Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby SpeedoBondageFTW » Sat Aug 30, 2014 9:30 pm

Could someone right a story a speedo bondage story?

The character is 24 years old he is slim and somewhat muscular. He doesn't have any facial hair and his hair is dark brown. The speedo he wears should be a dark blue thong speedo.He should be chair tied and have an OTM Tape Wrap Layer gag.

Its should technically be a F/M story but the captor is not seen only mentioned. The captor shouldbe mentioned as a woman with long black hair and wearing a skimpy black bikini.

Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby xtc » Sun Aug 31, 2014 3:12 am

You've already given so many details, why not write it yourself? I am sure that there are members who would give your work a look-over and sub-ed, if you wanted it.
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but little speedos rule!

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Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby SpeedoBondageFTW » Sun Aug 31, 2014 5:58 am

xtc wrote:You've already given so many details, why not write it yourself? I am sure that there are members who would give your work a look-over and sub-ed, if you wanted it.


Not really that good at writing bondage stories. Just felt let giving a lot of detail for the writer. Plus I came up with a lot of the details on the fly.

Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby tony2 » Sun Aug 31, 2014 6:58 am

I agree. Just close your eyes and write what you see happening to you. Wait a couple of days and then clean up the XXX sections and have one of the folks here give it a look over. what's here name" Cleopatra? You have the timetable of the world at your fingertips. Have fun --- looking forward to your first.
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Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby chadmc90 » Sun Aug 31, 2014 7:47 am

Yea, agree with xtc and tony.

Writing it yourself means that you tell the tale the way YOU see it. Authors who fulfill story requests(such as I) often put their own spin and ideas on the story, and moves away from the requester's original ideas.

And as for your writing skills: you never know until you try. When I started writing, I felt the same way you did. But I'm glad I made the choice to write my first story instead of having another writer write it(which was my initial plan).
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Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby chadmc90 » Sun Aug 31, 2014 7:52 am

By the way, check out this thread for hints and tips for writing good stories. Many talented writers on the board took time to add useful tips for new story writers, if you decide to write this story yourself.
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Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby SpeedoBondageFTW » Sun Aug 31, 2014 12:32 pm

Well I tried but I can't figure how it beyond this opening line: The captive swimmer struggles against his bonds.

Help would be much appreciated because this is the first time I've ever written a story where bondage was the focus.

Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby chadmc90 » Sun Aug 31, 2014 2:22 pm

Have you had the chance to look at the link I posted in the last post? It has a lot of hints and tips for new authors. If you have any other questions, you can always ask one of us through pm. I do agree starting a story is tough though. Ideas just don't develop overnight, and oftentimes it takes brainstorming to formulate. What you need first is a general outline of how the plot progresses. What happens in the story on down the line? More importantly, what will the end result be? Have that in mind and work towards it.

Think about the kinds of characters you want. For your story idea, it seems like you have two primary characters: the submissive character is exactly how you describe him. Think about things he would say and how someone like him could end up in that kind of position. Also, what is your other character like? The only things you've really given us is appearances. Their personality needs developed as well. Is she shy, or does she take charge? Is she cheery or is she seductive? What about her motives for tying up the poor guy? Does the guy have something she wants, or is it just on a whim? Is she a mutant that seeks to destroy the world by somehow detonating the submissive that causes a massive cataclysm(just joking)?

Another is style. I've seen two primary styles used. One is the third person style. "Johnny says this. Johnny thinks about him. Johnny wants that. The object in the corner was picked up by her" are examples. If there are multiple plot lines, then this one is better. It's not as personal as the other style I'm about to describe, which is the first person stream of consciousness style. "I didn't know what was going on." She was the most beautiful girl I've seen. I shriveled as she pulled the item out of the box." These are examples of talking from the mind of the main character. It focuses on more of what the character is thinking rather than the general environment. The second option might be better for a two-character plot.

Some other formal things to think about is spacing. Dividing your story into several groups of sentences is much easier to read than chunky groups of paragraphs. Your readers will thank you for it.

Ha, yea this is way off topic, but oh well. I will quit here and if you have any other questions, don't hesitate to ask. Storytelling is like many other hobbies: practice and feedback make perfection..or close to it. :D Oh, and don't forget to check out this link: viewtopic.php?f=4&t=22963
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Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby chadmc90 » Sun Aug 31, 2014 2:41 pm

SpeedoBondageFTW wrote:Well I tried but I can't figure how it beyond this opening line: The captive swimmer struggles against his bonds.

Help would be much appreciated because this is the first time I've ever written a story where bondage was the focus.


Here's a sample of where you can go with that first line.

The captive swimmer struggles against his bonds. Tied to the light pole in his only his bright blue speedos and his matching colored swimming cap, the 21 year old lad writhed and squirmed against the ropes that binds his arms to the pole. He didn't know what was happening! One minute he was preparing himself for anther day at the pool, training for the upcoming swimming competition. But he blacked out after feeling a stinging sensation on his right arm. And then he woke up, his eyes seeing only darkness due to the blindfold hindering his vision.

Dark thoughts ran through his head about the news of chain kidnappings in the area he has heard recently. All the victims were really similar to his body type, which was well toned, white skinned guys around his age. Bullets of sweat poured down his hairless face as he thought about himself being the next victim.

Then he heard a screen door opening! Footsteps that sounded like high heels got louder as he figured whoever was behind them got closer. Then, fingernails gently ran down his left pec and over his belly button. "Ready for the chair?" The sassy, feminine voice said to the panicking boy. Another stinging sensation in his arm was felt, and once again, he drifted into an induced sleep.
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Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby SpeedoBondageFTW » Sun Aug 31, 2014 3:52 pm

chadmc90 wrote:
SpeedoBondageFTW wrote:Well I tried but I can't figure how it beyond this opening line: The captive swimmer struggles against his bonds.

Help would be much appreciated because this is the first time I've ever written a story where bondage was the focus.


Here's a sample of where you can go with that first line.

The captive swimmer struggles against his bonds. Tied to the light pole in his only his bright blue speedos and his matching colored swimming cap, the 21 year old lad writhed and squirmed against the ropes that binds his arms to the pole. He didn't know what was happening! One minute he was preparing himself for anther day at the pool, training for the upcoming swimming competition. But he blacked out after feeling a stinging sensation on his right arm. And then he woke up, his eyes seeing only darkness due to the blindfold hindering his vision.

Dark thoughts ran through his head about the news of chain kidnappings in the area he has heard recently. All the victims were really similar to his body type, which was well toned, white skinned guys around his age. Bullets of sweat poured down his hairless face as he thought about himself being the next victim.

Then he heard a screen door opening! Footsteps that sounded like high heels got louder as he figured whoever was behind them got closer. Then, fingernails gently ran down his left pec and over his belly button. "Ready for the chair?" The sassy, feminine voice said to the panicking boy. Another stinging sensation in his arm was felt, and once again, he drifted into an induced sleep.


Well I would kinda like it to be a PG-17 story which I'm not really comfortable writing.

Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby NemesisPrime » Wed Sep 03, 2014 7:48 am

Sometimes to write the story you want to write there isn't a way around it and you might have to be a little explicit because afterall the story iis using you as a vessel to get the idea out and how it happens is dependent on the words you write.

Alot of us here are fully grown adults and heard worse so there's no need to be shy.
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Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby SpeedoBondageFTW » Wed Sep 03, 2014 3:35 pm

NemesisPrime wrote:Sometimes to write the story you want to write there isn't a way around it and you might have to be a little explicit because afterall the story iis using you as a vessel to get the idea out and how it happens is dependent on the words you write.

Alot of us here are fully grown adults and heard worse so there's no need to be shy.


Its more because I don't really like writing more explicit things myself.

Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby NemesisPrime » Wed Sep 03, 2014 5:15 pm

So you want to author a PG-17-esqe story but don't want to write it?

Seems kinda contradictory. If you're that desprate to write your story then write it and have it looked over by someone else and have them add the parts you didn't feel comfortable writing.
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Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby SpeedoBondageFTW » Wed Sep 03, 2014 7:49 pm

NemesisPrime wrote:So you want to author a PG-17-esqe story but don't want to write it?

Seems kinda contradictory. If you're that desprate to write your story then write it and have it looked over by someone else and have them add the parts you didn't feel comfortable writing.


I'm not desperate for it to be written. If I was I would have sucked it up and written it.

Re: Speedo Bondage Story Request

Postby chadmc90 » Wed Sep 03, 2014 8:00 pm

Yea I do see what Nemesis is saying. I don't see how you want one of us to write a story with explicit material, yet feel uncomfortable writing it yourself. The only reason I could see is if someone else writes it for you, then you could enjoy the story and have the benefit of anonymity.

Look, its not like I'm saying people aren't willing to write this for you. If you want to find a story writer, then you will have better luck finding a F/M author to write it for you and sending him/her a PM. Story requests, especially PG-17, rarely are fulfilled. There's even a specific section for PG-17 story requests right below the link to the Fictional PG-17 section, but it hasn't been posted in since March and has very little requests. That is the reason why I have provided all that information in the previous posts. Either way, good luck.
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