Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:04 am

I believe everyone(except me :big:) has seen or read things about child detective's in fiction like The Hardy boys, Famous five or Nancy drew, sometimes these detective's would be caught snooping and...dealt with :twisted: That brought me on an idea for a new rp where we create our own kid detective's.

So tell me what you think.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby randomentity » Sat Dec 17, 2011 9:18 pm

Sounds like a nice idea! Elaborate :)

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chase Ricks » Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:32 pm

This looks promising.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:48 am

sounds good!

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:15 am

Allright time to eleberate :big:

You'l have to create a detective between the age of 10 to 16, since a detective needs villains you can create them as well if you like. Whether the detective's are rivals who will get each other out of the way or friends who will save each other is up to you. The villains too depends on your choice, either they are smuggling criminal master minds or cookie stealing bullies who believe themself to be criminal masterminds

Their adventures will take place in the town of drownport a nice sinister seaside town(nice name huh :twisted:)

Rules
I don't really believe an rp should have to many so aside from these two i'l just make them up as i go.
1. No god moding
2. no special powers

You can create up to two detective's but only one villain at a time

Anything i forgot?

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chase Ricks » Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:17 am

Concerning villians, what are the age limits?
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Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:26 am

nothing to old, 17 up to 25.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chase Ricks » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:20 am

Since no one else wants to go first I'll create my character.

The Bookworm jr.
Age: 17

Son of The Bookworm I have vast knowledge but prefer to work behind the scenes as a promising criminal mastermind. My father currently is in Washington DC planning to rob the Smithsonian Institute of all its literary works. Don't get me wrong I like to get physical but I prefer mind over muscle if I can get away with it for the most part. I also happen to be extremely smart so try not to think you have always captured me in the long run because you could be mistaken.
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Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:11 am

Here's mine.

Name: Richie
Age: 14
Appearance: Short blond kid with a slight reddish tint to his hair.
Bio: Son of a wealthy detective, both to relieve his boredom and to become a detective himself Richie takes every chance to snoop around and spy on villains.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Tue Dec 20, 2011 11:46 am

i'll join!

name: lisette (no rp without a DID :D )
age:15
appearance: mid-length girl with gold-blonde hair past just past her shoulders
personality: she is a very enthousiast detective, has a good stealth and is very careful while spying, but she can make somethimes make stupid mistakes because she is to hasty whith her actions. she is very good at planning, but not in doing as the plans says. (you still understand?)

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:28 pm

(Yeah we get it :big: )

Well we got three people now, i think thats enough to start.

Richie and his fellow detective Lisette where investigating a strange theft that had led them to bookworms hideout

Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:59 pm

"are you really sure it is here?"lisette asked richie for the thenth time in a row

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 12:51 am

''Yes Lisette i'm really sure'' Richie said patiantly ''I've never been wrong about these things before right?''

Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Wed Dec 21, 2011 8:45 am

"i don't know, this is the first time i work together with you, remember?" lisette said.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:05 am

''True....but i look confident right'' Richie laughed ''Lets enter trough that window'' he pointed to an open window.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:02 am

"Pesky snoops," Bookworm jr muttered to himself as his high tech sensors picked them up. "Just because I am not my father doesn't mean I am unable to show them what being a budding villainous mastermind is all about. Librarians man your positions. We have intruders here and I do not even want them to spot anything that could lead us to any..unpleasantness."

Silently several eyeglasses wearing henchmen scattered all around and began hunting the detectives. "When captured, take them to "Ye Olde Book Exchange" where I will deal with them personally," he then instructed as he prepared to use his hidden escape tunnel just in case.
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Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:10 am

when lisette was just inside she heard the man coming their way, and hides in the shadow, making her nearly invisible.
"richie, get out of there" lisette wispered as the footsteps became louder

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chase Ricks » Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:19 am

Unfortunately for Lisette, the Librarians were all former ones actually who had lost jobs due to the current economy. They could hear her whispering loud and clear. (Enhanced hearing comes with vision impairment people so it is not a special ability but a normal one I enjoy in real life.) Two of them sneaked up behind her and within a few seconds she had been chloroformed, hooded and hogtied as well.

Then one of them carried her unconscious form to "Ye Olde Book Exchange" via an underground tunnel while the rest searched for Richie.

Current Score Criminal 1 Detectives 0.
From whence I came and whence I went heaven said I was too evil and sent me to hell. Demons and devils succeeded in breaking my soul.

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Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:48 am

''Huh? Lisette? where are you?'' Richie whispered

Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:03 am

lisette waked up and noticed that she was blindfolded and hogtied, when she heard someone entering the room she tried to yell for help but it came out as grunts because she was gagged somehow.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:05 am

''oh, boy i think i know what happened'' Richie sighted ''I hope she got her phone with her'' He dialed Lizette's number and tried to call her.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:08 am

lisette felt her phone ring, because it was in silence mode, but of course couldn't answer.
that really frustrated her so she began to struggle

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:11 am

(since shane isn't her i'l be taking one of his Librarians)

Lisette felt her phone being removed from her pockeds by the head Librarians ''What do we have her?'' she asked amused after crushing the cellphone

Re: Kid detectives

Postby fratboydanny » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:13 am

danny, detective. 16, blonde and blue.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:15 am

(Welcome aboard :big: )

Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:17 am

lisette was really mad now and began a fierce struggle, which even loosed the knots a little bit.

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:20 am

''Nonono we can't have that'' the Librarians smilled and removed her gag ''Beter now little girl?''

Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:23 am

"don't call me a little girl and let me go now"lisette yelled angry at the Librarians

Re: Kid detectives

Postby Chris12 » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:26 am

''But you ARE a little girl'' she teased ''One that shouldn't have been messing in our base too!''

Richie fled the house and ran into Danny

Re: Kid detectives

Postby glorfindel » Wed Dec 21, 2011 11:30 am

(who's danny?)