## footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by jonson000001 » Wed Apr 02, 2014 4:37 am

*English is not my first language if I have made mistakes, I'm sorry in advance.
In this story there are true footballers: (in the story I will call them with their first names)
martin montoya http://i.smimg.net/12/44/640x480_montoya.jpg
isco http://static.guim.co.uk/sys-images/Spo ... co-008.jpg
Álvaro Vázquez http://blogs.20minutos.es/el_10_futbol/ ... 00_396.jpg
marc bartra http://mtn.ensight-cdn.com/content/Marc-Bartra.jpg
Iker Muniain http://i.smimg.net/12/10/300x225/ikermu ... 110622.jpg
In the summer of 2013 european football (soccer) under 21 championship was held in israel. this story is about some (5) of the spanish team footballers. (spian won the tournement)
In the summer of 2013 The European football (soccer) under 21 championship was held in Israel. This story is about some (5) of the Spanish footballers. (Spain won the tournament.)
Chapter one:
(In this story, all of the footballers were roomates)
After their win the young Spanish footballers were happy to hear that they had a few more days to be in Israel. The Spanish celebrated their winning in a big meal at the hotel's restaurant
"I think I forgot something in the room", Marc said, "I'll pop up and bring it down, it will take me a moment". He got up to go as Iker told him, "I will go with you, I need something too." Marc agreed and they both went to the room. As they got closer to the room, Iker suddenly noticed the door was open. "Marc, I think the door is open, I saw Isco, Martin and Alvaro downstairs, who can it be?"
"Relax," Marc said, "it's probably the housekeeper or someone from the team."
They entered the room and, before they could think, four men wearing black pants, shirts and ski masks, jumped on the two young footballers (Two men on each). They took them, handgagged them and pinned them to the wall. "Shut the f*ck up", said one of them (the tallest) to the young footballer who tried to struggle and shout. "If you don't want to get hurt, shut the f*ck up." Then Marc noticed the gun one of them held and signalled Iker to relax. "Now don't resist." The four men took Marc and Iker and set them on two chairs which seemed to have been prepared ahead. They took rope and tied the boys hands behind their backs. They tied their legs to the legs of the chairs and then they took a roll of duct tape and tape-gagged the two boys. After they finished, Marc and Iker were tied up to a chair and gagged.
"Now listen, boys, we are going to play with you for a while." the tallest one said, "We understand that you have three more roommates and we are going to get them as well." Marc and Iker were terrified, who were those men? What were they going to do with them? Marc made himself stay calm but Iker started struggling and mmpphhing. "We told you to shut up little boy, now you will pay."
TBC
Last edited by jonson000001 on Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by jonson000001 » Sat Apr 05, 2014 9:35 am

Chapter 2
״Take him." the tallest man said. As he said that, the other three men went to Iker, untied his legs, and put him on one of the beds. "You little scum, I told you to shut up." He approached Iker as one of the other men pointed his gun close to the young footballer. He took his legs (which were free) and tied them to the bed posts. Then he untied Iker's hands and said, "Don't you even think of resisting." he took off Iker's shirt and then tied each of his hands to the upper bed posts.
"You look great." the man said, "Now let me explain what is going on. To you my name is Tom, and they are Abe, Isaac and Jacob. We're here to have some fun with you guys, but this is a minor gaol. You will all stay here but Isco will come with us; he's worth millions of Euros." He sat near Iker and started touching his bare chest, moving his hand slowly. "You're so hot, I must say," Tom said,"more than I'd imagined."
Iker was terrified. "What will be the line, when will he stop?" he thought to himself.
As Tom continued to work his way over Iker's chest, a voice was heard, "Marc, Iker, where are you guys?" It was the voice of Alvaro. Tom signalled with his head to Abe, Isaac and Jacob and, when Alvaro entered, the three men jumped on him. They forced him to the chair (the same chair Iker sat on) as they handgagged him, tied his hands behind him and tied his legs to the chair's legs. Alvaro did not knew what happened to him and started to struggle.״ If you know what's good for you, you'd better stop it." Tom said. Alvaro stopped as he saw the gun.
"Well, we have three, two to go." Tom said. He went to the two chaired boys and blindfolded Marc with a bandana he had in his pocket. He took another one and blindfold Iker as well. "You look great, now let the fun begin".
Last edited by jonson000001 on Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by jonson000001 » Tue Apr 08, 2014 7:58 am

In the next chapter new characters appears you will not see them (for now..) but if you want to know what they look like:
Cristian Tello http://www4.pictures.zimbio.com/gi/Cris ... mvrwql.jpg
Rodrigo http://www.sefutbol.com/sites/default/f ... _016_0.jpg
chapter 3
"Leave us alone." said Tom to the others. As he said that, Abe, Isaac and Jacob left the room. With the three boys blindfolded Tom took of his ski mask. He had short blond hair and blue eyes (European look, if you want). He took a knife from his pocket and went over to Marc, he used the knife to cut offMarc's shirt.
Marc was terrified, he thought to himself, "Is that man gay? What is he going to do with me?"
Tom removed the pieces of shirt from Marc and started to run his hand over Marc's hair, down to his face, and his neck until he reached his chest. He started to move his hand on Marc's chest slowly. Suddenly a buzz came from Marc's pocket. "What is it?" Tom asked. He reached his hand into Mark's pocket and saw he'd got a Whatsapp massage (Tom and the others did not bother to check for cellphones). He looked it up and saw the massage was from Cristian
"Hey dude, we haven't seen you or Iker for a while. Everythings ok?"
Tom did not hesitate and sent back this massage: "Everything fine but we have a little problem in the room, can you ask Martin or Isco to come up?"
After few moment he got this answer: "I haven't seen Isco but Martin said he's on his way up."
Tom went out and told his three partners that Martin was on his way up. Tom wore his ski mask again.
They were ready for him. As he entered, Abe, Isaac and Jacob jumped on him. They forced him onto one of the beds, took off his shirt, tied his wrists together behind his back, tied his ankles together, used a piece of duct tape to gag him and blindfolded him with a bandana. Tom took another piece of rope and tied Martin's ankles to his wrists. Martin just laid there, shirtless, gagged and hogtied.
"Well it seems that we are proceeding nicely." Tom said proudly.
"One more left." Abe said (It was the first time one of the three men opened his mouth.)
"Actually," Tom replied, "I think we can get more, at least three more."
"Are you sure?" Isaac asked "Can we handle this?"
"I am sure," said Tom "and I have the names for you, we will take Isco like in the original plan but we will also take Cristian Tello, and Rodrigo" he continued.
"For now leave me alone with this boys, I want to continue with the fun.."
TBC
Last edited by jonson000001 on Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by xtc » Tue Apr 08, 2014 10:11 am

Hi,
It's a pity you have received no responses. If you work using "Word", you can change your word-checker's default language. (You can always change it back afterwards.) It might help to make your writing easier to follow.
May I recommend that, when you have written a chapter, you read it through to make sure it says what you intended it to say? That goes for me as well and English IS my first language!
I hope this is helpful because it is meant to be so.
I've pm'd you with a SUGGESTED sub-ed.
Wassail!
Xtc
Boxer shorts are cool,
but little speedos rule!
More by the same author: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=22729

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by tiedlad » Tue Sep 16, 2014 6:18 am

I hope this story continues!

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by turkeyman » Thu Sep 18, 2014 5:52 pm

I love Cristian Tello!!! The guy is super sexy! Glad you included him

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by tony2 » Thu Sep 18, 2014 8:42 pm

I can live with a good story and effort from any language except Braille (grin).
Good start. Please keep going!

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by jonson000001 » Fri Sep 19, 2014 6:14 am

well I stoped becouse there was no comment
I will continue in the next few days

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by tony2 » Fri Sep 19, 2014 7:50 am

what am I? chopped liver? (grin)
Look at the number of reads --- a lot of folks don't leave notes. don't let it bother you. we love new, evil, ideas (grin again). keep writing....

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by jonson000001 » Fri Sep 26, 2014 4:11 pm

Tom return to the shirtless marc "where were I?" he asked as he took a feather out of his bag "Marc, are you ticklish?" He took the feather and rub it on Marc chest slowly, Marc started the laugh hard into his gagged crying for Tom to stop. "I hope your enjoying yoursef, you pretty boy"
He than walk away from Marc and walk near Iker how was still tied up to the bed. "Don't think I forgot you boy" he told Iker and started to tickle him as well. Iker however was fat less ticklish and did not laughed hard. "Not fun ha?" He asked "just wait" he walked to the mini bar and took out ice cubed "Let see you ignor that". He took the cube and puted it on Iker chest. Iker shouted as he could into the gag but with no use. "Well, that bettrr isn't it?"
"Now lets move on" he said. He took Martin phone and sended Isco this massage
"We really need your help, could you come over"
He recived "sure, I'll be up in 5 min or so"
Tom called Abe, Issac and Jacob to be prepered for Isco
"Let this party starting"

### Re: footballer kidnapped... [m/m]

Post by tiedlad » Fri Jan 02, 2015 5:49 pm

Will this continue? I was enjoying it