Never mess with your brother, or expect to be disciplined

Postby Jay Feely » Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:29 pm



This story is dedicated to Dingbatman by request:

Never Mess with your brother, or expect to be disciplined

14 year Ryan was very skinny for his teenager age because he does not work out nor eat a lot. He had blond hair and blond eyes. He has a lot of energy, but it was not for a good purpose. He is very naughty. At school, he often got corner time or a visit to the principal office for disrupting class and throwing paper wads at people.

Ryan has an older brother, 18 yr old Conner. Conner spends a lot of time at the gym lifting weights and eating nutritious meals, so he is very strong. Unlike his little brother, he is actually well-behaved and is trying to make it to Berkley University. He has blond hair and brown eyes.

Ryan met his only friend Justin on the school bus. Justin is very athletic in the track team, but he suffers from a disorder that makes him skinny. He is 14 years old and has brown hair and blue eyes. He could be considered Ryan’s best friend and he is very passionate about getting in trouble along with his friend

There world was going to collide on a hot summer morning. On this particular day, Justin and Ryan was outside swimming in their Caribbean Joe swimsuit and Conner was typing up a story for his friend, who had asked him due to a special request.

He was minding his own business, when his brother and friend came inside. They approached him at the living room, and asked him to make them a cheese sandwich. Now, Conner was concentrating so much that he did not hear them. Ryan thought that he was being ignored, when the opposite was actually happening. He was in fact, busy and had shut down outside contact. Ryan misinterpreted the scenario and threw a brick at Conner’s computer. The computer screen broke, and everything that Conner had done and worked for so long was destroyed. He was enraged, and steam was coming out of his mouth.

He grabbed Ryan by his left arm, and dragged him to the basement. Justin heard some commotion and followed them to the basement. Keep in mind that neither boy had their shirts on at this precise moment and time. Conner found a chair in the center of the room. He pulled his weakling brother, Ryan to the chair and tied his arms to it. Ryan struggled to kick Conner, but Conner was expecting it, and grabbed his brother’s ankles and secured it to the chair. He put a cleave gag on his brother’s small mouth and blindfolded him.

Just as he had finished, he turned around and noticed Justin in the vicinity. Justin looked like he was posed to attack Conner. Conner would have none of that, as he chased Justin as his potential witness bolted up the stair. Justin was fast, but he never saw the wet paint in front of him, and he slipped and fell on his bare bottom. Conner separated him from his friend, and hogtied him in his bedroom. He put a ball gag on this new captor and blindfolded him with a silk scarf.

For the boys, this was going to be a long day. For one thing, their parents were out of town for a weekend, and no one could rescue them. On top of that, it was a normal party neighborhood so screams would not be out of the ordinary. Conner went back to the basement.

He told Ryan that he had done enough damage for the day and that he was sick and tired of him being mischievous, but he made a deal with his brother. All Ryan had to do is to take part in a blind taste test. If he could correctly identify 5 key ingredients, Ryan would be untied and they would not tell anyone else about this again. Ryan could barely mutter yes underneath his gag. And so, the game started. The first item that Conner fed his brother was spinach. Surprisingly, Ryan guessed correctly. The second item was chicken, which Ryan guessed right. The third item was carrot, and Ryan got that one affirmative correct. The fourth item was potatoes, and Ryan got the green light for that. So, it all came down to whether or not he could recognize liver or not. Ryan missed that one, and so Conner said “You will be tortured all weekend buddy:” Let’s just hope that your friend Justin would fare much better for your sake”

Justin had a difficult task. He had headphones being put on his ear. Conner would play music and Justin would have one minute to identify each song, and he must guess 5 correctly to pass the test. The first song was I love you by Barney, which he had corrected. The second one “Every time we touch” was also identified right. The third song “Hotel California” was correct. The fourth song “Cupid Shuffle” was a red light. Conner snickered as he explained that he would be tortured for an entire weekend, just like his brother Ryan.

Conner made some phone calls to his friends, who knew different ways to torture people. They brought supplies at Wal-Mart and drove to Conner’s house in the hills. There were 4 people in total, all around Conner’s age, so he could just sit back and enjoy the show. All the boys’ feet, arms, hands, torso, legs, and knees were exposed for a wild weekend.

To Be Continued.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Never mess with your brother, or expect to be discipline

Postby sarumansauron » Fri Sep 17, 2010 1:03 pm

It is a good beginning. I admire the authors of stories a lot like you, or Jason and others that get write several fantastic stories, with so many details, at the same time.
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Never mess with your brother, or expect to be discipline

Postby Mike111 » Fri Sep 17, 2010 11:56 pm

This is a very promising story!! Please do continue! :mrgreen:
Last edited by Mike111 on Thu Mar 10, 2011 2:20 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Never mess with your brother, or expect to be discipline

Postby Chris12 » Sat Sep 18, 2010 3:00 am

Great story! i think i'd like Ryan :big:

Re: Never mess with your brother, or expect to be discipline

Postby Jay Feely » Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:23 am

Mike111 wrote:This is a very promising story!! Please do continue! :mrgreen:

Here's some feedback + suggestions:

+that "game" you've put into place is classic!! :mrgreen: I really like it! Please develop it a little further and have Conner's friends to join the fun as well! And perhaps..you could have this kind of game being played outdoor as well! Such as...in the swimming pool (put one of the hog-tied boy onto one of those pool floating mattress, and have Conner + 4 friends "attacking" that boy with water pistols (if the victim is able to keep up with their attack and not fall into the pool, he can be released! :mrgreen: )

+when you're describing their TUG, try to be more detail --> like, how they've been tied (step by step), and what the victim's reaction is like (the part where Justin has been hog-tied is a typical example (without any further narrative details, he has already been "hog-tied" :oops: )

+try not to include those adult toys - personally, I think that ball gag just came out of nowhere..this should be a tie-up game between teen-age kids :mrgreen: Sock in the mouth + duct-tape is always a great gag (plus, a lot of joy for the reader :mrgreen:)!

+come up with some punishments for the boys! :mrgreen: I would love to see one of them being wrapped up with duct tape (like a mummy)!

+PLEASE CONTINUE!


Thanks for the suggestions. I will not put any more adult toys in my story. The reason why Justin is rushed is because the focus is entierly on Conner and his little brother. Justin will be dealt in small increments. Well, the punishment for the boys would be classical for sure.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Never mess with your brother, or expect to be discipline

Postby Jay Feely » Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:06 am

Day 1: Friday Night

Conner heard the doorbell rang, and both of the boys was in a state of shock. The first boy to enter the house was 18 year old Adam, and he was known for his signature torture. He had no shirt on either. His task was assigned to Ryan because he was the main reason why both boys was tied up on the sweating hot summer morning. 17 year old Mat was assigned to Justin. He could be described as being particually devious to his captors through methods that is absolutly terrifying to deal with. For one thing, both of the boys had dealt with younger brothers of their own, Mikey and Willy, both of them younger then them in their pre-adolescent years. They were worried about upsetting them for fear of being tied up and tortured.

Meanwhile, in the minds of Ryan and Justin, they were afraid of being hurt unwillingly. They tried to free themselves from the ropes, but was unable to. Now, Ryan was expecting a day of playing in the sun, relaxing at the local playground, and spending time with his best friend Justin. Now, he could only hear footsteps creeping up his level. He called out in a scared mid-teenager voice, "Is that you Conner?". He got no response so he cringed in absolute fear and uncertainity. The voice on the other end said to him, "This is your punishment for losing the blind taste test". Now, for the first time ever, Ryan was in a loss for words. He felt fingers squeeze his nipples. Ryan gave a yelp of pain because it was being squeezed to the left and right, and it was affecting his perceptions of anything. The worst thing was, he could not stop it as he could only wimper quietly underneath his gag, which Adam could not hear. He just continued to release the pain onto his victim. Then, for a brief moment, he stopped. Next, Adam had to take a break himself for a while as he went into the kitchen to find something useful, and he found just what he was looking for in the old cupboard on the east side of the kitchen. As he opened the bottle of maynaise, he thought to himself "Wonder how Ryan would be able to handle this?"

As he crept back upstairs, Mat was already starting to torture Justin. No, he was not a pain person, but he makes up for it with his non-pain tatics. He was tickling Justin on his feet, and it was going to be hell for his victim. Justin was unbearbly ticklish on his entire body. Once, he had spread a gossip around an entire middle school, and he found himself held down and tickled by teenager girls in a locker room. They had tickled his armpits, tummy, and feet for hours as he lay there squirming and laughing hard. Now, he found himself at a different situation, only this time, there was no slimmer of hope of escaping. Mat was a very good tickler as he use all of his ten fingers to scribble all over Justin's left foot. If the gag was not there, you could hear Justin call out for mercy and wimper. This was too much for him.

Back in the basement, Adam was having fun with Ryan. He had opened the bottle of maynaise, and had forced Ryan to eat it. Now, Ryan loved to eat maynaise, but the thought of force feeding was making his nautious. He could not imagine eating a lot of the substance at one time. He was fed more scoops, in which he swallowed it up visciously. This in turn had a nasty side effect, when he threw up the substance all over the floor. It was at this moment that Ryan was untied from the chair, but his hopes of seeing daylight was dashed. Adam retied Ryan's hands in front of him, and ordered him to clean up the mess only using his hands. Ryan saw a chance of escaping, and he bolted for the stairwell, but when he reached the top and opened the door, he saw Conner standing over him. Ryan had no chance against his older brother so he resumed to what he was ordered to do. It took him about 15 minutes to clean up the maynaise mess.

At the bedroom, things was stepped up another notch. In fact, this time it was far worse then before. Instead of using fingers, during the break, Mat had managed to secure some hair brush, electrical toothbrush, and a fork from the rooms of the house. He got a roll of duct tape, and taped the electrical toothbrushes on his victim's defenseless feet, and turned it on. Mat removed the ball gag from Justin, and immedietly, Justin was in hysteircal laughter as it echoed across the house. Conner was quite pleased when he heard the laughter emitted by Justin. Conner bolted the basement, and left the house, driving away in his car. Justin was also being spider-tickled on his bare tummy, and he tried to bite his tormentor, but when it failed, Mat used duct tape on Justin's mouth to prevent other attempts. Instead, he was going to be punished for his disobedience. More electrical toothrbushes was duct taped to Justin's armpits, tummy, and knees and turned on. As Mat left the room to his bedroom in the upper left hand corner of the second floor, he could hear heavy laughter coming from the bedroom where Justin was being held, and he smiled, knowing that Justin was getting the full blast of tickling, and there was nothing that he could do about it.

In the basement, after the mess was thrown away to the garbage can, Ryan was tied up the same way as before. His shirt was thrown in the washer, and he was having a bad day already. He thought he would be forced fed again, but to his surprise, he was not. After suffering through two brutal torture methods, Adam decided that Ryan had enough for one night. He ordered him to sleep. Ryan finally received a breather as he sat there sleeping like an angel until daylight.

Justin's electrical toothbrushes finally died down of batteries. When he was no longer being tickled, he also fell asleep in his hog-tied position. Also, Conner had returned to the house, and headed to the bedroom where he saw Justin tied up. He did the right thing by untying him, but he carried him to the basement where young Ryan was sleeping soundly. He placed him next to his little brother, and duct taped him up like a mummy from head to toe. He thought to himself, tomorrow will be a good day and went to sleep in his bed.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Never mess with your brother, or expect to be discipline

Postby sarumansauron » Sat Sep 18, 2010 11:59 am

Good continuation. I badly can wait to read more and to discover what will happen with the boys in the next part.
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!

Re: Never mess with your brother, or expect to be discipline

Postby Jay Feely » Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:37 pm

Saturday Morning

Ryan and Justin woke up with an uncomfortable feeling on their entire body. Mat had tied up Justin in a way that made only his feet and head movable. For Ryan, he was feeling like a trapped doll when he was restrained to the chair again. Both boys was forced into brushing their teeth, which left an ugly taste in their mouths. They were given showers after their bodies was moved outside with a hose treatment.

Ryan was untied for the first time ever since his ordeal, and he was allowed to do some exercises and stretches. The same was applied to Justin. When they were done, Conner sent off Mat and Adam to their homes. However, to their utter dispair, Conner had more ideas in store for them. They were asked to put their hands out in front of them. This was seen as an odd request, but the look of anger on his face forced the boys to do as they were told. They were shocked when they heard metal clicks on their wrists. They were handcuffed in front, and ordered to clean the house. They did some house duty from laundry where they had to pick up every piece of dirty clothing using their feet. They had fix drapes by using their arms. Finally, the boys was untied for another set of special treatment.

Ryan was forced into a kneeling position, and when he refused to cooperate, he was tackled by his overly strong brother and forced into a head lock. Ryan was at the mercy of his oldest brother. His arms was bent behind his back, and tied together with rope. His feet was put underneath his butt, and tightly shackled together. A bowl of dog food was put in front of him, and he using his mouth only, was forced to eat all of it. Then, a collar was attached to his neck, and he was led into his new home, a dog house.

Meanwhile, Justin decided not to risk being treated like a dog, so he kneeled in front of Conner. Conner removed his dirty socks and shoes, and put his feet out. Justin was ordered to worship Conner's feet. He licked every square inch of Conner's feet from the tops to the bottoms. He sucked all of Conner's toes with a long time for each one, especially for his big toe. He massaged the soles of the feet, and even had to kiss them. Now, Conner had it all planned out.

Due to his brother's disobedient nature, he had to experience further discipline. Conner handed Justin a water gun and ordered him to spray Ryan. Ryan was feeling upset in his mind, but he never said anything. Water was sprayed onto his chest, nipples, face, hands, feet, and other body parts. He was being doused, but luckily for him, it lasted for mere minutes before the water torture stopped. He felt a bit cold after this incident.

After he was sprayed, he was untied. Justin was allowed to go home, but for Ryan, he had to apologize to his big brother to receive any sympathy. The boys learned a hard lesson that two days. If you mess with a brother, expect to be disciplined whether it is normal or absolutlely weird. Ryan and Conner grew closer together because every time Ryan tried to agonize his brother, Conner would remind him of the events that transpired on one weekend, and Ryan would stop. Justin left feeling dumbfounded and loss for words, but he never tried to get involved in one of Ryan's schemes again.

The End.
You will have to subdue me to restrain me. I been a bad boy so make sure you torture me too with anything but pain.

Re: Never mess with your brother, or expect to be discipline

Postby sarumansauron » Sat Sep 18, 2010 8:36 pm

Excellent story. That good that we have great writers in this forum. Congratulations! Thank you!
I love TUGS and TICKLING Torture!!!!!