Postby Plueschbabycd » Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:36 pm
Hello, this is my first story in English. I am no native speaker. So if something very bed English, please help to make better. Thank you I live in Germany, so what I describe is based on Germany, even if it is a fictional story. This story is a pure fictional story. All persons are free fiction. This my story do steal it and say that you story.
Caught in his sister’s clothes.
Persons:
Andrew was called Andy by family and friends, 18 years old, brown middle long Hair, grey and blue eyes
Elisabeth, 20, black long Hair, brown eyes,
Mother, Ms Smith, 38, dark brown Hair.
It was late autumn. The temperature was falling and showed that winter was near. Elisabeth wanted to wear a warmer pullover and a second pair of tights. She went into her room. What she saw there surprised her and made her angry. There was her brother Andrew, wearing her newest expensive Faux Fur coat. She was most angry about the fact that he used her newest coat. She always had the feeling that someone else used her coats, jackets and Accessories. But she was surprised that it was Andy and not her Mother, who was really young as a mother. Both Andy and Elisabeth lived with her Mother. Their Father was divorced from mother.
She needed a moment to sort out her feelings. Then she decided to punish her brother. She sneaked to her bed where she had hidden a pair of handcuffs and a sleeping mask under her pillow. Elisabeth took both and then sneaked back towards her brother. It was helpful for her that Andy had closed his eyes and daydreamed. Elisabeth first pulled the sleeping mask over his eyes. Then she caught his hands and cuffed them. She shouted: “Surprise my little brother. Keep quiet. You love to wear my coats and jacket? You will wear them! But you will not wear my newest one. That is what makes me really angry. Therefore I will punish you.”
She took another faux fur coat, some scarves and faux fur mittens out of the wardrobe. Elisabeth pushed Andy on her Bed. She told him: “Now I know your secret. Don’t panic, I will keep it, if you help me with my own secrets. I like tied up games. That’s why I have handcuffs. Normally I would take some rope. But for you I will use some of the scarves and faux fur mittens. I’ll have you bound in the other coat and faux fur mittens with my scarves. Yes that would be your punishment and my price for allowing you to wear my old coats and jackets. Now I will remove the cuffs for a short time. I will do that because you have to take off my new coat. I’ll give you an old faux fur coat. Will you do it? If not I will take off the coat without your help. You know that I am stronger than you. Then I’ll drop you out of my room and show all my friends the photo that I have taken - and your friends too.” The last words were a lie. But Andrew did not know.
Andrew thought about it. He’d lose more if he didn’t play the game with his sister. As a child he was caught and tied up often in games. He was the type of person who was not angry when that happened. So he was used to it and in some way he loved to be tied up. OK, his sister was not like the girls in school he liked, but she was a girl. He was in the 11th grade of his school called Gymnasium and just turned 18, so he was very intrigued by girls already. So he nodded. Elisabeth took off the Cuffs and he slipped out of the coat. The coat his sister gave him was her faux fur coat with a hood. This one he liked most, except for the newest. She ordered him to wear the coat backwards. That was even more fun for him. The only time he had to wear a female coat with a hood officially, was backwards. Back then the coat was the only thing the girls had to blindfold him. He had liked the girls who gave him the coat so he gave in.
After he had the coat on and closed, Elisabeth put the mittens on him. Then she wrapped a scarf around one of his wrists and a moment later one on the other wrist. Then Elisabeth put a coil between his hands and the knot so he couldn´t get free. This time his sister did it in front of him and she took both ends of the scarf to put it on back where she made another knot in the back. With another scarf his elbows were bound. Then he had to lie down on his sister’s bed. As he lay there, this sister bound his feet like wrists and ankles before. Now Elisabeth took another scarf and made a knot in the middle. She said that she would gag him before she secured the blindfold with a scarf and put the hood over his face. He was not happy about the fact that he should be gagged. But he knew she would do it and had the strength to do it. He opened his mouth. Elisabeth put the knot in his mouth and secured the scarf in the back. She said: “I will put ear plugs in your ears. Don’t fight it. I will do it, if you want to or not. You shall have a little time in peace to struggle a bit and sweat, before I will release you.”
Andy didn’t like this. So he fought against her. But his sister held his head with her ankles and put plugs in his ears. Then she took out a furry scarf and put it over his eyes and ears, so the plugs couldn’t get out. Finally Elisabeth pulled the hood over Andy’s face and secured it with another scarf. Then she pulled a faux fur blanket over him.
Elisabeth contemplated about what she had to do next. She began to freeze again. So she took a second pair of tights and put them on. She wanted to pull on the Pullover but in this moment she remembered her new faux fur coat. It was also warm and cosy. So Elisabeth dressed in it. She looked at his brother and wished to be tied up the same way, but she couldn’t. She had to watch over her brother. But she took a last scarf and a sock to gag her. She saw her old faux fur children muff. It was a bit too small now but the only thing that came near to cuffed hands. Elisabeth gagged herself with the socks and scarf. Then she took another faux fur blanket to cover her. She wrapped the blanket in front over her body. At last Elisabeth put the hands in the muff. This was a bit difficult. But as her hands were inside, it really felt like the wrists where cuffed with furry handcuffs. She automatically closed her eyes and relaxed. Andy seemed to do the same. Elisabeth believed he was falling asleep. He made some typical noise. She thanked herself that she had gagged him. So it was not loud. After some time of dreaming Elisabeth fell into sleep.
Elisabeth awoke from the voice of her mother. Ms. Smith seemed very surprised by what she saw. Elisabeth worked her hands out of the muff and the blanket. She ungagged herself. Then Elisabeth explained to her mother how all this happened. Ms. Smith seemed not to be surprised about the fact that Elisabeth tied up her brother, and that she loved to be tied up too. She had found some robes and handcuffs in Elisabeth’s room which she had not hidden very well. Mother never mentioned her finds, because she herself had her own collection. She only wanted to know if Elisabeth had forced her brother or if he went along by free will. Ms. Smith was really surprised that he wore his sister’s coat. Elisabeth explained she had found her brother while he tried out her coats. But his mother wanted to hear about this from himself.
So Elisabeth ungagged Andy and took the earplugs out. His mother asked Andy if he was forced into the ties and coat. As he answered no to both questions, she asked him one more question: “Do you want to be a female? Have I two daughters now?” Andy answered: “No I don’t want to be a female. I simply love the warm female coats and jackets.” Then he explained to her how he became a fan of those clothes. Ms. Smith and Elisabeth could understand now why he liked this. Her mother accepted it as a fact. She only said that Elisabeth should do nothing against the will of her brother. Andy was ordered to make sure that no one from outside of the family would talk bad about. He promised: “I don’t want go out in coat and jacket until today. It should be a family secret. If I really would go out one day I’ll surly take a scarf, mittens and a cap with the coat that no one can see that I´m male.” Before she left the room mother said: “That is OK. Now I have to look at the heating. I think it is out of order, that´s why it is so cold in here. You both should leave your coats on and put something on your heads.”
After Ms. Smith had left the room, Elisabeth said: “Thank you brother for not telling our mother, that I tried to blackmail you and that the gag and earplugs were not really your free will. May I untie you now? So you can take a cap of you. Or do you want a cap for me to wear? I’ll sure find one for you.” “No you don’t need to untie me. You can do it to me every time you like, and I have the time to. The earplugs were not as bad as I believed. But I don´t like to be gagged. Please can I have your balaclava? The one which has only a small space for the eyes? I would like to keep the sleeping mask on. So you can put the earplugs in again and pull a hood over my face. Until dinner I want to dream of the girl from school I love. I don't know her name and am too shy to ask her during school break. She’s not in my class but I know that she is in the same grade. So I can only dream.” Elisabeth asked with a smile: “Have you tried my new faux fur coat only because she has a similar one? Do you like her or her coat? Perhaps we should ask mother if you can get one like hers. Then we can go as twins.” “I like her and the coats she wears. But she wears other coats and jackets than you. Most of them seem to be like real fur”
Elisabeth suggested: “I’ll take off your sleeping mask and then we can try together if one of my old coats and jacket looks similar. I can also select witch clothes you may wear and witch of them are forbidden. If I catch you again in the forbidden clothes, I will bring you in those clothes to your class personally on next school day. Or I’ll invite my male friend to show you to him.” Andy really did not want that. He promised to never take new clothes of his sister unasked again. He was although unhappy that he had to take off the mask.
Then Elisabeth looked over her wardrobe to see what she would allow him to. Before she selected other things she took out a pink heavy balaclava that she never liked to wear, but it was self-knitted by her mother. Mother did it a long time ago. She pulled that one over her brother’s head. He liked it. She also promised that she would blindfold him again after the selection.
Both selected quite a few items from Elisabeth’s clothes, not just the coat and jacket. Elisabeth had also an old ski suite for him. He liked this Item very much because it was black outside but inside it was lined with very soft pink teddy fur. If he wore it and the suit was closed, the teddy fur could not be seen. So he could wear it outside if he’d go to places no one knew him. The suit had a zipper to close, so nobody could see that it was a female suit. At last Elisabeth showed him what Accessories Andy could also use. She put all selected things on a wardrobe.
After that was done, she said to him “close your eyes.” Andy did it. Elisabeth took another scarf that was also knitted by her mother and matched to the balaclava. She blindfolded him with it. Elisabeth explained to him that both belonged together. After that she wanted to gag herself again, and then look for a cap she could use. She liked headbands and the hoods of coats and jackets better. She watched her brother and became a bit sad. She wanted to be tied up herself now. Elisabeth thought for a short time if she should put the handcuffs in her muff. But then she decided that first of all she should be gagged again. Elisabeth looked around if she could use a sock another time.
In this moment she heard a voice: “Why don’t you wear your balaclava now, daughter? You look sad, what happened?” That was her Mother. Elisabeth answered: “Mother I explained to you before that I not only like to tie up others. I like to be tied up too and I want it now. You should know that I better like headbands and hoods. My brother wears my balaclava now.” Her mother answered: “OK, I can do it to you. I will watch over both of you while I make dinner. Help your brother to the coach in the living room so I can watch from the open kitchen. I will look what I need here to bind you. The blanket is clear. I can´t fix the heater today. I have to call for an expert tomorrow to repair it.”
Elisabeth untied Andy’s legs and took the blankets and scarves that she had used on him, with her. Before she left the room with him, she said: “Mother, for my hands you can put a handcuff in the muff. To blindfold me you can use my sleeping mask or my faux fur headband.” She guided him to the living room. There Andy was set on the coach and his legs where tied up in the same way as before. Now Elisabeth waited for her mother to arrive and tie her up. She closed her eyes and dreamt about.
A short time later her mother entered the living room. She placed the things she brought next to Elisabeth. Her daughter was deep in a dream and didn’t hear her mother. She had her eyes closed until now. Now Ms Smith ordered her: “Turn around. Let your eyes closed and put your arms in the back.” Before the daughter could say anything, she put some cosy wool socks on her hands and put her handcuffs on. Her Mother said: “Your only real warm mittens are on your brother. The muff you’ll get if you are a well-behaved girl. Now look at the cap I have for you.” it was pink angora knit wool cap with ties that could be closed under her chin. Elisabeth tried to tell her mother: “I like a headband better...” Her mother stopped her by putting a wool sock into her mouth. She didn’t use a scarf to bind it around her head, but placed a piece of Tape over the mouth. She knew that her daughter did not like tape. “That’s for arguing against the cap. Now I will put the tape over your eyes and face for not wearing the balaclava. I Will take the gag off for dinner and ask you if you like to wear the cap or not.” Elisabeth was shocked a bit. Before her daughter could reject the Mother placed cotton wads over the eyes and taped them. Then she taped the whole face and only let the nose free. Her mother placed earphones at her daughter. The music that Elisabeth heard through the Headphones was not after her taste. Elisabeth knew if she reacted not well she would make it even get worse. She did not like the tape. The Songs were very long so she lost the time. Elisabeth swore to herself that she would wear every cap or balaclava her mother gave her not to be punished again in this way.
While Ms Smith made Dinner she asked her son what he likes and why he liked this coats and jackets. He told her about his first time when he was blindfolded with a hooded coat of a girl he liked. His mother asked him: “Do you have a girlfriend and did she wear a special coat that you like?” He answered: “Not really a girlfriend. She’s a girl I love, but I´m too shy to tell her. She is an upper class girl and wears real fur coats and jackets most of the time but she also has a hooded leather coat with lame fur lining and triming. I like that very much and it is not expensive. I saw it once when I was window shopping. But I love her not only for her clothes.” Ms Smith thought: “Oh, I think I know what coat you mean, that’s a really nice one. I will buy one tomorrow for all of us. For me and your sister I had already planned it. Now you will get one for yourself. Your sister sure would thank me if you have your own.” With that thought talking was finished and Andy began to dream. Mother started to make the dinner.
After one hour the dinner was ready to be served. Andy was placed at the table. When he was set on the chair his mother bound his body with a very long scarf on the chair. Then she wrapped a big piece of cloth around him. After that the mother went to her daughter and took the headphones off. She reminded her daughter to keep quiet. Elisabeth was bound on a chair the same way as her brother. The Mother just ungagged her daughter, the tape over her eyes and face was not removed. Before Mother removed Andy’s blindfold, she told him: “Close your eyes, and keep them closed. I will blindfold you again after I remove the balaclava.” Andy froze a bit when the balaclava was removed so that he could eat. The mother was prepared for that situation. She pulled her son another balaclava on, with open face and blindfolded him with the scarf again.
She sat herself down on the chair between her children, fed them and ate her own meal. Both children could eat without any problems. Elisabeth could manage only small pieces. After the dinner was finished the mother said: “Elisabeth I will bring you back to the living room now and give you the headphones again.” Elisabeth: “Mother please don´t do this, you can put every knitted cap on me you want.” - “It’s nice that you changed your mind. So I’ll put on your balaclava and the cap I showed you. Yes I know you don´t like it but I do. Your brother will get another balaclava and I will knit him one like yours. I will both wrap a shawl around your neck and lower head, so you won’t grow too cold. Elisabeth, I will give you extra time while I’m watching TV. I’ll put earplugs on you now. Do not protest, otherwise I would tape you with the gag again.”
Elisabeth did not protest. The earplug was put in her ears. Her mother gagged her only with a sock but it was hold in place with the shawl and the balaclava. The shawl was made of heavy angora wool and it was combed, so it felt like fur. Elisabeth liked that so much that she did not want it ever to take off. Her mother noticed that and smiled. That was what she had expected.
Andy also liked the shawl. So Ms Smith decided to knit a balaclava with only a hole for the mouth and not for the eyes for her son as a surprise or a sleeping balaclava. She had already one. She used that for her self-bondage. Now her daughter would get a similar one for bedtime. She began to knit the balaclavas for the children while she watched TV. Elisabeth should get one with open face and another one with only a space for the eyes. Both made out of heavy wool like a shawl. So she could give the pink balaclava to her brother. Andy got another balaclava with only a hole for the eyes as heavy and soft like the other but in black colour. So he could wear it for school. The other one he would wear in his free time. After three hours she had knitted the sleeping balaclava for her son and also a new one with a big hole for the face of her daughter. She decided to knit the last one after her children were sent to bed.
And that she did. The Mother wakened her son to tell him to go bed. He was sad that he had to get out of the ties and the coat. Mother said: “You can wear it for the night. I think without it the night can become cold. If you want to be bound over the night I’ll give you the nightdress from your sister.” Andy thought about it. Then he answered: “Thank you, but you can keep my sister’s nightgown for her. I like to have an old self knitted foot sleeper of hers.” This one the mother had out of her own wardrobe. Elisabeth had stopped to wear it two years ago. It was OK for Ms Smith if he liked to wear it. She untied him and took the wraps off him.
Andrew slipped out of the coat to undress himself. He froze and wanted to get out of the balaclava. So he hurried to the bath. Ms Smith went to fetch the foot sleeper. She took a pink one. That one was cosy and warm. So she considered if she should insist that Elisabeth also has to wear one. She found a plush cat costume Elisabeth wore for carnival last year. Elisabeth sure would accept it to wear. Ms Smith put the costume in Elisabeth’s room and the foot sleeper in Andy’s room. She placed his new sleep balaclava under his pillow. He should not see it before his Mother wanted him to.
She was not a moment too late when Andrew came back. He wore the balaclava again and wanted to be blindfolded. Ms Smith helped him into the foot sleeper and then into the coat. Then she asked him “Would you like the earplugs again? I saw you sleeping very well with them.” Ms Smith searched for a reason to take off the balaclava. He only notes. Then his Mother said: “Now close your eyes. I have another surprise for you.” He screamed: “Please don´t gag me.” His mother asked him “Had your sister gagged you against your will? Then I will punish her.” He lied by saying “She did it not against my will. But I had never been gagged before so I didn’t know if I’d like it. And I found out that me don´t like it.” “It’s OK for a test and not to like it. For sleep I think it’s safer if you are not gagged. I will not be sad if you don´t like my surprise. But I think you will like it. Let us use it for a test. Now close your eyes” Andy followed the order. He knew that a surprise from his mother would never harm him. She put the earplugs in and pulled the sleeping balaclava over the head. He felt the balaclava and opened his eyes. He liked that he was blindfolded again. “Thank you Mother! I like this. Please put the mittens on me and then bind me. After this you can wrap the shawl around my neck again. I like it as well. Now I will sleep. I´m a little bit tired.” She did it. Ms Smith wrapped the faux fur blanket around him again and secured it with the long scarf. At last she put a feather bed over Andy’s body. Before Ms Smith left, she fondled him to wish him a “good night.”
Now Ms Smith went to her daughter. She wrapped her out of the blanket and brought Elisabeth to her room. There she ungagged her, took out the earplugs and untied her hands. Then Ms Smith told her “I’ll now take off the tape from your face. But the tape over your eyes will stay in place till tomorrow. If you take it off, I’ll tape your whole body for the night.”
Elisabeth surly didn’t want to be taped completely. So she stripped off her clothes and told her Mother to keep the tape stay in place until she was back form the bath. “May I have the shawl again for the night? It was so cosy. Can I have more clothes like this? I will surly wear them more often.” Her mother thought: “That is very good. If it is so easy to make you wear the knitting cloth, I will make something for you that really feel like fur.” Her daughter went to the bathroom.
Ms Smith remembered a dress she made for herself and a hooded dress that she wanted as a gift for Elisabeth on her upcoming birthday. This was done exactly in the same kind. She decided to give it to her now and give her something different for her birthday. Ms Smith had already an idea and hoped her daughter would like it. Ms Smith had to go and acquire it.
Shortly after that her daughter came back to her room. Ms Smith said: “Now I’ll see if you told only words, or you do what you say. I have a knitted dress for you. I wish that you wear it today as a nightdress.” Elisabeth took it. It was like the shawl. She liked very much that the dress had a hood. She cuddled it and asked: “Can I also have a body and tights? I already have a similar one from you. I never told you but this one I wear now is lovely.” Ms Smith thought: “Elisabeth do you think I didn’t realise those tights are more often in the laundry than the others? But you seemed not to notice that I replaced them three times already.” She took them out of the wardrobe and then a similar pair of stockings for her hands. Ms Smith put her daughter first the Stocking on, and then the tights and the body. After the daughter got into the dress she said: “thank you very much. I love it so much. You can gag me and tie me on my bed. If you like it you can put me the balaclava and the cap on. I know you like it, when I wear them.” Her mother was so happy that she said: “I will not gag you. I’ll put off all tape, even the tape over your eyes. Please close your eyes! I have a surprise for you.” “Mother you can let the tape over my eyes in place. The tape disturbs me fewest. May I have the earplugs again?” Her mother ripped of the tape. As her daughter wished she let the tape stay over the eyes.
Her Mother handed her the coat. Then Elisabeth felt that her mother belted her muff over the coat, so it would stay in place over night. Elisabeth put her hands in and felt cuffs inside the muff. Mother helped her to lock them on her wrists. Then she helped her into the bed. Mother laid out the faux fur blanket and then she tied Elisabeth’s feet and arms together. Ms Smith wrapped a blanket around her daughter and secured it with a long scarf. She wished her a good night. Then she placed the earplugs in Elisabeth’s ears and pulled the balaclava close over her head. Ms Smith wrapped the shawl again around Elisabeth’s neck. Elisabeth said: “Thank you mother, good night.” Her mother placed a hand over Elisabeth’s mouth to show her to keep quiet. Before she left she put a feather bed over Elisabeth. Her Mother took the costume with her again. Her daughter would not need it today.
Ms Smith looked after her son Andrew again. He slept deep and peaceful. Then she went back to the living room to watch TV. Ms Smith began to knit the two balaclavas for children. Those had only free space for the eyes. As she heard that it would get very cold the following day, she decided to knit also cosy mufflers and big cosy mittens for both. For her son Andy she would do it in black. So he could use them out of the house too.
Two hours after midnight Ms Smith had finished her work. So she made herself ready for bed after checking her children in their sleep once more. Ms Smith donned a dress similar to the one she gave to her daughter. For her head she would use a balaclava with holes only for the eyes. She used no earplug so she could hear if one her children screamed. As coat she had a real fur coat. Ms Smith had already laid out a heavy cosy self-knitted Blanket. That was the biggest thing she had ever knitted. She could do some soft bondage herself. A self-bondage that was nearly impossible to escape would be dangerous if her children were tied up. It was also a matter of safety that the house had, had fire alarm boxes in every room. If Ms Smith would wrap her body in the Blanket, tied up her legs and tied another scarf around her breasts so that she could slip with her arms inside the blanket, she could get out every time she needed. She blindfolded herself before she slipped inside the blanket and lay down to sleep. Ms Smith thought about the day and what she now could give to her daughter Elisabeth as a birthday gift. Then she thought about her son Andy. Would he really not try to be female? If he would decide to become female she would accept. She had the feeling she could think about it better if the signs would be clearer. After that she fell asleep till next day.
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Plueschbabycd on Thu Aug 30, 2012 12:11 pm, edited 2 times in total.
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show
Postby hafnermg » Sun Jun 26, 2011 10:21 am
Great story!! I love it!! You did a fantastic job for your first story in English. It was easy to read and follow. The only things wrong I can find are in some places there is a different word that should be used. For example "Would he really not try to get female?" get should be the word "be" so it would be "Would he really not try to be female?". Also in some places you left out a word like it or if. For example "She had the feeling she could think about better if" here between "about" and "better" you should put the word "it" so it would be "She had the feeling she could think about it better if". There are more cases of both of these in the story but it would make this post too long. Otherwise you did an incredibly fantastic job and it was easy to follow and read. I can't wait to here more from you!
Postby OverLooker » Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:47 am
good job
"Mmmmppphhhhhhh"
Postby cp729 » Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:23 pm
Like this story... please continue
Postby cp729 » Tue Jul 05, 2011 9:21 am
>and put something on your heads
LoL, my mothers allways said that when I was a little girl girl !
And I have both the balaclava and the "cap with ties that could be closed under her chin", made by my grand mother !
And I hate both. But was my mothers favorite, because it was warm !
Hopefully she never taped it, but she probably think of it, because I always remove it before school... It was so old fashion at this time, 30 years ago !
Like the story about it now.
Postby fuzzysockgagged » Sat Jul 09, 2011 8:33 pm
This is beautiful plushbaby! It's a great story, and so easy to read:) I'm proud of you! It's right up my alley;)
Postby Plueschbabycd » Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:19 pm
Hallo cp927, I ´m over 30 but as a child I had never a balaclava. I had a cape like you grand mother make, and as child found not good but now I would love.
The next part can take some time and this time I will not post it without a native editor.
I only wish more feedback for to favourite authors.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show
Postby Headmistress » Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:58 am
Hi Andrew. Great story. I like the idea of the fur coat. I thought the story was very good especially for a first try. Hope to see more writing from you in the future.
Postby Plueschbabycd » Sun Jul 17, 2011 6:38 am
Hallo Headmistress,
Thank you for feedback, I wait for one form person like you. You are one the persons I mean with my favourite authors. It was first story in English. In German I have some more. Now I can tell, yes it would give at least second part. But I would happy if found person like you as my editor. I´m native German and have dyslexia.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show
Postby Billy Shears » Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:18 pm
A real mastership of English. Decided fetishes. Good story

Um, about being a Threatening Psycho ....
People , VOTE to _KILL_ the Threatening Psycho
See : KILL PSYCHO BILLY
under General Chat
Postby Plueschbabycd » Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:54 am
Billy Shears wrote:A real mastership of English. Decided fetishes. Good story

hallo must had help person how better in English, but think a real native could better.
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show
Postby Billy Shears » Wed Sep 07, 2011 5:09 pm
Andrew it sounds you don't mind when a native German helps you, but better appreciate when English ones do.
Am I right or is the other true ?
Anyway as Headmistress says, write some more !
Um, Headmistress
I apologize. I know this isn't quite the place but -
May I please take the opportunity to beg You
Kidnap me
Toss me in Your car
And take me with You
Pretty Pretty Pretty Please ?

Um, about being a Threatening Psycho ....
People , VOTE to _KILL_ the Threatening Psycho
See : KILL PSYCHO BILLY
under General Chat
Postby Plueschbabycd » Thu Sep 08, 2011 3:12 am
Billy Shears wrote:Andrew it sounds you don't mind when a native German helps you, but better appreciate when English ones do.
Am I right or is the other true ?
Anyway as Headmistress says, write some more !

Hallo,
your not right, the native German was best solution had as editor. This had a English as Leistungskurs AP Courses (US), high set (GB). I wish had found a native British English editor.
Andrew
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show
Postby Chase Ricks » Mon Oct 10, 2011 11:27 pm
Very well written. It takes a lot of courage to write a story not in your native language. I believe you have a great future ahead of you on this site as a writer Plueschbabycd.
Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue Oct 11, 2011 2:53 am
hallo Shane Bikman, you would not say if see my unedited version of it. My English speaking is better as my writing. My English teacher from last classes would not believe me if tell have right an english story.

Andrew
Postby .... » Tue Sep 01, 2015 9:41 am
That was one awsome story. As a big sister, I use to bound my little sister to stop her from using all my clothes and I have to say coats are the best the hood to blindfold and the leather label for gag! I had nostalgia reading this story. Nice work keep the good work.
Postby Plueschbabycd » Tue Sep 01, 2015 11:03 am
Hallo, I wished had big sister how had don this me. But I had not was was if older one.

Perhaps can you write a story about your this S/s teid up. I would love read it and would dream perhaps in your little sister position.

Very nice Avatar.
"Don´t dream it, be it." Dr. Frank N. Furter in Rocky Horror Picture Show
Postby .... » Wed Sep 02, 2015 5:03 am
You know what: that's an awsome idea... I will post it as soon as I can and even write how I got in bondage since she was also one of the causes to ^^