BIRTHDAY SUPRISE

Postby Andrew » Wed Jan 30, 2008 5:37 pm

Good job Bayli.

Postby Daniel » Fri Feb 01, 2008 3:49 pm

The story is not bad. Pretty good actually.

But one tip: Next time, could you please write like 5 longer chapters, instead of 15 short ones?

Cheers,

Yep

Postby Andrew » Fri Feb 01, 2008 6:30 pm

I doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. And its true we were talking and her mind went blank.

Re: BIRTHDAY SUPRISE

Postby Misquamicut » Sun Nov 02, 2008 11:53 am

It is a really good, fun story. And I know its a lot of work writing a long story like that. Thank you!!!!

Re: BIRTHDAY SUPRISE

Postby Boundgal08 » Fri Nov 07, 2008 12:14 pm

Cool story, keep it going!!!!
BOUNDGIRL!
Probably the kinkiest woman you will ever meet!
I am a switch, I like to put a man in ropes and also have a man put me in ropes!
I am the 'Queen of bondage'

Re: BIRTHDAY SUPRISE

Postby ilikebeingtiedup » Sun Nov 09, 2008 12:52 am

truely intrigueing(sp?) please post more