## Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:11 pm

This story was written as a request by the member naruto uzumaki. I will be posting it up as I get it completed sectionwise. This will be the first time I have ever attempted to combine modern real life people and times with the anime world of Naruto Shippuden genre so please bear with me.
Chapter 1: The Dream.
Scene: Current secret lair of Orochimaru, exmember of the ninja terrorist group Akatsuki.
Characters: Orochimaru and Kabuto
"Kabuto!" The shouts echo through the blackness of the cavern. Hurrying quickly, spy/assassin Kabuto, Orochimaru's righthand man hurries to his master's secret room of meditation. "What is it Lord Orochimaru?" he asks calmly, knowing better then to assume anything before being given information.
"I have had a mysterious dream of the future." Orochimaru says to him. He is dressed snakelike in camoflauged battle gear and wearing his newest "body." "Where I was, I do not know. However I saw that jutsu is an almost forgotten art and that technology has replaced it in what seems to have been many centuries."
"That can't be!" Kabuto exclaimed. "Jutsu is and always will be the way of life in our world. Even the future can't be that dreadful! What good is a future without jutsu to those of us striving everyday to create new ones?"
"Even so Kabuto I believe the future I saw in my dream holds the key to me living forever." Orochimaru said to him. "For I saw medical practices that restored the youthfulness to those who have long outgrown it. For that matter I am going to be experimenting on a type of time dislocation ninjutsu beginning in the morning. It will prove useful to be able to move back and forth through time itself so that Naruto Uzamaki and those of his allies are not always tracking us down to attempt to "save" Sasuke Uchiha."
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Naruto Uzumaki » Mon Nov 29, 2010 6:12 pm

I think this is a great start of the story
I am the captor of sakura to keep her away from sasuke. And maybe tickle her a bit

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Mon Nov 29, 2010 6:15 pm

Thanks! As soon as I have the next chapter completed, I post it up entirely. Hope you had a great birthday.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Tue Dec 07, 2010 10:38 am

Chapter 2: The Abduction
Scene: same as before only several hours later
Characters: Orochimaru, Kabuto, Sasuke Uchiha (formerly of the Hidden Leaf village of Konoha but now swayed to evil by the cursemark placed on him during the Chuunin Exams by Orochimaru.)
"Sasuke, I have a dangerous assignment for you," Orochimaru said to him. "If you feel it is too dangerous, then Kabuto can do it instead." "What type of assignment?" Sasuke asked suspiciously. "I need you to travel in disguise back to your old home and kidnap a certain member of your former squad, Sakura Haruna. I have use for her to be the first subject of my new jutsu." "I'll do it," Sasuke said. "Besides, I need some practice with my own jutsus before I can take revenge of my murderous older brother Itachi." "Be careful. You can't allow anyone to follow you here, much less recognize you at all." Orochimaru said to him.
Then Kabuto spoke up. "Sasuke, I'll temporarily allow you to use one ofthe bodies I have collected over the years as well as teach you the Corpse Revival Switch jutsu. This will allow you to escape if recognized after you capture Sakura the same way I escaped from your old sensei Kakashi."
A couple of days later...
Having successfully mastered Kabuto's jutsu for the mission, Sasuke now set out. Knowing he was a fugitive still, meaning the Anbu Black Ops and all the other junin and higher jutsu users would also be keeping aware, he transformed into Naruto before entering the territory of Konoha. (As you will see in the next chapter, this was a big mistake!) No one questioned him as he entered the village of Konohagakure, except more then once when he was asked "Where's Jiraiya at?" and "Still training to hunt down Sasuke again?" Knowing from info that she was a protegee to The Fifth Hokage, Lady Tsunade, Sasuke first visited the hospital. He was in luck! Sakura was there by herself, working on healing some sick animals.
Naruto (Sasuke) approached her. "How are you doing Sakura?" he asked her. "Leave me alone! Can't you see I am busy here?" She replied angrily, not even paying attention to who was speaking to her. Taking advantage of her being distracted, the fake Naruto knocked her out just like he had when she had tried to talk him out of leaving with the Sound Ninja Four. Then he used another transformation jutsu to change her into Ino. That being done, Naruto (Sasuke) quickly left the hospital when suddenly the real Ino appeared! "I don't know who you really are," she said angrily. "But you are not Naruto!" Immediantly Sasuke tried to knock her over, having shed his disguise because it would not be helpful anymore. However Ino alerted the Anbu before retreating because she knew she was still not strong enough with her personal "Mind Paralysis" jutsu to take him on.
Chapter 3: The Mission to save Sakura!
Scene: Mt: Myoboku
Characters: Naruto Uzamaki, Jiraiya
"Naruto," Jiraiya said one day(the above chapter ends this same day.)
"The time has come for me to continue my hunt to discover the true identity of Pain, leader of the Akatsuki. While I am gone, you have need to learn how to become a great Sage just like me. But first it is time you learned a secret from your past that has been hidden all this time." "Pervy Sage," Naruto still refers to Jiraiya this way occasionally, "did you ever know my true parents?" Wincing noticably Jiraiya nods. "Your father was indeed a great ninja just like you have been training to become. However before I can reveal his identity or even the rank he held at his death, you and I must travel back to Konohagakure. The Anbu Black Ops have sent word that The Fifth Hokage, Lady Tsunade, has news about Sasuke Uchiha."
"Please don't tell me that Orochimaru has finally taken over his body with his reincarnation jutsu!" Naruto said, his emotions showing a little even after all these years since the events that happened in the original Naruto series storyline "The Hunt for Sasuke." "I can't say honestly if that is the case Naruto," Jiraiya said as he helped him to his feet. "But if you do not get some ramen in your stomach, you might end up as thin as Ino Yamakana." "Don't remind me," Naruto said with a faint blush. "After that one mission we both went on together, I do not want to ever have her mad at me again! So then, what are we waiting for? Let's get going!"
For the next several weeks as they travel, Jiraiya helped Naruto to work on Sage mode. "This is a jutsu style that allows you to use the power of Nature, Naruto. Do you remember all those trials you did before you succeeded in your first successful summoning jutsu?" Jiraiya asked him. "Boy do I ever, those tadpoles seemed to almost never stop appearing. But what does Sage Mode have to do with that?" Naruto asked. "They assist you even more with senjutsu." The next day they arrived and Lady Tsunade gave Naruto the horrible news. "Don't worry," he said. "I'll bring her back no matter how long it takes." Then he and Jiraiya, accompanied by the best sensory jonin, set off to find Sakura.
Last edited by Chase Ricks on Fri Dec 10, 2010 4:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chris12 » Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:38 am

Good so far but don't you have the name backwards?

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:39 am

Which name Chris?
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chris12 » Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:41 am

whoops ment names the family names are supposed to go first or at least they do in the anime

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chris12 » Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:51 am

oh, wait never mind i forgot the Englsih dub switched the name's

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:03 pm

> Chris12 wrote:oh, wait never mind i forgot the Englsih dub switched the name's

I saw no need to confuse the readers by staying with how it was in the Japanese origuinally Chris. And also because I barely know the language too. That's why this story is in the English manga version.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Naruto Uzumaki » Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:33 pm

Great beginning!
I am the captor of sakura to keep her away from sasuke. And maybe tickle her a bit

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:34 pm

I apologize for the long wait between chapters Naruto. But I have been busy here and on other sites too.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Naruto Uzumaki » Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:47 pm

it's ok i don't mind waiting
I am the captor of sakura to keep her away from sasuke. And maybe tickle her a bit

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:49 pm

I am just glad there have been no derogatory comments so far. Chris had the right idea with his first comment but changed his mind upon realizing I am using the English manga names instead of Japanese.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Fri Dec 10, 2010 4:05 pm

Chapter 4: Closing in on Sasuke Part 1
Scene: Konohagakure (I apologize for not giving out the full name all this time. As soon as I post this, I'll be editing all previous chapters so they have the correct location name.)
Characters: Naruto Uzamaki, Jiraiya, Kakashi Sensei, Fifth Hokage Lady Tsunade, Captain Yamato, Sai, Lady Hinata Hyuga, Shikamaru, Shiho, Neji Hyuga, Shikaku, Shizune, Kiba and Ino.
"Damn that snake Orochimaru!" Naruto swore angrily in one of his rare displays of angry emotion. "What in the name of Lady Tsunade does he want Sakura for?" Then he blushed as he remembered she was in the room. "Don't think you are the only one upset Naruto." Lady Tsunade replied. "At this time swearing is really quite appropiate, at least until we get a lead on the correct direction to find Sasuke Uchiha."
"Neji and Lady Hinata, can you use your Byakugan to find Sasuke's trail?" Naruto asked them cautiously. "Yyes Narutochan," Lady Hinata answered. She was still a bit shy around him (due to having a secret crush on Naruto since childhood), but now she could defend herself well that he had shown her how to follow his path to being a shinobi. "Double power Byakugan!" This secret ability of the Hyuga Clan was what made them so scary in battle for it allowed them to track the flow of chakra all around. Neji and his cousin Lady Hinata focused for a long while and finally locked onto Sakura's chakra flow. "30 miles west, heading in the direction of the Land of Sound." Neji said cautiosly.
Almost everyone winced. They had good reason to do so. During the "Sasuke Retrieval Arc," Naruto along with Neji, Shikamaru, Choji and Kiba had faced their personal greatest battles to that date against The Sound Ninja Four. Though they defeated their enemies, with backup from Temari, Gaara, and Kankuro of the Sand Village, Sasuke managed to not only escape to Orochimaru but he had also learned how to unleash his Cursed Seal of Heaven to the second stage so that he was able to defeat Naruto though protected by the Nine-Tail Fox's chakra shield. Afterwards, everyone of them but Shikamaru required healing by Lady Tsunade herself as a result.
"Everyone be extremely careful." Lady Tsunade warned them all. "Sakura must not be harmed in any way or else I will personally reduce to Chunin rank again whoever of you is foolish enough to harm, even if it is by accident while fighting Sasuke, Kabuto and Orochimaru. I am sending Jiraiya, Kakashi Sensei, Captain Yamato and Shizune to oversee that you follow my orders. This is an S ranked mission. Now move out!"
An S ranked mission! This was the most dangerous level of a mission to be sent on. Immediantly the groups split into the following teams: Jiraiya leading Naruto, Hinata, and Ino; Kakashi leading Neji, Choji, and Shikamaru; Yamato leading Sai, Shiho and Shikaku with Shizune relaying all info back to Lady Tsunade herself.
At the same time many miles away...
"Ughhhhh" Sakura moaned as she slowly woke up. The last thing she could recall before being knocked unconscious by Sasuke was that she had been working by herself at the Konohagakure Hospital when Naruto? asked her a question. After that her memory was blurry.
Looking around, she was shocked and dismayed to realize that she was cleavegagged with a Sound Village silk cloth and hogtied lying on her back and further struggles made it clear she was also chained to a huge tree trunk. Sasuke was a few feet away, tending to a campfire.
"Glad to see you finally awake Sakura," he said with the notable indifference of emotion he was known for. "I know you probably are very mad and want to talk, but under no circumstances can I remove your gag. Due to this mission, you would be too talkative and speed is the only thing that will enable me to get you to our final destination."
That being said, he immediantly used his Mangenkyo Sharingan to put Sakura into a trance. That done, he easily took advantage of her unconcious mind being distracted to ungag her long enough to feed her some ramen noodles. Afterwards, Sasuke released her from the tree only and used multiple traces of Chidori to complete muddle the direction they might go before he grabbed her over his shoulder and procceded on his way. Soon they would be at the lair of Orochimaru!
Last edited by Chase Ricks on Fri Dec 10, 2010 6:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Naruto Uzumaki » Fri Dec 10, 2010 5:00 pm

good continuation
I am the captor of sakura to keep her away from sasuke. And maybe tickle her a bit

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Fri Dec 10, 2010 5:14 pm

I like writing stories and this is definitely no exception to the rule.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

### Re: Naruto's Birthday Story

Post by Chase Ricks » Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:31 am

Anyone here who wants to complete this story you have my permission. I am unable to do it because of a very long case of writer's block and because I am still oathbound to not write and post stories up here. +Taking that oath is the biggest reason I was even able to have internet access again.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.