## My first time

Post by Chris12 » Sat Aug 08, 2009 6:16 am

Hi i'm chris im a dutch boy and have just joined this site.
this story is about the first time my friends tied me up all names exept my own are changed
This is my first time writing a story and since English is not my first language it wont be the best piece of writing you will ever see.
part 1
first i describe myself and my friends.
I'm Chris(duh) im short skinny i have short blond hair and green eyes most girls call me cute but since im a guy i cant really confirm that. i have skipped a grade and because of that im a bit younger/weaker then then my friends so if they need a victim its always me.
Edward(13) is longer then me bu still short and has brown hair that come to his shoulders his cousin Oscar(14 has black hair and is athletically build.
My girlfriend Amy(13) has is slim and has long blond hair
i will now begin with the story
i was 12 when this happened me and my friends where at my place when Edward found some rope and asked why i had them
my brother has tied me up with them once i said a little embarrassed.
And you let your brother do that to you Oscar replied.
n no i but my brother is twice my size and i even have trouble lifting my school back so i cant do anything about it.
Amy quickly laught and told edward to follow her which he did.
the stayed away for then minutes so Oscar and i begun watching tv when they came back i saw that they had gathered more rope and a role of duck tape.
What are you going to do with that i asked worried.
duh where going to kidnap you kiddo.
i immediately runned away but edward tackled me to the ground and pinned me down you tie his feet he said to amy.
Edward tied my hands behind my back and Amy tied my feet together . in a few moments i could not move anymore.
LEMME GOOOO! i yelled at them .
not a chance kiddo your our litle hostage .
at that moment my brother came home so i tried to scream for help.
TOM HELP IVE BEEN KIDNAMMMPPHHH before i could finish oscar had handgagged me . sorry Chris but i want some fun too so im joining them.
amy came with the roll of duck tape and gagged me with multiple pieces of tape.
Edward wanted to gag me with sock first but was punched when suggesting it because Oscar and Amy found it to dangerous.
MMMPPHHH! I screamed at them .
owh isn't he cute this way Amy said.
my brother heard so he came upstairs at first he was a little surprised to see me that way but then he began laughing .
you can breath Right he asked me .
i nodded okey so there nothing for me to worry about he said and left.
my friends now begon to wonder what they would do with me
i tell the rest latter like i said before its not the best piece of writing so i would appreciate some advise so i can write a little better.

### Re: My first time

Post by Chris12 » Sat Aug 08, 2009 8:45 am

This is part 2
i had been lying on the ground for some time i was desperately trying t get free but my bonds did not get lose.
' we should torture the kid a bit' Oscar suggested 'is he ticklish' he asked Amy .
'yea he's really ticklish last time i tickled him he almost cryd' Amy said to him.
MMMMPPPHGRRR i screamed trough my gag not only was i pissed of because she told i almost cryd(from laughing to much) but also because i knew they would tickle me now.
' look he's scared' amy laughed TICKLE TIME!!!!!!!.
I tried to crawl away from them but that didn't really help.
when edward begun to tickle me i tried to kick him but since my legs where tied and i am pretty weak it did not really hurt but to prevent me from doing i again edward gave me a wedgie(that really hurts ) so i stopped doing that .
Edward and oscar tickled my feet and Amy my rips .
MMMMMMMMMMMMPPPPPPPPHHHHGGGGGGRR i yelled trough my gag for quite some time.
I was now really begging to be untied but because of the tape it where only mmpphh's
when they had tickled me for about an hour i had tears in my eyes of laughing so they took a break.
My sister sam(18) had just came home from work .
'oke Chris where going to untie you after your sister pays your ransom' Amy said and Oscar and Edward begun to drag me downstairs .
i struggled and mmmppph'd verry much because i did not want my sis to see me this way.
When we where in the living room they showed me to her .
'we have kidnapped your little brother give us 10 euro's if you want him back Oscar said in a evil voice.
i gave her a few begging mmpphh's because if she refused i would be tortured even more.
when she was done laughing at seeing me tied up and gagged she paid them 10 euro's and they untied me.
'should i remove the tape fast or slow' amy asked.
mmrrphh i anserd wich was meant to sound as slow.
she ripped the tape of very fast.
'ouwh that hurts' i yelled 'whats wrong with you i said slow'
'Sorry sweetie i couldn't hear you she ly'd(she's evil).
every time i was annoying or if they just wanted to tease me they would tie me up.
I tried Manny times to get revenge but it almost always failed and resulted in me being tied up well i cant complain

### Re: My first time

Post by Scottstud94 » Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:13 pm

Good story, especially for English not being your main language

### Re: My first time

Post by Chris12 » Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:32 pm

Thanks

### Re: My first time

Post by Shaun » Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:31 pm

Great story, thanks for sharing!! If you have any more stories like this, I am sure many of us would love to hear them!! For English not being your primary language, you are quite good and writing in it!