## Zip-ties and scarves :) Self-bondage

Post by ginny890 » Fri Dec 23, 2011 12:52 pm

Hey guys. This is my second story, and I am going to try to tell it in third person and see how that works. Feedback appreciated!
*note-Ginny isnâ€™t my real name but it is the name I will be going by
It was a cold Saturday night, and Ginnyâ€™s dad had just left for a walk. Her mom and brother were both sleeping and there was nothing to upset the bondage she wanted to do that night. She was wearing black sweats and a white camisole. Ginny took out all of her equipment, which was under her bed in a backpack. It was made up of several scarves, various lengths or rope, and zip-ties. She thought of the type of tie she wanted to do, and decided to do something simple.
She used a couple scarves to tie her feet together firmly, and then set upon cocooning her legs in scarves, making sure to cinch the rope as she went on. She decided not to put on a crotch rope, and instead used rope to tie above and below her breasts, over the camisole she was wearing. Ginny made sure her door was locked, hopped over to her drawer, took out a pair of scissors, and set them carefully in the middle of her side table. She then took out three zip-ties to tie her hands with.
Tightening one zip-tie on each wrist, she realized that she had almost forgotten something. Her gag! She decided to use a bigger pair of sock than usual. She took a pair of huge woolen winter socks, stuffed them in her mouth, and secured them with a scarf. Ginny turned her light off, and lay back on her bed. Behind her back, she tightened the third zip-tie to the other two, creating make-shift handcuffs. She loved the feel of her breasts swelling up, and the helplessness instilled in her. She mphhed into her gag, though being aware of her sleeping family.
Over some time, she drifted off into a light sleep. She awoke after a little while, quite disoriented and uncomfortable. She looked over to the clock, and saw that she had been sleeping for 2 hours. Ginny thought of the dangers of sleeping with a big gag, and silently reprimanded herself. She decided that she had had enough and proceeded to free herself. Ginny rolled out of bed, and quite easily took the scissors from the side table. She cut the zip-ties free, and undid her gag. After completely untying herself, and putting everything carefully away, she drifted off into a peaceful sleep.
I know that when telling a true TUG story, most use first person, but I wanted to see how this would work. Please feel free to give me any tips and suggestions that you may have. Just, please donâ€™t be mean about it.

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Post by bzzart » Fri Dec 23, 2011 2:35 pm

Very nice! I actually sort of prefer the third person now that I've actually read one like it. It gave a different feeling, and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
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Post by JTRD » Fri Dec 23, 2011 5:08 pm

Agreed! It reads more like a story to me which makes it all a bit easier to picture in your head. Very nice!
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Post by Girltrussedup » Fri Dec 23, 2011 10:35 pm

It is indeed dangerous to sleep with a gag on, more specifically one that has loose material such as the sock. But i thoroughly enjoyed the story and cant wait to hear more in the future!!
Always tied, but always free!!

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Post by Qarl » Fri Dec 23, 2011 11:33 pm

I like the creative use of third person to try something different. Although I generally prefer a story in first person, because I like being inside your thoughts and emotions, and it feels more true and real when you describe it in first person, using the third person frame of reference in this story worked fine. Either way, first person or third person, I liked it and glad you shared. I enjoyed the description of the sensations you got with ropes tied as you did. Thanks!

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Post by ginny890 » Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:51 am

Thanks Everyone. I'm happy that the third person worked out. I haven't ever actually written in third person so yay!

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Post by bindKelly » Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:50 am

I liked it, it was different, and just cool, so thumbs up!

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Post by Unknown-User » Sat Apr 27, 2013 5:59 am

I really like the story, but I personally feel that first person is a lot more fun to read. Others really seem to like it though, so decide for yourself how you want to write a story.