacing out the paragraphs so it is easier to read. But other than that, great story.
I just know they're going to tie me up tonight,
They're bound to.

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Post by burner59 » Mon Sep 10, 2012 4:47 pm

Great story
If i may be rude (it's a passion XD,) the only problem with this is no indentation, and the paragraphs are not seperated-but great!
Stay gagged,
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Post by guardian741 » Mon Sep 10, 2012 5:25 pm

Awesome story so far! Lexi sounds like a blast! - How old were you guys when this happened? 16? 18?
How bad did Lexi's socks smell? Did she put her bare feet in your face?
Can't wait for the continuation!
-Guardian

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Post by tiedupbballboy » Sun Sep 16, 2012 9:48 pm

Don't listen to the critics sometimes you dont even realize you don't have paragraphs you just type and submit anyway awesome story keep going

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Post by Joseph_Mother » Tue Sep 25, 2012 7:55 am

Keep this going. I like it so far
My name's not actually Joseph, it's Sam. My name is a play on "Joe Mama"
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