## Robbers aren't usually kidnappers (F/M)

Post by Jules12 » Sun Apr 28, 2013 3:34 pm

I'm so sorry I had to change the name as my thoughts on the story changed but I'm still writing it. Hello this is my first post on this site. I've never posted any of my stories but I'm a long one reader of others. Please comment to tell me if my story is good!
Before I say anything let me tell you one thing. I didn't mean to get kidnapped.
I though kidnapping only happened on TV. Even then it only happened to little eight year old girls and they got kidnapped by big burly guys with black ski masks over their faces. Cliche right?
I also didn't mean to fall in love. But both happened. I think I should start from the beginning, a beautiful day in June.
My name is Jackson Solento. My friends call me Jack. I'm 17 about 6"1 with brunette hair that was cut in almost a beiber cut. I weigh about 167 pounds.
I live in a small town named Allenhurst in New Jersey. My neighborhood, Bridgewood is a well to do neighborhood. Who am I kidding my parents are rich. My dad's a CEO for a computer company and my moms a partner in a law firm. I went to the local school and was a lacrosse player MVP. But school had ended a week ago.
My parents, Jack and (don't laugh) Jill, were on their 20th anniversary. They had splurged to go to Aruba for a couple of weeks leaving my with my "aunt" Nessie
Aunt Nessie really was just my moms best friend. She was cool though. Nessie had a full time job so as long as I didn't get drunk, do drugs, or have a house party; I could do pretty much whatever I wanted to. The only thing she was strict with was I had to leave a note or a voicemail if I was going to be out after 6pm or was staying at a friends. She was a really good cook So I usually came back to the house to eat bofore leaving again.
It was awesome. I had the house to myself could do whatever I pleased for 3 whole weeks! I didn't know that I wouldn't be able to enjoy my paradise for very long.
About two days into my vacation I went out to go skateboarding in the road. I noticed a black van in the neighborhood. None of my neighbors owned black vans so it was pretty weird. I saw the side it said Reelers Plumbing and I immediatly relaxed. The Crestors, who lived next door, had always had a leaky faucet that Mr.Crestor "fixed" repeatedly. Maybe the Mrs. had decided to throw in the towel on his skills and call a real plumber.
I went along down the road and stopped at the gas station about two blocks away. I got a blue slushie and flirted with the girl behind the register, turning up the charm. Naturally, her father owned the store.
With a verbal warning and my skateboard in hand. I walked back up the hill to my house. As I neared my house I noticed the van was in my driveway. Being the idiot I was I walked in the back door not thinking that anything was going to happen.
That's when my life changed forever. I didn't think that by choosing to open that damn door I was going to alter the course of my life indefinitely.
Back to the story I knew something was up when Scooter didn't greet me at the door.
Scooter is my German Shepard and whenever I open the door he usually comes running in probably with a toy or something.
But when I opened the door... Nothing. I immediately went to the kitchen figuring he was eating something he shouldn't be when I heard faint barking coming from somewhere upstairs. I took the stairs two at a time. Looking back I was an idiot not to run out of the house right in that second.
Scooter was in my room barking his head off. I opened the door and crouched down ruffling the fur on my dogs head.
"Hey boy," I said, "how'd ya get in there?"
I stretched back up and I walked back downstairs into the living room. my dog had decided to stay in the foyer upstairs.
As I went in I felt that something wasn't right. A premonition coming too late. As I picked up the phone to call Nessie a leather gloves hand slapped over my mouth! Something hard and metallic went right up against my head. As I turned slightly I saw it was a silver pistol! Someone has just put a gun to my head.
"Well," a feminine voice purred, "Look who got home very early."
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Post by kidnapplz » Mon Apr 29, 2013 1:23 am

Omg. Love it. Plz go on

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Post by xtc » Mon Apr 29, 2013 3:02 am

Welcome to the league of TUGs writers.
An entertaining start.
Please don't let any of us decide how your story will proceed. Be your own person.
Wassail!
Xtc
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!
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Post by gman82 » Mon Apr 29, 2013 5:14 am

Love it:) MORE PLEASE:P

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Post by BoundBadBoy » Tue May 07, 2013 12:45 pm

I like this already! I think your stories will be taken into the TUGs community quite easily
I won't struggle, i promise! Just pull that rope down so i can reach it easily.

### Re: Robbers aren't usually kidnappers (F/M)

Post by Jules12 » Tue May 14, 2013 12:41 pm

Hello I'm back with another chapter thanks fr all the comments
So there I was being held at gunpoint by a girl and wondering when I was gonna die.
I could say I was all valiant an tried to shake her off and fight the gun but that would be lying. I was trembling and praying to god she wouldn't just shoot me on the spot.
She lowered the gun to the middle of my back never taking her hand off my mouth the leather clinging like a vice when she spoke her breath hit the back of my neck making me shiver.
"If you value your life," she whispered "you won't make any stupid moves and walk slowly to the kitchen. Now, put your phone and any other electronics on the table."
I was not a complete idiot. I had pretty good grades in all my classes so I did what I was told. As I layed my phone on the couch she quickly checked my pockets and seemed pleased I had done what she said. The woman dragged me to the kitchen.
She had a backpack with her. She shuffled me into a chair and sat me down finally taking her hand away from my mouth and unzipping the backpack. Inside it were numerous coils of rope bandannas and three rolls of duct tape.
"Wh what's going on? Who are you? Why are you in my house?" I asked my voice laced with fear. She took out one of the rolls of tape.
"Put your hand on the armrest," she ordered.
"No answer my questions," I said she grabbed my arm and pushed onto the rest. She was really strong!
As she wrapped the duct tape around my arm, I tried to get more answers out of her. Then she got fed up.
With one almighty CRACK! She slapped me right across the face. I gasped as tears sprung to my eyes but I was determined not to let them fall.
"God shut up kid!" She yelled,"just stay quiet and I'll be out of here soon enough and this will all be over."
I nodded quietly and she took out two bandannas.
"What are those for?" I couldn't help but mutter as she Put two knots in one of them.
"Open," she commanded. I snapped my mouth shut and shook my head no.
"Fine we do this the hard way," she sighed an put the gun down she pinched my nostrils shut.
For about thirty seconds I fought for air. Finally I needed the oxygen… as I opened my mouth to breathe she shoved the unknotted bandana deep in my mouth making me gag. As I went to spit it out she put the knotted part through my lips holding it there. She went behind me and knotted the bandana behind my head tightly.
"Hemmphhhh," I yelled into my gag but only a murmur came out.
"There! Now you shouldn't make a sound," she said taking the tape. She wrapped my other hand to The chair and each of my ankles to the rungs of the chair. She also taped my middle to the back of the chair. She patted my cheek.
"Don't worry hon I'm just gonna rob your house of some goodies and then I'll be out of here Kay?" she said in a fake sweet voice. She had on a black mask but she had a fit form. She was a little shorter than me but had wicked biceps.
As she walked out I struggled, twisting this way and that, trying to break the tape, and yelling as loud as I could but nothing worked. Soon she came back in.
"I got some pretty good stuff," she said "do you know the way to get into the safe?"
I shook my head glaring at her.
"Well...look who got feisty all of a sudden. No problem, I'll just be on my way now. See yuh kid," she said leaving the room then the doorbell rang.
"Shit!" she cursed and ran out of the room. I strained my ears and heard WILL! My friend from down the block.
Will was my best friend. he was tall and lanky with a mop of blonde hair and surprising amythest eyes. Will was a cool guy and had a lot of friends. He had come out of the closet a year ago and only a few of his friends stayed his friends but I always stuck by him. After all I would have been a hypocrite not too seeing as I was bi.
Will was a jokester and couldn't stop making sarcastic remarks to save his life.
"Um hi I'm Will and I wanted to know if jack wanted to go to the movies but now I'm interested in knowing who you are and where jack is?" he said his voice turning suspicious.
I realized that Will was my ticket to safety. I yelled as loud as I could into my gag and produced quite a bit of noise unfortunately the robber was smart.
"I'm Riley I'm the plumber and Jack I have no idea where he is he came in and dropped his skateboard on the living room couch and ran out," she lied smoothly. I kept screaming and "who are you where do you live?"
"Im Will as i said before. I live down the street In the big yellow house. What's that?" he said and I saw the top of his head peering around the corner. I tried to shuffle my chair over but it tipped.
It didn't matter... Will saw part of me and pushed past the robber. Running over he knelt beside me pushing the cloth away from my mouth.
Being the idiots we were we did not pay attention to the robber.
"Oh my gosh dude! who did this too you," he said as I spat the bandana out.
"She did the lady. she's not a plumber," I said breathlessly and we heard a click behind us.
"No I am not," she said "now if you don't want to get hurt blondie your gonna kneel right there on the floor. Put your hands on the back of your head and neither of you is going to say a word or I blow blondes brains out got it?" she said I nodded and Will did as she said.
"You, Jackie are going to wish you had kept quiet," she said scowling taking out some rope and tape.
"Now, Will keep still and don't try to be a hero Kay?" she said as he struggled lightly with her.
She brought his arms behind his back and tied them tightly cinching the rope in the middle of his hands. She then got some more rope and went to his elbows pulling them closely together. He hissed in pain.
"Ow that's tight," he said.
"Shut up!" she snapped and he fell quiet instantly. She tied his elbows even tighter and walked over to her bag.
"Hmmmm let's see I only brought enough stuff to gag one person. Oh I know," she said walking towards me.
She went to my foot and pulled off my shoe and then my sock she replaced the shoe and did the same for the other. She now had two sweaty ankle socks in her grasp she walked towards me.
"This is your punishment for being selfish and brining your poor friend into all of this," she whispered low enough for Will not to hear. As I was about to protest she stuffed one of the rancid socks in my mouth quickly covering my mouth with duct tape and wrapping it around my head ten times. She then gagged Will the same way I had been gagged
She took the tape and wrapped Wills ankles tightly and then his knees.
"Now what am I gonna do? I really was just gonna leave you here kid but now I cant," she said and my heart rate increased. Was she going to shoot us? Judging by Wills struggles he figured the same thing.
"Oh stop it I'm not going to shoot you," she snapped and I quieted.
"I know what I'll do!" She said and she took out a white rag and then held it to Wills nose. He struggled for a moment before going slack. It was chloroform.
"Time for a nice nap," she said and I smelt a sweet scent almost like cherries. I tried fighting it but soon I succumbed to the blissful darkness.
I woke up to the jostling. I had a wicked headache but forced my eyes open.
It was dark. Very dark. I blinked repeatedly and saw a face close to mine I recognized the features. Will. Why were we so close? I tried moving but I couldn't do more than wiggle. Then the memories flooded my mind.
The robber will coming in; then the chloroform.
I began struggling harder as I realized where I was in the trunk of a car! Will and I were being kidnapped!

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Post by Scottstud94 » Tue May 14, 2013 2:22 pm

Awesome!

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Post by Jack Roper » Tue May 14, 2013 2:41 pm

Excellent story, I can't wait to read your next chapter.

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Post by fratboydanny » Tue May 14, 2013 9:11 pm

Very well done. Thanks and please keep going.

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Post by Tugsfan » Fri May 31, 2013 3:51 pm

More please
A very good roleplayer, waiting for play with you

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Post by Nicktie » Fri May 31, 2013 9:20 pm

wow, this is a great story! Can't wait for more!

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Post by Tugsfan » Sat Jul 06, 2013 9:17 pm

Part three!!
A very good roleplayer, waiting for play with you

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Post by DMC13 » Fri Jul 12, 2013 8:01 pm

Here's a quote for the title:
"A masterpiece... each passing moment a work of art."
I don't care.

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Post by Tugsfan » Wed Jul 17, 2013 9:39 pm

Eh, what pass with part three??
A very good roleplayer, waiting for play with you

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Post by THEKINK » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:00 pm

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Post by Jules12 » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:11 pm

I'm so sorry my laptop was wiped and I had to buy a new one it took forever please forgive me! Anyway onto the story
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After my initial shock wore off I began struggling furiously but it seemed that when I was unconscious she had enforced my bonds.
She had tied me with rope on my wrists elbows and around my chest. There was also rope around my ankles and above and below my knees. She had put ductape on my forearms and calves and also around my thighs. She also had duck taped my wrist and ankle bindings loosely together.
I twisted and turned as much as I could in the cramped trunk but it was useless. I panted giving up hope.
As I lay there almost drifting to sleep I heard a moan coming from near me I turned around and saw Will blearily opening his eyes.
After a few blinks his eyes showed panick and I heard loud noises comin from behind his gag.
"Mmmmm," I said trying to soothe him as I did this I realized how close we were. My nose was almost touching his nose and his legs and well… lower regions were up against mine. I blushed at this thought. I saw him motioning with his mouth and got confused.
Luckily a few moments later I saw what he was doing Will licked the tape off of his lips. He then spat out the sock in his mouth and wiggled his jaw around.
"Jack! Are you alright?! Here let me help," Will said and carefully pealed the tape off of my mouth my eyes watering at the sting. I spat the disgusting sock out onto the floor behind me and turned around.
"Thanks," I said breathlessly, "Remind me to frequently wash my socks in the future, ugh."
"Sure. Hey jack are we..." Will said an I interrupted him.
"In the trunk of a car? Yes I think I figured out what her plan was," I said.
"K kid n napping?" Will stuttered
"Yeah," I said "I thought this only happened on cop shows."
"Same here," Will agreed I laid my head on the floor of the trunk and Will did the same. I could just make out the rings of his misty purple eyes in the dark.
"What do you think she's going to do to us?" Will asked.
"I dunno. I'm sorry about getting you mixed up in all of this, man," I said feeling the tears I had been holding back this entire time spring to my eyes.
"You don't have to be sorry!" Will remarked instantly.
"Yes, I do if I hadn't been calling for help maybe she just would have left-," I explained but he cut me off.
"And maybe she wouldn't have! Maybe she was bluffing and was gonna shoot you right there," Will said getting a bit closer. I blinked furiously but some tears fell from my eyes.
"Jack, you did the right thing. Okay look at me,"Will ordered I brought my eyes to slowly meet his.
"We are gonna be fine. She probably is just going to ask for a random our parents pay it and we go home," Will soothed me I closed my eyes and nodded.
"Yeah that's what's gonna happen," I said trying to lie convincingly but I'm pretty sure Will saw through it.
As he was about to say something we felt the car stop and a garage being opened.
My breathing picked up a bit and my heart raced.
We heard a door slam and we waited.
One second. Two seconds.
Then there was small fiddling then the door of the trunk sprung up.
She was there and smiling in like a cat who caught a mouse. I started shaking slightly.
"Well look who woke up," she purred seductively and hauled Will out.
I guess he was fed up of this woman taking advantage of us because he kicked her hard in the shins. I stared on as he hopped towards the garage door and she tripped him he banged on it with his feet but she pulled him away.
"You are going to regret that decision," she said through clenched teeth and put a rag in his mouth slapping her hand it. He screamed uselessly through it in frustration.
The woman dragged Will out of the garage struggling and screaming I looked on helplessly after about ten minutes she came back. She put a blindfold over my eyes and dragged me somewhere in the house I heard beeping and a look turning then a padlock falling then I was pulled down some stair and onto a cold floor a base ment.
"Well boys you've got yourselves in a nice pickle," she said, "but don't worry all that's gonna happen is we wait for ransom I get my money and I drop you off at home."
She took off my blindfold and I saw Will there she took his blindfold off too and his eyes met mine. She pushed us onto an air mattress and we fell against each other in the middle. I nuzzled my face into his neck shaking slightly.
"How cute! Night boys sweet dreams," she said and went up the stairs.
I heard the many locks being put in place and groaned why did this happen to us?

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Post by Tugsfan » Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:18 pm

very good, what will the burglar do to that two helpless boys??
A very good roleplayer, waiting for play with you